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2019年11月20日 09:31

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【曾】【亲】【眼】【目】【睹】【过】【黄】【山】【的】【秀】【丽】【、】【九】【寨】【沟】【的】【神】【奇】【、】【千】【岛】【湖】【的】【万】【种】【风】【情】【…】【…】【但】【我】【却】【不】【曾】【领】【略】【过】【美】【丽】【的】【海】【滨】【风】【光】【,】【我】【连】【做】【梦】【都】【想】【拥】【抱】【大】【海】【,】【去】【年】【暑】【假】【我】【终】【于】【如】【愿】【以】【偿】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【8】【月】【1】【2】【日】【下】【午】【,】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【一】【同】【乘】【飞】【机】【从】【合】【肥】【飞】【往】【青】【岛】【。】【我】【们】【在】【青】【岛】【先】【后】【游】【玩】【了】【五】【四】【广】【场】【、】【海】【底】【世】【界】【、】【栈】【桥】【等】【景】【点】【,】【虽】【然】【这】【些】【地】【方】【都】【很】【好】【玩】【,】【但】【却】【没】【有】【看】【到】【我】【日】【思】【夜】【想】【的】【大】【海】【,】【不】【禁】【有】【点】【儿】【扫】【兴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【次】【日】【,】【我】【们】【驱】【车】【来】【到】【传】【说】【中】【“】【八】【仙】【过】【海】【”】【的】【蓬】【莱】【。】【一】【下】【车】【,】【导】【游】【发】【出】【了】【一】【个】【令】【人】【无】【比】【振】【奋】【的】【指】【令】【—】【—】【去】【海】【滨】【浴】【场】【玩】【。】【我】【顿】【时】【欣】【喜】【若】【狂】【,】【像】【一】【只】【撒】【欢】【的】【小】【鹿】【,】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【奔】【向】【大】【海】【。】【放】【眼】【望】【去】【,】【蔚】【蓝】【色】【的】【大】【海】【一】【望】【无】【际】【,】【徐】【徐】【的】【海】【风】【带】【来】【了】【一】【丝】【凉】【爽】【,】【闻】【起】【来】【有】【种】【咸】【咸】【的】【味】【道】【;】【海】【浪】【轻】【轻】【拍】【打】【着】【我】【的】【脚】【背】【,】【像】【是】【在】【为】【我】【按】【摩】【,】【脚】【下】【的】【细】【沙】【踩】【起】【来】【软】【软】【的】【、】【痒】【痒】【的】【,】【感】【觉】【十】【分】【舒】【服】【。】【退】【潮】【后】【的】【沙】【滩】【上】【留】【下】【一】【片】【片】【绿】【色】【的】【海】【藻】【,】【一】【个】【个】【五】【颜】【六】【色】【的】【贝】【壳】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【换】【过】【泳】【装】【,】【我】【踏】【着】【海】【浪】【开】【始】【了】【海】【之】【旅】【中】【最】【惊】【险】【的】【项】【目】【—】【—】【海】【泳】【。】【以】【前】【我】【只】【是】【在】【游】【泳】【池】【里】【游】【过】【,】【由】【于】【地】【方】【小】【,】【人】【又】【多】【,】【游】【起】【来】【很】【不】【过】【瘾】【,】【现】【在】【我】【终】【于】【可】【以】【在】【广】【阔】【的】【大】【海】【中】【畅】【游】【了】【!】【这】【可】【是】【我】【第】【一】【次】【在】【大】【海】【中】【游】【泳】【。】【我】【怀】【着】【忐】【忑】【不】【安】【又】【十】【分】【好】【奇】【的】【心】【情】【,】【投】【入】【了】【大】【海】【的】【怀】【抱】【。】【我】【先】【是】【在】【海】【边】【不】【远】【处】【游】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【热】【了】【热】【身】【。】【接】【着】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【的】【鼓】【励】【下】【,】【我】【尝】【试】【着】【向】【远】【处】【游】【去】【。】【远】【离】【海】【岸】【,】【我】【发】【现】【这】【里】【的】【海】【水】【更】【凉】【了】【,】【颜】【色】【更】【蓝】【了】【,】【海】【面】【更】【广】【阔】【了】【。】【我】【随】【着】【海】【浪】【漂】【浮】【在】【海】【面】【,】【双】【手】【悠】【闲】【地】【划】【着】【海】【水】【,】【就】【像】【趴】【在】【一】【个】【硕】【大】【的】【海】【绵】【垫】【上】【,】【忘】【情】【地】【享】【受】【着】【浪】【花】【的】【抚】【摸】【…】【…】【正】【当】【我】【陶】【醉】【在】【快】【乐】【之】【中】【时】【,】【天】【空】【忽】【然】【暗】【了】【下】【来】【,】【海】【面】【上】【也】【刮】【起】【了】【大】【风】【。】【我】【有】【些】【紧】【张】【,】【环】【顾】【周】【围】【竟】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【影】【,】【突】【然】【一】【个】【大】【浪】【打】【来】【,】【我】【被】【灌】【了】【一】【大】【口】【海】【水】【,】【真】【咸】【呀】【!】【这】【突】【如】【其】【来】【的】【变】【故】【,】【使】【我】【顿】【时】【恐】【惧】【起】【来】【,】【手】【脚】【好】【像】【也】【不】【听】【使】【唤】【了】【,】【我】【惊】【叫】【起】【来】【。】【爸】【爸】【听】【到】【后】【迅】【速】【向】【我】【游】【了】【过】【来】【,】【一】【边】【安】【慰】【我】【保】【持】【镇】【静】【,】【一】【边】【鼓】【励】【我】【坚】【持】【到】【底】【不】【要】【放】【弃】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【的】【不】【断】【鼓】【励】【下】【,】【我】【的】【心】【情】【渐】【渐】【地】【平】【静】【了】【下】【来】【,】【鼓】【足】【勇】【气】【终】【于】【游】【回】【了】【岸】【边】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【快】【乐】【的】【时】【光】【总】【是】【那】【么】【短】【暂】【,】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【几】【个】【小】【时】【过】【去】【了】【,】【我】【也】【恋】【恋】【不】【舍】【地】【结】【束】【了】【这】【次】【的】【海】【之】【旅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【今】【想】【想】【还】【有】【些】【后】【怕】【。】【这】【次】【“】【历】【险】【”】【,】【虽】【然】【让】【我】【领】【教】【了】【大】【海】【的】【凶】【猛】【,】【却】【也】【锻】【炼】【了】【我】【的】【胆】【量】【和】【毅】【力】【,】【也】【让】【我】【真】【正】【体】【验】【到】【了】【大】【海】【的】【神】【秘】【莫】【测】【,】【令】【我】【终】【生】【难】【忘】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【始】【终】【保】【守】【,】【那】【你】【终】【将】【平】【庸】【地】【死】【去】【,】【相】【反】【,】【如】【果】【你】【打】【开】【封】【闭】【的】【心】【扉】【,】【你】【的】【生】【活】【将】【会】【变】【得】【快】【乐】【、】【幸】【福】【和】【充】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【井】【里】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【是】【一】【只】【老】【青】【蛙】【,】【从】【出】【生】【到】【现】【在】【我】【一】【直】【呆】【在】【井】【中】【,】【这】【口】【井】【很】【深】【很】【深】【,】【与】【我】【做】【伴】【的】【只】【有】【一】【潭】【死】【水】【,】【我】【准】【备】【就】【这】【样】【慢】【慢】【地】【老】【死】【。】【有】【一】【天】【,】【一】【只】【乌】【鸦】【落】【在】【井】【边】【,】【它】【向】【我】【打】【招】【呼】【:】【“】【嗨】【,】【朋】【友】【!】【”】【我】【没】【有】【理】【它】【。】【“】【你】【一】【直】【住】【在】【这】【里】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【说】【道】【:】【“】【是】【的】【!】【”】【本】【以】【为】【它】【会】【走】【开】【,】【可】【是】【它】【又】【说】【:】【“】【你】【一】【定】【没】【见】【过】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【吧】【,】【外】【面】【的】【蓝】【天】【很】【广】【阔】【,】【草】【地】【也】【很】【美】【丽】【,】【而】【且】【还】【有】【很】【多】【很】【多】【的】【动】【物】【…】【…】【”】【说】【完】【,】【它】【就】【拍】【着】【翅】【膀】【飞】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【出】【井】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【乌】【鸦】【走】【了】【以】【后】【,】【我】【的】【心】【便】【再】【也】【无】【法】【平】【静】【了】【。】【以】【前】【我】【也】【知】【道】【天】【空】【很】【蓝】【,】【很】【美】【丽】【,】【可】【是】【我】【看】【到】【的】【也】【只】【是】【井】【口】【大】【的】【那】【片】【天】【,】【于】【是】【,】【我】【不】【断】【地】【想】【象】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【,】【广】【阔】【的】【天】【空】【究】【竟】【有】【多】【广】【阔】【,】【青】【青】【的】【草】【地】【到】【底】【有】【多】【么】【绿】【,】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【小】【动】【物】【都】【长】【得】【什】【么】【模】【样】【…】【…】【我】【终】【于】【忍】【不】【住】【了】【,】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【对】【我】【充】【满】【了】【诱】【惑】【,】【我】【得】【去】【看】【看】【,】【否】【则】【我】【这】【一】【生】【真】【是】【白】【活】【。】【就】【这】【样】【,】【我】【开】【始】【努】【力】【地】【向】【井】【口】【跳】【跃】【,】【终】【于】【苍】【天】【不】【负】【有】【心】【“】【蛙】【”】【,】【经】【过】【一】【番】【努】【力】【,】【我】【跳】【进】【了】【人】【们】【打】【水】【的】【铁】【桶】【中】【,】【于】【是】【我】【被】【带】【到】【了】【井】【外】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【井】【外】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【刚】【刚】【跳】【出】【井】【外】【,】【揉】【了】【揉】【眼】【睛】【,】【哇】【!】【我】【被】【眼】【前】【的】【景】【象】【惊】【呆】【了】【。】【外】【面】【的】【天】【比】【井】【里】【的】【天】【大】【无】【数】【倍】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【五】【颜】【六】【色】【的】【花】【朵】【,】【它】【们】【还】【散】【发】【着】【阵】【阵】【芳】【香】【;】【我】【看】【到】【了】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【小】【动】【物】【,】【它】【们】【欢】【快】【地】【玩】【耍】【着】【;】【我】【看】【到】【了】【潺】【潺】【流】【淌】【的】【溪】【水】【,】【它】【们】【不】【时】【发】【出】【悦】【耳】【的】【丁】【冬】【声】【;】【我】【还】【感】【受】【到】【了】【阳】【光】【的】【温】【暖】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【来】【到】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【,】【不】【是】【为】【了】【看】【热】【闹】【的】【,】【我】【还】【为】【人】【类】【做】【了】【有】【益】【的】【事】【。】【我】【还】【受】【到】【了】【赞】【扬】【呢】【!】【有】【一】【次】【,】【我】【吃】【了】【许】【多】【害】【虫】【,】【一】【个】【农】【民】【伯】【伯】【赞】【扬】【我】【:】【“】【真】【是】【好】【样】【的】【,】【帮】【咱】【保】【护】【庄】【稼】【…】【…】【”】【听】【完】【后】【,】【我】【心】【里】【美】【滋】【滋】【的】【,】【人】【类】【把】【我】【当】【做】【了】【朋】【友】【,】【我】【发】【现】【了】【自】【己】【的】【价】【值】【。】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【好】【高】【兴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【见】【乌】【鸦】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【嗨】【!】【朋】【友】【!】【我】【又】【遇】【到】【了】【那】【个】【向】【我】【介】【绍】【外】【面】【美】【丽】【风】【景】【的】【乌】【鸦】【,】【刚】【开】【始】【它】【看】【到】【我】【的】【时】【候】【很】【吃】【惊】【,】【当】【听】【完】【我】【的】【故】【事】【后】【,】【它】【称】【赞】【我】【是】【一】【个】【很】【有】【魄】【力】【的】【青】【蛙】【。】【其】【实】【,】【我】【最】【应】【当】【感】【激】【的】【是】【它】【,】【“】【多】【亏】【了】【你】【,】【不】【然】【我】【现】【在】【还】【不】【知】【道】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【这】【么】【美】【好】【呢】【!】【”】【乌】【鸦】【笑】【了】【笑】【:】【“】【其】【实】【没】【什】【么】【,】【关】【键】【是】【你】【自】【己】【。】【正】【是】【你】【的】【好】【奇】【心】【,】【还】【有】【你】【的】【勇】【敢】【精】【神】【,】【才】【使】【得】【你】【走】【向】【更】【广】【阔】【的】【空】【间】【,】【以】【后】【还】【要】【继】【续】【努】【力】【啊】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【善】【待】【好】【奇】【心】【,】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【将】【因】【此】【而】【大】【放】【光】【彩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【闫】【涛】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】短歌行原文及翻译【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【早】【上】【起】【来】【,】【鸟】【儿】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【地】【叫】【个】【不】【停】【。】【打】【开】【窗】【户】【,】【一】【股】【清】【新】【的】【空】【气】【迎】【面】【而】【来】【。】【明】【朗】【的】【山】【色】【映】【着】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【,】【真】【不】【敢】【相】【信】【昨】【晚】【刚】【刚】【下】【过】【一】【场】【暴】【风】【雨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【因】【为】【就】【住】【在】【山】【脚】【下】【,】【吃】【过】【了】【早】【饭】【,】【不】【由】【得】【想】【去】【山】【上】【看】【看】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【因】【为】【是】【春】【天】【,】【昆】【虫】【很】【少】【,】【四】【周】【静】【悄】【悄】【的】【。】【到】【了】【山】【脚】【向】【上】【看】【,】【满】【山】【的】【绿】【色】【便】【把】【我】【吸】【引】【住】【了】【。】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【已】【到】【了】【山】【顶】【,】【放】【眼】【望】【去】【,】【四】【周】【更】【是】【美】【丽】【,】【树】【叶】【上】【的】【水】【滴】【映】【着】【朝】【晖】【,】【闪】【着】【耀】【眼】【的】【光】【。】【这】【不】【禁】【使】【我】【想】【起】【了】【昨】【天】【那】【个】【电】【闪】【雷】【鸣】【的】【夜】【晚】【。】【一】【声】【巨】【响】【把】【我】【从】【梦】【中】【惊】【醒】【,】【轰】【鸣】【的】【打】【雷】【声】【几】【乎】【要】【把】【整】【个】【县】【城】【震】【碎】【。】