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心中的明月清泉

成都加菲猫:[这盛世,如你所愿]这盛世如你所愿

2019年11月16日 02:42

【出】【行】【也】【非】【常】【的】【方】【便】【。】【你】【只】【要】【按】【动】【一】【个】【按】【钮】【,】【就】【可】【以】【把】【你】【送】【到】【你】【想】【要】【去】【的】【地】【方】【,】【如】【果】【你】【在】【外】【面】【想】【回】【家】【的】【话】【,】【你】【只】【要】【在】【一】【个】【遥】【控】【器】【上】【扫】【一】【下】【你】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【它】【扫】【描】【后】【就】【会】【准】【确】【的】【把】【你】【送】【回】【家】【了】【。】【如】【果】【先】【买】【东】【西】【,】【选】【好】【商】【品】【后】【直】【接】【用】【卡】【,】【东】【西】【就】【会】【送】【到】【你】【家】【里】【了】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【叙】【文】【靠】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【的】【形】【象】【感】【人】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【无】【论】【是】【记】【人】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【写】【景】【状】【物】【,】【都】【应】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【有】【血】【有】【肉】【,】【切】【忌】【空】【泛】【造】【假】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【谈】【写】【人】【。】【写】【人】【除】【了】【必】【须】【具】【体】【描】【写】【人】【物】【的】【外】【貌】【、】【表】【情】【、】【动】【作】【、】【语】【言】【外】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【这】【是】【突】【出】【人】【物】【性】【格】【,】【把】【人】【物】【写】【得】【精】【彩】【的】【重】【要】【手】【段】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【恰】【恰】【忽】【略】【了】【这】【一】【点】【。】【他】【们】【写】【人】【,】【往】【往】【采】【用】【“】【贴】【标】【签】【”】【的】【方】【法】【,】【首】【先】【给】【他】【“】【定】【了】【性】【”】【,】【堆】【砌】【几】【个】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【,】【如】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【有】【一】【个】【好】【妈】【妈】【,】【慈】【祥】【的】【脸】【上】【永】【远】【带】【着】【和】【蔼】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【因】【为】【旧】【社】【会】【她】【没】【有】【念】【过】【多】【少】【书】【,】【所】【以】【总】【是】【一】【个】【劲】【地】【督】【促】【我】【们】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【并】【在】【生】【活】【上】【、】【学】【习】【上】【对】【我】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【,】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【处】【处】【体】【现】【了】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【后】【面】【还】【有】【具】【体】【的】【描】【写】【,】【这】【段】【话】【作】【为】【开】【头】【,】【当】【然】【可】【以】【,】【但】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【,】【这】【竟】【是】【文】【章】【的】【主】【体】【部】【分】【。】【仅】【用】【“】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【”】【“】【无】【微】【不】【至】【”】【“】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【”】【这】【些】【空】【洞】【的】【词】【语】【,】【能】【说】【明】【母】【亲】【就】【是】【一】【个】【“】【好】【妈】【妈】【”】【吗】【?】【这】【很】【难】【使】【人】【信】【服】【,】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【写】【得】【具】【体】【多】【了】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【不】【知】【什】【么】【声】【音】【把】【我】【从】【梦】【中】【惊】【醒】【,】【我】【睁】【开】【眼】【睛】【一】【看】【,】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【灯】【已】【经】【亮】【了】【,】【不】【时】【传】【来】【锅】【碗】【的】【轻】【响】【。】【我】【伸】【手】【拿】【过】【桌】【上】【的】【闹】【钟】【,】【借】【着】【从】【厨】【房】【里】【映】【过】【来】【的】【亮】【光】【看】【了】【看】【,】【还】【不】【到】【五】【点】【。】【今】【天】【是】【星】【期】【日】【,】【妈】【妈】【还】【和】【往】【常】【一】【样】【,】【起】【得】【这】【样】【早】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【翻】【过】【身】【,】【细】【听】【着】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【声】【响】【。】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【轻】【轻】【地】【舀】【水】【;】【“】【哧】【—】【—】【噗】【!】【”】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【开】【煤】【气】【炉】【;】【“】【咔】【啦】【咔】【啦】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【拿】【碗】【筷】【。】【在】【静】【静】【的】【清】【晨】【,】【这】【声】【音】【是】【那】【样】【的】【清】【晰】【,】【又】【是】【那】【样】【的】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【用】【醒】【来】【的】【所】【见】【、】【所】【闻】【,】【具】【体】【地】【写】【出】【了】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【起】【早】【做】【饭】【的】【情】【景】【。】【这】【真】【实】【、】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【、】【形】【象】【的】【记】【叙】【比】【起】【对】【妈】【妈】【“】【任】【劳】【任】【怨】【、】【辛】【勤】【劳】【作】【”】【的】【赞】【叹】【,】【不】【知】【要】【强】【多】【少】【倍】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【都】【知】【道】【《】【水】【浒】【传】【》】【中】【的】【打】【虎】【英】【雄】【是】【武】【松】【,】【而】【不】【是】【李】【逵】【。】【为】【什】【么】【武】【松】【打】【死】【一】【只】【虎】【会】【深】【深】【地】【震】【动】【我】【们】【的】【心】【弦】【,】【而】【李】【逵】【杀】【了】【四】【只】【虎】【,】【留】【给】【读】【者】【的】【印】【象】【却】【远】【不】【如】【武】【松】【呢】【?】【这】【里】【面】【的】【诀】【窍】【就】【在】【一】【个】【描】【绘】【的】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【精】【彩】【异】【常】【,】【另】【一】【个】【则】【“】【缺】【少】【细】【节】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【不】【仅】【能】【充】【实】【内】【容】【,】【使】【之】【具】【有】【浓】【厚】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【具】【有】【震】【撼】【人】【心】【的】【艺】【术】【力】【量】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【,】【具】【有】【典】【型】【意】【义】【的】【细】【节】【,】【能】【表】【现】【出】【人】【物】【鲜】【明】【的】【个】【性】【。】【吴】【敬】【梓】【的】【《】【儒】【林】【外】【史】【》】【中】【,】【有】【一】【段】【对】【严】【监】【生】【死】【前】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【这】【一】【细】【节】【的】【描】【写】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【此】【,】【严】【监】【生】【的】【病】【,】【一】【日】【重】【似】【一】【日】【,】【再】【不】【回】【头】【,】【诸】【来】【六】【眷】【都】【来】【问】【候】【…】【…】【晚】【间】【挤】【了】【一】【屋】【的】【人】【,】【桌】【上】【点】【着】【一】【盏】【灯】【。】【严】【监】【生】【喉】【咙】【里】【痰】【响】【得】【一】【进】【一】【出】【,】【一】【声】【不】【倒】【一】【声】【的】【,】【总】【不】【得】【断】【气】【,】【还】【把】【手】【从】【被】【单】【里】【拿】【出】【来】【,】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【。】【大】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【你】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【个】【亲】【人】【不】【曾】【见】【面】【?】【”】【他】【就】【把】【头】【摇】【了】【两】【三】【摇】【。】【二】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【笔】【银】【子】【在】【那】【里】【,】【不】【曾】【吩】【咐】【明】【白】【?】【”】【他】【把】【两】【眼】【睁】【得】【溜】【圆】【,】【把】【头】【又】【狠】【狠】【摇】【了】【几】【摇】【,】【越】【发】【指】【得】【紧】【了】【。】【奶】【妈】【抱】【着】【哥】【子】【插】【口】【道】【:】【“】【老】【爷】【想】【是】【因】【为】【两】【位】【舅】【爷】【不】【在】【跟】【前】【,】【故】【此】【惦】【念】【。】【”】【他】【听】【了】【这】【话】【,】【把】【眼】【闭】【着】【摇】【头】【,】【那】【手】【只】【是】【指】【着】【不】【动】【。】【赵】【氏】【慌】【忙】【揩】【揩】【眼】【泪】【,】【走】【近】【上】【前】【道】【:】【“】【爷】【,】【别】【人】【都】【说】【不】【相】【干】【,】【只】【有】【我】【晓】【得】【你】【的】【意】【思】【!】【”】【…】【…】【“】【你】【是】【为】【那】【灯】【盏】【里】【点】【的】【是】【两】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【不】【放】【心】【,】【恐】【费】【了】【油】【。】【我】【如】【今】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【就】【是】【了】【。】【”】【说】【罢】【,】【忙】【走】【出】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【。】【众】【人】【看】【严】【监】【生】【时】【,】【点】【一】【点】【头】【,】【把】【手】【垂】【下】【,】【登】【时】【就】【没】【了】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【严】【监】【生】【是】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【,】【因】【为】【多】【点】【一】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【死】【不】【瞑】【目】【。】【作】【者】【通】【过】【这】【一】【典】【型】【细】【节】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【把】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【特】【有】【的】【精】【神】【面】【貌】【和】【鲜】【明】【个】【性】【深】【刻】【地】【表】【现】【出】【来】【了】【。】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【表】【现】【了】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【的】【丑】【恶】【灵】【魂】【,】【真】【是】【写】【得】【入】【木】【三】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【这】【里】【也】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【选】【择】【细】【节】【要】【根】【据】【表】【现】【人】【物】【性】【格】【的】【需】【要】【和】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【需】【要】【,】【否】【则】【再】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【也】【毫】【无】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【说】【记】【事】【。】