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2019年11月20日 05:12

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【生】【活】【,】【是】【一】【碗】【让】【人】【品】【尝】【不】【尽】【的】【①】【多】【味】【汤】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【▲】【学】【校】【组】【织】【的】【“】【邮】【票】【设】【计】【”】【大】【赛】【我】【报】【名】【参】【加】【了】【。】【从】【此】【,】【教】【室】【里】【、】【家】【中】【梦】【中】【的】【我】【随】【时】【随】【地】【都】【在】【想】【着】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【设】【计】【巧】【妙】【,】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【鹤】【立】【鸡】【群】【,】【出】【人】【头】【地】【怎】【样】【的】【设】【计】【才】【能】【博】【得】【评】【委】【的】【欢】【心】【使】【呈】【交】【上】【去】【的】【作】【品】【得】【到】【满】【意】【的】【答】【案】【,】【然】【而】【,】【事】【与】【愿】【违】【,】【我】【的】【作】【品】【是】【一】【封】【又】【一】【封】【被】【退】【回】【,】【②】【又】【不】【断】【构】【思】【、】【提】【炼】【、】【提】【升】【,】【再】【次】【设】【计】【,】【画】【出】【自】【我】【感】【觉】【良】【好】【的】【设】【计】【图】【,】【再】【交】【,】【再】【退】【,】【甚】【至】【是】【待】【定】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【生】【活】【③】【总】【是】【这】【样】【考】【验】【着】【每】【一】【个】【人】【生】【活】【正】【象】【一】【碗】【④】【红】【色】【的】【酸】【汤】【。】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【⑤】【带】【着】【一】【群】【小】【朋】【友】【,】【走】【出】【家】【门】【迎】【着】【耀】【眼】【的】【阳】【光】【,】【远】【离】【城】【市】【的】【喧】【闹】【,】【来】【到】【宁】【静】【和】【谐】【的】【大】【自】【然】【,】【沿】【着】【小】【溪】【,】【爬】【上】【山】【顶】【,】【似】【乎】【可】【以】【摸】【到】【蓝】【天】【白】【云】【,】【聆】【听】【树】【上】【清】【脆】【的】【鸟】【鸣】【声】【,】【望】【望】【山】【下】【绿】【色】【的】【田】【野】【,】【蝴】【蝶】【,】【蜜】【蜂】【成】【群】【舞】【动】【着】【翅】【膀】【绕】【过】【花】【丛】【,】【⑥】【绕】【过】【流】【水】【,】【绕】【过】【我】【们】【心】【头】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【⑦】【生】【活】【啊】【生】【活】【,】【难】【道】【它】【不】【是】【一】【碗】【盛】【满】【甜】【蜜】【五】【彩】【缤】【纷】【的】【鲜】【汤】【?】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【回】【到】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【家】【中】【,】【⑧】【看】【着】【他】【们】【终】【日】【劳】【作】【而】【在】【他】【们】【身】【上】【刻】【下】【的】【岁】【月】【的】【印】【记】【,】【不】【由】【得】【生】【出】【一】【丝】【心】【痛】【,】【拿】【起】【锄】【头】【,】【挽】【起】【菜】【篮】【,】【走】【到】【地】【里】【,】【学】【着】【他】【们】【干】【活】【,】【⑨】【一】【锄】【头】【下】【去】【,】【却】【要】【几】【倍】【的】【力】【气】【才】【拔】【得】【出】【,】【⑩】【一】【行】【又】【一】【行】【的】【土】【豆】【装】【进】【菜】【篮】【,】【【】【1】【1】【】】【一】【行】【又】【一】【行】【的】【土】【壤】【被】【挖】【得】【松】【软】【,】【空】【气】【里】【弥】【漫】【着】【新】【翻】【的】【泥】【土】【气】【息】【【】【1】【2】【】】【但】【是】【我】【早】【已】【气】【喘】【吁】【吁】【,】【手】【也】【磨】【起】【了】【血】【泡】【,】【腰】【酸】【背】【疼】【了】【,】【体】【力】【早】【已】【透】【支】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【【】【1】【3】【】】【生】【活】【,】【生】【活】【,】【它】【就】【是】【一】【碗】【带】【着】【苦】【味】【的】【黑】【汤】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【学】【校】【安】【排】【了】【军】【训】【,】【【】【1】【4】【】】【无】【论】【刮】【风】【还】【是】【下】【雨】【,】【无】【论】【是】【炎】【炎】【烈】【日】【,】【风】【雨】【无】【阻】【照】【常】【不】【误】【。】【午】【后】【,】【又】【到】【了】【军】【训】【的】【时】【间】【烈】【日】【当】【空】【,】【随】【着】【一】【声】【哨】【响】【,】【队】【伍】【排】【得】【整】【整】【齐】【齐】【,】【一】【个】【个】【训】【练】【动】【作】【,】【一】【圈】【又】【一】【圈】【的】【长】【跑】【…】【…】【【】【1】【5】【】】【每】【个】【人】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【头】【上】【水】【淋】【淋】【的】【,】【一】【条】【一】【条】【顺】【势】【而】【下】【,】【掉】【在】【嘴】【里】【,】【又】【砸】【地】【上】【,】【咸】【咸】【的】【,】【重】【重】【的】【响】【响】【的】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【我】【说】【生】【活】【真】【是】【一】【碗】【咸】【汤】【。】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【▲】【▲】【生】【活】【,】【可】【以】【说】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【酸】【甜】【苦】【【】【1】【6】【】】【咸】【,】【一】【应】【俱】【全】【,】【只】【要】【我】【们】【精】【心】【的】【【】【1】【7】【】】【调】【制】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【,】【合】【理】【安】【排】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【,】【便】【能】【调】【出】【一】【碗】【美】【味】【的】【鲜】【汤】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【行】【车】【上】【,】【风】【撩】【过】【你】【鬓】【角】【的】【碎】【发】【,】【送】【来】【淡】【淡】【的】【发】【香】【。】【你】【回】【过】【头】【轻】【声】【地】【问】【我】【:】【“】【下】【一】【站】【是】【哪】【?】【”】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【个】【女】【孩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【年】【,】【她】【5】【岁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【不】【是】【个】【聪】【明】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【因】【为】【无】【论】【学】【什】【么】【她】【都】【比】【同】【龄】【人】【慢】【好】【几】【拍】【,】【在】【同】【龄】【孩】【子】【里】【显】【得】【很】【卑】【微】【。】【她】【不】【爱】【和】【别】【人】【讲】【话】【,】【也】【没】【有】【人】【主】【动】【和】【她】【讲】【过】【话】【,】【更】【不】【会】【像】【别】【的】【孩】【子】【那】【样】【放】【肆】【地】【玩】【耍】【。】【她】【的】【妈】【妈】【来】【学】【校】【接】【她】【的】【时】【候】【,】【她】【大】【多】【时】【间】【是】【趴】【在】【角】【落】【的】【桌】【子】【上】【,】【手】【里】【拿】【着】【一】【根】【黑】【色】【的】【画】【笔】【在】【白】【纸】【上】【画】【着】【没】【有】【任】【何】【人】【看】【得】【懂】【的】【线】【条】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【年】【,】【她】【7】【岁】【,】【才】【上】【小】【学】【不】【久】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【年】【级】【家】【长】【会】【的】【时】【候】【,】【老】【师】【对】【女】【孩】【的】【妈】【妈】【讲】【:】【“】【你】【这】【个】【孩】【子】【反】【应】【总】【是】【比】【别】【的】【孩】【子】【迟】【钝】【,】【只】【会】【数】【1】【、】【2】【、】【3】【,】【连】【1】【0】【都】【数】【不】【到】【。】【而】【且】【从】【来】【不】【讲】【话】【,】【我】【想】【你】【需】【要】【带】【她】【去】【看】【看】【医】【生】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【时】【女】【孩】【的】【妈】【妈】【总】【是】【骑】【着】【一】【辆】【银】【白】【色】【的】【自】【行】【车】【载】【着】【女】【孩】【上】【学】【放】【学】【,】【肩】【上】【背】【着】【女】【孩】【稚】【气】【的】【小】【书】【包】【。】【妈】【妈】【总】【是】【骑】【得】【快】【快】【的】【,】【因】【为】【女】【孩】【喜】【欢】【风】【扑】【在】【脸】【上】【很】【舒】【服】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【家】【长】【会】【这】【天】【,】【坐】【在】【前】【座】【上】【的】【女】【孩】【若】【有】【所】【思】【地】【转】【头】【问】【道】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【老】【师】【说】【什】【么】【了】【?】【”】【妈】【妈】【沉】【默】【了】【几】【秒】【,】【突】【然】【扬】【起】【嘴】【角】【,】【笑】【容】【满】【面】【地】【说】【:】【“】【老】【师】【说】【我】【们】【宝】【贝】【很】【聪】【明】【,】【都】【会】【数】【1】【、】【2】【、】【3】【了】【!】【同】【学】【们】【都】【很】【想】【和】【你】【做】【朋】【友】【,】【问】【你】【愿】【不】【愿】【意】【呢】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【的】【吗】【?】【”】【女】【孩】【的】【眼】【里】【闪】【过】【一】【抹】【异】【样】【的】【神】【色】【。】【妈】【妈】【用】【力】【地】【点】【点】【头】【,】【坚】【定】【地】【说】【:】【“】【当】【然】【是】【真】【的】【呀】【!】【”】【那】【声】【音】【好】【像】【含】【着】【硬】【咽】【,】【带】【着】【哭】【腔】【,】【阳】【光】【下】【,】【一】【颗】【晶】【莹】【的】【泪】【珠】【从】【妈】【妈】【的】【脸】【颊】【滑】【落】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【次】【之】【后】【,】【女】【孩】【告】【别】【了】【自】【卑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【年】【,】【她】【1】【1】【岁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【因】【为】【家】【和】【学】【校】【离】【得】【比】【较】【远】【,】【爸】【爸】【妈】【妈】【又】【没】【有】【时】【间】【来】【接】【送】【,】【上】【了】【四】【年】【级】【之】【后】【,】【女】【孩】【就】【开】【始】【乘】【公】【交】【车】【上】【学】【了】【,】【每】【天】【四】【趟】【来】【回】【地】【折】【腾】【。】【有】【时】【候】【等】【得】【夜】【晚】【的】【路】【灯】【都】【亮】【了】【还】【不】【见】【公】【交】【车】【从】【路】【那】【头】【驶】【来】【;】【有】【时】【候】【车】【上】【人】【太】【拥】【挤】【只】【能】【忍】【耐】【着】【再】【等】【下】【一】【班】【;】【有】【时】【候】【撞】【上】【心】【情】【不】【好】【的】【司】【机】【,】【开】【得】【时】【快】【时】【慢】【,】【刹】【车】【一】【阵】【又】【一】【阵】【地】【考】【验】【乘】【客】【的】【“】【重】【心】【”】【;】【有】【时】【候】【好】【不】【容】【易】【到】【站】【了】【,】【也】【要】【挤】【个】【半】【天】【才】【能】【挤】【下】【车】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【次】【放】【学】【,】【校】【门】【口】【都】【会】【站】【着】【许】【多】【家】【长】【,】【把】【窄】【窄】【的】【街】【道】【堵】【得】【水】【泄】【不】【通】【。】【女】【孩】【总】【会】【不】【由】【自】【主】【地】【瞄】【几】【眼】【,】【可】【结】【果】【都】【是】【一】【样】【的】【:】【没】【有】【人】【来】【接】【她】【。】【即】【使】【是】【雨】【天】【,】【也】【只】【能】【自】【己】【顶】【着】【雨】【,】【踩】【着】【灌】【满】【水】【的】【运】【动】【鞋】【,】【很】【狼】【狈】【地】【回】【家】【,】【看】【着】【被】【父】【母】【接】【送】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【羡】【慕】【的】【种】【子】【就】【会】【在】【她】【心】【里】【悄】【悄】【地】【发】【芽】【,】【可】【对】【这】【种】【简】【单】【幸】【福】【的】【渴】【望】【女】【孩】【从】【没】【敢】【跟】【父】【母】【提】【起】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【中】【考】【结】【束】【的】【那】【天】【,】【妈】【妈】【竟】【然】【骑】【着】【那】【辆】【银】【白】【色】【的】【旧】【自】【行】【车】【在】【校】【门】【口】【等】【她】【。】【不】【知】【道】【是】【受】【宠】【若】【惊】【还】【是】【考】【试】【的】【疲】【惫】【,】【又】【或】【许】【是】【不】【习】【惯】【吧】【,】【女】【孩】【一】【路】【上】【都】【没】【有】【说】【话】【,】【玩】【弄】【着】【书】【包】【的】【带】【子】【,】【不】【同】【以】【往】【的】【,】【书】【包】【背】【在】【女】【孩】【的】【身】【上】【了】【。】【这】【时】【,】【女】【孩】【意】【识】【到】【妈】【妈】【骑】【车】【的】【速】【度】【已】【经】【不】【像】【以】【前】【那】【么】【快】【了】【。】【是】【妈】【妈】【先】【开】【口】【打】【破】【了】【沉】【默】【的】【:】【“】【宝】【贝】【已】【经】【长】【大】【喽】【,】【书】【包】【越】【来】【越】【重】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【脸】【上】【仍】【然】【挂】【着】【和】【以】【往】【一】【样】【的】【笑】【容】【,】【只】【是】【语】【气】【里】【多】【了】【些】【欣】【慰】【,】【多】【了】【些】【说】【不】【出】【的】【东】【西】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【突】【然】【明】【白】【了】【什】【么】【。】【书】【包】【重】【了】【,】【已】【经】【是】【自】【己】【在】【背】【了】【,】【她】【已】【经】【不】【是】【那】【个】【离】【开】【了】【父】【母】【就】【只】【会】【哭】【啼】【的】【小】【孩】【了】【。】