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】【1】【1】【⑧】【伴】【随】【着】【春】【天】【的】【脚】【步】【,】【展】【现】【你】【眼】【前】【的】【又】【是】【另】【一】【番】【景】【象】【。】【⑨】【黑】【土】【地】【立】【刻】【换】【上】【了】【一】【身】【绿】【装】【。】【金】【灿】【灿】【的】【油】【菜】【花】【⑩】【装】【满】【了】【你】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【惹】【来】【了】【一】【大】【群】【的】【蜜】【蜂】【、】【蝴】【蝶】【。】【绿】【油】【油】【的】【麦】【子】【也】【俯】【首】【微】【笑】【仿】【佛】【预】【示】【着】【又】【是】【一】【个】【丰】【收】【年】【。】【【】【1】【1】【】】【人】【们】【的】【欢】【歌】【笑】【语】【、】【机】【器】【的】【轰】【鸣】【声】【奏】【起】【了】【最】【动】【听】【的】【“】【闹】【三】【春】【”】【交】【响】【乐】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【你】【知】【道】【吗】【,】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【一】【起】【捕】【鱼】【,】【这】【可】【是】【一】【件】【乐】【事】【。】【串】【场】【河】【以】【及】【大】【大】【小】【小】【的】【鱼】【塘】【是】【【】【1】【2】【】】【取】【之】【不】【尽】【的】【渔】【场】【。】【不】【必】【说】【柳】【下】【垂】【钓】【趣】【,】【烟】【雨】【透】【蓑】【衣】【,】【也】【不】【必】【说】【白】【帆】【映】【碧】【水】【,】【渔】【歌】【唱】【晚】【霞】【,】【单】【是】【冬】【季】【破】【冰】【捕】【鱼】【就】【可】【以】【让】【你】【乐】【而】【忘】【返】【了】【。】【请】【看】【吧】【,】【【】【1】【3】【】】【一】【网】【收】【到】【净】【是】【鱼】【,】【大】【的】【四】【五】【斤】【,】【小】【的】【也】【有】【二】【三】【斤】【,】【有】【时】【还】【能】【网】【到】【几】【只】【冬】【季】【罕】【见】【的】【大】【螃】【蟹】【。】【于】【是】【晚】【上】【便】【有】【鲜】【鱼】【肥】【蟹】【下】【饭】【了】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【【】【1】【4】【】】【朋】【友】【,】【如】【果】【说】【祖】【国】【是】【一】【座】【大】【花】【园】【,】【那】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【就】【是】【一】【朵】【带】【露】【的】【玫】【瑰】【沐】【浴】【着】【党】【的】【雨】【露】【阳】【光】【,】【开】【得】【更】【加】【绚】【丽】【多】【彩】【。】【2】【0】【年】【,】【我】【们】【镇】【纳】【税】【超】【亿】【元】【,】【跻】【身】【于】【苏】【北】【小】【康】【示】【范】【镇】【的】【行】【列】【。】【如】【今】【家】【乡】【人】【又】【在】【奏】【起】【时】【代】【的】【最】【强】【音】【加】【强】【精】【神】【文】【明】【建】【设】【,】【争】【取】【早】【日】【跨】【入】【省】【文】【明】【镇】【的】【先】【进】【行】【列】【。】【祝】【愿】【家】【乡】【骑】【上】【时】【代】【的】【骏】【马】【奔】【驰】【吧】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【朋】【友】【,】【请】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【吧】【!】【这】【里】【物】【阜】【民】【丰】【,】【景】【美】【,】【人】【更】【美】【。】【你】【来】【了】【,】【保】【证】【你】【看】【不】【够】【,】【观】【不】【尽】【,】【梦】【里】【再】【重】【游】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【●】【点】【评】【:】【读】【罢】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【,】【感】【到】【有】【一】【种】【【】【1】【5】【】】【浓】【郁】【的】【乡】【土】【气】【息】【,】【清】【新】【而】【自】【然】【加】【之】【文】【题】【上】【一】【个】【“】【请】【”】【字】【,】【倍】【觉】【作】【者】【对】【家】【乡】【小】【镇】【的】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【。】【作】【者】【【】【1】【6】【】】【观】【察】【细】【致】【,】【反】【映】【家】【乡】【风】【貌】【,】【抓】【住】【了】【特】【色】【。】【既】【撷】【取】【了】【春】【、】【秋】【两】【季】【苏】【北】【水】【乡】【的】【不】【同】【的】【场】【景】【来】【写】【,】【又】【描】【写】【了】【冬】【季】【捕】【鱼】【这】【一】【令】【人】【乐】【而】【忘】【返】【的】【【】【1】【7】【】】【场】【面】【;】【既】【是】【一】【幅】【风】【景】【画】【、】【【】【1】【8】【】】【风】【俗】【画】【,】【又】【处】【处】【突】【出】【了】【家】【乡】【人】【的】【力】【量】【和】【精】【神】【,】【提】【升】【了】【文】【章】【的】【内】【涵】【▲】【另】【外】【,】【语】【言】【也】【形】【象】【生】【动】【,】【富】【有】【诗】【意】【一】【是】【综】【合】【运】【用】【了】【拟】【人】【、】【比】【喻】【等】【多】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【增】【添】【了】【文】【章】【的】【美】【感】【;】【二】【是】【善】【翻】【古】【人】【意】【,】【如】【“】【柳】【下】【垂】【钓】【趣】【,】【烟】【雨】【透】【蓑】【衣】【”】【“】【白】【帆】【映】【碧】【水】【,】【渔】【歌】【唱】【晚】【霞】【”】【读】【来】【更】【具】【【】【1】【9】【】】【艺】【术】【感】【染】【力】【;】【三】【是】【长】【句】【与】【短】【句】【、】【整】【句】【与】【散】【句】【的】【结】【合】【,】【使】【行】【文】【活】【泼】【、】【自】【由】【。】【这】【些】【都】【足】【见】【小】【作】【者】【【】【2】【0】【】】【在】【炼】【字】【炼】【句】【上】【下】【了】【工】【夫】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【①】【“】【坐】【落】【”】【一】【词】【是】【多】【余】【的】【。】【第】【一】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【苏】【北】【古】【镇】【梁】【垛】【是】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【②】【“】【信】【息】【”】【用】【“】【众】【多】【”】【来】【形】【容】【欠】【妥】【。】【“】【商】【品】【”】【既】【有】【带】【来】【的】【,】【也】【有】【运】【出】【的】【。】【画】【线】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【便】【捷】【的】【交】【通】【促】【进】【了】【经】【济】【的】【繁】【荣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【③】【此】【处】【可】【改】【为】【:】【这】【里】【虽】【然】【没】【有】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【、】【美】【丽】【传】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【④】【“】【丰】【姿】【”】【改】【为】【“】【风】【姿】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑤】【画】【线】【句】【对】【全】【段】【有】【引】【领】【的】【作】【用】【,】【但】【“】【热】【闹】【”】【似】【不】【如】【“】【繁】【忙】【”】【来】【得】【贴】【切】【。】【“】【翠】【玉】【镶】【金】【”】【用】【得】【也】【欠】【妥】【,】【因】【为】【棉】【田】【和】【稻】【田】【之】【间】【不】【存】【在】【“】【镶】【”】【和】【被】【“】【镶】【”】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑥】【为】【什】【么】【一】【定】【要】【在】【月】【光】【下】【呢】【?】