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中小学辅导网:早尽孝_尽孝要乘早

2019年11月12日 16:05

【多】【年】【的】【杀】【手】【经】【验】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【这】【次】【是】【个】【棘】【手】【的】【活】【儿】【,】【可】【我】【拿】【人】【的】【钱】【财】【,】【替】【人】【消】【灾】【,】【别】【无】【选】【择】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【敬】【爱】【的】【“】【Y】【F】【”】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【好】【,】【久】【违】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【前】【几】【日】【,】【我】【知】【道】【你】【十】【分】【悲】【伤】【,】【为】【下】【滑】【的】【成】【绩】【而】【苦】【恼】【不】【已】【。】【只】【记】【得】【那】【天】【,】【你】【在】【无】【助】【中】【绝】【望】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【Y】【F】【,】【班】【级】【3】【8】【,】【年】【级】【1】【0】【8】【。】【”】【你】【想】【哭】【,】【但】【欲】【哭】【无】【泪】【。】【因】【为】【你】【努】【力】【却】【没】【有】【成】【功】【。】【你】【顿】【时】【觉】【得】【人】【生】【失】【去】【了】【色】【彩】【,】【生】【命】【没】【有】【了】【意】【义】【。】【你】【怀】【着】【失】【落】【的】【心】【,】【捏】【着】【残】【破】【的】【试】【卷】【,】【回】【到】【了】【家】【,】【失】【望】【的】【母】【亲】【像】【看】【外】【星】【人】【一】【样】【盯】【着】【你】【。】【那】【天】【夜】【里】【,】【脆】【弱】【的】【你】【终】【于】【哭】【了】【,】【你】【的】【泪】【湿】【透】【了】【整】【个】【心】【。】【你】【茫】【然】【无】【措】【:】【希】【望】【为】【何】【那】【么】【遥】【远】【?】【失】【眠】【的】【你】【,】【在】【黑】【夜】【里】【孤】【寂】【地】【坐】【起】【,】【冷】【静】【地】【写】【了】【长】【长】【的】【一】【封】【信】【。】【你】【知】【道】【,】【母】【亲】【需】【要】【这】【封】【信】【的】【慰】【藉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【生】【活】【欺】【骗】【了】【你】【,】【老】【朋】【友】【请】【不】【要】【悲】【伤】【,】【因】【为】【希】【望】【在】【前】【方】【等】【着】【你】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【滴】【答】【,】【滴】【答】【…】【…】【”】【,】【时】【间】【过】【了】【很】【久】【,】【让】【人】【感】【到】【窒】【息】【的】【憋】【闷】【感】【依】【然】【充】【斥】【着】【你】【的】【心】【间】【。】【你】【看】【不】【到】【蓝】【天】【,】【听】【不】【到】【歌】【声】【,】【闻】【不】【到】【花】【香】【。】【行】【走】【在】【人】【间】【的】【每】【一】【步】【,】【都】【如】【履】【薄】【冰】【,】【生】【活】【在】【人】【间】【的】【每】【一】【天】【,】【都】【度】【日】【如】【年】【。】【你】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【已】【如】【“】【千】【帆】【过】【”】【后】【的】【沉】【舟】【,】【哪】【里】【还】【会】【有】【希】【望】【?】【只】【想】【浑】【噩】【地】【度】【过】【时】【光】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【生】【活】【欺】【骗】【了】【你】【,】【老】【朋】【友】【请】【不】【要】【悲】【观】【,】【因】【为】【希】【望】【在】【前】【方】【等】【着】【你】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【滴】【答】【,】【滴】【答】【…】【…】【”】【,】【时】【间】【又】【过】【了】【很】【久】【,】【你】【受】【伤】【的】【心】【渐】【渐】【地】【愈】【合】【。】【各】【种】【课】【程】【与】【作】【业】【分】【解】【了】【那】【种】【疼】【痛】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【生】【活】【的】【忙】【碌】【与】【紧】【张】【冲】【淡】【了】【那】【种】【忧】【愁】【的】【滋】【味】【,】【母】【亲】【呵】【护】【的】【话】【语】【又】【恢】【复】【了】【往】【日】【的】【温】【度】【,】【虽】【然】【你】【不】【确】【定】【有】【什】【么】【希】【望】【,】【但】【你】【知】【道】【:】【即】【使】【地】【平】【线】【颠】【覆】【,】【希】【望】【被】【封】【杀】【,】【但】【阳】【光】【依】【然】【会】【在】【,】【你】【在】【磨】【砺】【中】【会】【逐】【渐】【地】【乐】【观】【起】【来】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【生】【活】【欺】【骗】【了】【你】【,】【老】【朋】【友】【请】【不】【要】【忧】【伤】【,】【因】【为】【希】【望】【在】【前】【方】【等】【着】【你】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【滴】【答】【,】【滴】【答】【…】【…】【”】【,】【时】【间】【又】【过】【了】【很】【久】【,】【你】【平】【静】【的】【心】【却】【燃】【起】【了】【希】【望】【的】【火】【苗】【,】【因】【为】【你】【从】【一】【次】【打】【了】【满】【分】【的】【测】【试】【中】【看】【到】【了】【希】【望】【。】