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于澍龙:[爱的弧度] 三年级作文

2019年11月14日 12:09

【<】【p】【>】【雨】【还】【一】【直】【不】【停】【地】【下】【,】【生】【活】【还】【在】【继】【续】【,】【我】【一】【定】【会】【更】【加】【努】【力】【,】【更】【加】【拼】【搏】【。】【L】【 】【b】【e】【l】【i】【e】【v】【e】【 】【l】【 】【c】【a】【n】【 】【d】【o】【 】【i】【t】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【时】【代】【在】【发】【展】【,】【科】【技】【在】【进】【步】【,】【现】【今】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【水】【平】【和】【环】【境】【都】【已】【明】【显】【改】【善】【,】【物】【质】【生】【活】【愈】【丰】【富】【。】【于】【是】【,】【孩】【子】【便】【受】【尽】【宠】【爱】【和】【保】【护】【,】【在】【温】【室】【中】【自】【我】【,】【自】【制】【能】【力】【得】【不】【到】【提】【高】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】于澍龙【<】【p】【>】【记】【忆】【中】【的】【暖】【是】【淡】【淡】【茶】【香】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【是】【一】【只】【飞】【蛾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【爸】【爸】【妈】【妈】【在】【我】【面】【前】【纵】【身】【扑】【火】【。】【那】【时】【的】【我】【还】【不】【能】【飞】【起】【,】【叔】【叔】【在】【我】【身】【边】【说】【:】【“】【看】【见】【没】【有】【,】【火】【是】【可】【怕】【的】【东】【西】【,】【离】【它】【远】【点】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【叔】【叔】【的】【眼】【泪】【很】【轻】【,】【像】【羽】【毛】【,】【我】【知】【道】【他】【很】【伤】【心】【,】【因】【为】【我】【的】【爸】【妈】【,】【选】【择】【了】【跳】【入】【火】【海】【;】【我】【知】【道】【叔】【叔】【也】【很】【害】【怕】【,】【害】【怕】【我】【也】【去】【死】【,】【他】【托】【着】【我】【,】【离】【开】【了】【故】【乡】【,】【来】【到】【了】【一】【个】【很】【黑】【、】【很】【冷】【、】【没】【有】【一】【丝】【火】【苗】【的】【地】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【,】【我】【长】【大】【了】【,】【有】【时】【候】【会】【请】【求】【叔】【叔】【让】【我】【去】【故】【乡】【看】【看】【,】【叔】【叔】【一】【直】【不】【肯】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【在】【蛾】【儿】【们】【的】【传】【言】【中】【,】【对】【那】【个】【很】【多】【很】【多】【同】【类】【都】【愿】【意】【为】【之】【死】【亡】【的】【东】【西】【开】【始】【感】【兴】【趣】【:】【它】【到】【底】【是】【什】【么】【?】【究】【竟】【有】【什】【么】【魅】【力】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【我】【做】【出】【要】【去】【看】【看】【的】【决】【定】【,】【却】【被】【年】【迈】【的】【叔】【叔】【一】【口】【否】【决】【:】【不】【可】【以】【!】【绝】【对】【不】【可】【以】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【叔】【叔】【,】【请】【让】【我】【去】【,】【我】【想】【看】【看】【我】【的】【故】【乡】【,】【也】【想】【去】【看】【看】【那】【个】【神】【奇】【的】【东】【西】【,】【我】【真】【的】【很】【想】【去】【看】【看】【,】【它】【究】【竟】【有】【什】【么】【魔】【力】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【心】【里】【,】【有】【种】【隐】【隐】【的】【冲】【动】【,】【感】【觉】【被】【什】【么】【东】【西】【牵】【引】【着】【,】【并】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【去】【吧】【,】【那】【里】【有】【十】【分】【美】【妙】【的】【东】【西】【,】【它】【能】【让】【你】【看】【透】【世】【上】【的】【一】【切】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【叔】【叔】【默】【不】【做】【声】【,】【口】【中】【喃】【喃】【说】【:】【“】【别】【去】【了】【,】【去】【了】【的】【话】【,】【也】【许】【…】【…】【也】【许】【你】【就】【爱】【上】【它】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【那】【个】【伸】【手】【不】【见】【五】【指】【的】【夜】【里】【,】【我】【偷】【偷】【飞】【了】【出】【去】【,】【“】【叔】【叔】【,】【对】【不】【起】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【远】【的】【前】【方】【,】【露】【出】【点】【点】【光】【亮】【,】【我】【被】【这】【美】【妙】【的】【光】【亮】【吸】【引】【,】【飞】【得】【越】【来】【越】【快】【,】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【来】【到】【了】【它】【的】【面】【前】【,】【那】【一】【瞬】【间】【,】【我】【惊】【住】【了】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【簇】【火】【苗】【,】【热】【烈】【地】【燃】【烧】【着】【,】【迸】【出】【点】【点】【火】【花】【,】【它】【尽】【情】【地】【舞】【蹈】【,】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【再】【也】【无】【法】【控】【制】【自】【己】【的】【翅】【膀】【,】【纵】【身】【向】【它】【扑】【去】【—】【—】【它】【太】【美】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【不】【!】【”】【不】【知】【什】【么】【时】【候】【,】【叔】【叔】【跟】【了】【过】【来】【,】【他】【挡】【在】【我】【的】【前】【面】【,】【“】【你】【想】【干】【什】【么】【?】【!】【去】【死】【吗】【?】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【叔】【叔】【,】【让】【我】【去】【好】【吗】【?】【我】【已】【经】【认】【定】【,】【它】【就】【是】【我】【的】【故】【乡】【了】【,】【我】【必】【须】【在】【那】【里】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【是】【可】【怕】【的】【东】【西】【,】【你】【会】【死】【的】【!】【”】【叔】【叔】【拼】【命】【拍】【打】【着】【薄】【翼】【,】【企】【图】【引】【起】【我】【的】【注】【意】【,】【扑】【散】【我】【眼】【中】【迷】【离】【的】【大】【雾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【叔】【叔】【,】【让】【我】【去】【吧】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【冲】【过】【去】【,】【纵】【身】【一】【跃】【,】【火】【苗】【染】【上】【我】【的】【翅】【膀】【,】【我】【在】【火】【海】【里】【幸】【福】【地】【笑】【了】【,】【也】【许】【,】【这】【才】【是】【我】【要】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【叔】【叔】【,】【你】【看】【,】【我】【是】【不】【是】【很】【美】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【张】【玲】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】于澍龙【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【代】【社】【会】【中】【,】【“】【进】【”】【似】【乎】【已】【成】【了】【人】【们】【生】【命】【的】【常】【态】【。】【更】【大】【的】【利】【益】【,】【更】【多】【的】【胜】【利】【,】【更】【高】【的】【地】【位】【,】【才】【能】【支】【持】【起】【一】【个】【人】【对】【自】【身】【价】【值】【的】【认】【定】【。】【“】【退】【”】【的】【智】【慧】【几】【乎】【被】【弃】【置】【一】【旁】【,】【然】【而】【有】【时】【候】【,】【一】【点】【让】【步】【可】【以】【让】【生】【活】【更】【加】【美】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【点】【让】【步】【,】【让】【出】【共】【赢】【的】【皆】【大】【欢】【喜】【。】【捍】【卫】【自】【己】【的】【利】【益】【,】【固】【然】【是】【人】【的】【天】【性】【,】【然】【而】【如】【果】【一】【味】【占】【据】【着】【一】【己】【私】【利】【,】【甚】【至】【不】【惜】【损】【毁】【对】【方】【的】【利】【益】【,】【人】【就】【难】【免】【沦】【为】【“】【丛】【林】【法】【则】【”】【操】【纵】【下】【的】【木】【偶】【,】【盲】【目】【拼】【得】【两】【败】【俱】【伤】【,】【又】【怎】【能】【实】【现】【利】【益】【最】【大】【化】【?】