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2019年11月22日 08:40

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毛】【遂】【的】【“】【自】【荐】【”】【换】【来】【了】【平】【原】【君】【的】【重】【用】【;】【恩】【格】【斯】【“】【自】【荐】【”】【成】【全】【了】【自】【己】【和】【马】【克】【思】【的】【友】【谊】【,】【也】【成】【就】【了】【举】【世】【闻】【名】【的】【《】【资】【本】【论】【》】【;】【黑】【海】【涛】【“】【自】【荐】【”】【的】【歌】【声】【,】【换】【来】【帕】【氏】【的】【帮】【助】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【自】【荐】【不】【失】【为】【实】【现】【人】【生】【价】【值】【的】【一】【条】【好】【出】【路】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【莫】【泊】【桑】【为】【写】【《】【羊】【脂】【球】【》】【,】【自】【荐】【成】【为】【福】【楼】【拜】【的】【徒】【弟】【;】【法】【拉】【第】【自】【荐】【要】【做】【戴】【维】【的】【助】【手】【。】【他】【们】【初】【始】【的】【身】【份】【或】【许】【是】【卑】【微】【的】【,】【或】【许】【他】【们】【一】【辈】【子】【都】【不】【够】【富】【有】【,】【但】【他】【们】【自】【信】【有】【了】【底】【气】【,】【勇】【于】【推】【荐】【自】【己】【,】【然】【后】【在】【名】【师】【点】【拨】【后】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【,】【一】【举】【成】【名】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【荐】【是】【将】【自】【己】【推】【向】【成】【功】【之】【路】【的】【火】【箭】【。】【有】【人】【说】【:】【“】【我】【可】【以】【等】【,】【是】【块】【金】【子】【总】【会】【发】【光】【,】【我】【总】【会】【得】【到】【重】【用】【。】【”】【但】【朋】【友】【们】【,】【“】【总】【会】【”】【是】【多】【久】【呢】【?】【十】【年】【、】【二】【十】【年】【,】【或】【者】【更】【远】【。】【何】【况】【世】【界】【上】【“】【金】【子】【”】【也】【很】【多】【,】【怎】【么】【知】【道】【你】【这】【块】【一】【定】【会】【发】【光】【呢】【!】【我】【们】【要】【干】【一】【番】【事】【业】【,】【实】【现】【自】【己】【的】【人】【生】【价】【值】【要】【有】【“】【只】【争】【朝】【夕】【”】【的】【精】【神】【。】【当】【你】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【在】【某】【方】【面】【有】【天】【赋】【、】【有】【特】【长】【、】【有】【资】【本】【,】【就】【可】【不】【必】【等】【待】【时】【机】【,】【而】【应】【积】【极】【主】【动】【寻】【找】【机】【会】【推】【荐】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【年】【,】【默】【默】【无】【闻】【的】【房】【龙】【跑】【龙】【套】【时】【不】【忘】【向】【各】【位】【导】【演】【自】【荐】【演】【主】【角】【,】【他】【换】【来】【的】【大】【都】【是】【白】【眼】【,】【但】【也】【获】【得】【了】【少】【数】【人】【的】【垂】【青】【,】【他】【终】【于】【成】【功】【了】【。】【后】【来】【他】【改】【名】【叫】【成】【龙】【,】【如】【今】【已】【成】【为】【国】【际】【影】【星】【。】【要】【是】【他】【不】【自】【荐】【,】【谁】【会】【发】【现】【他】【、】【重】【用】【他】【?】【是】【自】【荐】【加】【速】【了】【他】【的】【成】【功】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【荐】【可】【锻】【炼】【人】【的】【意】【志】【,】【增】【强】【人】【的】【自】【信】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【荐】【固】【然】【会】【带】【来】【某】【种】【机】【遇】【和】【某】【种】【好】【处】【,】【但】【前】【提】【条】【件】【是】【要】【有】【自】【荐】【的】【资】【本】【。】【松】【下】【幸】【之】【助】【掌】【握】【各】【种】【电】【器】【知】【识】【,】【才】【敢】【于】【自】【荐】【于】【各】【家】【电】【器】【公】【司】【。】【后】【来】【积】【累】【了】【种】【种】【丰】【富】【经】【验】【,】【成】【立】【了】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【松】【下】【集】【团】【。】【正】【因】【为】【积】【之】【在】【平】【日】【,】【才】【得】【用】【之】【在】【俄】【顷】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【怀】【才】【不】【遇】【不】【用】【忧】【,】【自】【荐】【来】【解】【忧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【不】【逢】【时】【不】【用】【愁】【,】【自】【荐】【来】【解】【愁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【上】【有】【些】【事】【是】【早】【在】【我】【们】【出】【生】【之】【前】【就】【已】【形】【成】【了】【的】【,】【我】【们】【无】【法】【改】【变】【,】【也】【没】【有】【改】【变】【的】【意】【义】【。】【只】【有】【像】【黑】【海】【涛】【那】【样】【“】【高】【歌】【一】【曲】【”】【,】【也】【许】【才】【能】【使】【我】【们】【的】【潜】【能】【得】【到】【发】【掘】【,】【才】【能】【改】【变】【我】【们】【弱】【势】【的】【境】【遇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【们】【振】【作】【起】【来】【,】【自】【荐】【一】【下】【,】【来】【铸】【就】【成】【功】【之】【路】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【开】【栏】【语】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【择】【典】【型】【、】【新】【颖】【、】【精】【炼】【的】【材】【料】【是】【中】【考】【作】【文】【制】【胜】【的】【又】【一】【绝】【招】【。】【然】【而】【有】【许】【多】【考】【场】【作】【文】【常】【常】【呈】【现】【下】【列】【问】【题】【:】【一】【是】【材】【料】【贫】【乏】【,】【内】【容】【干】【瘪】【;】【二】【是】【材】【料】【平】【庸】【,】【缺】【少】【个】【性】【;】【三】【是】【材】【料】【虚】【假】【,】【违】【背】【常】【理】【;】【四】【是】【游】【离】【中】【心】【,】【不】【合】【主】【旨】【。】【选】【材】【不】【准】【、】【不】【实】【、】【不】【新】【,】【就】【会】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【不】【理】【不】【睬】【。】【因】【此】【,】【我】【们】【只】【有】【走】【进】【生】【活】【,】【慧】【眼】【识】【珠】【,】【采】【撷】【亮】【点】【,】【发】【掘】【新】【意】【,】【才】【能】【写】【出】【具】【有】【创】【意】【的】【美】【文】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【创】【新】【技】【巧】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【考】【作】【文】【一】【定】【要】【捕】【捉】【住】【生】【活】【中】【的】【精】【彩】【,】【具】【备】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【的】【写】【作】【意】【识】【,】【才】【会】【将】【最】【具】【有】【时】【代】【气】【息】【的】【生】【活】【素】【材】【一】【网】【打】【尽】【,】【使】【作】【文】【变】【得】【鲜】【活】【灵】【动】【,】【光】【鲜】【可】【人】【!】【选】【材】【如】【何】【做】【到】【新】【鲜】【抢】【眼】【呢】【?】【以】【下】【方】【法】【供】【大】【家】【借】【鉴】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【捕】【捉】【新】【闻】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【,】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【近】【几】【年】【的】【中】【考】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【选】【择】【新】【闻】【中】【“】【焦】【点】【人】【物】【”】【作】【为】【文】【字】【材】【料】【,】【比】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【吉】【林】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【就】【是】【以】【“】【沈】【阳】【市】【感】【动】【校】【园】【十】【佳】【好】【少】【年】【”】【“】【辽】【宁】【省】【道】【德】【小】【模】【范】【”】【“】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【度】【全】【国】【十】【大】【真】【情】【人】【物】【”】【—】【—】【马】【鹏】【飞】【为】【材】【料】【来】【进】【行】【作】【文】【的】【;】【还】【有】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【浙】【江】【嘉】【兴】【中】【考】【作】【文】【以】【周】【杰】【伦】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【、】【蔡】【伟】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【作】【导】【入】【,】【巧】【妙】【引】【出】【命】【题】【作】【文】【《】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【》】【;】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【龙】【岩】【卷】【以】【“】【超】【级】【女】【声】【”】【年】【度】【总】【冠】【军】【李】【宇】【春】【走】【进】【北】【大】【校】【园】【引】【发】【非】【议】【作】【为】【提】【示】【语】【,】【意】【在】【引】【出】【话】【题】【作】【文】【“】【文】【化】【”】【等】【。】【这】【些】【人】【物】【的】【事】【迹】【一】【般】【都】【刊】【载】【于】【新】【近】【的】【《】【青】【年】【文】【摘】【》】【《】【读】【者】【》】【《】【意】【林】【》】【《】【杂】【文】【报】【》】【等】【报】【刊】【上】【,】【同】【学】【们】【要】【格】【外】【关】【注】【。】【我】【们】【只】【有】【捕】【捉】【住】【这】【些】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【,】【考】【场】【上】【才】【能】【从】【容】【应】【对】【。】【而】【且】【这】【些】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【又】【可】【充】【当】【我】【们】【写】【作】【中】【最】【新】【的】【素】【材】【,】【变】【成】【抢】【人】【眼】【球】【的】【“】【珍】【珠】【”】【。】【比】【如】【写】【作】【:】【我】【心】【中】【有】【杆】【秤】【、】【成】【功】【的】【秘】【诀】【、】【人】【生】【最】【重】【要】【的】【几】【个】【字】【、】【心】【灵】【的】【阳】【光】【、】【源】【泉】【、】【别】【样】【、】【像】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【那】【样】【生】【活】【、】【在】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【的】【影】【响】【下】【、】【我】【眼】【中】【的】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【,】【等】【文】【题】【时】【就】【可】【大】【显】【神】【威】【,】【倘】【若】【拿】【来】【为】【我】【所】【用】【,】【一】【定】【会】【让】【人】【眼】【睛】【一】【亮】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【留】【心】【日】【常】【生】【活】【,】【熟】【中】【取】【新】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【有】【留】【心】【生】【活】【中】【的】【点】【滴】【小】【事】【,】【才】【能】【慧】【眼】【捕】【捉】【,】【熟】【中】【取】【新】【,】【发】【掘】【新】【意】【。】【例】【如】【尤】【今】【的】【《】【手】【足】【情】【深】【》】【一】【文】【不】【足】【5】【0】【0】【字】【,】【文】【中】【叙】【写】【老】【二】【不】【小】【心】【踢】【到】【了】【老】【三】【的】【耳】【朵】【,】【导】【致】【老】【三】【左】【耳】【后】【出】【现】【了】【一】【道】【一】【寸】【来】【长】【的】【裂】【痕】【,】【结】【果】【是】【老】【二】【挨】【打】【,】【老】【三】【却】【为】【老】【二】【求】【情】【。】【夜】【里】【,】【家】【人】【都】【已】【入】【睡】【,】【恍】【然】【间】【,】【“】【我】【”】【突】【然】【被】【搬】【动】【椅】【子】【、】【摁】【亮】【电】【灯】【的】【声】【音】【惊】【醒】【了】【。】【“】【我】【”】【一】【跃】【而】【起】【,】【冲】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【房】【间】【,】【就】【在】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【“】【我】【”】【看】【到】【了】【极】【为】【难】【忘】【的】【一】【幕】【:】【“】【我】【家】【老】【二】【,】【跪】【在】【老】【三】【床】【畔】【,】【正】【轻】【轻】【地】【拨】【开】【她】【的】【头】【发】【,】【低】【着】【头】【,】【细】【细】【地】【看】【着】【她】【耳】【后】【的】【伤】【痕】【。】【一】【股】【热】【潮】【,】【蓦】【地】【泛】【上】【了】【我】【的】【双】【眼】【。】【”】【作】【者】【从】【熟】【悉】【的】【生】【活】【中】【来】【取】【材】【,】【真】【可】【谓】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【,】【情】【韵】【悠】【长】【。】【再】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【河】【南】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【佳】【作】【《】【逆】【耳】【忠】【言】【助】【我】【行】【》】【一】【文】【,】【以】【父】【亲】【老】【套】【却】【实】【在】【的】【逆】【耳】【忠】【言】【“】【不】【要】【忘】【本】【”】【为】【线】【索】【,】【让】【作】【者】【在】【经】【历】【了】【生】【活】【的】【磨】【砺】【后】【懂】【得】【了】【其】【中】【的】【真】【谛】【,】【从】【而】【帮】【助】【自】【己】【迷】【途】【知】【返】【,】【走】【上】【了】【正】【确】【的】【人】【生】【道】【路】【。】【此】【文】【选】【材】【真】【实】【,】【细】【节】【动】【人】【,】【情】【真】【意】【切】【,】【读】【之】【印】【象】【深】【刻】【。】【由】【此】【观】【之】【,】【我】【们】【的】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【蕴】【藏】【着】【丰】【富】【的】【典】【型】【的】【素】【材】【,】【只】【是】【我】【们】【发】【掘】【得】【还】【不】【够】【,】【没】【有】【看】【出】【它】【的】【亮】【点】【来】【。】【因】【此】【,】【请】【留】【心】【日】【常】【生】【活】【,】【从】【中】【去】【获】【得】【最】【有】【价】【值】【的】【“】【金】【子】【”】【,】【为】【作】【文】【增】【光】【添】【彩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【善】【于】【转】【换】【角】【度】【,】【多】【方】【出】【击】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【材】【要】【想】【出】【新】【还】【须】【具】【备】【多】【角】【度】【意】【识】【。】【即】【使】【是】【陈】【旧】【的】【题】【材】【,】【也】【应】【注】【意】【换】【个】【角】【度】【去】【写】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【云】【南】【省】【中】【考】【佳】【作】【《】【我】【感】【受】【到】【了】【登】【山】【的】【乐】【趣】【》】【一】【文】【,】【作】【者】【没】【有】【落】【入】【单】【纯】【叙】【写】【自】【己】【登】【山】【的】【经】【历】【的】【窠】【臼】【之】【中】【,】【而】【是】【将】【自】【己】【的】【见】【闻】【和】【感】【受】【巧】【妙】【地】【融】【入】【叙】【事】【与】【写】【景】【之】【中】【,】【综】【合】【运】【用】【叙】【事】【、】【抒】【情】【、】【议】【论】【、】【描】【写】【多】【种】【表】【达】【方】【式】【,】【生】【动】【地】【阐】【释】【了】【自】【己】【登】【山】【时】【的】【真】【切】【感】【受】【,】【让】【人】【读】【之】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【。】