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2019年11月22日 02:49

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【都】【是】【单】【翼】【天】【使】【,】【只】【有】【彼】【此】【拥】【抱】【,】【才】【能】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【在】【大】【千】【世】【界】【,】【徜】【徉】【于】【茫】【茫】【人】【海】【,】【没】【有】【人】【是】【独】【自】【一】【人】【生】【活】【在】【孤】【岛】【中】【的】【,】【每】【个】【人】【都】【是】【社】【会】【的】【一】【部】【分】【。】【只】【有】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【才】【能】【使】【自】【身】【的】【价】【值】【得】【到】【最】【大】【限】【度】【的】【发】【挥】【,】【才】【能】【共】【同】【构】【建】【一】【个】【和】【谐】【美】【好】【的】【社】【会】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【需】【要】【宽】【容】【。】【“】【世】【事】【如】【棋】【,】【让】【一】【着】【不】【为】【亏】【我】【;】【心】【田】【似】【海】【,】【纳】【百】【川】【方】【见】【容】【人】【。】【”】【因】【为】【宽】【容】【,】【那】【些】【钩】【心】【斗】【角】【,】【那】【些】【小】【肚】【鸡】【肠】【,】【都】【褪】【去】【了】【色】【彩】【,】【而】【那】【份】【共】【处】【的】【和】【谐】【,】【渐】【渐】【焕】【发】【光】【亮】【。】【也】【许】【有】【人】【会】【说】【,】【人】【最】【应】【该】【善】【待】【的】【是】【自】【己】【,】【然】【而】【事】【实】【上】【,】【善】【待】【自】【己】【的】【最】【好】【方】【法】【就】【是】【善】【待】【别】【人】【,】【而】【善】【待】【别】【人】【的】【最】【好】【方】【法】【不】【正】【是】【宽】【容】【吗】【?】【以】【宽】【容】【之】【心】【与】【人】【共】【处】【,】【天】【更】【蓝】【,】【海】【更】【深】【,】【阳】【光】【更】【明】【媚】【。】【宽】【容】【温】【暖】【社】【会】【,】【温】【暖】【人】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【需】【要】【分】【享】【。】【托】【尔】【斯】【泰】【曾】【说】【:】【“】【两】【个】【人】【分】【担】【一】【个】【痛】【苦】【,】【只】【有】【一】【个】【痛】【苦】【;】【而】【两】【个】【人】【共】【享】【一】【个】【幸】【福】【,】【却】【有】【两】【个】【幸】【福】【。】【”】【周】【国】【平】【亦】【曾】【云】【:】【“】【一】【个】【无】【人】【分】【享】【的】【快】【乐】【绝】【非】【真】【正】【的】【快】【乐】【,】【一】【个】【无】【人】【分】【担】【的】【痛】【苦】【才】【最】【可】【怕】【。】【”】【因】【为】【分】【享】【,】【痛】【苦】【渐】【渐】【被】【稀】【释】【,】【幸】【福】【慢】【慢】【被】【浓】【郁】【,】【充】【满】【幸】【福】【的】【共】【处】【之】【花】【,】【到】【哪】【里】【开】【放】【都】【能】【香】【飘】【四】【野】【。】【“】【独】【乐】【乐】【,】【不】【如】【众】【乐】【乐】【”】【,】【人】【与】【人】【共】【处】【,】【将】【快】【乐】【分】【享】【,】【将】【美】【好】【分】【享】【,】【幸】【福】【的】【接】【力】【棒】【便】【会】【在】【人】【人】【手】【中】【相】【传】【,】【永】【不】【停】【息】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【需】【要】【“】【和】【”】【。】【廉】【颇】【与】【蔺】【相】【如】【的】【“】【将】【相】【和】【”】【,】【自】【古】【以】【来】【都】【是】【一】【段】【佳】【话】【,】【文】【臣】【与】【武】【将】【以】【“】【和】【”】【来】【共】【处】【,】【缔】【造】【的】【是】【一】【个】【国】【家】【的】【兴】【旺】【与】【强】【盛】【。】【而】【那】【三】【个】【和】【尚】【,】【相】【互】【推】【诿】【,】【不】【愿】【合】【作】【,】【虽】【然】【“】【共】【处】【”】【在】【同】【一】【屋】【檐】【下】【,】【却】【因】【不】【“】【和】【”】【而】【造】【成】【三】【个】【和】【尚】【没】【水】【吃】【的】【尴】【尬】【局】【面】【。】【此】【亦】【似】【古】【,】【此】【亦】【如】【今】【。】【在】【利】【益】【与】【利】【益】【之】【间】【寻】【求】【到】【平】【衡】【,】【以】【“】【和】【”】【相】【处】【方】【为】【贵】【。】【 】【“】【和】【”】【,】【共】【处】【之】【道】【也】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【看】【到】【一】【句】【话】【:】【一】【朵】【花】【盯】【着】【另】【一】【朵】【花】【,】【恨】【不】【得】【自】【己】【就】【是】【那】【只】【掐】【花】【的】【手】【。】【如】【此】【生】【动】【形】【象】【地】【道】【出】【群】【芳】【争】【妒】【的】【局】【面】【。】【与】【其】【群】【芳】【争】【妒】【,】【不】【如】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【共】【同】【为】【百】【花】【园】【增】【添】【一】【抹】【抹】【绚】【丽】【色】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【宽】【容】【为】【帆】【,】【以】【分】【享】【为】【桨】【,】【以】【“】【和】【”】【为】【舟】【,】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【在】【和】【谐】【的】【海】【洋】【,】【远】【航】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【围】【绕】【“】【学】【会】【共】【处】【”】【这】【个】【中】【心】【论】【点】【,】【确】【立】【了】【 】【“】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【需】【要】【宽】【容】【”】【,】【“】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【需】【要】【分】【享】【”】【,】【“】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【需】【要】【‘】【和】【’】【”】【 】【三】【个】【分】【论】【点】【。】【在】【论】【证】【这】【些】【论】【点】【的】【过】【程】【中】【,】【文】【章】【引】【用】【了】【众】【多】【的】【名】【人】【名】【言】【和】【俗】【语】【谚】【语】【,】【如】【直】【接】【引】【用】【托】【尔】【斯】【泰】【、】【周】【国】【平】【、】【孟】【子】【等】【人】【的】【名】【言】【,】【开】【头】【题】【记】【化】【用】【了】【海】【明】【威】【作】【品】【《】【丧】【钟】【为】【谁】【而】【鸣】【》】【中】【的】【文】【字】【。】【这】【些】【来】【自】【不】【同】【国】【度】【、】【不】【同】【时】【代】【的】【名】【人】【名】【言】【、】【谚】【语】【,】【增】【添】【了】【文】【章】【的】【雄】【辩】【色】【彩】【,】【提】【高】【了】【文】【章】【的】【说】【服】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【第】【四】【段】【中】【,】【着】【眼】【于】【论】【证】【“】【学】【会】【共】【处】【,】【需】【要】【‘】【和】【’】【”】【这】【个】【分】【论】【点】【,】【列】【举】【了】【“】【将】【相】【和】【”】【与】【“】【三】【个】【和】【尚】【”】【两】【个】【故】【事】【,】【对】【大】【众】【熟】【知】【的】【故】【事】【点】【到】【为】【止】【,】【表】【达】【很】【有】【分】【寸】【、】【很】【有】【力】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【之】【,】【全】【文】【论】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【论】【据】【充】【足】【,】【有】【着】【很】【强】【的】【示】【范】【性】【,】【是】【一】【篇】【优】【秀】【的】【议】【论】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【黄】【 】【 】【琼】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【暑】【假】【,】【我】【们】【一】【家】【人】【来】【到】【了】【美】【丽】【的】【湖】【南】【。】【在】【张】【家】【界】【,】【我】【们】【领】【略】【了】【“】【会】【当】【凌】【绝】【顶】【,】【一】【览】【众】【山】【小】【”】【的】【风】【采】【;】【在】【爱】【晚】【亭】【,】【我】【们】【领】【略】【了】【“】【停】【车】【坐】【爱】【枫】【林】【晚】【,】【霜】【叶】【红】【于】【二】【月】【花】【”】【的】【诗】【情】【画】【意】【…】【…】【而】【我】【印】【象】【最】【深】【的】【是】【那】【位】【于】【大】【山】【深】【处】【的】【凤】【凰】【古】【城】【。】