【让】【出】【三】【尺】【地】【盘】【,】【便】【成】【就】【了】【“】【六】【尺】【巷】【”】【的】【千】【古】【美】【谈】【;】【让】【出】【几】【分】【利】【润】【,】【便】【有】【了】【“】【管】【鲍】【分】【金】【”】【的】【佳】【话】【。】【让】【出】【一】【些】【私】【利】【,】【便】【可】【以】【彼】【此】【保】【全】【,】【彼】【此】【不】【伤】【不】【毁】【,】【在】【尝】【得】【共】【赢】【的】【甜】【美】【时】【,】【也】【获】【得】【了】【对】【方】【的】【一】【份】【尊】【重】【,】【获】【得】【内】【心】【由】【“】【营】【私】【”】【向】【“】【为】【公】【”】【转】【变】【时】【的】【一】【份】【喜】【悦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【点】【让】【步】【,】【让】【出】【理】【解】【的】【相】【知】【相】【惜】【。】【智】【者】【说】【:】【“】【每】【个】【人】【都】【是】【自】【己】【那】【片】【小】【土】【地】【上】【的】【国】【王】【。】【”】【所】【谓】【国】【王】【,】【当】【然】【带】【着】【一】【些】【专】【制】【的】【色】【彩】【,】【对】【于】【那】【些】【与】【自】【己】【不】【合】【的】【观】【点】【,】【总】【有】【些】【听】【不】【顺】【耳】【。】【无】【论】【是】【谁】【,】【总】【是】【希】【望】【别】【人】【赞】【同】【自】【己】【,】【争】【辩】【时】【的】【寸】【步】【不】【让】【,】【却】【很】【容】【易】【成】【为】【决】【裂】【的】【导】【火】【索】【。】【台】【湾】【著】【名】【主】【持】【人】【蔡】【康】【永】【一】【向】【以】【说】【话】【圆】【润】【、】【将】【睿】【智】【藏】【于】【温】【润】【中】【为】【特】【色】【,】【与】【风】【格】【辛】【辣】【的】【搭】【档】【相】【比】【,】【他】【懂】【得】【“】【打】【圆】【场】【”】【的】【艺】【术】【。】【观】【点】【交】【锋】【时】【,】【他】【能】【既】【传】【达】【出】【自】【己】【的】【理】【念】【,】【也】【不】【损】【伤】【对】【方】【的】【面】【子】【。】【在】【谈】【及】【说】【话】【之】【道】【时】【,】【他】【称】【那】【些】【争】【论】【中】【的】【占】【上】【风】【为】【“】【无】【谓】【的】【胜】【利】【”】【,】【不】【如】【将】【其】【送】【给】【对】【手】【,】【换】【得】【自】【己】【的】【大】【度】【。】【思】【想】【碰】【撞】【中】【,】【做】【出】【一】【点】【让】【步】【,】【各】【自】【为】【自】【己】【的】【真】【主】【而】【不】【妄】【图】【成】【为】【别】【人】【的】【神】【,】【为】【不】【同】【的】【思】【想】【让】【出】【一】【个】【共】【存】【的】【空】【间】【来】【,】【彼】【此】【间】【的】【理】【解】【也】【会】【更】【深】【刻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【点】【让】【步】【,】【让】【出】【心】【境】【的】【安】【平】【和】【顺】【。】【生】【活】【给】【我】【们】【设】【置】【了】【那】【么】【多】【的】【关】【隘】【,】【有】【时】【候】【硬】【梗】【着】【脖】【子】【,】【也】【许】【会】【被】【磕】【得】【头】【破】【血】【流】【;】【稍】【低】【一】【低】【头】【,】【让】【出】【一】【些】【傲】【气】【,】【便】【能】【安】【然】【渡】【过】【难】【关】【。】【“】【文】【革】【”】【时】【一】【位】【老】【音】【乐】【家】【被】【下】【放】【到】【农】【村】【铡】【草】【,】【“】【文】【革】【”】【结】【束】【后】【,】【人】【们】【都】【以】【为】【他】【被】【折】【磨】【得】【毫】【无】【生】【气】【了】【,】【可】【他】【却】【又】【神】【采】【奕】【奕】【地】【投】【入】【到】【音】【乐】【创】【作】【中】【去】【。】【问】【及】【他】【保】【持】【心】【态】【的】【原】【因】【时】【,】【他】【说】【:】【“】【我】【铡】【草】【的】【时】【候】【都】【是】【按】【4】【/】【4】【拍】【铡】【的】【。】【”】【如】【果】【当】【初】【他】【不】【懂】【得】【做】【出】【让】【步】【,】【或】【许】【已】【经】【结】【束】【生】【命】【来】【证】【明】【自】【己】【的】【清】【白】【,】【或】【许】【已】【经】【在】【怨】【天】【尤】【人】【时】【被】【沉】【重】【的】【劳】【动】【压】【垮】【。】【面】【对】【逆】【境】【时】【做】【出】【一】【些】【让】【步】【,】【用】【一】【颗】【平】【和】【的】【心】【来】【承】【担】【山】【重】【水】【复】【的】【艰】【辛】【,】【或】【许】【能】【等】【来】【柳】【暗】【花】【明】【的】【未】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【中】【有】【时】【“】【退】【”】【比】【“】【进】【”】【更】【加】【困】【难】【,】【然】【而】【我】【们】【如】【果】【懂】【得】【让】【步】【,】【生】【活】【也】【许】【会】【回】【报】【给】【我】【们】【更】【多】【的】【惊】【喜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【综】【合】【评】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【两】【篇】【议】【论】【文】【善】【于】【选】【择】【当】【代】【典】【型】【的】【事】【例】【作】【论】【据】【。】【文】【一】【将】【眼】【前】【发】【生】【的】【美】【韩】【军】【事】【演】【习】【事】【件】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【;】【文】【二】【则】【举】【出】【“】【文】【革】【”】【时】【一】【位】【老】【音】【乐】【家】【的】【生】【活】【智】【慧】【,】【这】【两】【例】【都】【能】【成】【为】【论】【点】【的】【有】【力】【支】【撑】【。】【两】【文】【都】【注】【重】【由】【事】【析】【理】【,】【文】【一】【引】【蔺】【相】【如】【例】【后】【连】【用】【三】【个】【“】【是】【”】【剖】【析】【事】【件】【的】【本】【质】【;】【文】【二】【引】【“】【六】【尺】【巷】【”】【“】【管】【鲍】【分】【金】【”】【等】【例】【后】【,】【从】【“】【尊】【重】【”】【和】【“】【内】【心】【由】【‘】【营】【私】【’】【向】【‘】【为】【公】【’】【转】【变】【”】【的】【角】【度】【进】【一】【步】【说】【理】【,】【都】【远】【离】【了】【“】【事】【”】【与】【“】【理】【”】【油】【水】【分】【离】【的】【误】【区】【;】【两】【文】【都】【善】【于】【形】【象】【说】【理】【,】【不】【说】【“】【和】【平】【美】【丽】【的】【生】【活】【”】【而】【说】【“】【云】【开】【雨】【霁】【后】【的】【彩】【虹】【”】【;】【不】【说】【“】【寸】【步】【不】【让】【”】【而】【说】【“】【妄】【图】【成】【为】【别】【人】【的】【神】【”】【,】【从】【而】【使】【文】【章】【避】【免】【了】【枯】【燥】【说】【教】【。】【选】【例】【的】【当】【代】【色】【彩】【、】【用】【例】【的】【论】【证】【色】【彩】【和】【用】【语】【的】【文】【学】【色】【彩】【往】【往】【是】【中】【学】【生】【写】【作】【议】【论】【文】【的】【弱】【项】【,】【两】【文】【为】【我】【们】【提】【供】【了】【学】【习】【的】【范】【例】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【曹】【津】【源】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

于澍龙:燃灯者的风骨

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【一】【个】【卖】【氢】【气】【球】【的】【男】【人】【。】【他】【极】【瘦】【,】【一】【件】【蓝】【色】【军】【大】【衣】【穿】【在】【身】【上】【有】【些】【晃】【荡】【,】【他】【骑】【的】【自】【行】【车】【也】【旧】【了】【,】【发】【出】【“】【吱】【呀】【”】【的】【响】【声】【。】【在】【自】【行】【车】【的】【后】【座】【上】【,】【整】【齐】【地】【束】【着】【几】【十】【只】【气】【球】【,】【簇】【成】【一】【个】【五】【彩】【大】【花】【篮】【,】【高】【昂】【的】【气】【势】【几】【乎】【把】【它】【们】【的】【主】【人】【给】【吞】【没】【了】【。】【但】【气】【球】【是】【过】【时】【的】【玩】【意】【儿】【,】【似】【乎】【无】【人】【问】【津】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【一】【个】【收】【废】【品】【的】【女】【人】【。】【她】【一】【个】【人】【拉】【着】【一】【辆】【装】【满】【杂】【物】【的】【板】【车】【,】【头】【深】【埋】【,】【弓】【着】【脊】【背】【,】【慢】【慢】【挪】【动】【双】【脚】【。】【然】【而】【,】【她】【时】【不】【时】【地】【会】【转】【过】【头】【来】【,】【爱】【怜】【地】【向】【车】【上】【看】【去】【—】【—】【车】【上】【正】【睡】【着】【她】【三】【四】【岁】【的】【孩】【子】【。】【她】【用】【疲】【惫】【但】【温】【柔】【的】【目】【光】【看】【着】【孩】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【灯】【亮】【起】【,】【两】【人】【在】【同】【一】【车】【道】【上】【停】【住】【了】【脚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【气】【炎】【热】【,】【鸣】【蝉】【聒】【噪】【。】【板】【车】【上】【的】【孩】【子】【不】【大】【舒】【服】【地】【翻】【了】【个】【身】【。】【男】【人】【正】【从】【车】【篮】【里】【取】【杯】【喝】【茶】【,】【看】【见】【孩】【子】【,】【他】【的】【手】【就】【不】【动】【了】【,】【惊】【讶】【又】【和】【蔼】【地】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【。】