【完】【全】【可】【以】【没】【有】【这】【个】【时】【间】【限】【制】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑦】【画】【线】【句】【不】【通】【,】【只】【要】【把】【“】【水】【”】【改】【成】【“】【感】【”】【即】【可】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑧】【此】【句】【最】【好】【改】【为】【:】【春】【天】【,】【是】【家】【乡】【最】【美】【丽】【的】【季】【节】【。】【这】【样】【就】【可】【与】【前】【一】【段】【相】【呼】【应】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑨】【苏】【北】【的】【土】【地】【并】【非】【是】【黑】【色】【的】【,】【不】【要】【硬】【搬】【现】【成】【的】【词】【语】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑩】【用】【词】【生】【硬】【,】【—】【—】【你】【的】【眼】【睛】【能】【“】【装】【”】【得】【下】【吗】【?】【画】【线】【句】【删】【去】【反】【而】【和】【下】【文】【接】【得】【更】【紧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【1】【】】【画】【线】【句】【为】【套】【话】【。】【记】【住】【,】【这】【是】【广】【阔】【的】【田】【野】【,】【如】【果】【是】【在】【建】【筑】【工】【地】【或】【工】【厂】【的】【厂】【房】【里】【,】【则】【还】【有】【可】【能】【。】【删】【掉】【也】【不】【影】【响】【文】【中】【的】【表】【达】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【2】【】】【天】【下】【并】【没】【有】【“】【取】【之】【不】【尽】【的】【渔】【场】【”】【,】【赞】【美】【家】【乡】【,】【也】【不】【可】【有】【夸】【大】【之】【词】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【3】【】】【画】【线】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【网】【网】【打】【起】【的】【都】【是】【活】【蹦】【乱】【跳】【的】【肥】【鱼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【4】【】】【这】【一】【段】【的】【首】【句】【是】【套】【话】【,】【改】【为】【:】【家】【乡】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【更】【是】【迅】【速】【。】【这】【样】【和】【下】【文】【联】【系】【就】【紧】【密】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【5】【】】【“】【点】【评】【”】【写】【得】【尚】【可】【,】【但】【仍】【有】【可】【商】【榷】【之】【处】【。】【“】【浓】【郁】【”】【二】【字】【还】【谈】【不】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【6】【】】【从】【文】【中】【看】【不】【出】【作】【者】【有】【细】【致】【的】【观】【察】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【7】【】】【本】【文】【并】【无】【场】【面】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【8】【】】【“】【风】【俗】【画】【”】【无】【从】【谈】【起】【,】【“】【处】【处】【突】【出】【”】【则】【有】【过】【誉】【之】【嫌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【▲】【本】【文】【语】【言】【有】【优】【点】【,】【但】【问】【题】【似】【更】【多】【些】【。】【讲】【优】【点】【,】【也】【需】【恰】【如】【其】【分】【才】【是】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【9】【】】【“】【艺】【术】【感】【染】【力】【”】【这】【样】【的】【词】【语】【一】【般】【不】【能】【用】【来】【评】【价】【学】【生】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【2】【0】【】】【现】【在】【能】【在】【“】【炼】【字】【炼】【句】【上】【下】【工】【夫】【”】【的】【学】【生】【恐】【怕】【是】【少】【而】【又】【少】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】长毛狗图片【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【请】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【》】【一】【文】【,】【选】【择】【的】【题】【材】【不】【错】【,】【作】【者】【对】【自】【己】【的】【家】【乡】【有】【一】【份】【热】【爱】【和】【自】【豪】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【令】【人】【惋】【惜】【的】【是】【文】【章】【还】【存】【在】【着】【一】【些】【毛】【病】【,】【它】【们】【也】【是】【现】【在】【许】【多】【作】【文】【的】【通】【病】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【什】【么】【毛】【病】【呢】【?】【—】【—】【该】【详】【写】【处】【未】【能】【写】【足】【,】【以】【粗】【线】【条】【的】【叙】【述】【代】【替】【了】【细】【致】【的】【必】【要】【的】【描】【写】【。】【文】【中】【写】【道】【“】【不】【必】【说】【柳】【下】【垂】【钓】【趣】【,】【烟】【雨】【透】【蓑】【衣】【,】【也】【不】【必】【说】【白】【帆】【映】【碧】【水】【,】【渔】【歌】【唱】【晚】【霞】【,】【单】【是】【冬】【季】【破】【冰】【捕】【鱼】【就】【可】【以】【让】【你】【乐】【而】【忘】【返】【了】【”】【,】【读】【了】【这】【一】【句】【,】【谁】【都】【想】【看】【看】【“】【冬】【季】【破】【冰】【捕】【鱼】【”】【是】【怎】【么】【回】【事】【,】【可】【是】【,】【正】【欲】【往】【下】【看】【时】【,】【一】【句】【“】【一】【网】【收】【到】【净】【是】【鱼】【,】【大】【的】【四】【五】【斤】【,】【小】【的】【也】【有】【二】【三】【斤】【,】【有】【时】【还】【能】【网】【到】【几】【只】【冬】【季】【罕】【见】【的】【大】【螃】【蟹】【”】【就】【结】【束】【了】【,】【这】【等】【于】【虚】【晃】【了】【一】【枪】【,】【就】【匆】【匆】【收】【兵】【了】【。】【冬】【季】【破】【冰】【捕】【鱼】【和】【平】【时】【捕】【鱼】【相】【比】【,】【该】【有】【另】【外】【一】【种】【景】【象】【,】【用】【的】【什】【么】【工】【具】【和】【方】【法】【,】【有】【什】【么】【趣】【味】【,】【又】【有】【什】【么】【危】【险】【之】【处】【,】【这】【些】【都】【是】【大】【家】【想】【知】【道】【的】【,】【理】【应】【写】【得】【详】【尽】【些】【。】【写】【作】【,】【主】【要】【并】【不】【是】【告】【诉】【人】【们】【已】【知】【的】【东】【西】【,】【而】【是】【要】【把】【别】【人】【想】【了】【解】【而】【又】【不】【甚】【明】【白】【的】【写】【出】【来】【,】【这】【样】【文】【章】【的】【新】【意】【才】【会】【生】【发】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【用】【这】【个】【观】【点】【来】【考】【察】【本】【文】【,】【就】【会】【发】【现】【作】【者】【还】【未】【能】【把】【家】【乡】【梁】【垛】【的】【真】【正】【特】【色】【写】【出】【来】【,】【文】【章】【在】【棉】【花】【、】【水】【稻】【、】【油】【菜】【花】【、】【麦】【子】【等】【农】【作】【物】【上】【花】【费】【了】【大】【量】【笔】【墨】【,】【而】【这】【在】【农】【村】【是】【随】【处】【可】【见】【的】【,】【不】【是】【说】【这】【些】【东】【西】【不】【可】【以】【写】【,】【但】【重】【点】【还】【是】【要】【选】【取】【具】【有】【梁】【垛】【本】【地】【特】【点】【的】【东】【西】【来】【写】【。】