【它】【清】【晨】【的】【神】【秘】【、】【夜】【晚】【的】【奔】【放】【,】【都】【深】【深】【地】【吸】【引】【了】【我】【,】【让】【我】【流】【连】【忘】【返】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【第】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【洒】【在】【沱】【江】【上】【时】【,】【我】【们】【已】【漫】【步】【在】【古】【城】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【。】【此】【时】【,】【太】【阳】【初】【升】【,】【细】【碎】【的】【阳】【光】【洒】【在】【石】【板】【路】【上】【,】【显】【得】【静】【谧】【悠】【长】【,】【仿】【佛】【千】【百】【年】【的】【时】【光】【铺】【展】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【那】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【为】【古】【城】【带】【来】【朝】【气】【,】【让】【人】【为】【之】【一】【振】【!】【而】【山】【间】【弥】【漫】【的】【雾】【气】【又】【为】【古】【城】【平】【添】【了】【神】【秘】【色】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沱】【江】【两】【岸】【各】【色】【商】【铺】【都】【尚】【未】【营】【业】【,】【街】【上】【显】【得】【空】【荡】【荡】【的】【,】【偶】【尔】【有】【几】【个】【行】【人】【经】【过】【,】【而】【勤】【劳】【的】【古】【城】【居】【民】【则】【早】【已】【开】【始】【了】【一】【天】【的】【工】【作】【,】【看】【,】【沱】【江】【边】【上】【,】【妇】【人】【们】【一】【边】【小】【声】【地】【谈】【论】【着】【,】【一】【边】【洗】【着】【衣】【服】【,】【时】【不】【时】【发】【出】【一】【阵】【悦】【耳】【的】【笑】【声】【。】【站】【在】【沱】【江】【边】【,】【看】【着】【远】【处】【,】【听】【着】【远】【处】【传】【来】【洗】【衣】【人】【那】【悦】【耳】【笑】【声】【,】【我】【陶】【醉】【了】【。】【这】【一】【切】【显】【得】【那】【么】【宁】【静】【祥】【和】【,】【让】【我】【的】【心】【也】【变】【得】【平】【静】【下】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【驻】【足】【在】【一】【座】【颇】【有】【些】【年】【头】【的】【石】【桥】【上】【,】【向】【两】【岸】【望】【去】【,】【更】【是】【心】【旷】【神】【怡】【:】【水】【车】【在】【江】【中】【缓】【缓】【地】【转】【动】【,】【江】【水】【慢】【慢】【流】【淌】【,】【两】【岸】【坐】【落】【着】【独】【具】【民】【族】【特】【色】【的】【小】【楼】【,】【衬】【着】【那】【一】【丝】【缥】【缈】【的】【雾】【气】【,】【真】【是】【一】【幅】【美】【丽】【的】【水】【墨】【画】【!】【走】【在】【石】【桥】【上】【,】【望】【着】【如】【画】【的】【风】【景】【,】【我】【陶】【醉】【了】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【晨】【的】【凤】【凰】【古】【城】【—】【—】【美】【丽】【而】【宁】【静】【,】【仿】【佛】【一】【个】【误】【入】【人】【间】【的】【仙】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【了】【晚】【上】【,】【古】【城】【却】【让】【人】【大】【吃】【一】【惊】【。】【当】【夜】【幕】【降】【临】【时】【,】【古】【城】【开】【始】【沸】【腾】【起】【来】【,】【红】【的】【灯】【绿】【的】【影】【,】【让】【古】【城】【散】【发】【出】【无】【限】【的】【魅】【力】【,】【各】【色】【的】【灯】【火】【构】【成】【了】【一】【个】【五】【彩】【的】【海】【洋】【。】【我】【漫】【步】【在】【清】【晨】【走】【过】【的】【街】【道】【上】【,】【感】【到】【的】【却】【是】【完】【全】【不】【同】【的】【韵】【味】【,】【是】【热】【情】【,】【是】【奔】【放】【!】【街】【上】【人】【来】【人】【往】【,】【红】【男】【绿】【女】【扑】【面】【而】【来】【,】【带】【来】【一】【丝】【迷】【醉】【,】【连】【清】【冷】【的】【月】【光】【此】【刻】【也】【变】【得】【多】【情】【,】【正】【含】【情】【脉】【脉】【地】【望】【着】【人】【们】【。】【商】【铺】【中】【的】【行】【人】【络】【绎】【不】【绝】【,】【热】【闹】【非】【凡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【这】【热】【闹】【当】【中】【,】【我】【感】【到】【了】【无】【比】【的】【兴】【奋】【—】【—】【多】【么】【热】【闹】【迷】【人】【的】【古】【城】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【当】【我】【坐】【在】【车】【上】【要】【离】【开】【时】【,】【望】【着】【远】【处】【依】【稀】【的】【古】【城】【的】【影】【子】【,】【我】【恋】【恋】【不】【舍】【地】【说】【道】【:】【“】【再】【见】【了】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【见】【了】【!】【美】【丽】【的】【古】【城】【,】【我】【将】【永】【远】【把】【你】【可】【爱】【的】【模】【样】【记】【在】【心】【中】【,】【记】【着】【你】【的】【神】【秘】【,】【记】【着】【你】【的】【奔】【放】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】其他货币资金【傍】【晚】【,】【大】【人】【们】【带】【着】【三】【车】【煤】【球】【,】【来】【到】【了】【村】【子】【的】【空】【地】【上】【堆】【煤】【球】【,】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【当】【然】【也】【一】【起】【来】【凑】【热】【闹】【。】【我】【们】【你】【一】【块】【、】【我】【一】【块】【,】【七】【手】【八】【脚】【地】【把】【煤】【球】【堆】【成】【了】【一】【个】【大】【大】【的】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【金】【字】【塔】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【,】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【塔】【座】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【下】【面】【搭】【一】【个】【像】【炉】【台】【一】【样】【大】【的】【小】【洞】【,】【用】【来】【放】【柴】【火】【。】【我】【们】【的】【头】【上】【、】【手】【上】【手】【都】【是】【黑】【的】【,】【个】【个】【成】【了】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【小】【包】【公】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【。】【有】【人】【故】【意】【把】【手】【上】【的】【煤】【黑】【抹】【到】【别】【人】【的】【脸】【上】【。】【这】【样】【,】【孩】【子】【们】【围】【着】【煤】【堆】【相】【互】【追】【赶】【,】【大】【人】【们】【看】【着】【我】【们】【哈】【哈】【地】【笑】【着】【。】【堆】【好】【后】【,】【大】【人】【就】【把】【一】【些】【柴】【放】【到】【那】【个】【小】【洞】【里】【,】【点】【上】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【火】【,】【不】【久】【,】【蓝】【色】【的】【火】【苗】【就】【从】【煤】【堆】【里】【往】【外】【冒】【。】【要】【等】【火】【旺】【了】【,】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【闹】【红】【火】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【才】【能】【开】【始】【,】【大】【家】【就】【先】【回】【家】【吃】【饭】【去】【了】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【上】【有】【一】【部】【永】【远】【都】【写】【不】【完】【的】【书】【,】【那】【便】【是】【母】【亲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【呱】【呱】【坠】【地】【到】【现】【在】【,】【已】【走】【过】【了】【十】【七】【载】【的】【我】【曾】【有】【过】【迷】【茫】【、】【痛】【苦】【与】【失】【意】【,】【但】【收】【获】【更】【多】【的】【是】【信】【心】【,】【因】【为】【我】【的】【身】【后】【始】【终】【有】【她】【—】【—】【我】【那】【平】【凡】【而】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【亲】【在】【默】【默】【地】【支】【持】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【小】【,】【母】【亲】【在】【我】【的】【心】【中】【就】【是】【平】【凡】【而】【伟】【大】【的】【,】【她】【拥】【有】【常】【见】【的】【那】【种】【对】【孩】【子】【的】【关】【爱】【,】【但】【她】【的】【爱】【需】【慢】【慢】【品】【尝】【,】【才】【能】【在】【细】【微】【之】【处】【见】【真】【情】【,】【严】【厉】【之】【中】【见】【呵】【护】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【忆】【深】【处】【,】【母】【亲】【是】【艰】【辛】【的】【。】