【笑】【容】【凝】【在】【他】【饱】【经】【沧】【桑】【的】【眼】【角】【,】【几】【分】【失】【神】【,】【几】【分】【陶】【醉】【,】【是】【想】【起】【家】【中】【也】【有】【一】【个】【如】【此】【可】【爱】【的】【小】【天】【使】【了】【吗】【?】【女】【人】【发】【现】【了】【陌】【生】【人】【的】【注】【视】【,】【转】【过】【身】【,】【她】【发】【现】【了】【卖】【气】【球】【的】【男】【人】【,】【友】【好】【地】【点】【点】【头】【,】【也】【轻】【轻】【地】【微】【笑】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【风】【拂】【过】【,】【路】【旁】【的】【梧】【桐】【摇】【曳】【起】【一】【树】【的】【青】【绿】【。】【忽】【然】【,】【那】【男】【人】【像】【是】【想】【起】【了】【什】【么】【,】【急】【急】【地】【拔】【下】【一】【只】【气】【球】【来】【,】【举】【到】【那】【女】【人】【面】【前】【:】【“】【拿】【着】【吧】【,】【给】【孩】【子】【玩】【玩】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【两】【人】【的】【目】【光】【交】【会】【了】【。】【那】【一】【刹】【那】【,】【女】【人】【的】【眼】【里】【亮】【晶】【晶】【的】【,】【有】【什】【么】【东】【西】【在】【闪】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【绿】【灯】【亮】【起】【,】【车】【流】【又】【开】【始】【涌】【动】【。】【男】【人】【骑】【远】【了】【,】【女】【人】【埋】【下】【头】【拉】【车】【前】【行】【,】【只】【是】【车】【把】【手】【上】【多】【了】【一】【只】【鲜】【红】【的】【气】【球】【,】【随】【风】【微】【微】【摆】【动】【。】【车】【上】【,】【孩】【子】【仍】【睡】【着】【,】【脸】【红】【红】【的】【,】【嘴】【角】【挂】【着】【笑】【,】【像】【是】【刚】【做】【了】【一】【个】【顽】【皮】【的】【梦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【—】【—】【 】【一】【个】【旁】【观】【者】【,】【却】【在】【这】【街】【口】【伫】【立】【了】【许】【久】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【为】【什】【么】【,】【我】【想】【起】【了】【曾】【在】【寺】【庙】【中】【见】【过】【的】【菩】【萨】【,】【他】【也】【是】【这】【样】【垂】【眼】【望】【着】【人】【们】【,】【以】【仁】【慈】【怜】【悯】【的】【目】【光】【。】【只】【是】【不】【同】【的】【是】【,】【一】【个】【在】【香】【烟】【缭】【绕】【中】【对】【着】【虔】【诚】【的】【信】【徒】【,】【一】【个】【于】【生】【活】【束】【缚】【里】【面】【对】【于】【自】【己】【一】【样】【的】【人】【罢】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【是】【下】【班】【的】【高】【峰】【,】【人】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【一】【个】【个】【急】【匆】【匆】【地】【掠】【过】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【。】【都】【市】【依】【旧】【喧】【嚣】【,】【车】【水】【马】【龙】【的】【声】【响】【四】【起】【,】【没】【有】【人】【知】【道】【,】【刚】【才】【发】【生】【了】【一】【个】【多】【么】【美】【丽】【的】【故】【事】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【有】【时】【,】【我】【们】【应】【该】【放】【慢】【追】【逐】【的】【脚】【步】【,】【俯】【下】【寻】【找】【名】【利】【的】【头】【,】【向】【下】【看】【,】【看】【那】【些】【在】【红】【尘】【的】【一】【隅】【默】【默】【开】【放】【的】【花】【,】【目】【光】【交】【会】【中】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【一】【份】【动】【人】【心】【魄】【的】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【的】【成】【功】【之】【处】【就】【是】【捕】【捉】【到】【了】【生】【活】【中】【的】【活】【鱼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【静】【态】【的】【事】【物】【好】【写】【,】【动】【态】【的】【东】【西】【就】【难】【写】【了】【。】【纵】【观】【学】【生】【作】【文】【,】【大】【部】【分】【写】【的】【都】【是】【“】【已】【经】【发】【生】【”】【的】【,】【而】【不】【是】【“】【正】【在】【发】【生】【”】【的】【。】【这】【和】【我】【们】【缺】【少】【“】【抓】【拍】【”】【的】【意】【识】【和】【能】【力】【有】【关】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【抓】【拍】【”】【是】【摄】【影】【上】【的】【名】【词】【,】【即】【拍】【摄】【对】【象】【是】【突】【发】【的】【、】【偶】【遇】【的】【,】【而】【不】【是】【相】【对】【静】【止】【的】【、】【事】【先】【摆】【布】【好】【的】【,】【它】【们】【就】【像】【是】【生】【活】【中】【的】【活】【鱼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【写】【的】【事】【情】【很】【小】【很】【小】【,】【容】【易】【被】【人】【忽】【略】【。】【首】【先】【,】【这】【两】【个】【人】【,】【一】【个】【是】【卖】【气】【球】【的】【,】【一】【个】【是】【收】【废】【品】【的】【,】【他】【们】【在】【许】【多】【人】【眼】【里】【是】【不】【屑】【一】【顾】【的】【,】【在】【繁】【华】【的】【都】【市】【绝】【不】【会】【引】【人】【注】【目】【。】【但】【是】【作】【者】【对】【他】【们】【有】【着】【仔】【细】【的】【长】【久】【的】【观】【察】【,】【并】【被】【他】【们】【之】【间】【细】【小】【的】【举】【动】【所】【感】【动】【。】【这】【是】【一】【种】【可】【贵】【的】【平】【民】【意】【识】【和】【人】【文】【情】【怀】【啊】【!】【我】【不】【知】【道】【缪】【建】【华】【同】【学】【写】【作】【此】【文】【是】【否】【受】【了】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【《】【一】【件】【小】【事】【》】【的】【影】【响】【。】【在】【今】【天】【这】【个】【明】【星】【大】【腕】【吸】【引】【大】【众】【眼】【球】【的】【时】【代】【,】【能】【够】【给】【小】【人】【物】【一】【份】【同】【情】【和】【关】【爱】【,】【显】【得】【多】【么】【可】【贵】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【平】【缓】【的】【叙】【述】【中】【饱】【含】【着】【深】【情】【,】【细】【致】【的】【描】【绘】【中】【浸】【透】【了】【挚】【爱】【。】【最】【后】【伫】【立】【街】【头】【,】【作】【者】【的】【思】【绪】【却】【随】【着】【那】【两】【个】【人】【飘】【向】【远】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【能】【够】【捕】【捉】【到】【生】【活】【中】【的】【活】【鱼】【,】【固】【然】【需】【要】【有】【敏】【锐】【的】【目】【光】【,】【必】【要】【的】【技】【巧】【,】【但】【是】【如】【果】【心】【中】【无】【人】【,】【缺】【少】【怜】【悯】【之】【心】【,】【缺】【少】【纯】【真】【之】【情】【,】【也】【难】【以】【将】【“】【活】【鱼】【”】【捕】【捉】【到】【手】【。】【文】【章】【最】【后】【一】【段】【就】【表】【达】【了】【这】【样】【的】【意】【思】【。】【年】【纪】【虽】【小】【,】【却】【对】【世】【风】【有】【着】【自】【己】【的】【认】【识】【。】【的】【确】【,】【眼】【睛】【向】【上】【,】【忙】【于】【对】【名】【利】【的】【追】【逐】【,】【对】【底】【层】【民】【众】【的】【不】【屑】【,】【正】【是】【当】【下】【许】【多】【人】【的】【生】【存】【状】【态】【。】【他】【把】【这】【个】【红】【气】【球】【的】【故】【事】【喻】【为】【“】【红】【尘】【的】【一】【隅】【默】【默】【开】【放】【的】【花】【”】【,】【是】【“】【 】【一】【份】【动】【人】【心】【魄】【的】【美】【”】【,】【这】【一】【结】【尾】【,】【无】【疑】【也】【就】【提】【升】【了】【文】【章】【的】【整】【体】【品】【格】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【题】【目】【原】【先】【是】【“】【街】【头】【一】【瞥】【”】【,】【是】【个】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【。】【许】【多】【人】【都】【觉】【得】【没】【啥】【可】【写】【,】【于】【是】【就】【只】【好】【写】【些】【车】【祸】【发】【生】【、】【小】【偷】【行】【窃】【、】【幼】【童】【乞】【讨】【之】【类】【的】【事】【儿】【,】【甚】【至】【编】【造】【警】【匪】【大】【战】【的】【故】【事】【。】【那】【些】【事】【也】【确】【实】【存】【在】【于】【生】【活】【之】【中】【,】【但】【毕】【竟】【不】【能】【给】【人】【以】【美】【感】【,】【而】【这】【篇】【《】【红】【气】【球】【》】【却】【能】【使】【我】【们】【的】【心】【灵】【产】【生】【一】【丝】【颤】【动】【,】【也】【给】【我】【们】【的】【写】【作】【带】【来】【一】【些】【启】【示】【。】