【文】【中】【说】【,】【自】【己】【的】【家】【乡】【“】【以】【其】【独】【特】【的】【风】【姿】【给】【人】【美】【的】【享】【受】【”】【,】【这】【句】【话】【讲】【得】【很】【好】【,】【可】【惜】【的】【是】【未】【能】【用】【具】【体】【的】【感】【性】【的】【描】【写】【给】【人】【留】【下】【这】【样】【的】【印】【象】【。】【也】【许】【是】【作】【者】【对】【自】【己】【的】【家】【乡】【还】【缺】【乏】【深】【入】【的】【了】【解】【,】【比】【如】【说】【,】【文】【中】【说】【家】【乡】【是】【黑】【土】【地】【,】【这】【就】【不】【准】【确】【,】【也】【许】【东】【北】【的】【黑】【土】【地】【给】【人】【的】【印】【象】【很】【深】【,】【肥】【沃】【的】【黑】【土】【地】【仿】【佛】【是】【富】【饶】【的】【同】【义】【语】【,】【所】【以】【一】【写】【到】【土】【地】【就】【会】【想】【到】【它】【,】【其】【实】【,】【只】【要】【平】【时】【注】【意】【观】【察】【一】【下】【就】【行】【了】【。】【“】【功】【夫】【在】【诗】【外】【”】【这】【句】【话】【说】【的】【就】【是】【这】【个】【道】【理】【。】【写】【作】【前】【的】【材】【料】【收】【集】【和】【准】【备】【本】【是】【一】【件】【不】【可】【或】【缺】【的】【事】【,】【是】【一】【个】【不】【可】【省】【略】【的】【步】【骤】【,】【可】【是】【现】【在】【往】【往】【被】【忽】【略】【了】【,】【好】【像】【不】【需】【作】【什】【么】【准】【备】【,】【提】【起】【笔】【来】【就】【能】【写】【出】【佳】【作】【,】【这】【就】【使】【得】【许】【多】【作】【文】【的】【内】【容】【流】【于】【空】【洞】【苍】【白】【。】【夏】【衍】【先】【生】【写】【《】【包】【身】【工】【》】【一】【文】【,】【曾】【在】【许】【多】【个】【清】【晨】【冒】【着】【危】【险】【独】【自】【去】【上】【海】【杨】【树】【浦】【一】【带】【的】【日】【本】【纱】【厂】【门】【口】【进】【行】【观】【察】【和】【调】【查】【。】【今】【天】【,】【对】【自】【己】【家】【乡】【多】【一】【点】【了】【解】【,】【应】【该】【不】【是】【什】【么】【难】【事】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【的】【第】【二】【个】【毛】【病】【,】【就】【是】【语】【言】【粗】【看】【不】【错】【,】【但】【经】【不】【起】【推】【敲】【,】【大】【有】【毛】【病】【越】【挑】【越】【多】【之】【势】【。】【这】【说】【明】【要】【过】【语】【言】【关】【,】【还】【真】【是】【件】【不】【容】【易】【的】【事】【,】【文】【章】【写】【好】【后】【,】【要】【反】【复】【修】【改】【才】【是】【,】【尤】【其】【是】【投】【寄】【给】【报】【刊】【的】【文】【章】【,】【更】【应】【认】【真】【对】【待】【,】【不】【可】【马】【虎】【从】【事】【。】【除】【了】【用】【词】【要】【准】【确】【,】【别】【犯】【生】【硬】【、】【夸】【大】【的】【毛】【病】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【,】【要】【尽】【量】【避】【免】【套】【话】【、】【大】【话】【,】【文】【章】【的】【倒】【数】【第】【二】【段】【中】【“】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【就】【是】【一】【朵】【带】【露】【的】【玫】【瑰】【,】【沐】【浴】【着】【党】【的】【雨】【露】【阳】【光】【,】【开】【得】【更】【加】【绚】【丽】【多】【彩】【”】【“】【如】【今】【,】【家】【乡】【人】【又】【在】【奏】【起】【时】【代】【的】【最】【强】【音】【,】【加】【强】【精】【神】【文】【明】【建】【设】【”】【“】【祝】【愿】【家】【乡】【骑】【上】【时】【代】【的】【骏】【马】【奔】【驰】【吧】【”】【这】【些】【语】【句】【就】【是】【比】【较】【典】【型】【的】【例】【子】【。】【这】【些】【标】【语】【口】【号】【式】【的】【语】【句】【,】【其】【正】【确】【性】【毋】【庸】【置】【疑】【,】【但】【写】【入】【文】【章】【却】【是】【不】【相】【宜】【的】【,】【因】【为】【文】【章】【不】【是】【宣】【传】【品】【,】【而】【是】【个】【人】【内】【心】【世】【界】【的】【真】【实】【流】【露】【,】【是】【个】【性】【的】【表】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【克】【服】【了】【这】【两】【个】【毛】【病】【,】【文】【章】【的】【质】【量】【会】【有】【明】【显】【的】【提】【高】【。】【可】【以】【看】【出】【作】【者】【的】【写】【作】【基】【本】【功】【尚】【可】【,】【更】【让】【人】【喜】【欢】【的】【是】【字】【里】【行】【间】【透】【出】【一】【种】【灵】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【,】【我】【是】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【我】【一】【定】【要】【滴】【在】【禾】【苗】【上】【,】【帮】【助】【小】【禾】【茁】【壮】【地】【成】【长】【,】【让】【它】【结】【穗】【成】【果】【,】【带】【给】【人】【们】【收】【获】【的】【喜】【悦】【。】【我】【呀】【,】【就】【一】【同】【沉】【醉】【在】【那】【丰】【收】【的】【喜】【悦】【中】【,】【甜】【甜】【地】【笑】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【,】【我】【是】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【我】【一】【定】【要】【洒】【在】【刚】【破】【土】【而】【出】【的】【小】【草】【上】【,】【给】【它】【一】【次】【充】【满】【爱】【意】【的】【洗】【礼】【,】【也】【让】【我】【同】【大】【地】【母】【亲】【一】【样】【给】【予】【它】【以】【爱】【抚】【。】【看】【着】【它】【在】【大】【地】【上】【与】【它】【的】【无】【数】【弟】【兄】【姐】【妹】【一】【同】【恣】【意】【地】【笑】【啊】【,】【闹】【啊】【,】【我】【也】【乐】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【,】【我】【是】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【我】【一】【定】【要】【落】【在】【粉】【嫩】【的】【荷】【花】【上】【,】【我】【给】【它】【缀】【上】【一】【颗】【珍】【珠】【,】【使】【它】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【变】【得】【更】【夺】【目】【娇】【艳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【,】【我】【是】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【我】【一】【定】【要】【淋】【在】【干】【裂】【的】【泥】【土】【上】【,】【给】【酷】【暑】【中】【的】【大】【地】【带】【来】【舒】【爽】【的】【滋】【润】【,】【我】【本】【是】【大】【地】【母】【亲】【的】【结】【晶】【,】【现】【在】【,】【我】【也】【该】【回】【报】【大】【地】【妈】【妈】【了】【,】【该】【回】【到】【妈】【妈】【的】【怀】【抱】【了】【。】【在】【妈】【妈】【湿】【软】【的】【怀】【中】【,】【听】【着】【妈】【妈】【的】【歌】【,】【我】【将】【安】【心】【地】【再】【次】【远】【行】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【,】【我】【是】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【我】【一】【定】【要】【落】【在】【大】【雁】【的】【头】【上】【,】【给】【它】【们】【一】【个】【痒】【痒】【的】【惊】【喜】【,】【坚】【定】【它】【们】【去】【南】【方】【的】【决】【心】【,】【告】【诉】【它】【们】【,】【明】【年】【的】【春】【天】【,】【我】【会】【在】【这】【里】【等】【着】【它】【们】【回】【来】【。】【看】【着】【时】【而】【似】【“】【一】【”】【,】【时】【而】【似】【“】【人】【”】【的】【队】【伍】【消】【失】【在】【天】【际】【,】【小】【小】【的】【我】【内】【心】【充】【满】【了】【不】【舍】【与】【祝】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【,】【我】【是】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【我】【一】【定】【要】【撒】【在】【一】【片】【枯】【萎】【的】【落】【叶】【上】【,】【给】【它】【由】【衷】【的】【安】【慰】【和】【鼓】【励】【,】【告】【诉】【它】【,】【“】【落】【红】【不】【是】【无】【情】【物】【,】【化】【作】【春】【泥】【更】【护】【花】【”】【。】