【同】【学】【们】【还】【要】【善】【于】【跳】【出】【第】【一】【人】【称】【的】【窠】【臼】【,】【突】【破】【“】【我】【”】【的】【局】【限】【,】【也】【能】【做】【到】【选】【材】【出】【新】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【广】【东】【梅】【州】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【》】【一】【文】【,】【先】【从】【项】【羽】【“】【无】【法】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【”】【“】【无】【法】【跨】【越】【心】【墙】【”】【,】【说】【到】【陶】【潜】【的】【“】【弃】【官】【归】【隐】【山】【林】【”】【“】【战】【胜】【了】【自】【己】【”】【,】【再】【说】【到】【周】【敦】【颐】【对】【“】【趋】【炎】【附】【势】【的】【世】【风】【鄙】【视】【,】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【,】【永】【留】【芳】【名】【”】【,】【然】【后】【结】【合】【生】【活】【谈】【感】【悟】【,】【最】【后】【点】【明】【主】【旨】【:】【“】【唯】【有】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【心】【中】【的】【心】【魔】【,】【跨】【越】【心】【墙】【,】【战】【胜】【自】【卑】【,】【在】【你】【的】【面】【前】【就】【会】【升】【起】【一】【轮】【新】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【”】【此】【文】【就】【是】【引】【古】【论】【今】【,】【借】【名】【人】【素】【材】【来】【点】【亮】【我】【们】【的】【眼】【眸】【,】【增】【添】【文】【章】【的】【文】【化】【底】【蕴】【,】【彰】【显】【考】【生】【广】【泛】【的】【阅】【历】【。】【同】【样】【“】【旧】【瓶】【装】【新】【酒】【”】【,】【也】【不】【失】【为】【选】【材】【出】【新】【的】【一】【条】【好】【途】【径】【。】【所】【谓】【“】【旧】【瓶】【装】【新】【酒】【”】【就】【是】【要】【突】【破】【旧】【的】【思】【维】【定】【式】【,】【从】【已】【形】【成】【固】【定】【看】【法】【的】【人】【、】【事】【中】【翻】【出】【新】【意】【,】【或】【者】【发】【掘】【一】【些】【老】【题】【材】【的】【内】【在】【潜】【质】【,】【进】【行】【再】【创】【作】【,】【使】【旧】【题】【材】【显】【示】【出】【新】【意】【。】【例】【如】【,】【“】【熟】【能】【生】【巧】【”】【是】【人】【们】【已】【认】【同】【的】【固】【定】【看】【法】【,】【而】【对】【“】【班】【门】【弄】【斧】【”】【“】【世】【故】【圆】【滑】【”】【等】【则】【持】【否】【定】【、】【批】【评】【态】【度】【,】【但】【在】【改】【革】【开】【放】【、】【高】【科】【技】【发】【展】【的】【今】【天】【,】【我】【们】【认】【为】【:】【熟】【不】【一】【定】【就】【能】【生】【巧】【,】【弄】【斧】【应】【到】【班】【门】【,】【圆】【滑】【未】【必】【不】【是】【合】【作】【中】【的】【一】【支】【黏】【合】【剂】【。】【除】【此】【之】【外】【,】【还】【可】【“】【反】【弹】【琵】【琶】【唱】【新】【调】【”】【也】【会】【让】【选】【材】【新】【意】【迭】【出】【。】【如】【以】【“】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【”】【为】【题】【,】【有】【考】【生】【突】【破】【常】【规】【思】【维】【,】【叙】【写】【希】【望】【去】【走】【一】【条】【充】【满】【坎】【坷】【的】【路】【,】【在】【苦】【难】【中】【历】【练】【自】【我】【,】【使】【自】【我】【走】【得】【更】【远】【,】【飞】【得】【更】【高】【。】【此】【文】【反】【向】【出】【新】【,】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【眼】【睛】【为】【之】【一】【亮】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【题】【回】【放】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【仔】【细】【阅】【读】【下】【面】【的】【材】【料】【,】【从】【中】【选】【择】【一】【个】【角】【度】【构】【思】【立】【意】【,】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【可】【叙】【述】【经】【历】【,】【可】【抒】【发】【情】【感】【,】【可】【发】【表】【议】【论】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【前】【有】【一】【个】【猎】【人】【,】【养】【了】【一】【条】【很】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【有】【一】【天】【他】【外】【出】【打】【猎】【时】【,】【把】【狗】【留】【在】【家】【里】【看】【护】【自】【己】【年】【幼】【的】【儿】【子】【。】【等】【他】【回】【来】【后】【,】【发】【现】【儿】【子】【不】【见】【了】【,】【那】【条】【狗】【却】【满】【嘴】【是】【血】【。】【猎】【人】【顿】【时】【火】【起】【,】【认】【为】【是】【狗】【把】【儿】【子】【吃】【掉】【了】【,】【便】【一】【枪】【把】【狗】【打】【死】【了】【。】【这】【时】【,】【儿】【子】【从】【床】【底】【下】【钻】【出】【来】【告】【诉】【父】【亲】【,】【有】【条】【大】【蟒】【蛇】【要】【吃】【自】【己】【,】【是】【狗】【把】【蟒】【蛇】【赶】【跑】【了】【。】【猎】【人】【后】【悔】【不】【已】【,】【特】【意】【修】【了】【一】【座】【塔】【来】【纪】【念】【那】【条】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【猎】【人】【因】【为】【缺】【乏】【信】【任】【,】【失】【去】【了】【一】【条】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【想】【想】【我】【们】【自】【己】【,】【是】【否】【因】【为】【缺】【乏】【信】【任】【,】【而】【失】【去】【了】【很】【多】【很】【多】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【云】【南】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【试】【题】【解】【析】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【材】【料】【作】【文】【,】【我】【们】【要】【抓】【住】【其】【“】【信】【任】【”】【这】【一】【要】【旨】【来】【构】【思】【行】【文】【。】【写】【作】【时】【,】【不】【要】【空】【谈】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【意】【义】【,】【要】【避】【免】【行】【文】【空】【洞】【无】【物】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【从】【两】【方】【面】【入】【手】【:】【(】【1】【)】【用】【事】【实】【说】【话】【,】【将】【古】【今】【中】【外】【名】【人】【诚】【实】【、】【守】【信】【的】【故】【事】【和】【自】【己】【生】【活】【中】【遇】【到】【的】【信】【任】【或】【不】【信】【任】【的】【事】【例】【联】【系】【起】【来】【,】【展】【开】【论】【述】【,】【论】【证】【“】【信】【任】【在】【人】【生】【事】【业】【中】【的】【关】【键】【作】【用】【”】【的】【论】【点】【;】【(】【2】【)】【以】【真】【情】【实】【感】【打】【动】【人】【,】【通】【过】【叙】【述】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【,】【抒】【发】【自】【己】【对】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【由】【衷】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【再】【者】【要】【注】【意】【形】【式】【上】【的】【创】【新】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【大】【胆】【采】【用】【小】【标】【题】【式】【、】【小】【小】【说】【、】【独】【幕】【剧】【、】【访】【谈】【录】【、】【日】【记】【体】【、】【书】【信】【体】【、】【科】【幻】【式】【、】【跟】【帖】【体】【、】【手】【机】【短】【信】【体】【等】【来】【构】【思】【、】【行】【文】【,】【力】【求】【以】【“】【文】【体】【创】【新】【”】【而】【赢】【得】【阅】【卷】【教】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【满】【分】【佳】【作】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【·】【老】【人】【·】【信】【任】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【云】【南】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【,】【这】【个】【尊】【贵】【的】【、】【大】【自】【然】【的】【小】【精】【灵】【,】【在】【每】【年】【的】【冬】【春】【季】【节】【,】【无】【一】【例】【外】【地】【都】【要】【光】【顾】【我】【们】【的】【城】【市】【。】【它】【们】【有】【着】【像】【雪】【一】【样】【洁】【白】【的】【羽】【毛】【,】【有】【着】【像】【朱】【砂】【一】【样】【鲜】【艳】【的】【长】【喙】【,】【更】【有】【着】【像】【清】【风】【一】【样】【轻】【盈】【的】【舞】【姿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【不】【清】【从】【什】【么】【时】【候】【起】【,】【来】【自】【西】【伯】【利】【亚】【的】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【悄】【然】【来】【到】【我】【们】【美】【丽】【的】【春】【城】【安】【家】【落】【户】【。】【也】【记】【不】【清】【是】【从】【什】【么】【时】【候】【开】【始】【,】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【和】【昆】【明】【人】【民】【成】【了】【最】【亲】【密】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【但】【却】【深】【知】【这】【一】【切】【源】【于】【彼】【此】【间】【那】【种】【深】【深】【的】【信】【任】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【大】【人】【们】【说】【,】【几】【年】【前】【,】【每】【到】【冬】【季】【来】【临】【时】【,】【就】【会】【有】【一】【位】【名】【叫】【吴】【庆】【恒】【的】【老】【人】【来】【到】【翠】【湖】【之】【畔】【,】【给】【到】【这】【里】【越】【冬】【的】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【。】【天】【长】【日】【久】【,】【他】【居】【然】【和】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【结】【下】【了】【不】【解】【之】【缘】【,】【彼】【此】【信】【任】【,】【彼】【此】【依】【靠】【,】【谁】【也】【离】【不】【开】【谁】【。】【有】【一】【天】【,】【老】【人】【没】【有】【来】【,】【因】【为】【他】【已】【经】【永】【远】【地】【离】【开】【了】【人】【世】【。】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【找】【不】【到】【自】【己】【的】【老】【朋】【友】【,】【纷】【纷】【在】【翠】【湖】【上】【空】【盘】【旋】【、】【飞】【舞】【,】【仿】【佛】【是】【在】【焦】【急】【地】【寻】【找】【着】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【人】【一】【般】【,】【它】【们】【忧】【郁】【的】【鸣】【叫】【声】【令】【人】【心】【动】【。】【老】【人】【是】【十】【分】【勤】【俭】【的】【人】【。】【他】【每】【天】【步】【行】【二】【十】【余】【里】【,】【从】【城】【郊】【赶】【到】【翠】【湖】【来】【,】【就】【是】【为】【了】【给】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【,】【和】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【做】【伴】【,】【这】【是】【老】【人】【第】【一】【次】【给】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【后】【留】【下】【的】【承】【诺】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【人】【每】【月】【3】【0】【8】【元】【的】【退】【休】【工】【资】【有】【一】【半】【以】【上】【都】【用】【来】【给】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【买】【吃】【的】【。】【这】【位】【可】【敬】【的】【老】【人】【,】【演】【绎】【了】【人】【与】【自】【然】【之】【间】【充】【满】【信】【任】【与】【真】【诚】【的】【感】【人】【故】【事】【。】【老】【人】【走】【了】【,】【人】【们】【在】【翠】【湖】【边】【上】【为】【他】【塑】【了】【一】【尊】【青】【铜】【雕】【像】【,】【并】【亲】【切】【地】【把】【这】【座】【雕】【像】【叫】【做】【“】【海】【鸥】【老】【人】【”】【。】【老】【人】【走】【了】【,】【但】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【不】【认】【为】【他】【已】【经】【离】【开】【人】【世】【,】【它】【们】【仍】【每】【天】【在】【“】【他】【”】【的】【身】【边】【上】【下】【翻】【飞】【,】【或】【停】【留】【在】【“】【他】【”】【的】【手】【上】【,】【或】【停】【留】【在】【“】【他】【”】【的】【肩】【上】【,】【这】【是】【何】【其】【深】【沉】【的】【信】【任】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【尊】【雕】【塑】【把】【人】【鸥】【和】【谐】【共】【处】【的】【祥】【和】【美】【景】【定】【格】【为】【永】【远】【,】【同】【时】【也】【在】【向】【世】【人】【昭】【示】【:】【和】【谐】【共】【处】【的】【信】【任】【和】【善】【心】【,】【是】【矗】【立】【在】【每】【一】【个】【热】【爱】【自】【然】【、】【热】【爱】【生】【命】【的】【人】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【的】【丰】【碑】【!】【而】【一】【个】【人】【只】【要】【能】【坚】【持】【内】【心】【美】【好】【的】【操】【守】【和】【至】【死】【不】【渝】【的】【付】【出】【,】【哪】【怕】【他】【再】【平】【凡】【再】【普】【通】【,】【也】【可】【以】【活】【成】【别】【人】【眼】【中】【的】【丰】【碑】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【最】【突】【出】【的】【特】【色】【就】【在】【于】【走】【进】【生】【活】【,】【慧】【眼】【识】【珠】【,】【采】【撷】【亮】【点】【,】【发】【掘】【新】【意】【。】【文】【章】【从】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【与】【一】【位】【老】【人】【的】【亲】【密】【关】【系】【说】【起】【,】【生】【动】【地】【阐】【释】【了】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【重】【要】【意】【义】【。】【人】【与】【自】【然】【和】【谐】【共】【处】【,】【这】【正】【是】【出】【于】【人】【类】【和】【自】【然】【界】【的】【动】【物】【之】【间】【彼】【此】【的】【信】【任】【。】【作】【者】【能】【从】【生】【活】【中】【的】【情】【景】【生】【发】【出】【自】【己】【对】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【理】【解】【与】【感】【悟】【,】【取】【材】【角】【度】【也】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【,】【令】【人】【叹】【服】【。】【此】【外】【,】【文】【章】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【感】【人】【,】【语】【言】【表】【现】【力】【强】【,】【给】【人】【以】【极】【强】【的】【感】【染】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】集约用地【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【一】【出】【生】【,】【就】【注】【定】【要】【面】【对】【很】【多】【遗】【憾】【。】【遗】【憾】【如】【同】【影】【子】【一】【般】【,】【将】【会】【陪】【伴】【你】【的】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【华】【绝】【代】【者】【,】【害】【怕】【时】【间】【的】【一】【声】【轻】【咳】【,】【但】【注】【定】【要】【面】【对】【鸡】【皮】【鹤】【发】【时】【,】【总】【会】【有】【韶】【华】【短】【暂】【、】【青】【春】【不】【再】【的】【遗】【憾】【;】【位】【高】【权】【重】【者】【,】【害】【怕】【命】【运】【的】【一】【点】【震】【颤】【,】【但】【注】【定】【要】【面】【对】【大】【权】【旁】【落】【、】【终】【老】【黄】【泉】【时】【,】【总】【会】【有】【富】【贵】【如】【浮】【云】【的】【感】【叹】【,】【大】【势】【不】【可】【挽】【的】【遗】【憾】【;】【步】【入】【考】【场】【的】【学】【子】【,】【害】【怕】【分】【数】【的】【张】【榜】【公】【示】【,】【但】【注】【定】【要】【面】【对】【考】【试】【败】【北】【、】【名】【落】【孙】【山】【时】【,】【总】【会】【有】【用】【功】【不】【及】【、】【考】【场】【失】【误】【的】【遗】【憾】【;】【社】【会】【芸】【芸】【众】【生】【,】【又】【有】【几】【人】【没】【有】【“】【人】【生】【不】【济】【”】【“】【命】【运】【多】【舛】【”】【的】【感】【叹】【与】【遗】【憾】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遗】【憾】【是】【暗】【淡】【的】【星】【光】【,】【是】【西】【方】【落】【日】【,】【是】【哀】【鸣】【的】【胡】【雁】【,】【是】【落】【霞】【的】【余】【晖】【。】