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福清核电站:专家分析称系塑料袋!

2019年11月15日 05:45

【<】【p】【>】【这】【时】【,】【走】【廊】【里】【又】【恢】【复】【了】【宁】【静】【,】【只】【有】【栅】【栏】【与】【盆】【花】【正】【在】【窃】【窃】【私】【语】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【掩】【面】【而】【思】【,】【匆】【匆】【的】【我】【们】【虚】【度】【了】【多】【少】【个】【今】【天】【呢】【?】【在】【匆】【匆】【中】【又】【走】【过】【了】【多】【少】【个】【春】【秋】【?】【但】【我】【总】【在】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【还】【有】【明】【天】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【的】【希】【望】【里】【,】【抛】【洒】【了】【无】【数】【光】【阴】【,】【虽】【知】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【明】【日】【复】【明】【日】【,】【明】【日】【何】【其】【多】【。】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【之】【忠】【告】【,】【却】【一】【味】【沉】【浸】【于】【玩】【的】【自】【由】【之】【中】【。】【老】【师】【要】【我】【们】【展】【望】【未】【来】【,】【家】【长】【要】【我】【们】【珍】【惜】【光】【阴】【,】【我】【们】【又】【做】【到】【了】【多】【少】【?】【<】【/】【p】【>】福清核电站【<】【p】【>】【回】【到】【家】【里】【,】【我】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【打】【开】【烤】【五】【花】【肉】【的】【盒】【子】【,】【一】【条】【烤】【五】【花】【肉】【被】【切】【成】【好】【多】【小】【块】【,】【我】【拿】【起】【筷】【子】【,】【细】【细】【品】【尝】【,】【烤】【五】【花】【肉】【外】【酥】【里】【嫩】【,】【入】【口】【即】【化】【,】【让】【人】【飘】【飘】【欲】【仙】【,】【不】【愧】【价】【格】【不】【菲】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【独】【到】【的】【创】【新】【设】【计】【,】【能】【使】【由】【“】【赤】【橙】【黄】【绿】【青】【蓝】【紫】【”】【组】【成】【的】【彩】【绸】【在】【空】【中】【亮】【出】【美】【不】【胜】【收】【的】【舞】【姿】【。】【别】【具】【一】【格】【的】【表】【现】【形】【式】【,】【能】【使】【精】【心】【包】【装】【的】【作】【文】【充】【满】【灵】【气】【和】【魅】【力】【。】【下】【面】【列】【举】【的】【几】【种】【作】【文】【构】【思】【方】【法】【,】【定】【会】【使】【我】【们】【的】【眼】【睛】【为】【之】【一】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【答】【题】【式】【构】【思】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【以】【“】【对】【与】【错】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【有】【位】【同】【学】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【《】【自】【证】【对】【与】【错】【》】【,】【除】【首】【尾】【简】【约】【的】【环】【境】【描】【写】【外】【,】【文】【章】【主】【体】【部】【分】【由】【“】【已】【知】【”】【“】【求】【证】【”】【“】【证】【明】【”】【“】【解】【答】【”】【这】【四】【部】【分】【组】【成】【,】【作】【者】【以】【这】【种】【求】【解】【几】【何】【证】【明】【题】【的】【形】【式】【表】【达】【自】【己】【对】【“】【罚】【抄】【5】【0】【0】【遍】【”】【的】【认】【识】【,】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【—】【—】【罚】【抄】【的】【“】【对】【与】【错】【”】【和】【拒】【绝】【罚】【抄】【,】【“】【与】【老】【师】【斗】【智】【”】【的】【“】【对】【与】【错】【”】【,】【通】【过】【这】【一】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【的】【形】【式】【表】【现】【得】【轻】【松】【而】【幽】【默】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【剧】【本】【式】【构】【思】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【随】【着】【作】【文】【文】【体】【要】【求】【的】【放】【开】【,】【有】【的】【同】【学】【机】【智】【地】【运】【用】【剧】【本】【这】【一】【众】【多】【考】【生】【尚】【感】【陌】【生】【的】【体】【裁】【构】【思】【成】【文】【,】【体】【现】【出】【强】【烈】【的】【创】【新】【意】【识】【。】【有】【位】【同】【学】【的】【剧】【本】【《】【错】【?】【对】【!】【》】【抓】【住】【初】【三】【学】【生】【爱】【好】【写】【作】【“】【究】【竟】【对】【还】【是】【错】【”】【构】【思】【剧】【情】【,】【具】【备】【独】【幕】【剧】【的】【各】【种】【要】【素】【,】【序】【幕】【交】【代】【背】【景】【,】【学】【生】【涵】【静】【和】【李】【老】【师】【这】【两】【个】【人】【物】【的】【对】【话】【个】【性】【鲜】【明】【,】【涵】【静】【的】【内】【心】【独】【白】【声】【情】【并】【茂】【,】【舞】【台】【场】【景】【的】【转】【换】【自】【然】【流】【畅】【,】【“】【不】【语】【,】【扯】【衣】【角】【”】【“】【抬】【头】【”】【“】【站】【起】【”】【“】【向】【右】【走】【两】【步】【,】【灯】【光】【变】【白】【些】【”】【等】【舞】【台】【说】【明】【准】【确】【得】【当】【。】【剧】【本】【通】【过】【紧】【凑】【而】【集】【中】【的】【矛】【盾】【冲】【突】【,】【表】【现】【当】【代】【教】【育】【体】【制】【给】【人】【们】【带】【来】【的】【困】【惑】【和】【反】【思】【,】【取】【得】【了】【其】【他】【文】【体】【难】【以】【收】【到】【的】【表】【达】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【谈】【心】【式】【构】【思】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【种】【构】【思】【的】【创】【意】【在】【于】【,】【全】【文】【以】【第】【二】【人】【称】【“】【你】【”】【展】【开】【,】【运】【用】【与】【读】【者】【对】【话】【、】【谈】【心】【的】【形】【式】【进】【行】【叙】【写】【,】【给】【读】【者】【一】【种】【近】【距】【离】【的】【亲】【近】【感】【。】【有】【位】【同】【学】【拟】【题】【《】【发】【现】【你】【自】【己】【》】【,】【文】【中】【用】【“】【你】【”】【作】【称】【呼】【多】【达】【4】【2】【处】【,】【按】【照】【“】【发】【现】【你】【自】【己】【的】【人】【生】【坐】【标】【,】【发】【现】【你】【奋】【斗】【的】【动】【力】【”】【“】【发】【现】【你】【自】【己】【,】【发】【现】【你】【的】【美】【丽】【,】【更】【发】【现】【你】【的】【瑕】【疵】【”】【“】【发】【现】【你】【自】【己】【的】【兴】【趣】【,】【展】【示】【你】【个】【性】【的】【美】【丽】【”】【这】【三】【个】【层】【次】【描】【述】【“】【发】【现】【自】【己】【”】【的】【审】【美】【内】【涵】【,】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【的】【表】【达】【形】【式】【,】【一】【声】【声】【贴】【心】【的】【呼】【唤】【,】【激】【起】【读】【者】【的】【强】【烈】【共】【鸣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【变】【异】【式】【构】【思】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【循】【规】【蹈】【矩】【、】【一】【一】【对】【应】【地】【照】【题】【目】【的】【要】【求】【构】【思】【,】【难】【免】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【、】【千】【篇】【一】【律】【。】【机】【智】【的】【同】【学】【善】【于】【从】【题】【目】【中】【寻】【找】【“】【变】【异】【”】【点】【,】【在】【题】【目】【允】【许】【的】【范】【围】【内】【展】【示】【思】【维】【的】【个】【性】【。】【2】【0】【0】【6】【年】【陕】【西】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【的】【提】【示】【语】【中】【有】【一】【句】【是】【“】【优】【美】【动】【听】【的】【校】【园】【歌】【曲】【使】【人】【心】【旷】【神】【怡】【”】【,】【在】【备】【选】【的】【三】【个】【题】【目】【中】【有】【一】【题】【是】【“】【听】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【我】【真】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【。】【不】【少】【考】【生】【在】【前】【一】【横】【线】【上】【填】【上】【具】【体】【的】【歌】【曲】【名】【,】【思】【维】【流】【向】【单】【一】【,】【雷】【同】【卷】【甚】【多】【。】【有】【位】【考】【生】【将】【“】【校】【园】【歌】【曲】【”】【作】【为】【变】【异】【点】【,】【说】【那】【“】【飘】【洒】【缠】【绵】【”】【的】【春】【雨】【是】【一】【首】【没】【有】【乐】【谱】【的】【“】【校】【园】【歌】【曲】【”】【,】【于】【是】【拟】【出】【《】【听】【雨】【,】【我】【真】【陶】【醉】【》】【这】【样】【的】【佳】【题】【,】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【。】【文】【中】【,】【作】【者】【说】【春】【雨】【“】【轻】【唱】【着】【挖】【空】【你】【的】【心】【思】【,】【道】【出】【你】【的】【惆】【怅】【,】【注】【释】【你】【的】【疑】【惑】【…】【…】【使】【你】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【仿】【佛】【已】【变】【成】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【一】【棵】【树】【,】【一】【棵】【草】【,】【一】【束】【花】【,】【一】【撮】【泥】【土】【”】【,】【“】【我】【成】【长】【中】【的】【错】【误】【会】【在】【这】【柔】【和】【的】【歌】【唱】【中】【变】【得】【美】【丽】【”】【,】【“】【太】【多】【心】【思】【…】【…】【太】【多】【哀】【怨】【能】【在】【这】【春】【雨】【的】【浅】【吟】【中】【将】【它】【们】【逐】【一】【放】【飞】【”】【,】【由】【于】【作】【者】【通】【过】【变】【异】【式】【构】【思】【找】【到】【了】【适】【合】【自】【己】【抒】【发】【个】【性】【的】【切】【入】【口】【,】【所】【以】【能】【把】【听】【雨】【的】【陶】【醉】【说】【得】【入】【丝】【入】【扣】【,】【不】【同】【凡】【响】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【反】【向】【式】【构】【思】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【弹】【琵】【琶】【,】【逆】【向】【思】【维】【,】【往】【往】【会】【别】【有】【洞】【天】【,】【使】【你】【的】【文】【章】【独】【辟】【蹊】【径】【,】【熠】【熠】【生】【辉】【。】【如】【“】【以】【‘】【关】【心】【’】【为】【题】【,】【结】【合】【自】【己】【的】【切】【身】【感】【受】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【的】【文】【章】【”】【。】【很】【多】【考】【生】【都】【跳】【不】【出】【“】【叙】【写】【‘】【关】【心】【’】【者】【之】【美】【德】【,】【抒】【发】【被】【‘】【关】【心】【’】【者】【之】【感】【激】【”】【这】【一】【类】【窠】【臼】【,】【总】【是】【从】【正】【面】【落】【笔】【,】【给】【人】【千】【人】【一】【面】【之】【感】【。】【有】【位】【考】【生】【别】【出】【心】【裁】【,】【由】【众】【人】【对】【一】【个】【百】【日】【小】【孩】【起】【名】【的】【关】【心】【,】【引】【出】【一】【位】【被】【人】【漠】【视】【、】【歧】【视】【的】【老】【人】【(】【即】【小】【孩】【的】【爷】【爷】【)】【的】【悲】【惨】【故】【事】【,】【家】【人】【对】【待】【小】【孩】【与】【老】【人】【的】【不】【同】【态】【度】【,】【对】【比】【鲜】【明】【,】【反】【映】【了】【很】【有】【社】【会】【意】【义】【的】【深】【刻】【主】【题】【。】