【落】【叶】【有】【落】【叶】【的】【价】【值】【,】【化】【做】【泥】【土】【,】【为】【那】【陈】【年】【老】【树】【奉】【献】【一】【丝】【养】【分】【,】【就】【是】【价】【值】【的】【体】【现】【。】【看】【着】【落】【叶】【笑】【着】【安】【息】【了】【,】【我】【心】【中】【泛】【出】【淡】【淡】【的】【酸】【楚】【却】【又】【有】【着】【真】【切】【的】【喜】【悦】【,】【明】【年】【花】【儿】【会】【照】【样】【开】【放】【,】【满】【世】【界】【还】【会】【照】【样】【充】【满】【绿】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【,】【我】【是】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【我】【不】【会】【去】【向】【往】【大】【海】【的】【浩】【瀚】【,】【亦】【不】【会】【羡】【慕】【长】【江】【、】【黄】【河】【的】【丰】【功】【伟】【绩】【,】【更】【不】【会】【期】【望】【西】【湖】【、】【洞】【庭】【的】【妩】【媚】【,】【我】【会】【走】【我】【自】【己】【的】【路】【。】【我】【是】【一】【滴】【雨】【,】【我】【有】【着】【我】【平】【凡】【而】【充】【实】【的】【一】【生】【,】【春】【夏】【秋】【冬】【,】【我】【乐】【此】【不】【疲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朋】【友】【,】【假】【如】【有】【一】【天】【,】【一】【滴】【雨】【落】【在】【你】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【可】【千】【万】【别】【把】【它】【轻】【易】【抹】【去】【,】【因】【为】【,】【那】【一】【定】【是】【我】【在】【向】【你】【发】【出】【诚】【挚】【的】【邀】【请】【,】【让】【你】【和】【我】【一】【起】【去】【创】【造】【新】【生】【活】【,】【创】【造】【新】【天】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【黄】【建】【红】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】长毛狗图片【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【少】【中】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【课】【上】【常】【常】【感】【到】【“】【没】【什】【么】【可】【写】【”】【,】【或】【抱】【着】【“】【抓】【到】【一】【个】【算】【一】【个】【”】【,】【“】【拾】【到】【篮】【里】【就】【是】【菜】【”】【的】【态】【度】【,】【这】【是】【不】【可】【取】【的】【。】【没】【有】【米】【,】【当】【然】【无】【以】【成】【粥】【;】【有】【了】【米】【呢】【,】【关】【键】【还】【要】【注】【意】【舂】【洗】【,】【去】【除】【杂】【质】【,】【这】【样】【烧】【成】【的】【粥】【才】【香】【甜】【可】【口】【。】【怎】【样】【把】【自】【己】【所】【汲】【取】【的】【材】【料】【用】【在】【作】【文】【里】【呢】【?】【这】【涉】【及】【文】【章】【的】【选】【材】【问】【题】【。】【选】【材】【就】【是】【细】【筛】【精】【选】【材】【料】【,】【即】【在】【确】【立】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【的】【基】【础】【上】【对】【占】【有】【的】【材】【料】【进】【行】【取】【舍】【的】【构】【思】【过】【程】【。】【如】【果】【选】【材】【得】【当】【,】【可】【以】【增】【强】【文】【章】【的】【表】【现】【力】【,】【让】【同】【学】【和】【老】【师】【刮】【目】【相】【看】【。】【如】【果】【选】【材】【不】【当】【,】【就】【会】【干】【扰】【、】【冲】【淡】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【,】【影】【响】【、】【削】【弱】【文】【章】【的】【说】【服】【力】【、】【感】【染】【力】【。】【从】【这】【个】【意】【义】【上】【说】【,】【选】【材】【的】【确】【是】【一】【门】【高】【超】【的】【写】【作】【艺】【术】【。】【那】【么】【,】【如】【何】【艺】【术】【地】【构】【建】【作】【文】【的】【选】【材】【策】【略】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【切】【题】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【准】【确】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【切】【题】【,】【指】【文】【章】【中】【所】【选】【用】【的】【材】【料】【要】【符】【合】【中】【心】【的】【需】【要】【,】【使】【材】【料】【的】【含】【义】【与】【主】【题】【完】【全】【一】【致】【。】【因】【为】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【是】【蕴】【涵】【渗】【透】【在】【材】【料】【之】【中】【的】【,】【特】【定】【的】【材】【料】【只】【能】【表】【现】【一】【个】【特】【定】【的】【中】【心】【,】【所】【以】【选】【材】【必】【须】【切】【题】【。】【要】【力】【求】【选】【取】【最】【能】【表】【现】【中】【心】【的】【材】【料】【,】【果】【断】【舍】【弃】【与】【中】【心】【无】【关】【的】【材】【料】【。】【万】【不】【可】【把】【跟】【中】【心】【毫】【无】【关】【系】【的】【材】【料】【堆】【砌】【起】【来】【硬】【凑】【成】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【这】【好】【比】【“】【煮】【鸡】【不】【煺】【毛】【”】【,】【鸡】【肉】【本】【是】【珍】【馐】【佳】【肴】【,】【若】【连】【毛】【一】【起】【煮】【,】【谁】【还】【愿】【吃】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【熟】【知】【的】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【的】【小】【说】【《】【孔】【乙】【己】【》】【,】【它】【之】【所】【以】【脍】【炙】【人】【口】【,】【恐】【怕】【跟】【作】【者】【精】【心】【的】【选】【材】【不】【无】【关】【系】【。】【文】【章】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【地】【详】【写】【孔】【乙】【己】【那】【又】【脏】【又】【破】【的】【长】【衫】【、】【为】【掩】【饰】【偷】【书】【的】【辩】【白】【、】【之】【乎】【者】【也】【的】【谈】【吐】【以】【及】【教】【认】【“】【茴】【”】【字】【的】【四】【种】【写】【法】【。】【这】【些】【题】【材】【表】【现】【了】【孔】【乙】【己】【的】【迂】【腐】【、】【麻】【木】【,】【充】【分】【说】【明】【他】【受】【封】【建】【教】【育】【思】【想】【毒】【害】【之】【深】【,】【说】【明】【科】【举】【制】【度】【不】【是】【把】【人】【培】【养】【成】【丁】【举】【人】【那】【样】【的】【损】【人】【者】【,】【就】【是】【把】【人】【糟】【蹋】【成】【孔】【乙】【己】【这】【样】【的】【被】【损】【害】【者】【。】【而】【对】【孔】【乙】【己】【如】【何】【偷】【书】【、】【如】【何】【挨】【打】【的】【过】【程】【,】【虽】【从】【侧】【面】【略】【写】【,】【但】【这】【些】【材】【料】【也】【与】【表】【达】【中】【心】【有】【关】【系】【,】【只】【不】【过】【作】【者】【采】【用】【这】【种】【有】【正】【有】【侧】【,】【有】【详】【有】【略】【的】【描】【写】【,】【使】【故】【事】【情】【节】【有】【起】【有】【伏】【,】【一】【味】【详】【或】【一】【味】【略】【都】【会】【使】【读】【者】【感】【到】【厌】【倦】【。】