【遗】【憾】【是】【诸】【葛】【亮】【六】【出】【祁】【山】【,】【北】【上】【中】【原】【;】【是】【曹】【雪】【芹】【悼】【红】【轩】【中】【的】【木】【石】【姻】【缘】【;】【是】【千】【里】【堤】【岸】【上】【的】【小】【小】【蚁】【穴】【;】【是】【春】【风】【得】【意】【时】【的】【惨】【遭】【贬】【谪】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【谁】【都】【不】【想】【与】【遗】【憾】【结】【缘】【,】【谁】【都】【害】【怕】【在】【自】【己】【的】【人】【生】【轨】【迹】【上】【留】【下】【遗】【憾】【,】【遗】【憾】【的】【面】【孔】【仿】【佛】【永】【远】【是】【狰】【狞】【的】【,】【可】【怕】【的】【,】【令】【人】【生】【厌】【的】【。】【但】【是】【,】【我】【认】【为】【,】【遗】【憾】【是】【苦】【口】【的】【良】【药】【,】【滋】【味】【虽】【然】【难】【受】【,】【但】【它】【令】【我】【们】【的】【头】【脑】【越】【来】【越】【清】【醒】【,】【越】【来】【越】【理】【智】【。】【在】【我】【们】【多】【次】【遗】【憾】【之】【后】【,】【我】【们】【会】【越】【来】【越】【明】【确】【自】【己】【应】【该】【做】【什】【么】【,】【不】【应】【该】【做】【什】【么】【;】【遗】【憾】【是】【人】【生】【最】【忠】【实】【的】【诤】【友】【,】【虽】【然】【有】【时】【令】【人】【痛】【心】【,】【但】【是】【并】【不】【可】【怕】【,】【可】【怕】【的】【是】【身】【陷】【其】【中】【而】【无】【法】【自】【拔】【,】【只】【要】【你】【敢】【于】【正】【视】【遗】【憾】【,】【弥】【补】【遗】【憾】【,】【它】【就】【会】【激】【励】【你】【获】【得】【最】【后】【的】【成】【功】【。】【因】【为】【你】【遗】【憾】【,】【才】【千】【方】【百】【计】【、】【想】【方】【设】【法】【不】【断】【努】【力】【去】【弥】【补】【遗】【憾】【;】【正】【因】【为】【不】【断】【地】【去】【弥】【补】【遗】【憾】【,】【才】【会】【不】【断】【地】【完】【善】【自】【我】【,】【才】【会】【有】【不】【断】【的】【提】【高】【和】【发】【展】【。】【可】【以】【说】【,】【遗】【憾】【给】【了】【我】【们】【弥】【补】【自】【身】【缺】【陷】【的】【警】【醒】【与】【提】【示】【,】【遗】【憾】【给】【了】【我】【们】【不】【断】【完】【善】【自】【己】【、】【提】【高】【自】【己】【的】【机】【会】【。】【遗】【憾】【是】【你】【忠】【实】【的】【朋】【友】【,】【时】【刻】【指】【明】【你】【前】【进】【的】【方】【向】【。】【如】【果】【一】【个】【人】【一】【辈】【子】【从】【未】【感】【到】【过】【遗】【憾】【,】【那】【么】【他】【的】【人】【生】【永】【远】【是】【停】【滞】【的】【,】【盲】【目】【的】【。】【正】【是】【因】【为】【有】【了】【遗】【憾】【,】【人】【们】【才】【奋】【发】【向】【上】【;】【正】【是】【因】【为】【有】【了】【遗】【憾】【,】【生】【活】【才】【显】【得】【多】【姿】【多】【彩】【,】【富】【有】【激】【情】【与】【趣】【味】【!】【当】【你】【手】【捧】【鲜】【花】【,】【听】【到】【掌】【声】【,】【你】【可】【知】【道】【,】【那】【便】【是】【你】【经】【历】【过】【多】【次】【遗】【憾】【所】【获】【得】【的】【奖】【赏】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【人】【最】【宝】【贵】【的】【是】【生】【命】【,】【生】【命】【对】【于】【每】【个】【人】【只】【有】【一】【次】【。】【人】【的】【一】【生】【应】【当】【这】【样】【度】【过】【:】【回】【忆】【往】【事】【,】【他】【不】【会】【因】【为】【虚】【度】【年】【华】【而】【悔】【恨】【,】【也】【不】【会】【因】【为】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【而】【羞】【愧】【…】【…】【”】【我】【们】【不】【想】【虚】【度】【年】【华】【,】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【,】【我】【们】【要】【珍】【爱】【生】【命】【,】【让】【生】【命】【体】【现】【价】【值】【,】【那】【我】【们】【就】【不】【要】【拒】【绝】【遗】【憾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遗】【憾】【青】【丝】【堆】【雪】【,】【何】【不】【吟】【诵】【“】【最】【美】【是】【夕】【阳】【红】【”】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遗】【憾】【人】【生】【不】【济】【、】【命】【运】【多】【舛】【,】【何】【不】【苦】【吟】【“】【天】【将】【降】【大】【任】【于】【斯】【人】【也】【”】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遗】【憾】【已】【退】【出】【历】【史】【的】【舞】【台】【,】【何】【不】【“】【惯】【看】【秋】【月】【春】【风】【”】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遗】【憾】【虽】【入】【温】【柔】【富】【贵】【乡】【而】【不】【得】【不】【抽】【身】【退】【步】【,】【何】【不】【笑】【吟】【“】【世】【间】【行】【乐】【亦】【如】【此】【,】【古】【来】【万】【事】【东】【流】【水】【”】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【伸】【出】【你】【的】【手】【,】【让】【我】【们】【与】【遗】【憾】【交】【个】【朋】【友】【,】【让】【我】【们】【与】【遗】【憾】【融】【洽】【相】【处】【,】【终】【有】【一】【天】【你】【会】【发】【现】【,】【遗】【憾】【也】【有】【一】【种】【别】【样】【的】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【孙】【剑】【飞】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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集约用地:北京欢迎您(转载)作文900字

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【开】【栏】【语】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【择】【典】【型】【、】【新】【颖】【、】【精】【炼】【的】【材】【料】【是】【中】【考】【作】【文】【制】【胜】【的】【又】【一】【绝】【招】【。】【然】【而】【有】【许】【多】【考】【场】【作】【文】【常】【常】【呈】【现】【下】【列】【问】【题】【:】【一】【是】【材】【料】【贫】【乏】【,】【内】【容】【干】【瘪】【;】【二】【是】【材】【料】【平】【庸】【,】【缺】【少】【个】【性】【;】【三】【是】【材】【料】【虚】【假】【,】【违】【背】【常】【理】【;】【四】【是】【游】【离】【中】【心】【,】【不】【合】【主】【旨】【。】【选】【材】【不】【准】【、】【不】【实】【、】【不】【新】【,】【就】【会】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【不】【理】【不】【睬】【。】【因】【此】【,】【我】【们】【只】【有】【走】【进】【生】【活】【,】【慧】【眼】【识】【珠】【,】【采】【撷】【亮】【点】【,】【发】【掘】【新】【意】【,】【才】【能】【写】【出】【具】【有】【创】【意】【的】【美】【文】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【创】【新】【技】【巧】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【考】【作】【文】【一】【定】【要】【捕】【捉】【住】【生】【活】【中】【的】【精】【彩】【,】【具】【备】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【的】【写】【作】【意】【识】【,】【才】【会】【将】【最】【具】【有】【时】【代】【气】【息】【的】【生】【活】【素】【材】【一】【网】【打】【尽】【,】【使】【作】【文】【变】【得】【鲜】【活】【灵】【动】【,】【光】【鲜】【可】【人】【!】【选】【材】【如】【何】【做】【到】【新】【鲜】【抢】【眼】【呢】【?】【以】【下】【方】【法】【供】【大】【家】【借】【鉴】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【捕】【捉】【新】【闻】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【,】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【近】【几】【年】【的】【中】【考】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【选】【择】【新】【闻】【中】【“】【焦】【点】【人】【物】【”】【作】【为】【文】【字】【材】【料】【,】【比】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【吉】【林】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【就】【是】【以】【“】【沈】【阳】【市】【感】【动】【校】【园】【十】【佳】【好】【少】【年】【”】【“】【辽】【宁】【省】【道】【德】【小】【模】【范】【”】【“】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【度】【全】【国】【十】【大】【真】【情】【人】【物】【”】【—】【—】【马】【鹏】【飞】【为】【材】【料】【来】【进】【行】【作】【文】【的】【;】【还】【有】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【浙】【江】【嘉】【兴】【中】【考】【作】【文】【以】【周】【杰】【伦】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【、】【蔡】【伟】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【作】【导】【入】【,】【巧】【妙】【引】【出】【命】【题】【作】【文】【《】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【》】【;】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【龙】【岩】【卷】【以】【“】【超】【级】【女】【声】【”】【年】【度】【总】【冠】【军】【李】【宇】【春】【走】【进】【北】【大】【校】【园】【引】【发】【非】【议】【作】【为】【提】【示】【语】【,】【意】【在】【引】【出】【话】【题】【作】【文】【“】【文】【化】【”】【等】【。】【这】【些】【人】【物】【的】【事】【迹】【一】【般】【都】【刊】【载】【于】【新】【近】【的】【《】【青】【年】【文】【摘】【》】【《】【读】【者】【》】【《】【意】【林】【》】【《】【杂】【文】【报】【》】【等】【报】【刊】【上】【,】【同】【学】【们】【要】【格】【外】【关】【注】【。】【我】【们】【只】【有】【捕】【捉】【住】【这】【些】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【,】【考】【场】【上】【才】【能】【从】【容】【应】【对】【。】【而】【且】【这】【些】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【又】【可】【充】【当】【我】【们】【写】【作】【中】【最】【新】【的】【素】【材】【,】【变】【成】【抢】【人】【眼】【球】【的】【“】【珍】【珠】【”】【。】【比】【如】【写】【作】【:】【我】【心】【中】【有】【杆】【秤】【、】【成】【功】【的】【秘】【诀】【、】【人】【生】【最】【重】【要】【的】【几】【个】【字】【、】【心】【灵】【的】【阳】【光】【、】【源】【泉】【、】【别】【样】【、】【像】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【那】【样】【生】【活】【、】【在】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【的】【影】【响】【下】【、】【我】【眼】【中】【的】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【,】【等】【文】【题】【时】【就】【可】【大】【显】【神】【威】【,】【倘】【若】【拿】【来】【为】【我】【所】【用】【,】【一】【定】【会】【让】【人】【眼】【睛】【一】【亮】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【留】【心】【日】【常】【生】【活】【,】【熟】【中】【取】【新】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【有】【留】【心】【生】【活】【中】【的】【点】【滴】【小】【事】【,】【才】【能】【慧】【眼】【捕】【捉】【,】【熟】【中】【取】【新】【,】【发】【掘】【新】【意】【。】【例】【如】【尤】【今】【的】【《】【手】【足】【情】【深】【》】【一】【文】【不】【足】【5】【0】【0】【字】【,】【文】【中】【叙】【写】【老】【二】【不】【小】【心】【踢】【到】【了】【老】【三】【的】【耳】【朵】【,】【导】【致】【老】【三】【左】【耳】【后】【出】【现】【了】【一】【道】【一】【寸】【来】【长】【的】【裂】【痕】【,】【结】【果】【是】【老】【二】【挨】【打】【,】【老】【三】【却】【为】【老】【二】【求】【情】【。】【夜】【里】【,】【家】【人】【都】【已】【入】【睡】【,】【恍】【然】【间】【,】【“】【我】【”】【突】【然】【被】【搬】【动】【椅】【子】【、】【摁】【亮】【电】【灯】【的】【声】【音】【惊】【醒】【了】【。】【“】【我】【”】【一】【跃】【而】【起】【,】【冲】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【房】【间】【,】【就】【在】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【“】【我】【”】【看】【到】【了】【极】【为】【难】【忘】【的】【一】【幕】【:】【“】【我】【家】【老】【二】【,】【跪】【在】【老】【三】【床】【畔】【,】【正】【轻】【轻】【地】【拨】【开】【她】【的】【头】【发】【,】【低】【着】【头】【,】【细】【细】【地】【看】【着】【她】【耳】【后】【的】【伤】【痕】【。】【一】【股】【热】【潮】【,】【蓦】【地】【泛】【上】【了】【我】【的】【双】【眼】【。】【”】【作】【者】【从】【熟】【悉】【的】【生】【活】【中】【来】【取】【材】【,】【真】【可】【谓】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【,】【情】【韵】【悠】【长】【。】【再】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【河】【南】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【佳】【作】【《】【逆】【耳】【忠】【言】【助】【我】【行】【》】【一】【文】【,】【以】【父】【亲】【老】【套】【却】【实】【在】【的】【逆】【耳】【忠】【言】【“】【不】【要】【忘】【本】【”】【为】【线】【索】【,】【让】【作】【者】【在】【经】【历】【了】【生】【活】【的】【磨】【砺】【后】【懂】【得】【了】【其】【中】【的】【真】【谛】【,】【从】【而】【帮】【助】【自】【己】【迷】【途】【知】【返】【,】【走】【上】【了】【正】【确】【的】【人】【生】【道】【路】【。】【此】【文】【选】【材】【真】【实】【,】【细】【节】【动】【人】【,】【情】【真】【意】【切】【,】【读】【之】【印】【象】【深】【刻】【。】【由】【此】【观】【之】【,】【我】【们】【的】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【蕴】【藏】【着】【丰】【富】【的】【典】【型】【的】【素】【材】【,】【只】【是】【我】【们】【发】【掘】【得】【还】【不】【够】【,】【没】【有】【看】【出】【它】【的】【亮】【点】【来】【。】【因】【此】【,】【请】【留】【心】【日】【常】【生】【活】【,】【从】【中】【去】【获】【得】【最】【有】【价】【值】【的】【“】【金】【子】【”】【,】【为】【作】【文】【增】【光】【添】【彩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【善】【于】【转】【换】【角】【度】【,】【多】【方】【出】【击】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【材】【要】【想】【出】【新】【还】【须】【具】【备】【多】【角】【度】【意】【识】【。】【即】【使】【是】【陈】【旧】【的】【题】【材】【,】【也】【应】【注】【意】【换】【个】【角】【度】【去】【写】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【云】【南】【省】【中】【考】【佳】【作】【《】【我】【感】【受】【到】【了】【登】【山】【的】【乐】【趣】【》】【一】【文】【,】【作】【者】【没】【有】【落】【入】【单】【纯】【叙】【写】【自】【己】【登】【山】【的】【经】【历】【的】【窠】【臼】【之】【中】【,】【而】【是】【将】【自】【己】【的】【见】【闻】【和】【感】【受】【巧】【妙】【地】【融】【入】【叙】【事】【与】【写】【景】【之】【中】【,】【综】【合】【运】【用】【叙】【事】【、】【抒】【情】【、】【议】【论】【、】【描】【写】【多】【种】【表】【达】【方】【式】【,】【生】【动】【地】【阐】【释】【了】【自】【己】【登】【山】【时】【的】【真】【切】【感】【受】【,】【让】【人】【读】【之】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【。】