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2019年11月14日 19:02

【<】【p】【>】【千】【年】【不】【变】【的】【月】【光】【洒】【落】【在】【你】【清】【瘦】【的】【身】【上】【,】【我】【看】【见】【了】【你】【的】【傲】【骨】【。】【傲】【若】【寒】【梅】【的】【你】【,】【是】【我】【心】【中】【最】【美】【的】【风】【景】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【是】【的】【,】【不】【论】【什】【么】【时】【候】【,】【你】【在】【我】【心】【中】【始】【终】【都】【是】【那】【样】【的】【美】【丽】【,】【一】【种】【朴】【实】【的】【美】【丽】【,】【一】【种】【让】【人】【深】【感】【幸】【福】【的】【美】【丽】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】任天堂大乱斗wiiu【<】【p】【>】【我】【还】【记】【得】【初】【一】【时】【您】【的】【嗓】【子】【太】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【劳】【累】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【,】【而】【修】【了】【一】【星】【期】【的】【假】【,】【我】【们】【很】【多】【同】【学】【都】【在】【盼】【望】【您】【快】【回】【来】【,】【再】【来】【教】【我】【们】【。】【同】【时】【,】【我】【们】【也】【意】【识】【到】【自】【己】【的】【错】【误】【,】【但】【依】【旧】【还】【是】【改】【不】【过】【来】【,】【又】【一】【次】【,】【当】【您】【再】【用】【那】【已】【经】【做】【过】【手】【术】【的】【嗓】【子】【为】【我】【们】【讲】【课】【是】【,】【我】【们】【的】【心】【里】【尽】【是】【心】【酸】【,】【但】【您】【的】【声】【音】【依】【旧】【甜】【美】【,】【生】【气】【时】【依】【然】【沉】【重】【,】【好】【像】【从】【来】【没】【改】【变】【过】【什】【么】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【回】【放】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【”】【为】【题】【目】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【①】【自】【选】【文】【体】【(】【诗】【歌】【除】【外】【)】【;】【②】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【;】【③】【文】【中】【不】【能】【出】【现】【考】【生】【的】【姓】【名】【和】【所】【在】【学】【校】【的】【名】【称】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【解】【读】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【写】【命】【题】【作】【文】【最】【重】【要】【的】【一】【点】【就】【是】【仔】【细】【审】【题】【,】【明】【确】【题】【目】【的】【意】【旨】【,】【这】【样】【才】【能】【写】【出】【符】【合】【要】【求】【的】【作】【文】【来】【。】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【的】【题】【目】【“】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【”】【,】【其】【实】【是】【一】【个】【动】【宾】【短】【语】【,】【动】【词】【“】【奖】【励】【”】【揭】【示】【了】【本】【文】【写】【作】【的】【重】【点】【应】【放】【在】【“】【奖】【励】【”】【这】【一】【动】【作】【上】【,】【为】【什】【么】【要】【“】【奖】【励】【”】【?】【怎】【样】【“】【奖】【励】【”】【?】【写】【作】【时】【如】【能】【扣】【住】【这】【个】【词】【,】【一】【般】【都】【写】【不】【跑】【题】【。】【题】【目】【中】【的】【“】【自】【己】【”】【是】【“】【奖】【励】【”】【的】【对】【象】【,】【写】【作】【时】【要】【注】【意】【。】【另】【外】【还】【要】【注】【意】【,】【“】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【”】【这】【个】【题】【目】【其】【实】【还】【隐】【藏】【了】【一】【个】【主】【语】【“】【自】【己】【”】【,】【我】【们】【应】【理】【解】【为】【“】【自】【己】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【”】【,】【如】【写】【成】【其】【他】【人】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【,】【就】【会】【偏】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【审】【题】【之】【后】【,】【要】【想】【写】【好】【这】【个】【作】【文】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【选】【材】【。】【作】【文】【在】【立】【意】【、】【选】【材】【、】【结】【构】【、】【语】【言】【等】【几】【大】【部】【件】【中】【,】【选】【材】【是】【作】【文】【中】【最】【显】【眼】【、】【最】【实】【在】【的】【部】【件】【之】【一】【,】【有】【人】【把】【材】【料】【喻】【为】【文】【章】【的】【躯】【体】【,】【没】【有】【好】【的】【材】【料】【,】【就】【好】【比】【躯】【体】【不】【健】【康】【、】【不】【美】【观】【、】【不】【匀】【称】【一】【样】【。】【再】【看】【看】【评】【卷】【标】【准】【,】【不】【论】【是】【中】【考】【还】【是】【平】【时】【考】【试】【,】【评】【分】【栏】【目】【中】【都】【明】【确】【写】【着】【对】【选】【材】【的】【要】【求】【,】【材】【料】【的】【重】【要】【性】【不】【言】【而】【喻】【。】【写】【作】【本】【题】【时】【,】【对】【于】【为】【什】【么】【奖】【励】【、】【怎】【样】【奖】【励】【的】【问】【题】【,】【估】【计】【很】【多】【初】【三】【学】【生】【会】【马】【上】【想】【到】【成】【绩】【进】【步】【等】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【题】【材】【,】【可】【能】【出】【现】【选】【材】【集】【中】【现】【象】【。】【这】【样】【选】【材】【扎】【堆】【,】【不】【仅】【会】【出】【现】【严】【重】【撞】【车】【的】【现】【象】【,】【也】【会】【造】【成】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【审】【美】【疲】【劳】【,】【使】【自】【己】【的】【作】【文】【在】【众】【多】【的】【作】【文】【中】【显】【得】【很】【平】【庸】【,】【这】【样】【要】【想】【得】【高】【分】【就】【不】【那】【么】【容】【易】【了】【。】【因】【此】【这】【个】【题】【目】【要】【写】【得】【出】【彩】【,】【选】【材】【最】【好】【与】【众】【不】【同】【。】【但】【也】【要】【小】【心】【选】【题】【太】【偏】【导】【致】【偏】【题】【,】【如】【要】【将】【奖】【励】【和】【鼓】【励】【、】【激】【励】【等】【近】【义】【词】【区】【分】【开】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【写】【好】【这】【个】【作】【文】【,】【除】【了】【注】【意】【上】【面】【所】【说】【的】【审】【题】【、】【选】【材】【外】【,】【我】【们】【在】【文】【章】【立】【意】【方】【面】【的】【处】【理】【也】【要】【用】【心】【:】【只】【是】【停】【留】【在】【物】【质】【层】【面】【,】【说】【奖】【励】【给】【自】【己】【一】【台】【游】【戏】【机】【、】【一】【双】【鞋】【等】【,】【就】【比】【较】【一】【般】【;】【如】【果】【我】【们】【能】【多】【在】【精】【神】【层】【面】【开】【掘】【、】【巧】【下】【心】【思】【,】【或】【许】【能】【有】【突】【破】【,】【能】【写】【得】【丰】【富】【、】【深】【刻】【些】【。】【写】【作】【时】【最】【好】【从】【自】【己】【的】【生】【活】【体】【验】【出】【发】【,】【写】【出】【不】【同】【于】【传】【统】【的】【、】【别】【出】【心】【裁】【的】【奖】【励】【方】【式】【,】【这】【将】【使】【你】【的】【作】【文】【与】【众】【不】【同】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【位】【成】【功】【人】【士】【曾】【经】【说】【过】【:】【“】【只】【要】【选】【择】【了】【正】【确】【的】【方】【向】【,】【奋】【斗】【十】【年】【,】【你】【就】【是】【天】【才】【。】【那】【时】【,】【我】【们】【需】【要】【奖】【励】【一】【个】【人】【,】【一】【个】【你】【从】【未】【感】【谢】【过】【的】【人】【—】【—】【自】【己】【。】【因】【为】【有】【了】【自】【己】【正】【确】【而】【果】【断】【的】【选】【择】【,】【才】【成】【就】【了】【一】【番】【事】【业】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【人】【要】【想】【干】【好】【一】【件】【事】【情】【,】【成】【就】【一】【番】【事】【业】【,】【就】【必】【须】【心】【无】【旁】【骛】【,】【全】【神】【贯】【注】【地】【追】【求】【既】【定】【的】【目】【标】【。】【古】【希】【腊】【著】【名】【演】【说】【家】【戴】【摩】【西】【尼】【年】【轻】【的】【时】【候】【,】【为】【了】【提】【高】【自】【己】【的】【演】【说】【能】【力】【,】【躲】【在】【一】【个】【地】【下】【室】【练】【习】【口】【才】【。】【由】【于】【耐】【不】【住】【寂】【寞】【,】【他】【时】【不】【时】【就】【想】【出】【去】【溜】【达】【,】【心】【总】【也】【静】【不】【下】【来】【,】【练】【习】【的】【效】【果】【很】【差】【。】【无】【奈】【之】【下】【,】【他】【横】【下】【心】【,】【挥】【动】【剪】【刀】【把】【自】【己】【的】【头】【发】【剪】【成】【了】【“】【阴】【阳】【头】【”】【,】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【因】【为】【头】【发】【羞】【于】【见】【人】【,】【他】【只】【得】【打】【消】【了】【去】【玩】【的】【念】【头】【,】【一】【心】【一】【意】【地】【练】【习】【口】【才】【,】【演】【讲】【水】【平】【突】【飞】【猛】【进】【。】【正】【是】【凭】【着】【这】【种】【专】【心】【执】【著】【的】【精】【神】【,】【戴】【摩】【西】【尼】【最】【终】【成】【为】【世】【界】【闻】【名】【的】【大】【演】【说】【家】【。】【当】【戴】【摩】【西】【尼】【为】【自】【己】【的】【成】【功】【而】【庆】【幸】【时】【,】【一】【个】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【的】【念】【头】【在】【心】【中】【萌】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【漫】【漫】【人】【生】【路】【上】【,】【当】【我】【们】【难】【于】【驾】【驭】【自】【己】【的】【惰】【性】【和】【欲】【望】【,】【不】【能】【专】【心】【致】【志】【地】【前】【行】【时】【,】【不】【妨】【斩】【断】【自】【己】【的】【退】【路】【,】【逼】【着】【自】【己】【全】【力】【以】【赴】【地】【向】【前】【跑】【,】【往】【往】【只】【有】【这】【样】【,】【才】【能】【走】【向】【成】【功】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【法】【国】【作】【家】【雨】【果】【在】【1】【8】【3】【0】【年】【同】【出】【版】【商】【签】【订】【合】【同】【,】【半】【年】【内】【交】【出】【一】【部】【作】【品】【。】【雨】【果】【为】【了】【集】【中】【精】【力】【写】【作】【,】【除】【了】【身】【上】【穿】【的】【毛】【衣】【外】【其】【余】【衣】【物】【全】【封】【锁】【在】【柜】【里】【,】【把】【柜】【子】【的】【钥】【匙】【丢】【在】【湖】【里】【。】【由】【于】【拿】【不】【到】【衣】【服】【,】【他】【彻】【底】【断】【了】【外】【出】【游】【玩】【的】【念】【头】【,】【一】【头】【扎】【进】【小】【说】【写】【作】【里】【。】【最】【终】【,】【雨】【果】【仅】【用】【了】【五】【个】【月】【的】【时】【间】【就】【完】【成】【了】【这】【部】【作】【品】【,】【它】【就】【是】【闻】【名】【于】【世】【的】【文】【学】【名】【著】【《】【巴】【黎】【圣】【母】【院】【》】【。】【大】【功】【告】【成】【后】【,】【他】【由】【衷】【地】【舒】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【要】【不】【是】【当】【初】【果】【断】【地】【丢】【掉】【了】【钥】【匙】【,】【雨】【果】【不】【可】【能】【有】【那】【样】【巨】【大】【的】【成】【就】【,】【因】【此】【他】【首】【先】【得】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【的】【英】【明】【与】【果】【断】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【啊】【,】【许】【多】【有】【成】【就】【的】【人】【都】【有】【这】【种】【敢】【于】【挑】【战】【、】【敢】【于】【抓】【住】【机】【遇】【的】【特】【性】【,】【他】【们】【坚】【定】【不】【移】【的】【意】【志】【,】【毫】【不】【退】【缩】【的】【精】【神】【激】【励】【着】【我】【们】【,】【当】【我】【们】【在】【付】【出】【后】【得】【到】【回】【报】【时】【,】【也】【真】【应】【自】【己】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【一】【番】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【们】【等】【待】【花】【开】【时】【,】【等】【得】【很】【焦】【急】【,】【但】【是】【花】【有】【开】【花】【的】【时】【间】【,】【然】【后】【才】【能】【孕】【育】【出】【果】【实】【。】