【世】【间】【不】【会】【因】【优】【劣】【而】【取】【舍】【成】【败】【,】【上】【天】【给】【予】【的】【都】【是】【公】【平】【,】【绝】【望】【永】【远】【衬】【出】【希】【望】【。】【只】【要】【阳】【光】【还】【在】【,】【希】【望】【就】【在】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【假】【如】【生】【活】【欺】【骗】【了】【你】【,】【老】【朋】【友】【请】【不】【要】【伤】【心】【,】【因】【为】【希】【望】【在】【前】【方】【等】【着】【你】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【依】【旧】【“】【滴】【答】【”】【,】【如】【银】【铃】【乍】【响】【。】【不】【必】【怀】【疑】【我】【,】【因】【为】【时】【间】【会】【让】【你】【我】【重】【合】【,】【我】【,】【就】【是】【你】【!】【我】【是】【未】【来】【的】【你】【,】【因】【为】【我】【发】【现】【了】【希】【望】【,】【所】【以】【未】【来】【的】【你】【也】【会】【发】【现】【希】【望】【,】【成】【功】【其】【实】【离】【我】【们】【并】【不】【遥】【远】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【希】【望】【,】【等】【待】【你】【去】【拜】【访】【;】【希】【望】【,】【助】【你】【实】【现】【希】【望】【。】【老】【朋】【友】【,】【请】【坚】【强】【乐】【观】【起】【来】【,】【因】【为】【希】【望】【就】【在】【前】【方】【等】【着】【你】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【永】【远】【爱】【你】【的】【—】【—】【我】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【1】【月】【1】【日】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【采】【用】【书】【信】【体】【的】【方】【式】【,】【在】【形】【式】【上】【创】【新】【,】【让】【读】【者】【眼】【睛】【为】【之】【一】【亮】【。】【行】【文】【中】【以】【时】【间】【为】【序】【,】【用】【“】【假】【如】【生】【活】【欺】【骗】【了】【你】【,】【老】【朋】【友】【请】【不】【要】【…】【…】【因】【为】【希】【望】【在】【前】【方】【等】【着】【你】【”】【这】【一】【句】【巧】【妙】【串】【联】【,】【生】【动】【展】【现】【“】【你】【、】【我】【”】【之】【间】【的】【深】【情】【厚】【谊】【,】【在】【“】【你】【、】【我】【”】【的】【交】【融】【中】【,】【巧】【妙】【地】【升】【华】【文】【章】【的】【意】【蕴】【—】【—】【只】【要】【我】【们】【坚】【强】【乐】【观】【,】【就】【会】【看】【到】【希】【望】【之】【所】【在】【。】【文】【章】【的】【构】【思】【十】【分】【精】【巧】【,】【充】【分】【展】【示】【了】【小】【作】【者】【非】【凡】【的】【创】【意】【。】【此】【文】【联】【想】【丰】【富】【,】【描】【写】【生】【动】【,】【融】【情】【于】【叙】【,】【融】【情】【于】【议】【,】【使】【文】【章】【具】【有】【感】【人】【的】【情】【韵】【美】【。】【另】【外】【,】【本】【文】【善】【用】【辞】【格】【,】【骈】【散】【结】【合】【,】【长】【短】【交】【错】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【语】【言】【优】【美】【生】【动】【,】【大】【大】【增】【强】【了】【文】【章】【的】【表】【现】【力】【与】【感】【染】【力】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【黄】【松】【海】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】中小学辅导网【厉】【老】【师】【把】【童】【俊】【凡】【组】【的】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【钩】【桥】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【拿】【到】【讲】【台】【上】【,】【当】【厉】【老】【师】【把】【魔】【方】【放】【上】【去】【的】【时】【候】【。】【蒋】【译】【萱】【吓】【得】【紧】【紧】【抓】【着】【手】【,】【就】【连】【天】【不】【怕】【地】【不】【怕】【的】【徐】【乾】【豪】【也】【紧】【张】【地】【在】【原】【地】【走】【来】【走】【去】【,】【但】【还】【是】【以】【失】【败】【告】【终】【。】