【同】【学】【们】【还】【要】【善】【于】【跳】【出】【第】【一】【人】【称】【的】【窠】【臼】【,】【突】【破】【“】【我】【”】【的】【局】【限】【,】【也】【能】【做】【到】【选】【材】【出】【新】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【广】【东】【梅】【州】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【》】【一】【文】【,】【先】【从】【项】【羽】【“】【无】【法】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【”】【“】【无】【法】【跨】【越】【心】【墙】【”】【,】【说】【到】【陶】【潜】【的】【“】【弃】【官】【归】【隐】【山】【林】【”】【“】【战】【胜】【了】【自】【己】【”】【,】【再】【说】【到】【周】【敦】【颐】【对】【“】【趋】【炎】【附】【势】【的】【世】【风】【鄙】【视】【,】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【,】【永】【留】【芳】【名】【”】【,】【然】【后】【结】【合】【生】【活】【谈】【感】【悟】【,】【最】【后】【点】【明】【主】【旨】【:】【“】【唯】【有】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【心】【中】【的】【心】【魔】【,】【跨】【越】【心】【墙】【,】【战】【胜】【自】【卑】【,】【在】【你】【的】【面】【前】【就】【会】【升】【起】【一】【轮】【新】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【”】【此】【文】【就】【是】【引】【古】【论】【今】【,】【借】【名】【人】【素】【材】【来】【点】【亮】【我】【们】【的】【眼】【眸】【,】【增】【添】【文】【章】【的】【文】【化】【底】【蕴】【,】【彰】【显】【考】【生】【广】【泛】【的】【阅】【历】【。】【同】【样】【“】【旧】【瓶】【装】【新】【酒】【”】【,】【也】【不】【失】【为】【选】【材】【出】【新】【的】【一】【条】【好】【途】【径】【。】【所】【谓】【“】【旧】【瓶】【装】【新】【酒】【”】【就】【是】【要】【突】【破】【旧】【的】【思】【维】【定】【式】【,】【从】【已】【形】【成】【固】【定】【看】【法】【的】【人】【、】【事】【中】【翻】【出】【新】【意】【,】【或】【者】【发】【掘】【一】【些】【老】【题】【材】【的】【内】【在】【潜】【质】【,】【进】【行】【再】【创】【作】【,】【使】【旧】【题】【材】【显】【示】【出】【新】【意】【。】【例】【如】【,】【“】【熟】【能】【生】【巧】【”】【是】【人】【们】【已】【认】【同】【的】【固】【定】【看】【法】【,】【而】【对】【“】【班】【门】【弄】【斧】【”】【“】【世】【故】【圆】【滑】【”】【等】【则】【持】【否】【定】【、】【批】【评】【态】【度】【,】【但】【在】【改】【革】【开】【放】【、】【高】【科】【技】【发】【展】【的】【今】【天】【,】【我】【们】【认】【为】【:】【熟】【不】【一】【定】【就】【能】【生】【巧】【,】【弄】【斧】【应】【到】【班】【门】【,】【圆】【滑】【未】【必】【不】【是】【合】【作】【中】【的】【一】【支】【黏】【合】【剂】【。】【除】【此】【之】【外】【,】【还】【可】【“】【反】【弹】【琵】【琶】【唱】【新】【调】【”】【也】【会】【让】【选】【材】【新】【意】【迭】【出】【。】【如】【以】【“】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【”】【为】【题】【,】【有】【考】【生】【突】【破】【常】【规】【思】【维】【,】【叙】【写】【希】【望】【去】【走】【一】【条】【充】【满】【坎】【坷】【的】【路】【,】【在】【苦】【难】【中】【历】【练】【自】【我】【,】【使】【自】【我】【走】【得】【更】【远】【,】【飞】【得】【更】【高】【。】【此】【文】【反】【向】【出】【新】【,】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【眼】【睛】【为】【之】【一】【亮】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【题】【回】【放】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【仔】【细】【阅】【读】【下】【面】【的】【材】【料】【,】【从】【中】【选】【择】【一】【个】【角】【度】【构】【思】【立】【意】【,】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【可】【叙】【述】【经】【历】【,】【可】【抒】【发】【情】【感】【,】【可】【发】【表】【议】【论】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【前】【有】【一】【个】【猎】【人】【,】【养】【了】【一】【条】【很】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【有】【一】【天】【他】【外】【出】【打】【猎】【时】【,】【把】【狗】【留】【在】【家】【里】【看】【护】【自】【己】【年】【幼】【的】【儿】【子】【。】【等】【他】【回】【来】【后】【,】【发】【现】【儿】【子】【不】【见】【了】【,】【那】【条】【狗】【却】【满】【嘴】【是】【血】【。】【猎】【人】【顿】【时】【火】【起】【,】【认】【为】【是】【狗】【把】【儿】【子】【吃】【掉】【了】【,】【便】【一】【枪】【把】【狗】【打】【死】【了】【。】【这】【时】【,】【儿】【子】【从】【床】【底】【下】【钻】【出】【来】【告】【诉】【父】【亲】【,】【有】【条】【大】【蟒】【蛇】【要】【吃】【自】【己】【,】【是】【狗】【把】【蟒】【蛇】【赶】【跑】【了】【。】【猎】【人】【后】【悔】【不】【已】【,】【特】【意】【修】【了】【一】【座】【塔】【来】【纪】【念】【那】【条】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【猎】【人】【因】【为】【缺】【乏】【信】【任】【,】【失】【去】【了】【一】【条】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【想】【想】【我】【们】【自】【己】【,】【是】【否】【因】【为】【缺】【乏】【信】【任】【,】【而】【失】【去】【了】【很】【多】【很】【多】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【云】【南】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【试】【题】【解】【析】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【材】【料】【作】【文】【,】【我】【们】【要】【抓】【住】【其】【“】【信】【任】【”】【这】【一】【要】【旨】【来】【构】【思】【行】【文】【。】【写】【作】【时】【,】【不】【要】【空】【谈】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【意】【义】【,】【要】【避】【免】【行】【文】【空】【洞】【无】【物】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【从】【两】【方】【面】【入】【手】【:】【(】【1】【)】【用】【事】【实】【说】【话】【,】【将】【古】【今】【中】【外】【名】【人】【诚】【实】【、】【守】【信】【的】【故】【事】【和】【自】【己】【生】【活】【中】【遇】【到】【的】【信】【任】【或】【不】【信】【任】【的】【事】【例】【联】【系】【起】【来】【,】【展】【开】【论】【述】【,】【论】【证】【“】【信】【任】【在】【人】【生】【事】【业】【中】【的】【关】【键】【作】【用】【”】【的】【论】【点】【;】【(】【2】【)】【以】【真】【情】【实】【感】【打】【动】【人】【,】【通】【过】【叙】【述】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【,】【抒】【发】【自】【己】【对】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【由】【衷】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【再】【者】【要】【注】【意】【形】【式】【上】【的】【创】【新】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【大】【胆】【采】【用】【小】【标】【题】【式】【、】【小】【小】【说】【、】【独】【幕】【剧】【、】【访】【谈】【录】【、】【日】【记】【体】【、】【书】【信】【体】【、】【科】【幻】【式】【、】【跟】【帖】【体】【、】【手】【机】【短】【信】【体】【等】【来】【构】【思】【、】【行】【文】【,】【力】【求】【以】【“】【文】【体】【创】【新】【”】【而】【赢】【得】【阅】【卷】【教】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【满】【分】【佳】【作】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【·】【老】【人】【·】【信】【任】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【云】【南】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【,】【这】【个】【尊】【贵】【的】【、】【大】【自】【然】【的】【小】【精】【灵】【,】【在】【每】【年】【的】【冬】【春】【季】【节】【,】【无】【一】【例】【外】【地】【都】【要】【光】【顾】【我】【们】【的】【城】【市】【。】【它】【们】【有】【着】【像】【雪】【一】【样】【洁】【白】【的】【羽】【毛】【,】【有】【着】【像】【朱】【砂】【一】【样】【鲜】【艳】【的】【长】【喙】【,】【更】【有】【着】【像】【清】【风】【一】【样】【轻】【盈】【的】【舞】【姿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【不】【清】【从】【什】【么】【时】【候】【起】【,】【来】【自】【西】【伯】【利】【亚】【的】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【悄】【然】【来】【到】【我】【们】【美】【丽】【的】【春】【城】【安】【家】【落】【户】【。】【也】【记】【不】【清】【是】【从】【什】【么】【时】【候】【开】【始】【,】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【和】【昆】【明】【人】【民】【成】【了】【最】【亲】【密】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【但】【却】【深】【知】【这】【一】【切】【源】【于】【彼】【此】【间】【那】【种】【深】【深】【的】【信】【任】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【大】【人】【们】【说】【,】【几】【年】【前】【,】【每】【到】【冬】【季】【来】【临】【时】【,】【就】【会】【有】【一】【位】【名】【叫】【吴】【庆】【恒】【的】【老】【人】【来】【到】【翠】【湖】【之】【畔】【,】【给】【到】【这】【里】【越】【冬】【的】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【。】【天】【长】【日】【久】【,】【他】【居】【然】【和】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【结】【下】【了】【不】【解】【之】【缘】【,】【彼】【此】【信】【任】【,】【彼】【此】【依】【靠】【,】【谁】【也】【离】【不】【开】【谁】【。】【有】【一】【天】【,】【老】【人】【没】【有】【来】【,】【因】【为】【他】【已】【经】【永】【远】【地】【离】【开】【了】【人】【世】【。】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【找】【不】【到】【自】【己】【的】【老】【朋】【友】【,】【纷】【纷】【在】【翠】【湖】【上】【空】【盘】【旋】【、】【飞】【舞】【,】【仿】【佛】【是】【在】【焦】【急】【地】【寻】【找】【着】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【人】【一】【般】【,】【它】【们】【忧】【郁】【的】【鸣】【叫】【声】【令】【人】【心】【动】【。】【老】【人】【是】【十】【分】【勤】【俭】【的】【人】【。】【他】【每】【天】【步】【行】【二】【十】【余】【里】【,】【从】【城】【郊】【赶】【到】【翠】【湖】【来】【,】【就】【是】【为】【了】【给】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【,】【和】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【做】【伴】【,】【这】【是】【老】【人】【第】【一】【次】【给】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【后】【留】【下】【的】【承】【诺】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【人】【每】【月】【3】【0】【8】【元】【的】【退】【休】【工】【资】【有】【一】【半】【以】【上】【都】【用】【来】【给】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【买】【吃】【的】【。】【这】【位】【可】【敬】【的】【老】【人】【,】【演】【绎】【了】【人】【与】【自】【然】【之】【间】【充】【满】【信】【任】【与】【真】【诚】【的】【感】【人】【故】【事】【。】【老】【人】【走】【了】【,】【人】【们】【在】【翠】【湖】【边】【上】【为】【他】【塑】【了】【一】【尊】【青】【铜】【雕】【像】【,】【并】【亲】【切】【地】【把】【这】【座】【雕】【像】【叫】【做】【“】【海】【鸥】【老】【人】【”】【。】【老】【人】【走】【了】【,】【但】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【不】【认】【为】【他】【已】【经】【离】【开】【人】【世】【,】【它】【们】【仍】【每】【天】【在】【“】【他】【”】【的】【身】【边】【上】【下】【翻】【飞】【,】【或】【停】【留】【在】【“】【他】【”】【的】【手】【上】【,】【或】【停】【留】【在】【“】【他】【”】【的】【肩】【上】【,】【这】【是】【何】【其】【深】【沉】【的】【信】【任】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【尊】【雕】【塑】【把】【人】【鸥】【和】【谐】【共】【处】【的】【祥】【和】【美】【景】【定】【格】【为】【永】【远】【,】【同】【时】【也】【在】【向】【世】【人】【昭】【示】【:】【和】【谐】【共】【处】【的】【信】【任】【和】【善】【心】【,】【是】【矗】【立】【在】【每】【一】【个】【热】【爱】【自】【然】【、】【热】【爱】【生】【命】【的】【人】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【的】【丰】【碑】【!】【而】【一】【个】【人】【只】【要】【能】【坚】【持】【内】【心】【美】【好】【的】【操】【守】【和】【至】【死】【不】【渝】【的】【付】【出】【,】【哪】【怕】【他】【再】【平】【凡】【再】【普】【通】【,】【也】【可】【以】【活】【成】【别】【人】【眼】【中】【的】【丰】【碑】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【最】【突】【出】【的】【特】【色】【就】【在】【于】【走】【进】【生】【活】【,】【慧】【眼】【识】【珠】【,】【采】【撷】【亮】【点】【,】【发】【掘】【新】【意】【。】【文】【章】【从】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【与】【一】【位】【老】【人】【的】【亲】【密】【关】【系】【说】【起】【,】【生】【动】【地】【阐】【释】【了】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【重】【要】【意】【义】【。】【人】【与】【自】【然】【和】【谐】【共】【处】【,】【这】【正】【是】【出】【于】【人】【类】【和】【自】【然】【界】【的】【动】【物】【之】【间】【彼】【此】【的】【信】【任】【。】【作】【者】【能】【从】【生】【活】【中】【的】【情】【景】【生】【发】【出】【自】【己】【对】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【理】【解】【与】【感】【悟】【,】【取】【材】【角】【度】【也】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【,】【令】【人】【叹】【服】【。】【此】【外】【,】【文】【章】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【感】【人】【,】【语】【言】【表】【现】【力】【强】【,】【给】【人】【以】【极】【强】【的】【感】【染】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】集约用地【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【第】【一】【次】【来】【到】【这】【个】【陌】【生】【的】【地】【方】【—】【—】【日】【本】【北】【海】【道】【。】【第】【一】【次】【踏】【着】【冰】【雪】【出】【行】【。】【第】【一】【次】【在】【异】【国】【他】【乡】【感】【到】【别】【样】【的】【温】【暖】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【北】【海】【道】【位】【于】【日】【本】【最】【北】【端】【,】【气】【候】【寒】【冷】【,】【常】【年】【被】【冰】【雪】【所】【覆】【盖】【。】【在】【这】【里】【,】【见】【到】【了】【对】【我】【来】【说】【比】【较】【陌】【生】【的】【—】【—】【雪】【。】【好】【大】【的】【雪】【啊】【!】【天】【空】【中】【仿】【佛】【有】【个】【巨】【大】【的】【雪】【球】【正】【在】【崩】【塌】【,】【如】【鹅】【毛】【般】【的】【雪】【瞬】【间】【倒】【下】【,】【在】【银】【装】【素】【裹】【的】【大】【地】【上】【泼】【洒】【。】【好】【厚】【的】【雪】【啊】【!】【层】【层】【厚】【实】【的】【白】【雪】【压】【弯】【了】【枝】【条】【,】【铺】【满】【了】【大】【道】【,】【给】【房】【屋】【穿】【上】【了】【白】【袄】【。】【此】【时】【的】【北】【海】【道】【像】【一】【位】【恬】【静】【的】【姑】【娘】【,】【雪】【花】【给】【她】【画】【上】【了】【淡】【淡】【的】【妆】【。】【四】【周】【寂】【静】【无】【声】【,】【我】【仿】【佛】【都】【能】【听】【见】【雪】【花】【纷】【飞】【的】【声】【响】【。】【站】【在】【冰】【天】【雪】【地】【中】【,】【任】【凭】【雪】【粒】【胡】【乱】【地】【打】【在】【我】【脸】【上】【。】【久】【了】【,】【感】【到】【身】【体】【僵】【硬】【,】【连】【呼】【出】【的】【气】【都】【快】【冻】【成】【了】【冰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【雪】【越】【来】【越】【大】【了】【,】【棉】【絮】【般】【的】【雪】【花】【疯】【狂】【地】【漫】【天】【飞】【舞】【,】【北】【风】【咆】【哮】【,】【气】【温】【也】【骤】【然】【下】【降】【。】