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2019年11月22日 02:26

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【杯】【咖】【啡】【,】【感】【动】【是】【缕】【缕】【醇】【香】【;】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【壶】【热】【茶】【,】【感】【动】【是】【丝】【丝】【温】【暖】【;】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【簇】【鲜】【花】【,】【感】【动】【是】【片】【片】【绚】【丽】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【房】【间】【里】【有】【一】【个】【花】【篮】【,】【里】【面】【装】【满】【了】【我】【的】【感】【动】【,】【它】【比】【任】【何】【一】【篮】【鲜】【花】【都】【要】【夺】【目】【。】【从】【收】【集】【感】【动】【的】【那】【天】【开】【始】【,】【我】【便】【拥】【有】【了】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【前】【不】【久】【,】【我】【生】【病】【了】【,】【上】【学】【放】【学】【便】【由】【爸】【爸】【接】【送】【。】【星】【期】【二】【那】【天】【,】【我】【要】【参】【加】【竞】【赛】【班】【,】【所】【以】【不】【能】【正】【点】【放】【学】【。】【可】【爸】【爸】【不】【知】【道】【,】【那】【样】【的】【话】【他】【会】【在】【外】【面】【等】【很】【久】【的】【。】【我】【想】【给】【爸】【爸】【打】【电】【话】【告】【诉】【他】【一】【声】【,】【可】【却】【来】【不】【及】【,】【也】【只】【能】【让】【爸】【爸】【等】【了】【。】【竞】【赛】【班】【一】【下】【课】【,】【我】【便】【急】【匆】【匆】【地】【往】【楼】【下】【跑】【,】【心】【想】【:】【爸】【爸】【会】【不】【会】【等】【不】【到】【我】【先】【走】【了】【?】【可】【我】【一】【出】【校】【门】【,】【发】【现】【爸】【爸】【背】【着】【手】【,】【依】【然】【站】【在】【那】【里】【,】【月】【光】【下】【的】【身】【影】【很】【长】【。】【看】【着】【远】【处】【的】【爸】【爸】【,】【觉】【得】【他】【好】【像】【不】【再】【那】【么】【年】【轻】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【什】【么】【时】【候】【开】【始】【老】【的】【?】【是】【在】【送】【我】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【吗】【?】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【酸】【酸】【的】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【出】【来】【,】【微】【笑】【着】【向】【我】【招】【招】【手】【,】【我】【点】【了】【点】【头】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【转】【身】【的】【瞬】【间】【抹】【了】【一】【下】【眼】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【路】【上】【,】【爸】【爸】【关】【切】【地】【问】【我】【身】【体】【好】【些】【了】【吗】【?】【有】【没】【有】【咳】【嗽】【?】【中】【午】【饭】【吃】【了】【多】【少】【?】【我】【沉】【默】【着】【不】【说】【话】【,】【怕】【只】【说】【一】【个】【字】【就】【又】【会】【掉】【眼】【泪】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【不】【说】【话】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【问】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【不】【舒】【服】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【摇】【了】【摇】【头】【,】【深】【吸】【一】【口】【气】【,】【说】【:】【“】【很】【好】【啊】【,】【只】【是】【我】【今】【天】【忘】【了】【说】【要】【参】【加】【竞】【赛】【班】【的】【事】【,】【让】【您】【等】【了】【这】【么】【久】【。】【”】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【身】【体】【无】【恙】【,】【便】【松】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【漫】【不】【经】【心】【地】【说】【:】【“】【我】【早】【就】【想】【到】【你】【今】【天】【要】【上】【竞】【赛】【班】【的】【,】【所】【以】【晚】【来】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【也】【没】【等】【多】【久】【。】【”】【原】【来】【爸】【爸】【知】【道】【啊】【,】【我】【心】【中】【的】【愧】【疚】【感】【顿】【时】【消】【了】【一】【半】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【妈】【妈】【一】【见】【我】【们】【就】【问】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【怎】【么】【这】【么】【久】【才】【回】【来】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【连】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【不】【久】【不】【久】【,】【也】【没】【多】【久】【啊】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【了】【爸】【爸】【一】【眼】【,】【又】【看】【了】【一】【眼】【表】【,】【说】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【不】【久】【?】【都】【快】【1】【个】【小】【时】【了】【!】【”】【1】【个】【小】【时】【?】【我】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【着】【爸】【爸】【,】【顿】【时】【也】【明】【白】【了】【,】【原】【来】【爸】【爸】【在】【凛】【冽】【的】【寒】【风】【中】【等】【了】【我】【1】【个】【小】【时】【!】【愧】【疚】【感】【重】【又】【充】【满】【了】【我】【的】【心】【中】【,】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【吃】【饭】【时】【,】【我】【一】【直】【是】【沉】【默】【的】【,】【因】【为】【心】【里】【很】【过】【意】【不】【去】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【状】【慢】【慢】【地】【开】【口】【道】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【生】【气】【了】【?】【我】【不】【是】【故】【意】【骗】【你】【,】【只】【是】【不】【想】【让】【你】【担】【心】【,】【你】【爸】【爸】【我】【身】【强】【体】【壮】【,】【吹】【吹】【风】【就】【跟】【挠】【痒】【痒】【一】【样】【,】【没】【什】【么】【大】【不】【了】【!】【”】【我】【望】【着】【爸】【爸】【,】【一】【下】【子】【笑】【出】【声】【来】【,】【随】【即】【又】【说】【:】【“】【爸】【爸】【,】【我】【怎】【么】【会】【生】【您】【的】【气】【呢】【,】【女】【儿】【只】【是】【心】【里】【觉】【得】【过】【意】【不】【去】【,】【要】【是】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【说】【一】【下】【,】【就】【不】【会】【让】【爸】【爸】【苦】【等】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【,】【以】【后】【你】【要】【是】【等】【不】【到】【我】【,】【你】【就】【先】【走】【,】【我】【自】【己】【也】【能】【回】【家】【的】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【笑】【着】【点】【头】【,】【眼】【里】【流】【露】【出】【一】【丝】【欣】【喜】【与】【安】【慰】【。】【我】【吃】【着】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【觉】【得】【满】【嘴】【都】【是】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屋】【外】【寒】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【我】【的】【心】【却】【温】【暖】【无】【比】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【水】【娟】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【写】【我】【读】【:】【文】【章】【的】【情】【节】【设】【计】【得】【很】【巧】【妙】【。】【特】【别】【是】【第】【四】【自】【然】【段】【“】【我】【”】【与】【爸】【爸】【的】【对】【话】【并】【没】【有】【什】【么】【感】【染】【人】【的】【地】【方】【。】【但】【读】【到】【结】【尾】【人】【们】【才】【发】【现】【,】【爸】【爸】【其】【实】【是】【说】【了】【假】【话】【。】