【人】【生】【也】【是】【如】【此】【,】【在】【付】【出】【一】【定】【的】【代】【价】【后】【,】【才】【能】【享】【受】【到】【成】【功】【的】【喜】【悦】【。】【在】【此】【,】【让】【我】【们】【共】【同】【呼】【吁】【:】【给】【每】【一】【朵】【花】【孕】【育】【果】【实】【的】【时】【间】【,】【给】【每】【一】【条】【小】【溪】【奔】【涌】【的】【时】【间】【,】【给】【每】【一】【条】【小】【路】【延】【伸】【的】【时】【间】【,】【给】【每】【一】【个】【梦】【想】【放】【飞】【的】【时】【间】【,】【给】【每】【一】【个】【人】【取】【得】【成】【功】【的】【时】【间】【,】【也】【给】【自】【己】【一】【个】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【的】【理】【由】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【说】【理】【深】【刻】【透】【彻】【,】【语】【言】【文】【采】【飞】【扬】【。】【在】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【,】【其】【实】【我】【们】【也】【应】【学】【会】【自】【己】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【,】【这】【样】【才】【能】【促】【进】【自】【己】【更】【好】【的】【发】【展】【与】【进】【步】【。】【可】【大】【多】【数】【人】【却】【不】【知】【道】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【。】【此】【文】【采】【用】【摆】【事】【实】【讲】【道】【理】【的】【方】【法】【,】【阐】【明】【了】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【的】【重】【要】【性】【。】【让】【我】【们】【看】【到】【了】【要】【想】【成】【就】【一】【番】【事】【业】【,】【外】【界】【条】【件】【是】【必】【要】【的】【,】【但】【主】【要】【还】【得】【靠】【自】【己】【的】【努】【力】【。】【倘】【若】【自】【己】【能】【克】【制】【住】【自】【己】【,】【使】【我】【们】【事】【业】【有】【成】【,】【应】【该】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【全】【文】【语】【言】【极】【富】【文】【采】【,】【读】【来】【给】【人】【以】【诗】【意】【的】【享】【受】【。】【文】【章】【综】【合】【运】【用】【了】【多】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【使】【得】【文】【意】【张】【扬】【,】【文】【采】【飞】【扬】【。】【如】【“】【给】【每】【一】【朵】【花】【孕】【育】【果】【实】【的】【时】【间】【,】【给】【每】【一】【条】【小】【溪】【奔】【涌】【的】【时】【间】【,】【给】【每】【一】【条】【小】【路】【延】【伸】【的】【时】【间】【,】【给】【每】【一】【个】【梦】【想】【放】【飞】【的】【时】【间】【,】【给】【每】【一】【个】【人】【取】【得】【成】【功】【的】【时】【间】【,】【也】【给】【自】【己】【一】【个】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【的】【理】【由】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【说】【理】【清】【楚】【,】【用】【例】【恰】【当】【,】【显】【示】【了】【宽】【广】【的】【知】【识】【面】【和】【严】【密】【的】【逻】【辑】【推】【理】【能】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奖】【励】【自】【己】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【丁】【零】【零】【,】【丁】【零】【零】【”】【。】【好】【不】【容】【易】【放】【学】【了】【,】【我】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【从】【书】【包】【里】【拿】【出】【随】【身】【听】【,】【听】【着】【最】【新】【消】【息】【、】【流】【行】【歌】【曲】【,】【真】【是】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【朵】【白】【云】【在】【天】【空】【中】【悠】【闲】【地】【飘】【着】【,】【清】【风】【温】【柔】【地】【抚】【摸】【着】【垂】【柳】【,】【田】【野】【里】【的】【麦】【苗】【也】【来】【凑】【热】【闹】【,】【东】【 】【西】【摆】【的】【甚】【是】【有】【趣】【。】【走】【在】【道】【路】【上】【,】【心】【情】【好】【极】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刚】【要】【走】【到】【学】【校】【北】【面】【那】【个】【要】【上】【坡】【的】【大】【桥】【时】【,】【一】【个】【拉】【车】【的】【老】【伯】【伯】【映】【入】【我】【的】【眼】【帘】【,】【只】【见】【他】【步】【履】【艰】【难】【,】【佝】【偻】【着】【腰】【,】【拉】【着】【车】【子】【一】【步】【一】【步】【向】【上】【走】【。】【这】【时】【,】【我】【赶】【忙】【拿】【下】【耳】【机】【跑】【去】【给】【他】【加】【了】【一】【把】【劲】【,】【等】【他】【上】【去】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【飞】【快】【地】【跑】【开】【了】【。】【当】【听】【到】【身】【后】【的】【赞】【扬】【声】【,】【我】【对】【自】【己】【的】【行】【为】【满】【意】【极】【了】【。】【随】【即】【我】【又】【想】【起】【了】【那】【一】【天】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【去】【年】【夏】【天】【的】【一】【个】【中】【午】【。】【早】【晨】【天】【气】【还】【晴】【好】【,】【谁】【知】【放】【学】【时】【,】【老】【天】【突】【然】【来】【个】【变】【脸】【,】【天】【气】【变】【得】【闷】【热】【起】【来】【,】【不】【一】【会】【儿】【豆】【大】【的】【雨】【点】【打】【在】【了】【脸】【上】【。】【出】【了】【校】【门】【,】【大】【家】【都】【飞】【快】【地】【向】【家】【奔】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【是】【到】【那】【个】【大】【桥】【时】【,】【我】【见】【到】【了】【一】【位】【满】【身】【污】【泥】【的】【大】【婶】【,】【正】【在】【蹬】【一】【辆】【装】【满】【货】【物】【的】【三】【轮】【车】【。】【她】【满】【脸】【是】【水】【,】【头】【发】【零】【乱】【,】【我】【本】【想】【像】【其】【他】【人】【一】【样】【,】【从】【旁】【边】【绕】【过】【去】【,】【可】【是】【对】【此】【情】【形】【于】【心】【不】【忍】【。】【正】【在】【我】【犹】【豫】【时】【,】【只】【见】【她】【的】【车】【轮】【打】【滑】【,】【不】【但】【蹬】【不】【上】【去】【,】【反】【而】【向】【后】【滑】【去】【。】【我】【没】【有】【顾】【上】【想】【什】【么】【,】【立】【即】【上】【前】【,】【伸】【出】【了】【自】【己】【的】【双】【手】【,】【推】【住】【了】【车】【子】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【将】【车】【子】【向】【前】【推】【。】【而】【这】【时】【大】【婶】【也】【用】【力】【蹬】【,】【终】【于】【,】【车】【子】【上】【去】【了】【。】【可】【是】【,】【因】【为】【脚】【下】【路】【滑】【,】【我】【摔】【倒】【在】【了】【一】【个】【水】【坑】【里】【。】【看】【着】【满】【身】【烂】【泥】【的】【自】【己】【,】【眼】【泪】【从】【脸】【上】【滴】【落】【下】【来】【,】【心】【想】【:】【这】【一】【定】【会】【被】【许】【多】【人】【嘲】【笑】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【环】【视】【四】【周】【,】【看】【见】【许】【多】【人】【都】【停】【下】【了】【脚】【步】【,】【从】【他】【们】【脸】【上】【流】【露】【的】【不】【是】【丑】【陋】【的】【嘲】【笑】【,】【而】【是】【善】【意】【的】【微】【笑】【。】【大】【婶】【也】【过】【来】【了】【,】【把】【我】【扶】【起】【来】【,】【充】【满】【疼】【惜】【地】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【谢】【谢】【你】【。】【你】【看】【把】【你】【弄】【得】【满】【身】【泥】【,】【你】【到】【我】【家】【去】【吧】【,】【我】【给】【你】【洗】【。】【”】【听】【着】【亲】【切】【的】【话】【语】【,】【我】【紧】【张】【极】【了】【,】【平】【时】【就】【不】【爱】【说】【话】【的】【我】【,】【不】【知】【该】【如】【何】【回】【答】【才】【好】【。】【“】【不】【—】【—】【不】【用】【了】【,】【大】【婶】【,】【我】【该】【回】【家】【了】【。】【”】【说】【完】【这】【些】【,】【我】【紧】【张】【而】【又】【飞】【快】【地】【跑】【开】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【雨】【下】【得】【更】【大】【了】【,】【风】【也】【起】【了】【,】【我】【觉】【得】【冷】【飕】【飕】【的】【,】【可】【是】【,】【我】【的】【心】【却】【是】【暖】【的】【,】【快】【乐】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【家】【,】【妈】【妈】【得】【知】【我】【满】【身】【烂】【泥】【的】【原】【因】【后】【,】【似】【称】【赞】【,】【又】【似】【教】【诲】【地】【说】【:】【“】【帮】【助】【他】【人】【,】【自】【己】【是】【快】【乐】【的】【。】【即】【使】【你】【没】【有】【伟】【大】【的】【智】【慧】【,】【可】【是】【你】【有】【一】【颗】【善】【良】【的】【心】【,】【你】【依】【旧】【能】【帮】【助】【人】【。】【献】【爱】【心】【,】【做】【好】【事】【,】【这】【就】【是】【妈】【妈】【的】【好】【女】【儿】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【着】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【,】【我】【心】【中】【一】【阵】【高】【兴】【,】【今】【天】【我】【要】【畅】【快】【地】【听】【一】【听】【我】【喜】【爱】【的】【音】【乐】【,】【好】【好】【地】【奖】【励】【一】【下】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【较】【有】【特】【色】【的】【作】【文】【,】【文】【章】【选】【取】【了】【自】【己】【生】【活】【中】【两】【朵】【平】【常】【的】【浪】【花】【,】【从】【自】【己】【的】【切】【身】【经】【历】【和】【别】【人】【对】【自】【己】【的】【评】【价】【中】【悟】【出】【人】【生】【的】【价】【值】【。】【此】【文】【写】【的】【是】【真】【实】【的】【故】【事】【,】【小】【作】【者】【的】【行】【为】【也】【受】【到】【人】【们】【赞】【扬】【,】【真】【是】【“】【我】【手】【写】【我】【心】【”】【的】【作】【品】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【主】【要】【通】【过】【两】【件】【事】【来】【写】【自】【己】【的】【感】【受】【,】【作】【者】【叙】【事】【清】【楚】【完】【整】【,】【语】【言】【虽】【质】【朴】【却】【饱】【含】【真】【情】【。】【文】【中】【人】【物】【描】【写】【的】【部】【分】【不】【多】【,】【但】【却】【能】【生】【动】【形】【象】【地】【勾】【勒】【出】【人】【物】【的】【形】【象】【,】【如】【“】【只】【见】【他】【步】【履】【艰】【难】【,】【佝】【偻】【着】【腰】【,】【拉】【着】【车】【子】【一】【步】【一】【步】【向】【上】【走】【”】【,】【“】【她】【满】【脸】【是】【水】【,】【头】【发】【零】【乱】【”】【等】【,】【很】【逼】【真】【、】【形】【象】【,】【读】【来】【如】【在】【眼】【前】【,】【显】【示】【了】【作】【者】【非】【凡】【的】【语】【言】【功】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】任天堂大乱斗wiiu【<】【p】【>】【<】【s】【t】【r】【o】【n】【g】【>】【【】【篇】【五】【:】【你】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【偶】【像】【】】【<】【/】【s】【t】【r】【o】【n】【g】【>】【<】【/】【p】【>】

任天堂大乱斗wiiu:蒋定之:房贷政策不变商银行高管薪酬将延付