【记】【得】【在】【上】【小】【学】【时】【,】【由】【于】【家】【庭】【花】【销】【大】【,】【我】【与】【姐】【姐】【的】【学】【费】【问】【题】【成】【了】【家】【里】【的】【老】【大】【难】【。】【家】【中】【仅】【靠】【父】【亲】【那】【微】【薄】【的】【收】【入】【是】【不】【够】【的】【,】【当】【姐】【姐】【与】【我】【同】【时】【开】【学】【都】【要】【拿】【学】【费】【时】【,】【可】【急】【坏】【了】【母】【亲】【。】【每】【当】【看】【到】【她】【拖】【着】【疲】【惫】【的】【身】【子】【东】【家】【走】【西】【家】【借】【时】【,】【我】【的】【心】【里】【总】【有】【一】【股】【酸】【酸】【的】【滋】【味】【,】【总】【觉】【得】【对】【不】【住】【母】【亲】【,】【母】【亲】【是】【因】【为】【我】【才】【这】【般】【为】【难】【。】【我】【当】【时】【就】【在】【心】【里】【默】【默】【发】【誓】【,】【一】【定】【要】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【长】【大】【后】【好】【好】【地】【孝】【敬】【她】【。】【然】【而】【,】【最】【害】【怕】【和】【最】【难】【过】【的】【是】【,】【两】【个】【孩】【子】【同】【时】【拿】【钱】【交】【学】【费】【,】【一】【拿】【就】【是】【好】【几】【千】【,】【仅】【靠】【母】【亲】【借】【回】【来】【的】【那】【点】【是】【不】【够】【的】【。】【这】【时】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【自】【己】【是】【那】【么】【的】【多】【余】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【我】【,】【母】【亲】【不】【就】【少】【一】【份】【忧】【愁】【吗】【?】【这】【时】【的】【我】【多】【么】【想】【快】【快】【长】【大】【,】【能】【承】【担】【起】【家】【庭】【所】【有】【的】【重】【担】【,】【让】【母】【亲】【可】【以】【少】【操】【一】【份】【心】【,】【少】【受】【一】【点】【累】【。】【但】【现】【实】【是】【残】【酷】【的】【,】【母】【亲】【还】【是】【要】【承】【担】【起】【家】【里】【的】【责】【任】【。】【好】【在】【那】【时】【,】【学】【校】【给】【我】【们】【做】【了】【一】【部】【分】【减】【免】【,】【母】【亲】【才】【长】【舒】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【紧】【皱】【的】【眉】【头】【也】【渐】【渐】【舒】【展】【开】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【学】【习】【上】【,】【母】【亲】【也】【是】【毫】【不】【懈】【怠】【,】【她】【经】【常】【说】【她】【这】【一】【生】【最】【大】【的】【缺】【憾】【就】【是】【自】【己】【没】【有】【好】【好】【把】【握】【住】【那】【一】【次】【仅】【有】【的】【读】【书】【机】【会】【,】【以】【至】【于】【现】【在】【的】【文】【化】【程】【度】【不】【高】【。】【每】【次】【她】【与】【我】【们】【说】【起】【她】【上】【学】【时】【的】【情】【景】【时】【,】【满】【脸】【都】【洋】【溢】【着】【欣】【喜】【的】【表】【情】【,】【这】【也】【许】【是】【她】【最】【甜】【蜜】【的】【回】【忆】【吧】【!】【她】【总】【希】【望】【我】【和】【姐】【姐】【能】【帮】【她】【弥】【补】【心】【中】【的】【这】【个】【缺】【憾】【,】【希】【望】【我】【们】【能】【学】【有】【所】【成】【,】【也】【算】【给】【她】【争】【口】【气】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【当】【我】【迷】【茫】【时】【,】【总】【有】【她】【在】【为】【我】【指】【引】【航】【向】【;】【每】【当】【我】【失】【意】【时】【,】【总】【有】【她】【在】【领】【我】【走】【向】【光】【明】【;】【当】【我】【骄】【傲】【时】【,】【总】【有】【她】【在】【提】【醒】【我】【,】【“】【翘】【尾】【巴】【是】【要】【失】【败】【的】【…】【…】【”】【正】【因】【为】【有】【了】【她】【的】【一】【路】【相】【伴】【,】【才】【使】【我】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【切】【乌】【云】【都】【消】【散】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【随】【着】【年】【龄】【的】【增】【长】【,】【母】【亲】【那】【青】【春】【的】【容】【颜】【已】【不】【复】【存】【在】【,】【但】【无】【论】【走】【到】【哪】【里】【,】【母】【亲】【的】【爱】【会】【一】【直】【陪】【伴】【着】【我】【,】【伴】【我】【走】【出】【迷】【茫】【,】【走】【出】【失】【意】【,】【伴】【我】【赢】【得】【成】【功】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【光】【海】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【绿】【柳】【”】【文】【学】【社】【简】【介】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【绿】【柳】【”】【文】【学】【社】【成】【立】【于】【1】【9】【9】【3】【年】【1】【月】【,】【她】【以】【“】【写】【身】【边】【事】【,】【抒】【真】【实】【情】【,】【服】【务】【教】【育】【教】【学】【,】【培】【养】【文】【学】【新】【人】【”】【为】【办】【刊】【宗】【旨】【,】【共】【出】【版】【校】【刊】【《】【绿】【柳】【》】【8】【1】【期】【。】【《】【绿】【柳】【》】【是】【在】【编】【辑】【老】【师】【的】【具】【体】【指】【导】【下】【,】【由】【文】【学】【社】【社】【员】【自】【行】【编】【辑】【并】【发】【行】【的】【属】【于】【苗】【山】【中】【学】【学】【生】【自】【己】【的】【一】【份】【贴】【心】【校】【刊】【。】【文】【学】【社】【每】【学】【年】【每】【班】【发】【展】【一】【名】【擅】【长】【写】【作】【、】【品】【学】【兼】【优】【的】【学】【生】【为】【文】【学】【社】【社】【员】【,】【到】【目】【前】【为】【止】【,】【共】【发】【展】【文】【学】【社】【社】【员】【3】【6】【0】【名】【,】【他】【们】【具】【体】【负】【责】【平】【时】【的】【稿】【件】【投】【递】【,】【学】【期】【末】【的】【审】【稿】【、】【定】【稿】【、】【写】【点】【评】【、】【校】【稿】【等】【工】【作】【。】【为】【了】【让】【文】【学】【社】【员】【开】【阔】【眼】【界】【,】【丰】【富】【自】【己】【的】【情】【感】【体】【验】【,】【积】【累】【写】【作】【素】【材】【,】【文】【学】【社】【组】【织】【了】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【的】【社】【团】【活】【动】【,】【如】【春】【游】【房】【干】【生】【态】【风】【景】【旅】【游】【区】【、】【常】【庄】【南】【峪】【药】【王】【庙】【访】【药】【王】【、】【望】【夫】【山】【采】【风】【、】【见】【马】【长】【勺】【古】【战】【场】【遗】【址】【怀】【古】【、】【孙】【家】【峪】【结】【对】【子】【、】【沂】【蒙】【革】【命】【老】【区】【寻】【找】【烈】【士】【足】【迹】【、】【清】【明】【节】【到】【莱】【芜】【烈】【士】【陵】【园】【为】【先】【烈】【敬】【献】【花】【圈】【、】【去】【镇】【上】【的】【敬】【老】【院】【为】【老】【人】【送】【温】【暖】【、】【到】【镇】【上】【的】【工】【厂】【车】【间】【去】【参】【观】【并】【体】【验】【工】【人】【生】【活】【,】【等】【等】【。】【活】【动】【之】【后】【,】【最】【大】【的】【收】【获】【自】【然】【是】【学】【生】【写】【出】【的】【一】【篇】【篇】【带】【着】【真】【实】【体】【验】【的】【美】【文】【佳】【作】【。】【1】【8】【年】【里】【,】【先】【后】【在】【多】【家】【报】【刊】【上】【发】【表】【学】【生】【作】【文】【达】【1】【 】【2】【6】【0】【余】【篇】【,】【并】【且】【在】【各】【级】【各】【类】【作】【文】【大】【赛】【中】【分】【获】【一】【、】【二】【、】【三】【等】【奖】【和】【优】【秀】【奖】【1】【 】【0】【0】【0】【余】【人】【次】【。】【2】【0】【0】【5】【年】【9】【月】【,】【“】【绿】【柳】【”】【文】【学】【社】【被】【中】【国】【教】【育】【学】【会】【授】【予】【“】【全】【国】【中】【学】【生】【文】【学】【社】【优】【秀】【文】【学】【社】【百】【家】【”】【称】【号】【,】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【9】【月】【,】【“】【绿】【柳】【”】【文】【学】【社】【被】【评】【为】【全】【国】【百】【佳】【文】【学】【社】【团】【。】【“】【绿】【柳】【”】【文】【学】【社】【已】【经】【成】【为】【苗】【山】【中】【学】【对】【外】【宣】【传】【的】【一】【张】【响】【当】【当】【的】【名】【片】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】其他货币资金【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【学】【四】【年】【级】【的】【一】【天】【,】【我】【放】【学】【后】【来】【到】【爸】【爸】【单】【位】【的】【收】【发】【室】【。】