【闪】【电】【照】【亮】【的】【瞬】【间】【,】【山】【顶】【的】【树】【在】【风】【中】【疯】【狂】【地】【摇】【摆】【,】【豆】【大】【的】【雨】【点】【瓢】【泼】【似】【的】【呼】【啸】【而】【来】【,】【倾】【泻】【在】【山】【石】【上】【。】【原】【以】【为】【山】【上】【的】【小】【树】【会】【一】【排】【排】【倒】【下】【,】【可】【是】【,】【暴】【风】【雨】【使】【山】【变】【得】【更】【美】【,】【树】【变】【得】【更】【绿】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【想】【自】【己】【,】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【不】【好】【,】【考】【试】【常】【常】【失】【利】【,】【没】【有】【一】【科】【优】【秀】【,】【困】【难】【几】【乎】【要】【把】【我】【打】【垮】【。】【而】【山】【呢】【?】【树】【呢】【?】【在】【暴】【风】【雨】【面】【前】【从】【未】【退】【缩】【怯】【懦】【过】【,】【我】【呢】【,】【面】【对】【困】【难】【却】【常】【常】【退】【缩】【,】【常】【常】【逃】【避】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【暴】【风】【雨】【使】【山】【变】【得】【更】【美】【,】【可】【却】【使】【我】【显】【得】【更】【无】【能】【,】【也】【曾】【面】【对】【困】【难】【,】【也】【曾】【向】【困】【难】【发】【出】【过】【挑】【战】【,】【而】【结】【果】【不】【是】【半】【途】【而】【废】【,】【就】【是】【以】【失】【败】【告】【终】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【终】【于】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【,】【那】【风】【景】【为】【什】【么】【美】【丽】【,】【那】【是】【因】【为】【经】【过】【了】【狂】【风】【暴】【雨】【的】【洗】【礼】【。】【一】【个】【人】【要】【成】【功】【就】【必】【须】【学】【会】【承】【受】【困】【难】【、】【挫】【折】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【想】【让】【那】【风】【景】【留】【在】【我】【心】【底】【,】【让】【它】【化】【为】【动】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【然】【暴】【风】【雨】【终】【究】【要】【来】【,】【就】【让】【暴】【风】【雨】【来】【得】【更】【猛】【烈】【些】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【准】【备】【好】【了】【,】【准】【备】【接】【受】【暴】【风】【雨】【的】【洗】【礼】【,】【成】【为】【那】【美】【丽】【的】【风】【景】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【留】【在】【我】【心】【底】【的】【风】【景】【,】【是】【你】【给】【了】【我】【一】【次】【新】【的】【生】【命】【,】【新】【的】【起】【点】【,】【新】【的】【目】【标】【!】【就】【让】【你】【永】【远】【留】【在】【我】【的】【心】【底】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【能】【从】【自】【然】【界】【的】【风】【景】【写】【到】【心】【中】【的】【风】【景】【,】【由】【自】【然】【中】【的】【暴】【风】【雨】【到】【生】【活】【中】【的】【暴】【风】【雨】【,】【一】【路】【写】【来】【,】【作】【者】【也】【经】【历】【了】【一】【次】【心】【灵】【的】【蜕】【变】【,】【以】【一】【种】【坚】【定】【积】【极】【的】【心】【态】【去】【面】【对】【人】【生】【中】【的】【一】【次】【次】【挫】【折】【。】【这】【种】【托】【物】【言】【志】【的】【小】【散】【文】【最】【能】【表】【达】【学】【生】【的】【内】【心】【世】【界】【,】【同】【学】【们】【不】【妨】【试】【着】【写】【一】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【 】【伟】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【池】【塘】【里】【嬉】【戏】【的】【天】【鹅】【,】【总】【是】【昂】【扬】【着】【头】【;】【风】【雨】【里】【摇】【曳】【的】【绿】【叶】【,】【总】【是】【挺】【拔】【着】【身】【;】【生】【活】【中】【的】【我】【,】【总】【是】【昂】【首】【挺】【胸】【…】【…】【一】【切】【只】【因】【有】【了】【自】【信】【!】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【七】【岁】【,】【舞】【蹈】【室】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【时】【候】【的】【我】【长】【相】【平】【平】【,】【虽】【常】【被】【人】【家】【说】【是】【个】【可】【爱】【的】【小】【姑】【娘】【,】【但】【在】【我】【看】【来】【只】【是】【为】【了】【敷】【衍】【爸】【妈】【。】【终】【于】【在】【七】【岁】【那】【年】【,】【我】【被】【选】【上】【去】【金】【华】【学】【表】【演】【。】【当】【我】【为】【自】【己】【擦】【上】【了】【腮】【红】【和】【口】【红】【,】【看】【着】【镜】【子】【里】【那】【张】【稚】【嫩】【的】【小】【脸】【时】【,】【一】【股】【奇】【怪】【的】【感】【觉】【涌】【上】【了】【心】【头】【—】【—】【难】【道】【是】【自】【信】【吗】【?】【从】【此】【,】【我】【便】【一】【门】【心】【思】【投】【入】【到】【我】【热】【爱】【的】【舞】【蹈】【中】【去】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【信】【不】【就】【是】【为】【自】【己】【擦】【上】【腮】【红】【、】【口】【红】【,】【去】【投】【入】【地】【做】【事】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【十】【一】【岁】【,】【第】【一】【次】【独】【舞】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【十】【一】【岁】【的】【我】【,】【脱】【掉】【了】【稚】【嫩】【,】【整】【天】【忙】【于】【学】【习】【。】【已】【经】【许】【久】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【跳】【过】【舞】【了】【,】【那】【天】【在】【无】【人】【的】【操】【场】【上】【我】【随】【意】【跳】【了】【一】【支】【舞】【,】【却】【被】【老】【师】【看】【中】【,】【去】【参】【加】【独】【舞】【比】【赛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【灯】【光】【,】【舞】【台】【。】【面】【对】【着】【注】【视】【着】【我】【的】【许】【多】【观】【众】【,】【我】【好】【紧】【张】【,】【仿】【佛】【有】【千】【万】【只】【小】【鹿】【在】【心】【中】【乱】【撞】【。】【最】【终】【,】【我】【勉】【强】【地】【微】【笑】【着】【,】【僵】【硬】【地】【跳】【完】【这】【支】【舞】【蹈】【。】【没】【想】【到】【,】【观】【众】【和】【评】【委】【都】【给】【了】【我】【热】【烈】【的】【掌】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【信】【不】【就】【是】【笑】【露】【八】【颗】【牙】【,】【展】【示】【你】【最】【好】【的】【一】【面】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【十】【四】【岁】【,】【初】【一】【运】【动】【会】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刚】【刚】【上】【初】【中】【时】【,】【父】【母】【就】【对】【我】【说】【:】【在】【家】【靠】【父】【母】【,】【出】【门】【靠】【朋】【友】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【我】【总】【是】【用】【我】【最】【晴】【朗】【、】【最】【开】【心】【的】【一】【面】【来】【面】【对】【同】【学】【。】【老】【师】【让】【我】【参】【加】【8】【0】【0】【米】【赛】【跑】【,】【尽】【管】【自】【己】【因】【从】【来】【没】【跑】【过】【而】【有】【些】【胆】【怯】【,】【但】【还】【是】【在】【老】【师】【面】【前】【自】【信】【地】【说】【,】【一】【定】【能】【坚】【持】【跑】【完】【,】【一】【定】【会】【拿】【个】【好】【名】【次】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【料】【,】【老】【天】【爷】【不】【给】【面】【子】【,】【偏】【偏】【在】【跑】【8】【0】【0】【米】【时】【下】【起】【了】【雨】【。】【结】【果】【害】【得】【同】【学】【们】【纷】【纷】【跑】【回】【教】【室】【。】【不】【过】【,】【不】【知】【为】【什】【么】【,】【我】【心】【里】【反】【而】【松】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【也】【许】【是】【因】【为】【没】【有】【熟】【人】【在】【场】【,】【可】【以】【发】【挥】【得】【更】【好】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刚】【起】【跑】【,】【我】【就】【落】【后】【了】【。】【那】【些】【高】【个】【子】【女】【生】【都】【好】【厉】【害】【!】【我】【心】【想】【:】【我】【现】【在】【先】【慢】【慢】【跑】【,】【等】【下】【你】【们】【没】【力】【气】【了】【,】【我】【就】【能】【趁】【机】【超】【过】【你】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【料】【,】【前】【一】【名】【离】【我】【越】【来】【越】【远】【…】【…】【“】【没】【事】【,】【我】【是】【谁】【啊】【?】【一】【定】【能】【超】【过】【你】【们】【!】【”】【我】【暗】【暗】【鼓】【励】【自】【己】【。】【于】【是】【,】【最】【后】【时】【刻】【我】【猛】【一】【加】【速】【,】【就】【真】【的】【超】【过】【了】【前】【一】【名】【!】【只】【可】【惜】【没】【有】【拿】【到】【名】【次】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【经】【很】【满】【足】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【明】【白】【了】【,】【自】【信】【就】【是】【注】【重】【努】【力】【的】【过】【程】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【因】【为】【有】【了】【自】【信】【,】【我】【相】【信】【,】【我】【的】【路】【可】【以】【跑】【得】【更】【远】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【秋】【珍】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】短歌行原文及翻译【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【灯】【火】【钱】【塘】【三】【五】【夜】【,】【明】【月】【如】【霜】【,】【照】【见】【人】【如】【画】【。】【”】【苏】【轼】【的】【一】【首】【《】【蝶】【恋】【花】【》】【将】【月】【下】【美】【景】【写】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【相】【信】【没】【有】【人】【会】【要】【那】【支】【离】【破】【碎】【的】【人】【生】【,】【都】【是】【想】【要】【幸】【福】【美】【满】【的】【,】【就】【像】【月】【亮】【一】【样】【,】【人】【们】【看】【到】【圆】【月】【都】【是】【很】【欣】【喜】【的】【,】【不】【是】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【1】【0】【岁】【生】【日】【的】【前】【一】【天】【晚】【上】【,】【爸】【妈】【的】【房】【间】【传】【来】【了】【激】【烈】【的】【争】【吵】【声】【—】【—】【先】【是】【砸】【东】【西】【,】【再】【是】【摔】【门】【,】【哭】【泣】【声】【也】【渐】【渐】【清】【晰】【,】【忽】【然】【什】【么】【声】【音】【都】【没】【有】【了】【。】【我】【穿】【上】【衣】【服】【,】【走】【出】【房】【间】【,】【看】【着】【一】【屋】【子】【的】【狼】【藉】【,】【忘】【了】【哭】【泣】【,】【只】【是】【默】【默】【地】【走】【回】【房】【间】【,】【脱】【了】【衣】【服】【,】【轻】【轻】【蒙】【上】【被】【子】【,】【极】【力】【想】【平】【复】【自】【己】【的】【心】【情】【,】【身】【体】【却】【不】【停】【地】【颤】【抖】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【悄】【悄】【地】【啜】【泣】【,】【从】【无】【声】【的】【泪】【珠】【变】【成】【大】【哭】【,】【哭】【累】【了】【进】【入】【了】【梦】【乡】【,】【却】【又】【不】【断】【地】【惊】【醒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【日】【早】【晨】【,】【我】【从】【睡】【梦】【中】【慢】【慢】【醒】【来】【,】【脸】【上】【挂】【着】【的】【泪】【珠】【久】【久】【不】【肯】【滴】【落】【。】【我】【轻】【轻】【拭】【去】【泪】【水】【,】【穿】【上】【衣】【服】【,】【走】【进】【卫】【生】【间】【,】【看】【着】【镜】【中】【因】【受】【惊】【而】【苍】【白】【的】【脸】【,】【不】【由】【得】【深】【深】【叹】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【强】【忍】【着】【恐】【惧】【走】【下】【楼】【,】【看】【着】【一】【屋】【子】【的】【狼】【藉】【,】【低】【下】【头】【,】【拿】【起】【扫】【把】【,】【一】【边】【扫】【一】【边】【落】【泪】【:】【爸】【爸】【妈】【妈】【这】【是】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【今】【天】【是】【我】【的】【生】【日】【,】【他】【们】【不】【记】【得】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【扫】【着】【扫】【着】【,】【脚】【边】【出】【现】【了】【一】【部】【手】【机】【,】【是】【妈】【妈】【的】【,】【我】【捡】【了】【起】【来】【,】【收】【进】【口】【袋】【。】【傍】【晚】【,】【爸】【爸】【回】【来】【了】【,】【我】【从】【口】【袋】【里】【拿】【出】【手】【机】【,】【轻】【轻】【放】【在】【饭】【桌】【上】【,】【说】【:】【“】【爸】【,】【我】【扫】【地】【时】【见】【到】【了】【妈】【的】【手】【机】【。】【”】【他】【抬】【起】【头】【,】【看】【着】【我】【,】【突】【然】【一】【把】【抢】【过】【手】【机】【,】【向】【地】【上】【狠】【狠】【砸】【去】【,】【还】【扬】【起】【手】【落】【在】【我】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【脸】【火】【辣】【辣】【的】【疼】【。】【接】【着】【,】【桌】【子】【被】【翻】【倒】【在】【地】【,】【他】【转】【身】【走】【下】【楼】【梯】【,】【没】【有】【一】【句】【话】【,】【只】【听】【见】【大】【门】【被】【狠】【狠】【地】【关】【上】【的】【声】【音】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【终】【于】【,】【眼】【泪】【控】【制】【不】【住】【,】【簌】【簌】【流】【出】【眼】【眶】【,】【我】【不】【知】【道】【,】【到】【底】【怎】【么】【了】【。】【我】【走】【进】【卫】【生】【间】【,】【看】【见】【镜】【中】【的】【自】【己】【,】【不】【由】【得】【叹】【气】【,】【脸】【红】【红】【的】【肿】【了】【一】【片】【,】【我】【爬】【上】【床】【,】【闭】【着】【眼】【睛】【,】【一】【直】【不】【敢】【回】【忆】【刚】【才】【发】【生】【的】【事】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【晨】【传】【来】【开】【门】【的】【声】【音】【,】【我】【起】【身】【听】【着】【声】【音】【,】【脚】【步】【声】【渐】【渐】【清】【晰】【,】【我】【慌】【忙】【地】【躲】【进】【被】【窝】【,】【装】【作】【熟】【睡】【,】【眼】【却】【一】【直】【眯】【着】【,】【爸】【爸】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【走】【进】【房】【间】【,】【把】【一】【个】【蛋】【糕】【和】【K】【F】【C】【全】【家】【桶】【放】【在】【桌】【上】【,】【走】【到】【床】【边】【,】【轻】【轻】【说】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【对】【不】【起】【。】