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中小学辅导网:以高考为话题作文800字 [以清明为话题的日记]

【我】【很】【想】【放】【他】【们】【出】【来】【,】【可】【我】【如】【今】【的】【一】【举】【一】【动】【都】【万】【分】【艰】【难】【,】【腰】【部】【不】【停】【地】【流】【血】【,】【最】【后】【我】【却】【不】【知】【是】【哪】【儿】【来】【的】【力】【量】【一】【直】【支】【撑】【着】【我】【爬】【到】【控】【制】【室】【。】【我】【按】【下】【密】【室】【开】【关】【,】【通】【过】【摄】【像】【头】【看】【到】【密】【室】【里】【的】【情】【景】【却】【让】【我】【再】【也】【忘】【不】【掉】【,】【金】【先】【生】【打】【造】【的】【密】【室】【并】【不】【普】【通】【,】【除】【了】【是】【碳】【合】【金】【打】【造】【的】【外】【,】【里】【面】【还】【有】【机】【关】【,】【并】【且】【是】【那】【种】【不】【杀】【死】【所】【有】【活】【物】【就】【不】【停】【的】【那】【种】【。】中小学辅导网【收】【集】【好】【了】【以】【后】【,】【突】【然】【一】【阵】【沙】【尘】【暴】【吹】【了】【过】【来】【,】【把】【它】【吹】【散】【了】【,】【我】【很】【心】【痛】【,】【寻】【找】【了】【好】【久】【,】【也】【不】【见】【它】【们】【的】【踪】【影】【。】

中小学辅导网:挑荠菜_挑荠菜

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【技】【法】【指】【导】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【中】【时】【常】【发】【生】【着】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【事】【,】【我】【们】【对】【每】【件】【事】【都】【有】【自】【己】【不】【同】【的】【态】【度】【和】【看】【法】【,】【我】【们】【作】【文】【中】【如】【能】【针】【对】【某】【一】【件】【事】【(】【或】【某】【个】【问】【题】【、】【某】【种】【现】【象】【)】【发】【表】【自】【己】【的】【看】【法】【,】【把】【它】【写】【入】【文】【章】【,】【就】【属】【于】【一】【事】【一】【议】【的】【议】【论】【文】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【在】【写】【一】【事】【一】【议】【的】【议】【论】【文】【时】【可】【从】【如】【下】【方】【面】【入】【手】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【分】【析】【材】【料】【,】【提】【炼】【观】【点】【。】【因】【为】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【属】【于】【给】【材】【料】【作】【文】【,】【所】【以】【写】【好】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【第】【一】【步】【就】【是】【认】【真】【阅】【读】【材】【料】【,】【然】【后】【抓】【住】【关】【键】【段】【落】【、】【句】【子】【或】【词】【语】【认】【真】【分】【析】【,】【归】【纳】【出】【材】【料】【的】【中】【心】【。】【概】【括】【出】【材】【料】【的】【中】【心】【,】【只】【能】【算】【读】【懂】【了】【材】【料】【,】【要】【发】【表】【议】【论】【还】【需】【要】【在】【读】【懂】【的】【基】【础】【上】【推】【进】【一】【步】【,】【即】【针】【对】【材】【料】【的】【全】【部】【或】【某】【一】【方】【面】【的】【内】【容】【,】【提】【出】【自】【己】【的】【看】【法】【,】【这】【个】【看】【法】【就】【是】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【论】【点】【。】【一】【个】【材】【料】【有】【时】【可】【以】【提】【炼】【出】【许】【多】【观】【点】【。】【同】【样】【一】【个】【材】【料】【,】【由】【于】【提】【炼】【的】【观】【点】【不】【同】【,】【便】【会】【出】【现】【论】【点】【不】【同】【的】【文】【章】【,】【因】【此】【在】【提】【炼】【观】【点】【时】【,】【应】【选】【择】【最】【佳】【角】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【拟】【好】【题】【目】【,】【力】【求】【醒】【目】【。】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【作】【文】【一】【般】【都】【是】【没】【有】【题】【目】【的】【,】【需】【要】【我】【们】【自】【己】【来】【拟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【拟】【题】【时】【要】【注】【意】【紧】【扣】【论】【题】【,】【力】【求】【醒】【目】【。】【要】【尽】【量】【防】【止】【拟】【题】【的】【平】【泛】【,】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【;】【也】【要】【尽】【量】【防】【止】【拟】【题】【大】【而】【空】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【写】【好】【开】【头】【,】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【。】