【我】【拿】【了】【当】【天】【的】【报】【纸】【,】【报】【纸】【旁】【一】【沓】【书】【信】【跳】【入】【我】【的】【眼】【帘】【,】【我】【随】【意】【翻】【看】【着】【信】【封】【。】【“】【呀】【!】【这】【不】【是】【长】【臂】【猿】【邮】【票】【吗】【?】【”】【眼】【前】【的】【这】【张】【长】【臂】【猿】【灵】【巧】【地】【攀】【在】【树】【干】【上】【的】【邮】【票】【,】【使】【我】【兴】【奋】【得】【眼】【睁】【得】【又】【大】【又】【圆】【,】【要】【知】【道】【我】【迷】【上】【集】【邮】【已】【经】【一】【年】【多】【了】【,】【这】【张】【邮】【票】【可】【是】【我】【找】【了】【许】【久】【的】【呀】【,】【有】【了】【它】【,】【那】【套】【珍】【贵】【的】【热】【带】【动】【物】【邮】【票】【就】【全】【了】【。】【可】【再】【一】【看】【,】【我】【完】【全】【失】【望】【了】【,】【唉】【,】【为】【什】【么】【偏】【偏】【是】【习】【文】【家】【的】【呢】【?】【他】【也】【在】【集】【邮】【,】【那】【个】【集】【邮】【册】【我】【见】【过】【,】【可】【漂】【亮】【了】【。】【我】【要】【跟】【他】【换】【,】【他】【肯】【定】【不】【同】【意】【,】【那】【个】【小】【气】【鬼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【虽】【然】【失】【望】【了】【,】【但】【眼】【睛】【怎】【么】【也】【舍】【不】【得】【离】【开】【那】【张】【馋】【人】【的】【邮】【票】【。】【“】【悄】【悄】【拿】【走】【,】【收】【发】【室】【里】【正】【好】【没】【人】【。】【”】【一】【个】【念】【头】【从】【我】【脑】【子】【中】【闪】【过】【。】【“】【可】【这】【是】【做】【坏】【事】【呀】【,】【这】【不】【明】【摆】【着】【是】【偷】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【落】【在】【半】【空】【中】【的】【手】【停】【住】【了】【,】【犹】【豫】【起】【来】【,】【唉】【,】【急】【死】【我】【了】【!】【想】【想】【我】【那】【一】【套】【缺】【一】【张】【的】【邮】【票】【,】【看】【看】【这】【张】【我】【久】【盼】【的】【能】【够】【补】【缺】【的】【邮】【票】【,】【我】【终】【于】【一】【狠】【心】【,】【把】【邮】【票】【连】【贴】【着】【的】【一】【小】【片】【信】【封】【纸】【都】【撕】【了】【下】【来】【,】【装】【在】【口】【袋】【里】【,】【然】【后】【把】【这】【封】【信】【压】【在】【那】【沓】【信】【的】【最】【底】【下】【。】【做】【完】【这】【一】【切】【,】【我】【深】【深】【地】【出】【了】【一】【口】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【忐】【忑】【不】【安】【地】【回】【到】【家】【里】【,】【拿】【半】【湿】【的】【毛】【巾】【捂】【住】【邮】【票】【,】【过】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【邮】【票】【处】【理】【干】【净】【了】【。】【我】【轻】【轻】【翻】【开】【集】【邮】【册】【,】【把】【长】【臂】【猿】【邮】【票】【轻】【轻】【地】【放】【进】【去】【,】【多】【么】【漂】【亮】【的】【一】【套】【邮】【票】【啊】【,】【要】【是】【往】【常】【我】【真】【会】【高】【兴】【得】【不】【得】【了】【,】【可】【是】【这】【时】【看】【来】【却】【没】【有】【什】【么】【光】【彩】【,】【那】【瞪】【得】【圆】【圆】【的】【猴】【眼】【睛】【似】【乎】【也】【在】【嘲】【弄】【我】【。】【我】【闷】【闷】【不】【乐】【地】【合】【上】【集】【邮】【册】【,】【封】【面】【上】【一】【排】【醒】【目】【的】【大】【字】【映】【入】【我】【的】【眼】【帘】【:】【集】【邮】【也】【要】【讲】【道】【德】【。】【我】【无】【力】【地】【将】【它】【翻】【过】【去】【,】【茫】【然】【地】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【。】【唉】【,】【这】【张】【本】【能】【引】【起】【我】【极】【大】【兴】【趣】【的】【邮】【票】【,】【反】【而】【给】【我】【带】【来】【了】【许】【多】【烦】【恼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【打】【开】【窗】【户】【想】【吹】【吹】【风】【,】【忽】【然】【看】【见】【习】【文】【和】【他】【的】【妈】【妈】【走】【过】【来】【。】【我】【触】【电】【似】【的】【把】【头】【缩】【了】【回】【来】【,】【听】【见】【习】【文】【哭】【诉】【着】【说】【:】【“】【舅】【舅】【说】【过】【,】【他】【这】【回】【寄】【信】【一】【定】【贴】【长】【臂】【猿】【邮】【票】【,】【好】【容】【易】【盼】【到】【了】【,】【却】【被】【人】【家】【偷】【走】【了】【。】【”】【他】【妈】【妈】【轻】【轻】【地】【安】【慰】【着】【他】【。】【这】【“】【偷】【”】【字】【不】【禁】【使】【我】【打】【了】【个】【寒】【战】【,】【我】【痛】【苦】【地】【闭】【上】【了】【双】【眼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【把】【邮】【票】【送】【回】【去】【,】【这】【样】【既】【可】【以】【摆】【脱】【我】【的】【苦】【恼】【,】【也】【可】【以】【让】【习】【文】【高】【兴】【起】【来】【。】【”】【我】【想】【着】【,】【“】【可】【怎】【么】【给】【他】【呢】【?】【让】【他】【知】【道】【是】【我】【拿】【的】【,】【他】【一】【定】【会】【骂】【我】【,】【这】【虽】【然】【仅】【此】【一】【次】【,】【但】【别】【人】【知】【道】【后】【就】【会】【讨】【厌】【我】【的】【。】【”】【我】【急】【得】【踱】【来】【踱】【去】【。】【“】【对】【了】【,】【写】【封】【信】【给】【他】【寄】【去】【,】【向】【他】【道】【歉】【,】【落】【款】【写】【上】【‘】【不】【想】【让】【你】【知】【道】【的】【人】【’】【。】【”】【说】【干】【就】【干】【,】【不】【一】【会】【我】【就】【办】【完】【了】【这】【一】【切】【,】【把】【这】【封】【信】【寄】【了】【出】【去】【。】【后】【来】【从】【别】【人】【嘴】【里】【得】【知】【习】【文】【收】【到】【了】【那】【封】【信】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【我】【再】【也】【没】【有】【做】【过】【那】【样】【的】【事】【。】【我】【将】【永】【远】【记】【住】【这】【个】【教】【训】【,】【因】【为】【我】【知】【道】【了】【只】【有】【诚】【实】【才】【会】【给】【人】【带】【来】【幸】【福】【和】【愉】【快】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【”】【因】【集】【邮】【撕】【了】【别】【人】【的】【邮】【票】【以】【后】【,】【很】【快】【就】【意】【识】【到】【不】【对】【,】【想】【办】【法】【弥】【补】【了】【自】【己】【的】【过】【错】【,】【并】【记】【住】【了】【这】【个】【教】【训】【,】【懂】【得】【了】【诚】【实】【做】【人】【的】【道】【理】【。】【我】【们】【为】【作】【者】【的】【知】【错】【能】【改】【感】【到】【高】【兴】【。】【文】【章】【的】【心】【理】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【感】【人】【,】【写】【出】【了】【“】【我】【”】【见】【了】【邮】【票】【高】【兴】【而】【想】【把】【它】【占】【为】【己】【有】【、】【撕】【了】【邮】【票】【不】【安】【而】【想】【办】【法】【补】【过】【的】【心】【路】【历】【程】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【谢】【记】【军】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【乡】【的】【老】【街】【是】【感】【性】【的】【,】【深】【入】【肌】【肤】【的】【,】【温】【暖】【地】【游】【荡】【在】【记】【忆】【的】【深】【处】【,】【而】【老】【街】【的】【味】【道】【是】【说】【不】【清】【道】【不】【明】【的】【一】【种】【感】【觉】【,】【没】【有】【“】【暗】【香】【盈】【袖】【”】【的】【销】【魂】【,】【却】【一】【直】【缠】【在】【心】【间】【,】【退】【散】【不】【去】【,】【对】【家】【乡】【的】【眷】【念】【也】【如】【同】【曹】【雪】【芹】【对】【黛】【玉】【的】【偏】【爱】【一】【样】【,】【无】【关】【理】【由】【,】【却】【偏】【偏】【是】【心】【灵】【最】【深】【处】【的】【爱】【恋】【…】【…】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【乡】【的】【老】【街】【既】【没】【有】【江】【南】【建】【筑】【的】【灵】【韵】【清】【秀】【,】【亦】【没】【有】【北】【京】【四】【合】【院】【的】【历】【史】【见】【证】【。】【它】【有】【的】【只】【是】【一】【些】【介】【于】【文】【物】【和】【废】【物】【之】【间】【的】【老】【房】【子】【,】【几】【条】【或】【是】【水】【泥】【,】【或】【是】【石】【子】【铺】【的】【沟】【壑】【般】【的】【地】【面】【,】【再】【有】【就】【是】【一】【些】【老】【到】【不】【愿】【意】【搬】【进】【高】【楼】【的】【老】【人】【。】