【总】【之】【,】【材】【料】【要】【服】【从】【“】【意】【”】【的】【安】【排】【,】【要】【以】【“】【意】【”】【统】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【切】【题】【的】【问】【题】【如】【此】【重】【要】【,】【而】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【中】【的】【选】【材】【毛】【病】【却】【又】【常】【常】【出】【在】【这】【里】【。】【究】【其】【原】【因】【有】【二】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【不】【勤】【于】【排】【列】【筛】【选】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【些】【学】【生】【写】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【速】【成】【,】【提】【笔】【便】【写】【,】【写】【完】【后】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【还】【有】【更】【切】【题】【的】【材】【料】【。】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【删】【去】【重】【写】【。】【倘】【在】【平】【时】【,】【倒】【也】【罢】【了】【;】【若】【是】【限】【时】【作】【文】【,】【删】【吧】【不】【允】【许】【,】【不】【删】【吧】【却】【不】【甘】【心】【。】【这】【样】【岂】【不】【搞】【得】【很】【尴】【尬】【?】【如】【果】【在】【动】【笔】【前】【给】【自】【己】【留】【点】【时】【间】【,】【将】【所】【有】【能】【够】【想】【到】【的】【材】【料】【都】【集】【中】【起】【来】【,】【给】【它】【们】【排】【排】【队】【,】【从】【中】【确】【定】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【该】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【不】【该】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【先】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【后】【用】【,】【经】【过】【一】【番】【排】【列】【筛】【选】【,】【就】【不】【会】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【、】【顾】【此】【失】【彼】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【不】【善】【于】【选】【用】【辅】【助】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【学】【生】【时】【常】【感】【叹】【,】【同】【一】【件】【事】【、】【同】【一】【个】【人】【,】【别】【人】【写】【出】【来】【就】【格】【外】【细】【致】【、】【生】【动】【,】【而】【一】【到】【自】【己】【手】【里】【就】【干】【瘪】【得】【很】【。】【原】【因】【在】【于】【选】【材】【时】【只】【限】【于】【一】【些】【直】【接】【的】【、】【正】【面】【的】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【材】【料】【,】【而】【对】【那】【些】【间】【接】【的】【、】【侧】【面】【的】【材】【料】【则】【熟】【视】【无】【睹】【,】【冷】【落】【不】【用】【。】【这】【些】【辅】【助】【材】【料】【表】【面】【看】【上】【去】【似】【与】【写】【作】【意】【图】【没】【有】【多】【大】【关】【系】【,】【可】【是】【经】【过】【作】【者】【精】【巧】【的】【剪】【裁】【加】【工】【,】【却】【可】【以】【出】【人】【意】【料】【地】【对】【主】【题】【起】【到】【烘】【托】【、】【反】【衬】【、】【强】【化】【的】【作】【用】【,】【使】【文】【章】【血】【肉】【丰】【满】【,】【细】【腻】【感】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【真】【实】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【可】【信】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【代】【学】【者】【钱】【谦】【益】【说】【:】【“】【真】【则】【精】【金】【美】【玉】【,】【伪】【则】【瓦】【砾】【粪】【土】【也】【。】【”】【这】【句】【话】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【在】【作】【文】【选】【材】【时】【,】【不】【只】【要】【看】【材】【料】【是】【否】【切】【题】【,】【还】【要】【看】【它】【是】【否】【真】【实】【,】【是】【否】【具】【有】【“】【可】【信】【”】【度】【。】【只】【有】【真】【实】【,】【只】【有】【信】【实】【,】【文】【章】【才】【有】【生】【命】【力】【,】【才】【能】【感】【动】【人】【、】【打】【动】【人】【。】【选】【材】【真】【实】【包】【含】【两】【方】【面】【内】【容】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【?】【郾】【 】【生】【活】【真】【实】【:】【选】【取】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【实】【的】【材】【料】【,】【必】【然】【是】【为】【同】【学】【们】【所】【熟】【知】【的】【材】【料】【。】【法】【国】【艺】【术】【大】【师】【罗】【丹】【说】【过】【:】【“】【最】【美】【的】【题】【材】【摆】【在】【你】【们】【面】【前】【,】【那】【就】【是】【你】【们】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【物】【。】【”】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【,】【写】【起】【来】【才】【能】【得】【心】【应】【手】【。】【假】【如】【没】【有】【登】【过】【东】【岳】【,】【决】【不】【会】【有】【“】【一】【览】【众】【山】【小】【”】【的】【感】【受】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【见】【过】【庐】【山】【,】【一】【定】【不】【会】【产】【生】【“】【飞】【流】【直】【下】【三】【千】【尺】【”】【的】【共】【鸣】【。】【不】【置】【身】【于】【枫】【林】【晚】【景】【,】【哪】【有】【“】【霜】【叶】【红】【于】【二】【月】【花】【”】【之】【赞】【叹】【;】【不】【亲】【历】【水】【乡】【春】【天】【,】【怎】【会】【直】【抒】【“】【能】【不】【忆】【江】【南】【”】【之】【胸】【臆】【。】【中】【学】【生】【们】【初】【学】【写】【作】【,】【应】【该】【选】【取】【自】【己】【最】【为】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【或】【事】【来】【写】【。】【在】【童】【年】【的】【漫】【长】【记】【忆】【中】【,】【一】【定】【有】【我】【们】【终】【生】【难】【忘】【的】【趣】【事】【;】【在】【朝】【夕】【相】【处】【的】【伙】【伴】【中】【,】【一】【定】【有】【我】【们】【情】【投】【意】【合】【的】【挚】【友】【;】【在】【成】【长】【的】【日】【历】【里】【,】【一】【定】【记】【载】【着】【我】【们】【的】【成】【功】【与】【失】【败】【。】【何】【不】【把】【它】【们】【拿】【来】【,】【使】【之】【成】【为】【同】【学】【们】【作】【文】【的】【最】【佳】【题】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朱】【自】【清】【的】【《】【背】【影】【》】【,】【一】【直】【是】【初】【中】【课】【本】【的】【保】【留】【篇】【目】【,】【感】【动】【过】【一】【代】【又】【一】【代】【读】【者】【,】【教】【育】【了】【一】【代】【又】【一】【代】【学】【子】【。】【然】【而】【,】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【语】【言】【极】【其】【质】【朴】【无】【华】【,】【何】【以】【这】【般】【感】【人】【至】【深】【?】【一】【个】【重】【要】【原】【因】【就】【是】【作】【者】【写】【的】【是】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【、】【亲】【身】【感】【受】【,】【人】【真】【事】【真】【,】【情】【真】【意】【真】【。】