【文】【章】【的】【构】【思】【以】【“】【反】【”】【为】【主】【,】【以】【“】【正】【”】【衬】【“】【反】【”】【,】【以】【“】【反】【”】【写】【“】【正】【”】【,】【以】【老】【人】【的】【不】【被】【“】【关】【心】【”】【呼】【唤】【全】【社】【会】【对】【老】【人】【的】【“】【关】【心】【”】【,】【这】【种】【构】【思】【赋】【予】【了】【题】【目】【“】【关】【心】【”】【以】【更】【深】【广】【的】【内】【容】【,】【令】【人】【思】【考】【,】【使】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】福清核电站【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【光】【的】【齿】【轮】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【刻】【画】【着】【成】【长】【,】【蓦】【然】【间】【发】【现】【,】【人】【生】【的】【年】【轮】【已】【经】【转】【了】【十】【几】【圈】【。】【于】【是】【,】【带】【着】【梦】【想】【与】【勇】【气】【,】【我】【踏】【上】【了】【新】【的】【旅】【程】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【怀】【着】【激】【动】【的】【心】【情】【,】【迈】【着】【快】【乐】【的】【步】【伐】【,】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【找】【到】【我】【所】【在】【的】【班】【级】【时】【,】【一】【推】【门】【,】【着】【实】【吓】【了】【我】【一】【跳】【。】【一】【个】【班】【级】【,】【女】【生】【占】【据】【了】【一】【大】【半】【。】【一】【共】【五】【十】【人】【,】【只】【有】【七】【名】【男】【生】【,】【他】【们】【还】【美】【其】【名】【曰】【“】【七】【朵】【金】【花】【”】【,】【可】【是】【在】【仅】【有】【七】【名】【男】【生】【的】【班】【级】【里】【,】【好】【多】【事】【情】【做】【起】【来】【都】【不】【方】【便】【。】【为】【了】【壮】【大】【我】【们】【班】【的】【男】【生】【队】【伍】【,】【提】【高】【做】【事】【的】【效】【率】【,】【我】【当】【仁】【不】【让】【地】【充】【当】【起】【了】【第】【八】【个】【男】【生】【的】【角】【色】【,】【还】【竟】【然】【阴】【差】【阳】【错】【地】【被】【大】【家】【推】【举】【成】【了】【男】【生】【的】【头】【儿】【,】【“】【七】【朵】【金】【花】【”】【的】【队】【伍】【扩】【大】【成】【了】【七】【朵】【半】【—】【—】【这】【给】【我】【的】【生】【活】【增】【添】【了】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【的】【一】【笔】【。】【这】【七】【朵】【半】【金】【花】【,】【各】【具】【特】【色】【,】【下】【面】【由】【我】【给】【大】【家】【一】【一】【道】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【才】【俊】【武】【东】【旭】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【和】【歌】【手】【张】【树】【瑞】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【男】【儿】【立】【志】【出】【乡】【关】【,】【学】【不】【成】【名】【誓】【不】【还】【。】【埋】【骨】【何】【须】【桑】【梓】【地】【,】【人】【生】【无】【处】【不】【青】【山】【!】【”】【武】【东】【旭】【在】【班】【级】【高】【声】【朗】【读】【着】【毛】【泽】【东】【的】【七】【绝】【《】【改】【西】【乡】【隆】【盛】【诗】【赠】【父】【亲】【》】【,】【那】【富】【有】【磁】【性】【的】【声】【音】【,】【抑】【扬】【顿】【挫】【的】【语】【调】【,】【踌】【躇】【满】【志】【的】【激】【情】【,】【博】【得】【了】【同】【学】【们】【阵】【阵】【喝】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【不】【仅】【语】【文】【好】【得】【令】【人】【佩】【服】【,】【而】【且】【,】【还】【有】【着】【很】【强】【的】【理】【解】【能】【力】【和】【分】【析】【能】【力】【,】【超】【出】【同】【龄】【人】【的】【非】【凡】【才】【华】【在】【许】【多】【时】【候】【显】【而】【易】【见】【,】【这】【让】【他】【很】【快】【成】【为】【我】【们】【班】【卓】【尔】【不】【群】【的】【人】【物】【。】【可】【是】【如】【果】【你】【认】【为】【他】【只】【是】【会】【学】【习】【的】【书】【呆】【子】【,】【那】【你】【就】【大】【错】【特】【错】【了】【。】【他】【不】【仅】【文】【笔】【优】【美】【,】【沉】【稳】【老】【练】【,】【而】【且】【在】【赛】【场】【上】【绝】【对】【是】【众】【星】【捧】【月】【的】【人】【物】【。】【篮】【球】【主】【力】【、】【足】【球】【小】【将】【、】【短】【跑】【冠】【军】【…】【…】【他】【都】【当】【之】【无】【愧】【!】【也】【就】【是】【说】【,】【学】【业】【、】【球】【技】【及】【能】【力】【同】【样】【出】【色】【,】【被】【大】【家】【冠】【以】【才】【俊】【名】【号】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【随】【着】【冬】【季】【的】【到】【来】【,】【扫】【雪】【,】【是】【我】【们】【要】【面】【临】【的】【一】【个】【考】【验】【,】【如】【果】【班】【里】【男】【生】【数】【量】【比】【较】【多】【,】【这】【点】【活】【根】【本】【不】【成】【问】【题】【,】【看】【着】【其】【他】【班】【男】【生】【拿】【着】【工】【具】【浩】【浩】【荡】【荡】【地】【出】【发】【打】【扫】【分】【担】【区】【的】【那】【分】【得】【意】【,】【着】【实】【让】【我】【们】【眼】【热】【。】【相】【比】【之】【下】【我】【们】【班】【仅】【仅】【七】【个】【半】【男】【生】【,】【劳】【动】【力】【明】【显】【不】【足】【。】【当】【我】【为】【此】【事】【犯】【愁】【时】【,】【他】【气】【宇】【轩】【昂】【振】【臂】【一】【挥】【,】【及】【时】【鼓】【舞】【士】【气】【:】【“】【咱】【班】【男】【生】【少】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【只】【要】【我】【们】【干】【得】【快】【干】【得】【好】【就】【O】【K】【了】【!】【头】【儿】【,】【带】【着】【兄】【弟】【们】【,】【拿】【着】【工】【具】【,】【冲】【!】【”】【听】【了】【他】【的】【这】【句】【话】【,】【我】【的】【心】【里】【顿】【时】【底】【气】【十】【足】【起】【来】【。】【在】【大】【家】【齐】【心】【协】【力】【精】【诚】【团】【结】【的】【合】【作】【下】【,】【我】【们】【班】【每】【次】【都】【是】【全】【校】【第】【一】【个】【打】【扫】【完】【积】【雪】【的】【班】【级】【,】【并】【且】【多】【次】【受】【到】【老】【师】【的】【表】【扬】【,】【这】【使】【我】【们】【的】【热】【情】【更】【加】【高】【涨】【,】【我】【这】【个】【男】【生】【头】【儿】【心】【里】【美】【得】【真】【是】【没】【法】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【位】【名】【人】【说】【,】【“】【火】【炉】【与】【棉】【被】【可】【为】【身】【体】【御】【寒】【,】【而】【永】【远】【能】【给】【心】【灵】【以】【慰】【藉】【的】【,】【是】【人】【类】【的】【第】【二】【语】【言】【—】【—】【音】【乐】【”】【。】【性】【格】【开】【朗】【、】【风】【趣】【幽】【默】【的】【张】【树】【瑞】【面】【对】【漫】【天】【的】【雪】【花】【不】【失】【时】【机】【地】【发】【表】【感】【慨】【,】【“】【男】【女】【搭】【配】【,】【干】【活】【不】【累】【,】【来】【,】【我】【给】【大】【家】【唱】【支】【歌】【…】【…】【”】【他】【的】【歌】【声】【高】【亢】【动】【听】【,】【激】【荡】【着】【我】【们】【的】【心】【灵】【,】【那】【如】【天】【籁】【之】【音】【的】【歌】【喉】【,】【引】【来】【许】【多】【人】【的】【驻】【足】【倾】【听】【,】【叫】【好】【声】【不】【时】【从】【校】【园】【各】【个】【分】【担】【区】【响】【起】【。】【受】【到】【他】【的】【影】【响】【,】【我】【们】【班】【其】【他】【同】【学】【也】【跟】【着】【哼】【唱】【起】【来】【,】【大】【家】【的】【干】【劲】【儿】【似】【乎】【更】【足】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【班】【唱】【着】【歌】【儿】【争】【先】【恐】【后】【共】【同】【扫】【雪】【的】【场】【面】【也】【成】【了】【冬】【日】【校】【园】【里】【一】【道】【靓】【丽】【的】【风】【景】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【交】【官】【胡】【玉】【超】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【和】【大】【胖】【金】【云】【龙】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【准】【备】【考】【哪】【所】【大】【学】【?】【”】【英】【语】【课】【上】【,】【老】【师】【问】【外】【语】【课】【代】【表】【胡】【玉】【超】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【北】【京】【外】【国】【语】【学】【院】【,】【将】【来】【我】【要】【当】【一】【名】【外】【交】【官】【。】【”】【胡】【玉】【超】【字】【正】【腔】【圆】【地】【回】【答】【。】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【全】【班】【哗】【然】【,】【之】【后】【,】【“】【外】【交】【官】【”】【的】【雅】【号】【不】【胫】【而】【走】【。】【的】【确】【,】【他】【的】【外】【语】【学】【得】【绝】【对】【是】【棒】【,】【尤】【其】【是】【听】【他】【读】【英】【文】【,】【那】【标】【准】【的】【发】【音】【和】【顿】【挫】【的】【语】【调】【,】【绝】【对】【是】【一】【种】【享】【受】【。】【他】【英】【语】【出】【类】【拔】【萃】【,】【对】【于】【我】【们】【也】【是】【相】【当】【大】【方】【,】【好】【多】【时】【候】【,】【我】【和】【同】【学】【拿】【着】【英】【语】【书】【向】【他】【讨】【教】【问】【题】【时】【,】【他】【都】【不】【掖】【不】【藏】【,】【把】【他】【知】【道】【的】【全】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【学】【校】【用】【的】【是】【饮】【水】【机】【,】【每】【隔】【几】【天】【,】【水】【厂】【的】【人】【都】【会】【送】【来】【一】【车】【矿】【泉】【水】【,】【这】【就】【需】【要】【男】【生】【去】【搬】【。】【一】【大】【桶】【水】【,】【少】【说】【也】【得】【有】【二】【十】【斤】【吧】【,】【一】【般】【在】【这】【种】【情】【况】【时】【,】【我】【这】【个】【头】【儿】【就】【只】【能】【负】【责】【指】【挥】【,】【根】【本】【插】【不】【上】【手】【。】【原】【因】【很】【简】【单】【,】【我】【们】【班】【的】【“】【七】【朵】【金】【花】【”】【都】【会】【非】【常】【绅】【士】【地】【说】【:】【“】【头】【儿】【,】【这】【个】【太】【沉】【,】【我】【们】【几】【个】【搬】【就】【行】【,】【你】【还】【是】【歇】【着】【吧】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【交】【官】【胡】【玉】【超】【长】【得】【高】【高】【瘦】【瘦】【,】【他】【去】【搬】【水】【,】【总】【是】【引】【来】【同】【学】【的】【讥】【笑】【:】【“】【你】【行】【吗】【?】【手】【无】【缚】【鸡】【之】【力】【的】【人】【!】【”】【他】【却】【不】【服】【气】【地】【说】【:】【“】【我】【吗】【?】【以】【后】【当】【外】【交】【官】【也】【不】【会】【天】【天】【肩】【扛】【手】【拎】【的】【,】【要】【那】【么】【多】【力】【气】【干】【嘛】【?】【咱】【凭】【嘴】【吃】【饭】【!】【”】【正】【当】【他】【拉】【长】【声】【调】【高】【声】【炫】【耀】【自】【己】【“】【外】【交】【官】【”】【的】【身】【份】【时】【,】【扛】【着】【水】【桶】【走】【来】【的】【武】【东】【旭】【阴】【阳】【怪】【气】【地】【嘲】【讽】【开】【了】【:】【“】【呵】【!】【凭】【嘴】【吃】【饭】【的】【外】【交】【官】【,】【你】【什】【么】【时】【候】【变】【成】【杂】【食】【动】【物】【了】【,】【你】【连】【足】【球】【也】【不】【放】【过】【啊】【?】【”】【想】【起】【昨】【天】【被】【足】【球】【打】【到】【脸】【上】【的】【糗】【事】【,】【他】【顿】【时】【哑】【口】【无】【言】【了】【。】