【<】【p】【>】【父】【母】【的】【爱】【,】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【给】【予】【我】【无】【限】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【父】【母】【的】【爱】【,】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【我】【前】【进】【的】【路】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【<】【/】【p】【>】任天堂大乱斗wiiu【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【是】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【北】【京】【市】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【围】【绕】【“】【凝】【聚】【集】【体】【力】【量】【,】【共】【同】【成】【长】【进】【步】【”】【的】【主】【题】【,】【本】【文】【在】【选】【材】【用】【材】【方】【面】【,】【具】【有】【如】【下】【特】【色】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【素】【材】【真】【实】【。】【以】【班】【级】【为】【单】【位】【参】【加】【学】【校】【的】【比】【赛】【,】【成】【绩】【差】【的】【同】【学】【主】【动】【提】【出】【要】【退】【出】【,】【以】【提】【高】【本】【班】【的】【平】【均】【得】【分】【。】【这】【样】【的】【事】【情】【很】【多】【人】【都】【经】【历】【过】【。】【至】【于】【拉】【上】【应】【该】【参】【赛】【的】【全】【体】【同】【学】【,】【特】【别】【是】【没】【有】【信】【心】【参】【赛】【的】【同】【学】【一】【起】【备】【赛】【、】【一】【起】【参】【赛】【,】【经】【历】【这】【类】【事】【情】【的】【人】【也】【不】【在】【少】【数】【。】【本】【文】【所】【选】【材】【料】【,】【就】【是】【作】【者】【自】【我】【经】【历】【的】【材】【料】【,】【非】【常】【真】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【选】【材】【广】【泛】【。】【如】【果】【单】【单】【只】【写】【“】【我】【们】【组】【织】【起】【来】【一】【起】【备】【赛】【”】【这】【个】【故】【事】【未】【尝】【不】【可】【,】【但】【是】【,】【文】【章】【的】【材】【料】【难】【以】【做】【到】【充】【实】【、】【新】【颖】【。】【本】【文】【作】【者】【别】【出】【心】【裁】【地】【选】【取】【了】【与】【主】【题】【密】【切】【相】【关】【的】【一】【个】【事】【物】【,】【用】【向】【日】【葵】【作】【为】【意】【象】【,】【与】【我】【们】【的】【故】【事】【相】【互】【映】【衬】【,】【极】【大】【地】【丰】【富】【了】【文】【章】【的】【材】【料】【库】【,】【充】【实】【了】【文】【章】【内】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【用】【材】【别】【致】【。】【本】【文】【以】【成】【长】【中】【的】【向】【日】【葵】【作】【为】【线】【索】【,】【贯】【穿】【文】【章】【始】【终】【,】【构】【成】【文】【章】【明】【线】【,】【隐】【于】【文】【中】【的】【暗】【线】【是】【我】【对】【“】【凝】【聚】【”】【的】【理】【解】【和】【认】【识】【。】【一】【明】【一】【暗】【,】【两】【条】【线】【索】【相】【互】【交】【织】【,】【脉】【络】【清】【楚】【,】【逐】【步】【揭】【示】【出】【“】【凝】【聚】【”】【的】【意】【义】【,】【使】【主】【题】【更】【加】【深】【刻】【,】【令】【人】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【模】【拟】【金】【题】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阅】【读】【下】【面】【的】【材】【料】【,】【按】【要】【求】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【堂】【美】【术】【课】【想】【象】【画】【,】【老】【师】【要】【求】【学】【生】【画】【“】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【。】【老】【师】【问】【他】【的】【学】【生】【,】【你】【们】【想】【把】【太】【阳】【变】【成】【什】【么】【样】【子】【呢】【?】【大】【家】【畅】【所】【欲】【言】【,】【有】【的】【说】【:】【“】【我】【想】【把】【太】【阳】【变】【皮】【球】【。】【”】【还】【有】【的】【说】【:】【“】【我】【想】【把】【太】【阳】【变】【成】【花】【。】【”】【“】【变】【成】【三】【角】【形】【。】【”】【“】【变】【成】【奥】【特】【曼】【。】【”】【“】【变】【成】【地】【球】【。】【”】【…】【…】【学】【生】【的】【童】【真】【感】【染】【了】【老】【师】【,】【学】【生】【的】【热】【情】【鼓】【舞】【了】【老】【师】【。】【老】【师】【说】【:】【孩】【子】【们】【,】【请】【拿】【起】【你】【手】【中】【的】【笔】【,】【画】【出】【你】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【;】【你】【们】【的】【老】【师】【,】【也】【将】【拿】【起】【笔】【,】【记】【下】【他】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【请】【以】【“】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【为】【题】【,】【结】【合】【社】【会】【生】【活】【、】【学】【校】【生】【活】【、】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【等】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【立】【意】【自】【定】【,】【文】【体】【自】【选】【。】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【思】【路】【导】【引】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【道】【给】【材】【料】【的】【命】【题】【作】【文】【。】【对】【于】【所】【给】【材】【料】【,】【一】【定】【要】【明】【确】【材】【料】【内】【涵】【,】【找】【准】【方】【向】【,】【作】【文】【就】【成】【功】【了】【一】【半】【。】【材】【料】【中】【老】【师】【要】【求】【学】【生】【画】【“】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【的】【故】【事】【,】【给】【了】【我】【们】【许】【多】【有】【益】【的】【启】【示】【:】【每】【个】【人】【心】【中】【都】【有】【一】【颗】【太】【阳】【,】【这】【个】【太】【阳】【在】【每】【个】【人】【心】【中】【都】【有】【不】【同】【的】【意】【义】【。】【太】【阳】【是】【永】【恒】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【幸】【福】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【快】【乐】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【爱】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【你】【的】【理】【想】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【他】【的】【自】【信】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【我】【的】【朋】【友】【…】【…】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【道】【题】【的】【写】【作】【内】【容】【非】【常】【广】【泛】【。】【我】【们】【可】【写】【自】【己】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【的】【事】【,】【写】【自】【己】【在】【人】【生】【旅】【途】【中】【遭】【受】【挫】【折】【、】【失】【败】【、】【困】【惑】【、】【痛】【苦】【等】【方】【面】【后】【,】【为】【了】【“】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【而】【努】【力】【,】【结】【果】【获】【得】【某】【种】【意】【外】【惊】【喜】【;】【也】【可】【写】【身】【边】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【因】【为】【他】【们】【是】【“】【我】【”】【“】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【,】【“】【我】【”】【对】【他】【们】【无】【比】【崇】【敬】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【何】【让】【自】【己】【的】【文】【章】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【充】【实】【呢】【?】【在】【构】【思】【时】【,】【可】【运】【用】【对】【比】【、】【先】【抑】【后】【扬】【、】【巧】【设】【悬】【念】【等】【方】【法】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【一】【波】【三】【折】【,】【将】【自】【己】【人】【生】【道】【路】【上】【经】【历】【辛】【酸】【苦】【辣】【后】【的】【所】【得】【所】【获】【,】【或】【者】【将】【对】【自】【己】【影】【响】【大】【的】【一】【些】【人】【和】【事】【,】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【展】【现】【在】【读】【者】【面】【前】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【一】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【凡】【青】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【晨】【星】【点】【点】【,】【晓】【雾】【朦】【胧】【,】【黎】【明】【前】【的】【沉】【寂】【里】【,】【父】【亲】【与】【我】【走】【在】【崎】【岖】【的】【山】【间】【小】【路】【上】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【,】【让】【我】【来】【挑】【,】【我】【挑】【得】【动】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【挑】【,】【等】【爸】【回】【时】【,】【你】【再】【挑】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【,】【你】【一】【会】【还】【得】【下】【地】【里】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【再】【忙】【,】【也】【得】【送】【你】【上】【车】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【父】【亲】【黑】【黝】【黝】【的】【身】【影】【,】【我】【仿】【佛】【闻】【到】【了】【他】【那】【泛】【着】【父】【爱】【的】【汗】【香】【。】【那】【装】【着】【学】【习】【和】【生】【活】【用】【品】【的】【沉】【重】【的】【蛇】【皮】【袋】【压】【在】【父】【亲】【的】【肩】【上】【,】【好】【像】【压】【在】【我】【的】【心】【头】【。】【父】【亲】【看】【着】【我】【,】【仿】【佛】【有】【什】【么】【东】【西】【在】【揪】【着】【他】【的】【心】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【阵】【风】【儿】【袭】【来】【,】【凉】【气】【逼】【人】【,】【父】【亲】【微】【微】【抖】【动】【了】【一】【下】【身】【躯】【,】【为】【的】【是】【不】【让】【担】【子】【从】【肩】【头】【滑】【落】【。】【我】【的】【心】【剧】【烈】【地】【颤】【动】【了】【一】【下】【,】【想】【起】【了】【父】【亲】【日】【夜】【辛】【劳】【和】【艰】【难】【,】【歙】【动】【了】【一】【下】【嘴】【唇】【,】【欲】【言】【又】【止】【…】【…】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【星】【星】【在】【沉】【默】【中】【闪】【烁】【,】【小】【路】【在】【朦】【胧】【中】【延】【伸】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【看】【看】【天】【,】【低】【头】【瞅】【瞅】【路】【,】【隐】【约】【可】【闻】【潺】【潺】【水】【声】【从】【一】【条】【幽】【暗】【的】【小】【山】【沟】【里】【传】【来】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【,】【你】【回】【吧】【,】【不】【远】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【等】【过】【了】【沟】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【…】【…】【让】【我】【来】【挑】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【走】【吧】【,】【等】【过】【了】【沟】【,】【上】【了】【坡】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沟】【底】【更】【黑】【些】【,】【路】【更】【加】【坎】【坷】【难】【行】【,】【父】【亲】【的】【身】【子】【打】【了】【几】【次】【趔】【趄】【,】【我】【急】【回】【身】【扶】【住】【他】【。】【父】【亲】【上】【了】【坡】【,】【似】【乎】【忘】【记】【了】【刚】【才】【说】【的】【话】【,】【毫】【无】【停】【下】【之】【意】【,】【我】【再】【三】【请】【求】【,】【父】【亲】【只】【好】【依】【从】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【看】【看】【天】【,】【东】【方】【微】【露】【晨】【曦】【;】【放】【眼】【望】【望】【路】【,】【蜿】【蜒】【依】【稀】【可】【辨】【。】【这】【时】【,】【父】【亲】【又】【开】【始】【了】【叮】【嘱】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【走】【路】【要】【小】【心】【,】【挑】【不】【动】【就】【歇】【歇】【脚】【。】【到】【校】【学】【习】【要】【用】【心】【,】【不】【要】【偷】【懒】【。】