【每】【个】【人】【都】【有】【自】【己】【的】【家】【庭】【,】【家】【庭】【是】【同】【学】【们】【生】【活】【的】【摇】【篮】【。】【家】【庭】【里】【有】【我】【们】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【有】【我】【们】【最】【受】【感】【动】【的】【材】【料】【。】【这】【儿】【有】【温】【馨】【,】【有】【和】【谐】【,】【有】【天】【下】【最】【博】【大】【深】【沉】【、】【最】【细】【腻】【真】【挚】【的】【亲】【情】【,】【父】【母】【之】【恩】【、】【祖】【孙】【之】【爱】【、】【手】【足】【之】【情】【…】【…】【但】【这】【里】【也】【不】【常】【是】【宁】【静】【的】【港】【湾】【,】【有】【时】【也】【会】【风】【波】【骤】【起】【,】【让】【人】【好】【生】【烦】【恼】【。】【其】【实】【,】【亲】【昵】【也】【罢】【,】【唠】【叨】【也】【罢】【,】【攀】【谈】【也】【罢】【,】【争】【执】【也】【罢】【,】【此】【间】【蕴】【涵】【的】【永】【远】【是】【人】【类】【最】【圣】【洁】【的】【情】【愫】【。】【还】【记】【否】【?】【那】【委】【屈】【后】【的】【一】【句】【慰】【藉】【,】【那】【挫】【折】【后】【的】【一】【次】【抚】【摸】【,】【不】【似】【那】【春】【风】【细】【雨】【滋】【润】【心】【头】【?】【无】【须】【惊】【讶】【,】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【可】【能】【是】【平】【凡】【的】【甚】【至】【是】【平】【淡】【的】【,】【家】【庭】【故】【事】【可】【能】【是】【单】【纯】【的】【甚】【至】【是】【单】【调】【的】【,】【但】【只】【要】【用】【心】【体】【会】【,】【努】【力】【挖】【掘】【出】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【某】【段】【不】【寻】【常】【的】【历】【程】【,】【或】【许】【记】【下】【亲】【人】【间】【的】【一】【个】【细】【小】【动】【作】【、】【一】【个】【细】【微】【情】【节】【、】【一】【个】【眼】【神】【、】【一】【种】【姿】【势】【,】【以】【此】【传】【达】【自】【己】【真】【真】【切】【切】【的】【亲】【情】【感】【受】【和】【对】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【的】【深】【刻】【理】【解】【,】【就】【会】【写】【出】【一】【个】【动】【人】【的】【家】【,】【让】【人】【震】【颤】【,】【让】【人】【共】【鸣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【材】【真】【实】【是】【文】【章】【的】【生】【命】【保】【证】【。】【那】【些】【胡】【编】【乱】【造】【的】【所】【谓】【“】【感】【人】【”】【故】【事】【,】【只】【会】【让】【读】【者】【反】【感】【。】【有】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【表】【明】【自】【己】【的】【“】【崇】【高】【”】【,】【文】【章】【始】【终】【不】【离】【“】【车】【上】【让】【座】【”】【、】【“】【捐】【钱】【救】【灾】【”】【“】【入】【水】【救】【人】【”】【等】【。】【我】【们】【希】【望】【社】【会】【充】【满】【关】【怀】【,】【充】【满】【和】【谐】【,】【可】【是】【我】【们】【不】【希】【望】【学】【生】【的】【文】【章】【里】【始】【终】【充】【满】【假】【话】【、】【充】【满】【谎】【言】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【不】【真】【读】【者】【无】【。】【选】【择】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【,】【固】【然】【要】【抛】【弃】【那】【些】【胡】【乱】【地】【编】【造】【故】【事】【、】【想】【当】【然】【地】【塑】【造】【人】【物】【以】【及】【无】【中】【生】【有】【地】【捏】【造】【感】【情】【的】【做】【法】【。】【然】【而】【,】【如】【果】【一】【味】【地】【直】【录】【生】【活】【,】【不】【作】【任】【何】【剪】【接】【加】【工】【,】【甚】【至】【把】【那】【些】【不】【成】【熟】【的】【感】【受】【、】【不】【健】【康】【的】【情】【调】【也】【带】【进】【文】【章】【中】【来】【,】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【只】【会】【黯】【然】【失】【色】【,】【何】【谈】【动】【人】【?】【这】【也】【正】【是】【下】【文】【要】【谈】【到】【的】【选】【材】【真】【实】【的】【又】【一】【方】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【:】【提】【炼】【典】【型】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【真】【实】【生】【活】【,】【就】【没】【有】【文】【章】【的】【源】【泉】【。】【没】【有】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【,】【文】【章】【就】【失】【去】【了】【感】【人】【的】【魅】【力】【,】【是】【谓】【“】【无】【假】【文】【章】【少】【”】【。】【“】【假】【”】【,】【不】【是】【选】【材】【上】【的】【“】【虚】【假】【”】【,】【而】【是】【艺】【术】【上】【的】【“】【虚】【构】【”】【,】【即】【在】【真】【实】【生】【活】【的】【基】【础】【上】【进】【行】【技】【巧】【性】【的】【加】【工】【,】【如】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【、】【修】【饰】【语】【言】【等】【。】【它】【摒】【弃】【作】【文】【中】【对】【生】【活】【原】【封】【不】【动】【的】【反】【映】【,】【力】【求】【化】【实】【为】【虚】【、】【由】【虚】【而】【实】【、】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【。】【一】【堆】【乱】【石】【荒】【草】【,】【本】【无】【多】【少】【美】【感】【,】【很】【有】【可】【能】【成】【为】【扫】【除】【的】【对】【象】【,】【但】【在】【画】【家】【笔】【下】【,】【却】【是】【一】【幅】【绝】【美】【的】【天】【然】【图】【画】【。】【这】【“】【图】【画】【”】【,】【是】【画】【家】【心】【之】【感】【悟】【,】【是】【一】【种】【艺】【术】【的】【真】【实】【。】【由】【“】【乱】【石】【荒】【草】【”】【到】【“】【图】【画】【”】【,】【有】【一】【个】【提】【炼】【加】【工】【的】【过】【程】【,】【这】【个】【过】【程】【就】【是】【由】【“】【真】【”】【到】【“】【假】【”】【、】【由】【“】【生】【活】【真】【实】【”】【到】【“】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【”】【。】【同】【样】【,】【作】【家】【在】【选】【材】【中】【也】【常】【循】【此】【规】【律】【,】【小】【到】【一】【句】【话】【,】【大】【至】【一】【个】【人】【物】【,】【都】【要】【作】【艺】【术】【处】【理】【,】【进】【行】【必】【要】【的】【“】【包】【装】【”】【。】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【在】【《】【阿】【Q】【正】【传】【》】【中】【,】【把】【现】【实】【生】【活】【里】【许】【多】【人】【相】【类】【似】【的】【性】【格】【浓】【缩】【并】【加】【以】【夸】【张】【,】【集】【中】【于】【阿】【Q】【这】【个】【人】【物】【身】【上】【,】【尽】【管】【阿】【Q】【这】【个】【人】【物】【在】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【是】【没】【有】【的】【,】【但】【他】【的】【性】【格】【却】【能】【在】【许】【多】【人】【身】【上】【找】【出】【来】【。】【这】【个】【放】【大】【的】【、】【包】【装】【了】【的】【阿】【Q】【性】【格】【,】【更】【典】【型】【、】【更】【集】【中】【地】【反】【映】【了】【人】【物】【的】【本】【质】【特】【征】【,】【从】【而】【成】【为】【文】【学】【史】【上】【的】【不】【朽】【形】【象】【。】