【”】【他】【欲】【言】【又】【止】【,】【拍】【拍】【盖】【在】【我】【身】【上】【的】【被】【子】【,】【然】【后】【起】【身】【离】【开】【了】【。】【等】【到】【他】【的】【声】【音】【远】【离】【,】【我】【把】【头】【从】【被】【窝】【里】【探】【出】【来】【,】【肯】【德】【基】【的】【香】【味】【让】【饿】【了】【许】【久】【的】【我】【迅】【速】【扑】【了】【过】【去】【。】【突】【然】【发】【现】【边】【上】【还】【有】【一】【张】【纸】【条】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【爸】【爸】【太】【冲】【动】【了】【,】【对】【不】【起】【。】【我】【们】【一】【家】【人】【以】【后】【都】【要】【开】【开】【心】【心】【的】【。】【”】【不】【争】【气】【的】【眼】【泪】【又】【掉】【了】【下】【来】【,】【看】【着】【全】【家】【桶】【上】【的】【“】【全】【家】【”】【两】【个】【字】【,】【我】【发】【现】【眼】【泪】【是】【苦】【的】【,】【又】【是】【甜】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【家】【中】【事】【事】【顺】【,】【和】【美】【业】【业】【昌】【。】【万】【年】【融】【融】【乐】【,】【 】【事】【兴】【百】【花】【唱】【”】【,】【看】【着】【圆】【圆】【的】【生】【日】【蛋】【糕】【,】【我】【仿】【佛】【听】【见】【了】【“】【生】【日】【快】【乐】【”】【的】【歌】【声】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【胡】【云】【云】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【个】【人】【每】【天】【都】【有】【不】【同】【的】【心】【情】【,】【其】【中】【大】【家】【都】【不】【想】【去】【体】【验】【的】【或】【许】【就】【是】【痛】【苦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【认】【为】【,】【苦】【口】【的】【食】【物】【对】【身】【体】【有】【益】【,】【而】【痛】【苦】【则】【对】【精】【神】【有】【益】【。】【没】【有】【痛】【苦】【,】【或】【许】【才】【是】【人】【生】【最】【大】【的】【悲】【哀】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痛】【苦】【是】【人】【类】【常】【见】【的】【精】【神】【现】【象】【,】【是】【一】【种】【深】【沉】【的】【情】【感】【体】【验】【,】【它】【随】【着】【对】【幸】【福】【的】【追】【求】【而】【生】【,】【又】【为】【幸】【福】【的】【获】【得】【而】【铺】【路】【。】【只】【有】【领】【教】【过】【挫】【折】【的】【痛】【苦】【,】【才】【会】【在】【成】【功】【时】【倍】【觉】【欢】【欣】【。】【我】【记】【得】【尼】【采】【说】【过】【:】【“】【一】【切】【痛】【苦】【中】【都】【孕】【育】【着】【快】【乐】【。】【”】【没】【有】【失】【,】【也】【就】【没】【有】【得】【;】【没】【有】【痛】【苦】【,】【也】【就】【没】【有】【快】【乐】【,】【这】【就】【是】【生】【活】【的】【辩】【证】【法】【。】【快】【乐】【是】【表】【面】【的】【、】【肤】【浅】【的】【,】【而】【痛】【苦】【是】【内】【在】【的】【、】【深】【刻】【的】【。】【如】【果】【说】【快】【乐】【是】【咖】【啡】【,】【令】【人】【兴】【奋】【,】【容】【易】【让】【人】【得】【意】【忘】【形】【,】【那】【么】【痛】【苦】【就】【是】【清】【醒】【剂】【,】【让】【人】【警】【醒】【,】【教】【人】【反】【观】【自】【省】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痛】【苦】【中】【不】【仅】【孕】【育】【着】【快】【乐】【,】【而】【且】【还】【孕】【育】【着】【创】【造】【。】【我】【国】【有】【句】【古】【语】【:】【蚌】【病】【成】【珠】【。】【价】【值】【昂】【贵】【的】【珍】【珠】【,】【恰】【是】【牡】【蛎】【体】【内】【病】【痛】【的】【产】【物】【。】【德】【国】【诗】【人】【海】【涅】【曾】【发】【问】【:】【“】【诗】【之】【于】【人】【,】【是】【否】【如】【同】【珍】【珠】【之】【于】【牡】【蛎】【生】【病】【所】【结】【?】【”】【读】【到】【这】【句】【话】【,】【我】【想】【到】【了】【欧】【阳】【修】【在】【《】【梅】【圣】【俞】【诗】【集】【序】【》】【中】【说】【:】【“】【盖】【愈】【穷】【则】【愈】【工】【。】【然】【则】【非】【诗】【之】【能】【穷】【人】【,】【殆】【穷】【者】【而】【后】【工】【也】【。】【”】【唐】【代】【诗】【人】【杜】【甫】【也】【说】【:】【“】【文】【章】【憎】【命】【达】【,】【魑】【魅】【喜】【人】【过】【。】【”】【这】【是】【他】【怀】【念】【流】【放】【中】【的】【李】【白】【,】【对】【他】【拥】【有】【盖】【世】【才】【华】【,】【却】【命】【运】【不】【济】【、】【时】【感】【痛】【苦】【而】【发】【出】【的】【感】【慨】【。】【“】【文】【章】【憎】【命】【达】【”】【,】【意】【谓】【文】【才】【出】【众】【者】【总】【是】【命】【途】【多】【舛】【,】【精】【神】【痛】【苦】【。】【春】【风】【得】【意】【者】【就】【写】【不】【出】【好】【文】【章】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【天】【,】【我】【到】【爱】【鸟】【成】【痴】【的】【大】【伯】【家】【,】【发】【现】【大】【部】【分】【的】【鸟】【都】【是】【成】【双】【成】【对】【,】【只】【有】【画】【眉】【、】【百】【灵】【和】【金】【丝】【雀】【孤】【零】【零】【的】【,】【就】【好】【奇】【地】【问】【:】【“】【为】【什】【么】【不】【让】【它】【们】【也】【成】【双】【成】【对】【住】【在】【一】【块】【儿】【呢】【?】【”】【大】【伯】【笑】【道】【:】【“】【我】【建】【议】【你】【以】【后】【有】【机】【会】【读】【读】【王】【阳】【明】【的】【《】【瘗】【旅】【文】【》】【、】【韩】【昌】【黎】【的】【《】【祭】【鳄】【鱼】【文】【》】【、】【屈】【原】【的】【《】【离】【骚】【》】【、】【司】【与】【迁】【的】【《】【史】【记】【》】【、】【杜】【甫】【的】【诗】【和】【李】【后】【主】【的】【词】【。】【如】【果】【他】【们】【不】【遭】【贬】【逐】【、】【不】【受】【刑】【罚】【、】【不】【穷】【困】【、】【不】【失】【国】【,】【高】【官】【厚】【禄】【,】【既】【富】【且】【贵】【,】【能】【留】【下】【他】【们】【传】【世】【不】【朽】【的】【作】【品】【吗】【?】【这】【些】【鸟】【也】【一】【样】【,】【就】【因】【为】【它】【们】【孤】【独】【,】【才】【会】【唱】【出】【悦】【耳】【的】【歌】【声】【,】【如】【果】【成】【双】【成】【对】【地】【住】【在】【一】【块】【儿】【就】【不】【会】【叫】【了】【,】【所】【以】【我】【这】【样】【做】【,】【不】【是】【残】【忍】【,】【而】【是】【磨】【炼】【它】【们】【呀】【!】【”】【大】【伯】【的】【话】【令】【我】【深】【思】【,】【原】【来】【痛】【苦】【之】【中】【闪】【烁】【着】【创】【造】【的】【光】【辉】【,】【关】【键】【是】【要】【珍】【惜】【痛】【苦】【,】【在】【痛】【苦】【中】【奋】【起】【。】【痛】【苦】【是】【昨】【天】【的】【遗】【产】【,】【同】【时】【也】【是】【今】【天】【的】【起】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【个】【人】【的】【脱】【胎】【问】【世】【,】【都】【伴】【随】【着】【母】【亲】【的】【痛】【苦】【,】【每】【个】【生】【命】【都】【在】【痛】【苦】【中】【诞】【生】【,】【而】【我】【们】【的】【成】【长】【和】【成】【熟】【,】【也】【离】【不】【开】【自】【己】【痛】【苦】【的】【经】【历】【。】【曲】【折】【,】【磨】【砺】【人】【的】【意】【志】【;】【挫】【折】【,】【培】【育】【人】【的】【斗】【志】【;】【坎】【坷】【,】【坚】【定】【人】【的】【信】【念】【。】【正】【如】【喜】【剧】【大】【师】【莫】【里】【哀】【所】【说】【:】【“】【痛】【苦】【是】【一】【位】【伟】【大】【的】【导】【师】【,】【它】【教】【会】【我】【们】【做】【人】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【段】【时】【间】【,】【我】【真】【的】【十】【分】【痛】【苦】【—】【—】【母】【亲】【去】【世】【,】【父】【亲】【又】【处】【于】【半】【下】【岗】【状】【态】【,】【家】【中】【生】【活】【难】【以】【为】【继】【;】【本】【来】【成】【绩】【优】【秀】【的】【我】【,】【连】【连】【考】【出】【令】【人】【难】【以】【置】【信】【的】【成】【绩】【;】【课】【外】【活】【动】【时】【不】【小】【心】【又】【摔】【成】【了】【骨】【折】【;】【参】【加】【全】【市】【作】【文】【比】【赛】【,】【写】【作】【上】【一】【向】【占】【有】【优】【势】【的】【我】【竟】【连】【进】【入】【决】【赛】【的】【资】【格】【都】【没】【取】【得】【。】【大】【伯】【的】【一】【句】【话】【点】【醒】【了】【我】【:】【“】【情】【况】【是】【够】【糟】【的】【了】【,】【但】【如】【果】【总】【是】【陷】【于】【痛】【苦】【,】【不】【从】【磨】【难】【和】【失】【败】【中】【振】【作】【起】【来】【,】【那】【么】【情】【况】【将】【会】【更】【加】【糟】【糕】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【当】【一】【缕】【悲】【伤】【向】【我】【袭】【来】【时】【,】【我】【俯】【视】【窗】【外】【那】【浓】【郁】【层】【叠】【的】【翠】【绿】【的】【树】【冠】【,】【自】【己】【犹】【如】【漫】【步】【山】【巅】【,】【俯】【视】【群】【峰】【;】【当】【一】【阵】【痛】【苦】【占】【据】【我】【的】【心】【灵】【时】【,】【就】【仰】【望】【太】【空】【,】【让】【自】【己】【飘】【然】【上】【升】【,】【遨】【游】【太】【空】【,】【数】【夜】【晚】【繁】【星】【,】【揽】【蓝】【天】【白】【云】【,】【借】【想】【象】【拓】【宽】【胸】【襟】【,】【淡】【化】【痛】【苦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【这】【段】【时】【间】【里】【,】【我】【变】【得】【沉】【默】【了】【,】【经】【常】【喜】【欢】【一】【个】【人】【默】【默】【地】【想】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【想】【到】【,】【疼】【痛】【是】【肉】【体】【的】【,】【而】【痛】【苦】【一】【定】【是】【精】【神】【的】【。】【一】【个】【有】【思】【想】【的】【人】【比】【没】【思】【想】【的】【人】【的】【痛】【苦】【要】【来】【得】【多】【。】【一】【个】【愚】【昧】【无】【知】【的】【人】【,】【会】【因】【为】【一】【个】【浅】【俗】【的】【笑】【话】【而】【快】【乐】【无】【比】【,】【而】【一】【个】【思】【想】【深】【刻】【的】【人】【,】【却】【会】【为】【一】【件】【与】【自】【己】【并】【无】【直】【接】【利】【害】【关】【系】【的】【事】【而】【感】【到】【忧】【虑】【和】【痛】【苦】【。】【读】【鲁】【迅】【的】【文】【章】【,】【总】【感】【到】【他】【的】【痛】【苦】【远】【远】【多】【于】【快】【乐】【,】【因】【为】【作】【为】【思】【想】【家】【的】【他】【,】【“】【心】【事】【浩】【茫】【连】【广】【宇】【”】【,】【作】【为】【革】【命】【先】【行】【者】【的】【他】【,】【孤】【独】【寂】【寞】【常】【会】【萦】【绕】【心】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【近】【读】【到】【一】【则】【新】【闻】【,】【文】【强】【这】【个】【曾】【经】【名】【噪】【一】【时】【的】【打】【黑】【英】【雄】【,】【曾】【经】【的】【重】【庆】【市】【公】【安】【局】【副】【局】【长】【,】【在】【沦】【为】【阶】【下】【囚】【之】【后】【,】【对】【普】【通】【的】【公】【安】【人】【员】【说】【了】【一】【句】【“】【平】【凡】【是】【福】【”】【的】【话】【。】【曾】【几】【何】【时】【,】【飞】【扬】【跋】【扈】【、】【穷】【奢】【极】【欲】【的】【他】【,】【想】【到】【的】【定】【是】【如】【何】【更】【加】【飞】【黄】【腾】【达】【和】【骄】【奢】【淫】【逸】【,】【平】【凡】【在】【他】【眼】【里】【是】【要】【被】【鄙】【视】【的】【,】【只】【有】【当】【他】【身】【陷】【囹】【圄】【之】【时】【,】【痛】【苦】【让】【他】【清】【醒】【,】【痛】【苦】【使】【他】【有】【了】【正】【确】【的】【思】【想】【,】【可】【惜】【的】【是】【这】【一】【切】【来】【得】【太】【迟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痛】【苦】【是】【一】【种】【拥】【有】【,】【它】【一】【经】【升】【华】【,】【就】【会】【变】【为】【一】【种】【深】【刻】【的】【思】【想】【,】【一】【种】【博】【大】【的】【情】【怀】【,】【一】【种】【澄】【明】【的】【境】【界】【。】【由】【狭】【隘】【自】【私】【而】【变】【为】【宽】【容】【坦】【荡】【,】【由】【怨】【天】【尤】【人】【而】【化】【为】【悲】【天】【悯】【人】【,】【由】【大】【悲】【大】【痛】【而】【进】【入】【大】【彻】【大】【悟】【。】【所】【以】【,】【孟】【子】【曾】【曰】【:】【“】【天】【将】【降】【大】【任】【于】【斯】【人】【也】【,】【必】【先】【苦】【其】【心】【志】【,】【劳】【其】【筋】【骨】【,】【饿】【其】【体】【肤】【,】【空】【乏】【其】【身】【,】【行】【拂】【乱】【其】【所】【为】【,】【所】【以】【动】【心】【忍】【性】【,】【曾】【益】【其】【所】【不】【能】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【正】【的】【痛】【苦】【就】【是】【激】【情】【的】【燃】【烧】【升】【华】【,】【就】【是】【思】【想】【的】【破】【茧】【化】【蝶】【。】【所】【以】【不】【要】【让】【痛】【苦】【在】【心】【头】【悄】【悄】【溜】【走】【,】【当】【我】【们】【把】【痛】【苦】【看】【作】【一】【种】【精】【神】【财】【富】【时】【,】【痛】【苦】【带】【给】【我】【们】【的】【必】【将】【是】【奋】【斗】【的】【幸】【福】【和】【人】【生】【境】【界】【的】【飞】【跃】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【明】【白】【了】【这】【个】【道】【理】【后】【,】【我】【心】【中】【豁】【然】【开】【朗】【了】【,】【那】【段】【痛】【苦】【的】【经】【历】【非】【但】【没】【有】【压】【垮】【我】【,】【反】【而】【让】【我】【的】【思】【想】【认】【识】【有】【了】【深】【度】【,】【人】【也】【变】【得】【更】【成】【熟】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【能】【给】【我】【们】【多】【方】【面】【启】【示】【的】【好】【文】【章】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【痛】【苦】【”】【不】【受】【人】【们】【的】【喜】【爱】【,】【但】【作】【者】【对】【它】【的】【好】【处】【却】【谈】【得】【较】【透】【,】【不】【但】【角】【度】【新】【,】【且】【有】【一】【定】【的】【深】【度】【。】【作】【为】【一】【名】【初】【中】【生】【,】【能】【写】【出】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【和】【他】【的】【大】【伯】【有】【关】【,】【和】【他】【勤】【于】【读】【书】【和】【思】【考】【有】【关】【,】【而】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【和】【他】【有】【过】【一】【段】【痛】【苦】【的】【经】【历】【有】【关】【,】【这】【段】【亲】【身】【体】【验】【深】【化】【了】【他】【对】【痛】【苦】【的】【认】【识】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【以】【说】【,】【思】【想】【的】【缺】【失】【是】【现】【在】【学】【生】【作】【文】【的】【通】【病】【,】【所】【以】【,】【像】【这】【样】【有】【思】【想】【深】【度】【的】【作】【文】【就】【更】【显】【可】【贵】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【思】【想】【应】【有】【丰】【富】【的】【层】【次】【,】【就】【像】【山】【的】【层】【峦】【叠】【嶂】【、】【水】【的】【曲】【折】【萦】【绕】【才】【能】【给】【人】【以】【美】【感】【。】