【而】【躲】【在】【父】【母】【伞】【下】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【会】【懂】【得】【雨】【点】【砸】【在】【身】【上】【的】【痛】【快】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【些】【日】【子】【,】【她】【学】【会】【了】【坚】【强】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【,】【她】【1】【5】【岁】【,】【读】【初】【二】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【高】【气】【爽】【的】【一】【个】【星】【期】【天】【,】【是】【去】【学】【校】【的】【日】【子】【,】【女】【孩】【的】【妈】【妈】【坚】【持】【要】【送】【她】【去】【学】【校】【,】【女】【孩】【只】【好】【答】【应】【了】【。】【在】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【自】【行】【车】【上】【,】【她】【想】【起】【了】【很】【多】【,】【想】【起】【小】【时】【候】【自】【己】【从】【自】【行】【车】【上】【摔】【下】【去】【,】【妈】【妈】【带】【她】【去】【看】【医】【生】【的】【时】【候】【,】【妈】【妈】【焦】【急】【地】【紧】【紧】【抓】【住】【她】【的】【双】【手】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【辆】【早】【已】【被】【潮】【流】【所】【淘】【汰】【的】【车】【子】【记】【录】【了】【一】【个】【妈】【妈】【对】【一】【个】【女】【儿】【的】【爱】【!】【扶】【手】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【闪】【动】【着】【美】【丽】【的】【银】【光】【,】【后】【座】【上】【留】【着】【阳】【光】【照】【射】【后】【暖】【暖】【的】【温】【度】【。】【温】【暖】【的】【记】【忆】【一】【点】【点】【占】【据】【着】【女】【孩】【的】【心】【,】【而】【这】【个】【女】【孩】【就】【是】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【行】【车】【上】【,】【风】【撩】【过】【妈】【妈】【鬓】【角】【的】【碎】【发】【,】【送】【来】【淡】【淡】【的】【发】【香】【。】【妈】【妈】【回】【过】【头】【轻】【声】【地】【问】【我】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【前】【面】【是】【什】【么】【路】【了】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哦】【,】【原】【来】【去】【学】【校】【的】【路】【,】【妈】【妈】【根】【本】【不】【熟】【悉】【。】【我】【跃】【身】【跳】【下】【车】【,】【对】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【停】【车】【!】【”】【“】【怎】【么】【啦】【?】【”】【妈】【妈】【很】【是】【诧】【异】【。】【我】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【带】【你】【去】【我】【们】【学】【校】【!】【”】【妈】【妈】【听】【话】【地】【坐】【到】【后】【座】【上】【,】【我】【骑】【上】【去】【奋】【力】【地】【踩】【着】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【前】【面】【是】【幸】【福】【路】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【许】【文】【样】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】日记文章【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【生】【活】【,】【是】【一】【碗】【让】【人】【品】【尝】【不】【尽】【的】【①】【多】【味】【汤】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【▲】【学】【校】【组】【织】【的】【“】【邮】【票】【设】【计】【”】【大】【赛】【我】【报】【名】【参】【加】【了】【。】【从】【此】【,】【教】【室】【里】【、】【家】【中】【梦】【中】【的】【我】【随】【时】【随】【地】【都】【在】【想】【着】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【设】【计】【巧】【妙】【,】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【鹤】【立】【鸡】【群】【,】【出】【人】【头】【地】【怎】【样】【的】【设】【计】【才】【能】【博】【得】【评】【委】【的】【欢】【心】【使】【呈】【交】【上】【去】【的】【作】【品】【得】【到】【满】【意】【的】【答】【案】【,】【然】【而】【,】【事】【与】【愿】【违】【,】【我】【的】【作】【品】【是】【一】【封】【又】【一】【封】【被】【退】【回】【,】【②】【又】【不】【断】【构】【思】【、】【提】【炼】【、】【提】【升】【,】【再】【次】【设】【计】【,】【画】【出】【自】【我】【感】【觉】【良】【好】【的】【设】【计】【图】【,】【再】【交】【,】【再】【退】【,】【甚】【至】【是】【待】【定】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【生】【活】【③】【总】【是】【这】【样】【考】【验】【着】【每】【一】【个】【人】【生】【活】【正】【象】【一】【碗】【④】【红】【色】【的】【酸】【汤】【。】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【⑤】【带】【着】【一】【群】【小】【朋】【友】【,】【走】【出】【家】【门】【迎】【着】【耀】【眼】【的】【阳】【光】【,】【远】【离】【城】【市】【的】【喧】【闹】【,】【来】【到】【宁】【静】【和】【谐】【的】【大】【自】【然】【,】【沿】【着】【小】【溪】【,】【爬】【上】【山】【顶】【,】【似】【乎】【可】【以】【摸】【到】【蓝】【天】【白】【云】【,】【聆】【听】【树】【上】【清】【脆】【的】【鸟】【鸣】【声】【,】【望】【望】【山】【下】【绿】【色】【的】【田】【野】【,】【蝴】【蝶】【,】【蜜】【蜂】【成】【群】【舞】【动】【着】【翅】【膀】【绕】【过】【花】【丛】【,】【⑥】【绕】【过】【流】【水】【,】【绕】【过】【我】【们】【心】【头】【…】【…】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【⑦】【生】【活】【啊】【生】【活】【,】【难】【道】【它】【不】【是】【一】【碗】【盛】【满】【甜】【蜜】【五】【彩】【缤】【纷】【的】【鲜】【汤】【?】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【回】【到】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【家】【中】【,】【⑧】【看】【着】【他】【们】【终】【日】【劳】【作】【而】【在】【他】【们】【身】【上】【刻】【下】【的】【岁】【月】【的】【印】【记】【,】【不】【由】【得】【生】【出】【一】【丝】【心】【痛】【,】【拿】【起】【锄】【头】【,】【挽】【起】【菜】【篮】【,】【走】【到】【地】【里】【,】【学】【着】【他】【们】【干】【活】【,】【⑨】【一】【锄】【头】【下】【去】【,】【却】【要】【几】【倍】【的】【力】【气】【才】【拔】【得】【出】【,】【⑩】【一】【行】【又】【一】【行】【的】【土】【豆】【装】【进】【菜】【篮】【,】【【】【1】【1】【】】【一】【行】【又】【一】【行】【的】【土】【壤】【被】【挖】【得】【松】【软】【,】【空】【气】【里】【弥】【漫】【着】【新】【翻】【的】【泥】【土】【气】【息】【【】【1】【2】【】】【但】【是】【我】【早】【已】【气】【喘】【吁】【吁】【,】【手】【也】【磨】【起】【了】【血】【泡】【,】【腰】【酸】【背】【疼】【了】【,】【体】【力】【早】【已】【透】【支】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【【】【1】【3】【】】【生】【活】【,】【生】【活】【,】【它】【就】【是】【一】【碗】【带】【着】【苦】【味】【的】【黑】【汤】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【学】【校】【安】【排】【了】【军】【训】【,】【【】【1】【4】【】】【无】【论】【刮】【风】【还】【是】【下】【雨】【,】【无】【论】【是】【炎】【炎】【烈】【日】【,】【风】【雨】【无】【阻】【照】【常】【不】【误】【。】【午】【后】【,】【又】【到】【了】【军】【训】【的】【时】【间】【烈】【日】【当】【空】【,】【随】【着】【一】【声】【哨】【响】【,】【队】【伍】【排】【得】【整】【整】【齐】【齐】【,】【一】【个】【个】【训】【练】【动】【作】【,】【一】【圈】【又】【一】【圈】【的】【长】【跑】【…】【…】【【】【1】【5】【】】【每】【个】【人】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【头】【上】【水】【淋】【淋】【的】【,】【一】【条】【一】【条】【顺】【势】【而】【下】【,】【掉】【在】【嘴】【里】【,】【又】【砸】【地】【上】【,】【咸】【咸】【的】【,】【重】【重】【的】【响】【响】【的】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【我】【说】【生】【活】【真】【是】【一】【碗】【咸】【汤】【。】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【▲】【▲】【生】【活】【,】【可】【以】【说】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【酸】【甜】【苦】【【】【1】【6】【】】【咸】【,】【一】【应】【俱】【全】【,】【只】【要】【我】【们】【精】【心】【的】【【】【1】【7】【】】【调】【制】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【,】【合】【理】【安】【排】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【,】【便】【能】【调】【出】【一】【碗】【美】【味】【的】【鲜】【汤】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【时】【的】【我】【,】【喜】【欢】【听】【年】【过】【花】【甲】【的】【外】【婆】【讲】【小】【城】【过】【去】【的】【故】【事】【,】【听】【轰】【隆】【隆】【的】【挖】【土】【机】【如】【何】【开】【山】【建】【新】【城】【,】【听】【为】【沅】【水】【架】【桥】【的】【工】【人】【们】【运】【送】【建】【筑】【材】【料】【的】【雄】【壮】【号】【子】【…】【…】【那】【些】【故】【事】【、】【那】【些】【声】【音】【在】【我】【幼】【小】【的】【心】【里】【烙】【下】【了】【深】【深】【的】【烙】【印】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【电】【视】【机】【的】【故】【事】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【婆】【说】【在】【她】【们】【那】【个】【年】【代】【,】【最】【惬】【意】【的】【休】【闲】【方】【式】【是】【许】【多】【人】【聚】【在】【一】【起】【看】【电】【视】【。】【不】【过】【啊】【,】【外】【婆】【说】【她】【们】【看】【的】【是】【黑】【白】【电】【视】【,】【模】【模】【糊】【糊】【的】【影】【像】【时】【不】【时】【还】【夹】【杂】【着】【“】【吱】【吱】【”】【的】【响】【声】【,】【但】【只】【有】【几】【个】【频】【道】【的】【黑】【白】【电】【视】【还】【是】【很】【受】【大】【家】【的】【欢】【迎】【。】【一】【个】【村】【子】【黑】【白】【电】【视】【机】【也】【没】【几】【台】【,】【因】【此】【,】【有】【电】【视】【机】【的】【人】【家】【每】【天】【晚】【上】【总】【是】【最】【热】【闹】【的】【。】【外】【婆】【说】【现】【在】【的】【孩】【子】【可】【幸】【福】【了】【,】【电】【视】【是】【越】【来】【越】【大】【,】【越】【来】【越】【薄】【,】【电】【视】【里】【的】【人】【儿】【也】【变】【成】【了】【彩】【色】【的】【。】【什】【么】【“】【纯】【平】【”】【 】【“】【高】【清】【”】【 】【“】【液】【晶】【”】【等】【新】【词】【叫】【都】【叫】【不】【过】【来】【。】【电】【视】【的】【频】【道】【也】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【让】【人】【难】【以】【选】【择】【。】【外】【婆】【用】【自】【豪】【的】【语】【气】【说】【:】【“】【现】【在】【哪】【个】【家】【庭】【没】【电】【视】【?】【我】【也】【算】【赶】【上】【了】【这】【好】【日】【子】【喽】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【购】【物】【票】【的】【命】【运】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【婆】【说】【,】【各】【种】【购】【物】【票】【已】【成】【为】【了】【她】【生】【命】【里】【割】【舍】【不】【掉】【的】【一】【部】【分】【记】【忆】【。】【当】【然】【,】【它】【们】【也】【成】【为】【了】【岁】【月】【的】【见】【证】【物】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【婆】【说】【当】【年】【油】【、】【盐】【、】【柴】【、】【米】【、】【酱】【、】【醋】【、】【茶】【哪】【一】【样】【东】【西】【都】【是】【凭】【票】【购】【买】【的】【,】【没】【有】【票】【,】【即】【使】【你】【有】【钱】【也】【买】【不】【到】【东】【西】【。】【票】【是】【人】【们】【的】【“】【命】【根】【子】【”】【,】【丢】【了】【票】【,】【全】【家】【真】【的】【要】【喝】【西】【北】【风】【了】【!】【再】【看】【看】【现】【在】【,】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【票】【被】【大】【把】【的】【钞】【票】【和】【一】【张】【张】【银】【行】【卡】【取】【代】【,】【如】【今】【,】【也】【许】【要】【走】【进】【历】【史】【博】【物】【馆】【才】【能】【看】【见】【购】【物】【票】【的】【身】【影】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【城】【变】【奏】【曲】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【站】【在】【霓】【虹】【灯】【闪】【烁】【的】【步】【行】【街】【头】【,】【看】【见】【的】【不】【是】【外】【婆】【口】【中】【的】【木】【房】【土】【房】【,】【而】【是】【一】【座】【座】【的】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【,】【你】【看】【,】【星】【程】【大】【厦】【如】【巨】【人】【一】【般】【耸】【立】【在】【小】【城】【中】【央】【;】【当】【我】【穿】【梭】【于】【小】【城】【之】【间】【,】【脚】【下】【踏】【的】【是】【一】【条】【条】【四】【通】【八】【达】【的】【城】【市】【大】【道】【;】【当】【我】【走】【到】【人】【声】【鼎】【沸】【的】【“】【龙】【舟】【广】【场】【”】【时】【,】【我】【发】【现】【这】【儿】【早】【已】【找】【不】【到】【外】【婆】【故】【事】【里】【的】【人】【影】【子】【,】【每】【到】【晚】【上】【,】【这】【里】【华】【灯】【齐】【放】【,】【车】【如】【织】【,】【人】【如】【潮】【,】【人】【人】【脸】【上】【洋】【溢】【着】【幸】【福】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【常】【吉】【”】【高】【速】【公】【路】【的】【开】【通】【,】【提】【高】【了】【小】【城】【的】【知】【名】【度】【,】【来】【小】【城】【旅】【游】【度】【假】【的】【游】【人】【和】【投】【资】【办】【厂】【的】【客】【商】【络】【绎】【不】【绝】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【今】【,】【身】【藏】【湘】【西】【大】【山】【区】【的】【小】【城】【,】【不】【再】【像】【一】【位】【“】【长】【在】【深】【闺】【人】【未】【识】【”】【的】【少】【女】【,】【她】【正】【乘】【着】【改】【革】【的】【东】【风】【,】【踏】【着】【时】【代】【的】【节】【拍】【,】【大】【步】【向】【前】【迈】【进】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【婆】【的】【故】【事】【已】【经】【成】【为】【历】【史】【,】【小】【城】【的】【故】【事】【仍】【在】【继】【续】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【以】【小】【城】【今】【昔】【变】【化】【为】【行】【文】【线】【索】【,】【撷】【取】【了】【几】【个】【生】【活】【片】【段】【,】【组】【成】【小】【城】【发】【展】【变】【化】【的】【小】【故】【事】【,】【唱】【出】【时】【代】【腾】【飞】【的】【主】【旋】【律】【。】