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】于澍龙【<】【p】【>】【树】【立】【远】【大】【的】【理】【想】【,】【能】【够】【让】【我】【们】【目】【标】【清】【晰】【,】【三】【国】【时】【期】【著】【名】【军】【事】【与】【文】【学】【家】【,】【一】【代】【奸】【雄】【曹】【操】【曾】【说】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【大】【志】【与】【良】【谋】【,】【大】【志】【是】【个】【首】【要】【条】【件】【。】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【曹】【操】【立】【志】【乱】【世】【,】【这】【个】【理】【想】【引】【领】【他】【前】【进】【,】【虽】【然】【在】【这】【个】【理】【想】【的】【路】【上】【,】【曹】【操】【经】【历】【了】【失】【败】【与】【挫】【折】【,】【但】【他】【没】【有】【退】【缩】【,】【远】【大】【的】【理】【想】【激】【励】【着】【他】【,】【甚】【至】【于】【塑】【造】【曹】【操】【伟】【人】【一】【般】【的】【毅】【力】【,】【有】【了】【毅】【力】【与】【动】【力】【,】【难】【道】【离】【实】【现】【自】【己】【的】【理】【想】【还】【会】【远】【吗】【?】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【我】【到】【了】【4】【岁】【时】【还】【不】【会】【数】【数】【,】【爸】【爸】【带】【我】【到】【幼】【儿】【园】【报】【名】【时】【对】【老】【师】【说】【:】【“】【这】【孩】【子】【笨】【得】【很】【,】【连】【个】【数】【都】【不】【会】【数】【,】【就】【喜】【欢】【登】【高】【爬】【梯】【的】【。】【老】【师】【,】【今】【后】【可】【要】【多】【麻】【烦】【你】【了】【。】【”】【老】【师】【低】【头】【看】【看】【我】【,】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【小】【脑】【瓜】【儿】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【放】【心】【吧】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【周】【过】【去】【了】【,】【老】【师】【教】【的】【数】【字】【,】【连】【同】【那】【些】【歌】【呀】【舞】【呀】【,】【我】【一】【样】【不】【少】【地】【全】【都】【还】【给】【了】【老】【师】【。】【爸】【爸】【很】【生】【气】【,】【当】【着】【老】【师】【的】【面】【狠】【狠】【地】【训】【了】【我】【一】【顿】【。】【老】【师】【理】【了】【理】【我】【的】【头】【发】【,】【依】【然】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【还】【小】【,】【慢】【慢】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【走】【后】【,】【老】【师】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【问】【:】【“】【喜】【欢】【爬】【楼】【梯】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【顺】【着】【她】【手】【指】【的】【方】【向】【,】【望】【了】【望】【教】【室】【旁】【的】【楼】【梯】【,】【点】【点】【头】【。】【“】【那】【好】【,】【现】【在】【老】【师】【陪】【你】【上】【。】【”】【说】【完】【老】【师】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【,】【跳】【上】【第】【一】【阶】【时】【告】【诉】【我】【说】【“】【1】【”】【,】【跳】【上】【第】【二】【阶】【领】【我】【说】【“】【2】【”】【…】【…】【老】【师】【的】【声】【音】【很】【甜】【,】【边】【跳】【边】【数】【,】【很】【有】【韵】【律】【。】【我】【随】【着】【她】【跳】【着】【数】【着】【,】【觉】【得】【又】【轻】【松】【又】【好】【玩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【,】【1】【到】【1】【0】【的】【数】【我】【会】【数】【了】【。】【老】【师】【又】【引】【导】【我】【练】【习】【数】【手】【指】【、】【园】【里】【的】【花】【和】【其】【他】【东】【西】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【里】【的】【墙】【上】【别】【上】【六】【朵】【大】【红】【花】【后】【,】【我】【就】【上】【了】【小】【学】【。】【有】【一】【天】【,】【仰】【视】【教】【室】【墙】【上】【张】【贴】【的】【条】【幅】【 】【“】【书】【籍】【是】【人】【类】【进】【步】【的】【阶】【梯】【”】【,】【我】【问】【老】【师】【:】【“】【书】【籍】【怎】【么】【会】【是】【阶】【梯】【呢】【?】【”】【老】【师】【想】【了】【一】【下】【,】【说】【:】【“】【人】【读】【了】【书】【,】【知】【识】【丰】【富】【了】【,】【视】【野】【开】【阔】【了】【,】【也】【就】【进】【步】【了】【,】【就】【像】【站】【在】【咱】【们】【教】【学】【楼】【的】【楼】【梯】【上】【向】【远】【处】【眺】【望】【,】【登】【高】【一】【层】【,】【看】【到】【的】【就】【远】【一】【些】【,】【景】【色】【也】【就】【觉】【得】【美】【一】【些】【,】【因】【此】【,】【人】【要】【努】【力】【读】【书】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【“】【哦】【”】【了】【一】【声】【,】【又】【看】【了】【看】【那】【个】【条】【幅】【,】【觉】【得】【仿】【佛】【它】【与】【我】【的】【距】【离】【也】【近】【了】【一】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【入】【中】【学】【后】【,】【我】【们】【学】【校】【的】【五】【层】【教】【学】【大】【楼】【比】【幼】【儿】【园】【、】【小】【学】【的】【都】【高】【。】【有】【一】【次】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【布】【置】【了】【一】【道】【作】【文】【题】【:】【“】【上】【中】【学】【后】【的】【感】【受】【”】【,】【我】【在】【自】【己】【的】【作】【文】【里】【写】【了】【这】【样】【几】【句】【:】【“】【来】【到】【闻】【集】【中】【学】【,】【我】【感】【到】【所】【学】【的】【知】【识】【比】【以】【前】【更】【深】【,】【见】【识】【也】【更】【广】【了】【。】【就】【像】【站】【在】【五】【层】【楼】【上】【比】【站】【在】【二】【层】【、】【三】【层】【楼】【上】【看】【到】【的】【更】【广】【阔】【、】【更】【美】【丽】【一】【样】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【在】【我】【的】【作】【文】【上】【又】【圈】【又】【点】【,】【还】【在】【批】【注】【栏】【里】【写】【道】【:】【“】【闻】【中】【(】【闻】【集】【中】【学】【)】【楼】【五】【层】【/】【阜】【阳】【楼】【赛】【山】【/】【请】【记】【住】【/】【前】【头】【不】【尽】【天】【外】【天】【。】【”】【老】【师】【的】【批】【注】【我】【品】【味】【了】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【,】【一】【股】【努】【力】【不】【懈】【的】【决】【心】【注】【满】【了】【全】【身】【。】【从】【幼】【儿】【园】【到】【小】【学】【到】【中】【学】【,】【我】【的】【视】【野】【不】【断】【地】【开】【阔】【。】【带】【着】【这】【坚】【定】【的】【决】【心】【,】【我】【相】【信】【在】【以】【后】【的】【学】【习】【生】【活】【中】【,】【我】【一】【定】【会】【更】【上】【一】【层】【楼】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【以】【时】【间】【先】【后】【为】【顺】【序】【,】【选】【取】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【情】【节】【,】【记】【叙】【了】【自】【己】【的】【一】【段】【成】【长】【经】【历】【,】【表】【达】【了】【对】【老】【师】【的】【深】【深】【谢】【意】【和】【努】【力】【不】【懈】【的】【决】【心】【对】【读】【者】【很】【有】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【叙】【事】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【不】【枝】【不】【蔓】【,】【条】【理】【清】【楚】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【很】【精】【彩】【,】【如】【:】【“】【老】【师】【低】【头】【看】【看】【我】【,】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【小】【脑】【瓜】【儿】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【‘】【放】【心】【吧】【!】【’】【”】【形】【象】【地】【写】【出】【了】【老】【师】【的】【温】【柔】【和】【慈】【爱】【的】【神】【情】【。】【又】【如】【:】【“】【我】【‘】【哦】【’】【了】【一】【声】【,】【又】【看】【了】【看】【那】【个】【条】【幅】【,】【觉】【得】【仿】【佛】【它】【与】【我】【的】【距】【离】【也】【近】【了】【一】【点】【。】