【要】【把】【一】【件】【事】【写】【得】【具】【体】【,】【就】【得】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【详】【写】【,】【要】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【,】【要】【精】【雕】【细】【刻】【,】【不】【能】【只】【用】【那】【些】【概】【括】【抽】【象】【的】【语】【言】【。】【如】【,】【同】【样】【是】【写】【《】【联】【欢】【会】【》】【,】【一】【个】【同】【学】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【开】【得】【太】【热】【烈】【,】【太】【丰】【富】【,】【太】【激】【动】【人】【心】【了】【!】【悦】【耳】【的】【歌】【声】【,】【翩】【翩】【的】【舞】【姿】【,】【还】【有】【增】【长】【才】【智】【的】【文】【学】【知】【识】【抢】【答】【,】【从】【下】【午】【2】【点】【一】【直】【进】【行】【到】【8】【点】【,】【大】【家】【才】【恋】【恋】【不】【舍】【地】【离】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【,】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【掩】【盖】【不】【了】【内】【容】【的】【空】【洞】【,】【铿】【锵】【的】【语】【句】【难】【以】【粉】【饰】【内】【在】【的】【贫】【乏】【。】【须】【知】【,】【“】【热】【烈】【”】【“】【丰】【富】【”】【“】【激】【动】【人】【心】【”】【,】【只】【有】【通】【过】【事】【件】【表】【现】【出】【来】【,】【才】【是】【成】【功】【的】【记】【事】【。】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【得】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【水】【,】【水】【落】【石】【出】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【出】【,】【出】【其】【不】【意】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【意】【,】【意】【气】【风】【发】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【发】【,】【发】【扬】【光】【大】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【大】【,】【大】【义】【凛】【然】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【然】【,】【然】【—】【—】【然】【—】【—】【”】【这】【下】【可】【把】【周】【皓】【月】【难】【住】【了】【,】【只】【见】【她】【双】【眉】【紧】【锁】【,】【在】【极】【力】【思】【考】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【请】【周】【皓】【月】【表】【演】【节】【目】【!】【”】【班】【主】【任】【曹】【老】【师】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【掌】【声】【雷】【动】【,】【周】【皓】【月】【落】【落】【大】【方】【地】【走】【上】【台】【,】【放】【开】【歌】【喉】【唱】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【又】【进】【行】【下】【一】【个】【节】【目】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【现】【在】【,】【我】【把】【某】【个】【同】【学】【的】【面】【貌】【描】【绘】【一】【下】【,】【请】【同】【学】【们】【说】【出】【这】【人】【是】【谁】【。】【”】【班】【主】【任】【说】【道】【:】【“】【白】【皙】【的】【皮】【肤】【,】【眼】【睛】【虽】【不】【大】【,】【可】【炯】【炯】【有】【神】【,】【剪】【着】【一】【个】【游】【泳】【头】【,】【一】【副】【运】【动】【员】【的】【样】【子】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【你】【瞧】【瞧】【我】【,】【我】【望】【望】【你】【,】【突】【然】【,】【不】【知】【哪】【位】【同】【学】【说】【:】【“】【是】【沈】【玉】【兰】【!】【”】【顿】【时】【,】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【一】【下】【子】【集】【中】【到】【沈】【玉】【兰】【身】【上】【,】【继】【而】【人】【们】【又】【摇】【头】【否】【认】【,】【不】【对】【!】【沈】【玉】【兰】【梳】【着】【两】【条】【小】【辫】【子】【。】【那】【是】【谁】【呢】【?】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【像】【是】【几】【十】【盏】【探】【照】【灯】【,】【四】【处】【扫】【视】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【的】【眼】【光】【一】【遇】【到】【身】【旁】【的】【程】【铭】【时】【,】【我】【就】【像】【得】【到】【宝】【贝】【似】【的】【心】【头】【一】【热】【,】【脱】【口】【而】【出】【:】【“】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【在】【座】【的】【人】【异】【口】【同】【声】【欢】【呼】【:】【“】【对】【!】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【笑】【声】【、】【掌】【声】【久】【久】【不】【息】【,】【程】【铭】【难】【为】【情】【地】【涨】【红】【了】【脸】【,】【而】【我】【因】【为】【是】【第】【一】【个】【说】【对】【的】【,】【所】【以】【得】【到】【了】【两】【颗】【糖】【的】【奖】【励】【。】【这】【真】【是】【在】【甜】【甜】【蜜】【蜜】【、】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【中】【长】【知】【识】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【抓】【住】【了】【一】【些】【关】【键】【性】【的】【细】【节】【,】【重】【点】【突】【出】【,】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【写】【得】【有】【声】【有】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【说】【说】【写】【景】【状】【物】【。】【要】【写】【出】【景】【和】【物】【的】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【主】【要】【靠】【描】【写】【手】【段】【的】【运】【用】【。】【比】【如】【说】【,】【这】【个】【地】【方】【很】【美】【,】【究】【竟】【美】【在】【哪】【里】【?】【是】【亭】【台】【楼】【阁】【美】【,】【还】【是】【花】【草】【树】【木】【美】【?】【是】【绿】【水】【青】【山】【美】【,】【还】【是】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【美】【?】【景】【物】【中】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【是】【哪】【些】【?】【它】【们】【有】【什】【么】【特】【征】【?】【如】【果】【能】【把】【重】【点】【景】【物】【的】【特】【征】【、】【状】【态】【描】【写】【出】【来】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【具】【体】【生】【动】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【个】【同】【学】【写】【《】【狮】【子】【林】【》】【,】【初】【稿】【是】【这】【样】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【,】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【些】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【,】【一】【个】【个】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【,】【在】【老】【师】【的】【指】【导】【下】【,】【他】【对】【初】【稿】【进】【行】【了】【修】【改】【,】【增】【加】【了】【具】【体】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【基】【本】【上】【描】【绘】【出】【狮】【子】【林】【的】【特】【色】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【全】【文】【如】【下】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【。】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【。】【有】【的】【龇】【牙】【咧】【嘴】【,】【昂】【首】【长】【啸】【;】【有】【的】【瞪】【着】【两】【眼】【,】【威】【风】【凛】【凛】【;】【有】【的】【闭】【目】【养】【神】【,】【无】【精】【打】【采】【…】【…】【真】【是】【千】【姿】【百】【态】【,】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【它】【们】【组】【成】【一】【个】【个】【高】【耸】【的】【假】【山】【。】【从】【山】【脚】【到】【山】【顶】【沿】【路】【怪】【石】【嶙】【峋】【,】【迂】【回】【曲】【折】【。】【有】【时】【看】【得】【见】【山】【顶】【上】【的】【游】【客】【的】【眉】【目】【,】【也】【听】【得】【见】【他】【们】【的】【谈】【笑】【,】【可】【就】【是】【没】【法】【登】【山】【。】【等】【到】【你】【好】【不】【容】【易】【登】【上】【山】【巅】【,】【才】【会】【发】【现】【,】【竟】【有】【好】【几】【条】【石】【路】【可】【达】【山】【顶】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【描】【写】【是】【指】【抓】【住】【生】【活】【中】【细】【微】【而】【又】【具】【体】【的】【典】【型】【情】【节】【,】【加】【以】【生】【动】【细】【致】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【它】【具】【体】【渗】【透】【在】【对】【人】【物】【、】【景】【物】【或】【场】【面】【描】【写】【之】【中】【。】【正】【确】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【对】【表】【现】【人】【物】【、】【记】【叙】【事】【件】【、】【再】【现】【环】【境】【有】【着】【极】【其】【重】【要】【的】【作】【用】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【运】【用】【得】【好】【,】【做】【到】【写】【人】【则】【如】【见】【其】【人】【,】【写】【景】【则】【如】【临】【其】【境】【,】【文】【章】【就】【能】【形】【象】【鲜】【明】【,】【更】【具】【感】【染】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】成都加菲猫【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【总】【说】【我】【们】【这】【一】【代】【的】【孩】【子】【很】【可】【怜】【,】【不】【会】【玩】【,】【不】【会】【乐】【,】【不】【像】【他】【们】【那】【会】【儿】【,】【一】【身】【土】【却】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【得】【不】【得】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【是】【地】【地】【道】【道】【的】【农】【民】【,】【虽】【说】【进】【城】【当】【国】【家】【干】【部】【也】【十】【几】【年】【了】【,】【可】【父】【亲】【仍】【乐】【意】【并】【保】【持】【着】【在】【农】【村】【时】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【在】【儿】【时】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【:】【避】【开】【尘】【嚣】【,】【追】【求】【最】【自】【然】【的】【本】【质】【。】【因】【而】【父】【亲】【总】【在】【家】【乡】【饭】【、】【农】【村】【、】【农】【民】【上】【找】【到】【自】【己】【的】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【不】【喜】【欢】【吃】【山】【珍】【海】【味】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【吃】【上】【千】【元】【的】【大】【宴】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【正】【儿】【八】【经】【地】【坐】【在】【茶】【楼】【里】【品】【茶】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【扎】【着】【领】【带】【穿】【着】【西】【装】【陪】【人】【喝】【酒】【。】