【文】【章】【注】【重】【今】【昔】【对】【比】【,】【让】【读】【者】【能】【够】【听】【到】【改】【革】【开】【放】【以】【来】【小】【城】【前】【进】【的】【足】【音】【,】【看】【到】【小】【城】【发】【展】【变】【化】【的】【鲜】【明】【轨】【迹】【。】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【,】【领】【起】【三】【个】【小】【故】【事】【,】【并】【独】【立】【成】【段】【,】【既】【使】【文】【章】【层】【次】【分】【明】【,】【又】【增】【加】【了】【文】【章】【的】【形】【式】【美】【。】【此】【外】【,】【语】【言】【形】【象】【生】【动】【,】【富】【于】【美】【感】【,】【也】【是】【本】【文】【的】【一】【个】【特】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【向】【明】【康】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】日记文章【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【考】【作】【文】【是】【在】【临】【场】【限】【时】【中】【完】【成】【的】【,】【这】【就】【要】【求】【考】【生】【在】【充】【足】【备】【“】【米】【”】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【还】【得】【掌】【握】【快】【速】【构】【思】【行】【文】【的】【方】【法】【。】【所】【谓】【构】【思】【行】【文】【,】【就】【是】【在】【全】【面】【深】【刻】【理】【解】【题】【旨】【的】【同】【时】【,】【迅】【速】【确】【定】【一】【个】【鲜】【明】【的】【中】【心】【思】【想】【,】【然】【后】【尽】【快】【地】【打】【开】【思】【路】【,】【选】【择】【典】【型】【生】【动】【的】【材】【料】【,】【拟】【出】【文】【章】【的】【基】【本】【框】【架】【,】【随】【之】【按】【照】【清】【晰】【的】【思】【路】【执】【笔】【行】【文】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【。】【就】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【来】【说】【,】【快】【速】【构】【思】【行】【文】【的】【途】【径】【和】【方】【法】【因】【人】【因】【题】【而】【异】【,】【下】【面】【介】【绍】【五】【个】【要】【领】【,】【供】【同】【学】【们】【参】【考】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【领】【一】【:】【事】【例】【化】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【叙】【文】【是】【记】【事】【写】【人】【的】【文】【章】【。】【我】【们】【打】【开】【试】【卷】【一】【看】【到】【作】【文】【题】【目】【,】【就】【要】【根】【据】【题】【意】【和】【要】【求】【,】【使】【思】【维】【辐】【射】【发】【散】【,】【想】【到】【与】【自】【己】【或】【他】【人】【密】【切】【相】【关】【的】【诸】【多】【事】【例】【。】【题】【目】【总】【是】【简】【短】【而】【概】【括】【的】【,】【具】【有】【开】【放】【性】【,】【写】【作】【的】【范】【围】【很】【宽】【泛】【。】【面】【对】【这】【样】【的】【“】【大】【题】【目】【”】【,】【务】【必】【沉】【着】【冷】【静】【,】【切】【莫】【认】【为】【“】【老】【虎】【吃】【天】【,】【无】【从】【下】【口】【”】【,】【应】【对】【的】【办】【法】【是】【化】【“】【大】【”】【为】【“】【小】【”】【,】【变】【“】【虚】【”】【为】【“】【实】【”】【。】【题】【目】【一】【旦】【与】【具】【体】【的】【人】【和】【事】【联】【系】【起】【来】【,】【宽】【泛】【就】【会】【变】【实】【在】【,】【无】【从】【下】【笔】【也】【会】【转】【换】【为】【有】【话】【可】【说】【。】【将】【作】【文】【题】【“】【事】【例】【化】【”】【,】【不】【要】【“】【抓】【到】【篮】【里】【就】【是】【菜】【”】【,】【也】【不】【要】【只】【抓】【“】【一】【根】【菜】【”】【,】【而】【应】【该】【多】【想】【几】【个】【事】【例】【,】【从】【中】【挑】【选】【典】【型】【而】【生】【动】【的】【、】【不】【为】【人】【熟】【知】【而】【自】【己】【却】【深】【有】【感】【触】【的】【新】【鲜】【材】【料】【。】【例】【如】【写】【“】【在】【参】【与】【中】【感】【受】【快】【乐】【”】【,】【写】【作】【的】【主】【体】【当】【然】【是】【“】【我】【(】【们】【)】【”】【,】【“】【参】【与】【”】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【这】【就】【需】【要】【事】【例】【化】【,】【并】【从】【“】【我】【(】【们】【)】【”】【的】【生】【活】【体】【验】【和】【深】【切】【感】【受】【出】【发】【,】【可】【写】【:】【参】【与】【课】【程】【改】【革】【的】【课】【堂】【教】【学】【,】【参】【与】【校】【内】【外】【的】【各】【种】【活】【动】【,】【参】【与】【学】【工】【学】【农】【学】【军】【等】【社】【会】【实】【践】【,】【参】【与】【志】【愿】【者】【的】【公】【益】【服】【务】【,】【参】【与】【家】【务】【劳】【动】【,】【参】【与】【演】【讲】【、】【辩】【论】【和】【征】【文】【等】【各】【种】【竞】【赛】【。】【所】【谓】【“】【感】【受】【快】【乐】【”】【,】【就】【是】【在】【参】【与】【中】【取】【得】【的】【成】【绩】【、】【收】【获】【、】【进】【步】【和】【经】【受】【的】【锻】【炼】【、】【内】【心】【的】【满】【足】【。】【写】【“】【参】【与】【”】【,】【需】【要】【记】【叙】【,】【“】【感】【受】【快】【乐】【”】【离】【不】【开】【适】【当】【的】【议】【论】【和】【抒】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【又】【如】【,】【写】【“】【生】【活】【舒】【展】【笑】【脸】【,】【真】【美】【!】【”】【生】【活】【的】【“】【笑】【脸】【”】【表】【现】【在】【哪】【里】【呢】【?】【用】【一】【个】【或】【几】【个】【典】【型】【的】【事】【例】【表】【现】【出】【来】【,】【重】【点】【展】【示】【其】【“】【真】【美】【”】【。】【“】【生】【活】【”】【是】【个】【大】【概】【念】【,】【可】【从】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【、】【学】【校】【生】【活】【和】【社】【会】【生】【活】【诸】【方】【面】【发】【散】【思】【考】【。】【“】【笑】【脸】【”】【是】【拟】【人】【化】【手】【法】【,】【意】【味】【着】【喜】【庆】【、】【欢】【乐】【、】【祥】【和】【、】【幸】【福】【等】【,】【例】【如】【家】【庭】【的】【喜】【事】【、】【故】【乡】【的】【新】【貌】【、】【城】【市】【的】【建】【设】【、】【文】【明】【的】【新】【风】【、】【改】【革】【的】【硕】【果】【、】【自】【我】【的】【进】【步】【…】【…】【不】【都】【是】【“】【真】【美】【”】【的】【实】【在】【内】【容】【吗】【?】【事】【例】【,】【来】【自】【“】【有】【心】【人】【”】【的】【观】【察】【和】【积】【累】【,】【“】【有】【米】【”】【是】【“】【巧】【妇】【为】【炊】【”】【的】【先】【决】【条】【件】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【领】【二】【:】【过】【程】【化】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【事】【写】【人】【,】【一】【定】【要】【具】【体】【地】【展】【现】【事】【情】【发】【生】【、】【发】【展】【和】【人】【的】【各】【种】【活】【动】【的】【过】【程】【。】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【交】【代】【时】【间】【 】【、】【地】【点】【、】【人】【物】【、】【事】【件】【、】【原】【因】【和】【结】【果】【,】【就】【是】【让】【过】【程】【清】【晰】【化】【。】【记】【某】【件】【事】【,】【把】【事】【情】【的】【起】【因】【、】【开】【端】【、】【发】【展】【、】【变】【化】【、】【高】【潮】【、】【结】【局】【写】【清】【楚】【,】【读】【者】【才】【会】【有】【真】【实】【感】【、】【认】【同】【感】【。】【展】【现】【过】【程】【,】【还】【得】【有】【顺】【序】【,】【一】【般】【是】【按】【照】【时】【间】【的】【先】【后】【顺】【叙】【;】【如】【果】【把】【结】【局】【和】【精】【彩】【的】【片】【段】【置】【于】【文】【章】【的】【开】【头】【以】【形】【成】【悬】【念】【,】【那】【是】【倒】【叙】【;】【也】【可】【暂】【时】【中】【断】【叙】【述】【的】【主】【线】【,】【插】【入】【与】【主】【线】【相】【关】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【对】【中】【心】【事】【件】【进】【行】【补】【充】【说】【明】【或】【丰】【富】【情】【节】【,】【随】【后】【再】【接】【上】【主】【线】【连】【续】【写】【下】【去】【,】【这】【是】【插】【叙】【。】【展】【现】【过】【程】【,】【要】【避】【免】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【和】【抽】【象】【笼】【统】【,】【要】【抓】【住】【最】【能】【表】【现】【主】【旨】【的】【材】【料】【进】【行】【具】【体】【细】【致】【的】【描】【述】【,】【并】【根】【据】【事】【情】【的】【发】【展】【形】【成】【波】【澜】【。】【一】【波】【三】【折】【,】【跌】【宕】【起】【伏】【,】【才】【吸】【引】【人】【。】【过】【程】【是】【发】【展】【的】【,】【可】【以】【推】【进】【的】【。】【例】【如】【上】【文】【说】【“】【生】【活】【舒】【展】【笑】【脸】【,】【真】【美】【!】【”】【在】【充】【分】【表】【现】【“】【真】【美】【”】【之】【后】【,】【还】【可】【进】【一】【步】【写】【生】【活】【的】【“】【变】【脸】【”】【,】【例】【如】【发】【生】【天】【灾】【人】【祸】【,】【给】【人】【们】【带】【来】【不】【幸】【,】【当】【我】【们】【团】【结】【奋】【斗】【,】【战】【而】【胜】【之】【,】【这】【时】【生】【活】【再】【现】【“】【笑】【脸】【”】【,】【不】【是】【更】【加】【灿】【烂】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【“】【从】【此】【,】【我】【不】【再】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【,】【横】【线】【上】【可】【填】【许】【多】【内】【容】【,】【如】【写】【“】【不】【再】【胆】【怯】【”】【,】【其】【过】【程】【应】【先】【交】【代】【“】【我】【”】【过】【去】【是】【怎】【么】【胆】【怯】【的】【,】【具】【体】【表】【现】【在】【哪】【里】【。】【接】【着】【写】【转】【变】【,】【但】【不】【可】【马】【上】【讲】【述】【转】【变】【后】【的】【现】【状】【,】【而】【应】【关】【注】【题】【中】【的】【“】【从】【此】【”】【,】【把】【“】【此】【”】【的】【实】【际】【内】【容】【说】【清】【楚】【,】【也】【即】【说】【明】【转】【变】【的】【契】【机】【和】【原】【因】【,】【随】【之】【再】【叙】【述】【“】【我】【不】【再】【胆】【怯】【”】【的】【事】【例】【,】【以】【及】【自】【己】【的】【深】【切】【体】【会】【。】【文】【章】【如】【此】【过】【程】【化】【,】【就】【充】【实】【完】【整】【、】【真】【实】【可】【信】【了】【。】【又】【如】【写】【命】【题】【作】【文】【“】【我】【很】【在】【乎】【”】【,】【首】【先】【要】【确】【定】【“】【在】【乎】【”】【的】【对】【象】【,】【也】【即】【“】【我】【”】【在】【意】【、】【看】【重】【什】【么】【,】【例】【如】【在】【乎】【分】【数】【、】【友】【谊】【、】【荣】【誉】【、】【面】【子】【、】【仪】【表】【、】【亲】【情】【、】【健】【康】【、】【文】【明】【礼】【貌】【、】【道】【德】【品】【质】【…】【…】【可】【集】【中】【一】【点】【写】【,】【也】【可】【写】【几】【点】【,】【重】【要】【的】【是】【展】【现】【过】【程】【:】【①】【我】【对】【它】【的】【在】【乎】【具】【体】【表】【现】【在】【哪】【里】【;】【②】【我】【很】【在】【乎】【是】【否】【遇】【到】【阻】【力】【、】【出】【现】【意】【外】【;】【③】【我】【为】【什】【么】【那】【么】【在】【乎】【;】【④】【如】【此】【这】【般】【地】【在】【乎】【结】【果】【怎】【样】【;】【⑤】【随】【着】【我】【的】【成】【长】【这】【种】【在】【乎】【有】【否】【发】【展】【和】【变】【化】【等】【。】【写】【“】【我】【很】【在】【乎】【”】【不】【要】【停】【留】【在】【一】【点】【上】【和】【表】【层】【上】【。】【表】【现】【过】【程】【还】【可】【以】【是】【多】【向】【的】【,】【除】【了】【“】【我】【”】【在】【乎】【的】【内】【容】【之】【外】【,】【我】【还】【应】【在】【乎】【别】【人】【对】【我】【的】【在】【乎】【,】【如】【我】【很】【在】【乎】【父】【母】【对】【我】【的】【在】【乎】【—】【—】【父】【母】【对】【我】【那】【么】【关】【爱】【、】【呵】【护】【,】【我】【在】【乎】【了】【吗】【?】【是】【否】【有】【回】【报】【感】【恩】【之】【心】【?】【作】【为】【青】【年】【学】【生】【固】【然】【在】【乎】【考】【试】【的】【分】【数】【,】【而】【对】【自】【己】【的】【思】【想】【品】【德】【、】【心】【理】【素】【质】【、】【生】【活】【能】【力】【、】【健】【康】【状】【况】【…】【…】【能】【不】【在】【乎】【吗】【?】【如】【果】【在】【这】【些】【方】【面】【给】【自】【己】【评】【分】【的】【话】【,】【能】【打】【多】【少】【分】【呢】【?】【总】【之】【,】【要】【写】【出】【应】【该】【在】【乎】【的】【,】【特】【有】【意】【义】【和】【价】【值】【的】【,】【不】【要】【在】【乎】【那】【些】【不】【值】【得】【在】【乎】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【领】【三】【:】【场】【景】【化】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【情】【的】【发】【生】【和】【人】【的】【活】【动】【,】【总】【离】【不】【开】【环】【境】【场】【所】【,】【因】【此】【记】【事】【写】【人】【别】【忘】【了】【场】【景】【描】【写】【。】