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【当】【我】【们】【读】【完】【全】【文】【,】【才】【感】【受】【到】【第】【四】【段】【中】【的】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【情】【节】【设】【计】【不】【是】【可】【有】【可】【无】【的】【,】【是】【与】【结】【尾】【相】【互】【作】【用】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【闲】【花】【只】【好】【闲】【中】【看】【,】【一】【折】【归】【来】【便】【不】【鲜】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【出】【处】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【·】【刘】【廷】【玑】【《】【偶】【成】【》】【(】【见】【清】【·】【袁】【枚】【《】【随】【国】【诗】【话】【》】【卷】【十】【四】【第】【四】【十】【条】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【些】【闲】【野】【中】【的】【花】【,】【只】【适】【宜】【在】【闲】【野】【中】【观】【赏】【,】【一】【把】【它】【们】【摘】【折】【回】【来】【,】【就】【不】【新】【鲜】【了】【。】【一】【切】【美】【的】【事】【物】【都】【要】【合】【乎】【自】【然】【,】【人】【工】【的】【做】【作】【改】【造】【,】【会】【把】【原】【来】【的】【美】【好】【本】【质】【破】【坏】【。】【又】【可】【以】【用】【来】【说】【明】【做】【任】【何】【事】【情】【都】【要】【因】【地】【制】【宜】【,】【要】【具】【体】【情】【况】【具】【体】【对】【待】【,】【比】【如】【引】【进】【人】【才】【、】【引】【进】【外】【地】【的】【先】【进】【经】【验】【,】【都】【要】【充】【分】【地】【考】【虑】【到】【自】【己】【地】【区】【、】【单】【位】【的】【情】【况】【与】【彼】【处】【的】【差】【异】【,】【要】【注】【意】【分】【析】【人】【才】【、】【经】【验】【在】【什】【么】【“】【土】【壤】【”】【中】【生】【长】【的】【,】【不】【要】【盲】【目】【引】【进】【,】【呆】【板】【效】【法】【,】【生】【搬】【硬】【套】【,】【免】【得】【“】【一】【折】【归】【来】【便】【不】【鲜】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【向】【来】【只】【有】【赞】【颂】【母】【爱】【的】【伟】【大】【,】【可】【又】【有】【谁】【知】【道】【父】【爱】【的】【含】【蓄】【!】【我】【把】【父】【爱】【比】【做】【一】【株】【茉】【莉】【花】【,】【它】【在】【我】【的】【生】【活】【中】【幽】【幽】【地】【散】【发】【着】【淡】【淡】【的】【清】【香】【,】【让】【我】【默】【默】【地】【品】【味】【、】【深】【深】【地】【体】【验】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【初】【一】【的】【时】【候】【,】【由】【于】【作】【业】【比】【较】【多】【,】【我】【又】【是】【慢】【性】【子】【,】【所】【以】【需】【要】【较】【长】【的】【时】【间】【才】【能】【完】【成】【功】【课】【,】【对】【此】【,】【爸】【爸】【常】【常】【抱】【怨】【我】【不】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【,】【而】【我】【却】【早】【已】【习】【惯】【这】【样】【的】【状】【态】【。】【一】【次】【我】【写】【作】【业】【,】【不】【知】【怎】【的】【,】【竟】【伏】【在】【桌】【上】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【叫】【醒】【我】【后】【,】【狠】【狠】【地】【批】【评】【道】【:】【“】【你】【这】【样】【怎】【么】【能】【行】【呢】【!】【我】【就】【不】【信】【你】【明】【天】【还】【有】【精】【神】【听】【讲】【!】【和】【你】【说】【了】【多】【少】【次】【,】【平】【时】【挤】【出】【时】【间】【,】【抓】【紧】【些】【,】【学】【习】【像】【学】【习】【,】【睡】【觉】【像】【睡】【觉】【,】【你】【就】【是】【不】【听】【!】【”】【说】【到】【气】【愤】【处】【,】【他】【竟】【给】【了】【我】【一】【巴】【掌】【,】【我】【当】【时】【哭】【了】【,】【爸】【爸】【也】【怔】【住】【了】【,】【身】【体】【似】【乎】【颤】【抖】【了】【一】【下】【,】【他】【想】【伸】【过】【手】【来】【抚】【摸】【一】【下】【我】【那】【火】【辣】【辣】【的】【脸】【蛋】【,】【我】【打】【开】【他】【的】【手】【,】【恨】【恨】【地】【看】【着】【他】【,】【半】【天】【,】【爸】【爸】【默】【默】【离】【开】【了】【我】【的】【房】【间】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【早】【上】【,】【我】【路】【过】【父】【母】【卧】【室】【的】【时】【候】【,】【无】【意】【间】【听】【到】【父】【母】【的】【谈】【话】【,】【“】【你】【去】【看】【一】【下】【那】【孩】【子】【的】【脸】【怎】【样】【了】【?】【如】【果】【还】【痛】【的】【话】【,】【帮】【她】【揉】【揉】【。】【”】【 】【妈】【妈】【坚】【决】【不】【肯】【,】【说】【:】【“】【要】【去】【,】【你】【去】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【无】【语】【,】【默】【默】【走】【出】【房】【间】【,】【我】【忙】【闪】【到】【一】【旁】【,】【发】【现】【他】【第】【一】【次】【下】【了】【厨】【房】【,】【而】【且】【是】【为】【我】【准】【备】【早】【餐】【。】【刹】【那】【间】【,】【我】【十】【分】【感】【动】【,】【可】【脸】【上】【那】【疼】【痛】【感】【像】【只】【强】【有】【力】【的】【大】【手】【把】【我】【从】【感】【动】【中】【拉】【了】【回】【来】【,】【早】【饭】【我】【也】【没】【吃】【,】【匆】【匆】【整】【理】【好】【书】【包】【后】【,】【就】【径】【直】【出】【门】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【过】【了】【几】【天】【,】【爸】【爸】【出】【去】【做】【运】【动】【,】【却】【忘】【带】【会】【员】【卡】【了】【,】【打】【电】【话】【叫】【妈】【妈】【送】【过】【去】【,】【可】【妈】【妈】【正】【在】【招】【待】【客】【人】【,】【就】【叫】【我】【去】【送】【。】【我】【哪】【里】【肯】【,】【妈】【妈】【知】【道】【我】【还】【在】【为】【那】【一】【记】【耳】【光】【“】【记】【仇】【”】【,】【便】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【你】【是】【不】【是】【还】【在】【为】【那】【天】【的】【事】【情】【耿】【耿】【于】【怀】【啊】【?】【”】【我】【不】【说】【话】【,】【“】【你】【父】【亲】【是】【因】【为】【恨】【铁】【不】【成】【钢】【,】【一】【时】【心】【急】【才】【打】【了】【你】【一】【巴】【掌】【,】【事】【后】【他】【也】【很】【后】【悔】【。】【你】【知】【道】【吗】【,】【每】【当】【深】【夜】【的】【时】【候】【,】【他】【总】【要】【起】【床】【透】【过】【门】【缝】【,】【看】【看】【你】【是】【否】【睡】【着】【了】【,】【如】【果】【是】【的】【话】【,】【他】【才】【能】【安】【心】【地】【睡】【,】【如】【果】【你】【还】【没】【睡】【,】【他】【就】【会】【坐】【在】【客】【厅】【里】【,】【留】【意】【你】【房】【间】【里】【面】【的】【动】【静】【,】【生】【怕】【你】【饿】【了】【、】【渴】【了】【。】【其】【实】【,】【爸】【爸】【是】【爱】【你】【的】【,】【只】【是】【不】【善】【于】【表】【达】【而】【已】【。】【那】【次】【只】【是】【他】【一】【时】【气】【急】【,】【你】【不】【要】【再】【生】【他】【的】【气】【了】【。】【来】【,】【听】【话】【!】【给】【你】【爸】【爸】【送】【过】【去】【!】【”】【我】【听】【妈】【妈】【说】【完】【,】【眼】【圈】【不】【觉】【有】【点】【红】【,】【拿】【起】【那】【张】【会】【员】【卡】【,】【飞】【一】【般】【地】【跑】【了】【出】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【到】【我】【后】【,】【爸】【爸】【轻】【轻】【地】【摸】【了】【一】【下】【我】【的】【脸】【,】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【对】【不】【起】【,】【那】【天】【我】【不】【是】【有】【意】【的】【。】【我】【只】【是】【想】【让】【你】【每】【天】【能】【过】【得】【宽】【松】【一】【点】【、】【开】【心】【一】【点】【,】【有】【时】【间】【做】【做】【自】【己】【喜】【欢】【的】【事】【或】【者】【锻】【炼】【锻】【炼】【身】【体】【。】【别】【怪】【爸】【爸】【。】【”】【看】【着】【爸】【爸】【微】【笑】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【我】【哭】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【之】【后】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【的】【督】【促】【下】【,】【我】【每】【天】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【,】【尽】【量】【在】【学】【校】【完】【成】【功】【课】【,】【然】【后】【合】【理】【安】【排】【好】【自】【己】【的】【课】【余】【生】【活】【,】【做】【自】【己】【喜】【欢】【的】【事】【。】【在】【爸】【爸】【的】【带】【动】【下】【,】【我】【还】【开】【始】【了】【晨】【练】【。】