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2019年11月13日 07:20

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【过】【得】【真】【快】【,】【又】【到】【周】【末】【了】【,】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【印】【象】【中】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【。】【它】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【张】【脉】【络】【分】【明】【的】【网】【。】【(】【“】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【”】【,】【它】【美】【在】【什】【么】【地】【方】【呢】【?】【仅】【仅】【表】【现】【在】【“】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【”】【吗】【?】【显】【然】【作】【者】【这】【里】【描】【写】【得】【不】【细】【腻】【,】【没】【有】【把】【小】【巷】【的】【美】【描】【写】【出】【来】【,】【反】【映】【出】【来】【。】【)】【小】【巷】【里】【的】【热】【闹】【景】【象】【是】【永】【远】【让】【人】【怀】【念】【的】【。】【每】【到】【傍】【晚】【,】【忙】【碌】【了】【一】【天】【的】【人】【们】【回】【到】【家】【,】【听】【吧】【,】【小】【巷】【会】【奏】【出】【一】【首】【锅】【碗】【瓢】【盆】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【接】【着】【,】【一】【股】【夹】【杂】【着】【各】【种】【味】【道】【的】【气】【味】【便】【弥】【漫】【在】【狭】【窄】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【了】【。】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【天】【井】【里】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【:】【有】【的】【逗】【着】【小】【狗】【乱】【窜】【,】【有】【的】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【正】【玩】【儿】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【有】【的】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【偷】【摘】【老】【头】【们】【的】【鸟】【笼】【…】【…】【其】【中】【最】【有】【意】【思】【的】【是】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【。】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【是】【具】【有】【浓】【厚】【东】【方】【色】【彩】【的】【文】【化】【生】【活】【,】【也】【是】【中】【国】【的】【艺】【术】【。】【人】【们】【对】【蛐】【蛐】【从】【原】【先】【的】【听】【其】【声】【,】【发】【展】【到】【现】【在】【的】【观】【其】【斗】【,】【从】【这】【一】【微】【小】【的】【侧】【面】【,】【也】【反】【映】【了】【社】【会】【历】【史】【的】【变】【化】【。】【蛐】【蛐】【相】【斗】【,】【要】【挑】【重】【量】【与】【大】【小】【差】【不】【多】【的】【,】【用】【蒸】【熟】【后】【特】【制】【的】【日】【菣】【草】【或】【马】【尾】【鬃】【引】【斗】【,】【让】【它】【们】【互】【相】【较】【量】【,】【几】【经】【交】【锋】【,】【败】【的】【退】【却】【,】【胜】【的】【张】【翅】【长】【鸣】【。】【(】【本】【文】【的】【标】【题】【是】【“】【难】【忘】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【”】【,】【这】【里】【却】【大】【写】【特】【写】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【,】【显】【然】【与】【中】【心】【不】【符】【,】【远】【离】【了】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【。】【因】【此】【,】【这】【里】【还】【应】【把】【重】【点】【放】【在】【描】【写】【小】【巷】【景】【色】【上】【。】【)】【孩】【子】【的】【嬉】【笑】【打】【闹】【为】【平】【静】【的】【小】【巷】【注】【入】【了】【活】【力】【。】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【仰】【面】【躺】【在】【太】【师】【椅】【上】【,】【悠】【然】【地】【听】【着】【收】【音】【机】【,】【不】【时】【地】【哼】【上】【几】【句】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【起】【小】【巷】【,】【我】【小】【时】【候】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【乘】【凉】【的】【情】【景】【又】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【浮】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【,】【小】【巷】【显】【得】【很】【寂】【静】【,】【只】【有】【一】【些】【小】【虫】【仍】【然】【不】【闲】【着】【。】【我】【依】【偎】【在】【奶】【奶】【怀】【中】【,】【望】【着】【黑】【洞】【洞】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【无】【边】【无】【际】【的】【。】【这】【条】【小】【巷】【非】【常】【热】【闹】【,】【清】【早】【起】【来】【就】【可】【听】【到】【小】【贩】【的】【叫】【卖】【声】【,】【菠】【菜】【、】【黄】【瓜】【、】【韭】【菜】【、】【芹】【菜】【、】【草】【莓】【这】【些】【蔬】【菜】【水】【果】【都】【被】【摆】【到】【了】【小】【摊】【上】【,】【人】【们】【争】【相】【购】【买】【,】【小】【贩】【忙】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【并】【且】【十】【分】【快】【乐】【。】【(】【这】【里】【的】【描】【写】【给】【人】【一】【种】【怪】【怪】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【这】【一】【段】【开】【始】【说】【“】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【”】【,】【而】【这】【里】【又】【写】【“】【这】【条】【小】【巷】【非】【常】【热】【闹】【。】【清】【早】【起】【来】【就】【可】【听】【到】【小】【贩】【的】【叫】【卖】【声】【”】【。】【这】【里】【作】【者】【的】【写】【作】【顺】【序】【安】【排】【得】【显】【然】【,】【有】【点】【儿】【混】【乱】【。】【另】【外】【,】【这】【里】【的】【描】【写】【与】【开】【头】【的】【“】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【”】【的】【气】【氛】【有】【点】【儿】【不】【吻】【合】【。】【)】【我】【沉】【浸】【在】【这】【优】【美】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【,】【也】【沉】【浸】【在】【幸】【福】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【虫】【声】【啾】【啾】【,】【叫】【醒】【了】【我】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【离】【开】【家】【乡】【已】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【见】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【再】【也】【看】【不】【到】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【小】【巷】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【吗】【?】【奶】【奶】【依】【旧】【在】【月】【夜】【下】【哼】【着】【歌】【吗】【?】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【奶】【奶】【老】【了】【;】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【难】【得】【再】【见】【了】【,】【只】【有】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【什】【么】【时】【候】【再】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【呢】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【指】【导】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【写】【得】【有】【浓】【郁】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【有】【温】【馨】【的】【人】【情】【味】【,】【这】【是】【小】【作】【者】【成】【功】【的】【地】【方】【。】【但】【本】【文】【在】【写】【作】【上】【也】【有】【明】【显】【的】【缺】【点】【,】【具】【体】【表】【现】【在】【如】【下】【方】【面】【:】【一】【是】【观】【察】【不】【细】【,】【描】【写】【不】【美】【。】【正】【如】【作】【者】【所】【说】【“】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【”】【,】【但】【这】【美】【表】【现】【在】【什】【么】【地】【方】【呢】【?】【它】【们】【的】【布】【局】【如】【何】【,】【有】【什】【么】【景】【物】【呢】【?】【这】【些】【作】【者】【都】【没】【有】【写】【出】【来】【,】【因】【此】【小】【巷】【也】【不】【能】【给】【人】【美】【的】【感】【受】【;】【二】【是】【部】【分】【内】【容】【远】【离】【了】【中】【心】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【主】【题】【不】【够】【鲜】【明】【。】【这】【一】【点】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【作】【者】【介】【绍】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【的】【那】【些】【文】【字】【,】【这】【些】【还】【请】【小】【作】【者】【思】【考】【一】【下】【,】【看】【如】【何】【处】【理】【这】【些】【文】【字】【才】【能】【更】【好】【地】【表】【现】【小】【巷】【之】【美】【,】【才】【能】【更】【好】【地】【突】【出】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】

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【武】【林】【后】【代】【5】【—】【—】【新】【新】【任】【务】【,】【向】【第】【一】【颗】【神】【珠】【进】【发】【(】【番】【外】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【变】【了】【武】【林】【成】【果】【的】【任】【务】【,】【韩】【洛】【培】【完】【全】【沉】【浸】【在】【这】【个】【传】【说】【中】【了】【。】【通】【过】【她】【的】【非】【凡】【大】【脑】【以】【及】【智】【慧】【的】【灰】【色】【脑】【细】【胞】【的】【整】【理】【和】【概】【括】【,】【在】【这】【个】【林】【子】【里】【的】【一】【切】【神】【秘】【讯】【息】【都】【说】【得】【通】【了】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【首】【先】【是】【林】【子】【中】【的】【小】【山】【,】【起】【初】【,】【韩】【洛】【培】【总】【觉】【得】【那】【三】【座】【小】【山】【都】【有】【什】【么】【相】【同】【之】【处】【,】【当】【她】【站】【在】【林】【子】【外】【头】【,】【发】【现】【这】【三】【座】【山】【挨】【着】【同】【一】【条】【河】【,】【旁】【边】【的】【泥】【土】【堆】【和】【那】【条】【河】【连】【起】【来】【看】【,】【就】【是】【一】【个】【“】【山】【”】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【紧】【接】【着】【是】【整】【个】【林】【子】【中】【的】【1】【6】【颗】【圣】【树】【,】【它】【们】【的】【排】【列】【形】【状】【远】【看】【貌】【似】【一】【个】【“】【林】【”】【字】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【挨】【下】【来】【是】【林】【中】【的】【火】【石】【,】【韩】【夕】【明】【把】【它】【们】【一】【把】【点】【燃】【,】【韩】【洛】【培】【惊】【讶】【地】【找】【到】【了】【一】【个】【“】【火】【”】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【跟】【着】【是】【所】【有】【的】【风】【穴】【,】【是】【风】【聚】【集】【的】【地】【方】【,】【每】【个】【风】【穴】【上】【都】【有】【用】【泥】【石】【写】【上】【的】【一】【笔】【,】【若】【是】【把】【这】【些】【笔】【画】【并】【在】【一】【块】【儿】【,】【就】【形】【成】【了】【“】【风】【”】【字】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【有】【山】【林】【里】【的】【悬】【崖】【,】【悬】【崖】【下】【面】【是】【不】【见】【天】【日】【的】【阴】【森】【湿】【地】【,】【湿】【地】【中】【的】【巨】【石】【排】【成】【“】【阴】【”】【的】【样】【子】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【是】【林】【子】【里】【的】【电】【雷】【空】【地】【,】【闪】【电】【与】【雷】【总】【是】【击】【中】【这】【块】【空】【地】【,】【地】【面】【上】【不】【知】【有】【谁】【用】【石】【子】【摆】【成】【一】【个】【“】【雷】【”】【字】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【所】【有】【的】【所】【有】【连】【起】【来】【,】【就】【是】【“】【山】【林】【火】【风】【阴】【雷】【”】【,】【这】【似】【乎】【在】【什】【么】【地】【方】【听】【到】【过】【。】