【我】【们】【看】【到】【作】【文】【题】【,】【在】【想】【人】【想】【事】【的】【同】【时】【,】【也】【让】【特】【定】【的】【场】【景】【出】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【,】【这】【样】【会】【使】【形】【象】【思】【维】【更】【活】【跃】【,】【也】【更】【有】【画】【面】【感】【。】【例】【如】【写】【“】【这】【目】【光】【,】【让】【我】【久】【久】【难】【忘】【”】【,】【在】【确】【定】【了】【谁】【的】【目】【光】【之】【后】【,】【就】【应】【写】【出】【他】【(】【她】【)】【在】【什】【么】【特】【定】【的】【场】【景】【中】【有】【怎】【样】【的】【目】【光】【。】【写】【目】【光】【,】【就】【是】【写】【人】【,】【写】【人】【必】【然】【会】【涉】【及】【活】【动】【场】【所】【,】【例】【如】【抗】【非】【典】【时】【医】【务】【人】【员】【在】【医】【院】【隔】【离】【病】【房】【全】【是】【穿】【着】【防】【护】【服】【,】【只】【露】【出】【双】【眼】【,】【他】【们】【紧】【张】【、】【焦】【急】【、】【关】【切】【、】【鼓】【励】【、】【安】【慰】【、】【欣】【喜】【、】【幸】【福】【的】【目】【光】【透】【过】【面】【罩】【投】【向】【病】【人】【,】【那】【是】【多】【么】【令】【人】【感】【动】【和】【难】【忘】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【又】【如】【写】【“】【黑】【板】【上】【的】【记】【忆】【”】【(】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【上】【海】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【)】【,】【一】【般】【总】【是】【应】【从】【“】【黑】【板】【”】【切】【入】【,】【写】【出】【有】【黑】【板】【的】【场】【所】【,】【大】【多】【是】【在】【学】【校】【的】【教】【室】【里】【,】【也】【可】【以】【是】【在】【家】【里】【、】【里】【弄】【、】【校】【门】【口】【、】【食】【堂】【、】【操】【场】【、】【街】【道】【…】【…】【由】【黑】【板】【进】【而】【引】【出】【人】【在】【特】【定】【场】【景】【中】【的】【活】【动】【,】【例】【如】【第】【一】【次】【出】【黑】【板】【报】【、】【老】【师】【富】【有】【创】【意】【的】【板】【书】【、】【老】【师】【借】【助】【黑】【板】【(】【或】【现】【代】【科】【技】【的】【“】【白】【板】【”】【)】【进】【行】【教】【学】【改】【革】【、】【“】【我】【”】【在】【黑】【板】【前】【的】【精】【彩】【表】【现】【、】【一】【次】【别】【开】【生】【面】【的】【主】【题】【班】【会】【或】【家】【长】【会】【、】【黑】【板】【上】【的】【卫】【生】【评】【比】【统】【计】【或】【篮】【球】【比】【赛】【计】【分】【、】【小】【区】【黑】【板】【上】【居】【民】【们】【为】【灾】【区】【捐】【款】【的】【红】【榜】【…】【…】【一】【切】【与】【黑】【板】【有】【关】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【无】【不】【是】【在】【一】【定】【的】【场】【景】【中】【演】【绎】【的】【。】【审】【题】【时】【回】【想】【起】【难】【忘】【的】【场】【景】【,】【也】【是】【快】【速】【打】【开】【思】【路】【的】【有】【效】【方】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【领】【四】【:】【动】【态】【化】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【情】【的】【来】【龙】【去】【脉】【是】【动】【态】【的】【,】【写】【清】【事】【情】【发】【生】【表】【现】【的】【过】【程】【,】【也】【即】【把】【它】【的】【动】【态】【具】【体】【细】【致】【地】【描】【述】【出】【来】【。】【写】【人】【,】【描】【写】【语】【言】【、】【行】【动】【、】【神】【态】【、】【心】【理】【等】【,】【无】【非】【是】【给】【人】【动】【态】【感】【。】【一】【个】【人】【会】【说】【话】【,】【能】【行】【动】【,】【善】【思】【考】【,】【有】【作】【为】【,】【这】【个】【人】【就】【“】【活】【”】【了】【。】【同】【学】【们】【写】【人】【物】【,】【切】【忌】【笔】【下】【出】【现】【“】【哑】【巴】【”】【和】【“】【瘫】【痪】【者】【”】【。】【人】【物】【不】【能】【说】【、】【不】【会】【动】【,】【读】【者】【怎】【么】【“】【听】【其】【言】【、】【观】【其】【行】【”】【呢】【?】【考】【生】【在】【临】【场】【构】【思】【时】【,】【应】【把】【着】【力】【点】【放】【在】【人】【和】【事】【的】【动】【态】【描】【写】【上】【。】【例】【如】【上】【文】【所】【说】【的】【参】【与】【课】【堂】【教】【学】【,】【教】【师】【是】【怎】【么】【启】【发】【调】【动】【学】【生】【积】【极】【参】【与】【教】【学】【的】【,】【“】【我】【”】【是】【如】【何】【深】【入】【思】【考】【(】【隐】【性】【参】【与】【)】【和】【主】【动】【发】【言】【(】【显】【性】【参】【与】【)】【的】【,】【师】【生】【互】【动】【、】【生】【生】【互】【动】【是】【怎】【样】【形】【成】【乃】【至】【出】【现】【高】【潮】【的】【。】【有】【篇】【文】【章】【《】【我】【的】【老】【师】【》】【,】【这】【位】【老】【师】【是】【只】【有】【一】【条】【右】【腿】【的】【残】【疾】【人】【,】【文】【中】【写】【他】【“】【上】【课】【”】【只】【靠】【着】【健】【壮】【的】【右】【腿】【和】【一】【根】【木】【棍】【,】【一】【天】【站】【上】【好】【几】【个】【小】【时】【,】【为】【我】【们】【讲】【课】【、】【写】【板】【书】【的】【时】【候】【,】【他】【用】【木】【棍】【撑】【地】【,】【右】【腿】【离】【地】【,】【身】【体】【急】【速】【地】【一】【转】【,】【便】【转】【向】【黑】【板】【,】【写】【完】【了】【粗】【壮】【的】【粉】【笔】【字】【,】【又】【以】【拐】【杖】【为】【圆】【心】【再】【转】【回】【讲】【台】【。】【一】【个】【年】【过】【半】【百】【的】【老】【师】【,】【一】【天】【不】【知】【道】【要】【这】【样】【跳】【跃】【旋】【转】【多】【少】【次】【,】【而】【他】【每】【次】【的】【一】【转】【,】【都】【引】【起】【学】【生】【们】【一】【次】【激】【动】【的】【心】【跳】【。】【看】【,】【有】【了】【这】【样】【“】【跳】【跃】【旋】【转】【”】【的】【动】【态】【描】【写】【,】【这】【位】【可】【敬】【的】【老】【师】【就】【跃】【然】【纸】【上】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【领】【五】【:】【细】【节】【化】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【人】【物】【的】【动】【态】【写】【真】【、】【写】【细】【,】【就】【是】【细】【节】【化】【。】【有】【个】【作】【家】【说】【:】【“】【细】【节】【描】【写】【赋】【予】【艺】【术】【形】【象】【以】【生】【命】【,】【是】【文】【学】【描】【写】【中】【最】【富】【活】【力】【的】【因】【素】【。】【”】【对】【学】【生】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【来】【说】【,】【在】【叙】【事】【写】【人】【中】【能】【抓】【住】【细】【节】【,】【细】【腻】【地】【描】【述】【出】【来】【,】【定】【能】【增】【强】【文】【章】【的】【真】【实】【性】【和】【感】【染】【力】【。】【课】【文】【中】【的】【小】【说】【、】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【有】【不】【少】【精】【彩】【动】【人】【的】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【同】【学】【们】【在】【欣】【赏】【之】【余】【,】【应】【该】【学】【习】【借】【鉴】【其】【写】【法】【,】【积】【极】【地】【运】【用】【于】【自】【己】【的】【作】【文】【里】【。】【有】【个】【同】【学】【写】【《】【织】【毛】【线】【》】【,】【是】【这】【样】【写】【细】【节】【的】【:】【一】【个】【女】【孩】【乖】【乖】【地】【坐】【在】【椅】【子】【上】【,】【地】【上】【滚】【着】【一】【团】【以】【前】【逗】【小】【猫】【咪】【玩】【的】【毛】【线】【,】【女】【孩】【一】【只】【手】【缠】【了】【线】【,】【还】【勉】【强】【有】【一】【点】【空】【夹】【住】【一】【根】【针】【,】【另】【一】【只】【手】【握】【着】【另】【一】【根】【针】【,】【怎】【么】【拿】【都】【不】【舒】【服】【。】【眼】【睛】【瞪】【得】【老】【大】【老】【大】【的】【,】【盯】【着】【一】【根】【线】【,】【套】【进】【去】【,】【绕】【一】【下】【,】【挑】【出】【,】【掉】【了】【。】【“】【妈】【妈】【—】【—】【”】【…】【…】【继】【续】【套】【进】【去】【,】【绕】【一】【下】【,】【怎】【么】【挑】【不】【出】【来】【?】【…】【…】【小】【作】【者】【把】【女】【孩】【学】【织】【毛】【线】【的】【神】【态】【、】【动】【作】【如】【此】【细】【腻】【地】【描】【写】【出】【来】【,】【真】【有】【如】【见】【其】【人】【之】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【家】【李】【准】【说】【过】【:】【“】【故】【事】【好】【编】【,】【细】【节】【难】【找】【。】【”】【细】【节】【源】【于】【生】【活】【,】【表】【现】【在】【人】【们】【日】【常】【的】【行】【为】【举】【止】【、】【举】【手】【投】【足】【之】【中】【。】【做】【有】【心】【人】【,】【有】【意】【注】【意】【,】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【,】【深】【切】【体】【验】【,】【真】【实】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【还】【是】【找】【得】【到】【的】【。】【有】【个】【同】【学】【写】【《】【欣】【赏】【》】【,】【捕】【捉】【了】【妈】【妈】【劳】【作】【后】【小】【憩】【的】【“】【镜】【头】【”】【,】【请】【看】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【做】【完】【所】【有】【的】【作】【业】【,】【已】【是】【深】【夜】【,】【浓】【浓】【的】【睡】【意】【纠】【缠】【着】【我】【,】【转】【身】【时】【我】【发】【现】【妈】【妈】【倚】【在】【沙】【发】【上】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【我】【的】【睡】【意】【竟】【被】【一】【下】【子】【驱】【散】【了】【。】【妈】【妈】【睡】【得】【很】【香】【,】【不】【时】【发】【出】【轻】【轻】【的】【鼾】【声】【,】【她】【的】【肩】【上】【披】【着】【那】【件】【洗】【得】【有】【点】【褪】【色】【的】【旧】【外】【套】【,】【鼻】【梁】【上】【的】【老】【花】【眼】【镜】【已】【滑】【到】【了】【鼻】【尖】【,】【她】【手】【里】【握】【着】【的】【是】【那】【件】【为】【我】【新】【打】【的】【毛】【衣】【,】【已】【经】【织】【到】【了】【领】【口】【,】【就】【快】【完】【工】【了】【。】【岁】【月】【在】【妈】【妈】【的】【额】【上】【刻】【下】【的】【皱】【纹】【,】【那】【样】【清】【晰】【却】【又】【那】【样】【柔】【和】【,】【那】【里】【面】【一】【定】【蕴】【藏】【着】【很】【多】【感】【人】【的】【故】【事】【吧】【!】【眼】【角】【的】【鱼】【尾】【纹】【,】【我】【想】【那】【应】【该】【是】【幸】【福】【烙】【下】【的】【印】【记】【,】【似】【乎】【在】【向】【我】【讲】【述】【着】【那】【些】【快】【乐】【的】【往】【事】【。】【妈】【妈】【的】【两】【鬓】【已】【染】【了】【霜】【,】【那】【曾】【经】【温】【柔】【的】【双】【手】【已】【变】【得】【有】【些】【粗】【糙】【。】【我】【突】【然】【感】【觉】【眼】【角】【湿】【湿】【的】【。】【在】【这】【宁】【静】【的】【夜】【晚】【我】【的】【心】【却】【那】【样】【不】【宁】【静】【。】【妈】【妈】【,】【你】【累】【了】【吧】【!】【我】【从】【没】【有】【这】【样】【欣】【赏】【过】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【而】【今】【夜】【我】【却】【在】【无】【意】【中】【发】【现】【了】【妈】【妈】【的】【美】【丽】【、】【妈】【妈】【的】【可】【爱】【、】【妈】【妈】【的】【无】【私】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【位】【妈】【妈】【轻】【轻】【的】【鼾】【声】【、】【褪】【色】【的】【旧】【外】【套】【、】【滑】【落】【到】【鼻】【尖】【的】【眼】【镜】【、】【眼】【角】【的】【鱼】【尾】【纹】【、】【染】【霜】【的】【双】【鬓】【和】【粗】【糙】【的】【双】【手】【…】【…】【不】【仅】【“】【蕴】【藏】【着】【很】【多】【感】【人】【的】【故】【事】【”】【,】【而】【且】【拨】【动】【着】【读】【者】【的】【心】【弦】【,】【这】【就】【是】【细】【节】【的】【魅】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【五】【个】【要】【领】【是】【相】【互】【联】【系】【,】【相】【辅】【相】【成】【的】【。】【掌】【握】【了】【这】【些】【要】【领】【,】【临】【场】【构】【思】【时】【可】【以】【气】【定】【神】【闲】【,】【从】【容】【应】【对】【。】【当】【然】【,】【具】【备】【这】【“】【五】【功】【”】【,】【绝】【非】【靠】【灵】【光】【一】【现】【,】【临】【场】【发】【挥】【,】【而】【是】【源】【自】【平】【日】【的】【丰】【厚】【积】【累】【和】【勤】【学】【苦】【练】【,】【还】【是】【那】【句】【老】【话】【:】【工】【夫】【到】【了】【自】【然】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【教】【室】【里】【的】【书】【桌】【上】【是】【满】【桌】【的】【书】【和】【试】【卷】【,】【“】【距】【离】【中】【考】【还】【有】【X】【X】【天】【”】【的】【大】【红】【标】【语】【在】【黑】【板】【旁】【不】【时】【地】【刺】【激】【着】【我】【们】【。】