【人】【们】【常】【说】【万】【事】【开】【头】【难】【,】【然】【而】【开】【头】【又】【是】【关】【键】【。】【写】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【开】【头】【,】【必】【须】【紧】【紧】【扣】【住】【所】【提】【供】【的】【材】【料】【内】【容】【,】【文】【章】【的】【开】【头】【首】【先】【要】【概】【述】【材】【料】【,】【然】【后】【根】【据】【它】【的】【意】【义】【或】【教】【训】【提】【出】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【即】【文】【章】【的】【论】【点】【。】【这】【部】【分】【用】【的】【笔】【墨】【不】【宜】【太】【多】【,】【否】【则】【喧】【宾】【夺】【主】【。】【初】【学】【写】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【学】【生】【常】【犯】【的】【毛】【病】【有】【两】【个】【:】【一】【是】【先】【将】【材】【料】【从】【头】【到】【尾】【抄】【一】【遍】【,】【这】【是】【要】【求】【不】【允】【许】【的】【;】【二】【是】【在】【概】【述】【原】【材】【料】【时】【,】【抓】【不】【住】【重】【点】【,】【抓】【不】【住】【关】【键】【的】【语】【句】【,】【意】【思】【表】【达】【不】【清】【。】【以】【上】【两】【个】【毛】【病】【均】【反】【映】【出】【学】【生】【的】【综】【合】【概】【括】【能】【力】【及】【表】【达】【能】【力】【较】【差】【。】【因】【此】【,】【在】【概】【述】【时】【一】【定】【要】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【和】【关】【键】【语】【句】【,】【力】【求】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【。】【这】【才】【有】【利】【于】【观】【点】【的】【提】【炼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【紧】【扣】【材】【料】【,】【合】【理】【论】【证】【。】【在】【论】【证】【中】【,】【要】【紧】【紧】【扣】【住】【这】【个】【材】【料】【阐】【明】【观】【点】【,】【议】【论】【的】【内】【容】【要】【具】【体】【、】【集】【中】【。】【可】【以】【联】【系】【现】【实】【将】【议】【论】【向】【深】【广】【展】【开】【,】【但】【不】【要】【脱】【离】【原】【材】【料】【空】【发】【议】【论】【或】【使】【论】【题】【转】【移】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【病】【文】【展】【示】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【刘】【 】【佳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【我】【们】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【我】【们】【身】【边】【的】【同】【学】【,】【会】【发】【现】【在】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【中】【出】【现】【了】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【些】【人】【出】【门】【打】【的】【士】【,】【穿】【名】【牌】【,】【吃】【的】【要】【贵】【,】【用】【的】【要】【高】【级】【,】【他】【们】【只】【讲】【铺】【张】【浪】【费】【,】【不】【注】【意】【勤】【俭】【节】【约】【。】【中】【学】【生】【们】【在】【吃】【、】【穿】【、】【娱】【乐】【方】【面】【的】【消】【费】【要】【求】【很】【多】【,】【比】【成】【人】【的】【支】【出】【毫】【不】【逊】【色】【,】【且】【呈】【快】【速】【增】【长】【的】【态】【势】【。】【(】【开】【头】【摆】【现】【象】【,】【引】【出】【下】【文】【的】【写】【作】【,】【这】【一】【点】【很】【好】【。】【)】【我】【认】【为】【:】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【(】【点】【出】【自】【己】【对】【这】【类】【事】【的】【看】【法】【。】【下】【文】【也】【应】【着】【重】【突】【出】【“】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【”】【的】【原】【因】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纵】【观】【现】【在】【我】【们】【身】【边】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【情】【况】【,】【以】【以】【下】【现】【象】【最】【为】【突】【出】【。】