【不】【懂】【的】【要】【多】【问】【…】【…】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【的】【话】【,】【像】【习】【习】【晨】【风】【,】【拂】【过】【耳】【畔】【;】【像】【潺】【潺】【溪】【流】【,】【滋】【润】【心】【田】【。】【我】【心】【里】【顿】【时】【像】【涨】【了】【潮】【:】【“】【我】【记】【下】【了】【,】【爸】【,】【你】【回】【吧】【!】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迎】【着】【晨】【风】【,】【我】【挑】【着】【担】【子】【快】【快】【走】【了】【一】【程】【,】【忍】【不】【住】【回】【头】【看】【了】【一】【眼】【:】【哦】【,】【父】【亲】【还】【站】【在】【那】【儿】【凝】【望】【着】【我】【。】【一】【阵】【晨】【风】【撩】【动】【父】【亲】【蓬】【松】【的】【头】【发】【,】【一】【片】【灿】【烂】【霞】【光】【拥】【着】【父】【亲】【,】【父】【亲】【恰】【似】【一】【轮】【金】【色】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【光】【芒】【四】【射】【—】【—】【 】【平】【凡】【而】【伟】【大】【的】【父】【亲】【,】【他】【也】【是】【我】【心】【中】【永】【远】【不】【落】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【赞】【美】【父】【亲】【、】【写】【父】【爱】【的】【伟】【大】【,】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【很】【多】【,】【材】【料】【也】【比】【较】【旧】【,】【很】【难】【写】【出】【新】【意】【来】【。】【可】【本】【文】【的】【作】【者】【,】【却】【能】【推】【陈】【出】【新】【,】【把】【一】【个】【老】【的】【话】【题】【写】【得】【这】【样】【富】【有】【新】【意】【。】【这】【主】【要】【得】【力】【于】【文】【章】【精】【彩】【的】【景】【物】【描】【写】【。】【景】【为】【写】【人】【做】【了】【铺】【垫】【,】【景】【物】【刻】【画】【很】【细】【微】【,】【能】【从】【中】【感】【悟】【出】【作】【者】【的】【生】【活】【体】【验】【,】【写】【景】【能】【很】【从】【容】【地】【收】【笔】【,】【很】【自】【然】【地】【过】【渡】【到】【人】【物】【,】【没】【有】【嫁】【接】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【本】【文】【的】【语】【言】【很】【有】【特】【色】【,】【散】【文】【化】【的】【语】【言】【中】【,】【夹】【有】【不】【成】【章】【法】【的】【散】【句】【,】【使】【文】【章】【的】【节】【奏】【有】【了】【舒】【缓】【的】【张】【弛】【。】【父】【亲】【的】【形】【象】【如】【同】【电】【影】【中】【的】【特】【写】【一】【般】【,】【定】【格】【在】【读】【者】【眼】【前】【,】【给】【人】【很】【深】【的】【印】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沈】【乔】【影】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【,】【是】【我】【生】【命】【中】【最】【重】【要】【的】【部】【分】【,】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【友】【。】【书】【可】【以】【呼】【唤】【出】【千】【百】【年】【前】【的】【古】【人】【,】【让】【他】【们】【为】【我】【深】【情】【地】【讲】【述】【上】【下】【五】【千】【年】【的】【故】【事】【。】【书】【可】【以】【为】【我】【排】【忧】【解】【难】【:】【遭】【遇】【挫】【折】【时】【,】【《】【钢】【铁】【是】【怎】【样】【炼】【成】【的】【》】【能】【给】【我】【勇】【气】【和】【力】【量】【,】【使】【我】【像】【保】【尔】【那】【样】【顽】【强】【而】【乐】【观】【;】【心】【烦】【意】【乱】【时】【,】【《】【安】【徒】【生】【童】【话】【》】【会】【让】【我】【充】【满】【信】【心】【,】【坚】【信】【丑】【小】【鸭】【终】【会】【变】【成】【白】【天】【鹅】【;】【得】【意】【忘】【形】【时】【,】【《】【名】【句】【荟】【萃】【》】【又】【使】【我】【谦】【虚】【而】【警】【醒】【,】【因】【为】【“】【虚】【心】【使】【人】【进】【步】【,】【骄】【傲】【使】【人】【落】【后】【。】【”】【…】【…】【无】【论】【何】【时】【,】【书】【都】【是】【我】【值】【得】【信】【赖】【的】【朋】【友】【,】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【师】【。】【它】【总】【是】【无】【声】【地】【等】【我】【去】【问】【问】【题】【。】【即】【使】【有】【一】【千】【个】【、】【一】【万】【个】【问】【题】【,】【它】【也】【从】【不】【感】【到】【厌】【烦】【。】【天】【文】【、】【地】【理】【、】【语】【文】【、】【数】【学】【、】【音】【乐】【、】【美】【术】【…】【…】【无】【数】【个】【疑】【问】【,】【只】【要】【找】【到】【它】【,】【书】【都】【会】【给】【我】【答】【案】【。】【人】【说】【老】【师】【似】【春】【风】【化】【雨】【滋】【润】【万】【物】【,】【书】【又】【何】【尝】【不】【是】【?】【人】【说】【老】【师】【似】【蜡】【炬】【成】【灰】【,】【书】【又】【何】【尝】【不】【是】【?】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【翻】【,】【一】【本】【又】【一】【本】【烂】【,】【可】【在】【我】【需】【要】【它】【的】【时】【候】【,】【它】【又】【何】【曾】【有】【过】【一】【句】【怨】【言】【?】【一】【年】【一】【年】【,】【它】【像】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【的】【良】【师】【,】【解】【开】【了】【我】【一】【个】【又】【一】【个】【的】【疑】【团】【,】【它】【像】【太】【阳】【一】【样】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【每】【一】【个】【角】【落】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【舟】【。】【“】【书】【山】【有】【路】【勤】【为】【径】【,】【学】【海】【无】【涯】【‘】【书】【’】【作】【舟】【。】【”】【是】【书】【载】【着】【一】【个】【个】【渴】【望】【成】【功】【的】【学】【子】【,】【驶】【向】【知】【识】【的】【彼】【岸】【。】【书】【,】【是】【数】【学】【之】【舟】【,】【使】【我】【思】【维】【变】【得】【精】【密】【,】【载】【我】【驶】【向】【数】【字】【的】【王】【国】【;】【书】【,】【是】【语】【文】【之】【舟】【,】【使】【我】【知】【识】【渊】【博】【,】【载】【我】【驶】【向】【文】【学】【的】【殿】【堂】【;】【书】【,】【是】【诺】【亚】【方】【舟】【,】【使】【我】【心】【忧】【天】【下】【,】【载】【我】【驶】【向】【和】【平】【的】【天】【堂】【。】【书】【在】【我】【的】【心】【中】【越】【发】【的】【神】【圣】【,】【它】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【火】【。】【无】【论】【是】【牙】【牙】【学】【语】【的】【孩】【童】【,】【还】【是】【秉】【烛】【夜】【读】【的】【老】【人】【,】【它】【总】【是】【敞】【开】【胸】【怀】【,】【热】【情】【地】【迎】【接】【你】【,】【保】【证】【你】【满】【载】【而】【归】【。】【书】【是】【永】【不】【熄】【灭】【的】【火】【,】【温】【暖】【了】【我】【的】【人】【生】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【我】【的】【前】【程】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【海】【。】【只】【要】【你】【捧】【起】【了】【第】【一】【本】【书】【,】【你】【便】【会】【发】【现】【,】【海】【洋】【尚】【有】【尽】【头】【,】【书】【却】【无】【边】【无】【际】【,】【包】【罗】【万】【象】【。】【我】【愿】【一】【辈】【子】【在】【其】【中】【泅】【渡】【,】【无】【怨】【无】【悔】【。】【书】【如】【人】【生】【。】【书】【中】【记】【载】【了】【前】【人】【、】【今】【人】【的】【喜】【怒】【哀】【乐】【、】【成】【败】【得】【失】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【,】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【明】【火】【,】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【你】【为】【我】【白】【纸】【般】【的】【人】【生】【涂】【满】【斑】【斓】【的】【色】【彩】【,】【你】【使】【我】【短】【暂】【的】【人】【生】【变】【成】【永】【恒】【,】【你】【让】【我】【平】【淡】【的】【人】【生】【洒】【满】【太】【阳】【的】【光】【辉】【。】【我】【爱】【你】【呀】【,】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【—】【—】【书】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【以】【“】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【为】【线】【索】【,】【用】【“】【书】【如】【友】【”】【,】【“】【书】【如】【师】【”】【等】【结】【构】【全】【文】【,】【很】【有】【层】【次】【感】【,】【体】【现】【了】【散】【文】【“】【形】【散】【而】【神】【不】【散】【”】【的】【特】【点】【,】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【对】【书】【的】【热】【爱】【和】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【作】【者】【具】【有】【较】【强】【的】【写】【作】【基】【本】【功】【,】【文】【章】【语】【言】【精】【练】【、】【优】【美】【,】【多】【用】【排】【比】【句】【,】【增】【强】【了】【文】【章】【的】【表】【达】【气】【势】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【有】【时】【候】【,】【你】【说】【你】【很】【累】【很】【累】【,】【喜】【欢】【流】【动】【的】【水】【和】【飘】【动】【的】【云】【。】【我】【告】【诉】【你】【说】【,】【我】【喜】【欢】【湛】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【,】【喜】【欢】【它】【辽】【阔】【和】【深】【邃】【。】【我】【知】【道】【,】【我】【们】【之】【间】【没】【有】【交】【集】【,】【只】【有】【并】【集】【,】【只】【能】【彼】【此】【相】【望】【,】【但】【又】【渴】【望】【彼】【此】【相】【守】【。】【我】【知】【道】【,】【一】【个】【人】【如】【果】【有】【了】【爱】【心】【,】【懂】【得】【了】【感】【恩】【,】【你】【就】【会】【获】【得】【美】【丽】【,】【你】【才】【会】【变】【得】【美】【丽】【。】【在】【我】【心】【底】【,】【此】【刻】【的】【你】【便】【是】【我】【心】【中】【那】【最】【美】【丽】【的】【风】【景】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】任天堂大乱斗wiiu【<】【p】【>】【心】【情】【痛】【苦】【,】【倚】【靠】【窗】【边】【。】【你】【走】【了】【过】【来】【,】【只】【是】【静】【静】【站】【在】【我】【身】【边】【,】【陪】【我】【眺】【望】【远】【处】【。】【许】【久】【,】【你】【轻】【唤】【了】【我】【的】【名】【,】【又】【拍】【了】【拍】【我】【的】【肩】【,】【宽】【慰】【道】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【只】【要】【笑】【一】【笑】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【过】【不】【了】【!】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【接】【着】【你】【笑】【了】【。】【你】【知】【道】【吗】【?】【我】【的】【心】【坎】【儿】【都】【被】【你】【笑】【暖】【了】【。】【我】【知】【道】【,】【你】【是】【我】【的】【天】【使】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【回】【放】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阅】【读】【下】【面】【材】【料】【,】【选】【择】【感】【悟】【最】【深】【的】【一】【点】【,】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【使】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【藏】【族】【小】【朋】【友】【亮】【相】【开】【幕】【式】【 】【震】【区】【孩】【子】【们】【现】【在】【怎】【么】【样】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【4】【月】【3】【0】【日】【晚】【,】【上】【海】【世】【博】【会】【开】【幕】【式】【文】【艺】【表】【演】【在】【世】【博】【文】【化】【中】【心】【举】【行】【,】【两】【位】【来】【自】【青】【海】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【灾】【区】【的】【藏】【族】【小】【朋】【友】【出】【现】【在】【了】【舞】【台】【上】【,】【他】【们】【格】【外】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【。】