【疲】【惫】【的】【我】【们】【忘】【记】【了】【如】【何】【笑】【,】【每】【天】【只】【有】【抬】【头】【4】【5】【度】【仰】【望】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【时】【才】【能】【感】【到】【有】【些】【宽】【慰】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【界】【的】【尽】【头】【静】【静】【地】【流】【淌】【着】【一】【条】【忘】【忧】【河】【,】【那】【儿】【芳】【草】【鲜】【美】【,】【蝴】【蝶】【翻】【飞】【,】【有】【一】【群】【守】【着】【忘】【忧】【河】【的】【忘】【忧】【仙】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【忘】【忧】【仙】【子】【每】【天】【都】【会】【在】【河】【边】【嬉】【戏】【,】【在】【花】【丛】【中】【飞】【舞】【,】【她】【们】【的】【脸】【上】【满】【是】【幸】【福】【的】【微】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【有】【一】【天】【,】【仙】【子】【们】【却】【毅】【然】【离】【开】【了】【那】【片】【乐】【土】【,】【再】【也】【没】【有】【回】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【忘】【忧】【河】【的】【传】【说】【,】【这】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【传】【说】【常】【在】【我】【的】【梦】【中】【出】【现】【,】【可】【是】【我】【始】【终】【不】【明】【白】【仙】【子】【们】【离】【去】【的】【理】【由】【,】【还】【暗】【地】【里】【笑】【她】【们】【的】【傻】【,】【笑】【她】【们】【的】【痴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【想】【做】【忘】【忧】【仙】【子】【,】【没】【有】【任】【何】【尘】【世】【喧】【嚣】【的】【干】【扰】【,】【不】【理】【睬】【世】【俗】【的】【眼】【光】【。】【甚】【至】【我】【还】【可】【以】【抹】【去】【记】【忆】【,】【忘】【记】【所】【有】【的】【荣】【耀】【和】【嘲】【讽】【,】【却】【依】【旧】【穿】【梭】【于】【钢】【筋】【水】【泥】【中】【,】【仍】【旧】【迎】【着】【晨】【曦】【而】【去】【,】【伴】【着】【月】【色】【而】【归】【。】【生】【活】【中】【的】【快】【节】【奏】【重】【重】【地】【将】【我】【疲】【惫】【的】【身】【体】【压】【倒】【,】【更】【躲】【不】【过】【众】【目】【睽】【睽】【的】【目】【光】【给】【我】【施】【加】【的】【无】【形】【压】【力】【,】【好】【想】【逃】【到】【忘】【忧】【河】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【将】【这】【一】【切】【写】【进】【作】【文】【中】【去】【,】【第】【二】【天】【,】【老】【师】【就】【在】【课】【堂】【上】【讲】【起】【了】【忘】【忧】【河】【的】【故】【事】【,】【同】【学】【们】【听】【了】【无】【不】【深】【深】【地】【陶】【醉】【其】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【接】【着】【,】【老】【师】【问】【了】【我】【们】【一】【个】【问】【题】【,】【他】【说】【:】【“】【如】【果】【大】【海】【上】【风】【平】【浪】【静】【,】【那】【海】【的】【美】【丽】【还】【会】【一】【如】【往】【昔】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【回】【答】【:】【“】【当】【然】【不】【如】【从】【前】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【风】【浪】【,】【那】【就】【不】【会】【有】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【的】【波】【浪】【,】【不】【会】【有】【洁】【白】【的】【浪】【花】【,】【也】【就】【失】【去】【了】【生】【机】【与】【活】【力】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【师】【笑】【着】【反】【问】【:】【“】【忘】【忧】【河】【不】【也】【是】【如】【此】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【了】【老】【师】【的】【话】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【忘】【忧】【仙】【子】【远】【去】【的】【理】【由】【:】【忘】【忧】【意】【味】【着】【只】【有】【单】【一】【的】【表】【情】【—】【—】【微】【笑】【,】【不】【会】【流】【泪】【,】【没】【有】【感】【情】【,】【生】【活】【也】【只】【是】【单】【调】【如】【一】【的】【色】【彩】【,】【那】【样】【就】【体】【会】【不】【到】【幸】【福】【。】【我】【不】【再】【向】【往】【那】【条】【忘】【忧】【河】【了】【,】【因】【为】【我】【明】【白】【,】【我】【所】【要】【到】【达】【的】【并】【非】【忘】【忧】【河】【,】【而】【是】【一】【条】【充】【满】【浪】【花】【的】【人】【生】【之】【河】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【周】【 】【斐】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】日记文章【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【精】【彩】【文】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【波】【澜】【壮】【阔】【的】【大】【海】【,】【高】【耸】【入】【云】【的】【山】【峦】【,】【郁】【郁】【葱】【葱】【的】【草】【地】【,】【连】【绵】【无】【边】【的】【森】【林】【,】【展】【翅】【翱】【翔】【的】【鸟】【儿】【…】【…】【大】【自】【然】【给】【了】【我】【们】【心】【灵】【的】【享】【受】【与】【视】【觉】【的】【愉】【悦】【。】【美】【丽】【的】【自】【然】【,】【总】【让】【人】【感】【受】【无】【穷】【;】【美】【丽】【的】【自】【然】【,】【总】【惹】【人】【浮】【想】【联】【翩】【。】【请】【以】【“】【感】【受】【自】【然】【”】【为】【话】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【6】【0】【0】【字】【左】【右】【的】【文】【章】【,】【题】【目】【自】【拟】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【构】【思】【指】【导】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【然】【是】【鬼】【斧】【神】【工】【的】【,】【于】【是】【,】【有】【了】【江】【河】【的】【奔】【涌】【,】【有】【了】【湖】【水】【的】【静】【谧】【,】【有】【了】【大】【海】【的】【浩】【淼】【,】【有】【了】【高】【山】【的】【雄】【峻】【奇】【幻】【;】【有】【了】【深】【幽】【的】【山】【野】【,】【有】【了】【荒】【凉】【的】【草】【莽】【,】【有】【了】【富】【丽】【的】【林】【泉】【;】【有】【了】【烂】【漫】【的】【春】【花】【,】【有】【了】【皎】【洁】【的】【秋】【月】【,】【有】【了】【空】【谷】【的】【幽】【兰】【…】【…】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【感】【受】【着】【自】【然】【的】【神】【奇】【,】【感】【受】【着】【自】【然】【的】【美】【丽】【。】【写】【好】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【可】【以】【从】【以】【下】【几】【个】【方】【面】【入】【手】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【勾】【画】【一】【幅】【美】【景】【。】【“】【感】【受】【自】【然】【”】【是】【一】【个】【很】【宽】【泛】【的】【话】【题】【,】【我】【们】【需】【要】【从】【自】【然】【界】【中】【选】【择】【熟】【悉】【的】【具】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【景】【物】【进】【行】【描】【写】【,】【以】【一】【处】【或】【几】【处】【景】【物】【表】【现】【自】【然】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【展】【现】【美】【丽】【风】【景】【。】【比】【如】【写】【一】【株】【小】【草】【的】【生】【长】【过】【程】【表】【现】【顽】【强】【的】【生】【命】【力】【;】【比】【如】【写】【高】【山】【上】【的】【森】【林】【营】【造】【如】【诗】【般】【的】【意】【境】【;】【比】【如】【写】【冬】【天】【的】【雪】【花】【、】【冬】【天】【的】【田】【野】【、】【冬】【天】【的】【风】【传】【递】【出】【“】【冬】【天】【到】【了】【,】【春】【天】【还】【会】【远】【吗】【?】【”】【的】【哲】【理】【;】【比】【如】【写】【荷】【花】【出】【淤】【泥】【而】【不】【染】【及】【蜻】【蜓】【、】【蝴】【蝶】【翩】【翩】【的】【盛】【夏】【美】【景】【…】【…】【在】【勾】【画】【美】【景】【的】【过】【程】【中】【,】【要】【注】【意】【表】【现】【这】【些】【美】【景】【的】【特】【征】【,】【如】【梁】【衡】【的】【《】【夏】【感】【》】【中】【“】【那】【朝】【天】【举】【着】【喇】【叭】【筒】【的】【高】【粱】【、】【玉】【米】【,】【那】【在】【地】【上】【匍】【匐】【前】【进】【的】【瓜】【秧】【”】【,】【“】【举】【着】【喇】【叭】【筒】【”】【、】【“】【匍】【匐】【前】【进】【”】【二】【词】【,】【用】【词】【简】【洁】【,】【却】【巧】【妙】【地】【描】【摹】【出】【夏】【日】【田】【地】【里】【不】【同】【景】【物】【的】【形】【象】【特】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【选】【好】【个】【性】【结】【构】【。】【好】【的】【结】【构】【会】【给】【人】【清】【新】【爽】【目】【之】【感】【。】【“】【感】【受】【自】【然】【”】【的】【过】【程】【中】【,】【可】【以】【运】【用】【小】【标】【题】【、】【题】【记】【、】【诗】【文】【穿】【插】【、】【多】【角】【度】【描】【写】【等】【结】【构】【形】【式】【彰】【显】【个】【性】【与】【创】【新】【。】【比】【如】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【四】【季】【交】【响】【曲】【》】【就】【是】【采】【用】【了】【“】【放】【飞】【梦】【想】【”】【“】【凌】【波】【嬉】【戏】【”】【“】【金】【色】【落】【叶】【”】【“】【白】【雪】【红】【梅】【”】【四】【个】【小】【标】【题】【连】【缀】【成】【文】【,】【分】【别】【将】【春】【、】【夏】【、】【秋】【、】【冬】【四】【个】【季】【节】【的】【美】【景】【徐】【徐】【拉】【开】【幕】【布】【,】【让】【读】【者】【感】【受】【自】【然】【之】【美】【。】【又】【如】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【从】【窗】【口】【看】【到】【的】【》】【则】【是】【对】【三】【首】【写】【景】【古】【诗】【的】【解】【读】【与】【扩】【写】【,】【融】【入】【了】【思】【想】【与】【情】【感】【,】【颇】【有】【创】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【运】【用】【多】【种】【手】【法】【。】【优】【美】【的】【语】【言】【,】【有】【助】【于】【画】【面】【的】【呈】【现】【,】【带】【给】【读】【者】【强】【烈】【的】【视】【觉】【冲】【击】【。】【丰】【富】【的】【想】【象】【力】【和】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【可】【以】【美】【化】【语】【言】【。】【如】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【那】【一】【抹】【红】【》】【的】【片】【段】【:】【“】【面】【对】【寒】【冬】【,】【花】【儿】【们】【纷】【纷】【低】【头】【,】【只】【有】【红】【梅】【,】【依】【然】【浅】【浅】【地】【笑】【着】【,】【在】【白】【雪】【的】【衬】【托】【下】【开】【出】【了】【艳】【丽】【的】【花】【朵】【,】【在】【雪】【中】【,】【站】【成】【了】【一】【道】【靓】【丽】【的】【风】【景】【线】【。】【”】【运】【用】【拟】【人】【的】【手】【法】【,】【将】【红】【梅】【傲】【雪】【独】【立】【的】【品】【质】【表】【现】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【灌】【木】【下】【的】【晨】【曦】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【王】【瑶】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【醺】【的】【晨】【光】【伴】【着】【泥】【土】【的】【馨】【香】【翩】【翩】【而】【至】【,】【它】【带】【来】【朵】【朵】【笑】【脸】【的】【花】【儿】【、】【只】【只】【斑】【斓】【的】【虫】【儿】【,】【还】【有】【颗】【颗】【剔】【透】【的】【小】【露】【珠】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【缕】【晨】【光】【漫】【不】【经】【心】【地】【将】【光】【柱】【射】【到】【公】【园】【角】【落】【一】【棵】【老】【灌】【木】【上】【,】【立】【即】【卷】【起】【金】【色】【粉】【尘】【飘】【飞】【炫】【舞】【,】【被】【阳】【光】【照】【得】【通】【体】【金】【绿】【的】【老】【灌】【木】【更】【是】【如】【梦】【如】【幻】【,】【仿】【佛】【参】【天】【大】【树】【般】【挺】【拔】【健】【壮】【。】【在】【它】【的】【护】【卫】【下】【,】【这】【里】【俨】【然】【是】【一】【个】【新】【的】【世】【界】【,】【每】【天】【都】【发】【生】【着】【不】【同】【的】【故】【事】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【露】【水】【在】【灌】【木】【不】【大】【的】【叶】【片】【上】【打】【着】【转】【,】【向】【这】【、】【向】【那】【滚】【动】【,】【但】【每】【次】【都】【被】【呵】【护】【的】【叶】【儿】【噙】【住】【,】【或】【者】【落】【入】【另】【一】【片】【叶】【子】【的】【怀】【抱】【,】【然】【而】【太】【阳】【一】【出】【来】【,】【它】【们】【就】【消】【失】【得】【无】【影】【无】【踪】【,】【就】【仿】【佛】【一】【个】【个】【可】【爱】【、】【顽】【皮】【的】【小】【精】【灵】【,】【当】【人】【们】【追】【寻】【它】【们】【的】【踪】【迹】【时】【,】【立】【时】【消】【失】【不】【见】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【只】【小】【甲】【虫】【蹒】【跚】【地】【爬】【上】【老】【灌】【木】【的】【一】【条】【朽】【枝】【上】【,】【灌】【木】【枝】【立】【即】【摇】【摇】【晃】【晃】【咿】【呀】【作】【响】【,】【有】【好】【几】【次】【它】【快】【要】【掉】【下】【去】【,】【黑】【亮】【的】【小】【壳】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【一】【闪】【一】【闪】【,】【它】【连】【忙】【用】【所】【有】【的】【小】【脚】【抠】【住】【叶】【秆】【,】【稳】【住】【身】【躯】【再】【敏】【捷】【地】【爬】【着】【,】【但】【甲】【壳】【显】【然】【让】【它】【负】【重】【有】【些】【大】【了】【,】【不】【久】【它】【又】【停】【住】【,】【似】【乎】【有】【了】【几】【秒】【的】【思】【考】【,】【壳】【儿】【一】【展】【,】【里】【边】【便】【伸】【出】【一】【对】【半】【黑】【半】【透】【明】【的】【小】【翅】【,】【再】【一】【展】【翅】【,】【便】【飞】【去】【不】【见】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【只】【黑】【色】【身】【体】【嵌】【着】【黄】【绿】【斑】【块】【的】【胖】【蜘】【蛛】【,】【伸】【着】【修】【长】【的】【前】【腿】【漫】【步】【走】【来】【,】【抬】【眼】【望】【望】【它】【漂】【亮】【纤】【细】【的】【蛛】【网】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【不】【知】【何】【时】【它】【的】【蛛】【网】【已】【变】【成】【一】【张】【华】【美】【的】【“】【珠】【网】【”】【,】【那】【是】【颗】【颗】【水】【晶】【般】【的】【晨】【露】【的】【杰】【作】【。】