【姥】【姥】【也】【是】【其】【中】【一】【员】【,】【因】【此】【我】【才】【得】【以】【闻】【着】【老】【街】【略】【带】【潮】【气】【的】【味】【道】【长】【大】【。】【这】【种】【味】【道】【是】【深】【入】【骨】【髓】【的】【,】【没】【有】【诗】【人】【所】【谓】【的】【扑】【鼻】【清】【幽】【,】【有】【的】【只】【是】【老】【住】【户】【们】【一】【点】【一】【点】【积】【累】【起】【的】【烟】【火】【人】【气】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【街】【早】【餐】【的】【味】【道】【是】【清】【新】【的】【,】【带】【着】【新】【打】【的】【豆】【浆】【的】【味】【儿】【。】【老】【住】【户】【们】【大】【都】【起】【得】【很】【早】【,】【五】【六】【点】【钟】【遛】【了】【早】【儿】【后】【,】【就】【会】【打】【发】【儿】【孙】【辈】【的】【起】【床】【去】【买】【早】【点】【。】【豆】【浆】【油】【条】【是】【每】【天】【必】【不】【可】【少】【的】【。】【一】【壶】【豆】【浆】【就】【够】【一】【家】【人】【美】【美】【地】【喝】【上】【一】【早】【。】【当】【然】【,】【这】【是】【很】【有】【讲】【究】【的】【。】【据】【说】【各】【早】【点】【摊】【儿】【的】【特】【色】【都】【不】【一】【样】【,】【都】【有】【自】【己】【最】【拿】【手】【的】【绝】【活】【。】【但】【当】【我】【在】【姥】【爷】【的】【注】【视】【下】【喝】【下】【他】【特】【意】【从】【街】【头】【买】【来】【的】【豆】【浆】【后】【,】【虽】【然】【并】【没】【感】【觉】【有】【什】【么】【特】【别】【用】【心】【良】【苦】【的】【价】【值】【,】【可】【是】【我】【的】【确】【感】【到】【了】【温】【暖】【的】【味】【道】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【忆】【犹】【新】【的】【味】【道】【,】【是】【老】【街】【上】【百】【家】【糖】【的】【味】【道】【。】【这】【是】【一】【特】【有】【的】【讲】【究】【。】【我】【小】【学】【时】【作】【文】【获】【了】【奖】【去】【姥】【姥】【家】【报】【喜】【。】【可】【没】【想】【到】【,】【这】【消】【息】【就】【像】【是】【插】【了】【翅】【膀】【一】【样】【飞】【遍】【了】【老】【街】【。】【那】【些】【叫】【不】【上】【名】【字】【的】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【们】【都】【挤】【到】【了】【姥】【姥】【家】【,】【一】【人】【给】【了】【我】【一】【颗】【糖】【,】【说】【是】【庆】【祝】【我】【得】【奖】【的】【大】【喜】【事】【。】【说】【实】【话】【,】【那】【些】【糖】【真】【的】【不】【好】【吃】【。】【弄】【堂】【里】【的】【住】【户】【大】【多】【不】【富】【裕】【,】【给】【的】【糖】【也】【大】【多】【廉】【价】【,】【但】【那】【百】【家】【糖】【的】【味】【道】【却】【让】【我】【一】【直】【难】【忘】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【来】【到】【这】【钢】【筋】【水】【泥】【把】【邻】【里】【关】【系】【封】【隔】【开】【来】【的】【城】【市】【后】【,】【那】【种】【味】【道】【就】【更】【是】【可】【遇】【而】【不】【可】【求】【了】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【眷】【恋】【老】【街】【的】【味】【道】【,】【因】【为】【那】【里】【有】【家】【的】【味】【道】【,】【有】【烟】【火】【人】【气】【的】【味】【道】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【篇】【文】【章】【运】【用】【了】【欲】【扬】【先】【抑】【的】【手】【法】【,】【突】【出】【了】【老】【街】【的】【味】【道】【,】【表】【现】【了】【作】【者】【对】【老】【街】【的】【眷】【念】【之】【情】【。】【作】【者】【的】【语】【言】【朴】【实】【清】【新】【,】【善】【于】【抓】【住】【老】【街】【的】【特】【点】【组】【织】【文】【章】【,】【刻】【画】【了】【作】【者】【记】【忆】【深】【处】【的】【老】【街】【的】【特】【点】【,】【托】【物】【言】【志】【的】【手】【法】【表】【达】【了】【浓】【浓】【的】【思】【念】【之】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【 】【李】【传】【鹏】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】其他货币资金【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【周】【围】【的】【一】【切】【是】【多】【么】【美】【好】【!】【可】【是】【,】【她】【什】【么】【也】【看】【不】【见】【。】【蓝】【色】【的】【天】【空】【,】【绿】【色】【的】【草】【地】【,】【红】【色】【的】【花】【朵】【…】【…】【对】【她】【来】【说】【,】【这】【些】【只】【是】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【幻】【想】【。】【但】【,】【在】【她】【脑】【海】【中】【,】【出】【现】【最】【多】【的】【还】【是】【绿】【色】【。】【因】【为】【妈】【妈】【曾】【告】【诉】【她】【,】【她】【生】【长】【的】【地】【方】【有】【大】【片】【大】【片】【绿】【茵】【茵】【的】【草】【地】【,】【她】【常】【常】【用】【手】【去】【触】【摸】【,】【用】【心】【去】【想】【象】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【才】【7】【岁】【,】【生】【着】【一】【张】【娃】【娃】【脸】【,】【粉】【嫩】【粉】【嫩】【的】【,】【扎】【着】【两】【个】【小】【辫】【子】【,】【美】【丽】【得】【像】【一】【个】【天】【使】【。】【可】【是】【,】【她】【的】【眼】【睛】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【天】【,】【她】【坐】【在】【门】【前】【,】【听】【着】【路】【人】【的】【脚】【步】【声】【,】【由】【远】【到】【近】【,】【再】【由】【近】【到】【远】【。】【她】【忽】【然】【听】【见】【一】【个】【稚】【嫩】【的】【声】【音】【说】【:】【“】【唉】【,】【快】【点】【!】【上】【课】【了】【!】【不】【然】【迟】【到】【了】【!】【”】【她】【听】【后】【默】【默】【无】【语】【。】【回】【到】【家】【,】【劈】【头】【一】【句】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【要】【上】【学】【。】【”】【说】【得】【那】【么】【坚】【决】【,】【认】【真】【。】【妈】【妈】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【眼】【睛】【里】【溢】【出】【辛】【酸】【的】【眼】【泪】【。】【她】【不】【想】【打】【击】【孩】【子】【。】【妈】【妈】【擦】【干】【了】【眼】【泪】【,】【摸】【摸】【孩】【子】【的】【脑】【袋】【,】【说】【:】【“】【好】【,】【妈】【妈】【带】【你】【去】【上】【学】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【路】【上】【,】【妈】【妈】【不】【断】【地】【擦】【拭】【眼】【泪】【,】【孩】【子】【则】【兴】【奋】【地】【嚷】【着】【:】【“】【我】【要】【去】【上】【学】【!】【上】【学】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【了】【学】【校】【,】【老】【师】【询】【问】【了】【一】【些】【话】【,】【很】【同】【情】【这】【个】【小】【女】【孩】【。】【但】【她】【也】【不】【能】【收】【下】【这】【个】【小】【女】【孩】【。】【小】【女】【孩】【哭】【着】【、】【坚】【决】【地】【对】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【想】【上】【学】【。】【”】【老】【师】【听】【了】【也】【不】【禁】【流】【下】【眼】【泪】【…】【…】【就】【这】【样】【,】【在】【老】【师】【的】【帮】【助】【下】【,】【校】【长】【终】【于】【决】【定】【收】【下】【这】【个】【小】【女】【孩】【。】【但】【什】【么】【手】【续】【也】【没】【办】【,】【也】【只】【能】【如】【此】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【以】【后】【,】【老】【师】【便】【成】【了】【小】【女】【孩】【的】【“】【随】【从】【”】【,】【尽】【心】【照】【顾】【她】【,】【辅】【导】【她】【,】【小】【女】【孩】【因】【此】【觉】【得】【很】【快】【乐】【。】【她】【非】【常】【喜】【欢】【这】【位】【温】【柔】【善】【良】【的】【女】【老】【师】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【次】【,】【课】【堂】【上】【老】【师】【一】【遍】【一】【遍】【带】【同】【学】【们】【朗】【读】【《】【草】【》】【。】【老】【师】【问】【:】【“】【你】【们】【知】【道】【小】【草】【是】【什】【么】【颜】【色】【的】【吗】【?】