【看】【到】【一】【旁】【干】【活】【毫】【不】【吝】【惜】【力】【气】【的】【大】【胖】【,】【汗】【流】【满】【面】【,】【气】【喘】【吁】【吁】【抱】【着】【水】【桶】【爬】【楼】【梯】【的】【样】【子】【,】【胡】【玉】【超】【马】【上】【化】【劣】【势】【为】【优】【势】【,】【向】【不】【善】【言】【辞】【的】【金】【云】【龙】【戏】【谑】【道】【:】【“】【大】【胖】【,】【你】【真】【是】【气】【壮】【如】【牛】【哦】【!】【”】【大】【胖】【不】【急】【不】【恼】【。】【看】【金】【云】【龙】【没】【理】【他】【,】【胡】【玉】【超】【又】【说】【:】【“】【大】【胖】【,】【金】【—】【—】【云】【—】【—】【龙】【,】【你】【爸】【爸】【给】【你】【起】【这】【个】【名】【字】【,】【可】【见】【个】【中】【深】【意】【,】【是】【不】【是】【有】【望】【子】【成】【龙】【的】【意】【思】【啊】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【当】【然】【了】【,】【我】【爸】【当】【然】【想】【让】【我】【成】【为】【人】【中】【之】【龙】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【是】【吗】【?】【”】【胡】【玉】【超】【摇】【头】【晃】【脑】【啧】【啧】【有】【声】【:】【“】【可】【惜】【了】【,】【可】【惜】【了】【老】【人】【家】【的】【念】【头】【了】【,】【我】【觉】【得】【你】【都】【长】【成】【人】【中】【之】【熊】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【胖】【倒】【也】【不】【急】【:】【“】【别】【门】【缝】【里】【看】【人】【,】【谁】【是】【熊】【谁】【是】【龙】【,】【还】【不】【一】【定】【呢】【。】【别】【太】【得】【意】【哦】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【就】【让】【咱】【们】【比】【试】【比】【试】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【谁】【怕】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【调】【皮】【鬼】【刘】【雨】【明】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【和】【憨】【小】【子】【孙】【志】【远】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刘】【雨】【明】【虽】【生】【得】【短】【小】【精】【悍】【,】【却】【生】【性】【调】【皮】【。】【他】【和】【憨】【厚】【的】【孙】【志】【远】【不】【仅】【同】【桌】【还】【是】【同】【寝】【,】【可】【很】【多】【时】【候】【他】【却】【爱】【戏】【耍】【孙】【志】【远】【,】【比】【方】【说】【,】【上】【课】【时】【,】【他】【忘】【记】【带】【课】【本】【了】【,】【老】【师】【又】【正】【好】【提】【问】【他】【朗】【读】【课】【文】【,】【他】【一】【把】【把】【孙】【志】【远】【的】【书】【拿】【到】【自】【己】【的】【面】【前】【,】【声】【情】【并】【茂】【地】【朗】【读】【起】【来】【,】【为】【此】【,】【害】【得】【孙】【志】【远】【经】【常】【被】【老】【师】【批】【评】【。】【下】【课】【时】【,】【同】【学】【们】【纷】【纷】【指】【责】【他】【,】【他】【还】【装】【出】【一】【副】【无】【辜】【的】【样】【子】【。】【周】【末】【,】【看】【见】【孙】【志】【远】【在】【洗】【衣】【服】【,】【他】【会】【以】【迅】【雷】【不】【及】【掩】【耳】【之】【势】【,】【把】【自】【己】【的】【脏】【衣】【服】【塞】【进】【憨】【小】【子】【的】【盆】【里】【,】【看】【着】【对】【方】【嗔】【怪】【的】【目】【光】【,】【淡】【淡】【一】【笑】【:】【“】【兄】【弟】【,】【这】【两】【天】【我】【不】【是】【病】【了】【吗】【?】【”】【正】【赶】【上】【我】【和】【同】【桌】【去】【宿】【舍】【送】【通】【知】【,】【我】【们】【立】【刻】【责】【怪】【道】【:】【“】【你】【这】【不】【是】【剥】【削】【人】【吗】【?】【你】【凭】【啥】【支】【使】【人】【家】【干】【这】【干】【那】【的】【?】【”】【他】【马】【上】【反】【驳】【道】【:】【“】【站】【着】【说】【话】【不】【腰】【疼】【了】【吧】【?】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【一】【个】【篱】【笆】【三】【个】【桩】【,】【一】【个】【好】【汉】【三】【个】【帮】【,】【正】【好】【你】【们】【三】【个】【一】【起】【帮】【我】【洗】【了】【,】【嘿】【嘿】【嘿】【。】【”】【说】【完】【一】【溜】【烟】【儿】【地】【跑】【了】【,】【剩】【下】【我】【们】【三】【个】【人】【面】【面】【相】【觑】【地】【站】【在】【原】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【终】【于】【憨】【小】【子】【决】【定】【要】【修】【理】【修】【理】【他】【了】【,】【机】【会】【来】【了】【。】【那】【天】【,】【在】【阅】【览】【室】【上】【读】【书】【课】【,】【其】【他】【同】【学】【都】【在】【津】【津】【有】【味】【地】【看】【书】【,】【刘】【雨】【明】【因】【为】【补】【作】【业】【没】【来】【得】【及】【午】【睡】【,】【此】【时】【正】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【,】【用】【一】【本】【书】【挡】【住】【老】【师】【的】【视】【线】【,】【进】【入】【了】【睡】【眠】【状】【态】【。】【孙】【志】【远】【趁】【机】【轻】【手】【轻】【脚】【地】【弯】【下】【腰】【把】【他】【的】【一】【只】【鞋】【子】【脱】【掉】【,】【藏】【在】【一】【旁】【。】【当】【下】【课】【的】【铃】【声】【响】【起】【来】【,】【班】【长】【喊】【起】【立】【时】【,】【刘】【雨】【明】【猛】【然】【惊】【醒】【,】【一】【下】【子】【站】【了】【起】【来】【,】【却】【又】【发】【现】【自】【己】【一】【只】【脚】【没】【穿】【鞋】【子】【,】【于】【是】【四】【下】【环】【顾】【上】【蹿】【下】【跳】【面】【红】【耳】【赤】【地】【单】【跳】【着】【寻】【找】【鞋】【子】【,】【那】【形】【象】【像】【极】【了】【袋】【鼠】【,】【全】【班】【同】【学】【哄】【堂】【大】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【告】【老】【师】【!】【”】【他】【压】【低】【饱】【含】【着】【愤】【怒】【与】【不】【甘】【的】【声】【音】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【不】【怕】【,】【老】【虎】【也】【有】【打】【盹】【的】【时】【候】【吧】【。】【看】【你】【还】【敢】【再】【欺】【负】【我】【?】【”】【孙】【志】【远】【冲】【他】【挥】【了】【挥】【拳】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刘】【雨】【明】【无】【奈】【地】【挠】【挠】【头】【发】【,】【笑】【了】【:】【“】【没】【看】【出】【来】【,】【你】【挺】【男】【人】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【次】【主】【题】【班】【会】【,】【老】【师】【布】【置】【的】【主】【题】【是】【《】【大】【声】【说】【一】【句】【,】【我】【爱】【你】【》】【,】【一】【向】【腼】【腆】【的】【孙】【志】【远】【一】【马】【当】【先】【站】【起】【来】【慷】【慨】【陈】【词】【:】【“】【书】【上】【说】【,】【家】【是】【一】【个】【人】【永】【远】【的】【港】【湾】【,】【书】【中】【也】【写】【道】【‘】【慈】【母】【手】【中】【线】【,】【游】【子】【身】【上】【衣】【’】【,】【远】【行】【的】【游】【子】【反】【复】【吟】【唱】【了】【几】【千】【年】【的】【思】【乡】【之】【曲】【至】【今】【还】【萦】【绕】【耳】【旁】【。】【无】【论】【我】【今】【后】【走】【向】【哪】【里】【,】【无】【论】【我】【走】【多】【远】【,】【都】【走】【不】【出】【家】【中】【头】【发】【已】【经】【开】【始】【花】【白】【的】【父】【母】【的】【牵】【念】【!】【我】【想】【,】【他】【们】【的】【前】【半】【生】【我】【无】【法】【参】【与】【,】【他】【们】【的】【后】【半】【生】【,】【我】【孝】【敬】【到】【底】【!】【”】【话】【音】【未】【落】【,】【全】【班】【同】【学】【报】【以】【热】【烈】【的】【掌】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【力】【士】【魏】【博】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【和】【丑】【小】【鸭】【林】【帅】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【次】【班】【级】【搬】【水】【,】【魏】【博】【都】【会】【神】【采】【飞】【扬】【一】【马】【当】【先】【冲】【在】【最】【前】【面】【,】【一】【手】【一】【个】【水】【桶】【,】【一】【步】【两】【个】【台】【阶】【,】【与】【其】【他】【男】【生】【形】【成】【鲜】【明】【的】【对】【比】【,】【让】【众】【多】【同】【学】【都】【看】【得】【目】【瞪】【口】【呆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【魏】【博】【是】【我】【们】【班】【的】【体】【委】【,】【他】【长】【得】【高】【大】【魁】【梧】【,】【阳】【光】【帅】【气】【,】【但】【也】【绝】【非】【头】【脑】【简】【单】【,】【四】【肢】【发】【达】【之】【辈】【。】【他】【地】【理】【学】【得】【超】【级】【好】【,】【给】【你】【讲】【起】【题】【来】【,】【那】【真】【是】【头】【头】【是】【道】【,】【有】【条】【不】【紊】【,】【绝】【对】【让】【你】【佩】【服】【得】【五】【体】【投】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【为】【了】【答】【谢】【他】【无】【私】【的】【帮】【助】【,】【我】【连】【声】【许】【诺】【:】【“】【吃】【水】【不】【忘】【挖】【井】【人】【,】【等】【期】【末】【考】【试】【我】【的】【地】【理】【成】【绩】【提】【高】【了】【,】【我】【一】【定】【请】【你】【吃】【糖】【葫】【芦】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【就】【你】【那】【么】【笨】【的】【人】【,】【我】【要】【等】【到】【猴】【年】【马】【月】【?】【”】【他】【故】【意】【气】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【别】【门】【缝】【瞧】【人】【!】【”】【我】【不】【服】【气】【地】【说】【,】【“】【你】【忘】【了】【自】【助】【者】【天】【必】【助】【,】【上】【天】【会】【垂】【青】【我】【这】【样】【勤】【勉】【的】【人】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【可】【是】【从】【你】【身】【上】【,】【我】【怎】【么】【也】【没】【看】【出】【来】【丑】【小】【鸭】【要】【变】【成】【白】【天】【鹅】【的】【迹】【象】【啊】【,】【这】【糖】【葫】【芦】【恐】【怕】【是】【吃】【不】【上】【了】【。】【”】【他】【狡】【黠】【地】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哈】【!】【世】【界】【不】【是】【缺】【少】【美】【,】【而】【是】【缺】【少】【发】【现】【美】【的】【眼】【睛】【。】【”】【我】【振】【振】【有】【词】【,】【“】【你】【是】【没】【有】【慧】【眼】【,】【当】【然】【也】【就】【不】【能】【识】【别】【我】【这】【样】【有】【潜】【质】【的】【英】【雄】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哦】【…】【…】【”】【他】【立】【刻】【做】【呕】【吐】【状】【离】【开】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【男】【生】【一】【直】【要】【赛】【场】【球】【,】【却】【因】【为】【人】【数】【不】【够】【,】【未】【能】【如】【愿】【。】【赶】【上】【体】【育】【课】【老】【师】【有】【急】【事】【,】【让】【我】【们】【自】【由】【活】【动】【,】【他】【就】【极】【力】【怂】【恿】【我】【,】【“】【头】【儿】【,】【反】【正】【你】【呆】【着】【也】【是】【呆】【着】【,】【不】【如】【加】【入】【我】【们】【的】【队】【伍】【,】【痛】【快】【地】【赛】【场】【球】【。】【”】【当】【我】【犹】【疑】【不】【决】【时】【,】【他】【又】【用】【激】【将】【法】【:】【“】【没】【吃】【过】【猪】【肉】【,】【还】【没】【见】【过】【猪】【跑】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【巾】【帼】【不】【将】【须】【眉】【让】【!】