【这】【一】【切】【的】【一】【切】【都】【显】【示】【出】【是】【有】【人】【刻】【意】【这】【么】【做】【的】【。】【这】【个】【全】【新】【的】【任】【务】【激】【起】【了】【韩】【洛】【培】【和】【韩】【夕】【明】【的】【好】【奇】【心】【和】【探】【索】【欲】【望】【。】【他】【们】【不】【敢】【去】【尝】【试】【那】【个】【简】【单】【直】【接】【的】【办】【法】【,】【因】【为】【黑】【摩】【莲】【并】【不】【是】【无】【毒】【果】【,】【他】【们】【宁】【可】【经】【过】【一】【番】【波】【折】【,】【得】【到】【神】【珠】【,】【揭】【开】【传】【说】【的】【秘】【密】【,】【也】【不】【愿】【意】【做】【那】【种】【既】【无】【聊】【又】【无】【畏】【的】【牺】【牲】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【新】【新】【任】【务】【,】【是】【他】【们】【姐】【弟】【俩】【最】【重】【要】【的】【任】【务】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【的】【师】【傅】【白】【岩】【得】【知】【他】【们】【要】【离】【开】【幽】【坛】【林】【,】【去】【寻】【找】【传】【说】【的】【秘】【密】【,】【就】【送】【给】【他】【们】【三】【个】【礼】【物】【。】【给】【韩】【洛】【培】【的】【是】【一】【根】【新】【的】【发】【拴】【,】【这】【跟】【发】【拴】【能】【增】【强】【韩】【洛】【培】【的】【能】【力】【,】【能】【增】【强】【韩】【洛】【培】【那】【个】【篾】【竹】【发】【拴】【的】【神】【圣】【力】【。】【给】【韩】【夕】【明】【的】【是】【一】【双】【鞋】【子】【,】【这】【双】【鞋】【子】【能】【使】【韩】【夕】【明】【跑】【得】【更】【快】【,】【腿】【上】【功】【夫】【更】【强】【悍】【。】【第】【三】【个】【礼】【物】【是】【他】【们】【此】【行】【的】【必】【须】【品】【—】【—】【一】【封】【古】【老】【的】【羊】【皮】【卷】【,】【上】【面】【有】【对】【这】【一】【切】【的】【提】【示】【,】【就】【好】【像】【白】【岩】【早】【就】【知】【道】【这】【些】【秘】【密】【似】【的】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【韩】【洛】【培】【和】【韩】【夕】【明】【带】【上】【这】【三】【样】【宝】【贝】【,】【就】【准】【备】【出】【发】【了】【,】【赶】【往】【第】【一】【颗】【神】【珠】【的】【所】【在】【地】【。】【然】【而】【,】【他】【们】【不】【知】【道】【,】【恶】【魔】【还】【得】【考】【验】【考】【验】【他】【们】【看】【看】【他】【们】【是】【否】【有】【探】【索】【这】【个】【传】【说】【的】【能】【力】【。】仙剑6剧情小说txt【春】【天】【,】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【蝴】【蝶】【飞】【了】【,】【鱼】【儿】【游】【去】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【多】【么】【美】【丽】【的】【景】【色】【啊】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【夏】【天】【,】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【荷】【花】【斗】【艳】【,】【蝉】【儿】【鸣】【叫】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【多】【么】【漂】【亮】【的】【景】【色】【啊】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【秋】【天】【,】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【果】【实】【累】【累】【,】【满】【山】【红】【叶】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【多】【么】【宜】【人】【的】【景】【色】【啊】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【冬】【天】【,】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【大】【雪】【飘】【飘】【,】【滴】【水】【成】【冰】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【多】【么】【冰】【冷】【的】【景】【色】【啊】【!】

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【“】【到】【了】【。】【”】【雨】【莼】【希】【?】【S】【首】【先】【打】【破】【了】【死】【寂】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【个】【M】【M】【迅】【速】【的】【下】【车】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【,】【蕾】【蕾】【走】【了】【过】【来】【“】【当】【家】【好】【,】【你】【们】【的】【父】【亲】【在】【左】【靛】【殿】【等】【你】【们】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【嗯】【。】【蕾】【蕾】【你】【去】【吧】【、】【”】【翡】【安】【曳】【筱】【就】【招】【呼】【蕾】【蕾】【退】【下】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【—】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【看】【他】【们】【找】【我】【们】【八】【成】【是】【要】【问】【调】【查】【的】【情】【况】【@】【!】【”】【雨】【莼】【希】【?】【S】【在】【走】【向】【左】【靛】【殿】【的】【路】【上】【,】【对】【两】【个】【朋】【友】【说】【道】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【当】【然】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【恩】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【左】【靛】【殿】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【左】【靛】【殿】【其】【实】【就】【是】【一】【座】【四】【十】【层】【的】【摩】【天】【大】【厦】【,】【是】【冷】【月】【阁】【的】【人】【修】【建】【的】【,】【为】【冷】【月】【阁】【总】【部】【,】【不】【知】【情】【的】【人】【,】【都】【叫】【这】【座】【摩】【天】【大】【厦】【“】【水】【心】【泪】【珠】【”】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【到】【前】【台】【,】【翡】【安】【曳】【筱】【拿】【出】【一】【枚】【象】【征】【冷】【月】【阁】【最】【高】【统】【治】【权】【的】【弯】【月】【别】【针】【,】【递】【给】【前】【台】【小】【姐】【,】【前】【台】【小】【姐】【结】【果】【一】【看】【,】【恭】【恭】【敬】【敬】【的】【对】【三】【个】【M】【M】【说】【道】【:】【“】【当】【家】【你】【们】【来】【了】【呵】【呵】【,】【请】【到】【3】【5】【楼】【贵】【宾】【室】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【翡】【安】【曳】【筱】【拿】【回】【弯】【月】【别】【针】【,】【别】【在】【胸】【前】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【雨】【莼】【希】【?】【S】【也】【拿】【出】【一】【枚】【钢】【琴】【别】【针】【,】【别】【在】【胸】【前】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【车】【蓝】【澈】【颖】【也】【效】【仿】【,】【拿】【出】【一】【枚】【小】【亭】【子】【的】【别】【针】【,】【别】【在】【胸】【前】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【别】【针】【都】【象】【征】【冷】【月】【阁】【最】【高】【统】【治】【权】【,】【那】【些】【色】【咪】【咪】【的】【家】【伙】【,】【看】【见】【了】【这】【些】【别】【针】【,】【估】【计】【也】【不】【敢】【靠】【近】【三】【个】【M】【M】【了】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【贵】【宾】【室】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【乘】【坐】【电】【梯】【到】【了】【3】【5】【楼】【,】【三】【个】【M】【M】【快】【步】【走】【进】【贵】【宾】【室】【,】【推】【开】【门】【,】【就】【看】【见】【了】【三】【个】【父】【亲】【—】【—】【雨】【空】【云】【、】【翡】【泽】【染】【、】【车】【井】【沫】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【爸】【,】【有】【事】【吗】【?】【”】【雨】【莼】【希】【?】【S】【开】【口】【了】【,】【现】【在】【可】【是】【夜】【晚】【点】【半】【了】【,】【父】【亲】【们】【还】【没】【有】【回】【家】【,】【在】【这】【里】【聊】【天】【喝】【茶】【,】【必】【定】【是】【在】【等】【人】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【等】【你】【们】【啊】【—】【—】【说】【说】【,】【侦】【查】【的】【情】【况】【。】【”】【雨】【空】【云】【拿】【起】【紫】【砂】【壶】【,】【倒】【了】【一】【杯】【茶】【,】【端】【起】【来】【,】【从】【容】【的】【喝】【着】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【恩】【:】【2】【5】【号】【没】【有】【异】【样】【,】【只】【是】【发】【现】【?】【珀】【贵】【族】【学】【院】【校】【徽】【。】【”】【雨】【莼】【希】【?】【S】【把】【自】【己】【的】【报】【告】【告】【诉】【父】【亲】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【也】【一】【样】【,】【发】【现】【?】【珀】【贵】【族】【学】【院】【校】【徽】【。】【2】【6】【号】【没】【有】【异】【样】【。】【”】【翡】【安】【曳】【筱】【也】【说】【出】【了】【自】【己】【的】【刺】【探】【情】【况】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【最】【倒】【霉】【。】【”】【车】【蓝】【澈】【颖】【苦】【笑】【了】【一】【下】【“】【没】【有】【什】【么】【不】【寻】【常】【,】【只】【发】【现】【?】【珀】【贵】【族】【学】【院】【校】【徽】【。】【而】【且】【,】【还】【被】【那】【个】【什】【么】【千】【夜】【轩】【的】【发】【现】【了】【,】【失】【掉】【了】【咳】【咳】【咳】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【失】【掉】【什】【么】【?】【”】【车】【蓝】【澈】【颖】【不】【想】【说】【,】【可】【是】【车】【爸】【爸】【偏】【偏】【想】【知】【道】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【初】【、】【吻】【!】【”】【车】【蓝】【澈】【颖】【想】【起】【半】【个】【多】【小】【时】【前】【的】【那】【件】【事】【情】【,】【心】【中】【就】【冒】【火】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【车】【井】【沫】【没】【有】【再】【说】【什】【么】【,】【只】【是】【转】【身】【和】【另】【外】【两】【个】【爸】【爸】【嘀】【咕】【了】【一】【会】【了】【,】【如】【释】【重】【负】【的】【,】【微】【笑】【的】【开】【口】【了】【—】【—】【“】【那】【么】【,】【你】【们】【也】【去】【?】【珀】【贵】【族】【学】【院】【吧】【!】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【什】【么】【?】【”】【三】【个】【M】【M】【感】【到】【不】【可】【思】【议】【,】【她】【们】【可】【是】【冷】【月】【阁】【的】【堂】【堂】【当】【家】【,】【智】【商】【:】【随】【便】【考】【一】【个】【博】【士】【都】【没】【有】【问】【题】【,】【考】【博】【士】【后】【,】【也】【只】【是】【小】【小】【复】【习】【一】【下】【就】【O】【K】【了】【,】【上】【大】【学】【都】【是】【低】【估】【她】【们】【,】【何】【况】【是】【高】【中】【!】【她】【们】【可】【不】【像】【那】【些】【贵】【族】【千】【金】【大】【小】【姐】【那】【么】【有】【闲】【心】【思】【哦】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【有】【没】【有】【搞】【错】【?】