【其】【实】【,】【在】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【灾】【区】【,】【像】【他】【们】【这】【样】【的】【孩】【子】【还】【有】【很】【多】【。】【下】【面】【就】【让】【我】【们】【来】【结】【识】【两】【位】【同】【龄】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【才】【仁】【措】【毛】【,】【1】【5】【岁】【,】【在】【玉】【树】【结】【古】【镇】【民】【族】【中】【学】【读】【初】【三】【。】【地】【震】【后】【家】【里】【房】【子】【垮】【塌】【,】【教】【室】【也】【转】【移】【到】【学】【校】【的】【操】【场】【上】【。】【她】【想】【去】【结】【古】【镇】【的】【安】【置】【点】【当】【志】【愿】【者】【,】【可】【是】【她】【奶】【奶】【不】【让】【去】【,】【让】【她】【安】【心】【准】【备】【读】【书】【。】【她】【的】【左】【手】【在】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【后】【的】【一】【次】【余】【震】【中】【,】【不】【小】【心】【被】【刀】【割】【伤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【才】【仁】【拉】【毛】【,】【1】【4】【岁】【,】【在】【玉】【树】【结】【古】【镇】【民】【族】【中】【学】【读】【初】【中】【。】【目】【前】【随】【母】【亲】【临】【时】【居】【住】【在】【玉】【树】【赛】【马】【场】【安】【置】【点】【,】【帮】【助】【父】【母】【照】【看】【家】【里】【众】【多】【的】【弟】【弟】【妹】【妹】【。】【她】【的】【父】【亲】【在】【结】【古】【镇】【上】【班】【,】【地】【震】【后】【事】【情】【很】【多】【,】【经】【常】【早】【出】【晚】【归】【。】【过】【些】【天】【,】【才】【仁】【拉】【毛】【可】【能】【会】【被】【送】【到】【西】【宁】【等】【地】【的】【学】【校】【继】【续】【读】【书】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【摘】【自】【《】【长】【春】【晚】【报】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【牵】【挂】【是】【一】【根】【线】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【吉】【林】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【世】【间】【有】【这】【样】【一】【种】【美】【好】【的】【情】【感】【,】【它】【能】【使】【相】【距】【无】【论】【多】【么】【遥】【远】【的】【两】【颗】【心】【连】【在】【一】【起】【,】【它】【能】【让】【亲】【人】【的】【感】【情】【更】【加】【亲】【密】【,】【它】【能】【让】【朋】【友】【的】【友】【情】【更】【加】【深】【厚】【,】【它】【甚】【至】【能】【让】【陌】【生】【人】【心】【手】【相】【携】【。】【这】【种】【情】【感】【就】【是】【牵】【挂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【牵】【挂】【,】【让】【亲】【人】【的】【感】【情】【更】【加】【亲】【密】【,】【那】【是】【一】【种】【“】【临】【行】【密】【密】【缝】【,】【意】【恐】【迟】【迟】【归】【”】【的】【情】【感】【,】【当】【我】【们】【身】【在】【远】【方】【时】【,】【总】【有】【一】【颗】【心】【在】【家】【中】【呼】【唤】【着】【我】【们】【的】【那】【颗】【心】【。】【“】【天】【凉】【了】【,】【加】【些】【衣】【服】【”】【,】【“】【工】【作】【时】【,】【注】【意】【安】【全】【”】【,】【“】【按】【时】【吃】【饭】【,】【别】【饿】【坏】【了】【身】【子】【”】【…】【…】【也】【许】【只】【是】【一】【些】【细】【小】【琐】【碎】【的】【事】【情】【,】【可】【那】【正】【是】【亲】【人】【对】【我】【们】【无】【限】【的】【爱】【的】【表】【达】【啊】【!】【牵】【挂】【是】【连】【接】【我】【们】【与】【家】【中】【亲】【人】【的】【一】【根】【线】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【牵】【挂】【,】【让】【朋】【友】【的】【友】【情】【更】【加】【深】【厚】【,】【那】【是】【一】【种】【“】【劝】【君】【更】【尽】【一】【杯】【酒】【,】【西】【出】【阳】【关】【无】【故】【人】【”】【的】【情】【感】【。】【毕】【业】【时】【,】【许】【多】【同】【学】【的】【眼】【中】【都】【满】【含】【泪】【水】【,】【彼】【此】【牵】【着】【手】【,】【告】【诉】【对】【方】【:】【“】【你】【可】【别】【再】【贪】【玩】【了】【,】【到】【高】【中】【一】【定】【要】【努】【力】【学】【习】【”】【,】【“】【你】【不】【要】【总】【是】【生】【气】【,】【忍】【一】【忍】【就】【过】【去】【了】【”】【,】【“】【你】【太】【单】【纯】【了】【,】【像】【个】【孩】【子】【一】【样】【,】【要】【保】【护】【好】【自】【己】【”】【…】【…】【同】【窗】【三】【载】【,】【彼】【此】【都】【已】【了】【解】【。】【在】【分】【别】【之】【际】【告】【诫】【对】【方】【、】【叮】【嘱】【对】【方】【就】【是】【一】【种】【爱】【啊】【!】【一】【种】【叫】【牵】【挂】【的】【爱】【。】【牵】【挂】【是】【连】【接】【我】【们】【和】【朋】【友】【的】【一】【根】【线】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【牵】【挂】【,】【让】【陌】【生】【人】【心】【手】【相】【携】【,】【共】【渡】【难】【关】【,】【那】【是】【一】【种】【“】【落】【地】【为】【兄】【弟】【,】【何】【必】【骨】【肉】【亲】【”】【的】【情】【感】【。】【当】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【、】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【发】【生】【时】【,】【“】【万】【众】【一】【心】【,】【众】【志】【成】【城】【”】【成】【为】【我】【们】【心】【中】【共】【同】【的】【信】【念】【。】【那】【一】【笔】【笔】【巨】【额】【的】【捐】【款】【,】【那】【一】【车】【车】【救】【灾】【的】【物】【资】【,】【那】【一】【批】【批】【令】【人】【骄】【傲】【的】【志】【愿】【者】【,】【那】【一】【个】【个】【不】【知】【疲】【倦】【的】【解】【放】【军】【战】【士】【…】【…】【都】【是】【对】【灾】【区】【牵】【挂】【的】【表】【现】【啊】【!】【也】【许】【,】【我】【们】【不】【能】【为】【灾】【区】【作】【什】【么】【贡】【献】【,】【但】【那】【简】【单】【的】【一】【句】【“】【别】【怕】【,】【有】【我】【们】【呢】【!】【”】【就】【足】【以】【安】【慰】【他】【们】【受】【伤】【的】【心】【啊】【!】【牵】【挂】【是】【连】【接】【我】【们】【与】【血】【肉】【同】【胞】【的】【一】【根】【线】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【上】【海】【世】【博】【会】【的】【开】【幕】【式】【上】【,】【来】【自】【青】【海】【玉】【树】【的】【才】【仁】【措】【毛】【和】【才】【仁】【拉】【毛】【走】【上】【舞】【台】【。】【世】【博】【会】【的】【主】【办】【方】【一】【定】【是】【想】【让】【那】【些】【牵】【挂】【玉】【树】【的】【人】【们】【放】【心】【,】【但】【我】【们】【和】【玉】【树】【人】【民】【之】【间】【的】【那】【条】【线】【不】【会】【断】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【忽】【然】【感】【觉】【,】【牵】【挂】【是】【一】【个】【小】【精】【灵】【,】【它】【在】【人】【们】【彼】【此】【的】【心】【间】【跳】【跃】【,】【传】【递】【着】【爱】【与】【关】【怀】【。】【因】【为】【牵】【挂】【,】【国】【家】【变】【得】【更】【加】【和】【谐】【富】【强】【;】【因】【为】【牵】【挂】【,】【社】【会】【变】【得】【更】【加】【温】【馨】【美】【好】【;】【因】【为】【牵】【挂】【,】【世】【界】【变】【得】【更】【加】【团】【结】【美】【丽】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【牵】【挂】【是】【一】【根】【线】【。】【这】【根】【线】【,】【连】【着】【你】【我】【他】【,】【连】【着】【你】【们】【我】【们】【他】【们】【。】【但】【愿】【,】【这】【根】【线】【能】【连】【接】【起】【世】【界】【上】【的】【每】【一】【个】【人】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【善】【用】【修】【辞】【,】【结】【构】【优】【美】【,】【成】【功】【之】【处】【在】【于】【形】【式】【的】【巧】【妙】【设】【计】【。】【作】【者】【读】【懂】【了】【试】【题】【所】【提】【供】【的】【材】【料】【,】【恰】【当】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【拟】【题】【。】【开】【篇】【为】【牵】【挂】【“】【下】【定】【义】【”】【,】【然】【后】【具】【体】【展】【开】【。】【设】【计】【三】【个】【排】【比】【段】【,】【每】【个】【段】【落】【开】【始】【都】【恰】【当】【地】【引】【用】【两】【句】【古】【诗】【来】【增】【添】【意】【境】【,】【加】【深】【了】【读】【者】【对】【牵】【挂】【的】【理】【解】【。】【文】【章】【结】【尾】【,】【考】【生】【再】【次】【运】【用】【排】【比】【句】【,】【形】【象】【表】【达】【牵】【挂】【的】【重】【要】【意】【义】【,】【并】【提】【出】【美】【好】【的】【祝】【愿】【和】【期】【望】【,】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【善】【于】【把】【握】【材】【料】【,】【主】【题】【突】【出】【。】【文】【章】【对】【材】【料】【不】【离】【不】【弃】【,】【用】【真】【挚】【的】【情】【感】【逐】【一】【展】【示】【“】【牵】【挂】【”】【对】【于】【亲】【人】【、】【朋】【友】【、】【陌】【生】【人】【的】【重】【大】【意】【义】【。】【恰】【当】【地】【引】【用】【材】【料】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【更】【加】【突】【出】【。】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【李】【辉】【 】【王】【颖】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【永】【远】【牵】【挂】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【吉】【林】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【是】【谁】【曾】【给】【生】【活】【下】【过】【这】【样】【一】【个】【定】【义】【:】【生】【活】【,】【就】【是】【生】【下】【来】【就】【要】【活】【下】【去】【。】【是】【啊】【!】【生】【活】【虽】【然】【艰】【难】【,】【但】【需】【要】【我】【们】【努】【力】【去】【寻】【找】【希】【望】【,】【去】【创】【造】【奇】【迹】【。】【相】【信】【生】【活】【中】【总】【有】【些】【事】【让】【人】【刻】【骨】【铭】【心】【,】【总】【有】【些】【人】【值】【得】【我】【们】【牵】【挂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【多】【人】【可】【能】【一】【辈】【子】【都】【生】【活】【在】【安】【稳】【的】【环】【境】【中】【,】【从】【没】【有】【经】【历】【过】【惊】【天】【动】【地】【的】【大】【事】【。】【可】【是】【那】【地】【动】【山】【 】【的】【场】【面】【,】【那】【昏】【天】【暗】【地】【的】【镜】【头】【,】【那】【撕】【心】【裂】【肺】【的】【喊】【声】【,】【又】【怎】【能】【让】【人】【忘】【记】【呢】【?】【四】【川】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【,】【青】【海】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【,】【那】【些】【在】【灾】【难】【中】【永】【不】【言】【弃】【的】【生】【命】【,】【让】【我】【们】【看】【到】【了】【奇】【迹】【,】【也】【让】【我】【们】【看】【到】【了】【中】【国】【人】【民】【顽】【强】【的】【生】【命】【力】【。】【这】【些】【天】【使】【,】【真】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【记】【得】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【中】【那】【个】【“】【可】【乐】【男】【孩】【”】【吗】【?】【他】【凭】【借】【自】【己】【顽】【强】【的】【意】【志】【在】【地】【震】【中】【活】【了】【下】【来】【。】【他】【没】【有】【放】【弃】【过】【生】【的】【希】【望】【,】【他】【那】【一】【句】【:】【“】【叔】【叔】【,】【我】【要】【喝】【可】【乐】【”】【,】【让】【我】【看】【到】【了】【他】【奔】【向】【美】【好】【生】【活】【的】【坚】【定】【信】【心】【。】【一】【年】【多】【了】【,】【不】【知】【他】【是】【否】【过】【得】【开】【心】【快】【乐】【,】【不】【知】【他】【的】【家】【人】【是】【否】【幸】【存】【,】【不】【知】【他】【是】【否】【已】【再】【次】【走】【进】【校】【园】【,】【继】【续】【他】【的】【求】【学】【之】【旅】【。】【他】【的】【事】【迹】【让】【无】【数】【人】【为】【之】【鼓】【舞】【,】【同】【时】【,】【也】【让】【无】【数】【人】【为】【他】【的】【生】【活】【担】【忧】【,】【他】【的】【家】【人】【还】【在】【他】【身】【边】【照】【顾】【他】【吗】【?】【在】【他】【心】【中】【有】【没】【有】【留】【下】【可】【怕】【的】【阴】【影】【?】