【现】【在】【,】【只】【要】【你】【清】【晨】【经】【过】【我】【家】【楼】【下】【小】【花】【园】【,】【就】【会】【看】【到】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【正】【在】【那】【里】【锻】【炼】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【个】【响】【亮】【的】【耳】【光】【我】【会】【永】【远】【把】【它】【铭】【记】【在】【心】【,】【不】【是】【记】【仇】【,】【而】【是】【感】【恩】【。】【这】【里】【包】【含】【了】【父】【母】【对】【子】【女】【多】【少】【的】【爱】【啊】【!】【用】【心】【去】【体】【会】【,】【用】【心】【去】【交】【流】【,】【没】【有】【跨】【不】【过】【去】【的】【鸿】【沟】【,】【没】【有】【沟】【通】【不】【了】【的】【亲】【情】【。】【我】【愿】【那】【父】【爱】【如】【茉】【莉】【般】【的】【清】【香】【一】【直】【伴】【随】【着】【我】【,】【包】【裹】【着】【我】【的】【每】【一】【天】【,】【生】【活】【也】【因】【此】【变】【得】【更】【加】【甜】【蜜】【、】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【标】【题】【给】【人】【清】【脆】【有】【力】【之】【感】【,】【从】【听】【觉】【上】【给】【人】【以】【震】【撼】【。】【那】【是】【怎】【样】【的】【一】【个】【耳】【光】【啊】【!】【在】【小】【作】【者】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【中】【,】【读】【者】【感】【受】【到】【的】【却】【是】【其】【中】【包】【裹】【的】【浓】【浓】【的】【父】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【在】【文】【中】【所】【经】【历】【的】【一】【系】【列】【情】【感】【历】【程】【,】【真】【实】【地】【记】【录】【下】【了】【生】【活】【中】【孩】【子】【与】【父】【母】【沟】【通】【的】【心】【灵】【故】【事】【,】【正】【是】【这】【平】【凡】【、】【真】【实】【的】【爱】【让】【人】【动】【容】【。】【正】【如】【作】【者】【所】【说】【—】【—】【“】【那】【个】【响】【亮】【的】【耳】【光】【我】【会】【永】【远】【把】【它】【铭】【记】【在】【心】【,】【不】【是】【记】【仇】【,】【而】【是】【感】【恩】【。】【这】【里】【包】【含】【了】【父】【母】【对】【子】【女】【多】【少】【的】【爱】【啊】【!】【用】【心】【去】【体】【会】【,】【用】【心】【去】【交】【流】【,】【没】【有】【跨】【不】【过】【去】【的】【鸿】【沟】【,】【没】【有】【沟】【通】【不】【了】【的】【亲】【情】【。】【我】【愿】【那】【父】【爱】【如】【茉】【莉】【般】【的】【清】【香】【一】【直】【伴】【随】【着】【我】【,】【包】【裹】【着】【我】【的】【每】【一】【天】【,】【生】【活】【也】【因】【此】【变】【得】【更】【加】【甜】【蜜】【、】【幸】【福】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【月】【琴】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【写】【我】【读】【:】【我】【觉】【得】【本】【文】【最】【大】【的】【优】【点】【在】【于】【作】【者】【语】【言】【的】【平】【实】【,】【就】【像】【在】【叙】【述】【一】【件】【事】【,】【但】【父】【子】【之】【情】【却】【跃】【然】【纸】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【些】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【用】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【,】【以】【为】【那】【是】【有】【文】【采】【的】【表】【现】【,】【但】【这】【并】【不】【绝】【对】【。】【无】【论】【是】【抒】【情】【还】【是】【叙】【述】【,】【都】【应】【是】【有】【根】【基】【的】【,】【用】【词】【也】【要】【用】【得】【准】【确】【、】【适】【度】【,】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【,】【否】【则】【就】【成】【了】【堆】【砌】【,】【不】【但】【不】【美】【,】【反】【而】【令】【人】【生】【厌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】甜品制作【<】【p】【>】【然】【而】【,】【我】【对】【写】【作】【的】【热】【爱】【并】【没】【有】【因】【为】【这】【次】【失】【败】【而】【消】【退】【,】【湮】【灭】【。】【从】【此】【,】【怀】【揣】【着】【一】【颗】【不】【甘】【的】【心】【,】【带】【着】【那】【坚】【强】【的】【信】【念】【,】【我】【一】【次】【次】【的】【面】【对】【大】【邮】【筒】【,】【一】【次】【次】【的】【寄】【出】【自】【己】【的】【梦】【。】【等】【待】【了】【无】【数】【个】【日】【日】【夜】【夜】【,】【日】【复】【一】【日】【,】【从】【小】【学】【到】【初】【中】【,】【两】【年】【时】【间】【,】【我】【已】【不】【用】【再】【是】【那】【个】【年】【少】【的】【我】【。】【我】【在】【随】【时】【间】【的】【变】【化】【而】【变】【化】【,】【可】【寄】【出】【的】【信】【却】【依】【旧】【了】【无】【音】【讯】【,】【仿】【佛】【石】【沉】【大】【海】【。】【痛】【苦】【与】【失】【望】【交】【织】【在】【我】【心】【中】【,】【压】【得】【我】【喘】【不】【过】【气】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【我】【迷】【失】【了】【方】【向】【,】【置】【身】【迷】【雾】【之】【中】【,】【不】【见】【前】【路】【,】【眼】【中】【一】【片】【空】【洞】【,】【对】【写】【作】【的】【热】【爱】【似】【乎】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【也】【在】【悄】【无】【声】【息】【地】【消】【退】【。】【我】【不】【禁】【长】【叹】【:】【何】【时】【烟】【雾】【才】【会】【消】【散】【,】【属】【于】【我】【的】【道】【路】【,】【你】【在】【哪】【儿】【?】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【弟】【子】【规】【,】【圣】【人】【训】【,】【首】【孝】【悌】【,】【次】【谨】【信】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【、】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【三】【人】【行】【,】【必】【有】【我】【师】【焉】【。】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【、】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【关】【关】【雎】【鸠】【,】【在】【河】【之】【洲】【,】【窈】【窕】【淑】【女】【,】【君】【子】【好】【逑】【。】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【富】【贵】【不】【能】【淫】【,】【贫】【贱】【不】【能】【移】【,】【威】【武】【不】【能】【屈】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【一】【字】【一】【句】【,】【不】【明】【觉】【厉】【的】【我】【,】【摇】【头】【晃】【脑】【学】【着】【大】【人】【的】【模】【样】【,】【用】【稚】【嫩】【的】【童】【声】【朗】【读】【出】【来】【,】【赢】【得】【大】【人】【们】【爽】【朗】【的】【笑】【声】【和】【阵】【阵】【鼓】【励】【的】【掌】【声】【,】【也】【许】【就】【在】【这】【些】【时】【刻】【,】【我】【和】【经】【典】【这】【份】【缘】【,】【越】【结】【越】【深】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】甜品制作【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【叙】【文】【靠】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【的】【形】【象】【感】【人】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【无】【论】【是】【记】【人】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【写】【景】【状】【物】【,】【都】【应】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【有】【血】【有】【肉】【,】【切】【忌】【空】【泛】【造】【假】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【谈】【写】【人】【。】【写】【人】【除】【了】【必】【须】【具】【体】【描】【写】【人】【物】【的】【外】【貌】【、】【表】【情】【、】【动】【作】【、】【语】【言】【外】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【这】【是】【突】【出】【人】【物】【性】【格】【,】【把】【人】【物】【写】【得】【精】【彩】【的】【重】【要】【手】【段】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【恰】【恰】【忽】【略】【了】【这】【一】【点】【。】