【我】【们】【也】【无】【暇】【再】【欣】【赏】【雪】【景】【,】【只】【想】【回】【到】【屋】【内】【暖】【和】【暖】【和】【身】【体】【。】【当】【时】【我】【们】【在】【小】【樽】【县】【的】【郊】【外】【,】【周】【围】【都】【没】【饭】【店】【,】【导】【游】【只】【好】【敲】【开】【一】【户】【人】【家】【的】【门】【。】【说】【明】【来】【意】【后】【,】【屋】【子】【的】【主】【人】【,】【一】【个】【和】【蔼】【的】【老】【太】【太】【微】【笑】【着】【把】【我】【们】【请】【进】【了】【屋】【。】【没】【想】【到】【日】【本】【人】【民】【这】【么】【好】【客】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【额】【角】【还】【沾】【着】【些】【雪】【,】【星】【星】【点】【点】【,】【细】【细】【碎】【碎】【。】【进】【了】【屋】【,】【里】【面】【温】【暖】【如】【春】【,】【这】【些】【雪】【粒】【立】【刻】【融】【成】【晶】【莹】【的】【水】【滴】【。】【老】【人】【给】【我】【们】【每】【人】【斟】【一】【杯】【热】【茶】【,】【并】【用】【日】【语】【飞】【快】【地】【说】【着】【些】【什】【么】【。】【听】【导】【游】【说】【,】【老】【人】【让】【我】【们】【再】【留】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【外】【面】【风】【雪】【太】【大】【了】【。】【热】【茶】【缓】【缓】【地】【滑】【入】【了】【我】【的】【喉】【咙】【,】【温】【暖】【了】【我】【的】【身】【体】【;】【那】【句】【话】【也】【印】【在】【我】【脑】【海】【中】【,】【温】【暖】【了】【我】【的】【心】【。】【再】【抬】【头】【看】【看】【那】【位】【老】【太】【太】【,】【笑】【容】【可】【掬】【地】【望】【着】【我】【们】【,】【我】【也】【报】【以】【一】【抹】【甜】【甜】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【面】【的】【雪】【好】【像】【小】【了】【,】【风】【也】【不】【再】【剧】【烈】【地】【呼】【啸】【。】【我】【们】【准】【备】【起】【身】【告】【辞】【,】【老】【人】【一】【直】【送】【我】【们】【到】【门】【口】【,】【用】【日】【语】【向】【我】【们】【说】【再】【见】【。】【我】【们】【一】【行】【人】【也】【向】【她】【挥】【挥】【手】【。】【走】【了】【一】【段】【路】【后】【,】【回】【头】【惊】【讶】【地】【发】【现】【老】【人】【还】【站】【在】【那】【里】【,】【目】【送】【我】【们】【远】【离】【,】【还】【不】【停】【挥】【手】【道】【别】【。】【我】【猛】【然】【发】【现】【,】【这】【个】【地】【方】【似】【乎】【并】【不】【陌】【生】【,】【让】【我】【感】【到】【了】【回】【归】【故】【乡】【的】【亲】【切】【和】【暖】【意】【。】【直】【到】【走】【了】【很】【远】【,】【还】【能】【隐】【隐】【约】【约】【看】【到】【一】【个】【渺】【小】【的】【身】【影】【立】【在】【门】【口】【。】【眼】【前】【顿】【时】【模】【糊】【了】【,】【只】【有】【白】【茫】【茫】【的】【一】【片】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【至】【今】【忘】【不】【了】【,】【忘】【不】【了】【北】【海】【道】【冰】【天】【雪】【地】【的】【世】【界】【,】【忘】【不】【了】【热】【情】【好】【客】【的】【日】【本】【人】【民】【。】【我】【们】【之】【间】【虽】【然】【语】【言】【不】【通】【,】【但】【我】【们】【的】【心】【灵】【是】【相】【连】【的】【。】【我】【们】【是】【不】【同】【国】【籍】【的】【人】【,】【但】【我】【们】【真】【诚】【相】【待】【,】【没】【有】【隔】【阂】【,】【用】【热】【情】【温】【暖】【他】【人】【,】【构】【成】【真】【正】【和】【谐】【的】【世】【界】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【次】【的】【旅】【行】【,】【让】【我】【明】【白】【,】【有】【一】【种】【力】【量】【,】【能】【使】【再】【厚】【的】【冰】【雪】【消】【融】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【曹】【刚】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【僧】【师】【徒】【取】【得】【真】【经】【修】【成】【正】【果】【,】【便】【分】【手】【各】【奔】【前】【程】【;】【师】【徒】【分】【了】【行】【李】【,】【在】【五】【指】【山】【话】【别】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沙】【僧】【挑】【着】【行】【李】【要】【回】【流】【沙】【河】【,】【心】【想】【取】【经】【十】【四】【年】【,】【流】【沙】【河】【如】【今】【是】【怎】【番】【境】【地】【?】【沙】【僧】【一】【路】【回】【想】【着】【流】【沙】【河】【的】【美】【丽】【景】【象】【,】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【便】【到】【了】【河】【边】【。】【沙】【僧】【一】【看】【河】【水】【,】【两】【腿】【一】【软】【就】【瘫】【坐】【在】【地】【上】【。】【原】【来】【,】【昔】【日】【清】【澈】【明】【丽】【的】【流】【沙】【河】【如】【今】【已】【经】【变】【成】【了】【一】【条】【臭】【水】【河】【,】【河】【水】【黑】【得】【比】【墨】【汁】【还】【正】【宗】【。】【走】【到】【近】【处】【,】【更】【是】【令】【人】【难】【以】【忍】【受】【,】【河】【里】【垃】【圾】【成】【堆】【,】【臭】【气】【熏】【天】【,】【令】【人】【作】【呕】【。】【沙】【僧】【怀】【疑】【自】【己】【搞】【错】【了】【,】【一】【问】【才】【知】【道】【的】【确】【是】【如】【假】【包】【换】【的】【流】【沙】【河】【。】【原】【来】【近】【几】【年】【村】【民】【们】【兴】【建】【了】【很】【多】【工】【厂】【,】【为】【了】【省】【钱】【,】【工】【业】【污】【水】【不】【经】【治】【理】【就】【随】【意】【排】【入】【河】【中】【,】【污】【染】【了】【河】【水】【,】【再】【加】【上】【人】【们】【不】【注】【重】【生】【活】【环】【保】【,】【垃】【圾】【到】【处】【乱】【扔】【,】【更】【加】【速】【了】【流】【沙】【河】【环】【境】【的】【恶】【化】【。】【沙】【僧】【面】【对】【此】【情】【此】【景】【,】【无】【可】【奈】【何】【。】【心】【想】【,】【事】【到】【如】【今】【,】【只】【能】【去】【投】【奔】【二】【师】【兄】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【猪】【八】【戒】【是】【提】【着】【酒】【肉】【回】【高】【老】【庄】【的】【,】【一】【路】【上】【兴】【奋】【得】【自】【言】【自】【语】【:】【自】【从】【取】【经】【以】【来】【,】【老】【猪】【没】【少】【吃】【苦】【,】【跟】【着】【师】【傅】【忍】【饥】【挨】【饿】【,】【腰】【都】【不】【知】【瘦】【了】【多】【少】【圈】【,】【回】【高】【老】【庄】【可】【要】【好】【好】【补】【补】【,】【也】【不】【知】【高】【小】【姐】【惦】【记】【着】【俺】【老】【猪】【没】【!】【当】【八】【戒】【满】【怀】【希】【望】【奔】【到】【高】【老】【庄】【时】【,】【眼】【前】【出】【现】【的】【却】【是】【一】【座】【荒】【村】【,】【连】【高】【小】【姐】【影】【子】【都】【没】【有】【。】【八】【戒】【想】【:】【莫】【不】【是】【走】【错】【了】【路】【?】【可】【这】【高】【老】【庄】【的】【路】【俺】【老】【猪】【可】【是】【走】【了】【无】【数】【遭】【,】【不】【应】【该】【啊】【。】【思】【量】【再】【三】【,】【八】【戒】【决】【定】【出】【庄】【打】【听】【一】【下】【。】【刚】【走】【出】【庄】【外】【,】【便】【看】【见】【许】【多】【逃】【难】【的】【村】【民】【。】【村】【民】【们】【纷】【纷】【向】【八】【戒】【诉】【苦】【:】【“】【现】【在】【人】【们】【不】【停】【地】【办】【工】【厂】【,】【却】【忽】【视】【环】【境】【保】【护】【,】【大】【量】【有】【害】【气】【体】【排】【入】【空】【气】【中】【,】【造】【成】【大】【气】【污】【染】【。】【前】【不】【久】【下】【了】【一】【场】【酸】【雨】【,】【树】【木】【都】【死】【了】【,】【房】【屋】【也】【被】【腐】【蚀】【了】【,】【很】【多】【人】【得】【了】【莫】【名】【其】【妙】【的】【怪】【病】【。】【现】【在】【我】【们】【都】【赶】【着】【去】【外】【乡】【逃】【难】【,】【你】【也】【快】【走】【吧】【!】【”】【八】【戒】【想】【,】【干】【脆】【去】【流】【沙】【河】【找】【老】【沙】【打】【顿】【牙】【祭】【再】【作】【打】【算】【。】【走】【到】【半】【路】【正】【好】【碰】【见】【沙】【僧】【,】【师】【兄】【弟】【见】【面】【,】【互】【相】【诉】【苦】【,】【吐】【了】【一】【阵】【苦】【水】【后】【,】【二】【人】【相】【约】【去】【花】【果】【山】【找】【孙】【悟】【空】【想】【办】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【孙】【悟】【空】【驾】【着】【筋】【斗】【云】【回】【花】【果】【山】【,】【一】【路】【上】【也】【是】【心】【花】【怒】【放】【。】【悟】【空】【想】【:】【俺】【老】【孙】【终】【于】【可】【以】【回】【来】【继】【续】【做】【美】【猴】【王】【了】【…】【…】【想】【着】【想】【着】【,】【忽】【听】【猴】【儿】【们】【喊】【救】【命】【的】【声】【音】【。】【悟】【空】【大】【惊】【:】【哪】【个】【小】【妖】【?】【敢】【趁】【俺】【老】【孙】【取】【经】【之】【际】【来】【我】【花】【果】【山】【撒】【野】【?】【孙】【悟】【空】【降】【下】【云】【端】【,】【猴】【子】【猴】【孙】【们】【便】【纷】【纷】【围】【过】【来】【七】【嘴】【八】【舌】【大】【喊】【:】【“】【孙】【爷】【爷】【救】【命】【!】【大】【王】【救】【命】【!】【”】【孙】【悟】【空】【一】【看】【花】【果】【山】【,】【不】【禁】【大】【发】【雷】【霆】【。】【昔】【日】【鸟】【语】【花】【香】【、】【莺】【歌】【燕】【舞】【的】【花】【果】【山】【竟】【变】【成】【了】【一】【座】【光】【秃】【秃】【的】【荒】【山】【,】【水】【帘】【洞】【的】【瀑】【布】【也】【干】【了】【。】【猴】【子】【们】【纷】【纷】【诉】【苦】【:】【“】【这】【些】【年】【来】【,】【人】【们】【大】【量】【砍】【伐】【树】【木】【,】【水】【土】【流】【失】【严】【重】【,】【花】【果】【山】【早】【已】【寸】【草】【不】【生】【了】【,】【在】【花】【果】【山】【栖】【息】【的】【小】【动】【物】【都】【逃】【走】【了】【,】【我】【们】【是】【为】【了】【等】【大】【王】【回】【来】【才】【留】【在】【花】【果】【山】【的】【。】【”】【悟】【空】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【儿】【们】【莫】【哭】【,】【让】【我】【想】【想】【办】【法】【,】【等】【俺】【老】【孙】【把】【沙】【师】【弟】【和】【八】【戒】【找】【来】【商】【量】【商】【量】【。】【”】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【,】【沙】【僧】【和】【八】【戒】【正】【好】【赶】【到】【,】【边】【跑】【边】【叫】【:】【“】【师】【兄】【,】【我】【们】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【周】【立】【红】【江】【雪】【连】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】集约用地【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【主】【题】【导】【引】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【中】【学】【生】【正】【生】【活】【在】【孩】【童】【和】【成】【人】【的】【夹】【缝】【之】【中】【,】【童】【年】【的】【幼】【稚】【已】【逐】【渐】【退】【却】【,】【大】【人】【们】【所】【谓】【的】【成】【熟】【离】【我】【们】【还】【太】【远】【,】【于】【是】【,】【花】【季】【走】【来】【,】【雨】【季】【走】【来】【,】【我】【们】【心】【中】【的】【烦】【恼】【也】【就】【随】【之】【而】【来】【。】【有】【道】【是】【“】【人】【生】【不】【如】【意】【事】【十】【有】【八】【九】【”】【。】【其】【实】【有】【烦】【恼】【并】【不】【可】【怕】【,】【关】【键】【是】【要】【正】【确】【对】【待】【它】【。】【罗】【曼】【·】【罗】【兰】【说】【得】【好】【:】【“】【人】【生】【是】【艰】【苦】【的】【,】【不】【甘】【于】【平】【凡】【庸】【俗】【的】【人】【,】【那】【是】【莫】【把】【烦】【恼】【放】【心】【上】【,】【免】【得】【白】【了】【少】【年】【头】【,】【莫】【把】【烦】【恼】【放】【心】【上】【,】【免】【得】【未】【老】【先】【丧】【生】【。】【”】【烦】【恼】【是】【大】【海】【中】【的】【一】【滴】【水】【,】【但】【是】【它】【可】【以】【折】【射】【出】【太】【阳】【的】【光】【彩】【。】【从】【现】【在】【起】【,】【让】【我】【们】【一】【起】【清】【理】【烦】【恼】【,】【化】【解】【烦】【恼】【,】【消】【除】【烦】【恼】【,】【带】【着】【多】【彩】【的】【梦】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【,】【相】【信】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【、】【我】【们】【的】【明】【天】【会】【更】【加】【灿】【烂】【、】【更】【加】【美】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【跟】【踪】【训】【练】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【总】【会】【有】【风】【雨】【,】【成】【长】【总】【会】【有】【烦】【恼】【。】【刚】【刚】【步】【入】【少】【年】【旅】【途】【的】【中】【学】【生】【,】【随】【着】【年】【龄】【的】【增】【长】【,】【青】【春】【意】【识】【的】【萌】【发】【,】【幼】【稚】【与】【成】【熟】【并】【存】【,】【烦】【恼】【与】【快】【乐】【共】【增】【,】【你】【是】【不】【是】【有】【这】【样】【的】【体】【验】【呢】【?】【请】【把】【你】【遇】【到】【的】【烦】【恼】【列】【个】【清】【单】【,】【选】【择】【自】【己】【最】【苦】【恼】【的】【一】【件】【事】【或】【几】【件】【事】【,】【仔】【细】【作】【些】【分】【析】【,】【争】【取】【给】【你】【的】【烦】【恼】【画】【上】【一】【个】【句】【号】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【成】【长】【的】【烦】【恼】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【立】【意】【自】【定】【,】【文】【体】【自】【选】【,】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【写】【作】【点】【拨】【:】【写】【好】【这】【道】【题】【,】【一】【般】【说】【来】【要】【着】【重】【注】【意】【三】【点】【:】【首】【先】【,】【立】【意】【深】【刻】【,】【启】【人】【心】【智】【。】【面】【对】【成】【长】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【同】【学】【们】【不】【妨】【扪】【心】【自】【问】【,】【自】【我】【解】【剖】【:】【是】【个】【性】【的】【弱】【点】【还】【是】【外】【在】【的】【重】【压】【;】【是】【孝】【顺】【与】【叛】【逆】【的】【矛】【盾】【还】【是】【理】【想】【与】【现】【实】【的】【冲】【突】【;】【是】【缺】【少】【关】【爱】【的】【孤】【独】【还】【是】【远】【离】【朋】【友】【的】【寂】【寞】【…】【…】【在】【反】【思】【之】【中】【我】【们】【就】【会】【发】【现】【:】【幼】【稚】【与】【成】【熟】【并】【存】【,】【烦】【恼】【与】【快】【乐】【共】【增】【,】【只】【要】【我】【们】【坚】【强】【乐】【观】【,】【阳】【光】【总】【在】【风】【雨】【后】【。】【笔】【者】【以】【为】【,】【同】【学】【们】【只】【有】【跳】【出】【烦】【恼】【,】【才】【能】【从】【追】【溯】【其】【缘】【由】【中】【真】【正】【明】【白】【这】【一】【道】【理】【。】【构】【思】【时】【,】【不】【仅】【要】【写】【出】【自】【我】【愁】【绪】【的】【个】【性】【体】【验】【,】【还】【应】【深】【刻】【地】【反】【映】【当】【代】【中】【学】【生】【烦】【恼】【之】【共】【性】【,】【由】【此】【折】【射】【出】【社】【会】【对】【我】【们】【青】【少】【年】【的】【巨】【大】【影】【响】【,】【从】【而】【让】【自】【我】【走】【出】【烦】【恼】【的】【历】【程】【发】【人】【深】【省】【,】【让】【人】【读】【来】【深】【受】【教】【益】【。】【其】【次】【,】【巧】【选】【角】【度】【,】【抒】【写】【真】【情】【。】【中】【学】【生】【成】【长】【的】【烦】【恼】【类】【型】【很】【多】【,】【在】【学】【校】【,】【可】【能】【因】【为】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【好】【差】【,】【因】【为】【与】【同】【学】【的】【交】【往】【摩】【擦】【,】【因】【为】【与】【老】【师】【的】【交】【流】【产】【生】【误】【解】【而】【烦】【恼】【;】【在】【家】【中】【,】【可】【能】【因】【对】【父】【母】【教】【育】【的】【不】【理】【解】【,】【与】【兄】【弟】【姐】【妹】【的】【不】【融】【洽】【而】【烦】【恼】【。】【总】【之】【,】【成】【绩】【、】【友】【谊】【、】【家】【庭】【、】【亲】【情】【、】【贫】【穷】【、】【富】【有】【等】【等】【,】【只】【要】【是】【成】【长】【过】【程】【中】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【都】【可】【以】【成】【为】【写】【作】【的】【素】【材】【,】【在】【构】【思】【的】【过】【程】【中】【,】【应】【选】【择】【自】【己】【认】【为】【最】【郁】【闷】【、】【最】【烦】【恼】【的】【一】【件】【事】【或】【几】【件】【事】【来】【写】【,】【以】【自】【身】【感】【悟】【为】【写】【作】【的】【出】【发】【点】【。】【再】【次】【,】【构】【思】【精】【巧】【,】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【。】