【然】【而】【蜘】【蛛】【先】【生】【没】【有】【为】【这】【张】【珠】【网】【陶】【醉】【,】【华】【而】【不】【实】【是】【它】【的】【评】【价】【,】【于】【是】【蜘】【蛛】【带】【着】【失】【望】【离】【去】【了】【。】【半】【个】【小】【时】【后】【,】【它】【会】【返】【回】【,】【那】【时】【网】【已】【被】【阳】【光】【烤】【干】【,】【或】【许】【还】【会】【粘】【上】【一】【只】【肥】【美】【的】【小】【蛾】【子】【,】【那】【才】【是】【它】【丰】【盛】【的】【早】【餐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【老】【灌】【木】【另】【一】【侧】【的】【主】【干】【上】【,】【一】【只】【背】【了】【小】【小】【圆】【壳】【的】【蜗】【牛】【正】【在】【行】【进】【,】【身】【后】【拖】【出】【一】【道】【长】【长】【的】【亮】【痕】【,】【那】【是】【它】【腺】【液】【留】【下】【的】【痕】【迹】【,】【此】【时】【在】【阳】【光】【的】【照】【射】【下】【竟】【现】【出】【彩】【虹】【般】【的】【迷】【人】【色】【彩】【。】【蜗】【牛】【没】【空】【欣】【赏】【,】【它】【今】【天】【的】【旅】【程】【很】【长】【。】【在】【途】【经】【几】【粒】【露】【珠】【时】【,】【它】【别】【无】【选】【择】【地】【压】【过】【去】【,】【打】【扰】【了】【正】【捧】【着】【露】【珠】【饮】【水】【的】【山】【蚂】【蚁】【,】【它】【慢】【吞】【吞】【地】【道】【歉】【,】【继】【续】【前】【进】【,】【腺】【液】【却】【被】【露】【珠】【冲】【淡】【了】【、】【消】【失】【了】【,】【但】【不】【久】【又】【慢】【慢】【现】【出】【了】【,】【然】【而】【它】【又】【陷】【进】【新】【的】【露】【水】【池】【,】【如】【此】【往】【复】【,】【它】【七】【彩】【的】【亮】【痕】【断】【断】【续】【续】【,】【远】【远】【望】【去】【竟】【仿】【佛】【一】【条】【精】【美】【的】【珠】【链】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【久】【之】【后】【还】【会】【有】【竹】【节】【虫】【、】【蟋】【蟀】【等】【来】【晨】【练】【,】【蝴】【蝶】【小】【姐】【也】【会】【适】【时】【到】【访】【,】【晨】【曦】【中】【老】【灌】【木】【下】【的】【故】【事】【也】【将】【一】【幕】【幕】【继】【续】【下】【去】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【美】【丽】【的】【一】【幅】【图】【画】【,】【好】【温】【馨】【的】【一】【个】【晨】【曦】【,】【好】【细】【腻】【的】【一】【颗】【心】【灵】【。】【小】【作】【者】【在】【勾】【画】【美】【景】【时】【极】【具】【匠】【心】【,】【选】【择】【了】【“】【老】【灌】【木】【下】【的】【晨】【曦】【”】【,】【角】【度】【小】【,】【可】【见】【平】【时】【的】【观】【察】【之】【认】【真】【细】【致】【。】【金】【绿】【的】【老】【灌】【木】【,】【小】【精】【灵】【般】【的】【露】【珠】【,】【蹒】【跚】【的】【小】【甲】【虫】【,】【黑】【黄】【的】【胖】【蜘】【蛛】【,】【圆】【壳】【的】【蜗】【牛】【等】【一】【一】【登】【场】【,】【热】【闹】【非】【凡】【,】【在】【小】【作】【者】【丰】【富】【的】【想】【象】【力】【驱】【动】【下】【,】【老】【灌】【木】【下】【的】【晨】【曦】【真】【的】【是】【“】【每】【天】【都】【发】【生】【着】【不】【同】【的】【故】【事】【”】【。】【好】【文】【至】【此】【,】【不】【可】【多】【得】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【赵】【俊】【辉】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【佳】【作】【示】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【季】【交】【响】【曲】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【陈】【徵】【宇】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【悦】【耳】【的】【音】【符】【跳】【出】【来】【,】【春】【天】【的】【乐】【章】【奏】【响】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【融】【化】【的】【白】【雪】【随】【着】【欢】【快】【的】【小】【溪】【奔】【向】【远】【方】【。】【第】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【投】【在】【裸】【露】【的】【土】【地】【上】【,】【天】【上】【的】【风】【筝】【就】【多】【了】【,】【地】【上】【的】【小】【孩】【也】【多】【了】【起】【来】【,】【他】【们】【在】【松】【软】【的】【泥】【土】【上】【无】【拘】【无】【束】【地】【跑】【着】【,】【用】【自】【己】【的】【方】【式】【去】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【春】【天】【。】【一】【颗】【小】【草】【偷】【偷】【地】【从】【土】【里】【钻】【出】【来】【,】【绿】【芽】【也】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【在】【枝】【条】【上】【探】【出】【身】【子】【,】【嫩】【嫩】【的】【,】【绿】【绿】【的】【。】【一】【阵】【微】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【田】【野】【里】【,】【青】【蛙】【伸】【了】【个】【懒】【腰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夏】【日】【,】【骄】【阳】【似】【火】【。】【火】【辣】【辣】【的】【太】【阳】【炙】【烤】【着】【大】【地】【,】【知】【了】【在】【树】【上】【叫】【着】【。】【孩】【子】【扑】【通】【一】【声】【跳】【进】【水】【里】【,】【溅】【起】【的】【水】【花】【跳】【进】【了】【他】【们】【的】【心】【里】【。】【蓝】【色】【的】【音】【符】【从】【水】【里】【溅】【出】【。】【人】【们】【或】【潜】【水】【,】【或】【仰】【游】【,】【尽】【情】【地】【享】【受】【着】【这】【份】【清】【凉】【。】【孩】【子】【们】【比】【赛】【着】【,】【大】【地】【仿】【佛】【在】【迅】【速】【向】【后】【退】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【张】【金】【黄】【色】【的】【大】【地】【毯】【无】【声】【无】【息】【地】【盖】【在】【大】【地】【身】【上】【。】【秋】【天】【的】【脚】【踏】【在】【金】【黄】【的】【落】【叶】【上】【,】【走】【来】【了】【。】【远】【处】【的】【山】【坡】【和】【小】【河】【都】【镀】【上】【了】【一】【层】【金】【黄】【,】【就】【像】【是】【一】【条】【条】【金】【色】【的】【银】【河】【,】【环】【绕】【在】【群】【山】【之】【间】【,】【熠】【熠】【生】【辉】【。】【连】【绵】【起】【伏】【的】【群】【山】【上】【,】【有】【几】【只】【牛】【羊】【正】【悠】【闲】【地】【吃】【草】【,】【它】【们】【身】【上】【散】【出】【一】【圈】【金】【黄】【色】【的】【淡】【淡】【的】【光】【晕】【,】【仿】【如】【一】【座】【座】【圣】【洁】【的】【塑】【像】【…】【…】【小】【溪】【的】【声】【音】【,】【牛】【羊】【的】【声】【音】【,】【秋】【风】【的】【声】【音】【,】【大】【雁】【的】【声】【音】【…】【…】【融】【合】【交】【错】【,】【奏】【出】【乐】【章】【的】【高】【潮】【。】【天】【上】【,】【大】【雁】【排】【成】【“】【人】【”】【字】【是】【对】【这】【金】【秋】【无】【言】【的】【赞】【赏】【。】【田】【野】【里】【,】【涌】【起】【金】【色】【的】【波】【浪】【,】【金】【色】【的】【音】【符】【不】【停】【滚】【动】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【片】【雪】【花】【飘】【落】【大】【地】【。】【一】【场】【大】【雪】【为】【这】【个】【世】【界】【进】【行】【一】【次】【洗】【涤】【。】【一】【切】【都】【盖】【上】【了】【厚】【厚】【的】【白】【棉】【被】【。】【孩】【子】【们】【的】【脸】【冻】【得】【通】【红】【,】【却】【毫】【不】【在】【乎】【地】【堆】【起】【了】【一】【个】【个】【雪】【人】【。】【那】【是】【一】【个】【纯】【洁】【的】【世】【界】【,】【一】【段】【天】【真】【的】【童】【年】【。】【一】【个】【雪】【球】【,】【在】【空】【中】【划】【出】【一】【条】【无】【形】【的】【彩】【虹】【,】【那】【是】【冬】【天】【的】【围】【巾】【。】【扔】【着】【雪】【球】【,】【打】【着】【雪】【仗】【,】【在】【冰】【天】【雪】【地】【里】【,】【人】【们】【的】【心】【里】【却】【都】【燃】【起】【了】【熊】【熊】【的】【火】【,】【热】【情】【使】【冬】【天】【不】【再】【冷】【清】【。】【雪】【白】【的】【音】【符】【跳】【动】【着】【,】【画】【上】【了】【句】【号】【,】【同】【时】【,】【也】【带】【出】【新】【的】【开】【始】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【色】【的】【音】【符】【,】【不】【停】【地】【跳】【动】【着】【。】【无】【垠】【的】【大】【地】【上】【,】【弹】【奏】【着】【四】【季】【的】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【是】【一】【本】【四】【季】【写】【生】【画】【,】【只】【不】【过】【画】【上】【的】【景】【物】【都】【变】【成】【了】【音】【符】【,】【清】【新】【、】【明】【快】【的】【乐】【章】【奏】【响】【全】【篇】【,】【细】【致】【、】【生】【动】【的】【描】【写】【别】【有】【情】【趣】【。】【小】【作】【者】【感】【受】【细】【腻】【,】【但】【文】【字】【流】【露】【的】【情】【调】【却】【不】【尽】【相】【同】【。】【佳】【句】【美】【景】【在】【习】【作】【中】【俯】【首】【皆】【是】【,】【四】【季】【风】【景】【别】【具】【风】【格】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【赵】【俊】【辉】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【归】【不】【用】【怨】【风】【雨】【,】【无】【雨】【无】【风】【春】【亦】【归】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【出】【处】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【宋】【·】【萧】【泰】【来】【《】【桃】【花】【》】【:】【“】【雨】【后】【桃】【花】【作】【片】【飞】【,】【风】【前】【桃】【絮】【点】【人】【衣】【。】【春】【归】【不】【用】【怨】【风】【雨】【,】【无】【雨】【无】【风】【春】【亦】【归】【。】【”】【(】【雨】【后】【的】【桃】【花】【散】【作】【片】【片】【飘】【飞】【,】【风】【前】【的】【桃】【花】【好】【似】【柳】【絮】【沾】【在】【行】【人】【的】【衣】【上】【。】【春】【天】【回】【去】【,】【不】【必】【埋】【怨】【风】【和】【雨】【,】【无】【雨】【无】【风】【春】【天】【也】【是】【照】【样】【要】【回】【去】【的】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【物】【在】【发】【展】【过】【程】【中】【将】【呈】【现】【出】【多】【变】【、】【易】【逝】【的】【现】【象】【。】【事】【物】【的】【本】【质】【都】【要】【通】【过】【这】【样】【那】【样】【的】【现】【象】【表】【现】【出】【来】【。】【但】【现】【象】【又】【不】【同】【于】【本】【质】【。】【要】【正】【确】【认】【识】【事】【物】【,】【必】【须】【把】【现】【象】【只】【看】【作】【入】【门】【的】【向】【导】【,】【一】【进】【了】【门】【,】【就】【应】【去】【分】【析】【,】【探】【寻】【事】【物】【的】【本】【质】【,】【不】【要】【倒】【果】【为】【因】【,】【不】【要】【用】【现】【象】【代】【替】【本】【质】【,】【以】【肤】【浅】【的】【认】【识】【为】【满】【足】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【时】【候】【,】【我】【家】【的】【门】【常】【被】【人】【敲】【错】【,】【因】【为】【对】【面】【住】【着】【一】【位】【处】【长】【。】【爸】【爸】【为】【了】【避】【免】【开】【门】【时】【的】【尴】【尬】【,】【便】【在】【门】【上】【掏】【了】【条】【“】【缝】【”】【。】【缝】【虽】【小】【,】【却】【让】【我】【领】【略】【了】【形】【形】【色】【色】【的】【众】【生】【相】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【晚】【上】【,】【经】【常】【有】【人】【提】【着】【大】【包】【小】【裹】【的】【礼】【物】【,】【敲】【对】【面】【处】【长】【家】【的】【门】【。】【他】【探】【出】【个】【头】【,】【先】【看】【看】【客】【人】【的】【礼】【品】【,】【再】【向】【左】【右】【看】【看】【,】【压】【低】【嗓】【门】【说】【一】【声】【“】【进】【来】【吧】【”】【,】【然】【后】【门】【便】【关】【上】【了】【。】【后】【来】【,】【不】【知】【什】【么】【原】【因】【,】【他】【家】【搬】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【过】【了】【不】【久】【,】【我】【在】【楼】【梯】【口】【撞】【见】【一】【个】【5】【0】【多】【岁】【的】【人】【。】【爸】【爸】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【他】【就】【是】【我】【们】【的】【新】【邻】【居】【,】【也】【是】【个】【处】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【了】【晚】【上】【,】【对】【面】【也】【响】【起】【了】【敲】【门】【声】【。】【我】【好】【奇】【地】【透】【过】【门】【缝】【窥】【探】【,】【只】【见】【来】【人】【提】【着】【大】【包】【小】【裹】【的】【东】【西】【站】【在】【处】【长】【家】【门】【口】【,】【处】【长】【彬】【彬】【有】【礼】【地】【打】【开】【门】【,】【热】【情】【地】【把】【客】【人】【让】【进】【屋】【。】【客】【人】【告】【别】【时】【,】【处】【长】【的】【大】【嗓】【门】【又】【惊】【动】【了】【我】【—】【—】【只】【见】【他】【一】【边】【热】【情】【地】【相】【送】【,】【一】【边】【严】【肃】【地】【跟】【客】【人】【说】【着】【什】【么】【。】【奇】【怪】【的】【是】【,】【客】【人】【手】【里】【仍】【然】【提】【着】【来】【时】【的】【东】【西】【,】【尴】【尬】【地】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【次】【,】【我】【去】【他】【家】【玩】【。】【他】【家】【很】【大】【,】【却】【没】【有】【几】【件】【像】【样】【的】【家】【具】【。】【我】【奇】【怪】【地】【问】【:】【“】【您】【家】【怎】【么】【一】【点】【儿】【也】【不】【漂】【亮】【?】【”】【他】【看】【着】【我】【笑】【了】【笑】【:】【“】【这】【样】【不】【挺】【好】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【把】【头】【一】【偏】【说】【:】【“】【从】【前】【那】【个】【处】【长】【家】【什】【么】【都】【有】【,】【可】【漂】【亮】【了】【!】