【他】【们】【写】【人】【,】【往】【往】【采】【用】【“】【贴】【标】【签】【”】【的】【方】【法】【,】【首】【先】【给】【他】【“】【定】【了】【性】【”】【,】【堆】【砌】【几】【个】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【,】【如】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【有】【一】【个】【好】【妈】【妈】【,】【慈】【祥】【的】【脸】【上】【永】【远】【带】【着】【和】【蔼】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【因】【为】【旧】【社】【会】【她】【没】【有】【念】【过】【多】【少】【书】【,】【所】【以】【总】【是】【一】【个】【劲】【地】【督】【促】【我】【们】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【并】【在】【生】【活】【上】【、】【学】【习】【上】【对】【我】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【,】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【处】【处】【体】【现】【了】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【后】【面】【还】【有】【具】【体】【的】【描】【写】【,】【这】【段】【话】【作】【为】【开】【头】【,】【当】【然】【可】【以】【,】【但】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【,】【这】【竟】【是】【文】【章】【的】【主】【体】【部】【分】【。】【仅】【用】【“】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【”】【“】【无】【微】【不】【至】【”】【“】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【”】【这】【些】【空】【洞】【的】【词】【语】【,】【能】【说】【明】【母】【亲】【就】【是】【一】【个】【“】【好】【妈】【妈】【”】【吗】【?】【这】【很】【难】【使】【人】【信】【服】【,】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【写】【得】【具】【体】【多】【了】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【不】【知】【什】【么】【声】【音】【把】【我】【从】【梦】【中】【惊】【醒】【,】【我】【睁】【开】【眼】【睛】【一】【看】【,】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【灯】【已】【经】【亮】【了】【,】【不】【时】【传】【来】【锅】【碗】【的】【轻】【响】【。】【我】【伸】【手】【拿】【过】【桌】【上】【的】【闹】【钟】【,】【借】【着】【从】【厨】【房】【里】【映】【过】【来】【的】【亮】【光】【看】【了】【看】【,】【还】【不】【到】【五】【点】【。】【今】【天】【是】【星】【期】【日】【,】【妈】【妈】【还】【和】【往】【常】【一】【样】【,】【起】【得】【这】【样】【早】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【翻】【过】【身】【,】【细】【听】【着】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【声】【响】【。】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【轻】【轻】【地】【舀】【水】【;】【“】【哧】【—】【—】【噗】【!】【”】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【开】【煤】【气】【炉】【;】【“】【咔】【啦】【咔】【啦】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【拿】【碗】【筷】【。】【在】【静】【静】【的】【清】【晨】【,】【这】【声】【音】【是】【那】【样】【的】【清】【晰】【,】【又】【是】【那】【样】【的】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【用】【醒】【来】【的】【所】【见】【、】【所】【闻】【,】【具】【体】【地】【写】【出】【了】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【起】【早】【做】【饭】【的】【情】【景】【。】【这】【真】【实】【、】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【、】【形】【象】【的】【记】【叙】【比】【起】【对】【妈】【妈】【“】【任】【劳】【任】【怨】【、】【辛】【勤】【劳】【作】【”】【的】【赞】【叹】【,】【不】【知】【要】【强】【多】【少】【倍】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【都】【知】【道】【《】【水】【浒】【传】【》】【中】【的】【打】【虎】【英】【雄】【是】【武】【松】【,】【而】【不】【是】【李】【逵】【。】【为】【什】【么】【武】【松】【打】【死】【一】【只】【虎】【会】【深】【深】【地】【震】【动】【我】【们】【的】【心】【弦】【,】【而】【李】【逵】【杀】【了】【四】【只】【虎】【,】【留】【给】【读】【者】【的】【印】【象】【却】【远】【不】【如】【武】【松】【呢】【?】【这】【里】【面】【的】【诀】【窍】【就】【在】【一】【个】【描】【绘】【的】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【精】【彩】【异】【常】【,】【另】【一】【个】【则】【“】【缺】【少】【细】【节】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【不】【仅】【能】【充】【实】【内】【容】【,】【使】【之】【具】【有】【浓】【厚】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【具】【有】【震】【撼】【人】【心】【的】【艺】【术】【力】【量】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【,】【具】【有】【典】【型】【意】【义】【的】【细】【节】【,】【能】【表】【现】【出】【人】【物】【鲜】【明】【的】【个】【性】【。】【吴】【敬】【梓】【的】【《】【儒】【林】【外】【史】【》】【中】【,】【有】【一】【段】【对】【严】【监】【生】【死】【前】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【这】【一】【细】【节】【的】【描】【写】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【此】【,】【严】【监】【生】【的】【病】【,】【一】【日】【重】【似】【一】【日】【,】【再】【不】【回】【头】【,】【诸】【来】【六】【眷】【都】【来】【问】【候】【…】【…】【晚】【间】【挤】【了】【一】【屋】【的】【人】【,】【桌】【上】【点】【着】【一】【盏】【灯】【。】【严】【监】【生】【喉】【咙】【里】【痰】【响】【得】【一】【进】【一】【出】【,】【一】【声】【不】【倒】【一】【声】【的】【,】【总】【不】【得】【断】【气】【,】【还】【把】【手】【从】【被】【单】【里】【拿】【出】【来】【,】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【。】【大】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【你】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【个】【亲】【人】【不】【曾】【见】【面】【?】【”】【他】【就】【把】【头】【摇】【了】【两】【三】【摇】【。】【二】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【笔】【银】【子】【在】【那】【里】【,】【不】【曾】【吩】【咐】【明】【白】【?】【”】【他】【把】【两】【眼】【睁】【得】【溜】【圆】【,】【把】【头】【又】【狠】【狠】【摇】【了】【几】【摇】【,】【越】【发】【指】【得】【紧】【了】【。】【奶】【妈】【抱】【着】【哥】【子】【插】【口】【道】【:】【“】【老】【爷】【想】【是】【因】【为】【两】【位】【舅】【爷】【不】【在】【跟】【前】【,】【故】【此】【惦】【念】【。】【”】【他】【听】【了】【这】【话】【,】【把】【眼】【闭】【着】【摇】【头】【,】【那】【手】【只】【是】【指】【着】【不】【动】【。】【赵】【氏】【慌】【忙】【揩】【揩】【眼】【泪】【,】【走】【近】【上】【前】【道】【:】【“】【爷】【,】【别】【人】【都】【说】【不】【相】【干】【,】【只】【有】【我】【晓】【得】【你】【的】【意】【思】【!】【”】【…】【…】【“】【你】【是】【为】【那】【灯】【盏】【里】【点】【的】【是】【两】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【不】【放】【心】【,】【恐】【费】【了】【油】【。】【我】【如】【今】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【就】【是】【了】【。】【”】【说】【罢】【,】【忙】【走】【出】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【。】【众】【人】【看】【严】【监】【生】【时】【,】【点】【一】【点】【头】【,】【把】【手】【垂】【下】【,】【登】【时】【就】【没】【了】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【严】【监】【生】【是】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【,】【因】【为】【多】【点】【一】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【死】【不】【瞑】【目】【。】