【写】【烦】【恼】【可】【采】【取】【多】【种】【形】【式】【,】【可】【借】【用】【电】【影】【艺】【术】【中】【剪】【辑】【画】【面】【、】【组】【接】【镜】【头】【的】【方】【法】【来】【谋】【篇】【布】【局】【,】【可】【运】【用】【日】【记】【或】【书】【信】【来】【展】【开】【情】【节】【,】【可】【用】【问】【答】【对】【话】【法】【来】【布】【局】【,】【还】【可】【通】【篇】【在】【段】【落】【结】【构】【上】【采】【用】【排】【比】【这】【一】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【来】【组】【织】【全】【文】【等】【。】【总】【之】【,】【要】【以】【自】【我】【最】【擅】【长】【的】【方】【式】【,】【倾】【诉】【心】【中】【的】【烦】【恼】【。】【譬】【如】【,】【说】【说】【自】【我】【的】【烦】【恼】【时】【,】【可】【采】【用】【片】【断】【连】【缀】【的】【方】【法】【,】【以】【“】【烦】【忧】【如】【水】【、】【烦】【忧】【似】【酒】【、】【烦】【忧】【若】【茶】【”】【这】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【串】【联】【成】【篇】【,】【生】【动】【展】【现】【烦】【恼】【的】【情】【状】【以】【及】【走】【出】【苦】【恼】【的】【历】【程】【,】【以】【此】【抒】【发】【心】【中】【深】【沉】【的】【感】【悟】【;】【讲】【述】【家】【人】【少】【年】【时】【期】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【可】【采】【取】【访】【谈】【录】【的】【形】【式】【,】【紧】【扣】【家】【人】【烦】【恼】【的】【心】【事】【展】【开】【对】【话】【,】【透】【视】【出】【他】【们】【所】【处】【时】【代】【和】【环】【境】【,】【从】【而】【客】【观】【地】【把】【握】【住】【他】【们】【最】【真】【的】【情】【感】【体】【验】【。】【如】【果】【写】【成】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【在】【行】【文】【的】【过】【程】【中】【,】【要】【善】【于】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【,】【巧】【用】【抑】【扬】【之】【法】【,】【尤】【其】【要】【注】【重】【心】【理】【描】【写】【。】【因】【为】【人】【无】【时】【无】【刻】【不】【在】【思】【想】【,】【烦】【恼】【常】【常】【通】【过】【心】【理】【感】【受】【而】【表】【现】【在】【外】【在】【的】【行】【为】【上】【。】【所】【以】【,】【将】【自】【己】【遇】【到】【的】【苦】【恼】【、】【烦】【闷】【,】【或】【者】【无】【法】【理】【解】【和】【避】【免】【的】【事】【情】【,】【通】【过】【心】【理】【独】【白】【传】【达】【出】【来】【,】【往】【往】【会】【起】【到】【事】【半】【功】【倍】【的】【效】【果】【。】【化】【解】【朋】【友】【的】【困】【惑】【时】【,】【可】【以】【写】【成】【议】【论】【文】【,】【深】【刻】【阐】【述】【正】【视】【烦】【恼】【,】【乐】【观】【面】【对】【,】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【。】【动】【之】【以】【情】【,】【晓】【之】【以】【理】【,】【相】【互】【勉】【励】【,】【携】【手】【共】【进】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【范】【文】【示】【例】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【范】【文】【一】【:】【 】【成】【长】【的】【烦】【恼】【 】【●】【朱】【小】【华】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【星】【移】【斗】【转】【,】【岁】【月】【如】【梭】【。】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【,】【我】【已】【度】【过】【了】【十】【三】【个】【春】【秋】【。】【回】【首】【往】【事】【,】【烦】【恼】【始】【终】【伴】【随】【着】【我】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【男】【儿】【常】【常】【以】【个】【子】【高】【为】【荣】【耀】【,】【我】【当】【然】【也】【不】【例】【外】【了】【。】【我】【曾】【因】【自】【己】【的】【“】【苗】【条】【”】【而】【沾】【沾】【自】【喜】【。】【小】【学】【毕】【业】【时】【,】【我】【好】【像】【吃】【了】【“】【助】【长】【丸】【”】【似】【的】【,】【身】【子】【直】【线】【上】【蹿】【,】【横】【向】【纵】【向】【比】【例】【严】【重】【失】【调】【,】【渐】【渐】【地】【成】【了】【夏】【衍】【笔】【下】【的】【“】【芦】【柴】【棒】【”】【。】【说】【实】【话】【,】【我】【开】【始】【为】【自】【己】【的】【“】【形】【象】【”】【烦】【恼】【了】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【坚】【持】【体】【育】【锻】【炼】【,】【吃】【脂】【肪】【多】【的】【食】【物】【。】【我】【感】【觉】【好】【像】【有】【了】【成】【效】【,】【但】【那】【些】【“】【哥】【儿】【们】【”】【还】【是】【叫】【我】【“】【芦】【柴】【棒】【”】【。】【每】【当】【我】【听】【到】【这】【一】【“】【雅】【称】【”】【时】【,】【总】【不】【禁】【默】【默】【地】【问】【自】【己】【:】【为】【什】【么】【会】【长】【成】【这】【等】【模】【样】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【这】【人】【长】【相】【不】【怎】【么】【好】【,】【但】【“】【官】【运】【”】【还】【很】【亨】【通】【。】【从】【小】【组】【长】【开】【始】【,】【芝】【麻】【开】【花】【节】【节】【高】【,】【读】【初】【一】【时】【,】【居】【然】【坐】【上】【班】【级】【最】【高】【“】【行】【政】【长】【官】【”】【的】【宝】【座】【了】【。】【“】【当】【官】【不】【为】【民】【做】【主】【,】【不】【如】【回】【家】【卖】【红】【薯】【。】【”】【这】【是】【我】【的】【信】【条】【,】【所】【以】【,】【无】【论】【班】【上】【出】【了】【什】【么】【事】【,】【我】【都】【自】【认】【为】【我】【这】【当】【然】【的】【“】【法】【官】【”】【处】【理】【得】【还】【是】【公】【正】【的】【。】【但】【让】【我】【烦】【恼】【的】【是】【,】【辛】【辛】【苦】【苦】【干】【工】【作】【却】【得】【不】【到】【同】【学】【们】【的】【理】【解】【。】【这】【不】【,】【眼】【下】【就】【碰】【上】【一】【件】【事】【,】【让】【我】【烦】【恼】【万】【分】【。】【一】【次】【早】【自】【习】【,】【学】【习】【委】【员】【找】【我】【的】【“】【哥】【儿】【们】【”】【背】【书】【,】【我】【那】【“】【哥】【儿】【们】【”】【也】【许】【有】【点】【“】【狗】【仗】【人】【势】【”】【,】【加】【之】【平】【时】【就】【有】【点】【儿】【“】【目】【中】【无】【人】【”】【,】【书】【背】【不】【下】【来】【也】【罢】【了】【,】【可】【他】【倒】【好】【,】【把】【学】【习】【委】【员】【臭】【骂】【了】【一】【顿】【。】【学】【习】【委】【员】【一】【状】【告】【到】【我】【这】【里】【来】【,】【我】【犯】【难】【了】【,】【但】【最】【后】【还】【是】【批】【评】【了】【那】【个】【“】【哥】【儿】【们】【”】【。】【谁】【知】【事】【后】【,】【“】【哥】【儿】【们】【”】【与】【我】【翻】【了】【脸】【,】【说】【什】【么】【“】【官】【官】【相】【护】【”】【,】【“】【当】【了】【高】【官】【,】【认】【不】【得】【我】【们】【了】【”】【。】【亲】【爱】【的】【朋】【友】【,】【你】【说】【这】【班】【长】【好】【当】【不】【好】【当】【啊】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【做】【“】【官】【”】【难】【,】【做】【普】【通】【人】【也】【难】【,】【我】【这】【个】【人】【少】【年】【老】【成】【,】【非】【常】【固】【执】【,】【就】【凭】【这】【性】【格】【,】【与】【同】【学】【相】【处】【,】【烦】【恼】【就】【多】【了】【。】【一】【次】【,】【我】【和】【一】【个】【好】【朋】【友】【,】【忘】【了】【为】【什】【么】【事】【在】【路】【上】【发】【生】【了】【争】【执】【,】【从】【此】【,】【关】【系】【僵】【化】【了】【。】【老】【师】【教】【育】【我】【,】【我】【听】【不】【进】【去】【,】【父】【母】【批】【评】【我】【,】【又】【使】【我】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【受】【了】【委】【屈】【;】【至】【今】【,】【我】【们】【还】【是】【相】【见】【不】【语】【。】【有】【时】【,】【我】【也】【扪】【心】【自】【问】【:】【何】【不】【与】【他】【和】【好】【如】【初】【呢】【?】【但】【我】【的】【臭】【脾】【气】【,】【就】【使】【我】【不】【敢】【大】【胆】【地】【去】【填】【平】【这】【条】【“】【鸿】【沟】【”】【。】【班】【会】【课】【上】【,】【班】【主】【任】【讲】【到】【团】【结】【时】【,】【我】【总】【不】【由】【自】【主】【地】【低】【下】【了】【头】【,】【不】【过】【我】【坚】【信】【,】【这】【个】【烦】【恼】【会】【很】【快】【被】【摆】【脱】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【天】【天】【长】【大】【了】【,】【烦】【恼】【的】【事】【也】【接】【踵】【而】【来】【,】【让】【我】【困】【惑】【、】【痛】【苦】【。】【然】【而】【,】【我】【还】【是】【希】【望】【多】【一】【点】【烦】【恼】【:】【因】【为】【只】【有】【烦】【恼】【,】【才】【能】【磨】【砺】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【以】【时】【间】【为】【序】【,】【用】【较】【幽】【默】【诙】【谐】【的】【语】【言】【,】【叙】【写】【了】【自】【己】【成】【长】【过】【程】【中】【的】【三】【件】【烦】【恼】【之】【事】【。】【这】【三】【件】【事】【,】【选】【材】【时】【各】【有】【侧】【重】【,】【有】【的】【是】【外】【表】【形】【象】【带】【来】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【有】【的】【是】【工】【作】【带】【来】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【有】【的】【是】【同】【学】【之】【间】【相】【处】【带】【来】【的】【烦】【恼】【。】【所】【选】【的】【这】【些】【材】【料】【都】【有】【一】【定】【的】【典】【型】【性】【,】【最】【后】【以】【“】【因】【为】【只】【有】【烦】【恼】【,】【才】【能】【磨】【砺】【人】【”】【作】【结】【,】【给】【人】【以】【启】【迪】【,】【进】【一】【步】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【范】【文】【二】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【成】【长】【的】【烦】【恼】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【佚】【名】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【什】【么】【时】【候】【,】【“】【成】【长】【”】【和】【“】【烦】【恼】【”】【这】【两】【个】【词】【被】【组】【合】【了】【起】【来】【,】【让】【我】【一】【见】【这】【个】【题】【目】【就】【有】【无】【限】【的】【感】【慨】【要】【倾】【诉】【,】【有】【一】【肚】【子】【的】【牢】【骚】【要】【发】【泄】【,】【有】【一】【堆】【的】【惆】【怅】【要】【吐】【露】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【的】【一】【生】【是】【一】【次】【从】【头】【至】【尾】【的】【成】【长】【。】【不】【知】【道】【“】【烦】【恼】【”】【是】【不】【是】【可】【数】【名】【词】【,】【如】【果】【是】【的】【话】【,】【我】【认】【为】【用】【1】【 】【0】【2】【4】【这】【个】【数】【量】【级】【,】【也】【不】【为】【过】【。】【辛】【弃】【疾】【说】【:】【“】【少】【年】【不】【识】【愁】【滋】【味】【。】【”】【也】【许】【,】【他】【老】【人】【家】【那】【个】【时】【代】【的】【少】【年】【们】【是】【无】【忧】【无】【虑】【的】【,】【却】【将】【一】【连】【串】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【统】【统】【留】【给】【了】【我】【们】【。】【烦】【恼】【成】【了】【我】【们】【的】【家】【常】【便】【饭】【。】【考】【试】【、】【作】【业】【、】【练】【习】【没】【完】【没】【了】【地】【向】【我】【袭】【来】【,】【无】【数】【的】【已】【知】【、】【求】【证】【、】【证】【明】【、】【解】【答】【等】【着】【我】【。】【下】【面】【是】【我】【近】【几】【个】【月】【来】【的】【“】【习】【题】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【习】【题】【一】【—】【—】【已】【知】【:】【已】【是】【北】【京】【时】【间】【2】【2】【点】【5】【9】【分】【,】【有】【高】【近】【1】【米】【,】【重】【近】【1】【吨】【的】【习】【题】【在】【等】【着】【我】【,】【但】【我】【的】【身】【躯】【已】【没】【有】【力】【气】【再】【直】【立】【了】【,】【大】【脑】【提】【醒】【我】【去】【睡】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【求】【:】【是】【否】【要】【将】【习】【题】【做】【完】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【解】【:】【我】【去】【睡】【觉】【了】【。】【不】【行】【,】【不】【行】【。】【想】【象】【一】【下】【,】【如】【果】【我】【不】【将】【作】【业】【做】【完】【,】【明】【天】【老】【师】【会】【用】【怎】【样】【的】【脸】【色】【、】【眼】【神】【看】【我】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【会】【怎】【样】【待】【我】【?】【我】【又】【会】【落】【得】【怎】【样】【的】【下】【场】【?】【早】【知】【有】【现】【在】【,】【我】【怎】【么】【会】【中】【午】【去】【踢】【球】【呢】【?】【可】【是】【我】【还】【没】【长】【大】【,】【还】【是】【个】【孩】【子】【嘛】【,】【哪】【有】【不】【玩】【之】【理】【?】【我】【首】【先】【是】【个】【孩】【子】【,】【然】【后】【才】【是】【学】【生】【!】【睡】【吧】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【批】【阅】【:】【你】【想】【什】【么】【呢】【!】【快】【起】【来】【做】【习】【题】【。】【谁】【叫】【你】【中】【午】【去】【踢】【球】【了】【!】【你】【首】【先】【是】【个】【学】【生】【,】【其】【次】【才】【是】【个】【孩】【子】【,】【而】【且】【是】【个】【大】【孩】【子】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【批】【阅】【者】【:】【妈】【妈】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【订】【正】【:】【做】【吧】【。】【“】【苦】【海】【”】【无】【边】【!】【我】【要】【是】【不】【长】【大】【,】【那】【有】【多】【好】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【习】【题】【二】【—】【—】【已】【知】【:】【去】【年】【做】【的】【衣】【服】【今】【年】【已】【经】【不】【能】【再】【穿】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【求】【证】【:】【我】【已】【经】【长】【大】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【证】【明】【:】【去】【年】【的】【衣】【服】【不】【能】【再】【穿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【个】【儿】【比】【去】【年】【高】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【在】【长】【大】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【结】【论】【:】【我】【的】【的】【确】【确】【在】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【批】【阅】【:】【光】【长】【个】【子】【,】【不】【长】【脑】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【批】【阅】【者】【:】【爸】【爸】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【答】【:】【我】【不】【要】【长】【大】【,】【但】【又】【不】【得】【不】【长】【大】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【习】【题】【三】【—】【—】【已】【知】【:】【每】【天】【七】【节】【课】【,】【有】【时】【还】【要】【加】【课】【,】【读】【过】【的】【书】【、】【做】【过】【的】【练】【习】【题】【不】【下】【几】【百】【册】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【求】【:】【成】【长】【是】【好】【是】【坏】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【解】【:】【一】【天】【七】【节】【课】【,】【每】【节】【课】【四】【十】【分】【钟】【,】【每】【周】【上】【五】【天】【,】【一】【个】【学】【期】【二】【十】【周】【,】【我】【花】【了】【那】【么】【多】【时】【间】【,】【我】【学】【会】【了】【什】【么】【?】