【我】【们】【不】【去】【!】【”】【车】【蓝】【澈】【颖】【第】【一】【个】【表】【态】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【Y】【E】【S】【!】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【赞】【同】【!】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【没】【有】【听】【错】【,】【要】【去】【就】【是】【要】【去】【,】【没】【有】【争】【辩】【。】【”】【三】【个】【爸】【爸】【异】【口】【同】【声】【的】【说】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【不】【去】【就】【是】【不】【去】【,】【你】【再】【说】【也】【没】【用】【!】【”】【三】【个】【M】【M】【很】【有】【默】【契】【的】【说】【道】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【是】【嘛】【—】【—】【如】【果】【你】【不】【去】【,】【我】【就】【去】【宣】【布】【—】【—】【咳】【咳】【,】【演】【艺】【界】【的】【三】【个】【绝】【世】【M】【M】【就】【是】【你】【们】【!】【”】【车】【爸】【爸】【威】【胁】【道】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【个】【M】【M】【偶】【尔】【去】【舞】【台】【展】【一】【下】【歌】【喉】【,】【后】【来】【,】【越】【去】【越】【上】【瘾】【,】【然】【后】【呢】【…】【…】【顺】【其】【自】【然】【的】【成】【为】【了】【歌】【唱】【的】【、】【明】【星】【。】【组】【合】【“】【H】【a】【p】【p】【y】【组】【合】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【好】【…】【…】【我】【们】【去】【!】【”】【三】【个】【M】【M】【脸】【上】【同】【时】【出】【现】【无】【数】【黑】【线】【,】【要】【是】【这】【是】【他】【们】【的】【手】【下】【对】【她】【们】【这】【样】【说】【话】【,】【不】【早】【被】【揍】【死】【加】【踹】【死】【。】仙剑6剧情小说txt【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【平】【时】【作】【文】【和】【中】【考】【作】【文】【中】【,】【同】【学】【们】【写】【得】【最】【多】【、】【最】【熟】【悉】【、】【最】【拿】【手】【的】【文】【体】【当】【属】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【由】【于】【是】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【文】【体】【,】【一】【些】【同】【学】【反】【而】【掉】【以】【轻】【心】【,】【出】【现】【了】【一】【些】【不】【应】【有】【的】【失】【误】【。】【现】【针】【对】【这】【些】【失】【误】【提】【出】【相】【应】【对】【策】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【构】【思】【欠】【巧】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【”】【。】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【最】【忌】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【,】【缺】【乏】【悬】【念】【。】【那】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【文】【章】【就】【像】【是】【—】【杯】【白】【开】【水】【,】【淡】【而】【无】【味】【。】【请】【看】【下】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【的】【语】【文】【课】【上】【,】【一】【向】【不】【迟】【到】【的】【班】【长】【刘】【莹】【竟】【然】【迟】【到】【了】【半】【个】【小】【时】【,】【因】【为】【今】【天】【早】【上】【在】【去】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【张】【莹】【看】【到】【一】【个】【白】【发】【苍】【苍】【的】【老】【奶】【奶】【倒】【在】【马】【路】【边】【,】【就】【毫】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【把】【她】【扶】【了】【起】【来】【,】【并】【热】【情】【地】【把】【她】【送】【到】【了】【家】【,】【更】【让】【人】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【是】【,】【这】【个】【老】【奶】【奶】【竞】【是】【班】【主】【任】【的】【丈】【母】【娘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【原】【以】【为】【做】【人】【只】【要】【管】【好】【自】【己】【就】【行】【,】【根】【本】【不】【需】【要】【“】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【”】【。】【因】【为】【我】【早】【听】【到】【有】【一】【句】【话】【叫】【“】【各】【人】【自】【扫】【门】【前】【雪】【,】【休】【管】【他】【人】【瓦】【上】【霜】【”】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【北】【京】【市】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【日】【积】【月】【累】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【的】【叙】【事】【就】【非】【常】【平】【淡】【,】【也】【不】【能】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【。】【同】【样】【的】【内】【容】【,】【如】【果】【我】【们】【换】【一】【种】【构】【思】【,】【文】【章】【立】【刻】【就】【会】【生】【动】【许】【多】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【原】【以】【为】【做】【人】【只】【要】【管】【好】【自】【己】【就】【行】【,】【根】【本】【不】【需】【要】【“】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【”】【。】【因】【为】【我】【早】【听】【到】【有】【一】【句】【话】【叫】【“】【各】【人】【自】【扫】【门】【前】【雪】【,】【休】【管】【他】【人】【瓦】【上】【霜】【”】【。】【直】【到】【那】【件】【事】【的】【发】【生】【才】【彻】【底】【改】【变】【了】【我】【对】【人】【生】【日】【积】【月】【累】【的】【看】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【文】【课】【正】【在】【进】【行】【,】【从】【未】【迟】【到】【过】【的】【班】【长】【张】【莹】【,】【在】【上】【午】【第】【一】【节】【课】【快】【要】【结】【束】【的】【时】【候】【,】【才】【上】【气】【不】【接】【下】【气】【地】【出】【现】【在】【教】【室】【门】【口】【。】【为】【了】【不】【影】【响】【上】【课】【,】【正】【在】【上】【课】【的】【老】【师】【,】【只】【是】【向】【她】【点】【了】【点】【头】【,】【示】【意】【她】【先】【进】【教】【室】【上】【课】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【想】【,】【这】【下】【班】【长】【要】【倒】【霉】【了】【吧】【!】【平】【时】【就】【喜】【欢】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【的】【她】【,】【这】【下】【不】【知】【道】【又】【管】【了】【件】【什】【么】【闲】【事】【,】【以】【至】【于】【耽】【误】【了】【上】【课】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【上】【午】【第】【四】【节】【班】【会】【,】【班】【主】【任】【竟】【表】【扬】【了】【她】【。】【原】【来】【今】【天】【早】【上】【在】【去】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【张】【莹】【看】【到】【一】【个】【白】【发】【苍】【苍】【的】【老】【奶】【奶】【倒】【在】【马】【路】【边】【,】【就】【亳】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【把】【她】【扶】【了】【起】【来】【,】【并】【热】【情】【地】【把】【她】【送】【到】【了】【家】【。】【更】【让】【人】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【是】【,】【这】【个】【老】【奶】【奶】【竟】【是】【班】【主】【任】【的】【丈】【母】【娘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【后】【的】【片】【段】【,】【虽】【然】【也】【是】【倒】【叙】【;】【但】【增】【加】【了】【人】【物】【的】【心】【理】【描】【写】【、】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【情】【节】【曲】【折】【有】【味】【而】【富】【有】【悬】【念】【,】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【,】【而】【且】【点】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【为】【了】【避】【免】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【的】【弊】【端】【,】【可】【以】【从】【—】【件】【事】【的】【结】【果】【写】【起】【,】【也】【可】【以】【从】【一】【件】【事】【的】【中】【间】【写】【起】【,】【还】【可】【以】【用】【一】【件】【事】【来】【引】【出】【另】【一】【件】【事】【(】【当】【然】【也】【要】【有】【主】【次】【之】【分】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【感】【情】【欠】【真】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【论】【何】【种】【题】【材】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【都】【应】【该】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【这】【也】【是】【一】【类】【文】【得】【分】【的】【一】【个】【重】【要】【标】【准】【。】【然】【而】【,】【有】【的】【同】【学】【认】【为】【只】【要】【把】【事】【件】【叙】【述】【清】【楚】【就】【可】【以】【了】【,】【由】【于】【没】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【内】【容】【显】【得】【枯】【燥】【乏】【味】【;】【相】【反】【,】【有】【的】【同】【学】【为】【了】【写】【出】【“】【真】【情】【实】【感】【”】【而】【弄】【虚】【作】【假】【。】【请】【看】【下】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【有】【天】【夜】【里】【,】【我】【因】【为】【打】【摆】【子】【浑】【身】【发】【冷】【,】【躺】【在】【床】【上】【翻】【来】【覆】【去】【地】【睡】【不】【着】【。】【外】【婆】【听】【到】【我】【的】【声】【音】【,】【感】【觉】【有】【点】【儿】【不】【对】【,】【赶】【紧】【起】【床】【,】【用】【手】【摸】【摸】【我】【身】【上】【:】【“】【呀】【,】【小】【敏】【。】【你】【怎】【么】【在】【发】【抖】【呀】【!】【得】【赶】【紧】【去】【医】【院】【!】【”】【说】【着】【外】【婆】【把】【我】【抱】【起】【来】【,】【就】【往】【医】【院】【跑】【。】【我】【躺】【在】【外】【婆】【怀】【里】【,】【感】【觉】【外】【婆】【的】【胸】【怀】【是】【那】【么】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【是】【那】【么】【的】【慈】【祥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【别】【怕】【,】【就】【到】【医】【院】【了】【。】【”】【外】【婆】【一】【边】【跑】【,】【一】【边】【喘】【着】【气】【对】【我】【说】【。】【尽】【管】【马】【路】【上】【北】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【可】【听】【了】【外】【婆】【这】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【,】【我】【身】【上】【立】【刻】【感】【觉】【暖】【和】【多】【了】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【沈】【阳】【市】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【外】【婆】【把】【我】【抱】【起】【来】【,】【就】【往】【医】【院】【跑】【。】【”】【让】【人】【感】【觉】【有】【假】【。】【一】【是】【文】【中】【的】【“】【我】【”】【已】【是】【—】【个】【初】【中】【生】【,】【外】【婆】【不】【一】【定】【就】【能】【抱】【得】【动】【;】【二】【是】【现】【在】【的】【通】【信】【和】【交】【通】【都】【非】【常】【发】【达】【,】【外】【婆】【为】【何】【不】【打】【1】【2】【0】【急】【救】【电】【话】【,】【或】【者】【坐】【其】【他】【交】【通】【工】【具】【,】【这】【样】【不】【是】【更】【快】【吗】【?】