【父】【亲】【说】【,】【这】【样】【的】【生】【活】【总】【不】【是】【个】【味】【儿】【,】【其】【实】【一】【点】【也】【不】【快】【乐】【。】【父】【亲】【喜】【欢】【吃】【大】【碗】【大】【碗】【的】【面】【汤】【,】【喜】【欢】【吃】【煎】【饼】【卷】【大】【葱】【…】【…】【母】【亲】【总】【说】【父】【亲】【很】【土】【不】【会】【享】【受】【,】【可】【父】【亲】【说】【过】【着】【农】【民】【般】【的】【日】【子】【,】【就】【是】【他】【最】【大】【的】【快】【乐】【和】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【父】【亲】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【追】【求】【的】【不】【在】【于】【所】【谓】【的】【品】【质】【,】【而】【在】【于】【回】【忆】【中】【的】【那】【份】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【不】【喜】【欢】【坐】【高】【级】【的】【小】【轿】【车】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【整】【天】【坐】【在】【电】【脑】【电】【视】【前】【无】【休】【止】【地】【娱】【乐】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【躺】【在】【按】【摩】【椅】【上】【舒】【服】【地】【看】【报】【纸】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【扎】【堆】【儿】【没】【完】【地】【闲】【聊】【。】【父】【亲】【说】【,】【这】【样】【的】【生】【活】【看】【似】【悠】【闲】【,】【其】【实】【并】【不】【自】【在】【,】【谈】【不】【上】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【。】【父】【亲】【喜】【欢】【在】【周】【末】【自】【己】【骑】【上】【摩】【托】【车】【到】【郊】【区】【的】【田】【间】【地】【头】【走】【一】【走】【,】【爬】【上】【小】【小】【的】【土】【堆】【,】【用】【帽】【子】【盖】【在】【脸】【上】【先】【舒】【坦】【地】【睡】【个】【午】【觉】【,】【随】【后】【望】【着】【无】【际】【的】【麦】【田】【自】【在】【地】【哼】【上】【一】【曲】【,】【到】【处】【走】【走】【,】【到】【处】【看】【看】【。】【有】【一】【次】【,】【父】【亲】【受】【邀】【尝】【到】【了】【刚】【摘】【下】【的】【新】【鲜】【柿】【子】【,】【回】【家】【乐】【和】【了】【一】【晚】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【父】【亲】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【不】【追】【求】【所】【谓】【的】【情】【调】【,】【只】【聪】【明】【地】【在】【大】【自】【然】【中】【汲】【取】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【!】【父】【亲】【不】【喜】【欢】【冠】【冕】【堂】【皇】【的】【客】【套】【话】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【钩】【心】【斗】【角】【的】【为】【官】【之】【道】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【虚】【情】【假】【意】【地】【迎】【来】【送】【往】【。】【父】【亲】【说】【,】【这】【样】【的】【生】【活】【在】【有】【些】【人】【看】【来】【也】【许】【挺】【风】【光】【,】【可】【那】【是】【个】【空】【壳】【,】【一】【点】【也】【不】【快】【乐】【。】【父】【亲】【喜】【欢】【和】【农】【民】【打】【交】【道】【,】【高】【兴】【和】【家】【门】【口】【炸】【油】【条】【的】【聊】【聊】【地】【里】【的】【庄】【稼】【,】【乐】【意】【从】【车】【上】【下】【来】【帮】【老】【汉】【推】【上】【一】【截】【子】【架】【子】【车】【。】【周】【末】【到】【农】【民】【家】【坐】【炕】【沿】【儿】【上】【吃】【碗】【汤】【面】【条】【儿】【更】【是】【常】【有】【的】【事】【,】【叫】【几】【个】【农】【民】【朋】【友】【到】【家】【里】【美】【美】【喝】【上】【几】【杯】【,】【也】【能】【让】【父】【亲】【高】【兴】【好】【几】【天】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【父】【亲】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【不】【追】【求】【所】【谓】【风】【光】【,】【只】【在】【跟】【农】【民】【最】【朴】【实】【的】【交】【谈】【中】【快】【乐】【着】【,】【幸】【福】【着】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【有】【着】【最】【朴】【实】【自】【然】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【因】【而】【才】【有】【了】【自】【己】【最】【舒】【心】【的】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【亓】【海】【燕】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【写】【了】【新】【老】【两】【代】【人】【不】【同】【的】【人】【生】【追】【求】【,】【不】【同】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【反】【映】【了】【社】【会】【转】【型】【时】【期】【人】【们】【价】【值】【观】【正】【在】【急】【剧】【而】【深】【刻】【的】【发】【生】【变】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【很】【“】【土】【”】【,】【但】【在】【父】【亲】【眼】【里】【,】【那】【些】【追】【求】【“】【洋】【”】【的】【“】【我】【们】【”】【很】【可】【怜】【。】【为】【什】【么】【可】【怜】【?】【因】【为】【我】【们】【把】【人】【的】【最】【重】【要】【最】【本】【色】【的】【品】【质】【—】【—】【淳】【朴】【丢】【了】【。】【淳】【朴】【,】【体】【现】【在】【人】【对】【大】【自】【然】【的】【崇】【敬】【,】【体】【现】【在】【人】【与】【自】【然】【的】【和】【谐】【相】【处】【,】【体】【现】【在】【人】【与】【人】【之】【间】【的】【真】【诚】【友】【爱】【相】【互】【帮】【助】【。】【我】【们】【的】【社】【会】【应】【该】【呼】【唤】【这】【种】【情】【感】【的】【回】【归】【。】【当】【我】【们】【坐】【在】【电】【脑】【、】【电】【视】【前】【消】【磨】【时】【光】【时】【,】【我】【们】【已】【远】【离】【了】【健】【康】【;】【当】【我】【们】【热】【衷】【于】【吃】【山】【珍】【海】【味】【时】【,】【一】【些】【珍】【稀】【动】【物】【在】【逐】【渐】【消】【失】【;】【当】【我】【们】【习】【惯】【于】【冠】【冕】【堂】【皇】【的】【客】【套】【话】【时】【,】【诚】【信】【的】【品】【德】【却】【再】【难】【寻】【觅】【,】【文】【章】【以】【恬】【淡】【之】【笔】【,】【道】【出】【了】【一】【个】【真】【理】【,】【值】【得】【每】【个】【读】【者】【深】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【知】【识】【卡】【片】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【柳】【宗】【元】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【代】【文】【学】【家】【、】【哲】【学】【家】【。】【字】【子】【厚】【,】【世】【称】【“】【柳】【河】【东】【”】【、】【“】【柳】【柳】【州】【”】【。】【与】【韩】【愈】【、】【欧】【阳】【修】【、】【苏】【洵】【、】【苏】【轼】【、】【苏】【辙】【、】【王】【安】【石】【、】【曾】【巩】【并】【称】【为】【唐】【宋】【最】【杰】【出】【的】【散】【文】【“】【八】【大】【家】【”】【。】【 】【因】【倡】【导】【古】【文】【运】【动】【,】【与】【韩】【愈】【并】【称】【“】【韩】【柳】【”】【。】【他】【的】【《】【捕】【蛇】【者】【说】【》】【深】【刻】【揭】【露】【了】【社】【会】【矛】【盾】【,】【批】【判】【时】【政】【,】【尖】【锐】【有】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【黄】【色】【是】【可】【以】【去】【秋】【天】【的】【按】【钮】【,】【只】【要】【按】【下】【它】【,】【院】【子】【里】【立】【刻】【会】【变】【成】【秋】【天】【,】【地】【上】【是】【一】【层】【厚】【厚】【的】【金】【黄】【的】【树】【叶】【,】【踩】【一】【踩】【就】【会】【发】【出】【咔】【擦】【咔】【擦】【的】【声】【音】【,】【听】【起】【来】【就】【像】【是】【一】【首】【美】【妙】【的】【乐】【曲】【,】【还】【有】【各】【种】【各】【样】【香】【甜】【美】【味】【的】【水】【果】【等】【着】【你】【。】成都加菲猫【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【阵】【寒】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【落】【叶】【飘】【飞】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【打】【了】【个】【寒】【战】【。】【今】【年】【的】【冬】【季】【似】【乎】【比】【往】【年】【来】【得】【早】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【晃】【,】【妈】【妈】【离】【开】【这】【个】【世】【界】【已】【经】【七】【个】【多】【月】【了】【!】【我】【常】【常】【翘】【首】【仰】【望】【苍】【穹】【,】【从】【心】【里】【发】【出】【无】【数】【遍】【的】【呼】【唤】【—】【—】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【你】【在】【天】【国】【的】【何】【方】【?】【你】【是】【否】【能】【看】【到】【我】【的】【身】【影】【?】【你】【能】【听】【见】【女】【儿】【对】【你】【深】【情】【的】【呼】【唤】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【年】【冬】【天】【,】【你】【被】【医】【院】【诊】【断】【出】【患】【有】【间】【歇】【性】【精】【神】【病】【。】【你】【的】【记】【忆】【力】【明】【显】【衰】【退】【,】【有】【时】【说】【话】【语】【无】【伦】【次】【,】【甚】【至】【生】【活】【不】【能】【自】【理】【。】【为】【了】【给】【你】【治】【病】【和】【让】【我】【继】【续】【读】【书】【,】【年】【近】【5】【0】【的】【父】【亲】【不】【得】【不】【外】【出】【打】【工】【。】【这】【时】【的】【你】【既】【要】【忍】【受】【病】【痛】【的】【折】【磨】【,】【又】【要】【挑】【起】【整】【个】【家】【庭】【的】【重】【担】【。】【可】【是】【无】【知】【的】【我】【根】【本】【不】【知】【道】【替】【你】【分】【担】【。】【我】【真】【后】【悔】【,】【那】【时】【,】【我】【应】【该】【放】【学】【后】【多】【陪】【陪】【你】【,】【应】【该】【帮】【你】【分】【担】【家】【务】【,】【让】【你】【开】【心】【,】【帮】【助】【你】【恢】【复】【健】【康】【。】【可】【是】【,】【我】【是】【那】【么】【的】【不】【懂】【事】【,】【竟】【常】【常】【为】【一】【些】【鸡】【毛】【蒜】【皮】【的】【小】【事】【,】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【有】【时】【甚】【至】【还】【与】【你】【大】【吵】【大】【闹】【。】【而】【每】【一】【次】【,】【总】【是】【你】【先】【向】【我】【道】【歉】【。】【唯】【独】【在】【那】【个】【星】【期】【天】【的】【下】【午】【,】【我】【们】【在】【一】【番】【争】【吵】【过】【后】【你】【沉】【默】【了】【,】【没】【有】【对】【我】【说】【什】【么】【,】【而】【是】【独】【自】【地】【回】【到】【房】【间】【,】【躺】【到】【了】【床】【上】【。】【我】【分】【明】【看】【到】【你】【额】【头】【上】【冒】【出】【了】【豆】【大】【的】【汗】【滴】【,】【脸】【上】【流】【露】【出】【痛】【苦】【不】【堪】【的】【表】【情】【。】【因】【为】【赌】【气】【,】【我】【没】【有】【管】【你】【,】【只】【顾】【着】【自】【己】【收】【拾】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【就】【气】【冲】【冲】【地】【去】【了】【学】【校】【。】【晚】【自】【习】【结】【束】【后】【,】【我】【正】【在】【教】【室】【里】【收】【拾】【东】【西】【,】【忽】【然】【听】【到】【一】【个】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【在】【叫】【我】【的】【名】【字】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【一】【看】【,】【原】【来】【是】【妈】【妈】【!】