【”】【写】【出】【了】【我】【在】【老】【师】【的】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【下】【心】【有】【所】【悟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【尚】【印】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】于澍龙【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【我】【到】【了】【4】【岁】【时】【还】【不】【会】【数】【数】【,】【爸】【爸】【带】【我】【到】【幼】【儿】【园】【报】【名】【时】【对】【老】【师】【说】【:】【“】【这】【孩】【子】【笨】【得】【很】【,】【连】【个】【数】【都】【不】【会】【数】【,】【就】【喜】【欢】【登】【高】【爬】【梯】【的】【。】【老】【师】【,】【今】【后】【可】【要】【多】【麻】【烦】【你】【了】【。】【”】【老】【师】【低】【头】【看】【看】【我】【,】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【小】【脑】【瓜】【儿】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【放】【心】【吧】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【周】【过】【去】【了】【,】【老】【师】【教】【的】【数】【字】【,】【连】【同】【那】【些】【歌】【呀】【舞】【呀】【,】【我】【一】【样】【不】【少】【地】【全】【都】【还】【给】【了】【老】【师】【。】【爸】【爸】【很】【生】【气】【,】【当】【着】【老】【师】【的】【面】【狠】【狠】【地】【训】【了】【我】【一】【顿】【。】【老】【师】【理】【了】【理】【我】【的】【头】【发】【,】【依】【然】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【还】【小】【,】【慢】【慢】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【走】【后】【,】【老】【师】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【问】【:】【“】【喜】【欢】【爬】【楼】【梯】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【顺】【着】【她】【手】【指】【的】【方】【向】【,】【望】【了】【望】【教】【室】【旁】【的】【楼】【梯】【,】【点】【点】【头】【。】【“】【那】【好】【,】【现】【在】【老】【师】【陪】【你】【上】【。】【”】【说】【完】【老】【师】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【,】【跳】【上】【第】【一】【阶】【时】【告】【诉】【我】【说】【“】【1】【”】【,】【跳】【上】【第】【二】【阶】【领】【我】【说】【“】【2】【”】【…】【…】【老】【师】【的】【声】【音】【很】【甜】【,】【边】【跳】【边】【数】【,】【很】【有】【韵】【律】【。】【我】【随】【着】【她】【跳】【着】【数】【着】【,】【觉】【得】【又】【轻】【松】【又】【好】【玩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【,】【1】【到】【1】【0】【的】【数】【我】【会】【数】【了】【。】【老】【师】【又】【引】【导】【我】【练】【习】【数】【手】【指】【、】【园】【里】【的】【花】【和】【其】【他】【东】【西】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【里】【的】【墙】【上】【别】【上】【六】【朵】【大】【红】【花】【后】【,】【我】【就】【上】【了】【小】【学】【。】【有】【一】【天】【,】【仰】【视】【教】【室】【墙】【上】【张】【贴】【的】【条】【幅】【 】【“】【书】【籍】【是】【人】【类】【进】【步】【的】【阶】【梯】【”】【,】【我】【问】【老】【师】【:】【“】【书】【籍】【怎】【么】【会】【是】【阶】【梯】【呢】【?】【”】【老】【师】【想】【了】【一】【下】【,】【说】【:】【“】【人】【读】【了】【书】【,】【知】【识】【丰】【富】【了】【,】【视】【野】【开】【阔】【了】【,】【也】【就】【进】【步】【了】【,】【就】【像】【站】【在】【咱】【们】【教】【学】【楼】【的】【楼】【梯】【上】【向】【远】【处】【眺】【望】【,】【登】【高】【一】【层】【,】【看】【到】【的】【就】【远】【一】【些】【,】【景】【色】【也】【就】【觉】【得】【美】【一】【些】【,】【因】【此】【,】【人】【要】【努】【力】【读】【书】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【“】【哦】【”】【了】【一】【声】【,】【又】【看】【了】【看】【那】【个】【条】【幅】【,】【觉】【得】【仿】【佛】【它】【与】【我】【的】【距】【离】【也】【近】【了】【一】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【入】【中】【学】【后】【,】【我】【们】【学】【校】【的】【五】【层】【教】【学】【大】【楼】【比】【幼】【儿】【园】【、】【小】【学】【的】【都】【高】【。】【有】【一】【次】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【布】【置】【了】【一】【道】【作】【文】【题】【:】【“】【上】【中】【学】【后】【的】【感】【受】【”】【,】【我】【在】【自】【己】【的】【作】【文】【里】【写】【了】【这】【样】【几】【句】【:】【“】【来】【到】【闻】【集】【中】【学】【,】【我】【感】【到】【所】【学】【的】【知】【识】【比】【以】【前】【更】【深】【,】【见】【识】【也】【更】【广】【了】【。】【就】【像】【站】【在】【五】【层】【楼】【上】【比】【站】【在】【二】【层】【、】【三】【层】【楼】【上】【看】【到】【的】【更】【广】【阔】【、】【更】【美】【丽】【一】【样】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【在】【我】【的】【作】【文】【上】【又】【圈】【又】【点】【,】【还】【在】【批】【注】【栏】【里】【写】【道】【:】【“】【闻】【中】【(】【闻】【集】【中】【学】【)】【楼】【五】【层】【/】【阜】【阳】【楼】【赛】【山】【/】【请】【记】【住】【/】【前】【头】【不】【尽】【天】【外】【天】【。】【”】【老】【师】【的】【批】【注】【我】【品】【味】【了】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【,】【一】【股】【努】【力】【不】【懈】【的】【决】【心】【注】【满】【了】【全】【身】【。】【从】【幼】【儿】【园】【到】【小】【学】【到】【中】【学】【,】【我】【的】【视】【野】【不】【断】【地】【开】【阔】【。】【带】【着】【这】【坚】【定】【的】【决】【心】【,】【我】【相】【信】【在】【以】【后】【的】【学】【习】【生】【活】【中】【,】【我】【一】【定】【会】【更】【上】【一】【层】【楼】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【以】【时】【间】【先】【后】【为】【顺】【序】【,】【选】【取】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【情】【节】【,】【记】【叙】【了】【自】【己】【的】【一】【段】【成】【长】【经】【历】【,】【表】【达】【了】【对】【老】【师】【的】【深】【深】【谢】【意】【和】【努】【力】【不】【懈】【的】【决】【心】【对】【读】【者】【很】【有】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【叙】【事】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【不】【枝】【不】【蔓】【,】【条】【理】【清】【楚】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【很】【精】【彩】【,】【如】【:】【“】【老】【师】【低】【头】【看】【看】【我】【,】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【小】【脑】【瓜】【儿】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【‘】【放】【心】【吧】【!】【’】【”】【形】【象】【地】【写】【出】【了】【老】【师】【的】【温】【柔】【和】【慈】【爱】【的】【神】【情】【。】【又】【如】【:】【“】【我】【‘】【哦】【’】【了】【一】【声】【,】【又】【看】【了】【看】【那】【个】【条】【幅】【,】【觉】【得】【仿】【佛】【它】【与】【我】【的】【距】【离】【也】【近】【了】【一】【点】【。】【”】【写】【出】【了】【我】【在】【老】【师】【的】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【下】【心】【有】【所】【悟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【尚】【印】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【一】【个】【卖】【氢】【气】【球】【的】【男】【人】【。】【他】【极】【瘦】【,】【一】【件】【蓝】【色】【军】【大】【衣】【穿】【在】【身】【上】【有】【些】【晃】【荡】【,】【他】【骑】【的】【自】【行】【车】【也】【旧】【了】【,】【发】【出】【“】【吱】【呀】【”】【的】【响】【声】【。】【在】【自】【行】【车】【的】【后】【座】【上】【,】【整】【齐】【地】【束】【着】【几】【十】【只】【气】【球】【,】【簇】【成】【一】【个】【五】【彩】【大】【花】【篮】【,】【高】【昂】【的】【气】【势】【几】【乎】【把】【它】【们】【的】【主】【人】【给】【吞】【没】【了】【。】