【本】【文】【对】【痛】【苦】【的】【看】【法】【呈】【逐】【层】【深】【入】【之】【势】【:】【由】【“】【痛】【苦】【中】【都】【孕】【育】【着】【快】【乐】【”】【到】【“】【痛】【苦】【还】【孕】【育】【着】【创】【造】【”】【,】【从】【“】【成】【长】【和】【成】【熟】【离】【不】【开】【自】【己】【痛】【苦】【的】【经】【历】【”】【到】【“】【痛】【苦】【带】【给】【我】【们】【的】【必】【将】【是】【奋】【斗】【的】【幸】【福】【和】【人】【生】【境】【界】【的】【飞】【跃】【”】【,】【读】【了】【让】【人】【有】【一】【种】【渐】【入】【佳】【境】【之】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【思】【想】【离】【不】【开】【材】【料】【,】【占】【有】【了】【大】【量】【的】【材】【料】【才】【能】【有】【所】【提】【炼】【、】【概】【括】【。】【本】【文】【的】【材】【料】【,】【既】【有】【名】【人】【事】【例】【,】【又】【有】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【;】【既】【有】【新】【闻】【报】【道】【,】【又】【有】【生】【活】【故】【事】【,】【可】【谓】【不】【一】【而】【足】【、】【琳】【琅】【满】【目】【。】【这】【些】【材】【料】【本】【身】【就】【有】【审】【美】【价】【值】【,】【就】【有】【教】【育】【意】【义】【,】【它】【们】【还】【是】【生】【成】【思】【想】【的】【基】【础】【,】【激】【发】【情】【感】【的】【基】【础】【。】【孙】【小】【东】【同】【学】【平】【时】【在】【生】【活】【中】【就】【是】【个】【有】【心】【人】【,】【他】【备】【有】【几】【个】【本】【子】【,】【专】【门】【用】【来】【记】【录】【各】【种】【写】【作】【素】【材】【。】【他】【深】【知】【,】【积】【累】【和】【收】【集】【材】【料】【是】【写】【作】【过】【程】【中】【不】【可】【或】【缺】【的】【一】【部】【分】【,】【不】【该】【被】【省】【略】【。】【所】【以】【,】【每】【当】【碰】【到】【一】【则】【有】【价】【值】【的】【材】【料】【,】【他】【便】【会】【有】【如】【获】【至】【宝】【之】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【谈】【痛】【苦】【,】【不】【是】【停】【留】【在】【一】【般】【分】【析】【说】【理】【的】【层】【面】【,】【而】【是】【联】【系】【了】【自】【己】【所】【经】【历】【的】【痛】【苦】【来】【谈】【,】【这】【便】【是】【本】【文】【的】【最】【可】【贵】【之】【处】【。】【只】【有】【在】【写】【作】【时】【糅】【进】【了】【自】【己】【的】【人】【生】【体】【验】【,】【文】【章】【才】【能】【散】【发】【出】【一】【种】【灵】【魂】【的】【气】【息】【,】【才】【能】【让】【人】【感】【到】【亲】【切】【。】【作】【文】【和】【做】【人】【本】【就】【是】【联】【系】【在】【一】【起】【,】【不】【可】【分】【割】【的】【。】【现】【在】【许】【多】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【缺】【少】【个】【性】【,】【面】【目】【雷】【同】【,】【究】【其】【原】【因】【,】【就】【是】【自】【我】【的】【丧】【失】【,】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【就】【只】【能】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【、】【拾】【人】【牙】【慧】【。】【而】【在】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【里】【,】【我】【们】【看】【到】【的】【是】【作】【者】【深】【沉】【的】【思】【考】【和】【心】【灵】【的】【独】【白】【,】【是】【一】【段】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【成】【长】【轨】【迹】【。】【文】【章】【只】【有】【写】【出】【了】【只】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【,】【甚】【至】【是】【内】【心】【隐】【秘】【的】【东】【西】【,】【才】【具】【有】【真】【正】【的】【个】【性】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【的】【语】【言】【虽】【经】【润】【色】【,】【但】【基】【本】【保】【持】【原】【样】【。】【孙】【小】【东】【同】【学】【平】【时】【就】【有】【琢】【磨】【语】【言】【、】【修】【改】【语】【言】【的】【癖】【习】【,】【十】【分】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【。】【其】【实】【,】【语】【言】【就】【是】【思】【想】【,】【就】【是】【精】【神】【,】【它】【并】【不】【仅】【仅】【是】【一】【种】【外】【在】【的】【形】【式】【。】【一】【个】【人】【的】【写】【作】【语】【言】【,】【反】【映】【的】【就】【是】【他】【的】【精】【神】【世】【界】【和】【全】【部】【素】【养】【。】【可】【惜】【,】【语】【言】【这】【一】【本】【体】【在】【我】【们】【的】【语】【文】【教】【学】【和】【写】【作】【教】【学】【中】【还】【未】【受】【到】【重】【视】【。】【想】【要】【写】【好】【作】【文】【,】【就】【要】【在】【语】【言】【上】【下】【一】【番】【苦】【功】【夫】【。】【须】【知】【,】【能】【用】【优】【美】【的】【书】【面】【语】【言】【来】【写】【作】【是】【一】【种】【不】【容】【易】【达】【到】【的】【境】【地】【。】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】短歌行原文及翻译【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【光】【的】【沧】【桑】【,】【带】【不】【走】【我】【内】【心】【的】【感】【受】【;】【世】【事】【的】【万】【变】【,】【消】【逝】【不】【了】【留】【在】【我】【心】【底】【的】【风】【景】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【内】【心】【深】【处】【,】【用】【那】【蓝】【水】【晶】【包】【裹】【着】【的】【画】【卷】【,】【永】【远】【散】【发】【着】【夺】【目】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【在】【那】【个】【神】【圣】【的】【地】【方】【,】【充】【满】【了】【我】【1】【6】【年】【的】【回】【忆】【与】【感】【动】【,】【它】【们】【像】【钟】【表】【一】【样】【,】【一】【刻】【不】【停】【地】【记】【录】【着】【母】【亲】【对】【儿】【子】【的】【惦】【念】【和】【企】【盼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【又】【是】【寂】【静】【安】【谧】【的】【夜】【晚】【,】【我】【正】【要】【睡】【觉】【,】【抬】【头】【看】【到】【母】【亲】【熟】【练】【麻】【利】【地】【撕】【下】【了】【一】【张】【日】【历】【,】【这】【种】【习】【惯】【性】【的】【动】【作】【我】【是】【再】【熟】【悉】【不】【过】【的】【了】【,】【这】【已】【经】【成】【了】【她】【多】【年】【来】【每】【天】【晚】【上】【临】【睡】【前】【必】【做】【的】【功】【课】【。】【她】【撕】【完】【后】【,】【转】【过】【身】【来】【,】【看】【了】【看】【身】【后】【的】【我】【,】【然】【后】【是】【一】【阵】【叹】【息】【,】【紧】【接】【着】【是】【满】【脸】【欣】【慰】【的】【微】【笑】【。】【这】【个】【动】【作】【已】【经】【刻】【在】【我】【的】【心】【底】【,】【渐】【渐】【地】【成】【了】【一】【道】【风】【景】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【里】【的】【电】【子】【表】【日】【历】【端】【端】【正】【正】【地】【挂】【在】【墙】【上】【,】【只】【要】【稍】【一】【抬】【头】【就】【能】【看】【得】【清】【清】【楚】【楚】【。】【可】【母】【亲】【每】【年】【都】【要】【再】【买】【一】【本】【纸】【质】【的】【日】【历】【,】【而】【且】【是】【一】【天】【一】【页】【最】【古】【老】【的】【这】【种】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【都】【什】【么】【时】【代】【了】【,】【还】【用】【这】【样】【的】【日】【历】【,】【一】【天】【撕】【一】【张】【,】【又】【一】【天】【再】【撕】【一】【张】【,】【妈】【妈】【这】【又】【是】【何】【苦】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【母】【亲】【撕】【日】【历】【的】【手】【和】【那】【声】【叹】【息】【、】【那】【个】【笑】【容】【就】【出】【现】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【,】【那】【么】【清】【晰】【地】【出】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哦】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【翻】【身】【坐】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【瞬】【间】【,】【我】【懂】【了】【母】【亲】【,】【我】【真】【的】【懂】【了】【。】【您】【撕】【完】【日】【历】【,】【一】【定】【是】【在】【感】【叹】【时】【光】【的】【飞】【逝】【与】【仓】【促】【。】【是】【在】【用】【手】【来】【触】【摸】【时】【间】【的】【意】【义】【啊】【!】【每】【一】【次】【回】【眸】【一】【笑】【,】【是】【因】【为】【看】【到】【了】【您】【的】【儿】【子】【正】【在】【茁】【壮】【成】【长】【!】【这】【就】【是】【一】【个】【母】【亲】【最】【大】【的】【骄】【傲】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【您】【撕】【日】【历】【的】【那】【个】【瞬】【间】【,】【就】【是】【我】【的】【世】【界】【里】【最】【美】【最】【美】【的】【风】【景】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【任】【何】【一】【处】【山】【明】【水】【秀】【、】【草】【长】【莺】【飞】【的】【美】【景】【也】【不】【及】【它】【!】【不】【管】【时】【光】【如】【何】【变】【迁】【,】【这】【幅】【撕】【日】【历】【的】【画】【面】【久】【久】【镶】【嵌】【在】【我】【的】【心】【底】【。】【尽】【管】【那】【本】【旧】【日】【历】【一】【日】【日】【变】【薄】【,】【一】【季】【季】【换】【色】【,】【却】【永】【远】【换】【不】【走】【母】【亲】【对】【儿】【子】【的】【呵】【护】【,】【换】【不】【走】【母】【亲】【对】【儿】【子】【隽】【永】【的】【企】【盼】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【最】【大】【的】【成】【功】【之】【处】【就】【在】【于】【能】【从】【最】【平】【凡】【不】【过】【的】【生】【活】【细】【节】【中】【提】【炼】【出】【不】【平】【凡】【的】【意】【义】【。】【写】【母】【爱】【的】【文】【章】【多】【如】【牛】【毛】【,】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【写】【得】【既】【真】【挚】【又】【不】【落】【俗】【套】【呢】【?】【本】【文】【就】【给】【了】【同】【学】【们】【一】【个】【很】【好】【的】【例】【子】【,】【抓】【住】【人】【物】【最】【典】【型】【最】【细】【微】【的】【特】【点】【来】【写】【,】【写】【出】【“】【我】【”】【独】【特】【的】【心】【理】【感】【受】【,】【独】【特】【的】【感】【情】【经】【历】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【伟】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【你】【是】【老】【虎】【,】【你】【就】【要】【做】【森】【林】【之】【王】【;】【如】【果】【你】【是】【骆】【驼】【,】【你】【就】【要】【做】【沙】【漠】【之】【舟】【;】【如】【果】【你】【想】【做】【一】【个】【成】【功】【的】【人】【,】【你】【就】【要】【寻】【找】【自】【己】【的】【香】【格】【里】【拉】【,】【并】【为】【这】【个】【目】【标】【而】【努】【力】【奋】【斗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【给】【自】【己】【一】【个】【准】【确】【的】【定】【位】【,】【你】【的】【人】【生】【就】【有】【了】【前】【进】【的】【方】【向】【。】【拿】【破】【仑】【说】【过】【:】【“】【不】【想】【当】【将】【军】【的】【士】【兵】【绝】【不】【是】【好】【士】【兵】【。】【”】【拿】【破】【仑】【给】【自】【己】【的】【定】【位】【是】【将】【军】【而】【不】【是】【士】【兵】【,】【这】【就】【为】【他】【以】【后】【的】【发】【展】【注】【入】【了】【动】【力】【,】【所】【以】【他】【朝】【着】【将】【军】【的】【方】【向】【努】【力】【,】【最】【后】【终】【于】【成】【就】【了】【拿】【破】【仑】【帝】【国】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【拿】【破】【仑】【成】【功】【了】【,】【是】【因】【为】【他】【找】【到】【了】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【香】【格】【里】【拉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【给】【自】【己】【一】【个】【准】【确】【的】【定】【位】【,】【能】【够】【让】【自】【己】【摆】【脱】【迷】【茫】【。】【在】【很】【多】【人】【看】【来】【,】【能】【够】【进】【入】【哈】【佛】【大】【学】【已】【经】【是】【一】【件】【很】【光】【荣】【的】【事】【了】【,】【可】【是】【比】【尔】【·】【盖】【茨】【却】【不】【这】【样】【认】【为】【。】【他】【想】【要】【建】【立】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【事】【业】【,】【而】【哈】【佛】【并】【不】【适】【合】【自】【己】【,】【于】【是】【他】【毅】【然】【选】【择】【了】【离】【开】【而】【朝】【着】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【方】【向】【奔】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【比】【尔】【·】【盖】【茨】【成】【功】【了】【。】【他】【给】【自】【己】【的】【定】【位】【是】【做】【一】【个】【为】【自】【己】【的】【爱】【好】【奋】【斗】【的】【人】【,】【而】【并】【非】【是】【做】【让】【人】【羡】【慕】【的】【哈】【佛】【学】【者】【,】【就】【这】【样】【他】【真】【正】【找】【到】【了】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【香】【格】【里】【拉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【给】【自】【己】【一】【个】【准】【确】【的】【定】【位】【,】【人】【生】【也】【就】【有】【了】【奋】【斗】【的】【动】【力】【。】【就】【像】【迁】【徙】【的】【鸟】【儿】【一】【样】【,】【有】【了】【目】【标】【也】【就】【有】【了】【飞】【翔】【的】【动】【力】【,】【即】【使】【茫】【茫】【征】【途】【,】【它】【也】【不】【会】【感】【到】【劳】【累】【。】【张】【爱】【玲】【曾】【经】【说】【过】【:】【“】【成】【名】【要】【趁】【早】【”】【,】【她】【给】【自】【己】【的】【定】【位】【是】【作】【家】【。】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【她】【就】【开】【始】【为】【这】【个】【目】【标】【而】【进】【行】【不】【断】【的】【努】【力】【,】【最】【后】【,】【她】【终】【于】【成】【为】【了】【出】【色】【的】【作】【家】【,】【她】【找】【到】【了】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【香】【格】【里】【拉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【溪】【是】【幸】【运】【的】【,】【因】【为】【它】【没】【有】【给】【自】【己】【定】【位】【为】【一】【潭】【死】【水】【,】【而】【是】【选】【择】【了】【向】【大】【海】【流】【淌】【;】【大】【雁】【是】【明】【智】【的】【,】【因】【为】【它】【没】【有】【将】【自】【己】【定】【位】【为】【一】【只】【小】【鸟】【,】【而】【是】【把】【自】【己】【当】【成】【可】【以】【周】【游】【世】【界】【的】【行】【者】【;】【百】【合】【是】【幸】【福】【的】【,】【因】【为】【它】【没】【有】【把】【自】【己】【定】【位】【为】【一】【棵】【野】【草】【,】【而】【是】【坚】【信】【自】【己】【是】【世】【界】【上】【最】【美】【丽】【的】【花】【朵】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【界】【是】【美】【丽】【的】【,】【因】【为】【它】【充】【满】【着】【美】【好】【。】