【这】【时】【的】【你】【手】【里】【提】【着】【一】【大】【袋】【东】【西】【,】【倚】【在】【教】【室】【的】【门】【框】【上】【,】【脸】【色】【憔】【悴】【不】【堪】【,】【却】【强】【装】【出】【一】【副】【温】【和】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【我】【赶】【紧】【接】【过】【你】【手】【里】【的】【东】【西】【,】【打】【开】【一】【看】【,】【里】【面】【装】【着】【我】【喜】【欢】【吃】【的】【苹】【果】【、】【巧】【克】【力】【,】【还】【有】【保】【暖】【衣】【…】【…】【你】【将】【我】【拉】【到】【旁】【边】【,】【一】【只】【手】【扶】【在】【我】【的】【肩】【头】【,】【另】【一】【只】【手】【握】【着】【我】【的】【手】【,】【竟】【絮】【絮】【地】【向】【我】【道】【起】【歉】【来】【。】【你】【说】【你】【不】【该】【在】【我】【上】【学】【时】【和】【我】【争】【吵】【,】【你】【不】【该】【顾】【着】【自】【己】【去】【休】【息】【,】【你】【不】【该】【不】【替】【我】【收】【拾】【上】【学】【的】【东】【西】【…】【…】【直】【说】【得】【我】【露】【出】【了】【笑】【容】【,】【你】【才】【高】【兴】【地】【转】【过】【身】【,】【迈】【着】【蹒】【跚】【的】【步】【子】【,】【借】【着】【朦】【胧】【的】【月】【色】【回】【去】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【你】【走】【后】【,】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【总】【是】【浮】【现】【出】【你】【那】【张】【充】【满】【病】【态】【而】【又】【温】【和】【的】【脸】【。】【我】【想】【:】【也】【许】【是】【由】【于】【我】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【段】【女】【孩】【的】【逆】【反】【心】【理】【,】【其】【实】【每】【次】【都】【是】【我】【在】【故】【意】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【故】【意】【找】【碴】【儿】【与】【你】【争】【吵】【。】【如】【果】【说】【有】【错】【的】【话】【,】【那】【可】【是】【全】【在】【我】【呀】【!】【如】【果】【说】【该】【道】【歉】【的】【话】【,】【那】【也】【是】【该】【我】【向】【你】【道】【歉】【呀】【!】【再】【说】【,】【你】【已】【身】【患】【重】【病】【,】【可】【以】【想】【象】【,】【那】【晚】【你】【来】【看】【我】【,】【一】【定】【是】【在】【你】【的】【病】【痛】【稍】【稍】【减】【轻】【后】【,】【才】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【地】【收】【拾】【好】【了】【我】【落】【下】【的】【一】【些】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【拖】【着】【病】【体】【,】【在】【朦】【胧】【的】【夜】【色】【中】【,】【赶】【了】【1】【0】【多】【里】【的】【山】【路】【而】【来】【。】【看】【样】【子】【,】【为】【了】【不】【打】【扰】【我】【的】【学】【习】【,】【你】【一】【定】【站】【在】【窗】【外】【等】【了】【许】【久】【,】【直】【到】【下】【课】【铃】【响】【起】【,】【你】【才】【怯】【生】【生】【地】【呼】【唤】【我】【的】【名】【字】【…】【…】【想】【到】【这】【里】【,】【我】【愧】【疚】【难】【当】【。】【我】【在】【心】【里】【保】【证】【:】【这】【次】【回】【家】【后】【,】【我】【一】【定】【先】【给】【你】【道】【歉】【,】【并】【且】【从】【此】【永】【远】【不】【再】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【永】【远】【不】【再】【让】【你】【伤】【心】【,】【永】【远】【与】【你】【分】【担】【一】【切】【的】【痛】【苦】【…】【…】【可】【是】【,】【一】【切】【都】【太】【迟】【了】【!】【当】【听】【到】【你】【病】【危】【的】【消】【息】【,】【赶】【回】【家】【时】【,】【却】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【站】【在】【门】【口】【焦】【急】【翘】【盼】【我】【的】【身】【影】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【接】【过】【我】【书】【包】【时】【的】【那】【张】【笑】【吟】【吟】【的】【脸】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【桌】【上】【你】【为】【我】【准】【备】【好】【的】【丰】【盛】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【知】【道】【:】【你】【是】【永】【远】【听】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【道】【歉】【了】【!】【你】【是】【永】【远】【看】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【悔】【恨】【了】【!】【你】【也】【永】【远】【不】【能】【听】【到】【女】【儿】【呼】【唤】【你】【的】【声】【音】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【难】【道】【你】【就】【不】【能】【再】【给】【女】【儿】【一】【次】【改】【过】【的】【机】【会】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【忍】【心】【让】【女】【儿】【悔】【恨】【终】【生】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【就】【这】【样】【狠】【心】【地】【撇】【下】【女】【儿】【而】【独】【自】【远】【行】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【!】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【舍】【不】【得】【让】【你】【走】【!】【任】【凭】【我】【千】【呼】【万】【唤】【,】【任】【凭】【我】【撕】【心】【裂】【肺】【,】【我】【割】【舍】【不】【下】【的】【亲】【人】【,】【我】【那】【苦】【命】【而】【又】【伟】【大】【的】【妈】【妈】【还】【是】【走】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【1】【5】【年】【的】【光】【阴】【啊】【,】【早】【已】【在】【我】【心】【头】【刻】【上】【了】【一】【道】【深】【深】【的】【印】【记】【,】【我】【又】【怎】【能】【忘】【记】【—】【—】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【拥】【有】【了】【那】【段】【最】【宝】【贵】【、】【最】【永】【恒】【的】【幸】【福】【时】【光】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【从】【一】【个】【懵】【懂】【无】【知】【的】【小】【女】【孩】【成】【长】【为】【一】【个】【知】【书】【达】【理】【、】【乖】【巧】【懂】【事】【的】【中】【学】【生】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【享】【受】【到】【了】【世】【界】【上】【最】【无】【私】【、】【最】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【携】【着】【感】【恩】【上】【路】【、】【满】【怀】【信】【心】【憧】【憬】【美】【好】【的】【明】【天】【!】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【请】【你】【放】【心】【:】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【不】【会】【辜】【负】【你】【的】【殷】【切】【期】【盼】【,】【我】【会】【化】【悲】【痛】【为】【力】【量】【,】【勤】【奋】【学】【习】【,】【掌】【握】【过】【硬】【本】【领】【,】【做】【一】【个】【有】【用】【的】【人】【。】【请】【你】【相】【信】【,】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【会】【说】【到】【做】【到】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【冬】【季】【是】【确】【切】【地】【来】【临】【了】【,】【门】【前】【的】【那】【棵】【老】【榆】【树】【忧】【郁】【地】【立】【在】【那】【里】【,】【树】【上】【的】【叶】【子】【就】【要】【落】【尽】【,】【只】【剩】【下】【一】【些】【深】【褐】【色】【的】【枝】【条】【,】【杂】【乱】【地】【伸】【向】【天】【空】【。】【一】【只】【乌】【鸦】【呆】【立】【在】【枝】【头】【,】【默】【然】【地】【凝】【望】【着】【我】【那】【孤】【独】【的】【老】【屋】【,】【仿】【佛】【也】【在】【回】【忆】【着】【关】【于】【它】【的】【一】【些】【伤】【心】【往】【事】【。】【遥】【望】【远】【处】【,】【一】【缕】【炊】【烟】【袅】【袅】【升】【起】【,】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【似】【乎】【也】【随】【着】【这】【黄】【昏】【的】【炊】【烟】【飘】【向】【了】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【天】【国】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【为】【你】【祈】【祷】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【愿】【你】【在】【天】【国】【一】【切】【安】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

成都加菲猫:拒绝是一种智慧

【有】【人】【会】【说】【车】【内】【要】【是】【有】【人】【吸】【烟】【很】【难】【闻】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【放】【心】【,】【这】【个】【车】【内】【带】【有】【空】【气】【自】【动】【净】【化】【功】【能】【,】【净】【化】【空】【气】【的】【速】【度】【非】【常】【快】【,】【相】【当】【于】【一】【个】【大】【森】【林】【,】【根】【本】【不】【用】【担】【心】【。】成都加菲猫【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【啊】【!】【又】【停】【水】【又】【停】【电】【,】【真】【烦】【人】【!】【唉】【,】【现】【在】【的】【房】【子】【缺】【陷】【可】【真】【多】【呀】【!】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【向】【来】【只】【有】【赞】【颂】【母】【爱】【的】【伟】【大】【,】【可】【又】【有】【谁】【知】【道】【父】【爱】【的】【含】【蓄】【!】【我】【把】【父】【爱】【比】【做】【一】【株】【茉】【莉】【花】【,】【它】【在】【我】【的】【生】【活】【中】【幽】【幽】【地】【散】【发】【着】【淡】【淡】【的】【清】【香】【,】【让】【我】【默】【默】【地】【品】【味】【、】【深】【深】【地】【体】【验】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【初】【一】【的】【时】【候】【,】【由】【于】【作】【业】【比】【较】【多】【,】【我】【又】【是】【慢】【性】【子】【,】【所】【以】【需】【要】【较】【长】【的】【时】【间】【才】【能】【完】【成】【功】【课】【,】【对】【此】【,】【爸】【爸】【常】【常】【抱】【怨】【我】【不】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【,】【而】【我】【却】【早】【已】【习】【惯】【这】【样】【的】【状】【态】【。】【一】【次】【我】【写】【作】【业】【,】【不】【知】【怎】【的】【,】【竟】【伏】【在】【桌】【上】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【叫】【醒】【我】【后】【,】【狠】【狠】【地】【批】【评】【道】【:】【“】【你】【这】【样】【怎】【么】【能】【行】【呢】【!】【我】【就】【不】【信】【你】【明】【天】【还】【有】【精】【神】【听】【讲】【!】【和】【你】【说】【了】【多】【少】【次】【,】【平】【时】【挤】【出】【时】【间】【,】【抓】【紧】【些】【,】【学】【习】【像】【学】【习】【,】【睡】【觉】【像】【睡】【觉】【,】【你】【就】【是】【不】【听】【!】【”】【说】【到】【气】【愤】【处】【,】【他】【竟】【给】【了】【我】【一】【巴】【掌】【,】【我】【当】【时】【哭】【了】【,】【爸】【爸】【也】【怔】【住】【了】【,】【身】【体】【似】【乎】【颤】【抖】【了】【一】【下】【,】【他】【想】【伸】【过】【手】【来】【抚】【摸】【一】【下】【我】【那】【火】【辣】【辣】【的】【脸】【蛋】【,】【我】【打】【开】【他】【的】【手】【,】【恨】【恨】【地】【看】【着】【他】【,】【半】【天】【,】【爸】【爸】【默】【默】【离】【开】【了】【我】【的】【房】【间】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【早】【上】【,】【我】【路】【过】【父】【母】【卧】【室】【的】【时】【候】【,】【无】【意】【间】【听】【到】【父】【母】【的】【谈】【话】【,】【“】【你】【去】【看】【一】【下】【那】【孩】【子】【的】【脸】【怎】【样】【了】【?】