【但】【气】【球】【是】【过】【时】【的】【玩】【意】【儿】【,】【似】【乎】【无】【人】【问】【津】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【一】【个】【收】【废】【品】【的】【女】【人】【。】【她】【一】【个】【人】【拉】【着】【一】【辆】【装】【满】【杂】【物】【的】【板】【车】【,】【头】【深】【埋】【,】【弓】【着】【脊】【背】【,】【慢】【慢】【挪】【动】【双】【脚】【。】【然】【而】【,】【她】【时】【不】【时】【地】【会】【转】【过】【头】【来】【,】【爱】【怜】【地】【向】【车】【上】【看】【去】【—】【—】【车】【上】【正】【睡】【着】【她】【三】【四】【岁】【的】【孩】【子】【。】【她】【用】【疲】【惫】【但】【温】【柔】【的】【目】【光】【看】【着】【孩】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【灯】【亮】【起】【,】【两】【人】【在】【同】【一】【车】【道】【上】【停】【住】【了】【脚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【气】【炎】【热】【,】【鸣】【蝉】【聒】【噪】【。】【板】【车】【上】【的】【孩】【子】【不】【大】【舒】【服】【地】【翻】【了】【个】【身】【。】【男】【人】【正】【从】【车】【篮】【里】【取】【杯】【喝】【茶】【,】【看】【见】【孩】【子】【,】【他】【的】【手】【就】【不】【动】【了】【,】【惊】【讶】【又】【和】【蔼】【地】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【。】【笑】【容】【凝】【在】【他】【饱】【经】【沧】【桑】【的】【眼】【角】【,】【几】【分】【失】【神】【,】【几】【分】【陶】【醉】【,】【是】【想】【起】【家】【中】【也】【有】【一】【个】【如】【此】【可】【爱】【的】【小】【天】【使】【了】【吗】【?】【女】【人】【发】【现】【了】【陌】【生】【人】【的】【注】【视】【,】【转】【过】【身】【,】【她】【发】【现】【了】【卖】【气】【球】【的】【男】【人】【,】【友】【好】【地】【点】【点】【头】【,】【也】【轻】【轻】【地】【微】【笑】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【风】【拂】【过】【,】【路】【旁】【的】【梧】【桐】【摇】【曳】【起】【一】【树】【的】【青】【绿】【。】【忽】【然】【,】【那】【男】【人】【像】【是】【想】【起】【了】【什】【么】【,】【急】【急】【地】【拔】【下】【一】【只】【气】【球】【来】【,】【举】【到】【那】【女】【人】【面】【前】【:】【“】【拿】【着】【吧】【,】【给】【孩】【子】【玩】【玩】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【两】【人】【的】【目】【光】【交】【会】【了】【。】【那】【一】【刹】【那】【,】【女】【人】【的】【眼】【里】【亮】【晶】【晶】【的】【,】【有】【什】【么】【东】【西】【在】【闪】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【绿】【灯】【亮】【起】【,】【车】【流】【又】【开】【始】【涌】【动】【。】【男】【人】【骑】【远】【了】【,】【女】【人】【埋】【下】【头】【拉】【车】【前】【行】【,】【只】【是】【车】【把】【手】【上】【多】【了】【一】【只】【鲜】【红】【的】【气】【球】【,】【随】【风】【微】【微】【摆】【动】【。】【车】【上】【,】【孩】【子】【仍】【睡】【着】【,】【脸】【红】【红】【的】【,】【嘴】【角】【挂】【着】【笑】【,】【像】【是】【刚】【做】【了】【一】【个】【顽】【皮】【的】【梦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【—】【—】【 】【一】【个】【旁】【观】【者】【,】【却】【在】【这】【街】【口】【伫】【立】【了】【许】【久】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【为】【什】【么】【,】【我】【想】【起】【了】【曾】【在】【寺】【庙】【中】【见】【过】【的】【菩】【萨】【,】【他】【也】【是】【这】【样】【垂】【眼】【望】【着】【人】【们】【,】【以】【仁】【慈】【怜】【悯】【的】【目】【光】【。】【只】【是】【不】【同】【的】【是】【,】【一】【个】【在】【香】【烟】【缭】【绕】【中】【对】【着】【虔】【诚】【的】【信】【徒】【,】【一】【个】【于】【生】【活】【束】【缚】【里】【面】【对】【于】【自】【己】【一】【样】【的】【人】【罢】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【是】【下】【班】【的】【高】【峰】【,】【人】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【一】【个】【个】【急】【匆】【匆】【地】【掠】【过】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【。】【都】【市】【依】【旧】【喧】【嚣】【,】【车】【水】【马】【龙】【的】【声】【响】【四】【起】【,】【没】【有】【人】【知】【道】【,】【刚】【才】【发】【生】【了】【一】【个】【多】【么】【美】【丽】【的】【故】【事】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【有】【时】【,】【我】【们】【应】【该】【放】【慢】【追】【逐】【的】【脚】【步】【,】【俯】【下】【寻】【找】【名】【利】【的】【头】【,】【向】【下】【看】【,】【看】【那】【些】【在】【红】【尘】【的】【一】【隅】【默】【默】【开】【放】【的】【花】【,】【目】【光】【交】【会】【中】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【一】【份】【动】【人】【心】【魄】【的】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【的】【成】【功】【之】【处】【就】【是】【捕】【捉】【到】【了】【生】【活】【中】【的】【活】【鱼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【静】【态】【的】【事】【物】【好】【写】【,】【动】【态】【的】【东】【西】【就】【难】【写】【了】【。】【纵】【观】【学】【生】【作】【文】【,】【大】【部】【分】【写】【的】【都】【是】【“】【已】【经】【发】【生】【”】【的】【,】【而】【不】【是】【“】【正】【在】【发】【生】【”】【的】【。】【这】【和】【我】【们】【缺】【少】【“】【抓】【拍】【”】【的】【意】【识】【和】【能】【力】【有】【关】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【抓】【拍】【”】【是】【摄】【影】【上】【的】【名】【词】【,】【即】【拍】【摄】【对】【象】【是】【突】【发】【的】【、】【偶】【遇】【的】【,】【而】【不】【是】【相】【对】【静】【止】【的】【、】【事】【先】【摆】【布】【好】【的】【,】【它】【们】【就】【像】【是】【生】【活】【中】【的】【活】【鱼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【写】【的】【事】【情】【很】【小】【很】【小】【,】【容】【易】【被】【人】【忽】【略】【。】【首】【先】【,】【这】【两】【个】【人】【,】【一】【个】【是】【卖】【气】【球】【的】【,】【一】【个】【是】【收】【废】【品】【的】【,】【他】【们】【在】【许】【多】【人】【眼】【里】【是】【不】【屑】【一】【顾】【的】【,】【在】【繁】【华】【的】【都】【市】【绝】【不】【会】【引】【人】【注】【目】【。】【但】【是】【作】【者】【对】【他】【们】【有】【着】【仔】【细】【的】【长】【久】【的】【观】【察】【,】【并】【被】【他】【们】【之】【间】【细】【小】【的】【举】【动】【所】【感】【动】【。】【这】【是】【一】【种】【可】【贵】【的】【平】【民】【意】【识】【和】【人】【文】【情】【怀】【啊】【!】【我】【不】【知】【道】【缪】【建】【华】【同】【学】【写】【作】【此】【文】【是】【否】【受】【了】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【《】【一】【件】【小】【事】【》】【的】【影】【响】【。】【在】【今】【天】【这】【个】【明】【星】【大】【腕】【吸】【引】【大】【众】【眼】【球】【的】【时】【代】【,】【能】【够】【给】【小】【人】【物】【一】【份】【同】【情】【和】【关】【爱】【,】【显】【得】【多】【么】【可】【贵】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【平】【缓】【的】【叙】【述】【中】【饱】【含】【着】【深】【情】【,】【细】【致】【的】【描】【绘】【中】【浸】【透】【了】【挚】【爱】【。】【最】【后】【伫】【立】【街】【头】【,】【作】【者】【的】【思】【绪】【却】【随】【着】【那】【两】【个】【人】【飘】【向】【远】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【能】【够】【捕】【捉】【到】【生】【活】【中】【的】【活】【鱼】【,】【固】【然】【需】【要】【有】【敏】【锐】【的】【目】【光】【,】【必】【要】【的】【技】【巧】【,】【但】【是】【如】【果】【心】【中】【无】【人】【,】【缺】【少】【怜】【悯】【之】【心】【,】【缺】【少】【纯】【真】【之】【情】【,】【也】【难】【以】【将】【“】【活】【鱼】【”】【捕】【捉】【到】【手】【。】【文】【章】【最】【后】【一】【段】【就】【表】【达】【了】【这】【样】【的】【意】【思】【。】【年】【纪】【虽】【小】【,】【却】【对】【世】【风】【有】【着】【自】【己】【的】【认】【识】【。】