【作】【者】【通】【过】【这】【一】【典】【型】【细】【节】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【把】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【特】【有】【的】【精】【神】【面】【貌】【和】【鲜】【明】【个】【性】【深】【刻】【地】【表】【现】【出】【来】【了】【。】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【表】【现】【了】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【的】【丑】【恶】【灵】【魂】【,】【真】【是】【写】【得】【入】【木】【三】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【这】【里】【也】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【选】【择】【细】【节】【要】【根】【据】【表】【现】【人】【物】【性】【格】【的】【需】【要】【和】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【需】【要】【,】【否】【则】【再】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【也】【毫】【无】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【说】【记】【事】【。】【要】【把】【一】【件】【事】【写】【得】【具】【体】【,】【就】【得】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【详】【写】【,】【要】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【,】【要】【精】【雕】【细】【刻】【,】【不】【能】【只】【用】【那】【些】【概】【括】【抽】【象】【的】【语】【言】【。】【如】【,】【同】【样】【是】【写】【《】【联】【欢】【会】【》】【,】【一】【个】【同】【学】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【开】【得】【太】【热】【烈】【,】【太】【丰】【富】【,】【太】【激】【动】【人】【心】【了】【!】【悦】【耳】【的】【歌】【声】【,】【翩】【翩】【的】【舞】【姿】【,】【还】【有】【增】【长】【才】【智】【的】【文】【学】【知】【识】【抢】【答】【,】【从】【下】【午】【2】【点】【一】【直】【进】【行】【到】【8】【点】【,】【大】【家】【才】【恋】【恋】【不】【舍】【地】【离】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【,】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【掩】【盖】【不】【了】【内】【容】【的】【空】【洞】【,】【铿】【锵】【的】【语】【句】【难】【以】【粉】【饰】【内】【在】【的】【贫】【乏】【。】【须】【知】【,】【“】【热】【烈】【”】【“】【丰】【富】【”】【“】【激】【动】【人】【心】【”】【,】【只】【有】【通】【过】【事】【件】【表】【现】【出】【来】【,】【才】【是】【成】【功】【的】【记】【事】【。】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【得】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【水】【,】【水】【落】【石】【出】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【出】【,】【出】【其】【不】【意】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【意】【,】【意】【气】【风】【发】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【发】【,】【发】【扬】【光】【大】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【大】【,】【大】【义】【凛】【然】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【然】【,】【然】【—】【—】【然】【—】【—】【”】【这】【下】【可】【把】【周】【皓】【月】【难】【住】【了】【,】【只】【见】【她】【双】【眉】【紧】【锁】【,】【在】【极】【力】【思】【考】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【请】【周】【皓】【月】【表】【演】【节】【目】【!】【”】【班】【主】【任】【曹】【老】【师】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【掌】【声】【雷】【动】【,】【周】【皓】【月】【落】【落】【大】【方】【地】【走】【上】【台】【,】【放】【开】【歌】【喉】【唱】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【又】【进】【行】【下】【一】【个】【节】【目】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【现】【在】【,】【我】【把】【某】【个】【同】【学】【的】【面】【貌】【描】【绘】【一】【下】【,】【请】【同】【学】【们】【说】【出】【这】【人】【是】【谁】【。】【”】【班】【主】【任】【说】【道】【:】【“】【白】【皙】【的】【皮】【肤】【,】【眼】【睛】【虽】【不】【大】【,】【可】【炯】【炯】【有】【神】【,】【剪】【着】【一】【个】【游】【泳】【头】【,】【一】【副】【运】【动】【员】【的】【样】【子】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【你】【瞧】【瞧】【我】【,】【我】【望】【望】【你】【,】【突】【然】【,】【不】【知】【哪】【位】【同】【学】【说】【:】【“】【是】【沈】【玉】【兰】【!】【”】【顿】【时】【,】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【一】【下】【子】【集】【中】【到】【沈】【玉】【兰】【身】【上】【,】【继】【而】【人】【们】【又】【摇】【头】【否】【认】【,】【不】【对】【!】【沈】【玉】【兰】【梳】【着】【两】【条】【小】【辫】【子】【。】【那】【是】【谁】【呢】【?】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【像】【是】【几】【十】【盏】【探】【照】【灯】【,】【四】【处】【扫】【视】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【的】【眼】【光】【一】【遇】【到】【身】【旁】【的】【程】【铭】【时】【,】【我】【就】【像】【得】【到】【宝】【贝】【似】【的】【心】【头】【一】【热】【,】【脱】【口】【而】【出】【:】【“】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【在】【座】【的】【人】【异】【口】【同】【声】【欢】【呼】【:】【“】【对】【!】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【笑】【声】【、】【掌】【声】【久】【久】【不】【息】【,】【程】【铭】【难】【为】【情】【地】【涨】【红】【了】【脸】【,】【而】【我】【因】【为】【是】【第】【一】【个】【说】【对】【的】【,】【所】【以】【得】【到】【了】【两】【颗】【糖】【的】【奖】【励】【。】【这】【真】【是】【在】【甜】【甜】【蜜】【蜜】【、】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【中】【长】【知】【识】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【抓】【住】【了】【一】【些】【关】【键】【性】【的】【细】【节】【,】【重】【点】【突】【出】【,】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【写】【得】【有】【声】【有】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【说】【说】【写】【景】【状】【物】【。】【要】【写】【出】【景】【和】【物】【的】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【主】【要】【靠】【描】【写】【手】【段】【的】【运】【用】【。】【比】【如】【说】【,】【这】【个】【地】【方】【很】【美】【,】【究】【竟】【美】【在】【哪】【里】【?】【是】【亭】【台】【楼】【阁】【美】【,】【还】【是】【花】【草】【树】【木】【美】【?】【是】【绿】【水】【青】【山】【美】【,】【还】【是】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【美】【?】【景】【物】【中】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【是】【哪】【些】【?】【它】【们】【有】【什】【么】【特】【征】【?】