【我】【立】【刻】【同】【意】【,】【使】【得】【所】【有】【认】【为】【那】【么】【柔】【柔】【弱】【弱】【的】【我】【不】【会】【答】【应】【的】【女】【生】【惊】【到】【无】【语】【,】【她】【们】【簇】【拥】【着】【我】【,】【为】【我】【摇】【旗】【呐】【喊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【七】【朵】【半】【金】【花】【被】【分】【成】【了】【两】【组】【,】【一】【开】【始】【,】【男】【生】【们】【还】【让】【着】【点】【儿】【我】【,】【可】【到】【了】【后】【来】【,】【随】【着】【我】【们】【两】【个】【队】【的】【比】【分】【越】【来】【越】【接】【近】【,】【双】【方】【队】【员】【都】【开】【始】【了】【认】【真】【激】【烈】【地】【比】【拼】【。】【缺】【少】【运】【动】【细】【胞】【的】【我】【凭】【借】【三】【脚】【猫】【的】【功】【夫】【,】【竟】【也】【让】【大】【家】【愉】【快】【地】【度】【过】【了】【这】【节】【体】【育】【课】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【元】【旦】【联】【欢】【会】【结】【束】【时】【,】【男】【生】【们】【提】【议】【要】【七】【朵】【半】【金】【花】【单】【独】【照】【一】【张】【集】【体】【照】【,】【并】【且】【让】【身】【为】【头】【儿】【的】【我】【站】【在】【最】【前】【面】【。】【随】【着】【“】【咔】【嚓】【”】【的】【声】【响】【,】【我】【们】【七】【朵】【半】【金】【花】【的】【灿】【烂】【笑】【容】【被】【永】【远】【地】【印】【在】【了】【照】【片】【上】【,】【而】【我】【们】【之】【间】【的】【友】【情】【也】【被】【永】【远】【地】【印】【在】【了】【彼】【此】【的】【心】【中】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【p】【>】【如】【果】【让】【我】【去】【选】【择】【的】【话】【,】【我】【宁】【可】【去】【做】【一】【只】【小】【鸟】【,】【在】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【中】【自】【由】【自】【在】【地】【飞】【翔】【。】【我】【不】【禁】【再】【看】【看】【那】【本】【书】【封】【面】【上】【飞】【翔】【的】【小】【鸟】【,】【不】【由】【得】【从】【心】【底】【感】【叹】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【小】【鸟】【啊】【,】【你】【真】【令】【我】【羡】【慕】【!】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【<】【/】【p】【>】福清核电站【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【“】【编】【筐】【编】【篓】【,】【贵】【在】【收】【口】【;】【描】【龙】【画】【凤】【,】【难】【在】【点】【睛】【。】【”】【说】【的】【是】【工】【艺】【制】【作】【的】【收】【尾】【一】【环】【是】【最】【为】【重】【要】【的】【。】【作】【文】【亦】【是】【如】【此】【。】【古】【人】【曾】【把】【文】【章】【结】【构】【大】【体】【分】【为】【三】【部】【分】【,】【即】【凤】【头】【、】【猪】【肚】【、】【豹】【尾】【。】【说】【的】【是】【开】【头】【要】【漂】【亮】【、】【俊】【秀】【;】【体】【干】【要】【饱】【满】【、】【充】【实】【;】【而】【结】【尾】【则】【要】【做】【到】【或】【结】【实】【有】【力】【或】【如】【“】【撞】【钟】【,】【清】【音】【有】【余】【”】【。】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【让】【文】【章】【结】【尾】【做】【到】【又】【快】【又】【好】【呢】【?】【下】【面】【介】【绍】【7】【种】【结】【尾】【方】【法】【,】【希】【望】【同】【学】【们】【能】【从】【中】【得】【到】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【?】【郾】【 】【自】【然】【式】【结】【尾】【,】【干】【脆】【利】【落】【。】【即】【事】【情】【结】【束】【了】【,】【文】【章】【也】【就】【自】【然】【收】【尾】【了】【。】【如】【《】【飞】【夺】【泸】【定】【桥】【》】【:】【“】【红】【军】【的】【主】【力】【渡】【过】【了】【天】【险】【大】【渡】【河】【,】【浩】【浩】【荡】【荡】【地】【奔】【赴】【抗】【日】【最】【前】【线】【。】【”】【作】【者】【要】【讲】【述】【的】【事】【情】【已】【经】【叙】【述】【完】【了】【,】【文】【章】【就】【在】【此】【处】【戛】【然】【而】【止】【,】【给】【人】【以】【轻】【松】【愉】【快】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【?】【郾】【 】【总】【结】【式】【结】【尾】【,】【突】【出】【中】【心】【。】【即】【对】【全】【文】【内】【容】【加】【以】【总】【结】【,】【以】【突】【出】【中】【心】【。】【如】【《】【养】【花】【》】【:】【“】【有】【喜】【有】【忧】【,】【有】【笑】【有】【泪】【,】【有】【花】【有】【果】【,】【有】【香】【有】【色】【,】【既】【须】【劳】【动】【,】【又】【长】【见】【识】【,】【这】【就】【是】【养】【花】【的】【乐】【趣】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【?】【郾】【 】【照】【应】【式】【结】【尾】【,】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【。】【主】【要】【是】【照】【应】【开】【头】【,】【有】【时】【也】【照】【应】【题】【目】【。】【如】【《】【谁】【是】【最】【可】【爱】【的】【人】【》】【结】【尾】【的】【最】【后】【一】【句】【是】【这】【样】【的】【:】【“】【朋】【友】【!】【你】【是】【这】【么】【的】【爱】【我】【们】【的】【祖】【国】【,】【爱】【我】【们】【的】【伟】【大】【的】【领】【袖】【毛】【主】【席】【,】【你】【一】【定】【会】【深】【深】【地】【爱】【我】【们】【的】【战】【士】【,】【—】【—】【他】【们】【的】【确】【是】【我】【们】【最】【可】【爱】【的】【人】【!】【”】【这】【样】【的】【结】【尾】【照】【应】【了】【开】【头】【第】【一】【段】【中】【的】【这】【一】【句】【:】【“】【但】【我】【要】【急】【于】【告】【诉】【你】【们】【的】【,】【是】【我】【思】【想】【感】【情】【的】【一】【段】【重】【要】【经】【历】【,】【这】【就】【是】【:】【我】【越】【来】【越】【深】【刻】【地】【感】【觉】【到】【谁】【是】【我】【们】【最】【可】【爱】【的】【人】【!】【谁】【是】【我】【们】【最】【可】【爱】【的】【人】【呢】【?】【我】【们】【的】【战】【士】【,】【我】【感】【到】【他】【们】【是】【最】【可】【爱】【的】【人】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【?】【郾】【 】【启】【发】【式】【结】【尾】【,】【余】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【这】【种】【结】【尾】【有】【两】【种】【形】【式】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【①】【看】【起】【来】【可】【以】【写】【下】【去】【,】【但】【不】【写】【更】【好】【,】【给】【人】【以】【想】【象】【的】【余】【地】【。】【如】【《】【梅】【山】【脚】【下】【》】【:】【“】【以】【后】【,】【老】【乡】【们】【总】【好】【像】【听】【见】【你】【妈】【的】【声】【音】【,】【听】【见】【你】【妈】【在】【说】【这】【句】【话】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【②】【结】【尾】【含】【蓄】【,】【言】【有】【尽】【而】【意】【无】【穷】【,】【使】【人】【读】【罢】【产】【生】【无】【限】【遐】【想】【。】【如】【《】【小】【音】【乐】【家】【杨】【科】【》】【:】【“】【白】【桦】【树】【‘】【哗】【哗】【’】【地】【,】【在】【杨】【科】【的】【头】【上】【不】【住】【地】【号】【叫】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【练】【习】【这】【种】【结】【尾】【的】【方】【法】【:】【或】【紧】【扣】【题】【意】【来】【寓】【情】【寄】【意】【;】【或】【根】【据】【内】【容】【,】【写】【出】【令】【人】【回】【味】【、】【富】【于】【启】【发】【的】【结】【尾】【;】【或】【采】【用】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【、】【反】【问】【、】【一】【语】【双】【关】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【?】【郾】【点】【题】【式】【结】【尾】【,】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【。】【这】【是】【最】【常】【用】【的】【一】【种】【方】【法】【,】【即】【在】【文】【章】【的】【结】【尾】【再】【现】【题】【目】【,】【揭】【示】【题】【意】【,】【强】【调】【主】【题】【,】【增】【强】【文】【章】【的】【感】【染】【力】【。】【如】【《】【月】【光】【曲】【》】【:】【“】【他】【飞】【奔】【回】【花】【店】【,】【花】【了】【一】【夜】【工】【夫】【,】【把】【刚】【才】【弹】【的】【曲】【子】【—】【—】【《】【月】【光】【曲】【》】【记】【录】【了】【下】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【练】【习】【这】【种】【结】【尾】【的】【方】【法】【:】【或】【紧】【扣】【题】【眼】【(】【即】【文】【章】【的】【重】【点】【词】【、】【中】【心】【词】【)】【。】【找】【准】【题】【眼】【后】【,】【要】【用】【丰】【富】【的】【内】【容】【来】【充】【实】【与】【题】【眼】【相】【照】【应】【的】【关】【键】【情】【节】【。】【或】【再】【现】【题】【目】【。】【用】【一】【段】【话】【归】【纳】【结】【尾】【时】【,】【必】【须】【是】【再】【现】【题】【目】【。】【还】【要】【注】【意】【文】【中】【叙】【述】【的】【情】【节】【与】【文】【尾】【点】【题】【的】【有】【机】【结】【合】【,】【不】【能】【脱】【节】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【6】【?】【郾】【引】【用】【式】【结】【尾】【,】【言】【简】【意】【赅】【。】【即】【在】【结】【尾】【处】【引】【用】【一】【段】【话】【或】【一】【首】【诗】【、】【一】【句】【词】【对】【全】【文】【进】【行】【总】【结】【。】【如】【《】【桂】【林】【山】【水】【》】【:】【“】【这】【样】【的】【山】【围】【绕】【着】【这】【样】【的】【水】【,】【这】【样】【的】【水】【倒】【映】【着】【这】【样】【的】【山】【,】【再】【加】【上】【空】【中】【云】【雾】【迷】【蒙】【,】【山】【间】【绿】【树】【红】【花】【,】【江】【面】【竹】【筏】【小】【舟】【,】【让】【你】【感】【到】【像】【是】【走】【进】【连】【绵】【不】【断】【的】【画】【卷】【,】【真】【是】【‘】【舟】【行】【碧】【波】【上】【,】【人】【在】【画】【中】【游】【’】【。】【”】【再】【如】【《】【驿】【路】【梨】【花】【》】【:】【“】【我】【望】【着】【这】【群】【充】【满】【朝】【气】【的】【哈】【尼】【小】【姑】【娘】【和】【那】【洁】【白】【的】【梨】【花】【,】【不】【由】【得】【想】【起】【了】【一】【句】【诗】【:】【‘】【驿】【路】【梨】【花】【处】【处】【开】【。】【’】【”】【这】【样】【的】【结】【尾】【,】【言】【简】【意】【赅】【,】【能】【使】【读】【者】【从】【末】【尾】【的】【引】【句】【中】【得】【到】【启】【迪】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【练】【习】【这】【种】【结】【尾】【的】【方】【法】【:】【或】【紧】【扣】【题】【目】【的】【意】【思】【来】【选】【择】【名】【言】【或】【诗】【句】【;】【或】【引】【用】【名】【言】【或】【诗】【句】【时】【不】【要】【离】【开】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【内】【容】【,】【最】【好】【是】【引】【用】【含】【蓄】【而】【深】【刻】【的】【话】【,】【能】【启】【发】【读】【者】【思】【考】【,】【让】【读】【者】【有】【回】【味】【的】【余】【地】【;】【或】【直】【接】【引】【用】【名】【言】【或】【诗】【句】【,】【轻】【松】【自】【如】【,】【戛】【然】【而】【止】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【7】【?】【郾】【梦】【幻】【式】【结】【尾】【,】【情】【真】【意】【切】【。】