【(】【下】【面】【又】【是】【摆】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【里】【与】【第】【一】【段】【的】【内】【容】【有】【明】【显】【的】【重】【复】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【很】【多】【学】【生】【乐】【于】【搭】【伴】【用】【餐】【,】【大】【吃】【大】【喝】【并】【且】【零】【食】【不】【离】【嘴】【。】【很】【多】【中】【学】【生】【喜】【欢】【几】【个】【同】【学】【吆】【五】【喝】【六】【地】【一】【起】【吃】【饭】【,】【他】【们】【觉】【得】【热】【闹】【又】【时】【尚】【;】【有】【些】【中】【学】【生】【效】【仿】【成】【年】【人】【喝】【着】【啤】【酒】【和】【高】【档】【饮】【料】【,】【边】【喝】【边】【侃】【。】【喜】【欢】【吃】【零】【食】【是】【当】【今】【中】【小】【学】【生】【的】【又】【一】【特】【点】【,】【他】【们】【喜】【欢】【吃】【一】【些】【流】【行】【的】【新】【、】【奇】【食】【品】【,】【这】【些】【食】【品】【其】【实】【并】【无】【营】【养】【,】【是】【典】【型】【的】【“】【垃】【圾】【”】【食】【品】【,】【但】【因】【为】【广】【告】【打】【得】【好】【,】【学】【生】【们】【就】【争】【先】【恐】【后】【的】【购】【买】【。】【(】【这】【些】【现】【象】【只】【需】【在】【开】【头】【点】【出】【即】【可】【,】【目】【的】【在】【于】【引】【出】【事】【例】【,】【而】【应】【把】【重】【点】【放】【在】【我】【们】【对】【这】【事】【的】【看】【法】【与】【态】【度】【上】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【摆】【阔】【,】【现】【代】【通】【信】【工】【具】【随】【身】【带】【。】【现】【今】【中】【学】【生】【移】【动】【通】【信】【工】【具】【使】【用】【率】【逐】【年】【增】【高】【,】【尽】【管】【大】【多】【数】【学】【校】【为】【了】【不】【影】【响】【学】【生】【的】【上】【课】【质】【量】【,】【不】【允】【许】【学】【生】【带】【通】【信】【工】【具】【到】【学】【校】【,】【但】【很】【多】【学】【生】【还】【是】【悄】【悄】【地】【怀】【揣】【手】【机】【或】【小】【灵】【通】【入】【校】【。】【移】【动】【通】【信】【工】【具】【成】【为】【当】【今】【中】【学】【生】【摆】【阔】【、】【显】【示】【自】【己】【的】【一】【个】【重】【要】【标】【志】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【追】【求】【时】【髦】【,】【不】【顾】【家】【庭】【的】【实】【际】【情】【况】【而】【崇】【尚】【品】【牌】【。】【他】【们】【追】【求】【时】【尚】【,】【崇】【尚】【时】【髦】【,】【喜】【欢】【穿】【品】【牌】【服】【装】【和】【鞋】【子】【是】【现】【在】【中】【学】【生】【的】【又】【一】【特】【点】【,】【有】【些】【学】【生】【甚】【至】【不】【是】【品】【牌】【不】【上】【身】【。】【相】【信】【如】【果】【不】【是】【学】【校】【要】【求】【统】【一】【穿】【校】【服】【,】【他】【们】【的】【衣】【着】【消】【费】【还】【会】【更】【高】【,】【支】【出】【会】【更】【大】【。】【显】【而】【易】【见】【,】【部】【分】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【出】【发】【点】【在】【于】【仿】【效】【富】【裕】【人】【群】【的】【生】【活】【,】【在】【他】【们】【看】【来】【,】【是】【否】【拥】【有】【某】【些】【物】【品】【成】【为】【他】【们】【显】【示】【自】【己】【的】【标】【志】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【在】【目】【前】【是】【不】【合】【适】【的】【,】【(】【为】【什】【么】【不】【合】【适】【呢】【?】【没】【有】【恰】【当】【的】【论】【据】【来】【证】【明】【,】【这】【样】【的】【观】【点】【也】【就】【没】【有】【说】【服】【力】【。】【)】【我】【们】【应】【杜】【绝】【这】【种】【现】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【评】【改】【指】【津】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【能】【从】【现】【在】【中】【学】【生】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【些】【现】【象】【引】【入】【问】【题】【,】【这】【一】【点】【很】【好】【。】【但】【是】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【作】【者】【并】【没】【有】【按】【第】【一】【段】【的】【思】【路】【来】【行】【文】【,】【而】【是】【中】【途】【改】【道】【了】【。】