【希】【望】【成】【长】【路】【上】【的】【我】【们】【,】【不】【要】【急】【着】【赶】【路】【,】【在】【我】【们】【迷】【茫】【的】【时】【候】【,】【适】【时】【地】【停】【下】【你】【的】【脚】【步】【思】【索】【一】【下】【这】【条】【路】【是】【否】【适】【合】【自】【己】【,】【或】【者】【思】【考】【一】【下】【你】【所】【做】【的】【事】【是】【不】【是】【适】【合】【自】【己】【,】【如】【果】【不】【适】【合】【请】【马】【上】【调】【整】【,】【否】【则】【走】【得】【远】【了】【想】【要】【改】【变】【就】【会】【付】【出】【更】【大】【的】【代】【价】【。】【寻】【找】【一】【个】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【香】【格】【里】【拉】【吧】【,】【朝】【着】【它】【努】【力】【奋】【斗】【,】【那】【么】【,】【成】【功】【也】【就】【离】【我】【们】【越】【来】【越】【近】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【观】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【标】【题】【就】【是】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【,】【作】【者】【开】【篇】【使】【用】【排】【比】【的】【修】【辞】【,】【为】【文】【章】【开】【了】【一】【个】【好】【头】【,】【并】【奠】【定】【了】【全】【文】【的】【抒】【情】【基】【调】【。】【能】【举】【出】【典】【型】【的】【事】【例】【说】【明】【不】【同】【的】【观】【点】【,】【叙】【述】【和】【议】【论】【的】【比】【例】【处】【理】【得】【很】【好】【,】【能】【够】【旁】【征】【博】【引】【,】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【的】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【增】【加】【了】【语】【言】【的】【生】【动】【性】【。】【文】【章】【段】【落】【灵】【活】【自】【然】【,】【结】【构】【完】【整】【,】【是】【一】【篇】【不】【错】【的】【文】【章】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【敏】【杰】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】短歌行原文及翻译【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【提】【升】【作】【文】【水】【平】【,】【大】【致】【可】【以】【从】【三】【个】【方】【面】【努】【力】【,】【即】【内】【容】【、】【结】【构】【和】【语】【言】【。】【相】【对】【来】【说】【,】【内】【容】【和】【结】【构】【的】【问】【题】【,】【一】【经】【指】【点】【,】【收】【效】【比】【较】【明】【显】【。】【而】【提】【升】【语】【言】【表】【现】【能】【力】【,】【则】【须】【潜】【移】【默】【化】【,】【日】【积】【月】【累】【,】【难】【以】【立】【竿】【见】【影】【。】【那】【么】【,】【什】【么】【是】【语】【言】【表】【现】【力】【?】【语】【言】【表】【现】【力】【就】【是】【指】【在】【一】【定】【的】【语】【境】【中】【,】【应】【对】【表】【达】【需】【要】【的】【语】【言】【再】【现】【能】【力】【。】【语】【言】【再】【现】【,】【自】【然】【需】【要】【词】【汇】【,】【因】【此】【,】【积】【累】【词】【汇】【量】【是】【必】【要】【的】【,】【多】【读】【是】【积】【累】【词】【汇】【的】【途】【径】【。】【然】【而】【,】【光】【有】【词】【汇】【还】【不】【行】【,】【还】【须】【意】【到】【笔】【随】【,】【应】【需】【设】【词】【。】【这】【种】【情】【动】【辞】【发】【的】【能】【力】【是】【隐】【性】【的】【,】【是】【在】【写】【作】【实】【践】【中】【自】【然】【 】【呈】【现】【的】【。】【有】【人】【称】【之】【为】【“】【语】【感】【”】【,】【它】【是】【在】【不】【断】【地】【读】【写】【实】【践】【中】【逐】【渐】【养】【成】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【《】【他】【们】【》】【在】【语】【言】【运】【用】【上】【颇】【具】【特】【色】【。】【这】【原】【是】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【上】【海】【一】【篇】【高】【考】【作】【文】【,】【对】【于】【初】【中】【学】【生】【来】【说】【,】【年】【级】【层】【次】【可】【能】【高】【了】【一】【点】【,】【但】【取】【法】【乎】【上】【,】【择】【善】【而】【从】【。】【又】【因】【为】【它】【是】【现】【场】【作】【文】【,】【比】【较】【真】【实】【地】【表】【现】【了】【学】【生】【的】【语】【言】【能】【力】【,】【所】【以】【,】【从】【写】【作】【实】【践】【出】【发】【,】【讨】【论】【语】【言】【表】【现】【规】【律】【,】【对】【同】【学】【们】【可】【能】【会】【有】【较】【大】【的】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【读】【原】【文】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【城】【市】【尽】【头】【,】【没】【有】【繁】【华】【的】【街】【市】【,】【闪】【亮】【的】【霓】【虹】【;】【在】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【只】【有】【破】【旧】【的】【棚】【户】【区】【,】【有】【饱】【经】【生】【活】【风】【霜】【的】【生】【命】【;】【在】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【有】【他】【们】【这】【样】【一】【群】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【怎】【样】【称】【呼】【他】【们】【?】【外】【来】【务】【工】【人】【员】【子】【女】【?】【农】【民】【子】【弟】【?】【抑】【或】【是】【农】【民】【工】【二】【代】【?】【不】【,】【我】【不】【想】【用】【这】【些】【冰】【冷】【的】【名】【字】【称】【呼】【他】【们】【,】【我】【多】【想】【叫】【着】【他】【们】【带】【着】【泥】【土】【气】【的】【乳】【名】【,】【拉】【着】【他】【们】【的】【小】【手】【,】【走】【近】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【从】【小】【生】【长】【在】【故】【乡】【的】【青】【山】【绿】【水】【中】【,】【纯】【洁】【的】【灵】【魂】【在】【田】【野】【里】【抽】【穗】【拔】【节】【。】【在】【山】【野】【的】【风】【中】【,】【他】【们】【奔】【跑】【着】【,】【憧】【憬】【着】【。】【风】【从】【田】【野】【中】【吹】【过】【,】【吹】【进】【了】【城】【市】【,】【为】【了】【生】【计】【,】【为】【了】【未】【来】【,】【他】【们】【跟】【从】【父】【母】【来】【到】【了】【城】【市】【,】【在】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【扎】【下】【了】【根】【。】【于】【是】【习】【惯】【了】【青】【山】【绿】【水】【的】【双】【眸】【第】【一】【次】【触】【碰】【到】【了】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【、】【车】【水】【马】【龙】【。】【他】【们】【不】【知】【道】【怎】【样】【穿】【过】【六】【车】【道】【的】【马】【路】【,】【小】【小】【的】【手】【指】【怎】【么】【也】【数】【不】【清】【写】【字】【楼】【的】【层】【数】【。】【繁】【华】【的】【现】【代】【文】【明】【不】【曾】【给】【他】【们】【带】【来】【任】【何】【快】【乐】【,】【这】【一】【次】【,】【却】【在】【心】【上】【烙】【下】【了】【深】【深】【的】【痕】【迹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【背】【起】【书】【包】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【融】【入】【城】【市】【的】【生】【活】【,】【可】【是】【却】【在】【“】【城】【市】【人】【”】【异】【样】【的】【眼】【光】【中】【,】【第】【一】【次】【明】【白】【了】【户】【口】【与】【暂】【住】【证】【的】【区】【别】【。】【他】【们】【都】【是】【父】【母】【心】【头】【的】【宝】【啊】【!】【却】【过】【早】【地】【承】【担】【了】【不】【属】【于】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【的】【负】【担】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【学】【回】【家】【,】【他】【们】【做】【好】【简】【单】【的】【晚】【饭】【,】【父】【母】【还】【在】【工】【地】【或】【菜】【场】【上】【劳】【作】【;】【午】【夜】【醒】【来】【,】【泪】【眼】【中】【城】【里】【的】【星】【空】【没】【有】【家】【乡】【的】【明】【亮】【;】【悄】【悄】【许】【愿】【,】【希】【望】【明】【天】【他】【们】【的】【打】【工】【子】【弟】【小】【学】【不】【会】【因】【交】【不】【出】【电】【费】【而】【被】【查】【封】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【在】【他】【们】【日】【益】【长】【高】【的】【身】【体】【上】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【他】【们】【的】【成】【长】【。】【记】【得】【一】【位】【记】【者】【问】【一】【个】【打】【工】【子】【弟】【学】【校】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【学】【成】【后】【是】【否】【会】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【时】【,】【小】【姑】【娘】【毫】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【说】【:】【当】【然】【,】【一】【定】【回】【去】【!】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【差】【点】【落】【下】【泪】【来】【,】【为】【他】【们】【的】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【那】【年】【春】【晚】【他】【们】【稚】【气】【的】【宣】【言】【:】【“】【我】【们】【的】【学】【校】【很】【小】【,】【但】【我】【们】【的】【成】【绩】【不】【差】【”】【“】【我】【们】【不】【和】【城】【里】【的】【孩】【子】【比】【爸】【爸】【”】【“】【北】【京】【的】【2】【0】【0】【8】【,】【也】【是】【我】【们】【的】【2】【0】【0】【8】【!】【”】【他】【们】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【,】【告】【别】【昨】【天】【的】【羞】【怯】【,】【开】【始】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【一】【天】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【虽】【然】【,】【他】【们】【还】【在】【为】【不】【多】【的】【学】【费】【而】【苦】【恼】【;】【虽】【然】【,】【学】【校】【还】【是】【交】【不】【上】【水】【电】【费】【;】【虽】【然】【,】【还】【有】【好】【多】【体】【制】【还】【不】【够】【完】【善】【…】【…】【虽】【然】【有】【好】【多】【个】【“】【虽】【然】【”】【,】【但】【是】【,】【只】【有】【一】【个】【“】【但】【是】【”】【就】【足】【够】【了】【,】【已】【经】【有】【好】【多】【视】【线】【转】【向】【他】【们】【,】【他】【们】【正】【在】【茁】【壮】【地】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【太】【阳】【从】【地】【平】【线】【上】【升】【起】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【,】【终】【将】【会】【成】【为】【我】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【原】【题】【是】【:】【“】【平】【常】【大】【家】【关】【注】【更】【多】【的】【也】【许】【是】【‘】【我】【们】【’】【,】【如】【果】【把】【视】【线】【转】【向】【‘】【他】【们】【’】【,】【你】【会】【看】【到】【什】【么】【,】【又】【会】【想】【到】【什】【么】【?】【请】【以】【‘】【他】【们】【’】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【是】【应】【题】【之】【作】【。】【作】【者】【关】【注】【的】【“】【他】【们】【”】【,】【是】【城】【市】【中】【一】【个】【特】【殊】【的】【群】【体】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【。】【文】【章】【有】【记】【叙】【,】【有】【描】【写】【,】【有】【抒】【情】【,】【有】【议】【论】【,】【语】【言】【表】【现】【比】【较】【全】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【顺】【畅】【是】【作】【文】【的】【基】【本】【要】【求】【。】【所】【谓】【顺】【畅】【,】【它】【包】【括】【用】【词】【准】【确】【和】【合】【乎】【逻】【辑】【两】【个】【方】【面】【。】【运】【用】【词】【语】【,】【特】【别】【是】【关】【键】【词】【语】【,】【要】【注】【意】【选】【准】【。】【比】【如】【,】【文】【章】【在】【表】【现】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【居】【住】【环】【境】【时】【,】【选】【用】【“】【在】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【”】【一】【语】【概】【括】【,】【“】【尽】【头】【”】【一】【词】【,】【准】【确】【点】【出】【城】【乡】【结】【合】【的】【地】【域】【特】【点】【,】【反】【映】【农】【民】【工】【生】【活】【的】【艰】【辛】【,】【极】【具】【真】【实】【性】【。】【又】【如】【,】【反】【映】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【成】【长】【,】【文】【章】【说】【:】【“】【他】【们】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【,】【告】【别】【昨】【天】【的】【羞】【怯】【,】【开】【始】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【一】【天】【。】【”】【“】【羞】【怯】【”】【一】【词】【,】【与】【“】【成】【熟】【”】【呼】【应】【,】【揭】【示】【他】【们】【的】【心】【理】【变】【化】【过】【程】【,】【既】【真】【切】【,】【又】【生】【动】【。】【再】【从】【语】【句】【的】【连】【贯】【来】【说】【,】【要】【达】【到】【前】【后】【照】【应】【,】【顺】【理】【成】【章】【,】【就】【必】【须】【合】【乎】【语】【言】【的】【逻】【辑】【顺】【序】【。】【仍】【以】【《】【他】【们】【》】【一】【文】【为】【例】【,】【全】【文】【共】【1】【0】【个】【段】【落】【,】【分】【4】【个】【层】【次】【。】【第】【1】【段】【为】【第】【1】【层】【次】【,】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【居】【住】【环】【境】【,】【紧】【承】【题】【目】【“】【他】【们】【”】【而】【来】【。】【第】【2】【段】【为】【第】【2】【层】【次】【,】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【称】【呼】【。】