【如】【果】【还】【痛】【的】【话】【,】【帮】【她】【揉】【揉】【。】【”】【 】【妈】【妈】【坚】【决】【不】【肯】【,】【说】【:】【“】【要】【去】【,】【你】【去】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【无】【语】【,】【默】【默】【走】【出】【房】【间】【,】【我】【忙】【闪】【到】【一】【旁】【,】【发】【现】【他】【第】【一】【次】【下】【了】【厨】【房】【,】【而】【且】【是】【为】【我】【准】【备】【早】【餐】【。】【刹】【那】【间】【,】【我】【十】【分】【感】【动】【,】【可】【脸】【上】【那】【疼】【痛】【感】【像】【只】【强】【有】【力】【的】【大】【手】【把】【我】【从】【感】【动】【中】【拉】【了】【回】【来】【,】【早】【饭】【我】【也】【没】【吃】【,】【匆】【匆】【整】【理】【好】【书】【包】【后】【,】【就】【径】【直】【出】【门】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【过】【了】【几】【天】【,】【爸】【爸】【出】【去】【做】【运】【动】【,】【却】【忘】【带】【会】【员】【卡】【了】【,】【打】【电】【话】【叫】【妈】【妈】【送】【过】【去】【,】【可】【妈】【妈】【正】【在】【招】【待】【客】【人】【,】【就】【叫】【我】【去】【送】【。】【我】【哪】【里】【肯】【,】【妈】【妈】【知】【道】【我】【还】【在】【为】【那】【一】【记】【耳】【光】【“】【记】【仇】【”】【,】【便】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【你】【是】【不】【是】【还】【在】【为】【那】【天】【的】【事】【情】【耿】【耿】【于】【怀】【啊】【?】【”】【我】【不】【说】【话】【,】【“】【你】【父】【亲】【是】【因】【为】【恨】【铁】【不】【成】【钢】【,】【一】【时】【心】【急】【才】【打】【了】【你】【一】【巴】【掌】【,】【事】【后】【他】【也】【很】【后】【悔】【。】【你】【知】【道】【吗】【,】【每】【当】【深】【夜】【的】【时】【候】【,】【他】【总】【要】【起】【床】【透】【过】【门】【缝】【,】【看】【看】【你】【是】【否】【睡】【着】【了】【,】【如】【果】【是】【的】【话】【,】【他】【才】【能】【安】【心】【地】【睡】【,】【如】【果】【你】【还】【没】【睡】【,】【他】【就】【会】【坐】【在】【客】【厅】【里】【,】【留】【意】【你】【房】【间】【里】【面】【的】【动】【静】【,】【生】【怕】【你】【饿】【了】【、】【渴】【了】【。】【其】【实】【,】【爸】【爸】【是】【爱】【你】【的】【,】【只】【是】【不】【善】【于】【表】【达】【而】【已】【。】【那】【次】【只】【是】【他】【一】【时】【气】【急】【,】【你】【不】【要】【再】【生】【他】【的】【气】【了】【。】【来】【,】【听】【话】【!】【给】【你】【爸】【爸】【送】【过】【去】【!】【”】【我】【听】【妈】【妈】【说】【完】【,】【眼】【圈】【不】【觉】【有】【点】【红】【,】【拿】【起】【那】【张】【会】【员】【卡】【,】【飞】【一】【般】【地】【跑】【了】【出】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【到】【我】【后】【,】【爸】【爸】【轻】【轻】【地】【摸】【了】【一】【下】【我】【的】【脸】【,】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【对】【不】【起】【,】【那】【天】【我】【不】【是】【有】【意】【的】【。】【我】【只】【是】【想】【让】【你】【每】【天】【能】【过】【得】【宽】【松】【一】【点】【、】【开】【心】【一】【点】【,】【有】【时】【间】【做】【做】【自】【己】【喜】【欢】【的】【事】【或】【者】【锻】【炼】【锻】【炼】【身】【体】【。】【别】【怪】【爸】【爸】【。】【”】【看】【着】【爸】【爸】【微】【笑】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【我】【哭】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【之】【后】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【的】【督】【促】【下】【,】【我】【每】【天】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【,】【尽】【量】【在】【学】【校】【完】【成】【功】【课】【,】【然】【后】【合】【理】【安】【排】【好】【自】【己】【的】【课】【余】【生】【活】【,】【做】【自】【己】【喜】【欢】【的】【事】【。】【在】【爸】【爸】【的】【带】【动】【下】【,】【我】【还】【开】【始】【了】【晨】【练】【。】【现】【在】【,】【只】【要】【你】【清】【晨】【经】【过】【我】【家】【楼】【下】【小】【花】【园】【,】【就】【会】【看】【到】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【正】【在】【那】【里】【锻】【炼】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【个】【响】【亮】【的】【耳】【光】【我】【会】【永】【远】【把】【它】【铭】【记】【在】【心】【,】【不】【是】【记】【仇】【,】【而】【是】【感】【恩】【。】【这】【里】【包】【含】【了】【父】【母】【对】【子】【女】【多】【少】【的】【爱】【啊】【!】【用】【心】【去】【体】【会】【,】【用】【心】【去】【交】【流】【,】【没】【有】【跨】【不】【过】【去】【的】【鸿】【沟】【,】【没】【有】【沟】【通】【不】【了】【的】【亲】【情】【。】【我】【愿】【那】【父】【爱】【如】【茉】【莉】【般】【的】【清】【香】【一】【直】【伴】【随】【着】【我】【,】【包】【裹】【着】【我】【的】【每】【一】【天】【,】【生】【活】【也】【因】【此】【变】【得】【更】【加】【甜】【蜜】【、】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【标】【题】【给】【人】【清】【脆】【有】【力】【之】【感】【,】【从】【听】【觉】【上】【给】【人】【以】【震】【撼】【。】【那】【是】【怎】【样】【的】【一】【个】【耳】【光】【啊】【!】【在】【小】【作】【者】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【中】【,】【读】【者】【感】【受】【到】【的】【却】【是】【其】【中】【包】【裹】【的】【浓】【浓】【的】【父】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【在】【文】【中】【所】【经】【历】【的】【一】【系】【列】【情】【感】【历】【程】【,】【真】【实】【地】【记】【录】【下】【了】【生】【活】【中】【孩】【子】【与】【父】【母】【沟】【通】【的】【心】【灵】【故】【事】【,】【正】【是】【这】【平】【凡】【、】【真】【实】【的】【爱】【让】【人】【动】【容】【。】【正】【如】【作】【者】【所】【说】【—】【—】【“】【那】【个】【响】【亮】【的】【耳】【光】【我】【会】【永】【远】【把】【它】【铭】【记】【在】【心】【,】【不】【是】【记】【仇】【,】【而】【是】【感】【恩】【。】【这】【里】【包】【含】【了】【父】【母】【对】【子】【女】【多】【少】【的】【爱】【啊】【!】【用】【心】【去】【体】【会】【,】【用】【心】【去】【交】【流】【,】【没】【有】【跨】【不】【过】【去】【的】【鸿】【沟】【,】【没】【有】【沟】【通】【不】【了】【的】【亲】【情】【。】【我】【愿】【那】【父】【爱】【如】【茉】【莉】【般】【的】【清】【香】【一】【直】【伴】【随】【着】【我】【,】【包】【裹】【着】【我】【的】【每】【一】【天】【,】【生】【活】【也】【因】【此】【变】【得】【更】【加】【甜】【蜜】【、】【幸】【福】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【月】【琴】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【写】【我】【读】【:】【我】【觉】【得】【本】【文】【最】【大】【的】【优】【点】【在】【于】【作】【者】【语】【言】【的】【平】【实】【,】【就】【像】【在】【叙】【述】【一】【件】【事】【,】【但】【父】【子】【之】【情】【却】【跃】【然】【纸】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【些】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【用】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【,】【以】【为】【那】【是】【有】【文】【采】【的】【表】【现】【,】【但】【这】【并】【不】【绝】【对】【。】【无】【论】【是】【抒】【情】【还】【是】【叙】【述】【,】【都】【应】【是】【有】【根】【基】【的】【,】【用】【词】【也】【要】【用】【得】【准】【确】【、】【适】【度】【,】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【,】【否】【则】【就】【成】【了】【堆】【砌】【,】【不】【但】【不】【美】【,】【反】【而】【令】【人】【生】【厌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】成都加菲猫【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【杯】【咖】【啡】【,】【感】【动】【是】【缕】【缕】【醇】【香】【;】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【壶】【热】【茶】【,】【感】【动】【是】【丝】【丝】【温】【暖】【;】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【簇】【鲜】【花】【,】【感】【动】【是】【片】【片】【绚】【丽】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【房】【间】【里】【有】【一】【个】【花】【篮】【,】【里】【面】【装】【满】【了】【我】【的】【感】【动】【,】【它】【比】【任】【何】【一】【篮】【鲜】【花】【都】【要】【夺】【目】【。】【从】【收】【集】【感】【动】【的】【那】【天】【开】【始】【,】【我】【便】【拥】【有】【了】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【前】【不】【久】【,】【我】【生】【病】【了】【,】【上】【学】【放】【学】【便】【由】【爸】【爸】【接】【送】【。】【星】【期】【二】【那】【天】【,】【我】【要】【参】【加】【竞】【赛】【班】【,】【所】【以】【不】【能】【正】【点】【放】【学】【。】【可】【爸】【爸】【不】【知】【道】【,】【那】【样】【的】【话】【他】【会】【在】【外】【面】【等】【很】【久】【的】【。】【我】【想】【给】【爸】【爸】【打】【电】【话】【告】【诉】【他】【一】【声】【,】【可】【却】【来】【不】【及】【,】【也】【只】【能】【让】【爸】【爸】【等】【了】【。】【竞】【赛】【班】【一】【下】【课】【,】【我】【便】【急】【匆】【匆】【地】【往】【楼】【下】【跑】【,】【心】【想】【:】【爸】【爸】【会】【不】【会】【等】【不】【到】【我】【先】【走】【了】【?】【可】【我】【一】【出】【校】【门】【,】【发】【现】【爸】【爸】【背】【着】【手】【,】【依】【然】【站】【在】【那】【里】【,】【月】【光】【下】【的】【身】【影】【很】【长】【。】【看】【着】【远】【处】【的】【爸】【爸】【,】【觉】【得】【他】【好】【像】【不】【再】【那】【么】【年】【轻】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【什】【么】【时】【候】【开】【始】【老】【的】【?】【是】【在】【送】【我】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【吗】【?】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【酸】【酸】【的】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【出】【来】【,】【微】【笑】【着】【向】【我】【招】【招】【手】【,】【我】【点】【了】【点】【头】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【转】【身】【的】【瞬】【间】【抹】【了】【一】【下】【眼】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【路】【上】【,】【爸】【爸】【关】【切】【地】【问】【我】【身】【体】【好】【些】【了】【吗】【?】【有】【没】【有】【咳】【嗽】【?】【中】【午】【饭】【吃】【了】【多】【少】【?】【我】【沉】【默】【着】【不】【说】【话】【,】【怕】【只】【说】【一】【个】【字】【就】【又】【会】【掉】【眼】【泪】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【不】【说】【话】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【问】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【不】【舒】【服】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【摇】【了】【摇】【头】【,】【深】【吸】【一】【口】【气】【,】【说】【:】【“】【很】【好】【啊】【,】【只】【是】【我】【今】【天】【忘】【了】【说】【要】【参】【加】【竞】【赛】【班】【的】【事】【,】【让】【您】【等】【了】【这】【么】【久】【。】