【第】【三】【,】【既】【然】【是】【深】【夜】【,】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【怎】【么】【可】【能】【看】【得】【清】【?】【下】【面】【的】【修】【改】【,】【就】【真】【实】【多】【了】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【说】【着】【外】【婆】【就】【给】【1】【2】【0】【打】【了】【电】【话】【,】【很】【快】【救】【护】【车】【来】【了】【。】【外】【婆】【手】【脚】【麻】【利】【地】【帮】【我】【穿】【好】【衣】【服】【,】【扶】【着】【我】【上】【了】【车】【。】【在】【车】【上】【,】【我】【躺】【在】【外】【婆】【怀】【里】【,】【感】【觉】【外】【婆】【的】【胸】【怀】【是】【那】【么】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【借】【着】【车】【内】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【我】【发】【现】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【是】【那】【么】【的】【慈】【祥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【别】【怕】【,】【就】【到】【医】【院】【了】【。】【”】【外】【婆】【慈】【爱】【地】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【头】【安】【慰】【我】【。】【尽】【管】【马】【路】【上】【冷】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【可】【听】【了】【外】【婆】【这】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【,】【我】【身】【上】【立】【刻】【感】【觉】【温】【暖】【了】【许】【多】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【过】【以】【上】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【只】【有】【所】【叙】【之】【事】【符】【合】【生】【活】【的】【情】【理】【,】【才】【有】【可】【能】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【同】【学】【或】【许】【会】【问】【,】【记】【叙】【文】【可】【不】【可】【以】【虚】【构】【?】【回】【答】【是】【:】【可】【以】【。】【但】【尽】【可】【能】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【实】【事】【,】【也】【可】【以】【把】【发】【生】【在】【别】【人】【身】【上】【的】【事】【“】【嫁】【接】【”】【到】【自】【己】【身】【上】【,】【即】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【所】【说】【的】【“】【杂】【取】【种】【种】【人】【,】【合】【成】【一】【个】【”】【,】【这】【样】【就】【比】【较】【容】【易】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【立】【意】【欠】【深】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【立】【意】【即】【文】【章】【所】【要】【表】【达】【的】【主】【题】【。】【所】【谓】【立】【意】【深】【,】【就】【是】【所】【表】【现】【的】【主】【题】【不】【是】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【的】【,】【而】【是】【新】【颖】【独】【到】【,】【给】【人】【以】【启】【发】【鼓】【舞】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【写】【中】【考】【作】【文】【(】【特】【别】【是】【写】【材】【料】【作】【文】【和】【话】【题】【作】【文】【)】【时】【,】【不】【去】【深】【入】【分】【析】【现】【象】【背】【后】【的】【本】【质】【,】【也】【不】【去】【探】【究】【问】【题】【形】【成】【的】【深】【层】【原】【因】【,】【只】【是】【表】【面】【上】【浮】【光】【掠】【影】【地】【说】【一】【说】【,】【谈】【一】【谈】【,】【或】【就】【事】【论】【事】【,】【这】【就】【是】【立】【意】【欠】【深】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【湖】【南】【邵】【阳】【中】【考】【作】【文】【(】【二】【选】【一】【)】【,】【要】【求】【以】【“】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【的】【作】【文】【(】【文】【体】【不】【限】【)】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【阳】【光】【无】【比】【温】【暖】【,】【人】【们】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【快】【乐】【的】【生】【活】【;】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【万】【物】【生】【长】【靠】【太】【阳】【,】【冬】【日】【里】【人】【和】【动】【植】【物】【都】【格】【外】【需】【要】【阳】【光】【;】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【冬】【天】【里】【人】【们】【渴】【望】【阳】【光】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【尤】【其】【冰】【天】【雪】【地】【的】【时】【候】【,】【等】【等】【。】【很】【明】【显】【以】【上】【立】【意】【都】【是】【从】【太】【阳】【的】【本】【义】【出】【发】【,】【没】【有】【上】【升】【到】【一】【个】【哲】【理】【的】【高】【度】【。】【而】【有】【的】【同】【学】【从】【“】【亲】【情】【(】【或】【友】【情】【)】【就】【像】【是】【冬】【日】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【”】【来】【立】【意】【,】【就】【深】【刻】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【有】【透】【过】【事】【物】【的】【现】【象】【来】【观】【照】【生】【活】【,】【感】【悟】【生】【活】【,】【揭】【示】【事】【物】【与】【生】【活】【的】【内】【在】【联】【系】【,】【方】【能】【立】【意】【深】【刻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【用】【语】【欠】【准】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【具】【体】【表】【现】【在】【用】【语】【不】【够】【得】【体】【,】【不】【能】【做】【到】【文】【从】【句】【顺】【,】【语】【言】【欠】【生】【动】【,】【缺】【乏】【文】【采】【,】【甚】【至】【有】【错】【字】【病】【句】【等】【。】【如】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【中】【时】【代】【,】【正】【是】【人】【生】【的】【花】【季】【,】【也】【是】【我】【们】【最】【快】【乐】【最】【富】【有】【激】【情】【的】【时】【代】【,】【同】【样】【也】【是】【我】【们】【最】【懵】【懂】【、】【头】【脑】【最】【容】【易】【发】【热】【的】【时】【代】【。】【所】【以】【,】【我】【们】【还】【需】【要】【父】【母】【的】【指】【导】【,】【老】【师】【的】【教】【诲】【,】【我】【们】【必】【须】【学】【会】【从】【小】【事】【做】【起】【,】【比】【如】【做】【最】【简】【单】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【练】【习】【洗】【自】【己】【的】【衣】【服】【,】【自】【己】【收】【拾】【房】【间】【等】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【渐】【渐】【明】【白】【一】【个】【道】【理】【—】【—】【学】【会】【自】【立】【,】【因】【为】【总】【有】【一】【天】【,】【我】【们】【要】【离】【开】【父】【母】【自】【己】【来】【成】【家】【立】【业】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【安】【徽】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【的】【用】【语】【实】【在】【是】【淡】【而】【无】【味】【,】【尽】【管】【说】【的】【都】【是】【大】【实】【话】【,】【却】【毫】【无】【文】【采】【可】【言】【。】【如】【果】【我】【们】【能】【展】【开】【想】【象】【,】【适】【当】【地】【使】【用】【一】【些】【比】【喻】【、】【对】【偶】【、】【拟】【人】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【语】【言】【立】【刻】【就】【会】【生】【动】【起】【来】【。】【下】【面】【是】【—】【个】【同】【学】【对】【此】【所】【作】【的】【修】【改】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【中】【时】【代】【,】【正】【值】【人】【生】【的】【花】【季】【。】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【,】【看】【天】【,】【天】【是】【蓝】【的】【;】【看】【水】【,】【水】【是】【绿】【的】【。】【走】【在】【路】【上】【,】【花】【儿】【向】【我】【点】【头】【笑】【,】【风】【儿】【伴】【我】【低】【声】【唱】【,】【阳】【光】【暖】【在】【我】【心】【间】【…】【…】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【美】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【,】【说】【懵】【懂】【也】【不】【尽】【然】【,】【说】【冷】【静】【有】【时】【头】【脑】【也】【发】【热】【。】【许】【多】【时】【候】【,】【许】【多】【事】【情】【,】【还】【需】【要】【父】【母】【的】【指】【点】【和】【帮】【助】【,】【许】【多】【道】【理】【还】【需】【要】【老】【师】【来】【点】【拨】【和】【启】【发】【。】【于】【是】【,】【属】【于】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【的】【我】【们】【还】【是】【从】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【事】【做】【起】【吧】【!】【我】【们】【开】【始】【学】【做】【最】【简】【单】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【练】【习】【洗】【自】【己】【的】【衣】【服】【,】【像】【妈】【妈】【那】【样】【尝】【试】【把】【自】【己】【的】【房】【间】【收】【拾】【得】【整】【齐】【干】【净】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【们】【明】【白】【一】【个】【道】【理】【:】【要】【长】【大】【,】【就】【要】【学】【会】【自】【立】【。】【因】【为】【父】【母】【的】【羽】【翼】【再】【温】【暖】【,】【总】【有】【一】【天】【我】【们】【也】【要】【靠】【自】【己】【的】【翅】【膀】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【上】【例】【不】【难】【看】【出】【,】【用】【语】【准】【确】【的】【方】【法】【是】【适】【当】【地】【使】【用】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【(】【如】【上】【例】【就】【使】【用】【了】【比】【喻】【、】【排】【比】【、】【拟】【人】【和】【对】【偶】【等】【修】【辞】【)】【,】【选】【用】【富】【有】【表】【现】【力】【的】【词】【语】【(】【主】【要】【是】【动】【词】【、】【形】【容】【词】【和】【成】【语】【)】【,】【有】【时】【候】【还】【可】【以】【恰】【当】【地】【引】【用】【名】【言】【和】【俗】【语】【等】【等】【。】