【”】【“】【我】【知】【道】【!】【小】【草】【是】【绿】【色】【的】【!】【”】【小】【女】【孩】【自】【信】【地】【回】【答】【道】【。】【“】【你】【真】【聪】【明】【!】【那】【么】【你】【知】【道】【绿】【色】【是】【什】【么】【样】【的】【吗】【?】【”】【老】【师】【走】【到】【她】【面】【前】【,】【那】【般】【不】【经】【意】【地】【抓】【起】【她】【的】【小】【手】【,】【从】【自】【己】【手】【里】【抽】【出】【一】【张】【绿】【色】【的】【卡】【片】【给】【她】【。】【“】【对】【了】【,】【这】【就】【是】【绿】【色】【,】【你】【真】【棒】【!】【”】【随】【即】【,】【教】【室】【里】【响】【起】【一】【片】【热】【烈】【的】【掌】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【绿】【色】【是】【什】【么】【样】【子】【的】【呢】【?】【小】【女】【孩】【仍】【然】【不】【知】【道】【。】【在】【她】【内】【心】【,】【这】【,】【成】【了】【一】【份】【期】【待】【,】【一】【份】【绿】【色】【的】【期】【待】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【,】【小】【作】【者】【大】【胆】【地】【选】【择】【了】【一】【个】【不】【太】【好】【驾】【驭】【的】【对】【象】【—】【—】【绿】【色】【。】【小】【作】【者】【在】【叙】【事】【中】【,】【向】【我】【们】【讲】【述】【了】【一】【个】【关】【于】【“】【绿】【色】【期】【待】【”】【的】【感】【人】【故】【事】【。】【文】【章】【通】【过】【运】【用】【多】【种】【描】【写】【手】【法】【,】【突】【出】【了】【小】【女】【孩】【的】【纯】【真】【可】【爱】【。】【语】【言】【简】【洁】【有】【感】【情】【,】【别】【有】【一】【种】【打】【动】【人】【心】【的】【力】【量】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【钱】【之】【俊】【)】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【成】【长】【中】【的】【难】【忘】【故】【事】【 】【晓】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【题】【目】【是】【文】【章】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【这】【个】【题】【目】【太】【宽】【泛】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【是】【政】【治】【早】【读】【课】【,】【教】【室】【是】【嗡】【嗡】【的】【读】【书】【声】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【最】【讨】【厌】【政】【治】【早】【读】【了】【,】【这】【读】【书】【声】【像】【一】【首】【首】【催】【眠】【曲】【,】【他】【趴】【在】【桌】【上】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【的】【伙】【伴】【瘦】【猴】【搞】【了】【恶】【作】【剧】【,】【画】【了】【一】【头】【胖】【得】【有】【些】【夸】【张】【的】【肥】【猪】【,】【用】【透】【明】【胶】【粘】【在】【他】【的】【后】【背】【上】【。】【同】【学】【们】【哄】【地】【大】【笑】【起】【来】【,】【此】【时】【已】【见】【周】【公】【的】【他】【哪】【里】【知】【道】【?】【正】【在】【批】【改】【作】【业】【的】【政】【治】【老】【师】【“】【眼】【镜】【蛇】【”】【很】【快】【走】【过】【来】【,】【扯】【下】【那】【张】【糟】【糕】【的】【猪】【画】【与】【同】【学】【们】【一】【起】【笑】【起】【来】【。】【她】【要】【拉】【他】【罚】【站】【,】【大】【家】【笑】【得】【喘】【不】【过】【气】【来】【。】【待】【他】【明】【白】【他】【与】【那】【个】【肥】【猪】【的】【联】【系】【时】【,】【他】【扒】【拉】【掉】【了】【她】【的】【大】【眼】【镜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【然】【,】【班】【主】【任】【那】【国】【字】【脸】【气】【得】【变】【了】【形】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【好】【大】【胆】【子】【,】【睡】【觉】【不】【说】【还】【弄】【掉】【政】【治】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【镜】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【也】【是】【头】【驴】【,】【一】【阵】【莫】【名】【其】【妙】【的】【冲】【动】【聚】【在】【了】【脑】【门】【:】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【我】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【吼】【起】【来】【。】【他】【为】【自】【己】【找】【个】【理】【由】【,】【尽】【管】【我】【成】【绩】【不】【好】【,】【但】【不】【是】【那】【又】【肥】【又】【蠢】【的】【懒】【猪】【!】【于】【是】【他】【朝】【着】【室】【外】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【拦】【他】【的】【时】【候】【,】【他】【脸】【涨】【得】【通】【红】【。】【他】【动】【了】【拳】【头】【,】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【肚】【子】【上】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【他】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【就】【这】【样】【到】【了】【一】【个】【网】【吧】【。】【网】【吧】【主】【人】【是】【个】【染】【过】【头】【发】【但】【褪】【了】【颜】【色】【、】【让】【人】【一】【看】【就】【生】【厌】【的】【女】【人】【。】【但】【穆】【珠】【珠】【顾】【不】【了】【这】【些】【,】【他】【打】【开】【“】【飞】【龙】【”】【游】【戏】【,】【很】【快】【忘】【记】【了】【刚】【才】【发】【生】【的】【一】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【这】【个】【细】【节】【与】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【联】【系】【不】【大】【,】【应】【删】【去】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【到】【了】【第】【二】【天】【清】【晨】【。】【从】【网】【吧】【一】【出】【来】【,】【穆】【珠】【殊】【肿】【着】【眼】【睛】【。】【天】【还】【未】【大】【亮】【,】【在】【经】【过】【长】【脸】【九】【叔】【的】【炸】【锅】【时】【,】【他】【拿】【了】【两】【个】【韭】【菜】【饼】【后】【便】【朝】【学】【校】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【处】【对】【穆】【珠】【珠】【“】【肿】【着】【眼】【睛】【”】【的】【细】【节】【描】【述】【不】【够】【生】【动】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【来】【。】【他】【就】【不】【想】【辍】【学】【。】【他】【恨】【一】【去】【打】【工】【就】【是】【好】【几】【年】【的】【爸】【爸】【,】【恨】【因】【为】【爸】【爸】【同】【一】【个】【“】【狐】【狸】【精】【”】【在】【一】【起】【就】【抛】【下】【他】【去】【找】【爸】【爸】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【他】【恨】【政】【治】【老】【师】【,】【恨】【班】【主】【任】【,】【他】【恨】【瘦】【猴】【,】【恨】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【,】【恨】【班】【上】【的】【同】【学】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【路】【边】【树】【枝】【上】【的】【几】【只】【乌】【鸦】【又】【朝】【着】【他】【“】【喳】【喳】【”】【地】【叫】【起】【来】【。】【好】【多】【次】【,】【他】【和】【瘦】【猴】【用】【路】【边】【的】【石】【块】【攻】【击】【乌】【鸦】【窝】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【把】【剩】【下】【的】【饼】【子】【撕】【成】【小】【块】【儿】【扔】【在】【敞】【亮】【的】【路】【面】【上】【,】【乌】【鸦】【们】【在】【树】【枝】【上】【跳】【来】【跳】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【段】【很】【有】【生】【趣】【,】【可】【以】【写】【得】【更】【生】【动】【点】【儿】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【校】【门】【口】【,】【大】【肚】【皮】【老】【头】【儿】【躺】【在】【藤】【椅】【上】【正】【打】【瞌】【睡】【。】