【”】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【身】【体】【无】【恙】【,】【便】【松】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【漫】【不】【经】【心】【地】【说】【:】【“】【我】【早】【就】【想】【到】【你】【今】【天】【要】【上】【竞】【赛】【班】【的】【,】【所】【以】【晚】【来】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【也】【没】【等】【多】【久】【。】【”】【原】【来】【爸】【爸】【知】【道】【啊】【,】【我】【心】【中】【的】【愧】【疚】【感】【顿】【时】【消】【了】【一】【半】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【妈】【妈】【一】【见】【我】【们】【就】【问】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【怎】【么】【这】【么】【久】【才】【回】【来】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【连】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【不】【久】【不】【久】【,】【也】【没】【多】【久】【啊】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【了】【爸】【爸】【一】【眼】【,】【又】【看】【了】【一】【眼】【表】【,】【说】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【不】【久】【?】【都】【快】【1】【个】【小】【时】【了】【!】【”】【1】【个】【小】【时】【?】【我】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【着】【爸】【爸】【,】【顿】【时】【也】【明】【白】【了】【,】【原】【来】【爸】【爸】【在】【凛】【冽】【的】【寒】【风】【中】【等】【了】【我】【1】【个】【小】【时】【!】【愧】【疚】【感】【重】【又】【充】【满】【了】【我】【的】【心】【中】【,】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【吃】【饭】【时】【,】【我】【一】【直】【是】【沉】【默】【的】【,】【因】【为】【心】【里】【很】【过】【意】【不】【去】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【状】【慢】【慢】【地】【开】【口】【道】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【生】【气】【了】【?】【我】【不】【是】【故】【意】【骗】【你】【,】【只】【是】【不】【想】【让】【你】【担】【心】【,】【你】【爸】【爸】【我】【身】【强】【体】【壮】【,】【吹】【吹】【风】【就】【跟】【挠】【痒】【痒】【一】【样】【,】【没】【什】【么】【大】【不】【了】【!】【”】【我】【望】【着】【爸】【爸】【,】【一】【下】【子】【笑】【出】【声】【来】【,】【随】【即】【又】【说】【:】【“】【爸】【爸】【,】【我】【怎】【么】【会】【生】【您】【的】【气】【呢】【,】【女】【儿】【只】【是】【心】【里】【觉】【得】【过】【意】【不】【去】【,】【要】【是】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【说】【一】【下】【,】【就】【不】【会】【让】【爸】【爸】【苦】【等】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【,】【以】【后】【你】【要】【是】【等】【不】【到】【我】【,】【你】【就】【先】【走】【,】【我】【自】【己】【也】【能】【回】【家】【的】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【笑】【着】【点】【头】【,】【眼】【里】【流】【露】【出】【一】【丝】【欣】【喜】【与】【安】【慰】【。】【我】【吃】【着】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【觉】【得】【满】【嘴】【都】【是】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屋】【外】【寒】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【我】【的】【心】【却】【温】【暖】【无】【比】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【水】【娟】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【写】【我】【读】【:】【文】【章】【的】【情】【节】【设】【计】【得】【很】【巧】【妙】【。】【特】【别】【是】【第】【四】【自】【然】【段】【“】【我】【”】【与】【爸】【爸】【的】【对】【话】【并】【没】【有】【什】【么】【感】【染】【人】【的】【地】【方】【。】【但】【读】【到】【结】【尾】【人】【们】【才】【发】【现】【,】【爸】【爸】【其】【实】【是】【说】【了】【假】【话】【。】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【当】【我】【们】【读】【完】【全】【文】【,】【才】【感】【受】【到】【第】【四】【段】【中】【的】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【情】【节】【设】【计】【不】【是】【可】【有】【可】【无】【的】【,】【是】【与】【结】【尾】【相】【互】【作】【用】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【闲】【花】【只】【好】【闲】【中】【看】【,】【一】【折】【归】【来】【便】【不】【鲜】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【出】【处】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【·】【刘】【廷】【玑】【《】【偶】【成】【》】【(】【见】【清】【·】【袁】【枚】【《】【随】【国】【诗】【话】【》】【卷】【十】【四】【第】【四】【十】【条】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【些】【闲】【野】【中】【的】【花】【,】【只】【适】【宜】【在】【闲】【野】【中】【观】【赏】【,】【一】【把】【它】【们】【摘】【折】【回】【来】【,】【就】【不】【新】【鲜】【了】【。】【一】【切】【美】【的】【事】【物】【都】【要】【合】【乎】【自】【然】【,】【人】【工】【的】【做】【作】【改】【造】【,】【会】【把】【原】【来】【的】【美】【好】【本】【质】【破】【坏】【。】【又】【可】【以】【用】【来】【说】【明】【做】【任】【何】【事】【情】【都】【要】【因】【地】【制】【宜】【,】【要】【具】【体】【情】【况】【具】【体】【对】【待】【,】【比】【如】【引】【进】【人】【才】【、】【引】【进】【外】【地】【的】【先】【进】【经】【验】【,】【都】【要】【充】【分】【地】【考】【虑】【到】【自】【己】【地】【区】【、】【单】【位】【的】【情】【况】【与】【彼】【处】【的】【差】【异】【,】【要】【注】【意】【分】【析】【人】【才】【、】【经】【验】【在】【什】【么】【“】【土】【壤】【”】【中】【生】【长】【的】【,】【不】【要】【盲】【目】【引】【进】【,】【呆】【板】【效】【法】【,】【生】【搬】【硬】【套】【,】【免】【得】【“】【一】【折】【归】【来】【便】【不】【鲜】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

成都加菲猫:时新素材展示与运用

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【叙】【文】【靠】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【的】【形】【象】【感】【人】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【无】【论】【是】【记】【人】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【写】【景】【状】【物】【,】【都】【应】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【有】【血】【有】【肉】【,】【切】【忌】【空】【泛】【造】【假】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【谈】【写】【人】【。】【写】【人】【除】【了】【必】【须】【具】【体】【描】【写】【人】【物】【的】【外】【貌】【、】【表】【情】【、】【动】【作】【、】【语】【言】【外】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【这】【是】【突】【出】【人】【物】【性】【格】【,】【把】【人】【物】【写】【得】【精】【彩】【的】【重】【要】【手】【段】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【恰】【恰】【忽】【略】【了】【这】【一】【点】【。】【他】【们】【写】【人】【,】【往】【往】【采】【用】【“】【贴】【标】【签】【”】【的】【方】【法】【,】【首】【先】【给】【他】【“】【定】【了】【性】【”】【,】【堆】【砌】【几】【个】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【,】【如】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【有】【一】【个】【好】【妈】【妈】【,】【慈】【祥】【的】【脸】【上】【永】【远】【带】【着】【和】【蔼】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【因】【为】【旧】【社】【会】【她】【没】【有】【念】【过】【多】【少】【书】【,】【所】【以】【总】【是】【一】【个】【劲】【地】【督】【促】【我】【们】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【并】【在】【生】【活】【上】【、】【学】【习】【上】【对】【我】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【,】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【处】【处】【体】【现】【了】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【后】【面】【还】【有】【具】【体】【的】【描】【写】【,】【这】【段】【话】【作】【为】【开】【头】【,】【当】【然】【可】【以】【,】【但】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【,】【这】【竟】【是】【文】【章】【的】【主】【体】【部】【分】【。】【仅】【用】【“】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【”】【“】【无】【微】【不】【至】【”】【“】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【”】【这】【些】【空】【洞】【的】【词】【语】【,】【能】【说】【明】【母】【亲】【就】【是】【一】【个】【“】【好】【妈】【妈】【”】【吗】【?】【这】【很】【难】【使】【人】【信】【服】【,】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【写】【得】【具】【体】【多】【了】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【不】【知】【什】【么】【声】【音】【把】【我】【从】【梦】【中】【惊】【醒】【,】【我】【睁】【开】【眼】【睛】【一】【看】【,】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【灯】【已】【经】【亮】【了】【,】【不】【时】【传】【来】【锅】【碗】【的】【轻】【响】【。】【我】【伸】【手】【拿】【过】【桌】【上】【的】【闹】【钟】【,】【借】【着】【从】【厨】【房】【里】【映】【过】【来】【的】【亮】【光】【看】【了】【看】【,】【还】【不】【到】【五】【点】【。】【今】【天】【是】【星】【期】【日】【,】【妈】【妈】【还】【和】【往】【常】【一】【样】【,】【起】【得】【这】【样】【早】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【翻】【过】【身】【,】【细】【听】【着】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【声】【响】【。】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【轻】【轻】【地】【舀】【水】【;】【“】【哧】【—】【—】【噗】【!】【”】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【开】【煤】【气】【炉】【;】【“】【咔】【啦】【咔】【啦】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【拿】【碗】【筷】【。】【在】【静】【静】【的】【清】【晨】【,】【这】【声】【音】【是】【那】【样】【的】【清】【晰】【,】【又】【是】【那】【样】【的】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【用】【醒】【来】【的】【所】【见】【、】【所】【闻】【,】【具】【体】【地】【写】【出】【了】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【起】【早】【做】【饭】【的】【情】【景】【。】