【(】【1】【)】【我】【会】【讲】【英】【语】【;】【(】【2】【)】【我】【会】【解】【方】【程】【;】【(】【3】【)】【我】【会】【解】【三】【角】【;】【(】【4】【)】【我】【会】【几】【何】【证】【明】【;】【(】【5】【)】【我】【会】【打】【字】【;】【(】【6】【)】【我】【会】【用】【电】【脑】【;】【(】【7】【)】【我】【会】【阅】【读】【文】【章】【;】【(】【8】【)】【我】【会】【写】【文】【章】【;】【(】【9】【)】【我】【会】【画】【图】【;】【(】【1】【0】【)】【我】【会】【各】【类】【绘】【画】【;】【(】【1】【1】【)】【我】【会】【欣】【赏】【音】【乐】【;】【(】【1】【2】【)】【我】【会】【木】【工】【;】【(】【1】【3】【)】【我】【会】【电】【工】【等】【等】【。】【看】【来】【我】【没】【有】【浪】【费】【时】【间】【。】【而】【十】【年】【前】【,】【我】【只】【会】【吃】【、】【喝】【、】【拉】【、】【撒】【、】【睡】【,】【还】【有】【调】【皮】【捣】【蛋】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【按】【此】【推】【算】【,】【十】【年】【后】【,】【我】【至】【少】【是】【个】【大】【学】【生】【,】【兴】【许】【成】【为】【一】【个】【什】【么】【“】【家】【”】【,】【什】【么】【教】【授】【,】【什】【么】【博】【士】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【没】【有】【白】【长】【大】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【结】【论】【:】【成】【长】【还】【是】【好】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【批】【阅】【:】【我】【要】【快】【快】【长】【大】【,】【烦】【恼】【我】【不】【怕】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【批】【阅】【者】【:】【我】【自】【己】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【要】【说】【:】【“】【少】【年】【不】【知】【愁】【滋】【味】【!】【少】【年】【不】【畏】【愁】【滋】【味】【!】【成】【长】【的】【烦】【恼】【不】【烦】【恼】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【的】【最】【大】【特】【点】【是】【构】【思】【新】【颖】【,】【亮】【人】【眼】【眸】【。】【作】【者】【运】【用】【证】【明】【几】【何】【题】【的】【步】【骤】【和】【形】【式】【,】【真】【实】【而】【有】【趣】【地】【叙】【述】【了】【“】【成】【长】【的】【烦】【恼】【”】【,】【使】【普】【通】【的】【题】【材】【变】【得】【很】【有】【创】【意】【,】【同】【时】【省】【去】【了】【层】【次】【之】【间】【过】【多】【的】【叙】【述】【语】【言】【,】【一】【目】【了】【然】【,】【读】【来】【颇】【有】【新】【鲜】【别】【致】【之】【感】【。】【文】【末】【“】【少】【年】【不】【知】【愁】【滋】【味】【!】【少】【年】【不】【畏】【愁】【滋】【味】【!】【成】【长】【的】【烦】【恼】【不】【烦】【恼】【”】【一】【句】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【健】【康】【乐】【观】【的】【心】【态】【,】【进】【一】【步】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朋】【友】【如】【醇】【酒】【,】【味】【浓】【而】【易】【醉】【;】【朋】【友】【如】【花】【香】【,】【淡】【雅】【且】【芬】【芳】【;】【朋】【友】【如】【秋】【雨】【,】【细】【腻】【而】【又】【满】【怀】【诗】【意】【。】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【季】【轮】【回】【,】【花】【开】【花】【落】【,】【生】【活】【于】【人】【世】【间】【,】【人】【并】【不】【是】【孤】【独】【的】【,】【因】【为】【除】【了】【父】【母】【之】【外】【,】【每】【个】【人】【的】【身】【边】【都】【会】【有】【许】【多】【朋】【友】【。】【正】【因】【为】【有】【朋】【友】【,】【才】【让】【我】【们】【感】【受】【到】【人】【世】【间】【的】【美】【好】【情】【感】【,】【才】【使】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【不】【再】【那】【么】【单】【调】【,】【绽】【放】【出】【耀】【眼】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【友】【谊】【是】【一】【首】【歌】【,】【而】【朋】【友】【就】【是】【这】【首】【歌】【的】【主】【旋】【律】【,】【这】【首】【歌】【并】【不】【是】【人】【人】【都】【会】【唱】【,】【而】【是】【要】【用】【心】【去】【倾】【听】【,】【用】【爱】【去】【维】【护】【的】【,】【有】【的】【人】【把】【它】【唱】【成】【了】【千】【古】【佳】【话】【,】【就】【像】【俞】【伯】【牙】【与】【钟】【子】【期】【,】【通】【过】【琴】【声】【来】【传】【递】【友】【情】【;】【而】【有】【的】【人】【却】【把】【它】【唱】【成】【了】【咒】【语】【,】【在】【他】【们】【的】【心】【中】【,】【只】【有】【对】【朋】【友】【的】【怨】【恨】【与】【不】【满】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【其】【他】【事】【物】【一】【样】【,】【友】【情】【的】【表】【现】【形】【式】【是】【多】【种】【多】【样】【的】【,】【世】【间】【有】【多】【少】【份】【友】【谊】【,】【就】【有】【多】【少】【种】【表】【现】【形】【式】【。】【有】【时】【,】【友】【谊】【像】【大】【海】【,】【只】【有】【波】【澜】【壮】【阔】【之】【时】【,】【才】【会】【展】【现】【出】【它】【的】【力】【量】【;】【有】【时】【,】【友】【谊】【像】【一】【泓】【湖】【水】【,】【看】【似】【风】【平】【浪】【静】【,】【其】【实】【,】【那】【深】【不】【可】【测】【的】【湖】【底】【,】【有】【着】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【宝】【藏】【;】【有】【时】【,】【友】【谊】【像】【一】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【波】【澜】【不】【惊】【,】【却】【有】【着】【自】【己】【流】【动】【的】【方】【向】【,】【悄】【悄】【地】【滋】【润】【着】【人】【们】【的】【心】【田】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【看】【过】【这】【样】【一】【则】【故】【事】【:】【公】【元】【前】【4】【世】【纪】【,】【在】【意】【大】【利】【,】【有】【一】【个】【名】【叫】【皮】【斯】【的】【青】【年】【因】【为】【冒】【犯】【了】【国】【王】【,】【而】【被】【判】【处】【死】【刑】【。】【临】【死】【前】【,】【皮】【斯】【想】【回】【家】【见】【母】【亲】【最】【后】【一】【面】【,】【国】【王】【答】【应】【了】【,】【但】【条】【件】【是】【必】【须】【要】【有】【人】【替】【他】【坐】【牢】【,】【直】【到】【他】【回】【来】【为】【止】【。】【这】【是】【一】【个】【看】【似】【简】【单】【其】【实】【近】【乎】【不】【可】【能】【实】【现】【的】【条】【件】【,】【有】【谁】【肯】【冒】【着】【生】【命】【危】【险】【去】【替】【别】【人】【坐】【牢】【呢】【?】【可】【就】【有】【人】【不】【怕】【死】【,】【他】【就】【是】【皮】【斯】【的】【朋】【友】【达】【蒙】【。】【就】【在】【达】【蒙】【将】【被】【押】【送】【刑】【场】【的】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【皮】【斯】【也】【没】【有】【回】【来】【,】【人】【们】【都】【为】【达】【蒙】【惋】【惜】【并】【且】【大】【骂】【皮】【斯】【,】【就】【在】【达】【蒙】【即】【将】【被】【行】【刑】【的】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【广】【场】【上】【空】【传】【来】【了】【一】【阵】【高】【呼】【:】【“】【等】【一】【等】【,】【我】【回】【来】【了】【!】【”】【众】【人】【循】【声】【望】【去】【,】【原】【来】【是】【皮】【斯】【。】【皮】【斯】【在】【达】【蒙】【即】【将】【被】【处】【死】【的】【那】【一】【刻】【回】【来】【了】【。】【这】【真】【是】【人】【世】【间】【最】【感】【人】【的】【一】【幕】【,】【连】【国】【王】【也】【被】【感】【动】【了】【,】【他】【释】【放】【了】【达】【蒙】【,】【原】【谅】【了】【皮】【斯】【,】【并】【且】【奖】【励】【了】【他】【们】【一】【笔】【钱】【财】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【个】【绝】【对】【真】【实】【并】【且】【令】【人】【震】【撼】【的】【故】【事】【,】【达】【蒙】【与】【皮】【斯】【用】【生】【命】【谱】【写】【了】【一】【曲】【感】【天】【动】【地】【的】【友】【谊】【之】【歌】【。】【正】【是】【朋】【友】【的】【真】【诚】【与】【信】【任】【,】【让】【皮】【斯】【在】【生】【存】【与】【友】【谊】【之】【间】【做】【出】【了】【正】【确】【的】【选】【择】【,】【也】【正】【是】【出】【于】【对】【朋】【友】【的】【真】【诚】【与】【信】【任】【,】【才】【使】【达】【蒙】【心】【甘】【情】【愿】【地】【冒】【着】【生】【命】【危】【险】【去】【帮】【助】【自】【己】【的】【朋】【友】【实】【现】【愿】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【就】【像】【一】【条】【河】【,】【里】【面】【流】【淌】【着】【一】【种】【叫】【做】【友】【情】【的】【物】【质】【。】【拥】【有】【友】【情】【的】【人】【们】【就】【像】【水】【里】【的】【鱼】【儿】【一】【样】【尽】【情】【畅】【游】【其】【中】【。】【失】【去】【了】【友】【情】【的】【人】【生】【,】【就】【像】【没】【有】【水】【的】【河】【流】【,】【干】【枯】【而】【没】【有】【色】【彩】【。】【我】【们】【每】【一】【个】【人】【都】【不】【知】【道】【会】【在】【什】【么】【时】【候】【遇】【上】【怎】【样】【的】【困】【难】【,】【但】【值】【得】【欣】【慰】【的】【是】【,】【在】【我】【们】【身】【边】【,】【总】【有】【一】【些】【朋】【友】【,】【为】【我】【们】【分】【担】【忧】【愁】【,】【化】【忧】【解】【难】【,】【所】【以】【,】【我】【们】【应】【当】【感】【谢】【这】【些】【朋】【友】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【友】【情】【是】【可】【以】【穿】【越】【时】【空】【的】【。】【在】【时】【光】【的】【流】【逝】【中】【,】【友】【情】【就】【如】【陈】【年】【老】【酒】【一】【样】【愈】【久】【愈】【香】【。】【正】【是】【在】【友】【情】【的】【不】【断】【变】【换】【之】【中】【,】【我】【们】【才】【充】【分】【体】【会】【到】【人】【世】【间】【的】【美】【好】【情】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【怀】【着】【一】【颗】【永】【远】【感】【恩】【的】【心】【面】【对】【身】【边】【的】【每】【一】【个】【朋】【友】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【生】【活】【并】【不】【都】【是】【肮】【脏】【污】【浊】【的】【。】【其】【实】【,】【生】【活】【中】【充】【满】【了】【美】【丽】【与】【温】【暖】【,】【因】【为】【我】【们】【有】【朋】【友】【、】【有】【友】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【们】【怀】【着】【一】【颗】【感】【恩】【的】【心】【,】【搭】【一】【间】【友】【情】【的】【小】【屋】【,】【给】【朋】【友】【足】【够】【的】【空】【间】【,】【让】【每】【个】【人】【都】【可】【以】【舒】【舒】【服】【服】【地】【住】【在】【里】【面】【,】【那】【么】【,】【你】【会】【收】【获】【更】【多】【的】【友】【谊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】集约用地【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【开】【栏】【语】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【择】【典】【型】【、】【新】【颖】【、】【精】【炼】【的】【材】【料】【是】【中】【考】【作】【文】【制】【胜】【的】【又】【一】【绝】【招】【。】【然】【而】【有】【许】【多】【考】【场】【作】【文】【常】【常】【呈】【现】【下】【列】【问】【题】【:】【一】【是】【材】【料】【贫】【乏】【,】【内】【容】【干】【瘪】【;】【二】【是】【材】【料】【平】【庸】【,】【缺】【少】【个】【性】【;】【三】【是】【材】【料】【虚】【假】【,】【违】【背】【常】【理】【;】【四】【是】【游】【离】【中】【心】【,】【不】【合】【主】【旨】【。】【选】【材】【不】【准】【、】【不】【实】【、】【不】【新】【,】【就】【会】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【不】【理】【不】【睬】【。】【因】【此】【,】【我】【们】【只】【有】【走】【进】【生】【活】【,】【慧】【眼】【识】【珠】【,】【采】【撷】【亮】【点】【,】【发】【掘】【新】【意】【,】【才】【能】【写】【出】【具】【有】【创】【意】【的】【美】【文】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【创】【新】【技】【巧】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【考】【作】【文】【一】【定】【要】【捕】【捉】【住】【生】【活】【中】【的】【精】【彩】【,】【具】【备】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【的】【写】【作】【意】【识】【,】【才】【会】【将】【最】【具】【有】【时】【代】【气】【息】【的】【生】【活】【素】【材】【一】【网】【打】【尽】【,】【使】【作】【文】【变】【得】【鲜】【活】【灵】【动】【,】【光】【鲜】【可】【人】【!】【选】【材】【如】【何】【做】【到】【新】【鲜】【抢】【眼】【呢】【?】【以】【下】【方】【法】【供】【大】【家】【借】【鉴】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【捕】【捉】【新】【闻】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【,】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【近】【几】【年】【的】【中】【考】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【选】【择】【新】【闻】【中】【“】【焦】【点】【人】【物】【”】【作】【为】【文】【字】【材】【料】【,】【比】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【吉】【林】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【就】【是】【以】【“】【沈】【阳】【市】【感】【动】【校】【园】【十】【佳】【好】【少】【年】【”】【“】【辽】【宁】【省】【道】【德】【小】【模】【范】【”】【“】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【度】【全】【国】【十】【大】【真】【情】【人】【物】【”】【—】【—】【马】【鹏】【飞】【为】【材】【料】【来】【进】【行】【作】【文】【的】【;】【还】【有】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【浙】【江】【嘉】【兴】【中】【考】【作】【文】【以】【周】【杰】【伦】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【、】【蔡】【伟】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【作】【导】【入】【,】【巧】【妙】【引】【出】【命】【题】【作】【文】【《】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【》】【;】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【龙】【岩】【卷】【以】【“】【超】【级】【女】【声】【”】【年】【度】【总】【冠】【军】【李】【宇】【春】【走】【进】【北】【大】【校】【园】【引】【发】【非】【议】【作】【为】【提】【示】【语】【,】【意】【在】【引】【出】【话】【题】【作】【文】【“】【文】【化】【”】【等】【。】【这】【些】【人】【物】【的】【事】【迹】【一】【般】【都】【刊】【载】【于】【新】【近】【的】【《】【青】【年】【文】【摘】【》】【《】【读】【者】【》】【《】【意】【林】【》】【《】【杂】【文】【报】【》】【等】【报】【刊】【上】【,】【同】【学】【们】【要】【格】【外】【关】【注】【。】【我】【们】【只】【有】【捕】【捉】【住】【这】【些】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【,】【考】【场】【上】【才】【能】【从】【容】【应】【对】【。】【而】【且】【这】【些】【“】【焦】【点】【”】【又】【可】【充】【当】【我】【们】【写】【作】【中】【最】【新】【的】【素】【材】【,】【变】【成】【抢】【人】【眼】【球】【的】【“】【珍】【珠】【”】【。】