【他】【有】【些】【犹】【豫】【,】【昨】【天】【他】【冲】【出】【门】【口】【的】【时】【候】【,】【一】【拳】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【啤】【酒】【肚】【上】【。】【正】【是】【趁】【他】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【当】【他】【犹】【豫】【之】【时】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【突】【然】【醒】【了】【,】【跳】【过】【来】【一】【把】【扯】【住】【穆】【珠】【珠】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【真】【够】【损】【的】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【你】【们】【班】【主】【任】【、】【政】【治】【老】【师】【一】【夜】【没】【合】【眼】【找】【你】【呢】【!】【”】【随】【即】【他】【又】【讲】【了】【好】【多】【与】【老】【师】【顶】【撞】【是】【坏】【孩】【子】【及】【其】【受】【到】【的】【惩】【罚】【,】【教】【育】【他】【要】【听】【老】【师】【的】【话】【,】【好】【好】【读】【书】【。】【这】【让】【穆】【珠】【珠】【听】【得】【有】【些】【心】【烦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【写】【“】【老】【头】【儿】【”】【语】【言】【可】【更】【细】【致】【些】【,】【“】【教】【育】【他】【”】【的】【叙】【写】【流】【于】【说】【教】【,】【太】【空】【泛】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【他】【走】【进】【教】【室】【时】【,】【正】【上】【旱】【读】【课】【,】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【声】【一】【片】【。】【瘦】【猴】【最】【先】【跑】【过】【来】【,】【讨】【好】【地】【说】【:】【“】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【开】【个】【玩】【笑】【,】【用】【得】【着】【那】【样】【吗】【?】【要】【不】【你】【画】【个】【大】【肥】【猪】【让】【我】【背】【着】【…】【…】【”】【他】【还】【要】【说】【下】【去】【,】【门】【“】【吱】【呀】【”】【开】【了】【,】【他】【赶】【紧】【溜】【回】【座】【位】【。】【班】【主】【任】【来】【了】【,】【他】【铁】【着】【那】【国】【字】【脸】【,】【在】【教】【室】【里】【“】【巡】【视】【”】【了】【一】【圈】【,】【但】【并】【未】【发】【脾】【气】【,】【更】【没】【有】【找】【他】【谈】【话】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【也】【进】【了】【教】【室】【,】【戴】【着】【眼】【镜】【,】【停】【在】【穆】【珠】【珠】【面】【前】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【又】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【批】【改】【作】【业】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【天】【的】【事】【好】【像】【没】【发】【生】【过】【一】【样】【。】【只】【是】【他】【不】【明】【白】【老】【师】【们】【为】【什】【么】【不】【狠】【狠】【地】【批】【评】【他】【呢】【?】【在】【他】【心】【中】【一】【直】【是】【个】【谜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【结】【尾】【的】【“】【谜】【”】【使】【主】【旨】【不】【明】【,】【此】【为】【文】【章】【之】【忌】【,】【应】【用】【含】【有】【哲】【理】【的】【词】【句】【点】【出】【来】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【文】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【最】【大】【的】【问】【题】【是】【结】【构】【上】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【,】【不】【吸】【引】【人】【。】【我】【们】【可】【梳】【理】【本】【文】【情】【节】【为】【:】【早】【课】【打】【瞌】【睡】【一】【瘦】【猴】【恶】【作】【剧】【—】【反】【叛】【俩】【老】【师】【一】【冲】【撞】【老】【门】【卫】【一】【一】【夜】【泡】【网】【吧】【—】【再】【回】【上】【学】【路】【一】【回】【校】【得】【谅】【解】【。】【若】【我】【们】【以】【穆】【珠】【珠】【从】【网】【吧】【出】【来】【写】【起】【,】【把】【主】【人】【公】【置】【身】【于】【上】【学】【路】【上】【,】【然】【后】【把】【已】【发】【生】【的】【故】【事】【穿】【插】【进】【来】【,】【再】【到】【校】【门】【口】【门】【卫】【老】【头】【的】【叮】【嘱】【、】【老】【师】【们】【的】【“】【冷】【处】【理】【”】【,】【最】【后】【点】【题】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【深】【刻】【、】【生】【动】【得】【多】【。】【同】【时】【,】【文】【中】【对】【给】【老】【师】【起】【的】【不】【雅】【称】【号】【也】【使】【文】【章】【失】【色】【不】【少】【,】【大】【大】【降】【低】【了】【文】【章】【的】【品】【味】【,】【同】【学】【们】【在】【写】【作】【时】【应】【该】【注】【意】【这】【方】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【不】【长】【疤】【的】【树】【 】【晓】【晴】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【用】【文】【尾】【点】【明】【题】【旨】【的】【语】【句】【作】【题】【目】【,】【含】【蓄】【而】【又】【吸】【引】【读】【者】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【网】【吧】【一】【出】【来】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【赶】【紧】【把】【眼】【睛】【闭】【上】【,】【好】【一】【阵】【子】【,】【他】【那】【单】【薄】【的】【眼】【皮】【才】【把】【红】【肿】【的】【眼】【球】【放】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【一】【个】【“】【放】【”】【字】【写】【出】【泡】【一】【夜】【网】【吧】【的】【穆】【珠】【珠】【的】【情】【态】【,】【形】【象】【逼】【真】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【还】【未】【大】【亮】【。】【长】【脸】【九】【叔】【炸】【锅】【的】【灶】【膛】【已】【舔】【着】【火】【苗】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【拿】【了】【两】【个】【韭】【菜】【饼】【懒】【懒】【地】【朝】【学】【校】【走】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【来】【,】【他】【今】【天】【是】【不】【准】【备】【上】【学】【的】【,】【只】【是】【那】【两】【条】【腿】【不】【听】【使】【唤】【倔】【强】【地】【要】【走】【他】【多】【年】【所】【走】【的】【路】【。】【他】【恨】【爸】【爸】【,】【一】【去】【打】【工】【就】【是】【好】【几】【年】【;】【他】【恨】【妈】【妈】【,】【她】【怕】【爸】【爸】【与】【“】【狐】【狸】【精】【”】【在】【一】【起】【就】【狠】【心】【抛】【下】【他】【去】【了】【爸】【爸】【那】【儿】【;】【他】【恨】【政】【治】【老】【师】【,】【恨】【她】【眼】【镜】【边】【那】【鄙】【夷】【嘲】【笑】【的】【冷】【光】【;】【他】【恨】【班】【主】【任】【,】【恨】【那】【木】【着】【的】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【,】【仿】【佛】【马】【上】【在】【那】【黑】【黑】【的】【脸】【膛】【上】【长】【出】【绿】【苔】【来】【;】【他】【恨】【那】【俩】【门】【牙】【像】【开】【山】【大】【斧】【的】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【,】【恨】【那】【个】【挺】【着】【脾】【酒】【肚】【的】【看】【门】【老】【头】【儿】【,】【恨】【班】【上】【的】【同】【学】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【他】【恨】【所】【有】【人】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【还】【是】【把】【时】【间】【的】【轮】【子】【拉】【回】【到】【昨】【天】【的】【这】【个】【时】【候】【。】