【这】【真】【实】【、】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【、】【形】【象】【的】【记】【叙】【比】【起】【对】【妈】【妈】【“】【任】【劳】【任】【怨】【、】【辛】【勤】【劳】【作】【”】【的】【赞】【叹】【,】【不】【知】【要】【强】【多】【少】【倍】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【都】【知】【道】【《】【水】【浒】【传】【》】【中】【的】【打】【虎】【英】【雄】【是】【武】【松】【,】【而】【不】【是】【李】【逵】【。】【为】【什】【么】【武】【松】【打】【死】【一】【只】【虎】【会】【深】【深】【地】【震】【动】【我】【们】【的】【心】【弦】【,】【而】【李】【逵】【杀】【了】【四】【只】【虎】【,】【留】【给】【读】【者】【的】【印】【象】【却】【远】【不】【如】【武】【松】【呢】【?】【这】【里】【面】【的】【诀】【窍】【就】【在】【一】【个】【描】【绘】【的】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【精】【彩】【异】【常】【,】【另】【一】【个】【则】【“】【缺】【少】【细】【节】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【不】【仅】【能】【充】【实】【内】【容】【,】【使】【之】【具】【有】【浓】【厚】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【具】【有】【震】【撼】【人】【心】【的】【艺】【术】【力】【量】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【,】【具】【有】【典】【型】【意】【义】【的】【细】【节】【,】【能】【表】【现】【出】【人】【物】【鲜】【明】【的】【个】【性】【。】【吴】【敬】【梓】【的】【《】【儒】【林】【外】【史】【》】【中】【,】【有】【一】【段】【对】【严】【监】【生】【死】【前】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【这】【一】【细】【节】【的】【描】【写】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【此】【,】【严】【监】【生】【的】【病】【,】【一】【日】【重】【似】【一】【日】【,】【再】【不】【回】【头】【,】【诸】【来】【六】【眷】【都】【来】【问】【候】【…】【…】【晚】【间】【挤】【了】【一】【屋】【的】【人】【,】【桌】【上】【点】【着】【一】【盏】【灯】【。】【严】【监】【生】【喉】【咙】【里】【痰】【响】【得】【一】【进】【一】【出】【,】【一】【声】【不】【倒】【一】【声】【的】【,】【总】【不】【得】【断】【气】【,】【还】【把】【手】【从】【被】【单】【里】【拿】【出】【来】【,】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【。】【大】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【你】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【个】【亲】【人】【不】【曾】【见】【面】【?】【”】【他】【就】【把】【头】【摇】【了】【两】【三】【摇】【。】【二】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【笔】【银】【子】【在】【那】【里】【,】【不】【曾】【吩】【咐】【明】【白】【?】【”】【他】【把】【两】【眼】【睁】【得】【溜】【圆】【,】【把】【头】【又】【狠】【狠】【摇】【了】【几】【摇】【,】【越】【发】【指】【得】【紧】【了】【。】【奶】【妈】【抱】【着】【哥】【子】【插】【口】【道】【:】【“】【老】【爷】【想】【是】【因】【为】【两】【位】【舅】【爷】【不】【在】【跟】【前】【,】【故】【此】【惦】【念】【。】【”】【他】【听】【了】【这】【话】【,】【把】【眼】【闭】【着】【摇】【头】【,】【那】【手】【只】【是】【指】【着】【不】【动】【。】【赵】【氏】【慌】【忙】【揩】【揩】【眼】【泪】【,】【走】【近】【上】【前】【道】【:】【“】【爷】【,】【别】【人】【都】【说】【不】【相】【干】【,】【只】【有】【我】【晓】【得】【你】【的】【意】【思】【!】【”】【…】【…】【“】【你】【是】【为】【那】【灯】【盏】【里】【点】【的】【是】【两】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【不】【放】【心】【,】【恐】【费】【了】【油】【。】【我】【如】【今】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【就】【是】【了】【。】【”】【说】【罢】【,】【忙】【走】【出】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【。】【众】【人】【看】【严】【监】【生】【时】【,】【点】【一】【点】【头】【,】【把】【手】【垂】【下】【,】【登】【时】【就】【没】【了】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【严】【监】【生】【是】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【,】【因】【为】【多】【点】【一】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【死】【不】【瞑】【目】【。】【作】【者】【通】【过】【这】【一】【典】【型】【细】【节】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【把】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【特】【有】【的】【精】【神】【面】【貌】【和】【鲜】【明】【个】【性】【深】【刻】【地】【表】【现】【出】【来】【了】【。】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【表】【现】【了】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【的】【丑】【恶】【灵】【魂】【,】【真】【是】【写】【得】【入】【木】【三】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【这】【里】【也】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【选】【择】【细】【节】【要】【根】【据】【表】【现】【人】【物】【性】【格】【的】【需】【要】【和】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【需】【要】【,】【否】【则】【再】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【也】【毫】【无】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【说】【记】【事】【。】【要】【把】【一】【件】【事】【写】【得】【具】【体】【,】【就】【得】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【详】【写】【,】【要】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【,】【要】【精】【雕】【细】【刻】【,】【不】【能】【只】【用】【那】【些】【概】【括】【抽】【象】【的】【语】【言】【。】【如】【,】【同】【样】【是】【写】【《】【联】【欢】【会】【》】【,】【一】【个】【同】【学】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【开】【得】【太】【热】【烈】【,】【太】【丰】【富】【,】【太】【激】【动】【人】【心】【了】【!】【悦】【耳】【的】【歌】【声】【,】【翩】【翩】【的】【舞】【姿】【,】【还】【有】【增】【长】【才】【智】【的】【文】【学】【知】【识】【抢】【答】【,】【从】【下】【午】【2】【点】【一】【直】【进】【行】【到】【8】【点】【,】【大】【家】【才】【恋】【恋】【不】【舍】【地】【离】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【,】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【掩】【盖】【不】【了】【内】【容】【的】【空】【洞】【,】【铿】【锵】【的】【语】【句】【难】【以】【粉】【饰】【内】【在】【的】【贫】【乏】【。】【须】【知】【,】【“】【热】【烈】【”】【“】【丰】【富】【”】【“】【激】【动】【人】【心】【”】【,】【只】【有】【通】【过】【事】【件】【表】【现】【出】【来】【,】【才】【是】【成】【功】【的】【记】【事】【。】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【得】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【水】【,】【水】【落】【石】【出】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【出】【,】【出】【其】【不】【意】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【意】【,】【意】【气】【风】【发】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【发】【,】【发】【扬】【光】【大】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【大】【,】【大】【义】【凛】【然】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【然】【,】【然】【—】【—】【然】【—】【—】【”】【这】【下】【可】【把】【周】【皓】【月】【难】【住】【了】【,】【只】【见】【她】【双】【眉】【紧】【锁】【,】【在】【极】【力】【思】【考】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【请】【周】【皓】【月】【表】【演】【节】【目】【!】【”】【班】【主】【任】【曹】【老】【师】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【掌】【声】【雷】【动】【,】【周】【皓】【月】【落】【落】【大】【方】【地】【走】【上】【台】【,】【放】【开】【歌】【喉】【唱】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【又】【进】【行】【下】【一】【个】【节】【目】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【现】【在】【,】【我】【把】【某】【个】【同】【学】【的】【面】【貌】【描】【绘】【一】【下】【,】【请】【同】【学】【们】【说】【出】【这】【人】【是】【谁】【。】【”】【班】【主】【任】【说】【道】【:】【“】【白】【皙】【的】【皮】【肤】【,】【眼】【睛】【虽】【不】【大】【,】【可】【炯】【炯】【有】【神】【,】【剪】【着】【一】【个】【游】【泳】【头】【,】【一】【副】【运】【动】【员】【的】【样】【子】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【你】【瞧】【瞧】【我】【,】【我】【望】【望】【你】【,】【突】【然】【,】【不】【知】【哪】【位】【同】【学】【说】【:】【“】【是】【沈】【玉】【兰】【!】【”】【顿】【时】【,】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【一】【下】【子】【集】【中】【到】【沈】【玉】【兰】【身】【上】【,】【继】【而】【人】【们】【又】【摇】【头】【否】【认】【,】【不】【对】【!】【沈】【玉】【兰】【梳】【着】【两】【条】【小】【辫】【子】【。】【那】【是】【谁】【呢】【?】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【像】【是】【几】【十】【盏】【探】【照】【灯】【,】【四】【处】【扫】【视】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【的】【眼】【光】【一】【遇】【到】【身】【旁】【的】【程】【铭】【时】【,】【我】【就】【像】【得】【到】【宝】【贝】【似】【的】【心】【头】【一】【热】【,】【脱】【口】【而】【出】【:】【“】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【在】【座】【的】【人】【异】【口】【同】【声】【欢】【呼】【:】【“】【对】【!】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【笑】【声】【、】【掌】【声】【久】【久】【不】【息】【,】【程】【铭】【难】【为】【情】【地】【涨】【红】【了】【脸】【,】【而】【我】【因】【为】【是】【第】【一】【个】【说】【对】【的】【,】【所】【以】【得】【到】【了】【两】【颗】【糖】【的】【奖】【励】【。】【这】【真】【是】【在】【甜】【甜】【蜜】【蜜】【、】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【中】【长】【知】【识】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【抓】【住】【了】【一】【些】【关】【键】【性】【的】【细】【节】【,】【重】【点】【突】【出】【,】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【写】【得】【有】【声】【有】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【说】【说】【写】【景】【状】【物】【。】