【如】【果】【能】【把】【重】【点】【景】【物】【的】【特】【征】【、】【状】【态】【描】【写】【出】【来】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【具】【体】【生】【动】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【个】【同】【学】【写】【《】【狮】【子】【林】【》】【,】【初】【稿】【是】【这】【样】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【,】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【些】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【,】【一】【个】【个】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【,】【在】【老】【师】【的】【指】【导】【下】【,】【他】【对】【初】【稿】【进】【行】【了】【修】【改】【,】【增】【加】【了】【具】【体】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【基】【本】【上】【描】【绘】【出】【狮】【子】【林】【的】【特】【色】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【全】【文】【如】【下】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【。】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【。】【有】【的】【龇】【牙】【咧】【嘴】【,】【昂】【首】【长】【啸】【;】【有】【的】【瞪】【着】【两】【眼】【,】【威】【风】【凛】【凛】【;】【有】【的】【闭】【目】【养】【神】【,】【无】【精】【打】【采】【…】【…】【真】【是】【千】【姿】【百】【态】【,】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【它】【们】【组】【成】【一】【个】【个】【高】【耸】【的】【假】【山】【。】【从】【山】【脚】【到】【山】【顶】【沿】【路】【怪】【石】【嶙】【峋】【,】【迂】【回】【曲】【折】【。】【有】【时】【看】【得】【见】【山】【顶】【上】【的】【游】【客】【的】【眉】【目】【,】【也】【听】【得】【见】【他】【们】【的】【谈】【笑】【,】【可】【就】【是】【没】【法】【登】【山】【。】【等】【到】【你】【好】【不】【容】【易】【登】【上】【山】【巅】【,】【才】【会】【发】【现】【,】【竟】【有】【好】【几】【条】【石】【路】【可】【达】【山】【顶】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【描】【写】【是】【指】【抓】【住】【生】【活】【中】【细】【微】【而】【又】【具】【体】【的】【典】【型】【情】【节】【,】【加】【以】【生】【动】【细】【致】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【它】【具】【体】【渗】【透】【在】【对】【人】【物】【、】【景】【物】【或】【场】【面】【描】【写】【之】【中】【。】【正】【确】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【对】【表】【现】【人】【物】【、】【记】【叙】【事】【件】【、】【再】【现】【环】【境】【有】【着】【极】【其】【重】【要】【的】【作】【用】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【运】【用】【得】【好】【,】【做】【到】【写】【人】【则】【如】【见】【其】【人】【,】【写】【景】【则】【如】【临】【其】【境】【,】【文】【章】【就】【能】【形】【象】【鲜】【明】【,】【更】【具】【感】【染】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【喝】【牛】【奶】【,】【快】【去】【吃】【早】【餐】【,】【然】【后】【刷】【牙】【洗】【脸】【!】【”】【唉】【,】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【又】【开】【始】【唠】【叨】【了】【,】【这】【样】【的】【唠】【叨】【已】【经】【1】【2】【年】【了】【,】【听】【得】【我】【都】【快】【要】【有】【离】【家】【出】【走】【的】【冲】【动】【了】【。】【不】【过】【,】【在】【唠】【叨】【中】【,】【我】【也】【渐】【渐】【感】【到】【了】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【星】【期】【六】【的】【早】【上】【,】【小】【鸟】【在】【窗】【前】【的】【树】【枝】【上】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【欢】【唱】【着】【,】【商】【量】【着】【哪】【儿】【的】【虫】【子】【肥】【美】【。】【而】【此】【时】【我】【正】【梦】【见】【美】【味】【的】【“】【开】【封】【菜】【”】【K】【F】【C】【,】【巨】【大】【的】【汉】【堡】【包】【和】【香】【嫩】【的】【鸡】【腿】【…】【…】【突】【然】【,】【一】【声】【惊】【雷】【,】【妈】【妈】【大】【吼】【一】【声】【:】【“】【快】【起】【床】【叠】【被】【子】【,】【都】【8】【点】【了】【,】【怎】【么】【还】【赖】【在】【床】【上】【?】【”】【结】【果】【,】【小】【鸟】【被】【吓】【飞】【了】【,】【周】【公】【为】【我】【做】【的】【美】【味】【汉】【堡】【包】【被】【“】【收】【”】【回】【去】【了】【。】【我】【皱】【着】【眉】【,】【非】【常】【不】【情】【愿】【地】【穿】【好】【衣】【服】【,】【极】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【叠】【着】【被】【子】【,】【然】【后】【慢】【吞】【吞】【地】【坐】【到】【餐】【桌】【旁】【。】【妈】【妈】【在】【厨】【房】【又】【喊】【了】【:】【“】【吃】【早】【餐】【、】【喝】【牛】【奶】【,】【然】【后】【刷】【牙】【洗】【脸】【准】【备】【上】【学】【!】【”】【“】【今】【天】【不】【用】【上】【学】【!】【”】【我】【抗】【议】【。】【妈】【妈】【总】【把】【我】【当】【什】【么】【都】【需】【要】【提】【醒】【的】【幼】【儿】【园】【的】【小】【娃】【娃】【,】【这】【些】【事】【情】【已】【经】【重】【复】【了】【那】【么】【多】【年】【,】【我】【知】【道】【什】【么】【时】【候】【做】【什】【么】【,】【何】【况】【我】【自】【己】【戴】【着】【表】【,】【自】【己】【可】【以】【管】【理】【时】【间】【呀】【!】【可】【是】【妈】【妈】【总】【要】【一】【而】【再】【,】【再】【而】【三】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【…】【…】【“】【早】【餐】【怎】【么】【吃】【得】【这】【么】【慢】【?】【可】【以】【边】【吃】【饭】【边】【听】【英】【语】【,】【一】【心】【二】【用】【这】【个】【可】【以】【有】【!】【…】【…】【洗】【完】【牛】【奶】【杯】【,】【赶】【紧】【做】【作】【业】【!】【”】【不】【等】【妈】【妈】【唠】【叨】【完】【,】【我】【郁】【闷】【地】【抓】【起】【书】【包】【冲】【进】【卧】【室】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【午】【吃】【过】【午】【饭】【,】【我】【正】【津】【津】【有】【味】【地】【看】【着】【K】【A】【K】【U】【动】【画】【电】【视】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【对】【我】【喊】【起】【来】【:】【“】【还】【看】【?】【还】【看】【?】【都】【快】【成】【小】【四】【眼】【了】【!】【离】【电】【视】【那】【么】【近】【!】【”】【我】【往】【后】【挪】【了】【挪】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【补】【充】【道】【:】【“】【下】【次】【再】【让】【我】【看】【见】【你】【离】【电】【视】【机】【那】【么】【近】【,】【下】【周】【玩】【电】【脑】【的】【时】【间】【—】【—】【取】【—】【—】【消】【—】【—】【”】【到】【了】【晚】【上】【吃】【饭】【,】【我】【狼】【吞】【虎】【咽】【地】【吃】【着】【美】【味】【的】【红】【烧】【鱼】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【絮】【絮】【叨】【叨】【起】【来】【:】【“】【小】【心】【鱼】【刺】【卡】【着】【,】【吃】【饭】【要】【细】【嚼】【慢】【咽】【,】【有】【利】【消】【化】【!】【”】【我】【只】【好】【放】【慢】【吃】【饭】【的】【速】【度】【,】【细】【细】【地】【剔】【着】【鱼】【刺】【,】【细】【嚼】【着】【米】【饭】【。】【晚】【上】【快】【睡】【觉】【的】【时】【候】【,】【母】【亲】【的】【例】【行】【功】【课】【又】【开】【始】【了】【:】【“】【降】【温】【了】【,】【晚】【上】【记】【得】【盖】【好】【被】【子】【,】【别】【着】【凉】【了】【…】【…】【”】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【我】【都】【快】【背】【下】【来】【了】【,】【我】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【赶】【紧】【用】【被】【子】【盖】【住】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【了】【初】【中】【,】【我】【住】【校】【了】【,】【终】【于】【不】【用】【再】【听】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【的】【“】【唐】【僧】【念】【经】【”】【了】【。】【可】【是】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【忘】【了】【每】【天】【早】【上】【和】【晚】【上】【要】【喝】【牛】【奶】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【不】【会】【坚】【持】【刷】【牙】【,】【就】【会】【像】【隔】【壁】【的】【晓】【东】【长】【了】【满】【口】【虫】【牙】【,】【疼】【得】【龇】【牙】【咧】【嘴】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【又】【忘】【了】【降】【温】【后】【添】【加】【衣】【服】【,】【会】【在】【教】【室】【里】【瑟】【瑟】【发】【抖】【…】【…】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【就】【会】【失】【去】【一】【种】【平】【实】【、】【温】【暖】【的】【幸】【福】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【周】【末】【回】【家】【时】【,】【我】【发】【现】【母】【亲】【很】【少】【唠】【叨】【了】【,】【便】【玩】【笑】【似】【的】【对】【她】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【最】【近】【怎】【么】【听】【不】【到】【你】【的】【唠】【叨】【声】【了】【?】