【即】【运】【用】【做】【梦】【或】【幻】【想】【的】【方】【法】【,】【深】【化】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【。】【如】【《】【荔】【枝】【蜜】【》】【的】【结】【尾】【处】【这】【样】【写】【道】【:】【“】【这】【天】【夜】【里】【,】【我】【做】【了】【一】【个】【奇】【怪】【的】【梦】【,】【梦】【见】【自】【己】【变】【成】【了】【一】【只】【小】【蜜】【蜂】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【7】【种】【结】【尾】【的】【方】【法】【,】【在】【具】【体】【运】【用】【时】【,】【并】【不】【一】【定】【都】【是】【单】【独】【运】【用】【的】【,】【有】【时】【是】【把】【几】【种】【方】【法】【同】【时】【综】【合】【运】【用】【。】【希】【望】【同】【学】【们】【在】【练】【习】【写】【作】【时】【,】【不】【要】【拘】【泥】【于】【一】【种】【方】【法】【,】【而】【应】【多】【多】【思】【考】【,】【勤】【于】【创】【新】【,】【写】【出】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【的】【结】【尾】【,】【为】【文】【章】【锦】【上】【添】【花】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【弯】【弯】【曲】【曲】【水】【,】【世】【事】【重】【重】【叠】【叠】【山】【。】【生】【活】【如】【泛】【着】【阳】【光】【味】【道】【的】【彩】【色】【泡】【泡】【,】【五】【彩】【纷】【呈】【。】【但】【失】【意】【、】【痛】【苦】【也】【会】【常】【常】【伴】【随】【着】【我】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【转】【变】【生】【活】【的】【视】【角】【,】【在】【快】【乐】【与】【痛】【苦】【之】【间】【,】【在】【失】【意】【与】【淡】【然】【之】【间】【,】【在】【成】【功】【与】【失】【败】【之】【间】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【一】【座】【彩】【色】【的】【桥】【,】【连】【接】【着】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【,】【也】【连】【接】【着】【我】【们】【的】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【转】【变】【生】【活】【的】【视】【角】【,】【在】【我】【们】【失】【败】【低】【垂】【着】【沮】【丧】【的】【脑】【袋】【时】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【失】【败】【正】【奠】【基】【着】【我】【们】【通】【向】【理】【想】【殿】【堂】【的】【道】【路】【。】【也】【许】【你】【会】【认】【为】【失】【败】【就】【预】【示】【着】【泯】【灭】【,】【换】【个】【角】【度】【看】【生】【活】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【失】【败】【是】【成】【功】【的】【垫】【脚】【石】【,】【是】【成】【功】【之】【母】【,】【那】【样】【,】【你】【便】【会】【尝】【到】【生】【活】【的】【另】【类】【味】【道】【,】【感】【受】【到】【新】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【转】【变】【生】【活】【的】【视】【角】【,】【快】【乐】【与】【幸】【福】【会】【到】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【你】【看】【到】【高】【耸】【的】【珠】【穆】【朗】【玛】【峰】【,】【看】【到】【那】【山】【顶】【的】【皑】【皑】【白】【雪】【时】【,】【你】【是】【不】【是】【会】【惊】【叹】【自】【然】【的】【力】【量】【。】【然】【而】【伟】【大】【的】【人】【类】【还】【是】【登】【上】【了】【它】【,】【征】【服】【了】【它】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【你】【看】【见】【蜗】【牛】【与】【雄】【鹰】【比】【赛】【谁】【先】【达】【到】【城】【堡】【的】【顶】【端】【时】【,】【也】【许】【你】【会】【为】【蜗】【牛】【的】【行】【为】【而】【感】【到】【不】【解】【,】【认】【为】【那】【无】【疑】【会】【以】【失】【败】【而】【告】【终】【。】【然】【而】【你】【看】【见】【蜗】【牛】【那】【种】【对】【胜】【利】【抱】【有】【信】【心】【的】【积】【极】【的】【心】【态】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【你】【看】【到】【溪】【流】【汩】【汩】【,】【奔】【向】【前】【方】【,】【以】【伟】【大】【的】【气】【势】【去】【投】【入】【海】【洋】【母】【亲】【的】【怀】【抱】【,】【也】【许】【你】【会】【被】【那】【股】【神】【奇】【的】【力】【量】【征】【服】【,】【也】【许】【你】【会】【被】【大】【海】【那】【雄】【浑】【的】【气】【势】【震】【慑】【,】【难】【道】【你】【从】【中】【没】【有】【品】【味】【出】【那】【亲】【情】【的】【伟】【大】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【转】【变】【生】【活】【的】【视】【角】【,】【用】【积】【极】【的】【心】【态】【去】【面】【对】【生】【活】【,】【百】【折】【不】【挠】【,】【让】【我】【们】【在】【艰】【难】【中】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【的】【时】【代】【,】【有】【新】【的】【气】【息】【。】【旧】【的】【时】【代】【,】【有】【旧】【的】【底】【蕴】【。】【阿】【Q】【,】【这】【个】【在】【旧】【时】【代】【生】【活】【的】【何】【其】【渺】【小】【的】【底】【层】【人】【物】【,】【让】【我】【们】【不】【由】【刮】【目】【相】【看】【。】【在】【那】【个】【时】【代】【,】【以】【他】【那】【样】【的】【心】【态】【活】【着】【固】【然】【不】【好】【,】【但】【草】【根】【阶】【层】【的】【韧】【性】【就】【是】【这】【样】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【这】【个】【瞬】【息】【万】【变】【的】【时】【代】【,】【在】【这】【个】【高】【度】【发】【达】【的】【时】【代】【,】【我】【们】【不】【妨】【借】【借】【他】【的】【精】【神】【胜】【利】【法】【,】【去】【掉】【那】【自】【轻】【自】【傲】【的】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【,】【给】【我】【们】【的】【心】【灵】【开】【一】【扇】【窗】【户】【,】【那】【样】【,】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【也】【许】【就】【因】【为】【那】【扇】【窗】【户】【透】【进】【来】【的】【丝】【丝】【阳】【光】【而】【洋】【溢】【出】【美】【丽】【的】【色】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【转】【变】【生】【活】【的】【视】【角】【,】【用】【全】【新】【的】【感】【观】【面】【对】【生】【活】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【生】【活】【多】【姿】【多】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【是】【美】【丽】【的】【,】【让】【我】【们】【转】【变】【生】【活】【的】【视】【角】【,】【尽】【情】【地】【享】【受】【生】【活】【带】【给】【我】【们】【的】【快】【乐】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【维】【平】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】福清核电站【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【风】【景】【是】【什】【么】【?】【到】【底】【是】【①】【两】【绗】【的】【树】【是】【绚】【烂】【的】【花】【,】【不】【审】【人】【间】【蕴】【含】【着】【的】【②】【美】【好】【与】【温】【暖】【?】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【一】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【▲】【夜】【已】【经】【很】【深】【了】【,】【黑】【蓝】【色】【的】【天】【幕】【上】【一】【颗】【颗】【星】【星】【眨】【巴】【着】【眼】【睛】【。】【刚】【刚】【上】【完】【晚】【自】【习】【的】【高】【三】【学】【生】【背】【着】【书】【包】【骑】【着】【自】【行】【车】【在】【黑】【漆】【漆】【的】【马】【路】【上】【穿】【梭】【,】【③】【那】【一】【双】【黯】【淡】【的】【眼】【睛】【中】【写】【着】【疲】【惫】【。】【巷】【口】【处】【一】【位】【老】【爷】【爷】【还】【在】【收】【着】【路】【边】【的】【小】【摊】【。】【学】【生】【骑】【着】【自】【行】【车】【进】【入】【小】【巷】【的】【那】【瞬】【间】【,】【一】【盏】【灯】【照】【亮】【了】【他】【④】【前】【进】【的】【道】【路】【。】【回】【过】【头】【一】【看】【⑤】【原】【来】【是】【老】【爷】【爷】【拿】【着】【一】【盏】【闪】【着】【微】【弱】【灯】【光】【的】【小】【电】【灯】【照】【亮】【道】【路】【。】【小】【巷】【口】【的】【灯】【光】【黑】【夜】【的】【灯】【光】【。】【我】【想】【我】【永】【远】【忘】【不】【了】【这】【一】【道】【⑥】【关】【情】【的】【风】【景】【线】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【二】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【“】【一】【、】【二】【、】【三】【、】【四】【,】【跟】【我】【一】【起】【滑】【又】【逢】【星】【期】【六】【,】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【带】【着】【自】【己】【一】【对】【无】【比】【可】【爱】【的】【孙】【子】【、】【孙】【女】【来】【到】【江】【滩】【上】【跟】【着】【老】【师】【学】【滑】【冰】【,】【⑦】【虽】【然】【才】【学】【了】【三】【次】【,】【孙】【子】【、】【孙】【女】【虽】【然】【还】【是】【脚】【法】【稚】【嫩】【,】【可】【是】【总】【算】【站】【得】【稳】【。】【看】【着】【自】【己】【的】【宝】【贝】【们】【在】【⑧】【不】【断】【成】【才】【,】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【的】【脸】【上】【写】【满】【了】【兴】【奋】【与】【骄】【傲】【,】【可】【是】【神】【色】【之】【中】【还】【是】【流】【露】【着】【担】【心】【。】【小】【心】【呀】【!】【孩】【子】【们】【,】【别】【摔】【跤】【了】【,】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【真】【是】【为】【你】【们】【担】【心】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【正】【在】【这】【时】【,】【只】【听】【得】【“】【嗵】【”】【的】【一】【声】【两】【人】【同】【时】【重】【重】【地】【摔】【在】【冰】【面】【上】【。】【顿】【时】【,】【两】【个】【孩】【子】【的】【眼】【眶】【里】【⑨】【闪】【着】【泪】【光】【。】【看】【着】【心】【肝】【宝】【贝】【摔】【得】【如】【此】【可】【怜】【,】【爷】【爷】【想】【去】【拉】【他】【们】【一】【把】【,】【可】【墙】【上】【的】【提】【示】【赫】【然】【映】【入】【眼】【帘】【:】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【亲】【爱】【的】【家】【长】【,】【希】【望】【您】【能】【放】【开】【手】【,】【让】【摔】【倒】【的】【孩】【子】【自】【己】【爬】【起】【来】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【爷】【爷】【停】【住】【了】【脚】【步】【,】【示】【意】【孙】【子】【们】【自】【己】【站】【起】【来】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【孩】【子】【们】【的】【⑩】【自】【立】【,】【是】【一】【道】【亮】【丽】【而】【又】【充】【满】【无】【限】【爱】【的】【风】【景】【线】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【三】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【【】【1】【1】【】】【“】【你】【过】【来】【一】【点】【,】【好】【!】