【以】【后】【的】【三】【、】【四】【、】【五】【段】【大】【写】【特】【写】【目】【前】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【种】【种】【表】【现】【,】【这】【显】【然】【是】【“】【叙】【”】【而】【不】【是】【“】【议】【”】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【建】【议】【在】【升】【格】【本】【文】【时】【,】【多】【写】【写】【自】【己】【对】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【这】【种】【现】【象】【的】【看】【法】【和】【认】【识】【,】【既】【然】【作】【者】【认】【为】【这】【是】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【的】【,】【就】【要】【说】【说】【为】【什】【么】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【,】【要】【注】【意】【用】【合】【理】【的】【事】【例】【与】【道】【理】【来】【印】【证】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【让】【别】【的】【同】【学】【能】【够】【接】【受】【你】【的】【观】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【升】【格】【佳】【作】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【刘】【 】【佳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【我】【们】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【我】【们】【身】【边】【的】【同】【学】【,】【会】【发】【现】【在】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【中】【出】【现】【了】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【,】【这】【些】【人】【出】【门】【打】【的】【士】【,】【穿】【名】【牌】【,】【吃】【的】【要】【贵】【,】【用】【的】【要】【高】【级】【,】【他】【们】【只】【讲】【铺】【张】【浪】【费】【,】【不】【注】【意】【勤】【俭】【节】【约】【。】【我】【认】【为】【:】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【(】【由】【现】【象】【入】【手】【,】【进】【而】【提】【出】【论】【点】【,】【观】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【引】【人】【思】【考】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【高】【消】【费】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【,】【首】【先】【它】【不】【符】【合】【我】【们】【如】【今】【的】【国】【情】【。】【现】【在】【,】【我】【们】【国】【家】【的】【经】【济】【虽】【然】【有】【了】【很】【大】【的】【发】【展】【,】【人】【民】【生】【活】【也】【有】【所】【改】【善】【。】【但】【是】【,】【国】【家】【经】【济】【还】【不】【发】【达】【,】【人】【民】【生】【活】【水】【平】【还】【比】【较】【低】【,】【一】【些】【边】【远】【地】【区】【的】【少】【年】【儿】【童】【没】【钱】【上】【学】【。】【在】【这】【种】【情】【况】【下】【,】【高】【消】【费】【是】【行】【不】【通】【的】【。】【(】【先】【从】【主】【要】【的】【方】【面】【来】【分】【析】【,】【说】【理】【透】【彻】【,】【让】【人】【信】【服】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【不】【提】【倡】【高】【消】【费】【,】【是】【因】【为】【高】【消】【费】【还】【是】【一】【种】【腐】【蚀】【剂】【。】【它】【使】【青】【少】【年】【挥】【霍】【别】【人】【的】【劳】【动】【果】【实】【,】【把】【自】【己】【的】【幸】【福】【建】【立】【在】【他】【人】【辛】【勤】【劳】【动】【的】【基】【础】【上】【。】【有】【些】【青】【少】【年】【为】【了】【要】【一】【双】【“】【耐】【克】【”】【苦】【求】【爹】【妈】【,】【这】【对】【那】【些】【拿】【工】【资】【的】【家】【长】【来】【说】【,】【就】【变】【成】【了】【一】【个】【沉】【重】【的】【负】【担】【。】【我】【们】【在】【学】【校】【中】【上】【课】【是】【不】【创】【造】【价】【值】【的】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【,】【要】【珍】【惜】【别】【人】【为】【我】【们】【提】【供】【的】【各】【种】【条】【件】【。】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【正】【处】【于】【人】【生】【最】【适】【宜】【播】【种】【理】【想】【的】【时】【候】【,】【切】【莫】【沉】【醉】【于】【追】【求】【物】【质】【享】【受】【,】【折】【断】【自】【己】【理】【想】【的】【翅】【膀】【。】