【“】【可】【乐】【男】【孩】【”】【让】【我】【觉】【得】【他】【是】【一】【个】【象】【征】【快】【乐】【的】【天】【使】【,】【他】【给】【那】【些】【地】【震】【中】【受】【灾】【的】【人】【带】【来】【鼓】【舞】【!】【天】【使】【,】【真】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【上】【海】【世】【博】【会】【开】【幕】【式】【上】【亮】【相】【的】【才】【仁】【措】【毛】【和】【才】【仁】【拉】【毛】【,】【你】【们】【过】【得】【还】【好】【吗】【?】【虽】【然】【你】【们】【的】【家】【园】【已】【被】【无】【情】【的】【摧】【毁】【,】【但】【请】【相】【信】【,】【人】【间】【有】【情】【,】【人】【间】【有】【爱】【,】【你】【们】【会】【过】【得】【很】【好】【吧】【!】【才】【仁】【措】【毛】【初】【中】【毕】【业】【到】【哪】【里】【去】【读】【高】【中】【呢】【?】【才】【仁】【拉】【毛】【去】【西】【宁】【了】【吗】【?】【有】【没】【有】【人】【资】【助】【你】【们】【的】【生】【活】【?】【从】【你】【们】【脸】【上】【写】【着】【的】【微】【笑】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【你】【们】【对】【未】【来】【充】【满】【了】【信】【心】【。】【你】【们】【相】【信】【,】【国】【家】【牵】【挂】【着】【你】【们】【,】【每】【个】【中】【国】【人】【都】【牵】【挂】【着】【你】【们】【。】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【啊】【,】【你】【们】【那】【黝】【黑】【而】【又】【纯】【真】【的】【脸】【庞】【已】【给】【人】【们】【留】【下】【了】【深】【刻】【的】【印】【象】【,】【你】【们】【是】【纯】【真】【的】【天】【使】【,】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【,】【让】【人】【难】【忘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【有】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【中】【那】【位】【无】【私】【奉】【献】【的】【老】【师】【,】【你】【让】【中】【国】【人】【民】【为】【你】【竖】【起】【了】【大】【拇】【指】【。】【在】【地】【震】【开】【始】【的】【危】【急】【时】【刻】【,】【你】【张】【开】【了】【你】【的】【臂】【膀】【,】【用】【力】【支】【撑】【起】【孩】【子】【们】【的】【一】【片】【生】【命】【的】【晴】【空】【,】【你】【让】【学】【生】【们】【安】【然】【无】【恙】【地】【生】【存】【下】【来】【,】【而】【你】【却】【献】【出】【了】【宝】【贵】【的】【生】【命】【。】【你】【的】【家】【人】【还】【好】【吗】【?】【虽】【然】【你】【已】【离】【开】【亲】【人】【、】【离】【开】【我】【们】【远】【去】【,】【但】【一】【个】【圣】【洁】【的】【灵】【魂】【会】【永】【远】【活】【在】【我】【们】【心】【中】【。】【我】【们】【会】【永】【远】【牵】【挂】【着】【你】【,】【为】【你】【和】【你】【的】【家】【人】【祝】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【使】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【天】【使】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【天】【使】【的】【未】【来】【…】【…】【是】【那】【些】【圣】【洁】【的】【天】【使】【,】【给】【世】【界】【带】【来】【了】【奇】【迹】【,】【给】【生】【活】【带】【来】【了】【希】【望】【,】【也】【给】【无】【数】【人】【带】【来】【了】【祝】【福】【与】【牵】【挂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【愿】【天】【下】【所】【有】【的】【美】【丽】【的】【天】【使】【都】【能】【健】【康】【快】【乐】【地】【生】【活】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【材】【料】【丰】【富】【,】【运】【用】【自】【如】【。】【在】【作】【者】【的】【笔】【下】【,】【值】【得】【我】【们】【牵】【挂】【的】【有】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【中】【的】【“】【可】【乐】【男】【孩】【”】【,】【有】【上】【海】【世】【博】【会】【上】【亮】【相】【的】【两】【个】【藏】【族】【小】【姑】【娘】【,】【还】【有】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【中】【的】【无】【私】【的】【人】【民】【教】【师】【,】【考】【生】【一】【一】【写】【来】【,】【很】【好】【地】【突】【出】【了】【“】【牵】【挂】【”】【的】【主】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【感】【情】【充】【沛】【,】【亲】【切】【自】【然】【。】【这】【篇】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【目】【大】【气】【,】【富】【于】【人】【情】【味】【。】【开】【篇】【从】【生】【活】【写】【起】【,】【自】【然】【点】【题】【,】【同】【时】【给】【人】【一】【种】【厚】【重】【感】【。】【行】【文】【中】【,】【作】【者】【恰】【当】【地】【转】【换】【人】【称】【,】【使】【感】【情】【的】【表】【达】【更】【加】【充】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【恰】【当】【点】【题】【,】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【。】【文】【章】【的】【成】【功】【之】【处】【在】【于】【作】【者】【的】【点】【题】【艺】【术】【,】【几】【乎】【在】【每】【个】【段】【落】【中】【,】【作】【者】【都】【能】【自】【然】【而】【巧】【妙】【地】【点】【题】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【,】【同】【时】【体】【现】【了】【语】【言】【的】【美】【感】【。】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【李】【辉】【王】【颖】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】任天堂大乱斗wiiu【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【些】【甜】【蜜】【的】【东】【西】【,】【是】【单】【纯】【的】【天】【真】【的】【语】【言】【,】【是】【干】【净】【的】【温】【暖】【的】【关】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俏】【皮】【的】【短】【发】【,】【被】【风】【吹】【得】【微】【微】【凌】【乱】【,】【在】【她】【耳】【旁】【顽】【皮】【地】【舞】【动】【着】【,】【被】【阳】【光】【照】【射】【出】【一】【种】【柔】【和】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【如】【溪】【水】【般】【澄】【静】【的】【眼】【睛】【里】【,】【流】【露】【出】【天】【真】【的】【神】【态】【。】【她】【看】【起】【来】【就】【像】【童】【话】【中】【的】【乖】【娃】【娃】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【一】【次】【,】【她】【因】【为】【考】【试】【失】【利】【被】【老】【师】【叫】【到】【了】【办】【公】【室】【,】【出】【来】【的】【时】【候】【脸】【红】【红】【的】【。】【我】【想】【这】【时】【她】【一】【定】【会】【很】【懊】【恼】【的】【,】【刚】【想】【上】【前】【安】【慰】【她】【,】【却】【见】【她】【深】【吸】【一】【口】【气】【,】【眼】【珠】【调】【皮】【地】【左】【右】【转】【动】【,】【竟】【开】【始】【安】【慰】【起】【我】【来】【:】【“】【没】【关】【系】【的】【,】【看】【!】【窗】【外】【阳】【光】【暖】【暖】【的】【,】【云】【朵】【就】【像】【棉】【花】【糖】【,】【一】【切】【都】【这】【么】【美】【好】【,】【阴】【霾】【会】【散】【去】【的】【,】【不】【要】【再】【为】【我】【伤】【心】【了】【!】【走】【,】【出】【去】【看】【风】【景】【!】【”】【我】【有】【些】【丈】【二】【和】【尚】【摸】【不】【着】【头】【脑】【了】【,】【于】【是】【被】【她】【带】【到】【了】【操】【场】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【懒】【洋】【洋】【的】【阳】【光】【照】【在】【身】【上】【,】【让】【我】【忍】【不】【住】【打】【了】【一】【个】【超】【大】【的】【哈】【欠】【。】【而】【她】【却】【微】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【我】【就】【像】【白】【雪】【公】【主】【一】【样】【,】【虽】【然】【总】【是】【遇】【到】【挫】【折】【,】【可】【总】【能】【重】【新】【站】【起】【来】【。】【还】【有】【小】【红】【帽】【、】【拇】【指】【姑】【娘】【…】【…】【”】【这】【不】【,】【她】【又】【打】【开】【了】【童】【话】【匣】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【很】【乐】【观】【,】【是】【她】【的】【乐】【观】【让】【我】【学】【会】【了】【坚】【强】【,】【再】【大】【的】【困】【难】【我】【都】【不】【怕】【,】【因】【为】【有】【这】【个】【“】【童】【话】【公】【主】【”】【为】【我】【加】【油】【,】【鼓】【劲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【是】【受】【她】【的】【影】【响】【吧】【!】【不】【知】【从】【何】【时】【起】【,】【我】【说】【起】【话】【来】【也】【带】【着】【一】【股】【浓】【重】【的】【“】【童】【话】【味】【儿】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【蝉】【鸣】【稀】【薄】【的】【夏】【日】【午】【后】【,】【我】【们】【约】【好】【一】【起】【划】【船】【,】【可】【她】【却】【莫】【名】【其】【妙】【地】【得】【了】【“】【晕】【水】【症】【”】【。】【天】【啊】【,】【这】【可】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【我】【灵】【机】【一】【动】【,】【对】【她】【说】【:】【“】【不】【要】【害】【怕】【,】【难】【道】【你】【忘】【记】【了】【吗】【?】【小】【鲤】【鱼】【会】【来】【帮】【助】【你】【的】【,】【上】【帝】【也】【会】【保】【佑】【你】【的】【!】【”】【她】【半】【信】【半】【疑】【地】【点】【了】【点】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【开】【始】【了】【划】【船】【的】【旅】【程】【。】【“】【呀】【,】【不】【行】【,】【快】【靠】【岸】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【我】【要】【掉】【下】【去】【了】【!】【黑】【色】【的】【巫】【师】【帽】【子】【,】【黑】【色】【的】【巫】【师】【长】【袍】【,】【扫】【把】【,】【长】【长】【的】【有】【些】【弯】【的】【鼻】【子】【,】【残】【缺】【不】【全】【的】【牙】【齿】【,】【好】【可】【怕】【!】【”】【我】【实】【在】【不】【知】【道】【她】【在】【说】【些】【什】【么】【。】【左】【右】【张】【望】【,】【原】【来】【是】【游】【人】【们】【废】【弃】【的】【黑】【色】【塑】【料】【袋】【。】【恰】【巧】【此】【时】【,】【一】【团】【水】【草】【浮】【到】【水】【面】【,】【我】【大】【声】【叫】【道】【:】【“】【你】【看】【,】【龙】【太】【子】【派】【水】【草】【仙】【子】【来】【保】【护】【你】【了】【,】【不】【要】【怕】【!】【”】【这】【就】【是】【以】【毒】【攻】【毒】【吧】【!】【我】【心】【想】【。】【突】【然】【,】【她】【“】【扑】【哧】【”】【一】【声】【笑】【了】【,】【狡】【黠】【地】【看】【着】【我】【。】【我】【打】【趣】【道】【:】【“】【还】【不】【是】【跟】【你】【学】【的】【啊】【!】【”】【看】【了】【看】【她】【,】【双】【眸】【中】【透】【着】【一】【份】【天】【真】【,】【微】【微】【努】【着】【小】【嘴】【着】【实】【可】【爱】【,】【我】【也】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【透】【过】【水】【晶】【的】【童】【话】【是】【我】【们】【灿】【烂】【的】【友】【谊】【,】【我】【们】【同】【是】【落】【单】【的】【丑】【小】【鸭】【,】【在】【彼】【此】【寂】【寞】【的】【年】【华】【里】【,】【避】【开】【猜】【疑】【,】【避】【开】【矛】【盾】【,】【留】【下】【温】【婉】【的】【感】【动】【,】【留】【下】【醉】【人】【的】【幸】【福】【。】【一】【路】【走】【来】【,】【我】【们】【的】【点】【滴】【都】【散】【发】【出】【耀】【眼】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【萤】【火】【一】【朵】【,】【星】【光】【满】【天】【,】【你】【曾】【告】【诉】【过】【我】【,】【遇】【到】【蓝】【色】【萤】【火】【虫】【的】【人】【会】【找】【到】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【但】【我】【从】【未】【告】【诉】【过】【你】【,】【你】【就】【是】【我】【心】【中】【那】【只】【蓝】【色】【萤】【火】【虫】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【透】【明】【的】【水】【晶】【折】【射】【出】【缤】【纷】【绚】【烂】【的】【彩】【虹】【,】【美】【丽】【的】【童】【话】【讲】【述】【着】【美】【好】【澄】【澈】【的】【记】【忆】【,】【温】【暖】【的】【友】【谊】【记】【载】【着】【青】【葱】【岁】【月】【里】【彼】【此】【单】【纯】【地】【依】【靠】【。】