【我】【要】【准】【备】【照】【相】【了】【!】【”】【摄】【影】【师】【指】【挥】【着】【一】【批】【刚】【毕】【业】【的】【大】【学】【生】【在】【武】【汉】【大】【学】【校】【门】【口】【合】【影】【留】【念】【尽】【管】【天】【气】【炎】【热】【,】【每】【个】【人】【都】【满】【头】【大】【汗】【,】【可】【是】【对】【于】【即】【将】【离】【开】【的】【母】【校】【,】【对】【于】【即】【将】【分】【别】【的】【同】【学】【,】【【】【1】【2】【】】【他】【们】【都】【是】【笑】【容】【满】【面】【。】【我】【想】【,】【他】【们】【的】【脑】【海】【中】【浮】【现】【的】【,】【一】【定】【是】【美】【好】【的】【未】【来】【,】【还】【有】【新】【的】【征】【程】【…】【…】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【【】【1】【3】【】】【在】【不】【久】【的】【将】【来】【,】【也】【许】【我】【会】【站】【在】【其】【中】【,】【站】【在】【人】【生】【的】【第】【一】【个】【终】【点】【,】【也】【是】【人】【生】【的】【起】【点】【上】【,】【为】【自】【己】【加】【油】【!】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【【】【1】【4】【】】【其】【实】【人】【间】【处】【处】【有】【风】【景】【,】【当】【你】【拥】【有】【一】【双】【留】【心】【生】【活】【的】【眼】【睛】【时】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【生】【活】【中】【所】【有】【的】【美】【,】【所】【有】【的】【风】【景】【!】【看】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【后】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【[】【点】【评】【]】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【“】【生】【活】【中】【并】【不】【缺】【少】【美】【,】【而】【是】【缺】【少】【发】【现】【。】【”】【哲】【人】【如】【是】【说】【。】【小】【作】【者】【善】【于】【观】【察】【和】【留】【心】【生】【活】【,】【撷】【取】【了】【生】【活】【中】【的】【几】【个】【【】【1】【5】【】】【细】【节】【来】【描】【绘】【美】【丽】【的】【“】【风】【景】【”】【,】【特】【色】【【】【1】【6】【】】【迥】【然】【:】【文】【章】【所】【选】【的】【深】【夜】【的】【灯】【光】【、】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【的】【爱】【以】【及】【同】【学】【之】【间】【的】【合】【影】【三】【件】【事】【,】【并】【联】【在】【一】【起】【,】【构】【成】【文】【章】【的】【主】【体】【,】【【】【1】【7】【】】【详】【略】【得】【当】【,】【层】【次】【清】【晰】【。】【每】【个】【画】【面】【都】【有】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【语】【言】【优】【美】【生】【动】【,】【且】【采】【用】【【】【1】【8】【】】【小】【标】【题】【的】【形】【式】【以】【画】【面】【组】【合】【连】【缀】【成】【篇】【省】【却】【了】【段】【与】【段】【之】【间】【的】【过】【渡】【性】【语】【句】【。】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【①】【“】【两】【绗】【”】【一】【词】【属】【于】【生】【造】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【②】【“】【美】【好】【”】【与】【“】【温】【暖】【”】【难】【以】【构】【成】【并】【列】【关】【系】【。】【这】【样】【的】【题】【记】【可】【删】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【▲】【这】【一】【段】【的】【内】【容】【和】【央】【视】【经】【常】【播】【出】【的】【一】【则】【公】【益】【广】【告】【相】【似】【。】【用】【文】【字】【再】【现】【那】【则】【广】【告】【也】【未】【尝】【不】【可】【,】【但】【想】【要】【写】【好】【却】【并】【非】【一】【件】【简】【单】【的】【事】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【③】【画】【线】【句】【为】【多】【余】【,】【因】【为】【脱】【离】【了】【这】【一】【段】【内】【容】【要】【表】【现】【的】【旨】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【④】【“】【前】【进】【的】【”】【宜】【改】【成】【“】【前】【面】【的】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑤】【“】【拿】【着】【…】【…】【电】【灯】【”】【,】【搭】【配】【不】【当】【。】【“】【微】【弱】【”】【亦】【不】【妥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑥】【何】【谓】【“】【关】【情】【”】【?】【又】【是】【生】【造】【词】【。】【“】【风】【景】【”】【和】【“】【风】【景】【线】【”】【是】【两】【个】【不】【同】【的】【概】【念】【。】【这】【里】【说】【“】【一】【道】【风】【景】【”】【就】【可】【以】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑦】【两】【个】【“】【虽】【然】【”】【连】【用】【,】【不】【妥】【,】【第】【一】【个】【可】【删】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑧】【学】【习】【溜】【冰】【有】【了】【点】【进】【步】【,】【就】【说】【是】【“】【成】【才】【”】【,】【这】【妥】【当】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑨】【既】【然】【已】【是】【第】【三】【次】【来】【学】【滑】【冰】【,】【摔】【跤】【肯】【定】【不】【是】【第】【一】【次】【了】【,】【为】【什】【么】【这】【次】【摔】【跤】【会】【使】【两】【个】【孩】【子】【想】【哭】【呢】【?】【应】【有】【个】【交】【代】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑩】【“】【自】【立】【”】【是】【独】【立】【生】【活】【的】【意】【思】【,】【而】【不】【是】【从】【地】【上】【爬】【起】【来】【之】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【1】【】】【生】【活】【中】【,】【摄】【影】【师】【一】【般】【不】【会】【这】【么】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【2】【】】【画】【线】【句】【改】【为】【:】【面】【带】【微】【笑】【。】【理】【由】【见】【后】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【3】【】】【这】【一】【结】【尾】【有】【画】【蛇】【添】【足】【之】【嫌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【4】【】】【前】【有】【“】【题】【记】【”】【,】【后】【有】【“】【后】【记】【”】【,】【如】【此】【戴】【帽】【穿】【靴】【,】【实】【无】【必】【要】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【5】【】】【严】【格】【地】【说】【,】【文】【章】【写】【的】【是】【几】【个】【场】【面】【、】【几】【件】【“】【小】【事】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【6】【】】【“】【特】【色】【”】【不】【能】【讲】【“】【迥】【然】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【7】【】】【评】【语】【,】【不】【宜】【用】【此】【类】【大】【而】【无】【当】【的】【套】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【8】【】】【请】【注】【意】【,】【文】【中】【并】【无】【小】【标】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

福清核电站:水库泄洪成群大鱼"越狱"

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【1】【年】【,】【一】【篇】【高】【考】【作】【文】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【,】【经】【媒】【体】【披】【露】【后】【,】【广】【为】【流】【传】【。】【据】【说】【,】【当】【年】【书】【店】【“】【经】【典】【名】【著】【”】【热】【销】【,】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【就】【起】【了】【添】【薪】【升】【温】【的】【作】【用】【。】【(】【《】【中】【华】【读】【书】【报】【》】【2】【0】【0】【1】【年】【8】【月】【1】【日】【)】【应】【试】【作】【文】【年】【年】【有】【,】【而】【能】【产】【生】【如】【此】【轰】【动】【性】【社】【会】【影】【响】【的】【并】【不】【多】【见】【。】【其】【间】【影】【响】【既】【有】【积】【极】【的】【方】【面】【,】【也】【有】【消】【极】【的】【方】【面】【。】【多】【年】【之】【后】【,】【影】【响】【仍】【在】【,】【故】【有】【再】【作】【反】【思】【和】【辨】【析】【之】【必】【要】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【作】【文】【如】【下】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【建】【安】【二】【十】【六】【年】【,】【公】【元】【2】【2】【1】【年】【,】【关】【羽】【走】【麦】【城】【,】【兵】【败】【遭】【擒】【,】【拒】【降】【,】【为】【孙】【权】【所】【害】【。】【其】【坐】【骑】【赤】【兔】【马】【为】【孙】【权】【赐】【予】【马】【忠】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【日】【,】【马】【忠】【上】【表】【,】【赤】【兔】【马】【绝】【食】【数】【日】【,】【不】【久】【将】【亡】【。】【孙】【权】【大】【惊】【,】【急】【访】【江】【东】【名】【士】【伯】【喜】【。】【此】【人】【乃】【伯】【乐】【之】【后】【,】【人】【言】【其】【精】【通】【马】【语】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【马】【忠】【引】【伯】【喜】【回】【府】【,】【至】【槽】【间】【,】【但】【见】【赤】【兔】【马】【伏】【于】【地】【,】【哀】【嘶】【不】【止】【。】【众】【人】【不】【解】【,】【惟】【伯】【喜】【知】【之】【。】【伯】【喜】【遣】【散】【诸】【人】【,】【抚】【其】【背】【叹】【道】【:】【“】【昔】【日】【曹】【操】【做】【《】【龟】【虽】【寿】【》】【,】【‘】【老】【骥】【伏】【枥】【,】【志】【在】【千】【里】【。】【烈】【士】【暮】【年】【,】【壮】【心】【不】【已】【。】【’】【吾】【深】【知】【君】【念】【关】【将】【军】【之】【恩】【义】【,】【欲】【从】【之】【于】【地】【下】【。】【然】【当】【日】【吕】【奉】【先】【白】【门】【楼】【殒】【命】【,】【亦】【未】【见】【君】【如】【此】【相】【依】【,】【为】【何】【今】【日】【这】【等】【轻】【生】【,】【岂】【不】【负】【君】【千】【里】【之】【志】【哉】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赤】【兔】【马】【哀】【嘶】【一】【声】【,】【叹】【道】【:】【“】【予】【尝】【闻】【,】【‘】【鸟】【之】【将】【死】【,】【其】【鸣】【也】【哀】【:】【人】【之】【将】【死】【,】【其】【言】【也】【善】【。】【’】【今】【幸】【遇】【先】【生】【,】【吾】【可】【将】【肺】【腑】【之】【言】【相】【告】【。】【吾】【生】【于】【西】【凉】【,】【后】【为】【董】【卓】【所】【获】【,】【此】【人】【飞】【扬】【跋】【扈】【,】【杀】【少】【帝】【,】【卧】【龙】【床】【,】【实】【为】【汉】【贼】【,】【吾】【深】【恨】【之】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【伯】【喜】【点】【头】【,】【曰】【:】【“】【后】【闻】【李】【儒】【献】【计】【,】【将】【君】【赠】【予】【吕】【布】【,】【吕】【布】【乃】【天】【下】【第】【一】【勇】【将】【,】【众】【皆】【言】【:】【‘】【人】【中】【吕】【布】【,】【马】【中】【赤】【兔】【。】