【的】【确】【,】【眼】【睛】【向】【上】【,】【忙】【于】【对】【名】【利】【的】【追】【逐】【,】【对】【底】【层】【民】【众】【的】【不】【屑】【,】【正】【是】【当】【下】【许】【多】【人】【的】【生】【存】【状】【态】【。】【他】【把】【这】【个】【红】【气】【球】【的】【故】【事】【喻】【为】【“】【红】【尘】【的】【一】【隅】【默】【默】【开】【放】【的】【花】【”】【,】【是】【“】【 】【一】【份】【动】【人】【心】【魄】【的】【美】【”】【,】【这】【一】【结】【尾】【,】【无】【疑】【也】【就】【提】【升】【了】【文】【章】【的】【整】【体】【品】【格】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【题】【目】【原】【先】【是】【“】【街】【头】【一】【瞥】【”】【,】【是】【个】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【。】【许】【多】【人】【都】【觉】【得】【没】【啥】【可】【写】【,】【于】【是】【就】【只】【好】【写】【些】【车】【祸】【发】【生】【、】【小】【偷】【行】【窃】【、】【幼】【童】【乞】【讨】【之】【类】【的】【事】【儿】【,】【甚】【至】【编】【造】【警】【匪】【大】【战】【的】【故】【事】【。】【那】【些】【事】【也】【确】【实】【存】【在】【于】【生】【活】【之】【中】【,】【但】【毕】【竟】【不】【能】【给】【人】【以】【美】【感】【,】【而】【这】【篇】【《】【红】【气】【球】【》】【却】【能】【使】【我】【们】【的】【心】【灵】【产】【生】【一】【丝】【颤】【动】【,】【也】【给】【我】【们】【的】【写】【作】【带】【来】【一】【些】【启】【示】【。】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】于澍龙【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【我】【到】【了】【4】【岁】【时】【还】【不】【会】【数】【数】【,】【爸】【爸】【带】【我】【到】【幼】【儿】【园】【报】【名】【时】【对】【老】【师】【说】【:】【“】【这】【孩】【子】【笨】【得】【很】【,】【连】【个】【数】【都】【不】【会】【数】【,】【就】【喜】【欢】【登】【高】【爬】【梯】【的】【。】【老】【师】【,】【今】【后】【可】【要】【多】【麻】【烦】【你】【了】【。】【”】【老】【师】【低】【头】【看】【看】【我】【,】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【小】【脑】【瓜】【儿】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【放】【心】【吧】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【周】【过】【去】【了】【,】【老】【师】【教】【的】【数】【字】【,】【连】【同】【那】【些】【歌】【呀】【舞】【呀】【,】【我】【一】【样】【不】【少】【地】【全】【都】【还】【给】【了】【老】【师】【。】【爸】【爸】【很】【生】【气】【,】【当】【着】【老】【师】【的】【面】【狠】【狠】【地】【训】【了】【我】【一】【顿】【。】【老】【师】【理】【了】【理】【我】【的】【头】【发】【,】【依】【然】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【还】【小】【,】【慢】【慢】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【走】【后】【,】【老】【师】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【问】【:】【“】【喜】【欢】【爬】【楼】【梯】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【顺】【着】【她】【手】【指】【的】【方】【向】【,】【望】【了】【望】【教】【室】【旁】【的】【楼】【梯】【,】【点】【点】【头】【。】【“】【那】【好】【,】【现】【在】【老】【师】【陪】【你】【上】【。】【”】【说】【完】【老】【师】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【,】【跳】【上】【第】【一】【阶】【时】【告】【诉】【我】【说】【“】【1】【”】【,】【跳】【上】【第】【二】【阶】【领】【我】【说】【“】【2】【”】【…】【…】【老】【师】【的】【声】【音】【很】【甜】【,】【边】【跳】【边】【数】【,】【很】【有】【韵】【律】【。】【我】【随】【着】【她】【跳】【着】【数】【着】【,】【觉】【得】【又】【轻】【松】【又】【好】【玩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【,】【1】【到】【1】【0】【的】【数】【我】【会】【数】【了】【。】【老】【师】【又】【引】【导】【我】【练】【习】【数】【手】【指】【、】【园】【里】【的】【花】【和】【其】【他】【东】【西】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【里】【的】【墙】【上】【别】【上】【六】【朵】【大】【红】【花】【后】【,】【我】【就】【上】【了】【小】【学】【。】【有】【一】【天】【,】【仰】【视】【教】【室】【墙】【上】【张】【贴】【的】【条】【幅】【 】【“】【书】【籍】【是】【人】【类】【进】【步】【的】【阶】【梯】【”】【,】【我】【问】【老】【师】【:】【“】【书】【籍】【怎】【么】【会】【是】【阶】【梯】【呢】【?】【”】【老】【师】【想】【了】【一】【下】【,】【说】【:】【“】【人】【读】【了】【书】【,】【知】【识】【丰】【富】【了】【,】【视】【野】【开】【阔】【了】【,】【也】【就】【进】【步】【了】【,】【就】【像】【站】【在】【咱】【们】【教】【学】【楼】【的】【楼】【梯】【上】【向】【远】【处】【眺】【望】【,】【登】【高】【一】【层】【,】【看】【到】【的】【就】【远】【一】【些】【,】【景】【色】【也】【就】【觉】【得】【美】【一】【些】【,】【因】【此】【,】【人】【要】【努】【力】【读】【书】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【“】【哦】【”】【了】【一】【声】【,】【又】【看】【了】【看】【那】【个】【条】【幅】【,】【觉】【得】【仿】【佛】【它】【与】【我】【的】【距】【离】【也】【近】【了】【一】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【入】【中】【学】【后】【,】【我】【们】【学】【校】【的】【五】【层】【教】【学】【大】【楼】【比】【幼】【儿】【园】【、】【小】【学】【的】【都】【高】【。】【有】【一】【次】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【布】【置】【了】【一】【道】【作】【文】【题】【:】【“】【上】【中】【学】【后】【的】【感】【受】【”】【,】【我】【在】【自】【己】【的】【作】【文】【里】【写】【了】【这】【样】【几】【句】【:】【“】【来】【到】【闻】【集】【中】【学】【,】【我】【感】【到】【所】【学】【的】【知】【识】【比】【以】【前】【更】【深】【,】【见】【识】【也】【更】【广】【了】【。】【就】【像】【站】【在】【五】【层】【楼】【上】【比】【站】【在】【二】【层】【、】【三】【层】【楼】【上】【看】【到】【的】【更】【广】【阔】【、】【更】【美】【丽】【一】【样】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【在】【我】【的】【作】【文】【上】【又】【圈】【又】【点】【,】【还】【在】【批】【注】【栏】【里】【写】【道】【:】【“】【闻】【中】【(】【闻】【集】【中】【学】【)】【楼】【五】【层】【/】【阜】【阳】【楼】【赛】【山】【/】【请】【记】【住】【/】【前】【头】【不】【尽】【天】【外】【天】【。】【”】【老】【师】【的】【批】【注】【我】【品】【味】【了】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【,】【一】【股】【努】【力】【不】【懈】【的】【决】【心】【注】【满】【了】【全】【身】【。】【从】【幼】【儿】【园】【到】【小】【学】【到】【中】【学】【,】【我】【的】【视】【野】【不】【断】【地】【开】【阔】【。】【带】【着】【这】【坚】【定】【的】【决】【心】【,】【我】【相】【信】【在】【以】【后】【的】【学】【习】【生】【活】【中】【,】【我】【一】【定】【会】【更】【上】【一】【层】【楼】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【以】【时】【间】【先】【后】【为】【顺】【序】【,】【选】【取】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【情】【节】【,】【记】【叙】【了】【自】【己】【的】【一】【段】【成】【长】【经】【历】【,】【表】【达】【了】【对】【老】【师】【的】【深】【深】【谢】【意】【和】【努】【力】【不】【懈】【的】【决】【心】【对】【读】【者】【很】【有】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【叙】【事】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【不】【枝】【不】【蔓】【,】【条】【理】【清】【楚】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【很】【精】【彩】【,】【如】【:】【“】【老】【师】【低】【头】【看】【看】【我】【,】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【小】【脑】【瓜】【儿】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【‘】【放】【心】【吧】【!】【’】【”】【形】【象】【地】【写】【出】【了】【老】【师】【的】【温】【柔】【和】【慈】【爱】【的】【神】【情】【。】【又】【如】【:】【“】【我】【‘】【哦】【’】【了】【一】【声】【,】【又】【看】【了】【看】【那】【个】【条】【幅】【,】【觉】【得】【仿】【佛】【它】【与】【我】【的】【距】【离】【也】【近】【了】【一】【点】【。】【”】【写】【出】【了】【我】【在】【老】【师】【的】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【下】【心】【有】【所】【悟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【尚】【印】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