【小】【作】【者】【如】【诗】【的】【字】【句】【,】【俏】【皮】【的】【语】【言】【,】【也】【仿】【佛】【把】【我】【们】【带】【入】【了】【那】【个】【水】【晶】【般】【纯】【净】【的】【童】【话】【世】【界】【,】【有】【了】【朋】【友】【的】【陪】【伴】【,】【人】【生】【路】【上】【还】【害】【怕】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【落】【单】【的】【丑】【小】【鸭】【,】【因】【为】【朋】【友】【而】【变】【得】【勇】【敢】【起】【来】【,】【失】【去】【了】【钥】【匙】【的】【爱】【丽】【丝】【,】【因】【为】【友】【情】【的】【神】【奇】【而】【拥】【有】【了】【坚】【持】【下】【去】【的】【勇】【气】【,】【孤】【独】【的】【白】【雪】【公】【主】【,】【因】【为】【小】【矮】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【而】【找】【到】【了】【自】【己】【的】【幸】【福】【…】【…】【所】【有】【的】【悲】【伤】【,】【会】【被】【友】【情】【浸】【得】【甜】【甜】【的】【,】【成】【长】【中】【,】【透】【过】【水】【晶】【的】【童】【话】【,】【因】【为】【毫】【无】【瑕】【疵】【的】【关】【爱】【而】【变】【得】【灵】【动】【起】【来】【…】【…】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【韩】【振】【芸】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【点】【拨】【:】【本】【文】【的】【技】【法】【是】【将】【童】【话】【引】【进】【现】【实】【世】【界】【,】【以】【充】【分】【发】【挥】【幻】【想】【性】【故】【事】【的】【心】【理】【慰】【藉】【作】【用】【。】【安】【徒】【生】【说】【过】【,】【我】【的】【童】【年】【只】【有】【孤】【苦】【和】【寂】【寞】【,】【我】【要】【用】【童】【话】【来】【慰】【藉】【天】【下】【孤】【儿】【的】【心】【灵】【。】【童】【话】【是】【富】【有】【幻】【想】【性】【的】【故】【事】【,】【小】【作】【者】【巧】【妙】【地】【将】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【的】【情】【境】【和】【童】【话】【中】【的】【意】【境】【糅】【合】【在】【一】【起】【,】【造】【成】【亦】【真】【亦】【幻】【的】【境】【界】【,】【向】【童】【话】【世】【界】【放】【飞】【心】【灵】【,】【以】【解】【除】【现】【实】【中】【的】【烦】【恼】【。】【在】【构】【思】【上】【可】【谓】【独】【具】【一】【格】【,】【值】【得】【肯】【定】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

任天堂大乱斗wiiu:拥搂外地,美迪惠尔当着到来首位中国男星代言人

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【是】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【北】【京】【市】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【围】【绕】【“】【凝】【聚】【集】【体】【力】【量】【,】【共】【同】【成】【长】【进】【步】【”】【的】【主】【题】【,】【本】【文】【在】【选】【材】【用】【材】【方】【面】【,】【具】【有】【如】【下】【特】【色】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【素】【材】【真】【实】【。】【以】【班】【级】【为】【单】【位】【参】【加】【学】【校】【的】【比】【赛】【,】【成】【绩】【差】【的】【同】【学】【主】【动】【提】【出】【要】【退】【出】【,】【以】【提】【高】【本】【班】【的】【平】【均】【得】【分】【。】【这】【样】【的】【事】【情】【很】【多】【人】【都】【经】【历】【过】【。】【至】【于】【拉】【上】【应】【该】【参】【赛】【的】【全】【体】【同】【学】【,】【特】【别】【是】【没】【有】【信】【心】【参】【赛】【的】【同】【学】【一】【起】【备】【赛】【、】【一】【起】【参】【赛】【,】【经】【历】【这】【类】【事】【情】【的】【人】【也】【不】【在】【少】【数】【。】【本】【文】【所】【选】【材】【料】【,】【就】【是】【作】【者】【自】【我】【经】【历】【的】【材】【料】【,】【非】【常】【真】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【选】【材】【广】【泛】【。】【如】【果】【单】【单】【只】【写】【“】【我】【们】【组】【织】【起】【来】【一】【起】【备】【赛】【”】【这】【个】【故】【事】【未】【尝】【不】【可】【,】【但】【是】【,】【文】【章】【的】【材】【料】【难】【以】【做】【到】【充】【实】【、】【新】【颖】【。】【本】【文】【作】【者】【别】【出】【心】【裁】【地】【选】【取】【了】【与】【主】【题】【密】【切】【相】【关】【的】【一】【个】【事】【物】【,】【用】【向】【日】【葵】【作】【为】【意】【象】【,】【与】【我】【们】【的】【故】【事】【相】【互】【映】【衬】【,】【极】【大】【地】【丰】【富】【了】【文】【章】【的】【材】【料】【库】【,】【充】【实】【了】【文】【章】【内】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【用】【材】【别】【致】【。】【本】【文】【以】【成】【长】【中】【的】【向】【日】【葵】【作】【为】【线】【索】【,】【贯】【穿】【文】【章】【始】【终】【,】【构】【成】【文】【章】【明】【线】【,】【隐】【于】【文】【中】【的】【暗】【线】【是】【我】【对】【“】【凝】【聚】【”】【的】【理】【解】【和】【认】【识】【。】【一】【明】【一】【暗】【,】【两】【条】【线】【索】【相】【互】【交】【织】【,】【脉】【络】【清】【楚】【,】【逐】【步】【揭】【示】【出】【“】【凝】【聚】【”】【的】【意】【义】【,】【使】【主】【题】【更】【加】【深】【刻】【,】【令】【人】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【模】【拟】【金】【题】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阅】【读】【下】【面】【的】【材】【料】【,】【按】【要】【求】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【堂】【美】【术】【课】【想】【象】【画】【,】【老】【师】【要】【求】【学】【生】【画】【“】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【。】【老】【师】【问】【他】【的】【学】【生】【,】【你】【们】【想】【把】【太】【阳】【变】【成】【什】【么】【样】【子】【呢】【?】【大】【家】【畅】【所】【欲】【言】【,】【有】【的】【说】【:】【“】【我】【想】【把】【太】【阳】【变】【皮】【球】【。】【”】【还】【有】【的】【说】【:】【“】【我】【想】【把】【太】【阳】【变】【成】【花】【。】【”】【“】【变】【成】【三】【角】【形】【。】【”】【“】【变】【成】【奥】【特】【曼】【。】【”】【“】【变】【成】【地】【球】【。】【”】【…】【…】【学】【生】【的】【童】【真】【感】【染】【了】【老】【师】【,】【学】【生】【的】【热】【情】【鼓】【舞】【了】【老】【师】【。】【老】【师】【说】【:】【孩】【子】【们】【,】【请】【拿】【起】【你】【手】【中】【的】【笔】【,】【画】【出】【你】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【;】【你】【们】【的】【老】【师】【,】【也】【将】【拿】【起】【笔】【,】【记】【下】【他】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【请】【以】【“】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【为】【题】【,】【结】【合】【社】【会】【生】【活】【、】【学】【校】【生】【活】【、】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【等】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【立】【意】【自】【定】【,】【文】【体】【自】【选】【。】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【思】【路】【导】【引】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【道】【给】【材】【料】【的】【命】【题】【作】【文】【。】【对】【于】【所】【给】【材】【料】【,】【一】【定】【要】【明】【确】【材】【料】【内】【涵】【,】【找】【准】【方】【向】【,】【作】【文】【就】【成】【功】【了】【一】【半】【。】【材】【料】【中】【老】【师】【要】【求】【学】【生】【画】【“】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【的】【故】【事】【,】【给】【了】【我】【们】【许】【多】【有】【益】【的】【启】【示】【:】【每】【个】【人】【心】【中】【都】【有】【一】【颗】【太】【阳】【,】【这】【个】【太】【阳】【在】【每】【个】【人】【心】【中】【都】【有】【不】【同】【的】【意】【义】【。】【太】【阳】【是】【永】【恒】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【幸】【福】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【快】【乐】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【爱】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【你】【的】【理】【想】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【他】【的】【自】【信】【,】【太】【阳】【是】【我】【的】【朋】【友】【…】【…】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【道】【题】【的】【写】【作】【内】【容】【非】【常】【广】【泛】【。】【我】【们】【可】【写】【自】【己】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【的】【事】【,】【写】【自】【己】【在】【人】【生】【旅】【途】【中】【遭】【受】【挫】【折】【、】【失】【败】【、】【困】【惑】【、】【痛】【苦】【等】【方】【面】【后】【,】【为】【了】【“】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【而】【努】【力】【,】【结】【果】【获】【得】【某】【种】【意】【外】【惊】【喜】【;】【也】【可】【写】【身】【边】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【因】【为】【他】【们】【是】【“】【我】【”】【“】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【,】【“】【我】【”】【对】【他】【们】【无】【比】【崇】【敬】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【何】【让】【自】【己】【的】【文】【章】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【充】【实】【呢】【?】【在】【构】【思】【时】【,】【可】【运】【用】【对】【比】【、】【先】【抑】【后】【扬】【、】【巧】【设】【悬】【念】【等】【方】【法】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【一】【波】【三】【折】【,】【将】【自】【己】【人】【生】【道】【路】【上】【经】【历】【辛】【酸】【苦】【辣】【后】【的】【所】【得】【所】【获】【,】【或】【者】【将】【对】【自】【己】【影】【响】【大】【的】【一】【些】【人】【和】【事】【,】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【展】【现】【在】【读】【者】【面】【前】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【一】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【凡】【青】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【晨】【星】【点】【点】【,】【晓】【雾】【朦】【胧】【,】【黎】【明】【前】【的】【沉】【寂】【里】【,】【父】【亲】【与】【我】【走】【在】【崎】【岖】【的】【山】【间】【小】【路】【上】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【,】【让】【我】【来】【挑】【,】【我】【挑】【得】【动】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【挑】【,】【等】【爸】【回】【时】【,】【你】【再】【挑】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【,】【你】【一】【会】【还】【得】【下】【地】【里】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【再】【忙】【,】【也】【得】【送】【你】【上】【车】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【父】【亲】【黑】【黝】【黝】【的】【身】【影】【,】【我】【仿】【佛】【闻】【到】【了】【他】【那】【泛】【着】【父】【爱】【的】【汗】【香】【。】