【为】【什】【么】【人】【家】【送】【来】【的】【东】【西】【您】【不】【要】【?】【”】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【人】【好】【比】【是】【一】【个】【天】【平】【,】【良】【心】【这】【头】【轻】【了】【,】【利】【益】【那】【边】【自】【然】【重】【了】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【老】【处】【长】【退】【休】【了】【,】【可】【是】【他】【家】【的】【敲】【门】【声】【还】【是】【不】【断】【:】【有】【来】【探】【望】【他】【的】【,】【也】【有】【来】【感】【谢】【他】【的】【。】【春】【节】【的】【时】【候】【,】【一】【位】【客】【人】【在】【他】【家】【门】【口】【贴】【了】【一】【副】【对】【联】【:】【“】【骥】【伏】【千】【里】【为】【民】【乐】【,】【清】【袖】【廉】【政】【照】【汗】【青】【”】【。】【而】【此】【刻】【的】【老】【处】【长】【,】【还】【是】【像】【往】【常】【一】【样】【热】【情】【地】【待】【人】【,】【爽】【朗】【地】【笑】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【,】【每】【当】【我】【走】【出】【家】【门】【,】【都】【会】【不】【由】【自】【主】【地】【看】【一】【下】【这】【副】【对】【联】【。】【我】【慢】【慢】【地】【理】【解】【了】【对】【联】【的】【含】【义】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【“】【门】【缝】【里】【瞧】【人】【,】【把】【人】【看】【扁】【了】【。】【”】【可】【是】【我】【却】【从】【门】【缝】【里】【看】【到】【了】【老】【处】【长】【高】【大】【的】【形】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【选】【材】【新】【颖】【,】【构】【思】【巧】【妙】【,】【能】【小】【中】【见】【大】【,】【通】【过】【“】【门】【缝】【”】【看】【世】【界】【—】【—】【 】【“】【我】【”】【看】【到】【同】【为】【处】【长】【的】【两】【位】【干】【部】【,】【在】【为】【官】【与】【做】【人】【上】【的】【不】【同】【选】【择】【。】【以】【小】【小】【门】【缝】【透】【视】【干】【部】【,】【观】【察】【社】【会】【,】【收】【到】【“】【一】【滴】【水】【反】【映】【出】【太】【阳】【光】【辉】【”】【的】【艺】【术】【效】【果】【,】【真】【是】【视】【角】【独】【特】【,】【别】【具】【一】【格】【。】【对】【比】【手】【法】【的】【运】【用】【也】【为】【本】【文】【增】【色】【不】【少】【,】【同】【为】【处】【长】【,】【其】【言】【行】【举】【止】【大】【相】【径】【庭】【,】【一】【贪】【一】【廉】【,】【泾】【渭】【分】【明】【,】【立】【意】【深】【刻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【杨】【春】【芬】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】日记文章【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【一】【定】【每】【株】【植】【物】【都】【要】【开】【花】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【天】【,】【爸】【爸】【从】【花】【鸟】【市】【场】【带】【回】【一】【盆】【植】【物】【。】【我】【仔】【细】【地】【看】【了】【看】【,】【它】【的】【叶】【子】【绿】【色】【中】【带】【点】【黄】【色】【,】【接】【近】【圆】【形】【,】【厚】【而】【多】【汁】【,】【似】【乎】【一】【挤】【就】【能】【挤】【出】【水】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【说】【,】【它】【叫】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【到】【这】【名】【字】【,】【我】【就】【想】【起】【了】【皇】【宫】【里】【娇】【贵】【的】【公】【主】【们】【。】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【会】【不】【会】【就】【像】【它】【的】【名】【字】【一】【样】【,】【脆】【弱】【、】【娇】【滴】【滴】【的】【经】【不】【起】【任】【何】【打】【击】【?】【它】【怎】【么】【不】【开】【花】【?】【它】【的】【花】【会】【是】【什】【么】【样】【子】【、】【什】【么】【颜】【色】【?】【我】【想】【,】【等】【到】【它】【开】【花】【的】【季】【节】【就】【知】【道】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【转】【眼】【,】【到】【了】【冬】【天】【。】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【不】【但】【没】【开】【花】【,】【反】【而】【渐】【渐】【枯】【萎】【,】【叶】【子】【掉】【得】【一】【片】【也】【不】【剩】【。】【难】【道】【它】【真】【的】【像】【它】【的】【名】【字】【一】【样】【难】【伺】【候】【?】【我】【觉】【得】【它】【死】【了】【,】【不】【可】【能】【活】【过】【来】【了】【,】【爸】【爸】【却】【说】【:】【“】【它】【还】【没】【死】【呢】【,】【我】【们】【再】【看】【看】【,】【说】【不】【定】【过】【不】【了】【多】【久】【,】【它】【能】【长】【出】【新】【叶】【子】【呢】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【觉】【得】【有】【些】【不】【可】【能】【,】【但】【又】【从】【心】【里】【希】【望】【它】【真】【的】【可】【以】【“】【死】【而】【复】【生】【”】【,】【听】【爸】【爸】【的】【,】【再】【等】【等】【看】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【又】【过】【了】【几】【个】【星】【期】【,】【我】【在】【给】【其】【他】【的】【花】【浇】【水】【时】【,】【偶】【然】【发】【现】【,】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【的】【枝】【干】【上】【似】【乎】【多】【了】【一】【些】【红】【色】【的】【东】【西】【。】【是】【什】【么】【?】【我】【走】【近】【一】【看】【,】【原】【来】【,】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【重】【新】【生】【出】【了】【一】【些】【红】【色】【的】【小】【叶】【子】【!】【它】【休】【养】【了】【这】【么】【长】【时】【间】【,】【现】【在】【终】【于】【醒】【了】【,】【“】【哦】【。】【它】【活】【了】【!】【”】【我】【高】【兴】【得】【跳】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【又】【过】【了】【几】【天】【,】【红】【色】【的】【小】【叶】【子】【变】【成】【了】【绿】【色】【的】【大】【叶】【子】【,】【而】【且】【茂】【盛】【了】【许】【多】【,】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【又】【恢】【复】【到】【刚】【买】【来】【时】【那】【生】【机】【勃】【勃】【的】【样】【子】【了】【。】【它】【把】【积】【蓄】【了】【一】【个】【冬】【天】【的】【能】【量】【,】【在】【这】【几】【天】【全】【部】【释】【放】【出】【来】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【是】【,】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【始】【终】【没】【开】【花】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夏】【天】【时】【,】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【遭】【到】【了】【蚜】【虫】【的】【袭】【击】【。】【多】【得】【数】【不】【清】【的】【蚜】【虫】【在】【吸】【食】【它】【的】【汁】【液】【。】【我】【想】【,】【上】【次】【那】【关】【它】【都】【安】【全】【渡】【过】【了】【,】【这】【次】【,】【应】【该】【不】【会】【轻】【易】【被】【击】【倒】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【果】【然】【,】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【又】【挺】【过】【了】【这】【关】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【,】【你】【—】【—】【“】【金】【枝】【玉】【叶】【”】【并】【不】【是】【只】【能】【生】【活】【于】【温】【室】【的】【花】【朵】【,】【你】【也】【并】【不】【娇】【贵】【。】【这】【时】【,】【我】【已】【经】【不】【计】【较】【你】【开】【不】【开】【花】【了】【,】【因】【为】【我】【开】【始】【喜】【欢】【你】【的】【顽】【强】【了】【。】【看】【来】【,】【第】【一】【印】【象】【有】【时】【并】【不】【一】【定】【对】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【开】【花】【又】【怎】【样】【呢】【?】【你】【的】【叶】【子】【美】【得】【像】【花】【,】【你】【的】【日】【子】【过】【得】【实】【在】【。】【你】【和】【严】【寒】【斗】【,】【和】【蚜】【虫】【斗】【,】【和】【自】【己】【斗】【。】【人】【生】【,】【何】【尝】【不】【是】【如】【此】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【秋】【珍】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

日记文章:我心目中的春

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【了】【题】【目】【,】【有】【人】【会】【好】【奇】【地】【说】【:】【“】【阳】【光】【一】【直】【在】【我】【们】【身】【边】【呀】【,】【我】【们】【每】【天】【都】【沐】【浴】【着】【阳】【光】【,】【享】【受】【着】【阳】【光】【,】【你】【这】【样】【问】【是】【不】【是】【故】【弄】【玄】【虚】【呢】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【然】【不】【是】【,】【且】【听】【我】【慢】【慢】【道】【来】【…】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【学】【时】【的】【我】【是】【那】【么】【快】【乐】【,】【每】【天】【的】【生】【活】【那】【么】【让】【人】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【,】【但】【是】【随】【着】【最】【后】【的】【“】【六】【一】【”】【被】【作】【业】【淹】【没】【之】【后】【,】【那】【些】【明】【媚】【的】【阳】【光】【和】【开】【心】【的】【日】【子】【似】【乎】【被】【关】【到】【中】【学】【的】【大】【门】【外】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【,】【有】【一】【次】【和】【同】【学】【们】【去】【河】【边】【拔】【草】【喂】【兔】【子】【,】【忽】【然】【天】【上】【下】【起】【了】【雨】【,】【我】【们】【丢】【下】【了】【篮】【子】【就】【往】【家】【里】【跑】【,】【一】【路】【上】【,】【还】【嘻】【嘻】【哈】【哈】【地】【躲】【避】【着】【从】【天】【而】【降】【的】【雨】【滴】【。】【说】【也】【奇】【怪】【,】【那】【时】【我】【们】【的】【感】【觉】【是】【那】【不】【是】【雨】【,】【而】【是】【顽】【皮】【的】【小】【弟】【弟】【用】【冰】【凉】【的】【手】【指】【在】【轻】【轻】【地】【点】【着】【我】【们】【玩】【儿】【,】【那】【风】【也】【不】【再】【是】【风】【,】【而】【是】【可】【爱】【的】【小】【妹】【妹】【用】【长】【长】【的】【柔】【发】【轻】【抚】【着】【我】【们】【的】【心】【。】【那】【时】【的】【我】【们】【是】【多】【么】【快】【乐】【呀】【,】【即】【使】【是】【阴】【雨】【狂】【风】【我】【依】【旧】【觉】【得】【温】【暖】【如】【春】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【当】【看】【到】【高】【年】【级】【的】【哥】【哥】【姐】【姐】【们】【绷】【着】【脸】【在】【我】【们】【眼】【前】【晃】【来】【晃】【去】【时】【,】【心】【里】【就】【特】【别】【的】【别】【扭】【。】【班】【里】【的】【同】【学】【们】【不】【知】【从】【何】【时】【起】【开】【始】【“】【回】【忆】【童】【年】【”】【:】【折】【纸】【飞】【机】【的】【,】【在】【水】【泥】【台】【上】【打】【乒】【乓】【球】【的】【,】【操】【场】【上】【玩】【追】【人】【的】【…】【…】【呀】【,】【你】【看】【,】【蓝】【天】【上】【的】【白】【云】【好】【像】【我】【家】【的】【大】【兔】【子】【带】【领】【着】【小】【兔】【子】【跳】【着】【,】【笑】【着】【;】【阳】【光】【轻】【柔】【,】【温】【暖】【得】【像】【母】【亲】【的】【手】【;】【空】【气】【中】【散】【发】【着】【阵】【阵】【芳】【香】【,】【吸】【一】【口】【,】【沁】【人】【心】【脾】【;】【操】【场】【上】【,】【草】【地】【间】【散】【落】【着】【晶】【莹】【剔】【透】【的】【钻】【石】【,】【闪】【着】【亮】【丽】【的】【银】【光】【,】【走】【近】【看】【才】【明】【白】【,】【那】【是】【昨】【夜】【小】【雨】【给】【草】【地】【的】【礼】【物】【—】【—】【露】【珠】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【,】【我】【才】【明】【白】【:】【原】【来】【快】【乐】【藏】【在】【每】【个】【人】【的】【心】【里】【。】【看】【到】【阳】【光】【是】【暖】【的】【,】【白】【云】【是】【软】【的】【,】【花】【儿】【是】【艳】【的】【,】【这】【就】【是】【好】【心】【情】【,】【心】【在】【它】【就】【在】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【午】【后】【,】【云】【渐】【渐】【厚】【了】【,】【街】【灯】【下】【,】【雨】【又】【开】【始】【滴】【滴】【答】【答】【地】【敲】【起】【欢】【乐】【的】【鼓】【点】【。】【同】【学】【们】【站】【在】【教】【学】【楼】【门】【口】【,】【有】【的】【叹】【气】【,】【有】【的】【摇】【头】【,】【有】【的】【皱】【眉】【,】【“】【没】【带】【伞】【,】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【”】【我】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【怕】【什】【么】【,】【伞】【会】【挡】【住】【我】【们】【的】【快】【乐】【!】【”】【于】【是】【拉】【起】【她】【们】【的】【手】【,】【“】【来】【,】【我】【们】【跑】【着】【去】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【阳】【光】【穿】【过】【玻】【璃】【微】【笑】【着】【来】【到】【我】【的】【面】【前】【,】【推】【开】【窗】【户】【昂】【首】【远】【望】【,】【天】【空】【万】【里】【无】【云】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【阳】【光】【,】【你】【永】【远】【在】【我】【心】【里】【,】【对】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【取】【材】【新】【颖】【,】【构】【思】【奇】【巧】【。】