于澍龙:[永远别害怕新的曙光]宝贝别害怕观后感作文

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【是】【江】【底】【的】【一】【粒】【石】【子】【。】【江】【水】【的】【冲】【刷】【虽】【然】【磨】【去】【了】【我】【的】【棱】【角】【,】【但】【也】【磨】【炼】【了】【我】【的】【意】【志】【;】【岁】【月】【虽】【然】【摧】【残】【了】【我】【的】【容】【颜】【,】【却】【也】【锤】【炼】【了】【我】【向】【上】【的】【信】【心】【。】【在】【岁】【月】【流】【淌】【中】【,】【我】【积】【累】【了】【阅】【历】【;】【在】【日】【升】【月】【落】【里】【,】【我】【丰】【富】【了】【情】【感】【。】【终】【于】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【自】【己】【的】【价】【值】【—】【—】【不】【能】【成】【为】【丰】【碑】【,】【就】【把】【自】【己】【当】【做】【泥】【土】【,】【让】【众】【人】【踩】【成】【道】【路】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【清】【江】【水】【,】【淹】【没】【了】【我】【华】【美】【的】【容】【颜】【。】【我】【曾】【经】【为】【自】【己】【身】【处】【江】【底】【不】【为】【人】【所】【知】【而】【叹】【气】【,】【直】【到】【有】【一】【天】【一】【个】【人】【的】【到】【来】【,】【让】【我】【有】【了】【新】【的】【发】【现】【。】【他】【每】【天】【都】【在】【江】【边】【垂】【钓】【,】【一】【身】【破】【旧】【的】【衣】【裳】【,】【头】【上】【的】【斗】【笠】【残】【破】【得】【看】【不】【出】【原】【先】【的】【轮】【廓】【。】【我】【奇】【怪】【于】【他】【每】【天】【总】【是】【乐】【呵】【呵】【的】【,】【嘴】【里】【吟】【唱】【着】【:】【“】【吾】【生】【也】【有】【涯】【,】【而】【知】【也】【无】【涯】【。】【”】【 】【又】【有】【一】【天】【,】【江】【边】【来】【了】【两】【个】【人】【,】【他】【们】【戴】【着】【高】【高】【的】【帽】【子】【,】【身】【穿】【宽】【大】【华】【美】【的】【袍】【子】【。】【“】【先】【生】【,】【国】【君】【想】【让】【您】【来】【协】【助】【他】【处】【理】【国】【事】【。】【”】【这】【是】【多】【好】【的】【事】【情】【,】【我】【暗】【想】【。】【“】【你】【们】【说】【乌】【龟】【是】【在】【烂】【泥】【塘】【里】【快】【活】【呢】【,】【还】【是】【愿】【意】【死】【后】【被】【供】【奉】【在】【庙】【堂】【之】【上】【呢】【?】【”】【“】【当】【然】【是】【在】【泥】【塘】【里】【快】【活】【了】【。】【”】【两】【人】【不】【约】【而】【同】【地】【说】【。】【“】【是】【啊】【,】【你】【们】【还】【是】【让】【我】【快】【活】【地】【生】【活】【吧】【!】【”】【两】【人】【无】【言】【,】【默】【默】【地】【离】【开】【了】【。】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【人】【生】【的】【价】【值】【不】【在】【于】【地】【位】【之】【高】【与】【财】【富】【之】【多】【,】【而】【在】【于】【心】【境】【的】【崇】【高】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【漫】【漫】【江】【流】【,】【又】【是】【一】【个】【千】【年】【的】【流】【逝】【。】【一】【叶】【扁】【舟】【从】【江】【上】【行】【过】【,】【两】【桨】【荡】【起】【微】【波】【。】【船】【上】【的】【女】【子】【一】【袭】【青】【衣】【,】【青】【丝】【高】【绾】【,】【清】【秀】【的】【脸】【上】【露】【出】【无】【限】【哀】【怨】【,】【眼】【里】【掠】【过】【残】【破】【的】【城】【垣】【、】【破】【碎】【的】【山】【河】【,】【还】【有】【金】【人】【狰】【狞】【的】【面】【容】【、】【血】【染】【的】【长】【刀】【。】【她】【张】【口】【吟】【道】【:】【“】【生】【当】【作】【人】【杰】【,】【死】【亦】【为】【鬼】【雄】【。】【”】【啊】【,】【这】【等】【弱】【小】【的】【身】【躯】【里】【竟】【能】【发】【出】【令】【男】【子】【汗】【颜】【的】【豪】【言】【壮】【语】【!】【此】【时】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【英】【雄】【不】【问】【出】【处】【,】【只】【要】【你】【有】【一】【颗】【向】【上】【的】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【终】【于】【静】【下】【心】【来】【,】【不】【再】【为】【自】【己】【的】【处】【境】【而】【忧】【心】【忡】【忡】【,】【我】【学】【会】【了】【思】【考】【与】【接】【受】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【直】【到】【有】【一】【天】【,】【“】【轰】【隆】【隆】【”】【的】【声】【音】【把】【我】【唤】【醒】【,】【我】【被】【从】【河】【里】【挖】【出】【来】【装】【上】【车】【,】【一】【路】【颠】【簸】【,】【终】【于】【来】【到】【了】【目】【的】【地】【。】【机】【器】【轰】【鸣】【,】【一】【番】【搅】【拌】【,】【我】【被】【铺】【到】【地】【上】【,】【一】【番】【碾】【压】【后】【我】【变】【成】【了】【路】【的】【一】【部】【分】【,】【终】【日】【有】【无】【数】【的】【车】【辆】【从】【我】【身】【上】【驶】【过】【,】【无】【数】【行】【人】【从】【我】【身】【上】【走】【过】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【虽】【然】【我】【依】【旧】【生】【活】【在】【黑】【暗】【里】【,】【年】【复】【一】【年】【,】【天】【长】【日】【久】【,】【但】【心】【里】【却】【有】【灿】【烂】【的】【阳】【光】【—】【—】【我】【不】【能】【成】【为】【珍】【珠】【,】【也】【不】【能】【成】【为】【丰】【碑】【,】【我】【就】【要】【当】【泥】【土】【,】【化】【为】【一】【条】【路】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【考】【场】【作】【文】【的】【最】【大】【亮】【点】【是】【见】【微】【知】【著】【,】【立】【意】【深】【刻】【。】【主】【要】【体】【现】【在】【:】【一】【是】【化】【大】【为】【小】【,】【平】【凡】【见】【深】【刻】【。】【题】【目】【“】【日】【积】【月】【累】【”】【的】【写】【作】【范】【围】【很】【大】【,】【作】【者】【化】【大】【为】【小】【,】【选】【择】【了】【常】【见】【的】【“】【一】【粒】【石】【子】【”】【由】【于】【江】【水】【天】【长】【日】【久】【地】【冲】【刷】【而】【“】【改】【变】【”】【并】【被】【“】【发】【现】【”】【当】【做】【泥】【土】【,】【让】【众】【人】【踩】【成】【道】【路】【。】【文】【章】【由】【自】【然】【到】【人】【生】【,】【由】【此】【及】【彼】【,】【透】【过】【平】【凡】【的】【自】【然】【现】【象】【引】【发】【出】【对】【人】【生】【的】【思】【考】【,】【使】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【深】【刻】【。】【二】【是】【纵】【横】【开】【掘】【,】【角】【度】【求】【深】【刻】【。】【作】【者】【想】【得】【深】【远】【,】【从】【“】【石】【子】【”】【出】【发】【写】【出】【其】【发】【展】【而】【变】【成】【“】【泥】【土】【”】【,】【这】【是】【纵】【向】【开】【掘】【;】【又】【由】【“】【石】【子】【”】【想】【到】【江】【边】【垂】【钓】【的】【“】【他】【”】【与】【青】【衣】【“】【女】【子】【”】【,】【让】【内】【容】【充】【满】【贯】【穿】【古】【今】【的】【大】【气】【,】【这】【是】【横】【向】【思】【考】【。】【纵】【横】【开】【掘】【,】【多】【向】【思】【维】【,】【文】【思】【超】【越】【时】【空】【的】【限】【制】【,】【具】【有】【“】【峰】【回】【路】【转】【”】【的】【惊】【喜】【,】【凸】【显】【出】【“】【日】【积】【月】【累】【”】【使】【“】【一】【粒】【石】【子】【”】【构】【成】【量】【变】【到】【质】【变】【的】【认】【识】【轨】【迹】【,】【由】【此】【透】【视】【出】【“】【我】【就】【要】【当】【泥】【土】【,】【化】【为】【一】【条】【路】【”】【的】【主】【旨】【,】【这】【样】【的】【立】【意】【可】【谓】【深】【刻】【。】【总】【之】【,】【这】【篇】【立】【意】【有】【深】【度】【的】【哲】【理】【性】【散】【文】【被】【评】【判】【为】【满】【分】【佳】【作】【,】【当】【之】【无】【愧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【汤】【存】【兵】【 】【薛】【宗】【林】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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