【第】【四】【篇】【【】【这】【是】【传】【说】【中】【的】【狩】【猎】【 】【2】【】】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【目】【瞪】【口】【呆】【地】【望】【着】【午】【餐】【,】【良】【缘】【忍】【不】【住】【叹】【道】【:】【“】【苍】【天】【不】【公】【!】【”】【好】【容】【易】【熬】【到】【午】【餐】【时】【间】【,】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【突】【发】【奇】【想】【,】【 】【想】【尝】【尝】【吞】【云】【雕】【烧】【烤】【的】【味】【道】【。】【于】【是】【乎】【,】【侍】【卫】【以】【及】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【的】【午】【餐】【暂】【时】【是】【一】【杯】【魔】【法】【草】【莓】【汁】【,】【这】【种】【草】【莓】【汁】【能】【瞬】【间】【恢】【复】【体】【力】【兼】【填】【饱】【肚】【皮】【。】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【缓】【缓】【举】【杯】【,】【良】【缘】【喝】【了】【一】【小】【口】【。】【哇】【,】【甜】【甜】【的】【,】【很】【好】【喝】【。】【细】【细】【品】【味】【,】【这】【草】【莓】【汁】【香】【浓】【诱】【滑】【,】【内】【含】【饱】【满】【的】【椰】【果】【粒】【,】【美】【味】【极】【了】【,】【良】【缘】【便】【喝】【了】【一】【口】【又】【一】【口】【。】【忽】【然】【,】【一】【旁】【的】【殿】【下】【把】【仍】【有】【剩】【余】【草】【莓】【汁】【的】【银】【杯】【给】【了】【良】【缘】【,】【便】【跨】【上】【良】【驹】【。】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【殿】【下】【。】【”】【良】【缘】【吃】【惊】【地】【望】【着】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【。】【“】【喝】【了】【吧】【,】【这】【里】【你】【的】【防】【御】【力】【最】【差】【。】【”】【良】【缘】【还】【想】【说】【句】【感】【谢】【的】【话】【,】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【又】【说】【道】【,】【“】【多】【喝】【点】【草】【莓】【汁】【补】【充】【体】【力】【。】【这】【样】【遇】【到】【魔】【兽】【时】【,】【你】【有】【力】【气】【逃】【跑】【。】【”】【翻】【了】【个】【白】【眼】【,】【良】【缘】【一】【声】【不】【吭】【地】【喝】【掉】【了】【草】【莓】【汁】【。】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【行】【人】【又】【走】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【到】【达】【吞】【云】【雕】【栖】【息】【的】【云】【梦】【沼】【泽】【。】【正】【巧】【,】【一】【行】【人】【听】【见】【一】【声】【清】【亮】【带】【有】【杀】【戮】【的】【长】【吟】【。】【“】【吞】【云】【雕】【!】【太】【好】【了】【,】【它】【们】【开】【始】【觅】【食】【了】【。】【”】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【听】【见】【这】【声】【长】【吟】【,】【清】【亮】【的】【眼】【眸】【闪】【烁】【出】【火】【花】【。】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【觅】【食】【?】【”】【良】【缘】【很】【不】【解】【。】【“】【吞】【云】【雕】【有】【种】【习】【性】【,】【觅】【食】【时】【先】【由】【一】【只】【至】【两】【只】【吞】【云】【雕】【去】【探】【测】【,】【若】【去】【探】【测】【的】【吞】【云】【雕】【被】【人】【杀】【死】【,】【雕】【群】【就】【会】【在】【人】【类】【出】【没】【极】【少】【的】【山】【峡】【觅】【食】【。】【长】【吟】【是】【为】【了】【提】【示】【离】【群】【的】【吞】【云】【雕】【回】【巢】【。】【”】【一】【位】【较】【友】【善】【的】【侍】【卫】【给】【良】【缘】【解】【释】【。】【紧】【接】【着】【,】【一】【群】【群】【的】【吞】【云】【雕】【出】【现】【了】【,】【雕】【群】【不】【断】【长】【鸣】【,】【时】【不】【时】【有】【十】【多】【只】【吞】【云】【雕】【离】【群】【扑】【向】【从】【林】【间】【的】【魔】【兽】【。】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【好】【,】【雕】【群】【过】【来】【了】【。】【”】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【湛】【蓝】【的】【眼】【眸】【紧】【盯】【着】【雕】【群】【,】【如】【玉】【般】【的】【手】【紧】【握】【“】【聚】【啸】【”】【,】【等】【待】【时】【机】【。】【又】【是】【十】【多】【只】【吞】【云】【雕】【离】【群】【,】【扑】【向】【猎】【物】【。】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【瞄】【准】【一】【只】【,】【挽】【弓】【轻】【轻】【一】【弹】【。】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【嗡】【”】【!】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【空】【弦】【之】【上】【,】【一】【道】【劲】【气】【射】【了】【过】【去】【!】【就】【听】【见】【“】【嘶】【”】【的】【一】【声】【,】【吞】【云】【雕】【落】【了】【下】【来】【。】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【又】【拉】【了】【个】【满】【月】【,】【连】【发】【五】【箭】【,】【箭】【箭】【命】【中】【。】【“】【咿】【咿】【”】【,】【仅】【存】【的】【几】【只】【雕】【顾】【不】【上】【嘴】【中】【的】【猎】【物】【,】【立】【即】【向】【雕】【群】【发】【出】【警】【报】【。】【“】【啊】【,】【殿】【下】【,】【它】【们】【会】【不】【会】【发】【现】【…】【”】【良】【缘】【很】【担】【心】【。】【“】【没】【事】【,】【少】【几】【只】【雕】【没】【什】【么】【。】【”】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【镇】【定】【地】【回】【答】【。】【 】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【是】【,】【大】【部】【队】【竟】【然】【停】【下】【来】【,】【数】【只】【雕】【向】【丛】【林】【俯】【冲】【,】【尖】【声】【咆】【哮】【。】【“】【不】【对】【劲】【。】【”】【皇】【储】【殿】【下】【挑】【挑】【黛】【眉】【,】【“】【一】【般】【来】【说】【,】【少】【几】【只】【雕】【,】【雕】【群】【是】【不】【会】【在】【意】【的】【。】【”】【“】【难】【道】【说】【,】【是】【雕】【王】【出】【巡】【?】【!】【”】仙剑6剧情小说txt【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【飞】【雪】【飞】【过】【后】【,】【冬】【去】【春】【来】【,】【初】【中】【三】【年】【的】【生】【活】【到】【这】【里】【就】【要】【画】【上】【一】【个】【句】【号】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【像】【与】【你】【相】【识】【还】【只】【是】【在】【前】【天】【,】【和】【你】【打】【打】【闹】【闹】【还】【只】【是】【在】【昨】【天】【,】【但】【今】【天】【我】【们】【就】【要】【分】【开】【了】【。】【这】【一】【天】【来】【得】【太】【突】【兀】【,】【你】【还】【没】【准】【备】【好】【。】【因】【为】【这】【与】【你】【设】【想】【中】【的】【分】【别】【是】【不】【同】【的】【,】【你】【设】【想】【中】【那】【应】【该】【是】【“】【三】【五】【个】【哥】【们】【儿】【,】【通】【宵】【达】【旦】【,】【痛】【醉】【咆】【哮】【”】【,】【应】【该】【是】【“】【风】【兮】【月】【兮】【友】【兮】【不】【归】【”】【。】【但】【这】【一】【天】【就】【这】【么】【来】【了】【,】【向】【着】【没】【准】【备】【好】【的】【你】【来】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【选】【择】【去】【上】【职】【业】【学】【校】【,】【床】【铺】【已】【经】【整】【理】【好】【了】【,】【行】【李】【静】【静】【地】【躺】【在】【床】【头】【,】【阳】【光】【亮】【亮】【地】【照】【着】【你】【的】【脸】【庞】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【你】【下】【定】【决】【心】【时】【,】【我】【正】【行】【走】【在】【树】【间】【的】【林】【荫】【道】【上】【,】【紧】【握】【着】【拳】【头】【,】【为】【自】【己】【加】【油】【打】【气】【。】【我】【选】【择】【了】【留】【下】【来】【,】【升】【入】【重】【点】【中】【学】【,】【我】【的】【脚】【步】【轻】【快】【,】【走】【得】【轻】【松】【愉】【悦】【,】【阳】【光】【透】【过】【枝】【丫】【横】【斜】【地】【落】【在】【我】【身】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【宿】【舍】【,】【一】【抬】【头】【就】【看】【到】【了】【,】【依】【然】【无】【所】【谓】【地】【跷】【着】【二】【郎】【腿】【坐】【在】【床】【上】【的】【你】【。】【你】【不】【紧】【不】【慢】【地】【讲】【了】【你】【的】【打】【算】【,】【云】【淡】【风】【轻】【地】【看】【着】【一】【脸】【惊】【异】【的】【我】【,】【然】【后】【你】【又】【不】【痛】【不】【痒】【地】【讲】【着】【一】【些】【笑】【话】【。】【自】【然】【,】【没】【有】【人】【笑】【。】【你】【只】【好】【跳】【下】【床】【板】【,】【显】【得】【有】【些】【尴】【尬】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【陪】【我】【再】【逛】【一】【遍】【校】【园】【吧】【。】【”】【你】【终】【于】【发】【自】【内】【心】【地】【说】【出】【了】【想】【法】【。】【于】【是】【我】【们】【就】【一】【起】【走】【在】【并】【不】【宽】【的】【小】【路】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【一】【脸】【灿】【烂】【的】【笑】【容】【,】【走】【在】【我】【后】【面】【,】【不】【紧】【不】【慢】【地】【走】【着】【,】【还】【不】【时】【停】【下】【来】【细】【细】【端】【详】【那】【几】【棵】【树】【,】【那】【几】【片】【落】【叶】【,】【或】【盯】【着】【某】【间】【教】【室】【,】【你】【的】【脚】【步】【声】【却】【越】【来】【越】【沉】【重】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【知】【道】【,】【你】【想】【缓】【缓】【地】【把】【校】【园】【缩】【在】【脚】【下】【带】【走】【。】【但】【是】【,】【你】【能】【做】【到】【吗】【?】【那】【些】【高】【兴】【的】【不】【高】【兴】【的】【心】【情】【,】【那】【些】【温】【暖】【的】【过】【往】【,】【是】【你】【不】【能】【缩】【在】【脚】【下】【带】【走】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【经】【过】【校】【门】【口】【的】【老】【柳】【树】【,】【你】【惊】【异】【地】【说】【:】【“】【看】【,】【柳】【树】【抽】【新】【芽】【了】【!】【”】【是】【啊】【,】【柳】【树】【又】【熬】【过】【了】【一】【个】【漫】【长】【的】【严】【冬】【。】【又】【过】【了】【—】【年】【,】【而】【我】【们】【要】【各】【奔】【东】【西】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【终】【于】【你】【提】【着】【行】【李】【走】【了】【,】【如】【同】【之】【前】【那】【离】【我】【而】【去】【的】【人】【和】【事】【一】【样】【,】【决】【绝】【地】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【里】【我】【躺】【在】【床】【上】【,】【却】【怎】【么】【也】【睡】【不】【着】【。】【只】【是】【听】【着】【窗】【外】【传】【来】【阵】【阵】【“】【哗】【哗】【”】【的】【流】【水】【声】【,】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【漫】【无】【目】【的】【地】【飞】【来】【飞】【去】【。】【风】【中】【战】【栗】【着】【的】【门】【窗】【,】【总】【是】【会】【有】【好】【心】【的】【兄】【弟】【帮】【忙】【关】【上】【;】【铁】【丝】【上】【搭】【着】【的】【毛】【巾】【,】【总】【是】【有】【粗】【心】【的】【主】【人】【会】【忘】【记】【。】【不】【知】【道】【女】【生】【宿】【舍】【前】【那】【单】【薄】【的】【草】【坪】【能】【否】【负】【载】【女】【生】【们】【的】【泪】【水】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【跳】【下】【床】【,】【到】【操】【场】【上】【跑】【了】【数】【圈】【,】【唱】【着】【那】【首】【“】【敢】【问】【路】【在】【何】【方】【”】【的】【歌】【,】【突】【然】【就】【明】【白】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【都】【回】【不】【去】【了】【,】【你】【选】【择】【了】【一】【条】【道】【路】【,】【而】【我】【也】【选】【择】【了】【一】【条】【道】【路】【。】【这】【条】【道】【路】【只】【能】【继】【续】【走】【下】【去】【,】【它】【在】【脚】【下】【传】【来】【的】【坚】【实】【感】【,】【催】【促】【我】【们】【不】【断】【前】【进】【,】【前】【讲】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【有】【两】【大】【亮】【点】【:】【一】【是】【忧】【伤】【而】【坚】【定】【的】【情】【感】【令】【人】【感】【动】【。】【毕】【业】【生】【“】【分】【流】【”】【,】【同】【学】【分】【别】【的】【忧】【伤】【之】【情】【,】【沉】【甸】【甸】【地】【展】【现】【在】【读】【者】【面】【前】【。】【对】【前】【途】【的】【思】【考】【和】【奋】【发】【向】【上】【的】【豪】【迈】【展】【示】【了】【强】【者】【的】【心】【声】【。】【二】【是】【语】【言】【富】【有】【特】【色】【。】【作】【者】【的】【语】【言】【基】【本】【功】【非】【常】【深】【厚】【,】【善】【于】【抓】【住】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【灵】【动】【的】【语】【言】【中】【蕴】【涵】【丰】【富】【的】【寓】【意】【和】【哲】【理】【,】【是】【一】【篇】【引】【发】【同】【学】【共】【鸣】【的】【佳】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【隋】【永】【奎】【)】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【标】【题】【醒】【目】【。】