【第】【3】【层】【次】【,】【3】【至】【7】【段】【,】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【初】【到】【城】【市】【(】【“】【第】【一】【次】【触】【碰】【到】【了】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【”】【)】【“】【融】【入】【城】【市】【”】【“】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【”】【,】【依】【次】【写】【他】【们】【的】【心】【理】【压】【力】【、】【生】【活】【负】【担】【和】【未】【来】【愿】【望】【。】【第】【4】【层】【次】【,】【8】【至】【1】【0】【段】【,】【写】【对】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【评】【论】【。】【全】【文】【层】【次】【井】【然】【,】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【合】【乎】【生】【活】【逻】【辑】【,】【也】【符】【合】【感】【情】【逻】【辑】【。】【语】【言】【编】【排】【的】【逻】【辑】【性】【是】【语】【言】【顺】【畅】【的】【内】【在】【基】【础】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【语】【言】【形】【象】【是】【对】【作】【文】【语】【言】【的】【又】【一】【要】【求】【。】【就】【表】【达】【方】【式】【而】【言】【,】【对】【于】【描】【写】【用】【语】【,】【求】【形】【象】【表】【现】【,】【中】【学】【生】【相】【对】【熟】【悉】【,】【如】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【等】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【,】【往】【往】【得】【心】【应】【手】【。】【而】【用】【于】【叙】【述】【、】【议】【论】【、】【抒】【情】【等】【表】【达】【方】【式】【,】【求】【其】【形】【象】【化】【表】【现】【就】【较】【难】【驾】【驭】【。】【有】【鉴】【于】【此】【,】【本】【篇】【作】【文】【恰】【恰】【在】【后】【者】【表】【现】【突】【出】【,】【可】【引】【为】【范】【例】【。】【如】【文】【章】【在】【叙】【述】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【生】【活】【状】【况】【时】【,】【不】【是】【简】【单】【化】【地】【用】【一】【个】【“】【艰】【苦】【”】【词】【语】【了】【之】【,】【而】【是】【通】【过】【“】【破】【旧】【的】【棚】【户】【区】【”】【“】【简】【单】【的】【晚】【饭】【”】【“】【交】【不】【出】【电】【费】【”】【“】【为】【不】【多】【的】【学】【费】【苦】【恼】【”】【等】【具】【体】【、】【形】【象】【的】【词】【语】【加】【以】【凸】【现】【。】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【心】【理】【压】【力】【,】【也】【不】【是】【用】【一】【个】【“】【苦】【闷】【”】【了】【之】【,】【而】【是】【通】【过】【“】【他】【们】【不】【知】【道】【怎】【样】【穿】【过】【六】【车】【道】【的】【马】【路】【,】【小】【小】【的】【手】【指】【怎】【么】【也】【数】【不】【清】【写】【字】【楼】【的】【层】【数】【”】【,】【写】【他】【们】【的】【茫】【然】【;】【用】【“】【午】【夜】【醒】【来】【,】【泪】【眼】【中】【城】【里】【的】【星】【空】【没】【有】【家】【乡】【的】【明】【亮】【”】【写】【他】【们】【的】【失】【落】【。】【特】【别】【是】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【成】【长】【,】【原】【本】【内】【容】【繁】【多】【,】【概】【括】【都】【难】【。】【本】【文】【却】【能】【以】【形】【象】【出】【之】【,】【生】【动】【展】【示】【。】【文】【章】【写】【他】【们】【在】【农】【村】【时】【,】【“】【纯】【洁】【的】【灵】【魂】【在】【田】【野】【里】【抽】【穗】【拔】【节】【”】【,】【来】【到】【城】【市】【,】【“】【他】【们】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【,】【告】【别】【昨】【天】【的】【羞】【怯】【,】【开】【始】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【一】【天】【”】【,】【“】【抽】【穗】【拔】【节】【”】【,】【比】【喻】【贴】【切】【,】【何】【其】【形】【象】【!】【又】【何】【其】【生】【动】【!】【告】【别】【“】【羞】【怯】【”】【,】【刻】【画】【心】【态】【,】【惟】【妙】【惟】【肖】【,】【何】【其】【形】【象】【,】【何】【其】【真】【切】【!】【议】【论】【亦】【然】【。】【一】【般】【地】【说】【,】【议】【论】【多】【用】【抽】【象】【、】【概】【括】【的】【语】【气】【,】【而】【本】【篇】【作】【文】【却】【能】【以】【形】【象】【的】【语】【言】【展】【开】【,】【如】【评】【论】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【心】【理】【压】【力】【,】【文】【章】【说】【:】【“】【他】【们】【都】【是】【父】【母】【心】【头】【的】【宝】【啊】【!】【却】【过】【早】【地】【承】【担】【了】【不】【属】【于】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【的】【负】【担】【。】【”】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【的】【同】【情】【之】【心】【和】【不】【平】【之】【意】【。】【在】【预】【言】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【必】【将】【有】【光】【明】【的】【未】【来】【时】【,】【文】【章】【用】【了】【“】【太】【阳】【从】【地】【平】【线】【上】【升】【起】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【”】【,】【以】【“】【阳】【光】【”】【作】【喻】【,】【寓】【议】【于】【形】【,】【读】【懂】【了】【形】【象】【,】【也】【就】【读】【懂】【了】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【含】【蓄】【表】【达】【是】【语】【言】【表】【现】【较】【高】【的】【层】【次】【。】【语】【言】【简】【洁】【而】【意】【蕴】【丰】【厚】【是】【含】【蓄】【的】【特】【点】【。】【《】【他】【们】【》】【为】【少】【年】【作】【文】【,】【能】【做】【到】【这】【一】【点】【是】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【的】【。】【文】【章】【谈】【到】【对】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【种】【种】【称】【呼】【,】【什】【么】【“】【农】【民】【子】【弟】【”】【“】【农】【民】【二】【代】【”】【等】【等】【,】【作】【者】【说】【:】【“】【我】【不】【想】【用】【这】【些】【冰】【冷】【的】【名】【字】【称】【呼】【他】【们】【…】【…】【”】【“】【冰】【冷】【”】【一】【词】【,】【情】【动】【于】【衷】【,】【情】【感】【却】【是】【炽】【热】【的】【。】【文】【章】【最】【后】【一】【句】【:】【“】【他】【们】【,】【终】【将】【会】【成】【为】【我】【们】【。】【”】【这】【是】【全】【文】【中】【心】【思】【想】【的】【概】【括】【,】【“】【他】【们】【”】【和】【“】【我】【们】【”】【由】【分】【而】【合】【,】【不】【仅】【充】【分】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【对】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【肯】【定】【和】【赞】【美】【,】【揭】【示】【了】【他】【们】【成】【长】【的】【意】【义】【,】【而】【且】【从】【一】【个】【侧】【面】【反】【映】【了】【当】【代】【中】【国】【社】【会】【的】【变】【革】【,】【城】【市】【化】【进】【程】【的】【时】【代】【步】【伐】【。】【用】【语】【深】【刻】【,】【意】【味】【无】【穷】【,】【言】【约】【意】【丰】【,】【达】【到】【语】【言】【含】【蓄】【表】【达】【的】【高】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【他】【们】【》】【一】【文】【写】【于】【现】【场】【,】【为】【应】【题】【而】【作】【,】【作】【文】【语】【言】【能】【写】【得】【如】【此】【顺】【畅】【,】【如】【此】【形】【象】【而】【又】【言】【简】【意】【深】【,】【实】【为】【不】【易】【,】【可】【见】【作】【者】【扎】【实】【的】【语】【言】【基】【本】【功】【。】【作】【家】【孙】【犁】【说】【:】【“】【从】【事】【写】【作】【的】【人】【,】【应】【当】【像】【追】【求】【真】【理】【一】【样】【去】【追】【求】【语】【言】【,】【应】【当】【把】【语】【言】【大】【量】【贮】【积】【起】【来】【。】【应】【当】【经】【常】【把】【你】【的】【语】【言】【放】【在】【纸】【上】【,】【放】【在】【你】【的】【心】【里】【,】【用】【纸】【的】【砧】【、】【心】【的】【锤】【来】【锤】【炼】【它】【们】【。】【”】【(】【《】【文】【艺】【学】【习】【》】【)】【有】【志】【于】【写】【作】【的】【同】【学】【们】【,】【正】【应】【该】【记】【住】【这】【三】【个】【“】【应】【当】【”】【,】【尝】【试】【以】【“】【纸】【的】【砧】【”】【、】【“】【心】【的】【锤】【”】【来】【提】【升】【自】【己】【的】【语】【言】【表】【现】【能】【力】【,】【倘】【能】【如】【是】【,】【何】【愁】【不】【成】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【万】【木】【凋】【零】【山】【不】【动】【,】【百】【川】【皆】【旱】【海】【长】【深】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【出】【处】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【·】【李】【群】【玉】【《】【辱】【绵】【州】【于】【中】【丞】【书】【信】【》】【:】【“】【一】【缄】【垂】【露】【到】【云】【林】【,】【中】【有】【孙】【阳】【念】【骥】【心】【。】【万】【木】【凋】【零】【山】【不】【动】【,】【百】【川】【皆】【旱】【海】【长】【深】【。】【风】【林】【想】【见】【瑶】【台】【鹤】【,】【诗】【韵】【如】【闻】【渌】【水】【琴】【。】【他】【日】【纵】【陪】【池】【上】【酌】【,】【已】【应】【难】【到】【暝】【猿】【吟】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【有】【的】【树】【木】【都】【有】【凋】【零】【的】【时】【候】【,】【而】【山】【却】【岿】【然】【不】【动】【;】【所】【有】【的】【河】【流】【都】【有】【旱】【的】【时】【候】【,】【而】【大】【海】【却】【永】【远】【那】【么】【深】【泓】【。】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【都】【是】【由】【量】【变】【到】【质】【变】【,】【在】【这】【一】【变】【化】【中】【,】【时】【间】【的】【长】【短】【很】【不】【一】【样】【,】【有】【的】【事】【物】【量】【变】【阶】【段】【比】【较】【短】【,】【而】【有】【的】【事】【物】【量】【变】【阶】【段】【却】【特】【别】【长】【,】【表】【现】【出】【相】【对】【的】【稳】【定】【性】【和】【静】【止】【状】【态】【。】【山】【、】【海】【的】【量】【变】【阶】【段】【就】【是】【比】【较】【长】【的】【,】【所】【以】【给】【人】【以】【“】【不】【动】【”】【和】【“】【长】【深】【”】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【常】【用】【来】【比】【喻】【人】【有】【着】【一】【贯】【的】【追】【求】【,】【立】【场】【坚】【定】【,】【不】【随】【世】【俗】【变】【幻】【。】【也】【比】【喻】【做】【学】【问】【要】【有】【深】【厚】【扎】【实】【的】【功】【底】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【 】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【 】【于】【磊】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【明】【月】【松】【间】【照】【,】【清】【泉】【石】【上】【流】【”】【。】【心】【有】【一】【盏】【明】【灯】【,】【便】【不】【会】【迷】【路】【,】【便】【可】【拒】【绝】【黑】【暗】【和】【苦】【涩】【。】【心】【有】【一】【汪】【清】【泉】【,】【将】【会】【洗】【涤】【你】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【滋】【润】【你】【的】【生】【命】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【泉】【”】【是】【古】【诗】【文】【中】【极】【富】【韵】【致】【的】【意】【象】【。】【漫】【步】【在】【唐】【诗】【宋】【词】【明】【清】【小】【品】【里】【,】【耳】【畔】【不】【时】【传】【来】【涓】【涓】【的】【泉】【声】【,】【眼】【前】【晃】【动】【的】【是】【一】【溪】【甘】【洌】【鲜】【活】【的】【清】【泉】【,】【以】【及】【观】【泉】【、】【听】【泉】【的】【身】【影】【,】【还】【有】【苔】【痕】【、】【鸟】【影】【、】【梅】【枝】【,】【以】【及】【月】【光】【、】【清】【风】【、】【松】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【东】【山】【魁】【夷】【说】【,】【“】【人】【人】【心】【中】【都】【有】【一】【股】【泉】【水】【”】【。】【人】【之】【一】【生】【,】【苦】【也】【罢】【,】【乐】【也】【罢】【,】【得】【也】【好】【,】【失】【也】【好】【,】【最】【要】【紧】【的】【是】【心】【间】【不】【能】【没】【有】【一】【泓】【清】【泉】【。】【心】【泉】【是】【尘】【世】【间】【最】【纯】【净】【的】【东】【西】【。】【从】【古】【至】【今】【,】【它】【不】【间】【断】【地】【奔】【流】【着】【,】【阅】【尽】【生】【死】【荣】【枯】【,】【它】【何】【曾】【因】【风】【霜】【雨】【雪】【而】【萎】【缩】【移】【易】【,】【又】【何】【曾】【因】【宠】【辱】【得】【失】【而】【灰】【颓】【沉】【湎】【?】【心】【中】【有】【泉】【的】【人】【才】【能】【甘】【于】【清】【贫】【、】【甘】【于】【寂】【寞】【,】【才】【能】【自】【始】【至】【终】【保】【持】【独】【立】【的】【人】【格】【,】【才】【能】【忘】【我】【地】【创】【造】【。】【心】【中】【有】【泉】【的】【人】【,】【一】【生】【都】【在】【浇】【灌】【真】【善】【美】【之】【花】【,】【他】【们】【为】【人】【类】【留】【下】【了】【一】【道】【道】【可】【贵】【的】【精】【神】【清】【泉】【—】【—】【屈】【原】【字】【字】【珠】【玑】【的】【楚】【辞】【,】【李】【白】【气】【概】【奇】【伟】【的】【诗】【歌】【,】【苏】【轼】【奔】【放】【的】【词】【文】【,】【还】【有】【司】【马】【迁】【的】【传】【记】【,】【黑】【格】【尔】【的】【哲】【学】【,】【莎】【士】【比】【亚】【的】【戏】【剧】【,】【贝】【多】【芬】【的】【钢】【琴】【曲】【,】【凡】【·】【高】【的】【绘】【画】【…】【…】【这】【些】【精】【神】【的】【清】【泉】【赋】【予】【人】【类】【文】【明】【、】【尊】【严】【与】【崇】【高】【。】【也】【有】【一】【些】【心】【中】【有】【“】【圣】【泉】【”】【的】【人】【,】【以】【其】【化】【育】【万】【物】【的】【慈】【爱】【熔】【铸】【着】【一】【种】【属】【于】【整】【个】【人】【类】【的】【精】【神】【,】【比】【如】【孔】【子】【,】【比】【如】【释】【迦】【牟】【尼】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【是】【天】【空】【,】【有】【太】【多】【的】【云】【卷】【云】【舒】【;】【人】【生】【是】【海】【洋】【,】【有】【太】【多】【的】【浪】【起】【浪】【散】【;】【人】【生】【是】【立】【交】【桥】【,】【有】【太】【多】【的】【车】【来】【车】【往】【…】【…】【繁】【华】【的】【城】【市】【里】【,】【我】【们】【在】【不】【停】【地】【奔】【波】【着】【、】【忙】【碌】【着】【,】【明】【天】【的】【时】【间】【今】【天】【用】【,】【今】【天】【的】【事】【情】【昨】【天】【做】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【节】【奏】【越】【来】【越】【快】【,】【精】【神】【越】【来】【越】【紧】【张】【,】【以】【致】【健】【康】【丧】【失】【,】【心】【灵】【蒙】【尘】【。】