【这】【里】【要】【告】【诉】【同】【学】【们】【,】【在】【作】【文】【中】【,】【无】【论】【是】【写】【人】【、】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【状】【物】【,】【很】【需】【要】【豁】【达】【一】【点】【、】【变】【通】【一】【点】【、】【灵】【巧】【一】【点】【,】【既】【尊】【重】【生】【活】【又】【不】【拘】【泥】【于】【生】【活】【原】【色】【,】【方】【能】【使】【文】【章】【达】【到】【反】【映】【生】【活】【、】【服】【务】【生】【活】【并】【高】【于】【生】【活】【的】【目】【的】【。】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【才】【更】【富】【有】【积】【极】【感】【人】【的】【魅】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【新】【颖】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【效】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【,】【就】【是】【别】【人】【没】【有】【发】【现】【使】【用】【过】【的】【材】【料】【,】【抑】【或】【别】【人】【写】【过】【却】【还】【能】【从】【中】【写】【出】【新】【意】【的】【材】【料】【。】【材】【料】【新】【颖】【生】【动】【,】【写】【起】【来】【才】【能】【留】【有】【回】【味】【,】【读】【起】【来】【才】【能】【生】【动】【活】【泼】【。】【这】【样】【来】【选】【材】【,】【必】【能】【使】【作】【文】【产】【生】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【之】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【生】【在】【选】【材】【过】【程】【中】【常】【有】【这】【样】【的】【困】【惑】【:】【自】【己】【与】【其】【他】【同】【学】【生】【活】【、】【处】【境】【没】【什】【么】【大】【差】【别】【,】【日】【子】【平】【淡】【得】【近】【乎】【于】【单】【调】【,】【能】【有】【什】【么】【新】【颖】【的】【素】【材】【呢】【?】【写】【同】【窗】【总】【难】【忘】【“】【半】【块】【橡】【皮】【”】【,】【写】【父】【母】【总】【牵】【扯】【到】【“】【一】【把】【雨】【伞】【”】【,】【写】【爱】【心】【总】【离】【不】【开】【“】【希】【望】【工】【程】【”】【。】【诸】【如】【此】【类】【,】【把】【生】【活】【生】【硬】【分】【割】【,】【使】【人】【读】【之】【生】【厌】【。】【特】【别】【是】【写】【老】【师】【,】【一】【些】【同】【学】【的】【习】【作】【在】【选】【材】【上】【常】【犯】【“】【公】【式】【化】【”】【的】【毛】【病】【,】【一】【般】【都】【写】【老】【师】【有】【一】【头】【被】【粉】【笔】【染】【白】【的】【头】【发】【,】【刻】【苦】【钻】【研】【的】【精】【神】【,】【辛】【勤】【备】【课】【、】【上】【课】【,】【认】【真】【批】【改】【作】【业】【,】【个】【别】【辅】【导】【,】【等】【等】【。】【不】【仅】【如】【此】【,】【许】【多】【学】【生】【的】【老】【师】【都】【有】【一】【个】【惊】【人】【的】【特】【点】【:】【爱】【生】【病】【。】【好】【像】【学】【生】【特】【别】【喜】【欢】【老】【师】【生】【病】【,】【如】【果】【老】【师】【不】【生】【病】【便】【没】【有】【题】【材】【可】【写】【了】【。】【这】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【老】【师】【千】【篇】【一】【律】【、】【千】【人】【一】【面】【,】【没】【有】【个】【性】【,】【使】【文】【章】【失】【去】【了】【生】【命】【力】【。】【出】【现】【这】【种】【情】【况】【的】【原】【因】【,】【在】【于】【同】【学】【们】【对】【老】【师】【缺】【乏】【深】【入】【细】【致】【的】【了】【解】【,】【缺】【少】【师】【生】【间】【的】【个】【性】【情】【缘】【,】【由】【于】【“】【眼】【中】【无】【师】【”】【和】【“】【胸】【中】【无】【师】【”】【,】【自】【然】【不】【会】【有】【“】【手】【中】【之】【师】【”】【,】【只】【好】【按】【头】【脑】【中】【固】【有】【的】【“】【老】【师】【模】【式】【”】【凭】【空】【编】【造】【故】【事】【。】【不】【错】【,】【老】【师】【有】【老】【师】【的】【共】【性】【,】【他】【们】【为】【人】【师】【表】【、】【呕】【心】【沥】【血】【、】【对】【学】【生】【关】【怀】【备】【至】【,】【但】【他】【们】【又】【有】【个】【性】【:】【有】【的】【老】【师】【温】【和】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【严】【谨】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【朋】【友】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【是】【长】【者】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【似】【一】【缕】【春】【风】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【一】【丝】【秋】【雨】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【像】【热】【情】【的】【路】【标】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【冷】【峻】【的】【航】【灯】【…】【…】【凡】【此】【种】【种】【,】【都】【是】【写】【作】【的】【极】【好】【素】【材】【,】【很】【可】【惜】【,】【这】【些】【个】【性】【化】【的】【老】【师】【,】【我】【们】【很】【多】【同】【学】【却】【没】【能】【留】【心】【。】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【在】【作】【文】【中】【写】【出】【新】【意】【,】【别】【具】【一】【格】【呢】【?】【用】【自】【己】【的】【慧】【眼】【去】【发】【现】【吧】【。】【其】【实】【生】【活】【中】【的】【美】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【的】【。】【有】【位】【学】【生】【独】【辟】【蹊】【径】【,】【从】【喜】【、】【怒】【、】【哀】【、】【乐】【四】【方】【面】【选】【取】【了】【四】【件】【事】【,】【展】【示】【了】【一】【位】【老】【师】【献】【身】【教】【育】【事】【业】【的】【精】【神】【风】【貌】【。】【这】【位】【老】【师】【为】【学】【生】【的】【主】【动】【改】【错】【而】【高】【兴】【,】【为】【发】【现】【学】【生】【晨】【练】【掉】【队】【而】【生】【气】【,】【为】【自】【己】【未】【能】【为】【老】【父】【送】【终】【而】【伤】【怀】【,】【为】【参】【加】【学】【生】【的】【毕】【业】【典】【礼】【而】【快】【乐】【。】【独】【特】【新】【颖】【的】【四】【件】【事】【,】【生】【动】【地】【描】【绘】【出】【这】【位】【老】【师】【的】【形】【象】【,】【从】【而】【开】【辟】【了】【选】【材】【的】【新】【天】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【并】【不】【仅】【指】【那】【些】【新】【奇】【、】【新】【潮】【的】【事】【。】【选】【材】【新】【颖】【,】【不】【是】【要】【学】【生】【脱】【离】【生】【活】【,】【恰】【恰】【是】【要】【他】【们】【对】【生】【活】【予】【以】【观】【照】【,】【用】【心】【体】【会】【生】【活】【。】【大】【凡】【从】【生】【活】【环】【境】【中】【选】【取】【的】【具】【有】【个】【性】【特】【点】【的】【材】【料】【都】【是】【新】【颖】【的】【,】【这】【些】【材】【料】【必】【须】【是】【从】【学】【生】【的】【心】【灵】【里】【歌】【唱】【出】【来】【的】【。】