【我】【还】【有】【点】【不】【习】【惯】【了】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【我】【以】【后】【再】【也】【不】【会】【像】【个】【老】【太】【太】【一】【样】【唠】【叨】【你】【了】【,】【你】【长】【大】【了】【,】【不】【论】【是】【学】【习】【还】【是】【生】【活】【上】【已】【经】【养】【成】【了】【好】【习】【惯】【,】【现】【在】【不】【用】【我】【唠】【叨】【,】【你】【也】【一】【样】【能】【做】【得】【很】【好】【,】【你】【老】【妈】【我】【也】【要】【歇】【歇】【喽】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【怎】【么】【,】【住】【校】【的】【日】【子】【听】【不】【到】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【心】【里】【有】【时】【会】【感】【到】【空】【虚】【,】【总】【觉】【得】【生】【活】【少】【了】【点】【什】【么】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【才】【发】【现】【:】【原】【来】【,】【在】【母】【亲】【的】【唠】【叨】【声】【中】【,】【我】【一】【直】【幸】【福】【着】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【冯】【梅】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【极】【力】【地】【铺】【排】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【以】【造】【成】【一】【种】【气】【势】【,】【把】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【写】【到】【了】【极】【致】【。】【然】【而】【作】【者】【又】【没】【有】【停】【留】【在】【只】【写】【唠】【叨】【上】【,】【而】【是】【以】【“】【唠】【叨】【”】【形】【成】【了】【一】【种】【“】【爱】【”】【,】【最】【后】【表】【明】【没】【有】【这】【种】【唠】【叨】【(】【爱】【)】【觉】【得】【空】【虚】【,】【体】【验】【唠】【叨】【就】【是】【体】【验】【幸】【福】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【叙】【述】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【时】【,】【作】【者】【很】【少】【表】【明】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【表】【现】【自】【己】【的】【情】【感】【,】【但】【是】【在】【文】【字】【背】【后】【,】【我】【们】【都】【能】【体】【会】【到】【唠】【叨】【实】【际】【上】【是】【一】【种】【爱】【,】【是】【一】【种】【深】【深】【的】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【在】【我】【们】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【经】【常】【会】【出】【现】【作】【者】【站】【出】【来】【表】【达】【观】【点】【的】【情】【况】【,】【其】【实】【,】【读】【者】【会】【在】【阅】【读】【中】【体】【会】【作】【者】【的】【爱】【、】【憎】【等】【情】【感】【和】【观】【点】【,】【如】【果】【作】【者】【自】【己】【站】【出】【来】【说】【,】【那】【么】【读】【后】【就】【没】【有】【回】【味】【的】【余】【地】【了】【。】【本】【文】【作】【者】【则】【与】【众】【不】【同】【,】【这】【正】【是】【此】【文】【成】【功】【之】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【言】【成】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】甜品制作【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【学】【阶】【段】【,】【我】【一】【直】【是】【个】【优】【秀】【的】【学】【生】【。】【上】【了】【初】【中】【以】【后】【,】【因】【为】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【喜】【欢】【上】【网】【,】【他】【总】【是】【在】【我】【面】【前】【吹】【嘘】【网】【络】【如】【何】【如】【何】【的】【神】【奇】【,】【如】【何】【如】【何】【的】【过】【瘾】【…】【…】【三】【番】【五】【次】【,】【我】【终】【于】【经】【不】【住】【他】【的】【引】【诱】【,】【跟】【着】【他】【第】【一】【次】【走】【进】【了】【网】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【家】【里】【很】【富】【裕】【,】【他】【身】【上】【总】【是】【带】【着】【很】【多】【钱】【,】【随】【便】【伸】【手】【到】【口】【袋】【里】【一】【抓】【,】【就】【是】【数】【张】【百】【元】【大】【钞】【。】【开】【始】【上】【网】【的】【钱】【都】【是】【他】【帮】【我】【支】【付】【的】【,】【我】【没】【有】【出】【一】【分】【钱】【。】【他】【不】【但】【帮】【我】【出】【上】【网】【费】【,】【还】【手】【把】【手】【地】【教】【我】【如】【何】【操】【作】【,】【如】【何】【打】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【快】【,】【我】【也】【就】【真】【正】【地】【喜】【欢】【上】【了】【网】【络】【这】【虚】【拟】【的】【世】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【初】【,】【受】【到】【同】【桌】【的】【影】【响】【,】【是】【上】【网】【玩】【游】【戏】【。】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【真】【是】【太】【多】【了】【,】【太】【好】【玩】【了】【。】【什】【么】【《】【魔】【兽】【世】【界】【》】【《】【穿】【越】【火】【线】【》】【《】【地】【下】【城】【与】【勇】【士】【》】【呀】【,】【什】【么】【《】【永】【恒】【之】【塔】【》】【《】【降】【龙】【之】【剑】【》】【《】【龙】【之】【谷】【》】【《】【梦】【幻】【西】【游】【》】【《】【千】【军】【破】【》】【《】【夺】【宝】【传】【世】【》】【呀】【…】【…】【太】【多】【了】【,】【真】【是】【玩】【不】【胜】【玩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【只】【是】【玩】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【,】【后】【来】【我】【又】【迷】【上】【了】【网】【络】【聊】【天】【和】【浏】【览】【色】【情】【网】【页】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【始】【是】【同】【桌】【帮】【我】【付】【钱】【,】【几】【周】【后】【他】【就】【不】【愿】【意】【付】【了】【,】【得】【我】【自】【己】【掏】【了】【。】【上】【网】【费】【虽】【然】【不】【多】【,】【每】【小】【时】【1】【.】【5】【元】【,】【后】【来】【涨】【到】【了】【2】【元】【。】【但】【由】【于】【我】【玩】【得】【时】【间】【太】【久】【了】【,】【往】【往】【一】【玩】【入】【迷】【,】【就】【是】【整】【整】【一】【上】【午】【或】【一】【下】【午】【4】【个】【小】【时】【。】【再】【后】【来】【是】【整】【整】【一】【个】【白】【昼】【1】【2】【个】【小】【时】【,】【最】【后】【是】【整】【整】【一】【天】【2】【4】【个】【小】【时】【。】【虽】【然】【晚】【上】【从】【1】【2】【点】【钟】【开】【始】【,】【一】【直】【到】【第】【二】【天】【早】【上】【的】【8】【点】【可】【以】【用】【1】【0】【元】【包】【下】【,】【省】【去】【6】【元】【,】【但】【算】【下】【来】【,】【2】【4】【小】【时】【的】【上】【网】【费】【也】【要】【4】【2】【元】【,】【加】【上】【吃】【饭】【、】【喝】【水】【的】【费】【用】【(】【就】【在】【网】【吧】【里】【买】【)】【,】【一】【天】【最】【少】【要】【花】【去】【5】【0】【元】【。】【几】【天】【下】【来】【,】【我】【就】【把】【一】【个】【月】【的】【生】【活】【费】【花】【光】【了】【。】【于】【是】【就】【东】【借】【西】【挪】【,】【只】【要】【能】【弄】【到】【钱】【,】【就】【什】【么】【都】【不】【顾】【不】【管】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【疯】【狂】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【和】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【,】【连】【续】【上】【网】【了】【四】【天】【三】【夜】【,】【除】【了】【上】【厕】【所】【,】【就】【未】【离】【开】【过】【一】【下】【座】【位】【。】