【而】【快】【乐】【,】【只】【是】【“】【国】【王】【的】【新】【衣】【”】【。】【该】【如】【何】【摆】【脱】【心】【灵】【的】【羁】【绊】【,】【清】【扫】【心】【灵】【的】【尘】【埃】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【佛】【曰】【:】【菩】【提】【本】【无】【树】【,】【明】【镜】【亦】【非】【台】【,】【本】【来】【无】【一】【物】【,】【何】【处】【惹】【尘】【埃】【。】【我】【等】【凡】【俗】【之】【人】【,】【当】【用】【淡】【泊】【宁】【静】【的】【心】【怀】【澄】【清】【心】【泉】【,】【用】【心】【泉】【冲】【刷】【横】【流】【竖】【淌】【的】【人】【欲】【物】【欲】【,】【用】【心】【泉】【涤】【尽】【如】【尘】【的】【烦】【扰】【。】【正】【如】【古】【诗】【所】【云】【:】【“】【春】【有】【百】【花】【秋】【有】【月】【,】【夏】【有】【凉】【风】【冬】【有】【雪】【;】【若】【无】【冗】【事】【在】【心】【头】【,】【便】【是】【人】【间】【好】【时】【节】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【,】【才】【能】【洗】【涤】【灵】【魂】【的】【污】【浊】【;】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【,】【才】【能】【解】【脱】【生】【命】【的】【烦】【恼】【;】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【,】【才】【能】【滋】【润】【你】【枯】【萎】【的】【生】【命】【;】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【,】【才】【能】【享】【受】【轻】【松】【自】【在】【的】【人】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【文】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【紧】【紧】【围】【绕】【着】【“】【心】【有】【一】【汪】【清】【泉】【,】【将】【会】【洗】【涤】【你】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【滋】【润】【你】【的】【生】【命】【”】【这】【个】【论】【点】【,】【择】【取】【古】【今】【中】【外】【名】【人】【哲】【言】【,】【精】【心】【构】【思】【成】【文】【。】【全】【文】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【行】【文】【舒】【展】【自】【如】【,】【自】【然】【洒】【脱】【。】【但】【可】【惜】【的】【是】【:】【⑴】【文】【章】【材】【料】【不】【够】【丰】【富】【。】【如】【第】【三】【段】【中】【虽】【有】【观】【点】【“】【心】【中】【有】【泉】【的】【人】【,】【一】【生】【都】【在】【浇】【灌】【真】【善】【美】【之】【花】【”】【,】【但】【作】【者】【仅】【仅】【是】【敷】【衍】【地】【列】【举】【了】【一】【些】【名】【人】【的】【文】【学】【成】【就】【,】【而】【明】【显】【地】【缺】【少】【具】【体】【材】【料】【的】【印】【证】【,】【使】【文】【章】【显】【得】【苍】【白】【无】【力】【,】【从】【而】【削】【弱】【了】【文】【章】【的】【论】【证】【力】【量】【。】【⑵】【空】【发】【议】【论】【和】【抒】【情】【。】【议】【论】【与】【抒】【情】【经】【常】【是】【因】【有】【事】【发】【生】【而】【抒】【发】【出】【来】【的】【,】【切】【忌】【大】【话】【、】【套】【话】【、】【废】【话】【,】【要】【避】【免】【空】【发】【议】【论】【,】【无】【情】【而】【“】【抒】【情】【”】【。】【可】【第】【四】【段】【“】【繁】【华】【的】【城】【市】【里】【,】【我】【们】【在】【不】【停】【地】【奔】【波】【着】【、】【忙】【碌】【着】【,】【明】【天】【的】【时】【间】【今】【天】【用】【,】【今】【天】【的】【事】【情】【昨】【天】【做】【”】【,】【既】【与】【文】【章】【内】【容】【无】【内】【在】【的】【联】【系】【,】【也】【不】【能】【与】【文】【章】【融】【为】【一】【体】【,】【纯】【属】【空】【发】【议】【论】【而】【已】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【材】【料】【丰】【富】【”】【,】【是】【指】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【,】【是】【在】【基】【础】【等】【级】【“】【内】【容】【充】【实】【”】【基】【础】【上】【的】【更】【高】【一】【层】【的】【评】【价】【标】【准】【。】【中】【考】【作】【文】【存】【在】【的】【一】【个】【普】【遍】【问】【题】【是】【内】【容】【单】【薄】【,】【内】【容】【单】【薄】【的】【主】【要】【原】【因】【是】【平】【时】【缺】【少】【甚】【至】【没】【有】【积】【累】【。】【这】【个】【积】【累】【应】【当】【包】【括】【阅】【读】【积】【累】【、】【生】【活】【积】【累】【、】【审】【美】【积】【累】【等】【多】【个】【方】【面】【。】【那】【么】【选】【取】【何】【种】【材】【料】【才】【能】【使】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【选】【取】【真】【实】【而】【典】【型】【性】【的】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【作】【文】【之】【前】【肯】【定】【要】【选】【择】【材】【料】【,】【如】【果】【能】【选】【取】【表】【现】【中】【心】【意】【思】【和】【塑】【造】【人】【物】【形】【象】【的】【材】【料】【,】【作】【文】【就】【迈】【出】【了】【成】【功】【的】【第】【一】【步】【,】【正】【确】【选】【材】【是】【提】【高】【作】【文】【水】【平】【的】【重】【要】【途】【径】【。】【作】【为】【议】【论】【性】【文】【体】【来】【说】【,】【首】【先】【,】【材】【料】【一】【定】【要】【真】【实】【,】【不】【能】【胡】【编】【乱】【造】【,】【切】【忌】【走】【进】【虚】【假】【的】【死】【胡】【同】【。】【因】【为】【虚】【假】【的】【材】【料】【,】【既】【无】【生】【命】【力】【,】【更】【无】【感】【染】【力】【。】【其】【次】【,】【选】【材】【时】【要】【注】【重】【典】【型】【性】【,】【并】【非】【多】【多】【益】【善】【。】【否】【则】【,】【将】【会】【拖】【沓】【繁】【琐】【,】【分】【不】【出】【主】【次】【重】【轻】【,】【从】【而】【不】【能】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【地】【突】【出】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【内】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【善】【于】【提】【取】【自】【己】【的】【平】【时】【积】【累】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【材】【料】【丰】【富】【”】【才】【能】【使】【行】【文】【厚】【重】【充】【实】【,】【而】【充】【实】【的】【论】【据】【来】【源】【于】【对】【生】【活】【、】【对】【书】【本】【、】【对】【社】【会】【的】【高】【度】【关】【注】【。】【在】【应】【试】【作】【文】【中】【,】【文】【章】【的】【论】【点】【确】【定】【后】【,】【考】【生】【要】【善】【于】【通】【过】【联】【想】【调】【动】【自】【己】【的】【生】【活】【知】【识】【积】【累】【和】【文】【化】【知】【识】【积】【累】【,】【以】【适】【度】【引】【用】【写】【作】【材】【料】【入】【文】【,】【增】【添】【文】【章】【的】【厚】【实】【感】【。】【鉴】【于】【此】【,】【建】【议】【考】【生】【在】【平】【时】【要】【善】【于】【思】【考】【人】【生】【,】【思】【考】【社】【会】【,】【积】【累】【一】【些】【对】【我】【们】【影】【响】【深】【远】【的】【古】【诗】【文】【中】【的】【名】【言】【名】【句】【,】【搜】【集】【一】【些】【富】【有】【启】【示】【性】【的】【经】【典】【性】【事】【实】【材】【料】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【之】【,】【议】【论】【文】【最】【忌】【材】【料】【单】【一】【,】【内】【容】【单】【薄】【。】【只】【有】【光】【秃】【秃】【的】【观】【点】【放】【在】【文】【中】【,】【而】【没】【有】【充】【实】【的】【材】【料】【来】【辅】【佐】【论】【证】【,】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【绝】【对】【是】【没】【有】【说】【服】【力】【的】【。】【因】【此】【,】【考】【生】【要】【在】【平】【时】【养】【成】【积】【累】【素】【材】【的】【良】【好】【习】【惯】【,】【写】【作】【时】【要】【根】【据】【文】【章】【的】【立】【意】【与】【材】【料】【的】【关】【系】【进】【行】【精】【细】【的】【挑】【选】【,】【并】【尽】【可】【能】【地】【将】【原】【始】【材】【料】【转】【化】【为】【文】【章】【的】【“】【入】【味】【之】【药】【”】【,】【以】【丰】【富】【文】【章】【的】【内】【涵】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【 】【 】【于】【磊】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【有】【一】【盏】【明】【灯】【,】【便】【不】【会】【迷】【路】【,】【便】【可】【拒】【绝】【黑】【暗】【和】【苦】【涩】【。】【而】【心】【有】【一】【汪】【清】【泉】【,】【将】【会】【洗】【涤】【你】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【滋】【润】【你】【的】【生】【命】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【不】【相】【信】【眼】【泪】【,】【失】【败】【也】【不】【意】【味】【着】【扼】【杀】【成】【功】【。】【生】【活】【的】【辉】【煌】【拒】【绝】【的】【不】【是】【平】【凡】【而】【是】【平】【庸】【。】【如】【果】【心】【有】【流】【动】【的】【清】【泉】【,】【就】【会】【拥】【有】【一】【份】【明】【朗】【的】【心】【情】【,】【一】【份】【必】【胜】【的】【信】【念】【,】【一】【份】【坦】【荡】【的】【胸】【怀】【。】【东】【山】【魁】【夷】【说】【:】【“】【人】【人】【心】【中】【都】【有】【一】【股】【泉】【水】【。】【”】【心】【中】【有】【泉】【的】【人】【,】【一】【生】【都】【在】【浇】【灌】【真】【、】【善】【、】【美】【之】【花】【。】【宋】【代】【的】【苏】【轼】【步】【入】【仕】【途】【,】【遭】【遇】【了】【人】【生】【中】【的】【一】【大】【劫】【难】【“】【乌】【台】【诗】【案】【”】【。】【苏】【轼】【丢】【官】【降】【职】【,】【被】【贬】【湖】【北】【黄】【州】【。】【但】【他】【却】【没】【有】【颓】【废】【下】【去】【,】【依】【然】【能】【“】【不】【以】【物】【喜】【,】【不】【以】【己】【悲】【”】【,】【诵】【出】【了】【千】【古】【佳】【作】【—】【—】【《】【念】【奴】【娇】【·】【赤】【壁】【怀】【古】【》】【。】【在】【过】【着】【“】【村】【舍】【外】【,】【古】【城】【旁】【,】【杖】【藜】【徐】【步】【转】【斜】【阳】【”】【这】【般】【闲】【适】【畅】【达】【的】【日】【子】【的】【同】【时】【,】【他】【还】【自】【励】【吟】【唱】【“】【是】【处】【青】【山】【可】【埋】【骨】【”】【“】【此】【心】【安】【处】【是】【吾】【家】【”】【。】【面】【对】【人】【世】【的】【荒】【谬】【,】【他】【凭】【着】【内】【心】【那】【份】【超】【然】【世】【外】【和】【物】【外】【的】【宁】【静】【,】【温】【和】【而】【倔】【强】【地】【反】【抗】【着】【。】【在】【黄】【州】【的】【日】【子】【,】【可】【以】【说】【是】【上】【苍】【对】【他】【人】【生】【最】【完】【整】【的】【一】【次】【考】【核】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哲】【学】【家】【培】【根】【说】【过】【:】【“】【历】【史】【使】【人】【明】【智】【,】【诗】【词】【使】【人】【灵】【秀】【。】【”】【“】【泉】【”】【是】【古】【诗】【文】【中】【极】【富】【韵】【致】【的】【意】【象】【,】【漫】【步】【在】【唐】【诗】【宋】【词】【明】【清】【小】【品】【里】【,】【耳】【畔】【不】【时】【传】【来】【冷】【冷】【的】【泉】【声】【,】【眼】【前】【晃】【动】【的】【是】【一】【溪】【甘】【洌】【鲜】【活】【的】【清】【泉】【。】【每】【次】【读】【王】【维】【的】【《】【山】【居】【秋】【暝】【》】【,】【都】【会】【惊】【诧】【于】【山】【间】【雨】【后】【的】【那】【种】【如】【水】【墨】【画】【般】【的】【清】【新】【、】【淡】【雅】【、】【宁】【静】【的】【景】【致】【。】【聆】【听】【那】【明】【月】【朗】【照】【下】【,】【万】【籁】【俱】【寂】【中】【穿】【过】【山】【石】【的】【淙】【淙】【流】【水】【、】【喧】【笑】【竹】【林】【的】【莫】【愁】【浣】【女】【和】【桨】【移】【莲】【动】【的】【晚】【归】【渔】【舟】【,】【一】【切】【都】【令】【人】【心】【驰】【神】【往】【。】【而】【唯】【有】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【的】【人】【,】【才】【能】【甘】【于】【清】【贫】【、】【甘】【于】【寂】【寞】【,】【才】【能】【始】【终】【保】【持】【高】【洁】【的】【情】【怀】【。】【也】【唯】【有】【如】【此】【,】【他】【才】【会】【咏】【出】【这】【哲】【悟】【金】【铂】【般】【的】【千】【古】【名】【篇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【清】【泉】【般】【清】【澈】【、】【诗】【意】【、】【悠】【然】【的】【生】【活】【,】【恐】【怕】【是】【我】【们】【现】【代】【人】【最】【梦】【寐】【以】【求】【的】【。】【古】【人】【说】【:】【出】【世】【者】【入】【世】【,】【入】【世】【者】【出】【世】【。】【所】【谓】【“】【出】【世】【”】【,】【便】【是】【一】【种】【看】【透】【世】【间】【现】【象】【的】【智】【慧】【。】【但】【人】【世】【间】【往】【往】【有】【许】【多】【事】【情】【,】【容】【易】【让】【我】【们】【迷】【失】【自】【己】【,】【一】【旦】【我】【们】【不】【能】【掌】【握】【自】【己】【生】【活】【的】【方】【向】【,】【我】【们】【的】【人】【生】【就】【会】【变】【得】【堕】【落】【。】【心】【中】【汪】【满】【清】【泉】【,】【生】【活】【就】【不】【会】【干】【枯】【,】【再】【难】【的】【路】【也】【能】【行】【,】【再】【高】【的】【山】【也】【敢】【爬】【。】【给】【自】【己】【在】【心】【灵】【间】【画】【出】【一】【块】【责】【任】【田】【,】【养】【花】【种】【草】【,】【耕】【云】【织】【锦】【。】【不】【必】【追】【求】【完】【美】【,】【但】【可】【以】【日】【臻】【完】【善】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【佛】【曰】【:】【菩】【提】【本】【无】【树】【,】【明】【镜】【亦】【非】【台】【,】【本】【来】【无】【一】【物】【,】【何】【处】【惹】【尘】【埃】【。】【我】【等】【凡】【俗】【之】【人】【,】【当】【用】【淡】【泊】【宁】【静】【的】【心】【境】【澄】【清】【心】【泉】【。】【正】【如】【古】【诗】【所】【云】【:】【“】【春】【有】【百】【花】【秋】【有】【月】【,】【夏】【有】【凉】【风】【冬】【有】【雪】【;】【若】【无】【冗】【事】【在】【心】【头】【,】【便】【是】【人】【间】【好】【时】【节】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【,】【才】【能】【洗】【涤】【灵】【魂】【的】【污】【浊】【;】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【,】【才】【能】【解】【脱】【生】【命】【的】【烦】【恼】【;】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【,】【才】【能】【滋】【润】【你】【枯】【萎】【的】【生】【命】【;】【心】【有】【清】【泉】【,】【才】【能】【享】【受】【轻】【松】【自】【在】【的】【人】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【后】【评】【语】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【升】【格】【后】【的】【作】【文】【,】【深】【于】【立】【意】【,】【巧】【于】【构】【思】【,】【语】【言】【精】【练】【,】【具】【有】【平】【易】【自】【然】【、】【流】【畅】【婉】【转】【的】【艺】【术】【风】【格】【。】