【以】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【语】【言】【,】【记】【叙】【了】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【事】【情】【,】【流】【露】【出】【小】【作】【者】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【心】【态】【。】【熟】【练】【地】【运】【用】【修】【辞】【,】【是】【文】【章】【的】【又】【一】【亮】【点】【。】【如】【“】【蓝】【天】【上】【的】【白】【云】【好】【像】【我】【家】【的】【大】【兔】【子】【带】【领】【着】【小】【兔】【子】【跳】【着】【,】【笑】【着】【”】【一】【句】【,】【透】【露】【出】【清】【新】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【和】【儿】【童】【的】【天】【真】【活】【泼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【秀】【娟】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】日记文章【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【,】【挽】【着】【满】【天】【的】【星】【星】【,】【牵】【着】【最】【真】【最】【诚】【的】【思】【绪】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【星】【星】【总】【是】【那】【么】【的】【无】【忧】【无】【虑】【,】【亮】【晶】【晶】【的】【一】【闪】【一】【闪】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【整】【个】【黑】【夜】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【我】【的】【满】【脸】【泪】【痕】【,】【忘】【了】【是】【怎】【样】【穿】【过】【放】【学】【时】【熙】【熙】【攘】【攘】【的】【人】【群】【,】【走】【到】【寝】【室】【。】【刺】【耳】【的】【铃】【声】【终】【于】【响】【起】【,】【单】【薄】【的】【眼】【皮】【再】【也】【背】【负】【不】【了】【整】【日】【的】【倦】【意】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【合】【上】【。】【妄】【想】【把】【失】【落】【拒】【之】【门】【外】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【,】【出】【现】【了】【一】【扇】【若】【隐】【若】【现】【的】【门】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【慵】【懒】【地】【趿】【拉】【着】【鞋】【,】【心】【里】【还】【隐】【隐】【作】【痛】【。】【风】【使】【劲】【地】【拉】【扯】【着】【我】【的】【头】【发】【,】【我】【不】【反】【抗】【,】【向】【门】【走】【近】【,】【然】【后】【,】【闭】【上】【眼】【,】【用】【力】【一】【推】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【气】【温】【骤】【升】【,】【周】【围】【突】【然】【人】【潮】【涌】【动】【,】【虽】【热】【闹】【却】【不】【喧】【哗】【,】【我】【吃】【惊】【地】【睁】【开】【眼】【,】【哇】【!】【这】【…】【…】【我】【难】【以】【置】【信】【,】【这】【是】【一】【个】【金】【碧】【辉】【煌】【的】【宫】【殿】【,】【雕】【栏】【玉】【砌】【,】【四】【面】【香】【气】【袭】【人】【。】【地】【板】【就】【像】【一】【块】【偌】【大】【的】【蓝】【宝】【石】【,】【晶】【莹】【剔】【透】【。】【墙】【壁】【更】【似】【一】【幅】【展】【开】【的】【画】【卷】【,】【高】【贵】【典】【雅】【,】【一】【切】【的】【一】【切】【,】【令】【我】【深】【深】【陶】【醉】【。】【拥】【挤】【的】【人】【群】【中】【,】【一】【个】【可】【爱】【的】【小】【女】【孩】【向】【我】【走】【来】【,】【她】【带】【着】【甜】【美】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【递】【给】【我】【一】【个】【金】【黄】【的】【盒】【子】【,】【再】【伸】【出】【白】【嫩】【嫩】【的】【小】【手】【,】【掀】【开】【盒】【盖】【,】【万】【丈】【光】【芒】【齐】【射】【而】【来】【,】【是】【一】【双】【水】【晶】【鞋】【,】【小】【女】【孩】【眨】【着】【大】【眼】【睛】【看】【着】【我】【,】【示】【意】【我】【穿】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【轻】【轻】【地】【将】【脚】【伸】【入】【鞋】【子】【,】【突】【然】【,】【一】【股】【莫】【名】【的】【力】【量】【涌】【入】【身】【体】【,】【那】【种】【幸】【福】【与】【快】【乐】【,】【难】【以】【形】【容】【。】【此】【时】【,】【那】【占】【据】【心】【扉】【许】【久】【的】【阴】【霾】【瞬】【间】【烟】【消】【云】【散】【,】【凌】【乱】【的】【头】【发】【突】【然】【垂】【下】【,】【乖】【乖】【地】【倚】【在】【脊】【背】【,】【松】【松】【的】【睡】【衣】【转】【眼】【幻】【化】【成】【典】【雅】【精】【致】【的】【晚】【礼】【服】【,】【雪】【白】【的】【手】【套】【将】【我】【的】【手】【包】【裹】【。】【一】【阵】【柔】【和】【的】【音】【乐】【声】【萦】【绕】【在】【大】【厅】【上】【空】【,】【我】【的】【脚】【开】【始】【移】【动】【,】【头】【发】【也】【情】【不】【自】【禁】【地】【飘】【荡】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【旋】【转】【,】【我】【站】【在】【大】【厅】【中】【央】【旋】【转】【,】【往】【事】【突】【然】【历】【历】【在】【目】【,】【老】【师】【在】【讲】【台】【上】【讲】【得】【眉】【飞】【色】【舞】【,】【同】【学】【们】【也】【都】【听】【得】【聚】【精】【会】【神】【,】【而】【我】【却】【找】【不】【到】【东】【南】【西】【北】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【跳】【跃】【,】【我】【穿】【着】【光】【芒】【四】【射】【的】【水】【晶】【鞋】【跳】【跃】【。】【一】【幕】【幕】【又】【映】【入】【眼】【帘】【,】【同】【学】【们】【在】【埋】【头】【看】【书】【,】【记】【笔】【记】【,】【冲】【刺】【月】【考】【,】【我】【正】【在】【为】【了】【小】【说】【中】【女】【主】【角】【被】【抛】【弃】【偷】【偷】【地】【抹】【眼】【泪】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【扭】【动】【,】【我】【在】【众】【人】【羡】【慕】【的】【目】【光】【中】【扭】【动】【。】【耳】【畔】【传】【来】【人】【们】【的】【称】【赞】【,】【我】【心】【花】【怒】【放】【,】【我】【是】【一】【个】【屡】【次】【碰】【壁】【的】【灰】【姑】【娘】【,】【但】【,】【我】【一】【定】【会】【得】【到】【属】【于】【我】【的】【水】【晶】【鞋】【,】【一】【蹶】【不】【振】【不】【是】【我】【的】【作】【风】【,】【顽】【强】【拼】【搏】【才】【是】【我】【的】【信】【条】【,】【我】【要】【奋】【斗】【,】【带】【着】【教】【训】【继】【续】【奋】【斗】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【更】【认】【真】【地】【跳】【,】【像】【抓】【住】【了】【人】【生】【的】【真】【谛】【,】【沉】【醉】【着】【…】【…】【突】【然】【,】【一】【切】【都】【消】【散】【了】【,】【那】【扇】【门】【又】【矗】【立】【在】【我】【面】【前】【,】【门】【后】【有】【一】【股】【巨】【大】【的】【力】【量】【吸】【引】【着】【我】【,】【我】【一】【步】【一】【步】【地】【走】【近】【,】【走】【近】【。】【“】【叮】【…】【…】【”】【起】【床】【铃】【总】【爱】【在】【关】【键】【时】【刻】【把】【人】【的】【美】【梦】【惊】【跑】【,】【我】【睁】【开】【惺】【忪】【的】【睡】【眼】【,】【怀】【揣】【着】【那】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【梦】【,】【会】【心】【地】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【想】【在】【成】【功】【的】【彼】【岸】【,】【一】【定】【会】【有】【一】【扇】【门】【等】【着】【我】【,】【门】【后】【一】【定】【会】【有】【一】【双】【水】【晶】【鞋】【,】【一】【双】【属】【于】【我】【的】【水】【晶】【鞋】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【杨】【盛】【红】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【走】【过】【生】【命】【的】【花】【园】【,】【那】【里】【开】【满】【了】【各】【种】【奇】【葩】【,】【有】【的】【绚】【丽】【烂】【漫】【,】【有】【的】【孤】【傲】【高】【洁】【,】【还】【有】【的】【热】【烈】【如】【火】【;】【到】【处】【都】【洋】【溢】【着】【怡】【人】【的】【芬】【芳】【,】【她】【们】【共】【同】【酝】【酿】【着】【生】【命】【的】【醇】【香】【,】【向】【着】【太】【阳】【绽】【放】【,】【展】【现】【不】【同】【的】【曼】【妙】【舞】【姿】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【兰】【花】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【的】【生】【命】【最】【为】【寂】【寞】【也】【最】【为】【飘】【逸】【。】【最】【令】【人】【叹】【为】【观】【止】【的】【,】【是】【她】【生】【于】【幽】【谷】【仍】【能】【从】【容】【开】【放】【的】【坚】【毅】【性】【格】【。】【丛】【生】【于】【幽】【深】【的】【山】【谷】【,】【从】【不】【招】【蜂】【引】【蝶】【,】【她】【的】【心】【平】【静】【得】【如】【柔】【泉】【一】【般】【。】【不】【求】【香】【飘】【万】【里】【,】【只】【静】【静】【开】【放】【,】【那】【一】【份】【深】【沉】【使】【她】【虽】【不】【能】【万】【里】【传】【香】【却】【能】【永】【留】【佳】【名】【在】【人】【世】【。】【孤】【芳】【自】【赏】【也】【是】【一】【种】【生】【命】【诗】【篇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【百】【合】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【同】【高】【挂】【在】【空】【中】【的】【冷】【月】【,】【始】【终】【恪】【守】【自】【己】【的】【节】【操】【。】【高】【高】【在】【上】【,】【不】【是】【藐】【视】【一】【切】【而】【是】【真】【正】【的】【高】【洁】【。】【她】【太】【纯】【洁】【了】【,】【没】【有】【一】【丝】【瑕】【垢】【。】【于】【是】【在】【尔】【虞】【我】【诈】【的】【世】【界】【里】【她】【只】【有】【与】【晶】【莹】【的】【月】【结】【伴】【了】【,】【从】【而】【使】【她】【从】【外】【表】【上】【看】【是】【那】【么】【的】【“】【高】【”】【,】【那】【么】【的】【 】【“】【傲】【”】【。】【然】【而】【又】【有】【多】【少】【人】【能】【懂】【“】【高】【傲】【”】【背】【后】【的】【那】【一】【份】【纯】【洁】【呢】【?】【有】【时】【高】【傲】【同】【样】【是】【生】【命】【中】【最】【绚】【丽】【的】【花】【朵】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【菊】【花】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【柳】【先】【生】【曾】【留】【有】【“】【采】【菊】【东】【篱】【下】【,】【悠】【然】【见】【南】【山】【”】【这】【一】【佳】【句】【。】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【菊】【花】【正】【是】【悠】【游】【、】【隐】【逸】【的】【传】【承】【者】【。】【她】【如】【同】【空】【中】【之】【鹰】【,】【水】【中】【之】【鱼】【,】【优】【哉】【游】【哉】【,】【快】【意】【人】【生】【,】【自】【在】【的】【在】【空】【中】【飞】【,】【水】【中】【游】【。】【她】【能】【放】【弃】【一】【切】【的】【纷】【争】【。】【那】【种】【隐】【逸】【、】【飘】【飘】【欲】【仙】【的】【风】【范】【不】【正】【是】【人】【生】【最】【好】【的】【表】【现】【方】【式】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【玫】【瑰】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【的】【生】【命】【娇】【艳】【多】【彩】【却】【也】【遍】【布】【荆】【棘】【。】【她】【生】【命】【中】【最】【鲜】【明】【的】【特】【点】【就】【是】【矜】【持】【,】【浑】【身】【的】【刺】【使】【那】【些】【赏】【花】【之】【人】【望】【而】【却】【步】【。】【这】【也】【使】【她】【在】【最】【肮】【脏】【、】【最】【污】【秽】【的】【环】【境】【中】【仍】【可】【留】【下】【怡】【人】【的】【芬】【芳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【玫】【瑰】【并】【不】【像】【表】【面】【一】【样】【火】【热】【,】【相】【反】【,】【无】【论】【什】【么】【时】【候】【,】【她】【都】【有】【一】【颗】【真】【挚】【的】【心】【,】【因】【为】【拒】【绝】【所】【以】【才】【有】【芬】【芳】【和】【艳】【丽】【,】【也】【因】【为】【拒】【绝】【才】【能】【讴】【歌】【着】【爱】【,】【传】【唱】【着】【情】【。】【那】【才】【是】【真】【正】【的】【浪】【漫】【,】【涌】【动】【在】【骨】【子】【里】【的】【浪】【漫】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【浪】【漫】【的】【矜】【持】【也】【一】【样】【是】【生】【命】【的】【主】【旋】【律】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【走】【到】【了】【花】【园】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【回】【头】【再】【望】【那】【花】【园】【,】【只】【见】【每】【一】【朵】【花】【都】【带】【着】【一】【个】【“】【冒】【号】【”】【,】【每】【一】【个】【冒】【号】【后】【都】【是】【生】【命】【的】【一】【种】【色】【彩】【,】【兰】【是】【清】【幽】【,】【玫】【瑰】【是】【矜】【持】【…】【…】【那】【一】【朵】【朵】【花】【儿】【汇】【成】【的】【海】【洋】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【浮】【动】【、】【跳】【跃】【。】【我】【想】【生】【命】【也】【如】【花】【海】【般】【浮】【动】【、】【跳】【跃】【才】【最】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【葛】【丽】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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