【(】【从】【青】【少】【年】【自】【身】【上】【来】【分】【析】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【很】【有】【针】【对】【性】【,】【很】【能】【引】【起】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【的】【深】【思】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【香】【港】【的】【“】【船】【王】【”】【包】【玉】【刚】【家】【财】【万】【贯】【,】【却】【依】【然】【以】【俭】【治】【家】【,】【每】【天】【仍】【坐】【公】【共】【汽】【车】【上】【下】【班】【。】【这】【似】【乎】【有】【些】【不】【可】【思】【议】【:】【这】【样】【一】【个】【亿】【万】【富】【翁】【,】【买】【一】【辆】【小】【汽】【车】【又】【算】【什】【么】【,】【何】【至】【于】【“】【抠】【门】【儿】【”】【到】【这】【个】【地】【步】【?】【其】【实】【他】【并】【不】【是】【吝】【惜】【那】【几】【个】【钱】【,】【而】【是】【时】【时】【告】【诫】【自】【己】【切】【莫】【贪】【图】【享】【受】【,】【追】【求】【奢】【侈】【生】【活】【。】【方】【志】【敏】【烈】【士】【有】【这】【样】【一】【句】【话】【:】【“】【清】【贫】【,】【洁】【白】【朴】【素】【的】【生】【活】【,】【正】【是】【我】【们】【革】【命】【者】【能】【够】【战】【胜】【许】【多】【困】【难】【的】【地】【方】【。】【”】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【事】【业】【离】【不】【开】【俭】【朴】【。】【(】【运】【用】【事】【实】【与】【道】【理】【论】【据】【相】【结】【合】【的】【方】【式】【,】【有】【力】【地】【证】【明】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【的】【“】【两】【会】【”】【已】【给】【我】【们】【做】【出】【了】【很】【好】【的】【榜】【样】【,】【会】【场】【全】【部】【采】【用】【节】【能】【光】【源】【,】【减】【少】【照】【明】【用】【电】【。】【我】【们】【从】【这】【处】【细】【节】【中】【不】【难】【体】【会】【到】【,】【我】【们】【个】【人】【的】【事】【业】【想】【有】【所】【成】【就】【,】【我】【们】【的】【国】【家】【想】【要】【强】【大】【,】【我】【们】【的】【社】【会】【想】【要】【健】【康】【发】【展】【,】【就】【必】【须】【提】【倡】【俭】【朴】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【中】【学】【生】【,】【应】【该】【反】【对】【高】【消】【费】【。】【(】【既】【总】【结】【上】【文】【,】【又】【回】【应】【开】【篇】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【结】【构】【圆】【合】【,】【主】【题】【鲜】【明】【突】【出】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【后】【的】【作】【文】【较】【符】【合】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【的】【写】【法】【,】【文】【章】【在】【开】【头】【首】【先】【引】【出】【了】【要】【写】【的】【“】【事】【”】【,】【但】【这】【里】【的】【“】【事】【”】【不】【是】【某】【一】【具】【体】【的】【事】【,】【而】【是】【一】【种】【现】【象】【—】【—】【中】【学】【生】【高】【消】【费】【的】【现】【象】【。】【在】【第】【一】【段】【中】【作】【者】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【的】【叙】【述】【了】【“】【事】【”】【,】【然】【后】【引】【出】【对】【事】【的】【“】【议】【”】【,】【认】【为】【这】【是】【极】【不】【适】【宜】【的】【。】【接】【下】【来】【重】【点】【论】【述】【了】【 】【“】【不】【适】【宜】【”】【的】【理】【由】【:】【一】【是】【高】【消】【费】【不】【符】【合】【国】【情】【,】【二】【是】【高】【消】【费】【是】【腐】【蚀】【剂】【,】【事】【业】【成】【功】【离】【不】【开】【俭】【朴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纵】【观】【升】【格】【后】【的】【文】【章】【,】【作】【者】【叙】【事】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【,】【议】【论】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【,】【就】【事】【论】【理】【、】【理】【从】【事】【发】【,】【而】【且】【在】【提】【出】【观】【点】【后】【能】【扣】【住】【论】【点】【展】【开】【议】【论】【,】【论】【据】【恰】【当】【、】【说】【服】【力】【强】【,】【较】【符】【合】【“】【一】【事】【一】【议】【”】【作】【文】【的】【写】【法】【。】【这】【一】【点】【是】【值】【得】【我】【们】【学】【习】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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