【渴】【了】【饿】【了】【就】【叫】【老】【板】【买】【水】【买】【饭】【,】【累】【了】【困】【了】【就】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【打】【个】【盹】【。】【至】【于】【上】【课】【、】【学】【习】【、】【外】【面】【的】【事】【情】【一】【概】【不】【知】【不】【管】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【家】【里】【是】【农】【村】【的】【,】【父】【母】【辛】【辛】【苦】【苦】【劳】【作】【一】【年】【的】【收】【入】【,】【只】【够】【维】【持】【一】【家】【人】【的】【基】【本】【生】【活】【,】【我】【上】【初】【中】【的】【费】【用】【虽】【然】【不】【多】【,】【但】【还】【是】【感】【到】【紧】【张】【。】【虽】【然】【免】【除】【了】【学】【杂】【费】【,】【但】【由】【于】【我】【住】【校】【,】【生】【活】【费】【还】【是】【不】【能】【少】【的】【。】【一】【个】【月】【3】【0】【0】【元】【左】【右】【的】【生】【活】【费】【,】【父】【母】【都】【掏】【得】【非】【常】【紧】【张】【,】【但】【他】【们】【还】【是】【乐】【于】【给】【他】【们】【的】【儿】【子】【我】【,】【还】【总】【是】【说】【,】【不】【够】【的】【话】【再】【回】【家】【拿】【。】【开】【始】【时】【我】【还】【会】【想】【想】【这】【些】【情】【况】【,】【想】【想】【父】【母】【的】【辛】【苦】【,】【但】【自】【从】【我】【迷】【上】【网】【络】【以】【后】【,】【就】【从】【不】【想】【这】【些】【了】【,】【没】【钱】【我】【就】【伸】【手】【向】【父】【母】【要】【。】【由】【于】【要】【得】【太】【多】【太】【频】【繁】【了】【,】【父】【母】【就】【追】【问】【我】【原】【因】【,】【我】【总】【是】【搪】【塞】【他】【们】【说】【学】【校】【里】【买】【这】【买】【那】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【于】【请】【病】【假】【太】【多】【,】【逃】【课】【太】【多】【,】【成】【绩】【自】【然】【是】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【从】【班】【上】【的】【前】【5】【名】【,】【一】【下】【落】【到】【了】【班】【上】【的】【最】【后】【5】【名】【。】【由】【于】【要】【钱】【要】【得】【太】【多】【太】【频】【繁】【,】【父】【母】【追】【问】【到】【了】【学】【校】【,】【老】【师】【和】【父】【母】【一】【碰】【头】【,】【我】【的】【“】【末】【日】【”】【也】【就】【到】【了】【。】【由】【于】【身】【体】【瘦】【掉】【了】【十】【多】【斤】【,】【加】【上】【父】【母】【的】【一】【顿】【猛】【揍】【,】【我】【昏】【了】【过】【去】【…】【…】【从】【医】【院】【出】【来】【后】【,】【泪】【水】【模】【糊】【了】【父】【母】【的】【双】【眼】【,】【也】【模】【糊】【了】【我】【的】【双】【眼】【…】【…】【学】【校】【勒】【令】【我】【停】【课】【一】【周】【,】【回】【家】【反】【省】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【家】【里】【的】【空】【空】【荡】【荡】【,】【家】【徒】【四】【壁】【,】【看】【到】【父】【母】【的】【寒】【酸】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【猛】【烈】【地】【抽】【打】【我】【自】【己】【。】【漫】【长】【的】【一】【周】【,】【地】【狱】【般】【的】【一】【周】【反】【省】【,】【我】【脱】【胎】【换】【骨】【了】【。】【我】【再】【也】【不】【上】【网】【吧】【了】【,】【有】【百】【害】【而】【无】【益】【处】【,】【痛】【苦】【的】【代】【价】【让】【我】【终】【于】【醒】【悟】【到】【了】【这】【些】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【经】【历】【过】【死】【亡】【的】【人】【,】【更】【懂】【得】【生】【命】【的】【可】【贵】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【我】【对】【这】【话】【理】【解】【得】【更】【深】【了】【。】【一】【个】【人】【不】【能】【沉】【溺】【,】【更】【不】【能】【入】【迷】【,】【特】【别】【是】【对】【人】【生】【无】【益】【的】【事】【情】【,】【沉】【溺】【、】【入】【迷】【了】【是】【很】【危】【险】【、】【很】【可】【怕】【的】【。】【回】【想】【曾】【经】【的】【我】【,】【现】【在】【都】【仍】【然】【心】【有】【余】【悸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【生】【活】【即】【有】【作】【文】【,】【写】【真】【情】【、】【抒】【真】【意】【即】【是】【好】【作】【文】【。】【该】【文】【叙】【写】【自】【己】【的】【一】【次】【误】【入】【歧】【途】【的】【经】【历】【,】【向】【我】【们】【敞】【开】【了】【他】【的】【心】【扉】【,】【历】【数】【了】【他】【自】【身】【的】【不】【是】【,】【并】【没】【有】【去】【怨】【天】【尤】【人】【,】【而】【是】【深】【深】【地】【反】【省】【自】【己】【,】【并】【获】【得】【了】【对】【生】【活】【对】【生】【命】【的】【深】【刻】【认】【识】【和】【感】【悟】【,】【将】【坏】【事】【变】【成】【了】【好】【事】【。】【与】【其】【说】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【不】【如】【说】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【发】【出】【肺】【腑】【之】【言】【的】【忏】【悔】【录】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【苦】【海】【无】【边】【,】【回】【头】【是】【岸】【。】【值】【得】【庆】【幸】【的】【是】【,】【小】【作】【者】【经】【历】【了】【一】【番】【波】【折】【以】【后】【,】【终】【于】【认】【识】【到】【自】【己】【行】【为】【的】【错】【误】【性】【,】【这】【是】【非】【常】【警】【醒】【人】【的】【,】【很】【值】【得】【那】【些】【仍】【然】【沉】【迷】【于】【网】【吧】【的】【同】【学】【参】【考】【、】【借】【鉴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【弗】【不】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【法】【点】【拨】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【“】【从】【善】【如】【登】【,】【从】【恶】【如】【崩】【”】【。】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【如】【果】【被】【网】【瘾】【这】【个】【恶】【魔】【“】【附】【体】【”】【,】【可】【真】【如】【崩】【坍】【之】【山】【,】【决】【堤】【之】【水】【,】【其】【后】【果】【是】【很】【可】【怕】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【崩】【溃】【”】【的】【过】【程】【是】【迅】【猛】【的】【,】【但】【作】【者】【的】【叙】【述】【却】【是】【层】【层】【剥】【笋】【,】【逐】【步】【展】【开】【。】【先】【是】【迷】【恋】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【,】【接】【着】【又】【迷】【上】【了】【网】【络】【聊】【天】【,】【甚】【至】【于】【浏】【览】【色】【情】【网】【页】【,】【一】【步】【步】【走】【向】【深】【渊】【。】【就】【这】【样】【一】【个】【出】【身】【贫】【寒】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【学】【会】【了】【挥】【霍】【,】【学】【会】【了】【说】【谎】【,】【开】【始】【还】【有】【内】【疚】【,】【有】【怜】【悯】【心】【,】【有】【耻】【辱】【感】【,】【但】【在】【精】【神】【鸦】【片】【的】【腐】【蚀】【下】【,】【很】【快】【就】【麻】【木】【了】【。】【紧】【接】【着】【是】【身】【体】【的】【透】【支】【,】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【的】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【如】【多】【米】【诺】【骨】【牌】【倒】【塌】【效】【应】【一】【般】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【采】【用】【先】【叙】【后】【议】【,】【叙】【写】【沉】【沦】【,】【文】【字】【细】【密】【,】【为】【的】【是】【告】【诫】【读】【者】【,】【要】【提】【高】【警】【惕】【。】【而】【叙】【写】【觉】【醒】【,】【文】【字】【疏】【简】【,】【“】【漫】【长】【的】【一】【周】【”】【,】【写】【起】【来】【不】【足】【百】【字】【,】【一】【个】【“】【地】【狱】【般】【的】【反】【省】【”】【,】【一】【个】【“】【脱】【胎】【换】【骨】【”】【,】【就】【足】【以】【传】【达】【出】【内】【心】【的】【悔】【恨】【。】【因】【为】【此】【时】【“】【我】【”】【的】【心】【情】【,】【读】【者】【完】【全】【能】【够】【想】【象】【出】【来】【,】【所】【以】【不】【必】【太】【多】【叙】【述】【。】【最】【后】【一】【段】【,】【发】【出】【议】【论】【,】【卒】【章】【显】【志】【,】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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