【在】【脉】【络】【、】【层】【次】【和】【段】【落】【、】【过】【渡】【与】【照】【应】【、】【开】【头】【和】【结】【尾】【等】【方】【面】【也】【极】【其】【严】【谨】【。】【文】【章】【在】【选】【材】【方】【面】【最】【突】【出】【的】【一】【点】【,】【就】【是】【作】【者】【引】【用】【真】【实】【而】【典】【型】【的】【历】【史】【故】【事】【、】【广】【博】【的】【文】【学】【知】【识】【,】【使】【之】【成】【为】【作】【文】【的】【“】【入】【味】【之】【药】【”】【,】【既】【增】【强】【了】【议】【论】【的】【形】【象】【性】【和】【说】【服】【力】【,】【也】【造】【成】【了】【一】【种】【雄】【健】【奔】【放】【、】【汹】【涌】【澎】【湃】【的】【雄】【辩】【气】【势】【,】【特】【别】【能】【激】【动】【人】【心】【。】【此】【外】【,】【文】【中】【排】【比】【、】【对】【比】【手】【法】【的】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【,】【深】【化】【了】【作】【品】【的】【主】【题】【,】【增】【强】【了】【文】【章】【的】【感】【染】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】短歌行原文及翻译【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【烦】【事】【儿】【之】【一】【—】【—】【胖】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【唐】【朝】【大】【美】【女】【!】【”】【“】【唐】【朝】【大】【美】【女】【!】【”】【真】【烦】【!】【最】【近】【我】【们】【班】【那】【些】【“】【发】【明】【家】【”】【们】【又】【稳】【不】【住】【了】【!】【给】【我】【起】【了】【个】【外】【号】【—】【—】【唐】【朝】【大】【美】【女】【。】【为】【什】【么】【?】【因】【为】【我】【胖】【呗】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【眼】【看】【就】【要】【中】【考】【了】【,】【主】【课】【我】【不】【赖】【,】【可】【这】【体】【育】【…】【…】【除】【了】【铅】【球】【是】【我】【的】【强】【项】【,】【其】【他】【的】【嘛】【,】【就】【都】【是】【个】【问】【题】【了】【!】【妈】【妈】【老】【是】【说】【:】【“】【我】【的】【胖】【丫】【头】【,】【你】【就】【减】【减】【肥】【吧】【!】【”】【减】【肥】【?】【哪】【儿】【那】【么】【简】【单】【呀】【!】【要】【真】【有】【那】【么】【简】【单】【,】【字】【典】【里】【也】【许】【就】【没】【有】【“】【胖】【”】【这】【个】【字】【了】【!】【奶】【奶】【从】【厨】【房】【里】【出】【来】【,】【正】【端】【着】【我】【最】【爱】【吃】【的】【京】【酱】【肉】【丝】【,】【听】【见】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【就】【嚷】【开】【了】【:】【“】【减】【什】【么】【呀】【?】【这】【孩】【子】【正】【长】【个】【呢】【!】【多】【吃】【点】【!】【长】【大】【自】【然】【就】【瘦】【了】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【在】【一】【旁】【说】【起】【了】【风】【凉】【话】【:】【“】【长】【个】【儿】【?】【不】【‘】【横】【向】【发】【展】【’】【就】【不】【错】【了】【!】【赶】【明】【儿】【还】【不】【找】【你】【那】【胖】【妹】【妹】【去】【讨】【论】【一】【下】【如】【何】【‘】【更】【胖】【一】【层】【楼】【’】【!】【”】【我】【无】【语】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【胖】【,】【烦】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【烦】【事】【儿】【之】【二】【—】【—】【马】【虎】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【今】【天】【,】【我】【们】【讲】【评】【昨】【天】【的】【作】【业】【。】【”】【数】【学】【老】【师】【用】【那】【一】【口】【非】【标】【准】【的】【普】【通】【话】【讲】【道】【,】【“】【小】【A】【有】【进】【步】【!】【小】【B】【不】【错】【!】【小】【C】【挺】【好】【…】【…】【”】【我】【正】【等】【着】【老】【师】【的】【表】【扬】【,】【可】【没】【想】【到】【老】【师】【清】【了】【清】【嗓】【子】【,】【脸】【上】【“】【晴】【转】【阴】【”】【,】【说】【道】【:】【“】【表】【现】【最】【‘】【好】【’】【的】【就】【是】【王】【然】【同】【学】【!】【”】【哈】【哈】【!】【终】【于】【表】【扬】【到】【我】【了】【!】【我】【正】【一】【脸】【得】【意】【地】【等】【待】【着】【同】【学】【们】【投】【来】【羡】【慕】【的】【眼】【神】【,】【没】【想】【到】【老】【师】【却】【把】【我】【的】【语】【文】【练】【习】【册】【递】【给】【了】【我】【。】【语】【文】【练】【习】【册】【怎】【么】【会】【在】【数】【学】【老】【师】【这】【儿】【?】【真】【奇】【怪】【!】【“】【你】【交】【错】【作】【业】【本】【了】【!】【”】【顿】【时】【全】【班】【哄】【堂】【大】【笑】【,】【马】【虎】【呀】【马】【虎】【,】【你】【可】【把】【我】【害】【惨】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【马】【虎】【,】【烦】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【烦】【事】【儿】【之】【三】【—】【—】【爱】【哭】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【人】【虽】【乐】【观】【但】【又】【“】【善】【感】【”】【,】【这】【也】【许】【与】【我】【鼻】【梁】【旁】【的】【一】【颗】【“】【泪】【痣】【”】【有】【关】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【小】【我】【就】【爱】【哭】【,】【看】【电】【影】【,】【剧】【中】【人】【的】【悲】【惨】【命】【运】【让】【我】【落】【下】【了】【“】【金】【豆】【豆】【”】【;】【别】【人】【正】【为】【一】【个】【完】【美】【的】【结】【局】【欢】【呼】【,】【而】【我】【却】【被】【感】【动】【得】【“】【涕】【泪】【纵】【横】【”】【。】【考】【不】【好】【,】【“】【大】【红】【灯】【笼】【高】【高】【挂】【”】【,】【不】【用】【说】【—】【—】【肯】【定】【一】【把】【鼻】【涕】【一】【把】【泪】【了】【;】【考】【好】【了】【,】【心】【中】【一】【激】【动】【,】【泪】【水】【又】【开】【始】【在】【眼】【眶】【中】【打】【转】【儿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【此】【,】【我】【有】【了】【一】【项】【本】【班】【无】【人】【能】【敌】【的】【“】【技】【能】【”】【—】【—】【眼】【泪】【说】【来】【就】【来】【,】【随】【时】【等】【候】【流】【出】【,】【给】【同】【学】【们】【留】【下】【了】【一】【个】【“】【泪】【人】【”】【的】【形】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哎】【,】【我】【的】【眼】【泪】【咋】【这】【么】【多】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哭】【,】【烦】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【是】【的】【,】【鄙】【人】【最】【近】【有】【点】【儿】【烦】【,】【有】【点】【儿】【烦】【,】【有】【点】【儿】【烦】【…】【…】【我】【为】【胖】【烦】【,】【为】【马】【虎】【烦】【,】【为】【哭】【烦】【,】【烦】【!】【烦】【!】【烦】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【优】【秀】【的】【考】【场】【作】【文】【,】【题】【眼】【在】【“】【烦】【恼】【”】【二】【字】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【结】【构】【上】【采】【用】【小】【标】【题】【式】【成】【文】【,】【分】【别】【讲】【述】【了】【小】【作】【者】【的】【三】【个】【缺】【点】【。】【层】【次】【清】【晰】【,】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【贵】【的】【是】【小】【作】【者】【生】【活】【化】【地】【再】【现】【场】【景】【,】【比】【如】【一】【家】【人】【就】【“】【胖】【”】【的】【不】【同】【态】【度】【、】【课】【堂】【上】【因】【马】【虎】【而】【引】【发】【的】【笑】【声】【…】【…】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【而】【且】【人】【物】【的】【语】【言】【极】【其】【符】【合】【身】【份】【,】【让】【人】【读】【来】【轻】【松】【快】【乐】【,】【自】【然】【亲】【切】【!】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【贺】【丽】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

短歌行原文及翻译:日本将对带拥有中国在内5国剩先生强大募化出产境复核

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【曾】【亲】【眼】【目】【睹】【过】【黄】【山】【的】【秀】【丽】【、】【九】【寨】【沟】【的】【神】【奇】【、】【千】【岛】【湖】【的】【万】【种】【风】【情】【…】【…】【但】【我】【却】【不】【曾】【领】【略】【过】【美】【丽】【的】【海】【滨】【风】【光】【,】【我】【连】【做】【梦】【都】【想】【拥】【抱】【大】【海】【,】【去】【年】【暑】【假】【我】【终】【于】【如】【愿】【以】【偿】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【8】【月】【1】【2】【日】【下】【午】【,】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【一】【同】【乘】【飞】【机】【从】【合】【肥】【飞】【往】【青】【岛】【。】【我】【们】【在】【青】【岛】【先】【后】【游】【玩】【了】【五】【四】【广】【场】【、】【海】【底】【世】【界】【、】【栈】【桥】【等】【景】【点】【,】【虽】【然】【这】【些】【地】【方】【都】【很】【好】【玩】【,】【但】【却】【没】【有】【看】【到】【我】【日】【思】【夜】【想】【的】【大】【海】【,】【不】【禁】【有】【点】【儿】【扫】【兴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【次】【日】【,】【我】【们】【驱】【车】【来】【到】【传】【说】【中】【“】【八】【仙】【过】【海】【”】【的】【蓬】【莱】【。】【一】【下】【车】【,】【导】【游】【发】【出】【了】【一】【个】【令】【人】【无】【比】【振】【奋】【的】【指】【令】【—】【—】【去】【海】【滨】【浴】【场】【玩】【。】【我】【顿】【时】【欣】【喜】【若】【狂】【,】【像】【一】【只】【撒】【欢】【的】【小】【鹿】【,】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【奔】【向】【大】【海】【。】【放】【眼】【望】【去】【,】【蔚】【蓝】【色】【的】【大】【海】【一】【望】【无】【际】【,】【徐】【徐】【的】【海】【风】【带】【来】【了】【一】【丝】【凉】【爽】【,】【闻】【起】【来】【有】【种】【咸】【咸】【的】【味】【道】【;】【海】【浪】【轻】【轻】【拍】【打】【着】【我】【的】【脚】【背】【,】【像】【是】【在】【为】【我】【按】【摩】【,】【脚】【下】【的】【细】【沙】【踩】【起】【来】【软】【软】【的】【、】【痒】【痒】【的】【,】【感】【觉】【十】【分】【舒】【服】【。】【退】【潮】【后】【的】【沙】【滩】【上】【留】【下】【一】【片】【片】【绿】【色】【的】【海】【藻】【,】【一】【个】【个】【五】【颜】【六】【色】【的】【贝】【壳】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【换】【过】【泳】【装】【,】【我】【踏】【着】【海】【浪】【开】【始】【了】【海】【之】【旅】【中】【最】【惊】【险】【的】【项】【目】【—】【—】【海】【泳】【。】【以】【前】【我】【只】【是】【在】【游】【泳】【池】【里】【游】【过】【,】【由】【于】【地】【方】【小】【,】【人】【又】【多】【,】【游】【起】【来】【很】【不】【过】【瘾】【,】【现】【在】【我】【终】【于】【可】【以】【在】【广】【阔】【的】【大】【海】【中】【畅】【游】【了】【!】【这】【可】【是】【我】【第】【一】【次】【在】【大】【海】【中】【游】【泳】【。】【我】【怀】【着】【忐】【忑】【不】【安】【又】【十】【分】【好】【奇】【的】【心】【情】【,】【投】【入】【了】【大】【海】【的】【怀】【抱】【。】【我】【先】【是】【在】【海】【边】【不】【远】【处】【游】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【热】【了】【热】【身】【。】【接】【着】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【的】【鼓】【励】【下】【,】【我】【尝】【试】【着】【向】【远】【处】【游】【去】【。】【远】【离】【海】【岸】【,】【我】【发】【现】【这】【里】【的】【海】【水】【更】【凉】【了】【,】【颜】【色】【更】【蓝】【了】【,】【海】【面】【更】【广】【阔】【了】【。】【我】【随】【着】【海】【浪】【漂】【浮】【在】【海】【面】【,】【双】【手】【悠】【闲】【地】【划】【着】【海】【水】【,】【就】【像】【趴】【在】【一】【个】【硕】【大】【的】【海】【绵】【垫】【上】【,】【忘】【情】【地】【享】【受】【着】【浪】【花】【的】【抚】【摸】【…】【…】【正】【当】【我】【陶】【醉】【在】【快】【乐】【之】【中】【时】【,】【天】【空】【忽】【然】【暗】【了】【下】【来】【,】【海】【面】【上】【也】【刮】【起】【了】【大】【风】【。】【我】【有】【些】【紧】【张】【,】【环】【顾】【周】【围】【竟】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【影】【,】【突】【然】【一】【个】【大】【浪】【打】【来】【,】【我】【被】【灌】【了】【一】【大】【口】【海】【水】【,】【真】【咸】【呀】【!】【这】【突】【如】【其】【来】【的】【变】【故】【,】【使】【我】【顿】【时】【恐】【惧】【起】【来】【,】【手】【脚】【好】【像】【也】【不】【听】【使】【唤】【了】【,】【我】【惊】【叫】【起】【来】【。】【爸】【爸】【听】【到】【后】【迅】【速】【向】【我】【游】【了】【过】【来】【,】【一】【边】【安】【慰】【我】【保】【持】【镇】【静】【,】【一】【边】【鼓】【励】【我】【坚】【持】【到】【底】【不】【要】【放】【弃】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【的】【不】【断】【鼓】【励】【下】【,】【我】【的】【心】【情】【渐】【渐】【地】【平】【静】【了】【下】【来】【,】【鼓】【足】【勇】【气】【终】【于】【游】【回】【了】【岸】【边】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【快】【乐】【的】【时】【光】【总】【是】【那】【么】【短】【暂】【,】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【几】【个】【小】【时】【过】【去】【了】【,】【我】【也】【恋】【恋】【不】【舍】【地】【结】【束】【了】【这】【次】【的】【海】【之】【旅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【今】【想】【想】【还】【有】【些】【后】【怕】【。】【这】【次】【“】【历】【险】【”】【,】【虽】【然】【让】【我】【领】【教】【了】【大】【海】【的】【凶】【猛】【,】【却】【也】【锻】【炼】【了】【我】【的】【胆】【量】【和】【毅】【力】【,】【也】【让】【我】【真】【正】【体】【验】【到】【了】【大】【海】【的】【神】【秘】【莫】【测】【,】【令】【我】【终】【生】【难】【忘】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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