【我】【们】【的】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【、】【学】【校】【生】【活】【、】【社】【会】【生】【活】【是】【那】【么】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【只】【要】【学】【生】【能】【留】【心】【体】【验】【,】【笔】【触】【何】【愁】【不】【开】【阔】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【期】【待】【着】【中】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【中】【能】【自】【觉】【地】【遵】【循】【选】【材】【的】【可】【信】【度】【、】【准】【确】【度】【和】【有】【效】【度】【,】【能】【艺】【术】【地】【构】【建】【好】【自】【己】【的】【选】【材】【策】【略】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【清】【晨】【拉】【开】【窗】【帘】【,】【房】【间】【立】【时】【被】【阳】【光】【照】【亮】【。】【窗】【前】【正】【怒】【放】【的】【玫】【瑰】【,】【散】【发】【出】【淡】【淡】【的】【芳】【香】【,】【夜】【里】【,】【它】【花】【瓣】【闭】【拢】【;】【清】【晨】【它】【就】【再】【度】【开】【放】【,】【它】【的】【生】【命】【好】【顽】【强】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【情】【景】【令】【我】【十】【分】【感】【动】【。】【其】【实】【还】【有】【比】【这】【更】【令】【人】【感】【动】【的】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【你】【是】【否】【听】【过】【这】【样】【一】【个】【凄】【美】【的】【故】【事】【:】【日】【本】【某】【户】【人】【家】【装】【修】【,】【拆】【木】【板】【墙】【时】【,】【发】【现】【一】【只】【壁】【虎】【被】【一】【根】【从】【外】【面】【钉】【进】【来】【的】【钉】【子】【钉】【住】【了】【尾】【巴】【。】【这】【居】【然】【是】【主】【人】【很】【长】【时】【间】【以】【前】【盖】【房】【子】【时】【钉】【上】【去】【的】【。】【见】【此】【状】【,】【主】【人】【暂】【时】【停】【止】【了】【装】【修】【,】【他】【要】【一】【探】【究】【竟】【。】【没】【多】【久】【,】【钻】【过】【来】【另】【一】【只】【壁】【虎】【,】【嘴】【里】【含】【着】【食】【物】【过】【来】【喂】【它】【…】【…】【主】【人】【一】【时】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【这】【是】【怎】【样】【的】【生】【命】【,】【怎】【样】【的】【爱】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【5】【月】【1】【5】【日】【,】【在】【汶】【川】【灾】【区】【垮】【塌】【的】【房】【子】【下】【,】【一】【位】【死】【去】【的】【母】【亲】【双】【膝】【跪】【地】【,】【支】【撑】【身】【体】【护】【住】【了】【三】【个】【月】【大】【的】【婴】【儿】【,】【而】【她】【的】【孩】【子】【却】【毫】【发】【未】【损】【。】【救】【援】【者】【在】【孩】【子】【的】【被】【子】【里】【,】【发】【现】【了】【一】【部】【手】【机】【,】【只】【见】【屏】【幕】【短】【信】【上】【显】【示】【着】【1】【8】【个】【字】【:】【“】【亲】【爱】【的】【宝】【贝】【,】【如】【果】【你】【还】【活】【着】【,】【一】【定】【记】【住】【,】【我】【爱】【你】【。】【”】【“】【我】【爱】【你】【”】【,】【多】【么】【美】【丽】【的】【语】【言】【,】【面】【对】【着】【这】【无】【私】【的】【爱】【,】【我】【们】【怎】【能】【不】【奉】【献】【出】【自】【己】【的】【一】【切】【,】【甚】【至】【是】【生】【命】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【界】【上】【有】【一】【种】【死】【,】【永】【远】【也】【不】【代】【表】【毁】【灭】【,】【那】【就】【是】【自】【落】【的】【花】【,】【归】【根】【的】【叶】【。】【生】【命】【虽】【然】【消】【逝】【了】【,】【但】【留】【给】【人】【间】【的】【一】【种】【精】【神】【,】【一】【种】【气】【质】【,】【一】【种】【洒】【脱】【却】【是】【永】【恒】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【间】【万】【物】【唯】【有】【生】【命】【最】【为】【珍】【贵】【,】【但】【又】【是】【转】【瞬】【即】【逝】【的】【,】【它】【短】【暂】【得】【如】【同】【天】【穹】【中】【一】【颗】【稍】【纵】【即】【逝】【的】【流】【星】【,】【那】【么】【我】【们】【不】【是】【应】【该】【让】【生】【命】【绽】【放】【更】【多】【的】【光】【彩】【吗】【?】【陆】【放】【翁】【的】【“】【零】【落】【成】【泥】【碾】【作】【尘】【,】【只】【有】【香】【如】【故】【”】【,】【文】【天】【祥】【的】【“】【人】【生】【自】【古】【谁】【无】【死】【,】【留】【取】【丹】【心】【照】【汗】【青】【”】【,】【岳】【飞】【的】【“】【怒】【发】【冲】【冠】【”】【,】【司】【马】【迁】【的】【忍】【辱】【负】【重】【著】【史】【记】【…】【…】【都】【在】【向】【我】【们】【诉】【说】【着】【生】【命】【的】【真】【谛】【。】【那】【么】【,】【是】【什】【么】【力】【量】【让】【他】【们】【变】【得】【不】【平】【凡】【呢】【?】【是】【活】【着】【的】【信】【念】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【一】【棵】【大】【树】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【棵】【小】【草】【,】【铺】【就】【路】【边】【的】【林】【荫】【;】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【一】【条】【小】【河】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【滴】【水】【,】【去】【滋】【润】【一】【寸】【土】【地】【;】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【无】【垠】【的】【大】【海】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【朵】【浪】【花】【,】【点】【缀】【大】【海】【的】【波】【澜】【。】【我】【们】【的】【生】【命】【虽】【平】【凡】【,】【但】【要】【让】【它】【活】【得】【有】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【以】【“】【信】【念】【、】【生】【命】【”】【为】【话】【题】【的】【习】【作】【,】【小】【作】【者】【诠】【释】【自】【己】【对】【生】【命】【的】【理】【解】【,】【感】【悟】【深】【刻】【、】【独】【到】【,】【蕴】【涵】【哲】【理】【。】【在】【结】【构】【上】【,】【作】【者】【先】【写】【植】【物】【、】【动】【物】【,】【而】【后】【再】【写】【对】【”】【人】【”】【生】【命】【的】【层】【层】【深】【入】【的】【理】【性】【认】【识】【。】【文】【中】【选】【取】【事】【件】【真】【实】【、】【典】【型】【、】【有】【说】【服】【力】【,】【震】【撼】【人】【心】【,】【引】【发】【读】【者】【去】【思】【考】【。】【比】【喻】【、】【排】【比】【、】【引】【用】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【运】【用】【较】【成】【功】【,】【为】【文】【章】【增】【添】【文】【采】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【秀】【琴】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】长毛狗图片【<】【p】【>】【还】【有】【,】【我】【现】【在】【正】【好】【是】【长】【身】【体】【的】【时】【候】【,】【当】【然】【要】【睡】【得】【好】【一】【点】【,】【这】【是】【正】【常】【的】【,】【你】【们】【不】【会】【理】【解】【一】【下】【吗】【?】【以】【上】【种】【种】【原】【因】【,】【我】【睡】【懒】【觉】【不】【是】【挺】【正】【常】【的】【吗】【?】【以】【前】【你】【们】【还】【叫】【我】【多】【睡】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【现】【在】【怎】【么】【又】【反】【过】【来】【了】【,】【真】【是】【的】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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