【’】【想】【来】【当】【不】【负】【君】【之】【志】【也】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赤】【兔】【马】【叹】【曰】【:】【“】【公】【言】【差】【矣】【。】【吕】【布】【此】【人】【最】【是】【无】【信】【,】【为】【荣】【华】【而】【杀】【丁】【原】【,】【为】【美】【色】【而】【刺】【董】【卓】【,】【投】【刘】【备】【而】【夺】【其】【徐】【州】【,】【结】【袁】【术】【而】【斩】【其】【婚】【使】【。】【‘】【人】【无】【信】【不】【立】【’】【,】【与】【此】【等】【无】【诚】【信】【之】【人】【齐】【名】【,】【实】【为】【吾】【平】【生】【之】【大】【耻】【!】【后】【吾】【归】【于】【曹】【操】【,】【其】【手】【下】【虽】【猛】【将】【如】【云】【,】【却】【无】【人】【可】【称】【英】【雄】【。】【吾】【恐】【今】【生】【只】【辱】【于】【奴】【隶】【人】【之】【手】【,】【骈】【死】【于】【槽】【枥】【之】【间】【。】【后】【曹】【操】【将】【吾】【赠】【予】【关】【将】【军】【;】【吾】【曾】【于】【虎】【牢】【关】【前】【见】【其】【勇】【武】【,】【白】【门】【楼】【上】【见】【其】【恩】【义】【,】【仰】【慕】【已】【久】【。】【关】【将】【军】【见】【吾】【亦】【大】【喜】【,】【拜】【谢】【曹】【操】【。】【操】【问】【何】【故】【如】【此】【,】【关】【将】【军】【答】【曰】【:】【‘】【吾】【知】【此】【马】【日】【行】【千】【里】【,】【今】【幸】【得】【之】【,】【他】【日】【若】【知】【兄】【长】【下】【落】【,】【可】【一】【日】【而】【得】【见】【矣】【。】【’】【其】【人】【诚】【信】【如】【此】【。】【常】【言】【道】【:】【‘】【鸟】【随】【鸾】【凤】【飞】【腾】【远】【,】【人】【伴】【贤】【良】【品】【质】【高】【。】【’】【吾】【敢】【不】【以】【死】【相】【报】【乎】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【伯】【喜】【闻】【之】【,】【叹】【曰】【:】【“】【人】【皆】【言】【关】【将】【军】【乃】【诚】【信】【之】【士】【,】【今】【日】【所】【闻】【,】【果】【真】【如】【此】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赤】【兔】【马】【泣】【曰】【:】【“】【吾】【尝】【慕】【不】【食】【周】【粟】【之】【伯】【夷】【、】【叔】【齐】【之】【高】【义】【。】【玉】【可】【碎】【而】【不】【可】【损】【其】【白】【,】【竹】【可】【破】【而】【不】【可】【毁】【其】【节】【。】【士】【为】【知】【己】【而】【死】【,】【人】【因】【诚】【信】【而】【存】【,】【吾】【安】【肯】【食】【吴】【粟】【而】【苟】【活】【于】【世】【间】【?】【”】【言】【罢】【,】【伏】【地】【而】【亡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【伯】【喜】【放】【声】【痛】【哭】【,】【曰】【:】【“】【物】【犹】【如】【此】【,】【人】【何】【以】【堪】【?】【”】【后】【奏】【于】【孙】【权】【。】【权】【闻】【之】【亦】【泣】【:】【“】【吾】【不】【知】【云】【长】【诚】【信】【如】【此】【,】【今】【此】【忠】【义】【之】【士】【为】【吾】【所】【害】【,】【吾】【有】【何】【面】【目】【见】【天】【下】【苍】【生】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【孙】【权】【传】【旨】【,】【将】【关】【羽】【父】【子】【并】【赤】【兔】【马】【厚】【葬】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【确】【是】【一】【篇】【引】【人】【瞩】【目】【的】【试】【场】【作】【文】【。】【它】【主】【题】【鲜】【明】【,】【结】【构】【完】【整】【,】【想】【象】【丰】【富】【,】【文】【笔】【老】【到】【,】【作】【者】【应】【题】【发】【挥】【,】【出】【此】【佳】【作】【,】【殊】【为】【难】【得】【。】【这】【一】【年】【的】【高】【考】【作】【文】【题】【是】【以】【“】【诚】【信】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【题】【目】【提】【示】【,】【可】【以】【写】【自】【身】【的】【经】【历】【、】【体】【验】【、】【感】【受】【、】【看】【法】【和】【信】【念】【,】【也】【可】【以】【编】【写】【故】【事】【、】【寓】【言】【等】【,】【只】【是】【所】【写】【内】【容】【须】【在】【“】【诚】【信】【”】【范】【围】【之】【内】【。】【本】【文】【写】【的】【正】【是】【一】【个】【“】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【”】【的】【寓】【言】【。】【作】【者】【熟】【稔】【“】【三】【国】【故】【事】【”】【,】【虚】【拟】【“】【人】【马】【对】【话】【”】【,】【构】【思】【“】【殉】【情】【”】【情】【节】【,】【行】【文】【自】【如】【,】【言】【之】【有】【据】【,】【充】【分】【展】【现】【了】【作】【者】【腹】【有】【诗】【书】【、】【意】【气】【纵】【横】【的】【才】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【广】【征】【博】【引】【,】【涉】【笔】【成】【趣】【是】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【引】【人】【之】【处】【。】【全】【文】【不】【足】【千】【字】【,】【引】【文】【就】【有】【1】【0】【处】【。】【依】【次】【为】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【1】【)】【引】【“】【伯】【乐】【”】【。】【文】【中】【“】【赤】【兔】【”】【有】【言】【(】【设】【计】【为】【“】【马】【语】【”】【)】【:】【“】【吾】【恐】【今】【生】【只】【辱】【于】【奴】【隶】【人】【之】【手】【,】【骈】【死】【于】【槽】【枥】【之】【间】【。】【”】【加】【点】【词】【为】【韩】【愈】【《】【杂】【说】【(】【“】【世】【有】【伯】【乐】【”】【)】【》】【中】【语】【句】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【)】【引】【曹】【操】【诗】【。】【《】【龟】【虽】【寿】【》】【系】【《】【步】【出】【夏】【门】【行】【(】【其】【二】【)】【》】【之】【别】【名】【。】【因】【诗】【首】【句】【“】【神】【龟】【虽】【寿】【”】【得】【名】【。】【“】【老】【骥】【伏】【枥】【,】【志】【在】【千】【里】【。】【烈】【士】【暮】【年】【,】【壮】【心】【不】【已】【”】【为】【诗】【中】【诗】【句】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【3】【)】【引】【“】【鸟】【之】【将】【死】【,】【其】【鸣】【也】【哀】【;】【人】【之】【将】【死】【,】【其】【言】【也】【善】【”】【。】【此】【为】【曾】【子】【原】【话】【,】【语】【出】【《】【论】【语】【·】【秦】【伯】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【4】【)】【引】【“】【人】【中】【吕】【布】【,】【马】【中】【赤】【兔】【”】【。】【此】【为】【《】【三】【国】【演】【义】【》】【第】【5】【回】【文】【中】【语】【句】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【5】【)】【引】【“】【人】【无】【信】【不】【立】【”】【。】【语】【出】【《】【论】【语】【·】【颜】【渊】【》】【:】【“】【自】【古】【皆】【有】【死】【,】【民】【无】【信】【不】【立】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【6】【)】【引】【“】【鸟】【随】【鸾】【凤】【飞】【腾】【远】【,】【人】【伴】【贤】【良】【品】【质】【高】【”】【。】【作】【者】【自】【谓】【此】【对】【句】【乃】【听】【艺】【人】【袁】【阔】【成】【“】【三】【国】【”】【评】【书】【所】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【7】【)】【引】【“】【伯】【夷】【、】【叔】【齐】【”】【。】【俩】【人】【为】【商】【末】【义】【士】【。】【周】【武】【王】【灭】【商】【,】【他】【们】【隐】【居】【首】【阳】【山】【,】【不】【食】【周】【粟】【而】【死】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【8】【)】【引】【“】【士】【为】【知】【己】【而】【死】【”】【。】【语】【出】【《】【战】【国】【策】【·】【赵】【策】【一】【》】【:】【“】【士】【为】【知】【己】【者】【死】【,】【女】【为】【悦】【己】【者】【客】【,】【吾】【极】【知】【民】【之】【雠】【也】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【9】【)】【引】【“】【玉】【可】【碎】【而】【不】【可】【损】【其】【白】【,】【竹】【可】【破】【而】【不】【可】【毁】【其】【节】【”】【。】【此】【为】【《】【三】【国】【演】【义】【》】【第】【7】【6】【回】【关】【羽】【兵】【败】【麦】【城】【时】【说】【的】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【1】【0】【)】【引】【“】【物】【犹】【如】【此】【,】【人】【何】【以】【堪】【”】【。】【语】【出】【《】【世】【说】【新】【语】【·】【言】【语】【第】【二】【·】【五】【十】【五】【》】【:】【“】【木】【犹】【如】【此】【,】【人】【何】【以】【堪】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【贵】【在】【于】【,】【此】【1】【0】【处】【引】【文】【,】【均】【有】【所】【本】【,】【并】【能】【自】【然】【融】【于】【人】【物】【对】【话】【之】【中】【,】【切】【合】【身】【份】【,】【又】【切】【合】【语】【境】【,】【丝】【毫】【不】【露】【穿】【凿】【痕】【迹】【,】【可】【见】【作】【者】【纯】【熟】【的】【语】【言】【表】【达】【能】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赤】【兔】【马】【素】【以】【千】【里】【称】【,】【故】【伯】【喜】【以】【曹】【操】【诗】【“】【老】【骥】【伏】【枥】【,】【志】【在】【千】【里】【”】【相】【激】【。】【当】【赤】【兔】【马】【以】【死】【相】【告】【时】【,】【言】【出】【肺】【腑】【,】【故】【有】【“】【人】【之】【将】【死】【,】【其】【言】【也】【善】【”】【之】【说】【。】【吕】【布】【为】【无】【信】【之】【徒】【,】【关】【羽】【乃】【诚】【信】【之】【士】【,】【故】【赤】【兔】【对】【前】【者】【嗤】【之】【以】【鼻】【,】【羞】【于】【为】【伍】【,】【引】【“】【人】【无】【信】【不】【立】【”】【怒】【斥】【之】【,】【而】【对】【后】【者】【则】【引】【民】【谚】【“】【鸟】【随】【鸾】【凤】【飞】【腾】【远】【,】【人】【伴】【贤】【良】【品】【质】【高】【”】【以】【自】【勉】【,】【“】【吾】【敢】【不】【以】【死】【相】【报】【乎】【”】【,】【问】【答】【相】【互】【对】【应】【,】【语】【意】【前】【后】【紧】【接】【,】【严】【丝】【密】【缝】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【由】【于】【作】【者】【掌】【握】【如】【此】【丰】【富】【的】【材】【料】【,】【且】【用】【语】【纯】【熟】【,】【这】【才】【能】【运】【笔】【从】【容】【,】【时】【翻】【新】【意】【,】【陡】【增】【情】【趣】【。】【如】【文】【章】【写】【赤】【兔】【马】【感】【于】【关】【羽】【之】【死】【,】【决】【心】【以】【身】【殉】【情】【一】【段】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赤】【兔】【马】【泣】【曰】【:】【“】【吾】【尝】【慕】【不】【食】【周】【粟】【之】【伯】【夷】【、】【叔】【齐】【之】【高】【义】【。】【玉】【可】【碎】【而】【不】【可】【损】【其】【白】【,】【竹】【可】【破】【而】【不】【可】【毁】【其】【节】【。】【士】【为】【知】【己】【而】【死】【,】【人】【因】【诚】【信】【而】【存】【。】【吾】【安】【肯】【食】【吴】【粟】【而】【苟】【活】【于】【世】【间】【?】【”】【言】【罢】【,】【伏】【地】【而】【亡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【段】【话】【有】【三】【处】【引】【言】【,】【先】【引】【“】【伯】【夷】【、】【叔】【齐】【之】【高】【义】【”】【,】【作】【者】【用】【一】【句】【话】【概】【述】【他】【们】【的】【事】【迹】【。】【次】【引】【“】【竹】【”】【“】【玉】【”】【之】【比】【照】【(】【此】【对】【句】【在】【《】【三】【国】【演】【义】【》】【中】【原】【为】【关】【羽】【兵】【败】【麦】【城】【所】【言】【)】【此】【处】【巧】【妙】【移】【用】【,】【表】【意】【正】【同】【。】