【比】【如】【写】【作】【:】【我】【心】【中】【有】【杆】【秤】【、】【成】【功】【的】【秘】【诀】【、】【人】【生】【最】【重】【要】【的】【几】【个】【字】【、】【心】【灵】【的】【阳】【光】【、】【源】【泉】【、】【别】【样】【、】【像】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【那】【样】【生】【活】【、】【在】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【的】【影】【响】【下】【、】【我】【眼】【中】【的】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【,】【等】【文】【题】【时】【就】【可】【大】【显】【神】【威】【,】【倘】【若】【拿】【来】【为】【我】【所】【用】【,】【一】【定】【会】【让】【人】【眼】【睛】【一】【亮】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【留】【心】【日】【常】【生】【活】【,】【熟】【中】【取】【新】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【有】【留】【心】【生】【活】【中】【的】【点】【滴】【小】【事】【,】【才】【能】【慧】【眼】【捕】【捉】【,】【熟】【中】【取】【新】【,】【发】【掘】【新】【意】【。】【例】【如】【尤】【今】【的】【《】【手】【足】【情】【深】【》】【一】【文】【不】【足】【5】【0】【0】【字】【,】【文】【中】【叙】【写】【老】【二】【不】【小】【心】【踢】【到】【了】【老】【三】【的】【耳】【朵】【,】【导】【致】【老】【三】【左】【耳】【后】【出】【现】【了】【一】【道】【一】【寸】【来】【长】【的】【裂】【痕】【,】【结】【果】【是】【老】【二】【挨】【打】【,】【老】【三】【却】【为】【老】【二】【求】【情】【。】【夜】【里】【,】【家】【人】【都】【已】【入】【睡】【,】【恍】【然】【间】【,】【“】【我】【”】【突】【然】【被】【搬】【动】【椅】【子】【、】【摁】【亮】【电】【灯】【的】【声】【音】【惊】【醒】【了】【。】【“】【我】【”】【一】【跃】【而】【起】【,】【冲】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【房】【间】【,】【就】【在】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【“】【我】【”】【看】【到】【了】【极】【为】【难】【忘】【的】【一】【幕】【:】【“】【我】【家】【老】【二】【,】【跪】【在】【老】【三】【床】【畔】【,】【正】【轻】【轻】【地】【拨】【开】【她】【的】【头】【发】【,】【低】【着】【头】【,】【细】【细】【地】【看】【着】【她】【耳】【后】【的】【伤】【痕】【。】【一】【股】【热】【潮】【,】【蓦】【地】【泛】【上】【了】【我】【的】【双】【眼】【。】【”】【作】【者】【从】【熟】【悉】【的】【生】【活】【中】【来】【取】【材】【,】【真】【可】【谓】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【,】【情】【韵】【悠】【长】【。】【再】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【河】【南】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【佳】【作】【《】【逆】【耳】【忠】【言】【助】【我】【行】【》】【一】【文】【,】【以】【父】【亲】【老】【套】【却】【实】【在】【的】【逆】【耳】【忠】【言】【“】【不】【要】【忘】【本】【”】【为】【线】【索】【,】【让】【作】【者】【在】【经】【历】【了】【生】【活】【的】【磨】【砺】【后】【懂】【得】【了】【其】【中】【的】【真】【谛】【,】【从】【而】【帮】【助】【自】【己】【迷】【途】【知】【返】【,】【走】【上】【了】【正】【确】【的】【人】【生】【道】【路】【。】【此】【文】【选】【材】【真】【实】【,】【细】【节】【动】【人】【,】【情】【真】【意】【切】【,】【读】【之】【印】【象】【深】【刻】【。】【由】【此】【观】【之】【,】【我】【们】【的】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【蕴】【藏】【着】【丰】【富】【的】【典】【型】【的】【素】【材】【,】【只】【是】【我】【们】【发】【掘】【得】【还】【不】【够】【,】【没】【有】【看】【出】【它】【的】【亮】【点】【来】【。】【因】【此】【,】【请】【留】【心】【日】【常】【生】【活】【,】【从】【中】【去】【获】【得】【最】【有】【价】【值】【的】【“】【金】【子】【”】【,】【为】【作】【文】【增】【光】【添】【彩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【善】【于】【转】【换】【角】【度】【,】【多】【方】【出】【击】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【材】【要】【想】【出】【新】【还】【须】【具】【备】【多】【角】【度】【意】【识】【。】【即】【使】【是】【陈】【旧】【的】【题】【材】【,】【也】【应】【注】【意】【换】【个】【角】【度】【去】【写】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【云】【南】【省】【中】【考】【佳】【作】【《】【我】【感】【受】【到】【了】【登】【山】【的】【乐】【趣】【》】【一】【文】【,】【作】【者】【没】【有】【落】【入】【单】【纯】【叙】【写】【自】【己】【登】【山】【的】【经】【历】【的】【窠】【臼】【之】【中】【,】【而】【是】【将】【自】【己】【的】【见】【闻】【和】【感】【受】【巧】【妙】【地】【融】【入】【叙】【事】【与】【写】【景】【之】【中】【,】【综】【合】【运】【用】【叙】【事】【、】【抒】【情】【、】【议】【论】【、】【描】【写】【多】【种】【表】【达】【方】【式】【,】【生】【动】【地】【阐】【释】【了】【自】【己】【登】【山】【时】【的】【真】【切】【感】【受】【,】【让】【人】【读】【之】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【。】【同】【学】【们】【还】【要】【善】【于】【跳】【出】【第】【一】【人】【称】【的】【窠】【臼】【,】【突】【破】【“】【我】【”】【的】【局】【限】【,】【也】【能】【做】【到】【选】【材】【出】【新】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【广】【东】【梅】【州】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【》】【一】【文】【,】【先】【从】【项】【羽】【“】【无】【法】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【”】【“】【无】【法】【跨】【越】【心】【墙】【”】【,】【说】【到】【陶】【潜】【的】【“】【弃】【官】【归】【隐】【山】【林】【”】【“】【战】【胜】【了】【自】【己】【”】【,】【再】【说】【到】【周】【敦】【颐】【对】【“】【趋】【炎】【附】【势】【的】【世】【风】【鄙】【视】【,】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【,】【永】【留】【芳】【名】【”】【,】【然】【后】【结】【合】【生】【活】【谈】【感】【悟】【,】【最】【后】【点】【明】【主】【旨】【:】【“】【唯】【有】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【心】【中】【的】【心】【魔】【,】【跨】【越】【心】【墙】【,】【战】【胜】【自】【卑】【,】【在】【你】【的】【面】【前】【就】【会】【升】【起】【一】【轮】【新】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【”】【此】【文】【就】【是】【引】【古】【论】【今】【,】【借】【名】【人】【素】【材】【来】【点】【亮】【我】【们】【的】【眼】【眸】【,】【增】【添】【文】【章】【的】【文】【化】【底】【蕴】【,】【彰】【显】【考】【生】【广】【泛】【的】【阅】【历】【。】【同】【样】【“】【旧】【瓶】【装】【新】【酒】【”】【,】【也】【不】【失】【为】【选】【材】【出】【新】【的】【一】【条】【好】【途】【径】【。】【所】【谓】【“】【旧】【瓶】【装】【新】【酒】【”】【就】【是】【要】【突】【破】【旧】【的】【思】【维】【定】【式】【,】【从】【已】【形】【成】【固】【定】【看】【法】【的】【人】【、】【事】【中】【翻】【出】【新】【意】【,】【或】【者】【发】【掘】【一】【些】【老】【题】【材】【的】【内】【在】【潜】【质】【,】【进】【行】【再】【创】【作】【,】【使】【旧】【题】【材】【显】【示】【出】【新】【意】【。】【例】【如】【,】【“】【熟】【能】【生】【巧】【”】【是】【人】【们】【已】【认】【同】【的】【固】【定】【看】【法】【,】【而】【对】【“】【班】【门】【弄】【斧】【”】【“】【世】【故】【圆】【滑】【”】【等】【则】【持】【否】【定】【、】【批】【评】【态】【度】【,】【但】【在】【改】【革】【开】【放】【、】【高】【科】【技】【发】【展】【的】【今】【天】【,】【我】【们】【认】【为】【:】【熟】【不】【一】【定】【就】【能】【生】【巧】【,】【弄】【斧】【应】【到】【班】【门】【,】【圆】【滑】【未】【必】【不】【是】【合】【作】【中】【的】【一】【支】【黏】【合】【剂】【。】【除】【此】【之】【外】【,】【还】【可】【“】【反】【弹】【琵】【琶】【唱】【新】【调】【”】【也】【会】【让】【选】【材】【新】【意】【迭】【出】【。】【如】【以】【“】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【”】【为】【题】【,】【有】【考】【生】【突】【破】【常】【规】【思】【维】【,】【叙】【写】【希】【望】【去】【走】【一】【条】【充】【满】【坎】【坷】【的】【路】【,】【在】【苦】【难】【中】【历】【练】【自】【我】【,】【使】【自】【我】【走】【得】【更】【远】【,】【飞】【得】【更】【高】【。】【此】【文】【反】【向】【出】【新】【,】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【眼】【睛】【为】【之】【一】【亮】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【题】【回】【放】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【仔】【细】【阅】【读】【下】【面】【的】【材】【料】【,】【从】【中】【选】【择】【一】【个】【角】【度】【构】【思】【立】【意】【,】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【可】【叙】【述】【经】【历】【,】【可】【抒】【发】【情】【感】【,】【可】【发】【表】【议】【论】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【前】【有】【一】【个】【猎】【人】【,】【养】【了】【一】【条】【很】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【有】【一】【天】【他】【外】【出】【打】【猎】【时】【,】【把】【狗】【留】【在】【家】【里】【看】【护】【自】【己】【年】【幼】【的】【儿】【子】【。】【等】【他】【回】【来】【后】【,】【发】【现】【儿】【子】【不】【见】【了】【,】【那】【条】【狗】【却】【满】【嘴】【是】【血】【。】【猎】【人】【顿】【时】【火】【起】【,】【认】【为】【是】【狗】【把】【儿】【子】【吃】【掉】【了】【,】【便】【一】【枪】【把】【狗】【打】【死】【了】【。】【这】【时】【,】【儿】【子】【从】【床】【底】【下】【钻】【出】【来】【告】【诉】【父】【亲】【,】【有】【条】【大】【蟒】【蛇】【要】【吃】【自】【己】【,】【是】【狗】【把】【蟒】【蛇】【赶】【跑】【了】【。】【猎】【人】【后】【悔】【不】【已】【,】【特】【意】【修】【了】【一】【座】【塔】【来】【纪】【念】【那】【条】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【猎】【人】【因】【为】【缺】【乏】【信】【任】【,】【失】【去】【了】【一】【条】【忠】【实】【的】【狗】【。】【想】【想】【我】【们】【自】【己】【,】【是】【否】【因】【为】【缺】【乏】【信】【任】【,】【而】【失】【去】【了】【很】【多】【很】【多】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【云】【南】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【试】【题】【解】【析】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【材】【料】【作】【文】【,】【我】【们】【要】【抓】【住】【其】【“】【信】【任】【”】【这】【一】【要】【旨】【来】【构】【思】【行】【文】【。】【写】【作】【时】【,】【不】【要】【空】【谈】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【意】【义】【,】【要】【避】【免】【行】【文】【空】【洞】【无】【物】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【从】【两】【方】【面】【入】【手】【:】【(】【1】【)】【用】【事】【实】【说】【话】【,】【将】【古】【今】【中】【外】【名】【人】【诚】【实】【、】【守】【信】【的】【故】【事】【和】【自】【己】【生】【活】【中】【遇】【到】【的】【信】【任】【或】【不】【信】【任】【的】【事】【例】【联】【系】【起】【来】【,】【展】【开】【论】【述】【,】【论】【证】【“】【信】【任】【在】【人】【生】【事】【业】【中】【的】【关】【键】【作】【用】【”】【的】【论】【点】【;】【(】【2】【)】【以】【真】【情】【实】【感】【打】【动】【人】【,】【通】【过】【叙】【述】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【,】【抒】【发】【自】【己】【对】【“】【信】【任】【”】【的】【由】【衷】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【再】【者】【要】【注】【意】【形】【式】【上】【的】【创】【新】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【大】【胆】【采】【用】【小】【标】【题】【式】【、】【小】【小】【说】【、】【独】【幕】【剧】【、】【访】【谈】【录】【、】【日】【记】【体】【、】【书】【信】【体】【、】【科】【幻】【式】【、】【跟】【帖】【体】【、】【手】【机】【短】【信】【体】【等】【来】【构】【思】【、】【行】【文】【,】【力】【求】【以】【“】【文】【体】【创】【新】【”】【而】【赢】【得】【阅】【卷】【教】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【满】【分】【佳】【作】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【·】【老】【人】【·】【信】【任】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【云】【南】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【,】【这】【个】【尊】【贵】【的】【、】【大】【自】【然】【的】【小】【精】【灵】【,】【在】【每】【年】【的】【冬】【春】【季】【节】【,】【无】【一】【例】【外】【地】【都】【要】【光】【顾】【我】【们】【的】【城】【市】【。】【它】【们】【有】【着】【像】【雪】【一】【样】【洁】【白】【的】【羽】【毛】【,】【有】【着】【像】【朱】【砂】【一】【样】【鲜】【艳】【的】【长】【喙】【,】【更】【有】【着】【像】【清】【风】【一】【样】【轻】【盈】【的】【舞】【姿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【不】【清】【从】【什】【么】【时】【候】【起】【,】【来】【自】【西】【伯】【利】【亚】【的】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【悄】【然】【来】【到】【我】【们】【美】【丽】【的】【春】【城】【安】【家】【落】【户】【。】【也】【记】【不】【清】【是】【从】【什】【么】【时】【候】【开】【始】【,】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【和】【昆】【明】【人】【民】【成】【了】【最】【亲】【密】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【但】【却】【深】【知】【这】【一】【切】【源】【于】【彼】【此】【间】【那】【种】【深】【深】【的】【信】【任】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【大】【人】【们】【说】【,】【几】【年】【前】【,】【每】【到】【冬】【季】【来】【临】【时】【,】【就】【会】【有】【一】【位】【名】【叫】【吴】【庆】【恒】【的】【老】【人】【来】【到】【翠】【湖】【之】【畔】【,】【给】【到】【这】【里】【越】【冬】【的】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【。】【天】【长】【日】【久】【,】【他】【居】【然】【和】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【结】【下】【了】【不】【解】【之】【缘】【,】【彼】【此】【信】【任】【,】【彼】【此】【依】【靠】【,】【谁】【也】【离】【不】【开】【谁】【。】【有】【一】【天】【,】【老】【人】【没】【有】【来】【,】【因】【为】【他】【已】【经】【永】【远】【地】【离】【开】【了】【人】【世】【。】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【找】【不】【到】【自】【己】【的】【老】【朋】【友】【,】【纷】【纷】【在】【翠】【湖】【上】【空】【盘】【旋】【、】【飞】【舞】【,】【仿】【佛】【是】【在】【焦】【急】【地】【寻】【找】【着】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【人】【一】【般】【,】【它】【们】【忧】【郁】【的】【鸣】【叫】【声】【令】【人】【心】【动】【。】【老】【人】【是】【十】【分】【勤】【俭】【的】【人】【。】【他】【每】【天】【步】【行】【二】【十】【余】【里】【,】【从】【城】【郊】【赶】【到】【翠】【湖】【来】【,】【就】【是】【为】【了】【给】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【,】【和】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【做】【伴】【,】【这】【是】【老】【人】【第】【一】【次】【给】【红】【嘴】【鸥】【喂】【食】【后】【留】【下】【的】【承】【诺】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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