【以】【“】【5】【0】【”】【与】【“】【一】【”】【作】【比】【,】【数】【字】【有】【联】【系】【,】【又】【有】【反】【差】【,】【引】【起】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【全】【文】【记】【述】【学】【生】【一】【次】【作】【文】【的】【过】【程】【,】【由】【“】【命】【题】【”】【“】【作】【文】【”】【“】【讲】【评】【”】【“】【反】【思】【”】【四】【部】【分】【组】【成】【。】【敬】【请】【关】【注】【。】【5】【0】【个】【人】【一】【锅】【;】【饭】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【天】【啊】【!】【也】【不】【知】【道】【刘】【老】【师】【今】【天】【中】【了】【什】【么】【邪】【,】【竟】【会】【出】【这】【么】【古】【怪】【的】【作】【文】【题】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【又】【不】【是】【考】【烹】【饪】【学】【校】【,】【《】【烧】【饭】【》】【有】【什】【么】【好】【写】【的】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哼】【!】【除】【非】【刘】【老】【师】【是】【围】【裙】【丈】【夫】【,】【否】【则】【他】【自】【己】【也】【写】【不】【出】【来】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【倒】【霉】【,】【这】【学】【期】【作】【文】【总】【评】【分】【算】【是】【砸】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刘】【老】【师】【刚】【一】【跨】【出】【教】【室】【门】【,】【教】【室】【里】【顿】【时】【发】【出】【一】【片】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【的】【抱】【怨】【声】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【男】【生】【们】【,】【仿】【佛】【受】【到】【了】【天】【大】【的】【侮】【辱】【,】【拍】【桌】【子】【摔】【椅】【子】【地】【大】【闹】【了】【一】【阵】【以】【后】【,】【竟】【还】【写】【了】【一】【封】【《】【告】【全】【体】【女】【生】【书】【》】【:】【“】【喂】【喂】【,】【女】【同】【胞】【们】【请】【注】【意】【:】【烧】【饭】【,】【古】【往】【今】【来】【是】【广】【大】【妇】【女】【的】【历】【史】【责】【任】【,】【向】【来】【不】【是】【区】【区】【在】【下】【们】【的】【‘】【干】【活】【’】【。】【因】【此】【,】【兹】【定】【于】【明】【天】【早】【上】【7】【:】【0】【0】【,】【全】【体】【男】【生】【一】【起】【‘】【拷】【贝】【’】【女】【生】【的】【作】【文】【,】【定】【然】【感】【激】【涕】【零】【,】【永】【志】【不】【忘】【!】【附】【注】【:】【以】【后】【若】【再】【写】【《】【拖】【地】【板】【》】【类】【的】【说】【明】【文】【,】【女】【生】【们】【亦】【可】【如】【法】【炮】【制】【,】【‘】【拷】【贝】【’】【我】【们】【男】【生】【的】【作】【文】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【据】【说】【不】【会】【烧】【饭】【的】【女】【孩】【儿】【嫁】【不】【出】【去】【。】【童】【话】【乎】【?】【梦】【话】【乎】【?】【抑】【或】【是】【从】【哪】【个】【博】【物】【馆】【的】【垃】【圾】【堆】【里】【掘】【出】【的】【古】【董】【?】【全】【班】【女】【生】【当】【即】【表】【态】【:】【“】【心】【有】【余】【而】【力】【不】【足】【!】【”】【并】【庄】【严】【宣】【称】【:】【“】【如】【果】【男】【同】【胞】【们】【家】【里】【缺】【人】【烧】【饭】【,】【尽】【管】【去】【觅】【一】【个】【进】【城】【当】【保】【姆】【的】【农】【村】【剩】【余】【劳】【动】【力】【。】【但】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【敬】【请】【自】【谋】【出】【路】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【眼】【看】【全】【班】【5】【0】【个】【人】【,】【4】【9】【个】【义】【愤】【填】【膺】【,】【慷】【慨】【陈】【词】【,】【颇】【有】【“】【罢】【写】【”】【趋】【势】【,】【唯】【有】【我】【一】【个】【忧】【心】【忡】【忡】【,】【愿】【上】【帝】【保】【佑】【天】【下】【太】【平】【!】【因】【为】【明】【天】【一】【早】【的】【作】【文】【依】【然】【是】【我】【这】【个】【语】【文】【课】【代】【表】【收】【的】【,】【若】【有】【谁】【没】【交】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【会】【顺】【理】【成】【章】【地】【向】【我】【要】【。】【而】【我】【,】【就】【只】【好】【像】【黄】【世】【仁】【那】【样】【凶】【巴】【巴】【地】【上】【门】【逼】【讨】【,】【真】【是】【没】【有】【淑】【女】【的】【风】【度】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【谁】【知】【道】【第】【二】【天】【早】【上】【,】【祷】【告】【灵】【验】【了】【,】【5】【0】【份】【作】【文】【全】【部】【收】【齐】【,】【一】【份】【也】【不】【少】【。】【我】【的】【好】【奇】【心】【不】【断】【地】【膨】【胀】【,】【趁】【着】【去】【交】【作】【业】【本】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【忍】【不】【住】【地】【翻】【了】【翻】【,】【“】【哇】【”】【,】【男】【生】【的】【作】【文】【真】【是】【出】【人】【意】【料】【的】【“】【精】【彩】【”】【!】【有】【的】【区】【区】【7】【0】【个】【字】【,】【只】【占】【规】【定】【字】【数】【的】【1】【/】【1】【0】【,】【倒】【也】【蛮】【潇】【洒】【;】【有】【的】【一】【开】【头】【就】【是】【:】【“】【朋】【友】【,】【你】【知】【道】【烧】【饭】【吗】【?】【”】【然】【后】【从】【“】【尧】【舜】【禹】【”】【到】【“】【普】【罗】【米】【修】【斯】【”】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【一】【直】【到】【结】【尾】【就】【连】【锅】【子】【也】【没】【看】【见】【;】【有】【的】【干】【脆】【写】【起】【了】【议】【论】【文】【,】【中】【心】【论】【点】【是】【:】【“】【人】【类】【的】【消】【化】【系】【统】【比】【起】【祖】【先】【已】【见】【退】【化】【趋】【势】【,】【因】【此】【烧】【饭】【作】【为】【对】【人】【类】【消】【化】【系】【统】【缺】【乏】【锻】【炼】【的】【内】【容】【,】【是】【完】【完】【全】【全】【不】【必】【要】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【女】【生】【们】【的】【作】【文】【依】【然】【是】【稳】【操】【好】【分】【数】【的】【。】【洋】【洋】【洒】【洒】【一】【大】【篇】【,】【诸】【如】【“】【在】【水】【龙】【头】【下】【冲】【洗】【,】【翻】【动】【”】【“】【适】【量】【的】【水】【…】【‘】【水】【的】【体】【积】【与】【米】【的】【体】【积】【之】【比】【是】【2】【:】【3】【”】【“】【便】【烧】【出】【了】【一】【锅】【热】【气】【腾】【腾】【、】【白】【灿】【灿】【、】【油】【亮】【亮】【的】【米】【饭】【”】【,】【俨】【然】【十】【分】【精】【通】【此】【道】【。】【通】【看】【了】【一】【遍】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【倒】【吸】【一】【口】【凉】【气】【,】【我】【的】【作】【文】【是】【从】【中】【专】【教】【科】【书】【《】【烹】【调】【技】【术】【》】【上】【抄】【的】【,】【虽】【然】【绞】【尽】【脑】【汁】【加】【上】【了】【几】【个】【“】【慢】【慢】【地】【…】【‘】【微】【微】【地】【”】【,】【但】【仍】【旧】【干】【巴】【巴】【的】【,】【跟】【这】【些】【出】【于】【实】【践】【的】【作】【文】【相】【比】【,】【分】【数】【肯】【定】【好】【不】【了】【。】【刘】【老】【师】【啊】【,】【作】【文】【讲】【评】【课】【上】【,】【你】【该】【不】【会】【当】【众】【出】【我】【“】【洋】【相】【”】【吧】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【怕】【的】【作】【文】【讲】【评】【课】【终】【于】【来】【了】【。】【刘】【老】【师】【先】【当】【众】【念】【了】【几】【篇】【男】【生】【的】【作】【文】【,】【让】【我】【们】【差】【点】【儿】【把】【下】【巴】【笑】【掉】【了】【、】【抑】【制】【不】【住】【的】【笑】【浪】【一】【阵】【阵】【哄】【起】【,】【惹】【得】【楼】【上】【的】【教】【导】【主】【任】【一】【溜】【儿】【小】【跑】【下】【来】【,】【瞪】【着】【眼】【睛】【恶】【狠】【狠】【地】【直】【敲】【我】【们】【教】【室】【的】【门】【。】【可】【是】【被】【念】【到】【作】【文】【的】【男】【生】【还】【是】【满】【不】【在】【乎】【的】【样】【子】【,】【居】【然】【振】【振】【有】【词】【:】【“】【‘】【大】【丈】【夫】【当】【扫】【天】【下】【’】【,】【安】【为】【一】【锅】【饭】【而】【折】【腰】【乎】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【接】【下】【来】【,】【刘】【老】【师】【又】【开】【始】【念】【女】【生】【的】【作】【文】【。】【他】【先】【念】【了】【一】【篇】【刘】【雅】【的】【、】【念】【完】【后】【,】【男】【生】【们】【面】【面】【相】【觑】【,】【女】【生】【们】【也】【忍】【不】【住】【交】【头】【接】【耳】【,】【,】【的】【确】【,】【就】【这】【样】【一】【个】【鬼】【题】【目】【,】【竟】【然】【写】【出】【如】【此】【层】【次】【分】【明】【、】【用】【词】【准】【确】【、】【语】【句】【凝】【练】【的】【典】【范】【之】【作】【,】【恐】【怕】【叶】【圣】【陶】【也】【不】【是】【她】【的】【对】【手】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【写】【得】【好】【吗】【?】【”】【刘】【老】【师】【笑】【着】【问】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【好】【!】【”】【大】【家】【一】【起】【回】【答】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【的】【写】【得】【好】【吗】【?】【”】【刘】【老】【师】【又】【问】【了】【一】【句】【。】【大】【家】【觉】【得】【提】【问】【有】【些】【怪】【怪】【的】【,】【犹】【豫】【了】【一】【下】【,】【仍】【嚷】【:】【“】【好】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【唉】【,】【”】【刘】【老】【师】【叹】【了】【口】【气】【:】【“】【你】【们】【注】【意】【过】【她】【的】【作】【文】【中】【烧】【饭】【的】【时】【候】【有】【没】【有】【放】【水】【呢】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【嗬】【!】【爆】【米】【花】【喽】【!】【”】【不】【知】【谁】【喊】【了】【一】【句】【,】【随】【后】【又】【是】【一】【阵】【哄】【笑】【。】【刘】【雅】【方】【才】【脸】【上】【得】【意】【的】【神】【色】【顿】【时】【一】【扫】【而】【光】【,】【羞】【得】【不】【知】【往】【哪】【儿】【钻】【才】【好】【。】【然】【后】【继】【续】【读】【了】【任】【娟】【的】【作】【文】【。】【她】【竞】【写】【了】【1】【0】【0】【0】【多】【字】【,】【还】【介】【绍】【了】【如】【果】【不】【小】【心】【烧】【焦】【了】【饭】【,】【怎】【么】【去】【除】【焦】【味】【。】【但】【是】【她】【在】【烧】【饭】【时】【只】【用】【量】【斗】【量】【了】【约】【一】【升】【的】【米】【,】【加】【入】【等】【量】【的】【水】【,】【偏】【偏】【没】【有】【拿】【锅】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【接】【着】【又】【有】【许】【多】【颇】【有】【文】【采】【的】【作】【文】【。】【有】【的】【是】【待】【水】【烧】【开】【约】【5】【分】【钟】【后】【,】【缓】【缓】【地】【把】【米】【倒】【进】【去】【;】【有】【的】【用】【大】【挡】【的】【煤】【气】【烧】【了】【足】【足】【一】【个】【小】【时】【;】【有】【的】【干】【脆】【开】【了】【煤】【气】【连】【火】【也】【不】【点】【;】【有】【的】【边】【烧】【边】【不】【停】【地】【用】【勺】【子】【把】【锅】【里】【的】【米】【调】【匀】【;】【有】【的】【竟】【耸】【人】【听】【闻】【地】【放】【了】【满】【满】【一】【锅】【米】【。】【至】【于】【水】【放】【多】【了】【或】【是】【放】【少】【了】【,】【小】【火】【焖】【的】【时】【间】【太】【长】【了】【或】【是】【太】【短】【了】【,】【锅】【盖】【究】【竟】【有】【没】【有】【盖】【上】【,】【那】【只】【是】【些】【很】【平】【常】【的】【疏】【忽】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【刘】【老】【师】【拿】【起】【了】【我】【的】【作】【文】【。】【我】【的】【心】【不】【禁】【又】【“】【怦】【怦】【”】【地】【跳】【得】【厉】【害】【。】【唉】【,】【刘】【老】【师】【啊】【刘】【老】【师】【,】【看】【在】【我】【每】【天】【给】【你】【送】【作】【业】【本】【,】【当】【“】【黄】【世】【仁】【”】【的】【份】【儿】【上】【,】【你】【也】【不】【该】【拿】【我】【示】【众】【啊】【!】