【三】【引】【“】【士】【为】【知】【己】【者】【死】【”】【,】【句】【式】【略】【加】【变】【化】【,】【加】【上】【“】【人】【因】【诚】【信】【而】【存】【”】【,】【形】【成】【对】【句】【。】【最】【后】【以】【反】【问】【表】【示】【决】【心】【,】【“】【不】【食】【吴】【粟】【”】【,】【决】【不】【“】【苟】【活】【于】【世】【间】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【层】【层】【铺】【垫】【,】【环】【环】【相】【扣】【,】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【字】【字】【金】【石】【,】【赤】【兔】【忠】【义】【形】【象】【跃】【然】【于】【纸】【上】【,】【其】【拳】【拳】【之】【情】【流】【溢】【于】【字】【里】【行】【间】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【象】【丰】【富】【、】【联】【想】【合】【理】【是】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【又】【一】【引】【人】【之】【处】【。】【“】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【”】【在】【《】【三】【国】【演】【义】【》】【中】【虽】【有】【记】【载】【,】【却】【语】【焉】【不】【详】【,】【字】【仅】【数】【行】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【关】【公】【既】【殁】【,】【坐】【下】【赤】【兔】【马】【被】【马】【忠】【所】【获】【,】【献】【与】【孙】【权】【。】【权】【即】【赐】【马】【忠】【坐】【骑】【。】【其】【马】【数】【日】【不】【食】【草】【料】【而】【死】【。】【(】【见】【《】【三】【国】【演】【义】【》】【第】【7】【7】【回】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【凭】【借】【“】【其】【马】【数】【日】【不】【食】【草】【料】【而】【死】【”】【一】【句】【,】【应】【题】【而】【想】【,】【虚】【构】【了】【懂】【“】【马】【语】【”】【的】【人】【物】【“】【伯】【喜】【”】【,】【并】【将】【“】【赤】【兔】【”】【拟】【人】【化】【,】【遂】【有】【“】【三】【问】【三】【答】【”】【的】【故】【事】【情】【节】【。】【寓】【言】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【是】【作】【者】【想】【象】【的】【产】【物】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【象】【是】【创】【造】【的】【动】【力】【。】【没】【有】【想】【象】【,】【何】【谈】【创】【造】【?】【想】【象】【力】【也】【是】【人】【的】【创】【造】【力】【的】【标】【志】【。】【敢】【于】【想】【象】【,】【又】【善】【于】【想】【象】【是】【现】【代】【人】【才】【的】【必】【备】【条】【件】【。】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【所】【展】【示】【的】【丰】【富】【的】【想】【象】【力】【让】【我】【们】【看】【到】【青】【少】【年】【一】【代】【至】【为】【可】【贵】【的】【创】【造】【潜】【质】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【的】【是】【,】【作】【者】【丰】【富】【的】【想】【象】【是】【建】【立】【在】【合】【理】【联】【想】【的】【基】【础】【之】【上】【的】【。】【其】【合】【理】【性】【就】【是】【它】【的】【知】【识】【联】【系】【和】【逻】【辑】【联】【系】【。】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【中】【所】【述】【内】【容】【言】【必】【有】【据】【。】【赤】【兔】【马】【评】【董】【卓】【“】【杀】【少】【帝】【,】【卧】【龙】【床】【,】【实】【为】【汉】【贼】【”】【,】【评】【吕】【布】【“】【为】【荣】【华】【而】【杀】【丁】【原】【,】【为】【美】【色】【而】【刺】【董】【卓】【,】【投】【刘】【备】【而】【夺】【其】【徐】【州】【,】【结】【袁】【术】【而】【斩】【其】【婚】【使】【”】【,】【评】【曹】【操】【“】【其】【手】【下】【虽】【猛】【将】【如】【云】【,】【却】【无】【人】【可】【称】【英】【雄】【”】【,】【评】【关】【羽】【“】【虎】【牢】【关】【前】【见】【其】【勇】【武】【,】【白】【门】【楼】【上】【见】【其】【恩】【义】【”】【无】【不】【都】【能】【在】【《】【三】【国】【演】【义】【》】【中】【找】【到】【依】【据】【,】【作】【者】【能】【撮】【其】【要】【而】【炼】【其】【语】【,】【高】【度】【概】【括】【。】【这】【固】【然】【显】【示】【作】【者】【不】【凡】【的】【语】【言】【功】【力】【,】【而】【更】【能】【表】【现】【的】【是】【他】【的】【扎】【实】【的】【知】【识】【储】【备】【。】【唯】【其】【如】【此】【,】【他】【才】【能】【驰】【骋】【想】【象】【,】【意】【到】【笔】【随】【,】【得】【心】【应】【手】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【从】【逻】【辑】【联】【系】【看】【,】【“】【伯】【喜】【”】【是】【作】【者】【虚】【构】【的】【人】【物】【。】【他】【的】【取】【名】【别】【有】【深】【意】【。】【他】【是】【“】【伯】【乐】【”】【的】【后】【人】【,】【一】【“】【喜】【”】【一】【“】【乐】【”】【,】【“】【伯】【乐】【”】【识】【千】【里】【马】【,】【“】【伯】【喜】【”】【识】【赤】【兔】【马】【。】【且】【“】【伯】【喜】【”】【精】【通】【“】【马】【语】【”】【,】【这】【才】【使】【故】【事】【中】【的】【“】【人】【马】【对】【话】【”】【成】【为】【可】【能】【。】【严】【密】【的】【逻】【辑】【联】【系】【,】【使】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【所】【描】【述】【的】【故】【事】【顺】【理】【成】【章】【。】【诚】【然】【,】【想】【象】【是】【超】【现】【实】【的】【,】【比】【如】【“】【人】【马】【对】【话】【”】【在】【现】【实】【中】【是】【不】【可】【能】【的】【,】【但】【在】【想】【象】【中】【它】【成】【为】【事】【实】【。】【而】【想】【象】【又】【总】【是】【依】【存】【于】【现】【实】【的】【,】【不】【是】【“】【伯】【乐】【”】【之】【后】【,】【“】【伯】【喜】【”】【焉】【能】【识】【得】【“】【赤】【兔】【”】【,】【不】【通】【“】【马】【语】【”】【,】【又】【如】【何】【能】【“】【人】【马】【对】【话】【”】【?】【由】【此】【可】【知】【,】【想】【象】【的】【知】【识】【性】【和】【逻】【辑】【性】【既】【是】【“】【合】【理】【想】【象】【”】【的】【基】【础】【,】【也】【是】【与】【“】【胡】【思】【乱】【想】【”】【的】【区】【别】【所】【在】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【回】【到】【本】【文】【的】【题】【目】【:】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【带】【来】【什】【么】【启】【示】【?】【就】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【而】【言】【,】【无】【论】【是】【广】【征】【博】【引】【、】【涉】【笔】【成】【趣】【,】【还】【是】【想】【象】【丰】【富】【、】【联】【想】【合】【理】【,】【其】【根】【本】【点】【都】【是】【源】【于】【作】【者】【读】【书】【之】【勤】【,】【积】【累】【之】【广】【。】【作】【者】【蒋】【昕】【捷】【说】【,】【古】【人】【说】【“】【读】【书】【破】【万】【卷】【,】【下】【笔】【如】【有】【神】【”】【,】【信】【然】【。】【最】【重】【要】【的】【是】【要】【留】【心】【平】【时】【的】【积】【累】【,】【要】【博】【览】【群】【书】【,】【尤】【其】【是】【中】【外】【名】【著】【。】【光】【靠】【书】【本】【上】【的】【几】【篇】【文】【章】【是】【远】【远】【不】【够】【的】【。】【另】【外】【,】【不】【止】【是】【书】【籍】【,】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【多】【看】【多】【听】【多】【记】【,】【也】【能】【有】【所】【收】【获】【。】【比】【如】【“】【物】【犹】【如】【此】【,】【人】【何】【以】【堪】【”】【的】【句】【子】【就】【是】【作】【者】【考】【前】【一】【天】【听】【央】【视】【一】【位】【主】【持】【人】【评】【论】【某】【部】【电】【影】【所】【用】【之】【语】【。】【他】【记】【住】【了】【,】【并】【于】【第】【二】【天】【写】【作】【文】【时】【恰】【当】【用】【上】【。】【我】【核】【对】【过】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【中】【引】【关】【羽】【的】【话】【:】【“】【吾】【知】【此】【马】【日】【行】【千】【里】【,】【今】【幸】【得】【之】【,】【他】【日】【若】【知】【兄】【长】【下】【落】【,】【可】【一】【日】【而】【得】【见】【矣】【。】【”】【又】【引】【“】【玉】【可】【碎】【而】【不】【可】【损】【其】【白】【,】【竹】【可】【破】【而】【不】【可】【毁】【其】【节】【”】【等】【语】【都】【与】【《】【三】【国】【演】【义】【》】【中】【所】【写】【一】【字】【不】【差】【!】【如】【此】【读】【书】【,】【博】【闻】【强】【记】【,】【值】【得】【嘉】【许】【,】【从】【中】【可】【见】【“】【读】【书】【破】【万】【卷】【”】【中】【“】【破】【”】【字】【的】【内】【涵】【和】【魅】【力】【。】【这】【正】【是】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【给】【我】【们】【的】【最】【重】【要】【的】【启】【示】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毋】【庸】【讳】【言】【,】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【影】【响】【还】【有】【另】【外】【一】【面】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【是】【用】【古】【白】【话】【文】【写】【的】【,】【这】【有】【偶】【然】【性】【,】【有】【作】【者】【个】【人】【喜】【好】【的】【因】【素】【。】【有】【些】【媒】【体】【和】【个】【人】【不】【恰】【当】【地】【夸】【大】【了】【这】【些】【个】【人】【特】【点】【,】【错】【误】【地】【认】【为】【用】【文】【言】【文】【写】【作】【是】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【成】【功】【的】【原】【因】【,】【甚】【至】【以】【为】【这】【是】【作】【文】【“】【夺】【分】【”】【的】【“】【秘】【笈】【”】【。】【影】【响】【所】【及】【,】【一】【时】【文】【言】【文】【写】【作】【之】【风】【盛】【起】【,】【高】【考】【作】【文】【中】【运】【用】【文】【言】【文】【写】【作】【明】【显】【增】【多】【,】【这】【是】【不】【正】【常】【的】【现】【象】【。】【文】【言】【文】【固】【然】【有】【语】【言】【精】【练】【的】【特】【点】【,】【但】【它】【毕】【竟】【是】【古】【代】【语】【言】【,】【其】【语】【境】【、】【语】【汇】【、】【语】【法】【都】【与】【现】【代】【语】【言】【有】【很】【大】【差】【别】【,】【而】【且】【运】【用】【文】【言】【文】【写】【作】【,】【就】【绝】【大】【多】【数】【中】【学】【生】【来】【说】【是】【难】【以】【做】【到】【的】【。】【今】【天】【重】【读】【《】【赤】【兔】【之】【死】【》】【,】【希】【望】【能】【引】【起】【中】【学】【生】【注】【意】【,】【千】【万】【不】【要】【盲】【目】【跟】【“】【风】【”】【,】【以】【仿】【古】【为】【时】【尚】【,】【须】【知】【唯】【有】【认】【真】【读】【书】【,】【认】【真】【实】【践】【,】【这】【才】【是】【学】【习】【之】【正】【道】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】福清核电站【<】【p】【>】【一】【天】【,】【爸】【爸】【带】【我】【去】【药】【店】【买】【药】【,】【买】【完】【药】【回】【家】【的】【途】【中】【,】【一】【样】【东】【西】【瞬】【间】【吸】【引】【了】【我】【的】【眼】【球】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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