【要】【写】【出】【景】【和】【物】【的】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【主】【要】【靠】【描】【写】【手】【段】【的】【运】【用】【。】【比】【如】【说】【,】【这】【个】【地】【方】【很】【美】【,】【究】【竟】【美】【在】【哪】【里】【?】【是】【亭】【台】【楼】【阁】【美】【,】【还】【是】【花】【草】【树】【木】【美】【?】【是】【绿】【水】【青】【山】【美】【,】【还】【是】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【美】【?】【景】【物】【中】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【是】【哪】【些】【?】【它】【们】【有】【什】【么】【特】【征】【?】【如】【果】【能】【把】【重】【点】【景】【物】【的】【特】【征】【、】【状】【态】【描】【写】【出】【来】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【具】【体】【生】【动】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【个】【同】【学】【写】【《】【狮】【子】【林】【》】【,】【初】【稿】【是】【这】【样】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【,】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【些】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【,】【一】【个】【个】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【,】【在】【老】【师】【的】【指】【导】【下】【,】【他】【对】【初】【稿】【进】【行】【了】【修】【改】【,】【增】【加】【了】【具】【体】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【基】【本】【上】【描】【绘】【出】【狮】【子】【林】【的】【特】【色】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【全】【文】【如】【下】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【。】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【。】【有】【的】【龇】【牙】【咧】【嘴】【,】【昂】【首】【长】【啸】【;】【有】【的】【瞪】【着】【两】【眼】【,】【威】【风】【凛】【凛】【;】【有】【的】【闭】【目】【养】【神】【,】【无】【精】【打】【采】【…】【…】【真】【是】【千】【姿】【百】【态】【,】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【它】【们】【组】【成】【一】【个】【个】【高】【耸】【的】【假】【山】【。】【从】【山】【脚】【到】【山】【顶】【沿】【路】【怪】【石】【嶙】【峋】【,】【迂】【回】【曲】【折】【。】【有】【时】【看】【得】【见】【山】【顶】【上】【的】【游】【客】【的】【眉】【目】【,】【也】【听】【得】【见】【他】【们】【的】【谈】【笑】【,】【可】【就】【是】【没】【法】【登】【山】【。】【等】【到】【你】【好】【不】【容】【易】【登】【上】【山】【巅】【,】【才】【会】【发】【现】【,】【竟】【有】【好】【几】【条】【石】【路】【可】【达】【山】【顶】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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成都加菲猫:大理张家花园介绍 [观大理张家花园]

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【就】【像】【手】【中】【的】【流】【沙】【,】【随】【着】【风】【从】【指】【缝】【间】【渐】【渐】【流】【失】【…】【…】【五】【年】【级】【的】【最】【后】【一】【个】【小】【学】【暑】【假】【,】【妈】【妈】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【我】【们】【马】【上】【就】【要】【离】【开】【这】【个】【生】【活】【了】【十】【几】【年】【的】【地】【方】【,】【去】【市】【区】【读】【初】【中】【了】【。】【我】【听】【了】【之】【后】【,】【感】【觉】【心】【里】【空】【荡】【荡】【的】【,】【仿】【佛】【一】【下】【子】【失】【去】【了】【很】【重】【要】【的】【东】【西】【。】【在】【整】【理】【书】【本】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【想】【再】【去】【看】【看】【这】【个】【曾】【经】【与】【我】【朝】【夕】【相】【处】【的】【小】【区】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【区】【里】【常】【见】【的】【人】【大】【都】【是】【老】【爷】【爷】【和】【老】【奶】【奶】【,】【平】【时】【的】【小】【区】【是】【安】【适】【恬】【静】【的】【。】【站】【在】【树】【荫】【下】【的】【小】【路】【上】【,】【我】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【倾】【听】【着】【风】【吹】【树】【叶】【的】【声】【音】【。】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【,】【这】【声】【音】【有】【让】【人】【放】【松】【心】【情】【的】【力】【量】【,】【以】【前】【我】【也】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【这】【样】【听】【着】【。】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【,】【隔】【壁】【奶】【奶】【的】【叫】【声】【打】【断】【了】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【微】【笑】【着】【走】【过】【去】【,】【挪】【动】【一】【只】【小】【凳】【子】【坐】【在】【她】【的】【旁】【边】【。】【她】【知】【道】【我】【就】【要】【离】【开】【这】【里】【,】【像】【是】【叮】【嘱】【自】【己】【的】【孙】【女】【一】【样】【“】【唠】【叨】【”】【着】【。】【虽】【然】【喋】【喋】【不】【休】【的】【,】【却】【让】【我】【感】【到】【很】【温】【暖】【。】【突】【然】【,】【一】【排】【小】【蚂】【蚁】【排】【着】【整】【齐】【的】【队】【伍】【出】【现】【在】【我】【的】【面】【前】【。】【他】【们】【齐】【心】【协】【力】【地】【搬】【动】【着】【一】【块】【小】【小】【的】【食】【物】【碎】【屑】【。】【碎】【屑】【在】【地】【上】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【地】【移】【动】【着】【。】【小】【时】【候】【的】【一】【幕】【幕】【浮】【现】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【。】【奶】【奶】【们】【聊】【天】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【和】【这】【些】【“】【搬】【运】【工】【”】【们】【玩】【,】【有】【时】【用】【脚】【挡】【住】【它】【们】【的】【去】【路】【,】【有】【时】【用】【叶】【片】【或】【者】【小】【石】【头】【堵】【住】【它】【们】【的】【洞】【口】【。】【这】【些】【小】【家】【伙】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【成】【了】【我】【儿】【时】【的】【玩】【伴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【继】【续】【向】【前】【走】【。】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【,】【邮】【递】【员】【叔】【叔】【的】【脚】【踏】【车】【轻】【快】【地】【叫】【着】【。】【看】【了】【看】【手】【表】【,】【原】【来】【已】【经】【到】【邮】【递】【员】【叔】【叔】【送】【晚】【报】【的】【时】【候】【。】【记】【得】【我】【以】【前】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【站】【在】【他】【们】【身】【旁】【看】【着】【他】【们】【把】【报】【纸】【送】【到】【信】【箱】【里】【,】【等】【到】【他】【们】【塞】【到】【我】【家】【的】【信】【箱】【时】【,】【我】【便】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【把】【它】【取】【出】【来】【。】【时】【间】【久】【了】【,】【他】【们】【看】【见】【我】【总】【是】【友】【好】【地】【说】【上】【两】【句】【,】【把】【我】【家】【的】【报】【纸】【直】【接】【递】【给】【我】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【,】【这】【些】【声】【音】【共】【同】【汇】【成】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【—】【—】【“】【故】【乡】【”】【的】【声】【音】【。】【现】【在】【的】【我】【已】【经】【不】【住】【在】【那】【里】【了】【,】【但】【打】【开】【窗】【户】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【用】【心】【倾】【听】【,】【儿】【时】【的】【一】【幕】【幕】【回】【忆】【便】【又】【会】【浮】【现】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【,】【陪】【伴】【我】【度】【过】【独】【处】【的】【时】【刻】【,】【让】【我】【不】【会】【孤】【单】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【用】【心】【去】【倾】【听】【吧】【!】【我】【感】【到】【这】【世】【上】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【都】【是】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【!】【包】【括】【那】【远】【去】【的】【“】【故】【乡】【”】【的】【声】【音】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【用】【心】【去】【感】【受】【生】【活】【,】【又】【用】【形】【象】【的】【语】【言】【把】【这】【种】【感】【受】【真】【切】【地】【表】【达】【出】【来】【,】【是】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【动】【人】【之】【处】【。】【只】【有】【失】【去】【才】【懂】【得】【拥】【有】【的】【珍】【贵】【。】【绿】【树】【清】【风】【,】【老】【人】【叮】【嘱】【,】【蚂】【蚁】【搬】【家】【,】【邮】【差】【送】【报】【,】【这】【些】【都】【是】【日】【常】【生】【活】【景】【象】【,】【却】【浸】【润】【着】【邻】【里】【亲】【情】【,】【构】【建】【了】【作】【者】【幸】【福】【的】【童】【年】【生】【活】【。】【告】【别】【小】【区】【,】【告】【别】【邻】【里】【,】【也】【即】【告】【别】【童】【年】【,】【所】【以】【临】【别】【之】【际】【,】【作】【者】【才】【会】【如】【此】【依】【依】【不】【舍】【。】【珍】【惜】【之】【意】【,】【感】【恩】【之】【情】【,】【流】【溢】【于】【字】【里】【行】【间】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【以】【富】【有】【特】【色】【的】【声】【音】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【穿】【起】【一】【幕】【幕】【生】【活】【场】【景】【,】【选】【材】【恰】【当】【,】【结】【构】【清】【晰】【,】【用】【心】【之】【处】【,】【值】【得】【称】【许】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【用】【心】【去】【倾】【听】【吧】【!】【我】【感】【到】【这】【世】【上】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【都】【是】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【!】【包】【括】【那】【远】【去】【的】【‘】【故】【乡】【’】【的】【声】【音】【。】【”】【“】【倾】【听】【”】【是】【感】【受】【,】【“】【用】【心】【”】【是】【体】【验】【,】【“】【最】【美】【”】【是】【悟】【得】【。】【其】【中】【小】【小】【少】【年】【能】【做】【到】【“】【用】【心】【”】【,】【最】【为】【难】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【郑】【重】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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