【谁】【知】【道】【,】【刘】【老】【师】【的】【脸】【竟】【露】【出】【了】【一】【丝】【欣】【慰】【的】【神】【色】【,】【他】【和】【蔼】【地】【说】【:】【“】【全】【班】【5】【0】【位】【同】【学】【,】【只】【有】【语】【文】【课】【代】【表】【一】【个】【人】【成】【功】【地】【烧】【出】【了】【一】【锅】【饭】【,】【真】【不】【容】【易】【啊】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【但】【是】【,】【”】【他】【又】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【,】【“】【你】【烧】【饭】【前】【忘】【了】【淘】【米】【了】【。】【以】【后】【我】【到】【你】【家】【去】【吃】【饭】【,】【可】【不】【要】【让】【我】【吃】【满】【是】【石】【子】【的】【饭】【哦】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【帝】【啊】【!】【5】【0】【个】【人】【一】【锅】【饭】【,】【可】【就】【连】【这】【一】【锅】【饭】【也】【是】【我】【“】【拷】【贝】【”】【来】【的】【。】【看】【来】【,】【假】【若】【有】【一】【天】【,】【世】【界】【毁】【灭】【了】【,】【只】【剩】【下】【我】【们】【5】【0】【个】【人】【,】【那】【么】【即】【使】【上】【帝】【仁】【慈】【,】【赐】【予】【我】【们】【诺】【亚】【方】【舟】【,】【也】【须】【在】【舟】【中】【备】【好】【速】【食】【面】【才】【行】【,】【否】【则】【我】【们】【也】【只】【有】【坐】【以】【待】【毙】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【为】【一】【个】【城】【市】【人】【,】【他】【进】【入】【了】【一】【架】【运】【转】【不】【停】【的】【大】【机】【器】【中】【,】【成】【为】【了】【一】【个】【零】【部】【件】【,】【于】【是】【,】【他】【的】【一】【部】【分】【在】【进】【化】【着】【,】【而】【另】【一】【部】【分】【却】【在】【惊】【人】【地】【退】【化】【—】【—】【这】【远】【不】【是】【达】【尔】【文】【的】【想】【象】【力】【所】【能】【达】【到】【的】【。】【我】【感】【到】【惭】【愧】【,】【我】【就】【是】【这】【个】【真】【实】【的】【童】【话】【中】【的】【1】【/】【5】【0】【。】【但】【我】【要】【努】【力】【使】【其】【他】【4】【9】【个】【人】【吃】【到】【一】【锅】【由】【1】【/】【5】【0】【煮】【出】【来】【的】【真】【正】【的】【饭】【,】【届】【时】【请】【务】【必】【光】【临】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【写】【“】【命】【题】【”】【。】【学】【生】【对】【作】【文】【命】【题】【反】【应】【强】【烈】【。】【“】【男】【生】【”】【有】【《】【告】【全】【体】【女】【生】【书】【》】【,】【“】【女】【生】【”】【则】【“】【庄】【严】【宣】【称】【”】【,】【极】【尽】【夸】【张】【之】【势】【。】【加】【之】【文】【字】【半】【文】【不】【白】【,】【故】【作】【风】【雅】【,】【青】【少】【年】【之】【率】【性】【可】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【次】【写】【“】【作】【文】【”】【。】【从】【已】【成】【作】【文】【看】【,】【“】【男】【生】【”】【避】【难】【就】【易】【,】【“】【潇】【洒】【”】【其】【表】【,】【虚】【弱】【其】【里】【。】【虽】【言】【之】【“】【娓】【娓】【”】【,】【终】【难】【逃】【捉】【襟】【见】【肘】【之】【困】【。】【“】【女】【生】【”】【知】【难】【而】【进】【,】【循】【规】【蹈】【矩】【,】【尽】【管】【力】【不】【从】【心】【,】【尚】【不】【失】【淑】【女】【风】【范】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【写】【“】【讲】【评】【”】【。】【点】【评】【作】【文】【成】【果】【。】【有】【总】【有】【分】【,】【点】【面】【结】【合】【。】【总】【写】【讲】【评】【,】【笑】【浪】【阵】【阵】【,】【洋】【相】【百】【出】【。】【重】【点】【讲】【评】【三】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【各】【有】【欠】【缺】【,】【从】【不】【同】【侧】【面】【暴】【露】【青】【少】【年】【只】【重】【书】【本】【而】【缺】【乏】【起】【码】【生】【存】【本】【领】【的】【弊】【端】【。】仙剑6剧情小说txt【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【是】【中】【考】【语】【文】【试】【卷】【中】【的】【“】【半】【壁】【江】【山】【”】【,】【它】【需】【要】【精】【益】【求】【精】【,】【才】【能】【在】【众】【多】【优】【秀】【作】【文】【中】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【。】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【,】【从】【而】【获】【取】【高】【分】【。】【纵】【观】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【,】【不】【难】【发】【现】【,】【文】【章】【中】【无】【不】【闪】【烁】【着】【一】【个】【“】【精】【”】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【题】【是】【文】【章】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【作】【文】【没】【有】【高】【远】【的】【主】【题】【就】【会】【显】【得】【低】【俗】【浅】【薄】【。】【只】【有】【积】【极】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【才】【会】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【赏】【识】【。】【如】【湖】【南】【邵】【阳】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【》】【就】【是】【撷】【取】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【片】【断】【,】【通】【过】【描】【写】【“】【一】【句】【叮】【咛】【”】【“】【一】【份】【关】【怀】【”】【来】【体】【现】【赞】【美】【美】【好】【生】【活】【的】【大】【主】【题】【。】【又】【如】【湖】【北】【荆】【州】【市】【某】【考】【生】【的】【《】【聆】【听】【生】【命】【拔】【节】【的】【声】【音】【》】【,】【就】【是】【用】【“】【童】【稚】【之】【声】【—】【—】【短】【笛】【无】【腔】【信】【口】【吹】【”】【“】【豆】【蔻】【之】【声】【—】【—】【羌】【笛】【何】【须】【怨】【杨】【柳】【”】【“】【花】【季】【之】【声】【—】【—】【玉】【笛】【叫】【空】【阔】【”】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【,】【写】【出】【自】【己】【“】【童】【稚】【”】【时】【喜】【欢】【吃】【田】【鸡】【肉】【,】【“】【豆】【蔻】【”】【时】【懂】【得】【青】【蛙】【是】【益】【类】【动】【物】【,】【“】【花】【季】【”】【时】【却】【积】【极】【宣】【传】【保】【护】【青】【蛙】【及】【有】【益】【动】【物】【。】【这】【成】【长】【的】【声】【音】【吹】【响】【了】【“】【保】【护】【生】【态】【”】【这】【一】【大】【主】【题】【,】【从】【而】【夺】【得】【高】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【,】【我】【们】【同】【样】【也】【可】【以】【从】【极】【其】【普】【通】【的】【身】【边】【小】【事】【中】【挖】【掘】【出】【鲜】【明】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【。】【如】【汇】【聚】【厚】【重】【历】【史】【的】【老】【传】【统】【;】【凝】【聚】【时】【代】【气】【息】【的】【新】【气】【象】【;】【颂】【扬】【祖】【国】【河】【山】【的】【美】【好】【;】【倡】【导】【绿】【色】【环】【保】【的】【重】【要】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【生】【活】【的】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【可】【以】【使】【我】【们】【的】【作】【文】【异】【彩】【纷】【呈】【,】【意】【蕴】【厚】【重】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【常】【言】【道】【“】【明】【眸】【善】【睐】【第】【一】【瞥】【”】【。】【文】【章】【如】【果】【有】【~】【个】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【,】【就】【会】【吸】【引】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【球】【,】【让】【人】【有】【一】【种】【赏】【心】【悦】【目】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【全】【国】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【中】【有】【这】【样】【几】【种】【成】【功】【的】【开】【头】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【环】【境】【渲】【染】【气】【氛】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【死】【了】【,】【黑】【暗】【统】【治】【着】【这】【个】【世】【界】【,】【灯】【光】【死】【去】【时】【发】【出】【的】【凄】【惨】【叫】【声】【还】【在】【空】【中】【荡】【漾】【,】【虽】【然】【声】【音】【很】【低】【却】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【,】【角】【落】【里】【也】【似】【乎】【有】【极】【其】【低】【微】【的】【哭】【泣】【。】【手】【捧】【着】【一】【张】【张】【写】【满】【愁】【容】【的】【试】【卷】【让】【我】【感】【到】【未】【来】【的】【渺】【茫】【,】【欢】【乐】【的】【时】【期】【已】【经】【过】【去】【,】【现】【在】【是】【悲】【戚】【的】【时】【候】【了】【。】【(】【《】【看】【着】【前】【方】【》】【牡】【丹】【江】【市】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【环】【境】【描】【写】【的】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【,】【创】【设】【了】【一】【种】【独】【特】【的】【意】【境】【,】【已】【将】【人】【物】【内】【心】【展】【现】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【,】【扣】【住】【了】【读】【者】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【名】【言】【诗】【句】【引】【用】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【云】【:】【千】【千】【为】【敌】【,】【一】【人】【胜】【之】【,】【未】【若】【自】【胜】【,】【为】【战】【中】【上】【。】【(】【《】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【百】【战】【不】【殆】【》】【广】【西】【河】【池】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【篇】【即】【引】【用】【了】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【中】【的】【名】【句】【来】【表】【达】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【有】【着】【纲】【举】【目】【张】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【设】【问】【反】【问】【悬】【念】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【条】【街】【你】【熟】【悉】【吗】【?】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【聆】【听】【到】【这】【街】【的】【声】【音】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【欣】【赏】【过】【这】【街】【的】【美】【景】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【(】【《】【熟】【悉】【的】【地】【方】【也】【有】【风】【景】【》】【苏】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【以】【设】【问】【句】【起】【笔】【,】【开】【篇】【就】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【,】【老】【街】【既】【然】【熟】【悉】【,】【却】【为】【什】【么】【没】【有】【聆】【听】【过】【声】【音】【也】【没】【有】【欣】【赏】【过】【美】【景】【?】【这】【不】【是】【与】【文】【章】【题】【目】【矛】【盾】【吗】【?】【开】【篇】【就】【激】【发】【着】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【这】【也】【自】【然】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【开】【宗】【明】【义】【题】【记】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【,】【无】【声】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【天】【空】【;】【爱】【,】【无】【言】【,】【滋】【润】【了】【心】【田】【。】