【伴】【随】【着】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【的】【读】【书】【声】【,】【他】【恹】【恹】【欲】【睡】【,】【特】【别】【是】【欧】【朝】【朝】【那】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【的】【“】【公】【民】【权】【利】【指】【的】【是】【由】【宪】【法】【和】【法】【律】【确】【认】【并】【赋】【予】【公】【民】【享】【有】【的】【某】【种】【权】【益】【”】【简】【直】【就】【是】【一】【条】【条】【瞌】【睡】【虫】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【再】【也】【忍】【不】【住】【了】【,】【站】【在】【桌】【上】【的】【课】【本】【疲】【惫】【地】【倒】【在】【脸】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【不】【是】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【让】【他】【身】【上】【背】【上】【那】【张】【胖】【得】【有】【些】【夸】【张】【的】【肥】【猪】【,】【同】【学】【们】【肯】【定】【不】【会】【注】【意】【到】【在】【墙】【角】【处】【见】【周】【公】【的】【他】【:】【如】【果】【同】【学】【们】【不】【停】【止】【读】【书】【,】【那】【埋】【头】【批】【改】【作】【业】【的】【“】【眼】【镜】【蛇】【”】【也】【就】【不】【会】【发】【现】【他】【背】【着】【“】【肥】【猪】【”】【睡】【觉】【;】【如】【果】【她】【未】【发】【现】【他】【睡】【觉】【,】【她】【就】【不】【会】【拿】【着】【那】【张】【糟】【糕】【的】【猪】【画】【与】【同】【学】【们】【一】【起】【发】【笑】【;】【如】【果】【她】【不】【笑】【他】【,】【他】【也】【就】【不】【会】【在】【她】【拉】【他】【罚】【站】【的】【瞬】【间】【扒】【拉】【掉】【她】【的】【眼】【镜】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【穆】【珠】【珠】【就】【这】【样】【猜】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【此】【处】【用】【主】【人】【公】【的】【“】【猜】【想】【”】【将】【所】【发】【生】【的】【细】【节】【故】【事】【点】【出】【来】【,】【且】【合】【乎】【人】【物】【心】【理】【,】【很】【有】【韵】【味】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【然】【。】【班】【主】【任】【老】【人】【家】【那】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【上】【的】【青】【苔】【泛】【了】【绿】【。】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【我】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【!】【”】【穆】【珠】【珠】【吼】【起】【来】【。】【他】【为】【自】【己】【找】【个】【理】【由】【,】【尽】【管】【我】【成】【绩】【不】【好】【,】【但】【也】【不】【是】【那】【又】【肥】【又】【蠢】【的】【懒】【猪】【,】【既】【然】【你】【们】【取】【笑】【本】【少】【爷】【,】【我】【也】【就】【拼】【了】【!】【于】【是】【他】【把】【书】【包】【潇】【洒】【地】【搭】【在】【背】【上】【,】【朝】【着】【教】【室】【外】【走】【去】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阵】【阵】【凉】【风】【让】【他】【有】【些】【惬】【意】【。】【路】【边】【树】【枝】【上】【的】【几】【只】【乌】【鸦】【又】【朝】【着】【他】【喳】【喳】【地】【叫】【起】【来】【。】【他】【知】【道】【这】【些】【乌】【鸦】【记】【着】【仇】【呢】【,】【好】【多】【次】【,】【他】【和】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【用】【路】【边】【的】【石】【块】【攻】【击】【乌】【鸦】【窝】【,】【这】【些】【家】【伙】【就】【不】【服】【软】【地】【与】【他】【们】【吵】【架】【。】【穆】【珠】【珠】【把】【剩】【下】【的】【饼】【子】【撕】【成】【小】【块】【扔】【在】【敞】【亮】【的】【路】【面】【上】【,】【乌】【鸦】【们】【警】【惕】【地】【在】【树】【枝】【上】【跳】【来】【跳】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【声】【音】【听】【起】【来】【虽】【然】【似】【吵】【架】【却】【又】【有】【一】【颗】【敏】【感】【的】【心】【呢】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【觉】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【把】【乌】【鸦】【写】【成】【“】【不】【服】【软】【地】【与】【他】【们】【吵】【架】【”】【,】【符】【合】【儿】【童】【心】【理】【。】【“】【穆】【珠】【珠】【觉】【得】【”】【一】【段】【,】【正】【是】【主】【人】【公】【内】【心】【的】【写】【照】【与】【暗】【示】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【校】【门】【口】【,】【大】【肚】【皮】【老】【头】【儿】【正】【躺】【在】【藤】【椅】【上】【打】【瞌】【睡】【。】【他】【有】【些】【犹】【豫】【,】【昨】【天】【他】【冲】【出】【门】【口】【的】【时】【候】【,】【一】【拳】【砸】【在】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【啤】【酒】【肚】【上】【,】【正】【是】【趁】【他】【捂】【肚】【子】【的】【间】【隙】【才】【得】【以】【逃】【脱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【当】【他】【犹】【豫】【之】【时】【,】【老】【头】【儿】【神】【奇】【地】【醒】【了】【,】【跳】【过】【来】【一】【把】【扯】【住】【穆】【珠】【珠】【的】【胳】【膊】【:】【“】【你】【小】【子】【真】【够】【损】【的】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【快】【进】【来】【,】【你】【们】【班】【主】【任】【、】【政】【治】【老】【师】【一】【夜】【没】【合】【眼】【找】【你】【呢】【!】【”】【他】【朝】【教】【室】【走】【的】【时】【候】【,】【背】【后】【还】【传】【来】【老】【头】【儿】【的】【喊】【声】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【给】【老】【师】【认】【个】【错】【,】【可】【要】【听】【话】【呀】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【“】【老】【头】【儿】【”】【的】【神】【态】【与】【语】【言】【写】【得】【比】【较】【真】【切】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【上】【早】【读】【,】【教】【室】【里】【“】【嗡】【嗡】【”】【声】【一】【片】【。】【“】【瘦】【猴】【”】【凑】【过】【来】【,】【两】【个】【门】【牙】【闪】【着】【白】【光】【:】【“】【兄】【弟】【,】【开】【个】【玩】【笑】【,】【用】【得】【着】【像】【个】【爆】【筒】【吗】【?】【要】【不】【你】【画】【个】【大】【肥】【猪】【让】【我】【背】【着】【…】【…】【”】【他】【还】【要】【说】【下】【去】【,】【门】【“】【吱】【呀】【”】【开】【了】【,】【他】【赶】【紧】【溜】【回】【座】【位】【。】【班】【主】【任】【来】【了】【,】【他】【有】【些】【疲】【惫】【,】【仍】【背】【着】【手】【,】【铁】【着】【那】【“】【国】【字】【脸】【”】【,】【在】【教】【室】【里】【“】【巡】【视】【”】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【也】【进】【了】【教】【室】【,】【镜】【片】【上】【仿】【佛】【凝】【着】【水】【气】【,】【停】【在】【穆】【珠】【珠】【面】【前】【片】【刻】【,】【就】【又】【回】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【批】【改】【作】【业】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【天】【的】【事】【仿】【佛】【是】【一】【场】【梦】【,】【穆】【珠】【珠】【也】【变】【成】【了】【一】【个】【好】【孩】【子】【。】【偶】【尔】【同】【学】【们】【也】【调】【侃】【他】【“】【我】【是】【穆】【珠】【珠】【,】【不】【是】【穆】【猪】【猪】【”】【,】【他】【有】【些】【羞】【赧】【。】【只】【是】【他】【不】【明】【白】【老】【师】【们】【为】【什】【么】【不】【狠】【狠】【地】【批】【评】【他】【呢】【?】【所】【以】【有】【一】【天】【他】【趁】【政】【治】【老】【师】【批】【改】【作】【业】【时】【开】【了】【口】【。】【政】【治】【老】【师】【好】【像】【心】【不】【在】【焉】【,】【生】【生】【地】【来】【了】【一】【句】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哪】【棵】【树】【没】【有】【疤】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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