【那】【装】【着】【学】【习】【和】【生】【活】【用】【品】【的】【沉】【重】【的】【蛇】【皮】【袋】【压】【在】【父】【亲】【的】【肩】【上】【,】【好】【像】【压】【在】【我】【的】【心】【头】【。】【父】【亲】【看】【着】【我】【,】【仿】【佛】【有】【什】【么】【东】【西】【在】【揪】【着】【他】【的】【心】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【阵】【风】【儿】【袭】【来】【,】【凉】【气】【逼】【人】【,】【父】【亲】【微】【微】【抖】【动】【了】【一】【下】【身】【躯】【,】【为】【的】【是】【不】【让】【担】【子】【从】【肩】【头】【滑】【落】【。】【我】【的】【心】【剧】【烈】【地】【颤】【动】【了】【一】【下】【,】【想】【起】【了】【父】【亲】【日】【夜】【辛】【劳】【和】【艰】【难】【,】【歙】【动】【了】【一】【下】【嘴】【唇】【,】【欲】【言】【又】【止】【…】【…】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【星】【星】【在】【沉】【默】【中】【闪】【烁】【,】【小】【路】【在】【朦】【胧】【中】【延】【伸】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【看】【看】【天】【,】【低】【头】【瞅】【瞅】【路】【,】【隐】【约】【可】【闻】【潺】【潺】【水】【声】【从】【一】【条】【幽】【暗】【的】【小】【山】【沟】【里】【传】【来】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【,】【你】【回】【吧】【,】【不】【远】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【等】【过】【了】【沟】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【…】【…】【让】【我】【来】【挑】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【走】【吧】【,】【等】【过】【了】【沟】【,】【上】【了】【坡】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沟】【底】【更】【黑】【些】【,】【路】【更】【加】【坎】【坷】【难】【行】【,】【父】【亲】【的】【身】【子】【打】【了】【几】【次】【趔】【趄】【,】【我】【急】【回】【身】【扶】【住】【他】【。】【父】【亲】【上】【了】【坡】【,】【似】【乎】【忘】【记】【了】【刚】【才】【说】【的】【话】【,】【毫】【无】【停】【下】【之】【意】【,】【我】【再】【三】【请】【求】【,】【父】【亲】【只】【好】【依】【从】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【看】【看】【天】【,】【东】【方】【微】【露】【晨】【曦】【;】【放】【眼】【望】【望】【路】【,】【蜿】【蜒】【依】【稀】【可】【辨】【。】【这】【时】【,】【父】【亲】【又】【开】【始】【了】【叮】【嘱】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【走】【路】【要】【小】【心】【,】【挑】【不】【动】【就】【歇】【歇】【脚】【。】【到】【校】【学】【习】【要】【用】【心】【,】【不】【要】【偷】【懒】【。】【不】【懂】【的】【要】【多】【问】【…】【…】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【的】【话】【,】【像】【习】【习】【晨】【风】【,】【拂】【过】【耳】【畔】【;】【像】【潺】【潺】【溪】【流】【,】【滋】【润】【心】【田】【。】【我】【心】【里】【顿】【时】【像】【涨】【了】【潮】【:】【“】【我】【记】【下】【了】【,】【爸】【,】【你】【回】【吧】【!】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迎】【着】【晨】【风】【,】【我】【挑】【着】【担】【子】【快】【快】【走】【了】【一】【程】【,】【忍】【不】【住】【回】【头】【看】【了】【一】【眼】【:】【哦】【,】【父】【亲】【还】【站】【在】【那】【儿】【凝】【望】【着】【我】【。】【一】【阵】【晨】【风】【撩】【动】【父】【亲】【蓬】【松】【的】【头】【发】【,】【一】【片】【灿】【烂】【霞】【光】【拥】【着】【父】【亲】【,】【父】【亲】【恰】【似】【一】【轮】【金】【色】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【光】【芒】【四】【射】【—】【—】【 】【平】【凡】【而】【伟】【大】【的】【父】【亲】【,】【他】【也】【是】【我】【心】【中】【永】【远】【不】【落】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【赞】【美】【父】【亲】【、】【写】【父】【爱】【的】【伟】【大】【,】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【很】【多】【,】【材】【料】【也】【比】【较】【旧】【,】【很】【难】【写】【出】【新】【意】【来】【。】【可】【本】【文】【的】【作】【者】【,】【却】【能】【推】【陈】【出】【新】【,】【把】【一】【个】【老】【的】【话】【题】【写】【得】【这】【样】【富】【有】【新】【意】【。】【这】【主】【要】【得】【力】【于】【文】【章】【精】【彩】【的】【景】【物】【描】【写】【。】【景】【为】【写】【人】【做】【了】【铺】【垫】【,】【景】【物】【刻】【画】【很】【细】【微】【,】【能】【从】【中】【感】【悟】【出】【作】【者】【的】【生】【活】【体】【验】【,】【写】【景】【能】【很】【从】【容】【地】【收】【笔】【,】【很】【自】【然】【地】【过】【渡】【到】【人】【物】【,】【没】【有】【嫁】【接】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【本】【文】【的】【语】【言】【很】【有】【特】【色】【,】【散】【文】【化】【的】【语】【言】【中】【,】【夹】【有】【不】【成】【章】【法】【的】【散】【句】【,】【使】【文】【章】【的】【节】【奏】【有】【了】【舒】【缓】【的】【张】【弛】【。】【父】【亲】【的】【形】【象】【如】【同】【电】【影】【中】【的】【特】【写】【一】【般】【,】【定】【格】【在】【读】【者】【眼】【前】【,】【给】【人】【很】【深】【的】【印】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沈】【乔】【影】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【,】【是】【我】【生】【命】【中】【最】【重】【要】【的】【部】【分】【,】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【友】【。】【书】【可】【以】【呼】【唤】【出】【千】【百】【年】【前】【的】【古】【人】【,】【让】【他】【们】【为】【我】【深】【情】【地】【讲】【述】【上】【下】【五】【千】【年】【的】【故】【事】【。】【书】【可】【以】【为】【我】【排】【忧】【解】【难】【:】【遭】【遇】【挫】【折】【时】【,】【《】【钢】【铁】【是】【怎】【样】【炼】【成】【的】【》】【能】【给】【我】【勇】【气】【和】【力】【量】【,】【使】【我】【像】【保】【尔】【那】【样】【顽】【强】【而】【乐】【观】【;】【心】【烦】【意】【乱】【时】【,】【《】【安】【徒】【生】【童】【话】【》】【会】【让】【我】【充】【满】【信】【心】【,】【坚】【信】【丑】【小】【鸭】【终】【会】【变】【成】【白】【天】【鹅】【;】【得】【意】【忘】【形】【时】【,】【《】【名】【句】【荟】【萃】【》】【又】【使】【我】【谦】【虚】【而】【警】【醒】【,】【因】【为】【“】【虚】【心】【使】【人】【进】【步】【,】【骄】【傲】【使】【人】【落】【后】【。】【”】【…】【…】【无】【论】【何】【时】【,】【书】【都】【是】【我】【值】【得】【信】【赖】【的】【朋】【友】【,】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【师】【。】【它】【总】【是】【无】【声】【地】【等】【我】【去】【问】【问】【题】【。】【即】【使】【有】【一】【千】【个】【、】【一】【万】【个】【问】【题】【,】【它】【也】【从】【不】【感】【到】【厌】【烦】【。】【天】【文】【、】【地】【理】【、】【语】【文】【、】【数】【学】【、】【音】【乐】【、】【美】【术】【…】【…】【无】【数】【个】【疑】【问】【,】【只】【要】【找】【到】【它】【,】【书】【都】【会】【给】【我】【答】【案】【。】【人】【说】【老】【师】【似】【春】【风】【化】【雨】【滋】【润】【万】【物】【,】【书】【又】【何】【尝】【不】【是】【?】【人】【说】【老】【师】【似】【蜡】【炬】【成】【灰】【,】【书】【又】【何】【尝】【不】【是】【?】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【翻】【,】【一】【本】【又】【一】【本】【烂】【,】【可】【在】【我】【需】【要】【它】【的】【时】【候】【,】【它】【又】【何】【曾】【有】【过】【一】【句】【怨】【言】【?】【一】【年】【一】【年】【,】【它】【像】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【的】【良】【师】【,】【解】【开】【了】【我】【一】【个】【又】【一】【个】【的】【疑】【团】【,】【它】【像】【太】【阳】【一】【样】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【每】【一】【个】【角】【落】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【舟】【。】【“】【书】【山】【有】【路】【勤】【为】【径】【,】【学】【海】【无】【涯】【‘】【书】【’】【作】【舟】【。】【”】【是】【书】【载】【着】【一】【个】【个】【渴】【望】【成】【功】【的】【学】【子】【,】【驶】【向】【知】【识】【的】【彼】【岸】【。】【书】【,】【是】【数】【学】【之】【舟】【,】【使】【我】【思】【维】【变】【得】【精】【密】【,】【载】【我】【驶】【向】【数】【字】【的】【王】【国】【;】【书】【,】【是】【语】【文】【之】【舟】【,】【使】【我】【知】【识】【渊】【博】【,】【载】【我】【驶】【向】【文】【学】【的】【殿】【堂】【;】【书】【,】【是】【诺】【亚】【方】【舟】【,】【使】【我】【心】【忧】【天】【下】【,】【载】【我】【驶】【向】【和】【平】【的】【天】【堂】【。】【书】【在】【我】【的】【心】【中】【越】【发】【的】【神】【圣】【,】【它】【是】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【火】【。】【无】【论】【是】【牙】【牙】【学】【语】【的】【孩】【童】【,】【还】【是】【秉】【烛】【夜】【读】【的】【老】【人】【,】【它】【总】【是】【敞】【开】【胸】【怀】【,】【热】【情】【地】【迎】【接】【你】【,】【保】【证】【你】【满】【载】【而】【归】【。】【书】【是】【永】【不】【熄】【灭】【的】【火】【,】【温】【暖】【了】【我】【的】【人】【生】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【我】【的】【前】【程】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【如】【海】【。】【只】【要】【你】【捧】【起】【了】【第】【一】【本】【书】【,】【你】【便】【会】【发】【现】【,】【海】【洋】【尚】【有】【尽】【头】【,】【书】【却】【无】【边】【无】【际】【,】【包】【罗】【万】【象】【。】【我】【愿】【一】【辈】【子】【在】【其】【中】【泅】【渡】【,】【无】【怨】【无】【悔】【。】【书】【如】【人】【生】【。】【书】【中】【记】【载】【了】【前】【人】【、】【今】【人】【的】【喜】【怒】【哀】【乐】【、】【成】【败】【得】【失】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【书】【,】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【明】【火】【,】【我】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【你】【为】【我】【白】【纸】【般】【的】【人】【生】【涂】【满】【斑】【斓】【的】【色】【彩】【,】【你】【使】【我】【短】【暂】【的】【人】【生】【变】【成】【永】【恒】【,】【你】【让】【我】【平】【淡】【的】【人】【生】【洒】【满】【太】【阳】【的】【光】【辉】【。】【我】【爱】【你】【呀】【,】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【—】【—】【书】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【以】【“】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【为】【线】【索】【,】【用】【“】【书】【如】【友】【”】【,】【“】【书】【如】【师】【”】【等】【结】【构】【全】【文】【,】【很】【有】【层】【次】【感】【,】【体】【现】【了】【散】【文】【“】【形】【散】【而】【神】【不】【散】【”】【的】【特】【点】【,】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【对】【书】【的】【热】【爱】【和】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【作】【者】【具】【有】【较】【强】【的】【写】【作】【基】【本】【功】【,】【文】【章】【语】【言】【精】【练】【、】【优】【美】【,】【多】【用】【排】【比】【句】【,】【增】【强】【了】【文】【章】【的】【表】【达】【气】【势】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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