【多】【想】【留】【住】【一】【段】【时】【光】【,】【留】【住】【你】【的】【容】【颜】【。】【你】【的】【馈】【赠】【如】【那】【滔】【滔】【江】【水】【,】【一】【生】【用】【之】【不】【竭】【。】【—】【—】【题】【记】【(】【《】【父】【亲】【的】【馈】【赠】【》】【山】【东】【淄】【博】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【题】【记】【,】【把】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【表】【达】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【.】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【点】【题】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【种】【把】【事】【情】【的】【开】【头】【作】【为】【文】【章】【开】【头】【的】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【法】【,】【它】【的】【风】【格】【朴】【素】【自】【然】【,】【有】【韵】【味】【天】【成】【的】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【学】【校】【三】【令】【五】【申】【说】【不】【准】【带】【手】【机】【到】【校】【,】【你】【们】【家】【长】【为】【什】【么】【老】【是】【纵】【容】【孩】【子】【,】【不】【与】【学】【校】【保】【持】【一】【致】【呢】【?】【”】【老】【师】【最】【后】【几】【句】【话】【几】【乎】【是】【吼】【出】【来】【的】【,】【满】【含】【不】【满】【与】【责】【备】【。】【妈】【妈】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【赔】【着】【不】【是】【,】【那】【神】【情】【那】【态】【度】【那】【是】【她】【平】【常】【的】【样】【子】【吗】【?】【(】【《】【拥】【抱】【》】【四】【川】【成】【都】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【开】【头】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【,】【一】【下】【子】【就】【将】【读】【者】【带】【入】【了】【情】【境】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【精】【瑟】【的】【精】【节】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【”】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【情】【节】【仿】【佛】【引】【领】【读】【者】【在】【旖】【旎】【风】【光】【中】【穿】【行】【,】【或】【“】【柳】【暗】【花】【明】【又】【一】【村】【”】【或】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【”】【或】【“】【曲】【径】【通】【幽】【处】【”】【,】【使】【读】【者】【在】【曲】【折】【与】【起】【伏】【中】【心】【潮】【澎】【湃】【,】【获】【得】【无】【限】【乐】【趣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【为】【了】【优】【化】【情】【节】【,】【追】【求】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【有】【些】【作】【品】【或】【张】【弛】【有】【度】【或】【悬】【念】【迭】【起】【,】【或】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【或】【双】【线】【交】【替】【。】【跌】【宕】【起】【伏】【的】【情】【节】【使】【故】【事】【波】【澜】【起】【伏】【,】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【“】【情】【节】【突】【转】【”】【的】【手】【法】【,】【令】【人】【拍】【案】【叫】【绝】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【期】【末】【考】【试】【到】【了】【,】【我】【聚】【精】【会】【神】【地】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【复】【习】【着】【。】【不】【知】【何】【时】【,】【阳】【光】【笼】【罩】【了】【我】【,】【使】【我】【额】【头】【沁】【出】【了】【汗】【珠】【。】【这】【时】【,】【数】【学】【老】【师】【又】【一】【次】【敲】【响】【了】【我】【的】【桌】【子】【:】【“】【你】【,】【坐】【到】【那】【边】【去】【考】【试】【。】【”】【我】【愣】【住】【了】【。】【老】【师】【竟】【然】【对】【我】【如】【此】【不】【信】【任】【!】【老】【师】【对】【我】【的】【成】【见】【竟】【然】【有】【这】【么】【深】【!】【我】【再】【也】【忍】【耐】【不】【住】【,】【泪】【水】【就】【要】【冲】【出】【眼】【眶】【了】【。】【老】【师】【也】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【随】【即】【,】【他】【似】【乎】【明】【白】【了】【什】【么】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【这】【里】【太】【晒】【,】【影】【响】【你】【做】【题】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【如】【此】【。】【原】【本】【以】【为】【老】【师】【误】【解】【了】【我】【,】【谁】【知】【却】【是】【我】【误】【解】【了】【老】【师】【!】【我】【的】【泪】【水】【不】【由】【得】【流】【了】【出】【来】【…】【…】【(】【《】【阳】【光】【灿】【烂】【的】【日】【子】【》】【山】【东】【济】【南】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【是】【一】【件】【考】【试】【时】【调】【换】【座】【位】【的】【平】【常】【小】【事】【,】【被】【作】【者】【精】【心】【打】【造】【后】【,】【使】【文】【章】【前】【后】【隋】【节】【突】【转】【,】【波】【澜】【顿】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【山】【不】【在】【高】【,】【有】【仙】【则】【名】【;】【水】【不】【在】【深】【,】【有】【龙】【则】【灵】【”】【。】【作】【文】【中】【的】【措】【词】【更】【不】【在】【多】【,】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【有】【着】【“】【四】【两】【拨】【千】【斤】【”】【的】【显】【著】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【白】【驹】【过】【隙】【般】【滑】【过】【爸】【爸】【的】【背】【,】【掠】【过】【爷】【爷】【的】【胡】【子】【,】【穿】【过】【我】【的】【指】【间】【,】【而】【我】【的】【那】【颗】【童】【心】【也】【慢】【慢】【成】【长】【了】【。】【(】【《】【长】【大】【的】【童】【心】【》】【浙】【江】【温】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【滑】【”】【“】【掠】【”】【“】【穿】【”】【三】【个】【动】【词】【生】【动】【地】【展】【现】【了】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【“】【我】【”】【的】【童】【心】【就】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【长】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【天】【空】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【风】【雨】【雷】【电】【的】【一】【时】【肆】【虐】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【辽】【阔】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【大】【海】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【的】【一】【时】【猖】【獗】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【深】【邃】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【森】【林】【不】【宽】【容】【。】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【弱】【肉】【强】【食】【的】【一】【时】【规】【律】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【原】【始】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【宇】【宙】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【星】【座】【裂】【变】【的】【一】【时】【更】【替】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【神】【秘】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【时】【间】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【各】【色】【人】【等】【的】【一】【时】【虚】【掷】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【延】【续】【之】【美】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【宽】【容】【成】【就】【了】【它】【们】【。】【(】【《】【告】【别】【狭】【隘】【之】【心】【》】【一】【考】【毕】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【段】【文】【字】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【用】【词】【精】【练】【,】【运】【用】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【手】【法】【,】【使】【文】【章】【更】【具】【思】【维】【的】【深】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【或】【用】【巧】【妙】【的】【手】【法】【,】【或】【用】【恰】【当】【的】【顺】【序】【,】【使】【叙】【述】【顺】【畅】【精】【彩】【,】【但】【这】【并】【不】【意】【味】【着】【叙】【述】【得】【越】【多】【越】【好】【,】【而】【是】【以】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【为】【妙】【。】【只】【有】【内】【涵】【深】【刻】【、】【情】【节】【生】【动】【、】【能】【突】【出】【主】【题】【的】【具】【体】【材】【料】【才】【详】【写】【,】【次】【要】【作】【用】【的】【内】【容】【就】【只】【能】【作】【概】【括】【叙】【述】【。】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【使】【文】【章】【清】【晰】【利】【落】【,】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【。】【如】【南】【京】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【》】【是】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【选】【择】【典】【型】【事】【例】【来】【突】【出】【中】【心】【的】【。】【有】【给】【网】【上】【的】【信】【箱】【发】【勘】【误】【信】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【自】【豪】【感】【受】【;】【有】【参】【加】【学】【校】【艺】【术】【节】【的】【朗】【诵】【表】【演】【活】【动】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【成】【果】【;】【有】【春】【节】【家】【庭】【联】【欢】【会】【接】【对】【联】【比】【赛】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【三】【件】【事】【例】【紧】【扣】【生】【活】【“】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【”】【这】【一】【中】【心】【,】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【又】【详】【略】【有】【致】【。】【其】【中】【第】【三】【件】【事】【最】【有】【代】【表】【性】【,】【也】【很】【风】【趣】【,】【作】【者】【就】【突】【出】【的】【对】【话】【与】【心】【理】【进】【行】【详】【写】【,】【而】【其】【他】【两】【事】【就】【略】【写】【。】【这】【样】【精】【练】【的】【处】【理】【有】【助】【于】【凸】【现】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【。】

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